读后续写 丛林绝境逢生机,感恩前行悟真谛 讲义-2024届福建省宁德市高三下学期5月质量检测(三模)英语试题

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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Tom, a young explorer, was known for his courage and love for adventure. One sunny day, filled with excitement and curiosity, he set forth on a journey into the depths of a jungle. However, little did he know that this expedition would test his limits and push him to the very edge of despair. As Tom ventured deeper into the jungle, he found himself surrounded by giants of the forest, towering trees and the constant sound of unknown creatures. Hours passed as he struggled through the undergrowth, following a path that only his instincts (本能) knew. And then, suddenly, it hit him like a bolt of lightning: he was lost. The realization made him trembling with fear, but he was not a man to give way to fear. The initial obstacle that Tom faced was finding food. The jungle was full of life, yet he was clueless about which plants were safe to eat. He cautiously searched for some eatable fruits and nuts. Furthermore, with bamboo and leaves, he built a basic shelter, praying it would protect him from the dangerous elements and potential predators, such as wolves and lions. The subsequent challenge was navigation. Tom’s compass broke down. He attempted to use the sun’s position as his guide, but the shade overhead made it nearly impossible. In desperation, he chose to follow a stream. Journeying along the stream, he had to cross dangerous valley, climb steep cliffs and walk through waist-deep lands. His clothes were torn, his feet were blistered, and his spirit was collapsing. But he reminded himself of his family waiting for him at home, which gave him the strength to press on. Three days later, Tom encountered a lively group of monkeys, their eyes wide with curiosity as they inspected this unusual intruder (不速之客). A flash of inspiration sparked in Tom’s thoughts and he started to copy their actions, hoping he could interact with them. 注意: 1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 To his surprise, the monkeys responded to him friendly. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ As Tom stepped out of the jungle, he was greeted by the sight of a small village. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意:年轻勇敢的探险家汤姆踏上丛林探险之旅,却不幸迷路。他面临着食物短缺、导航工具损坏等诸多困难,先是艰难地寻找可食用的食物并搭建简易庇护所,接着在没有指南针的情况下,沿着溪流前行,途中历经艰险,衣服破损、双脚起泡,精神几近崩溃,但想到家中等待的家人又咬牙坚持。三天后,他遇到一群猴子,试图与它们互动。 伏笔及续写中的回应 1. 伏笔:汤姆进入丛林后迷路,面临生存困境。 1. 回应:猴子友好回应后,带他找到了走出丛林的路,解决了迷路的危机,使他最终能够走出丛林到达村庄,摆脱了困境。 2. 伏笔:汤姆的指南针损坏,无法正常导航。 2. 回应:猴子凭借对丛林的熟悉,引导他沿着一条隐蔽的小路前行,让他无需依赖指南针也能找到方向,走出复杂的丛林地形。 3. 伏笔:汤姆寻找食物困难,不知哪些植物可食用。 3. 回应:猴子给他分享了一些丛林中的果实和嫩叶,这些食物不仅解决了他的饥饿问题,还让他了解到一些可食用的丛林资源,补充了能量继续前行。 4. 伏笔:汤姆搭建的庇护所简陋,面临自然和野兽的威胁。 4. 回应:在与猴子相处的过程中,他学习到一些利用树枝和树叶搭建更坚固庇护所的方法,在后续的行程中保障了自己的安全,抵御了恶劣天气和潜在危险。 5. 伏笔:汤姆衣服破损、双脚起泡,身体和精神状态不佳。 5. 回应:猴子带他找到了一处有草药的地方,汤姆用草药敷在伤口上缓解了疼痛,并且在猴子的陪伴下,精神上得到了慰藉,重新振作起来,最终成功走出丛林。 续写要点 情感线: · 第一段:汤姆从最初的惊喜,到感受到猴子的友好后充满希望,开始信任猴子并跟随它们前行,对走出丛林有了新的期待和信心。 · 第二段:汤姆看到村庄时无比激动和欣慰,回想起丛林中的经历感慨万千,对生命和自然有了更深的敬畏与感恩,内心满是劫后余生的喜悦和对未来生活的珍视。 故事线: · 第一段:猴子友好回应后,带汤姆找到了一些可食用的果实和水源,还引导他沿着一条隐蔽的小路前行,避开了许多危险。汤姆跟着猴子一路前行,途中学习到了它们在丛林中生存的技巧,逐渐恢复了体力和信心。 · 第二段:汤姆怀着激动的心情走向村庄,村民们看到他疲惫不堪的样子,纷纷伸出援手,给予他食物和住所。汤姆休息好后,向村民们讲述了自己的经历,村民们惊叹不已。他决定回家与家人团聚,并将这次难忘的经历铭记于心,日后更加珍惜平凡生活中的美好。 主旨升华句 1. In the harshest of circumstances, kindness and connection can emerge as the most powerful forces, leading us out of the darkest valleys and towards the light of hope.(在最艰难的环境中,善良和联系会成为最强大的力量,引领我们走出最黑暗的山谷,走向希望之光。) 2. Our journey through life's jungles may be fraught with peril, but it is often the unexpected friendships and acts of nature that guide us to safety and show us the true meaning of survival.(我们人生丛林中的旅程可能充满危险,但往往是那些意想不到的友谊和自然的馈赠引导我们走向安全,让我们领悟生存的真正意义。) 3. When we find ourselves lost and alone, it is the kindness of strangers, even those of the wild, that can reignite the spark of hope and lead us back to the warmth of civilization.(当我们迷失孤独时,是陌生人的善意,即使是来自野外的善意,也能重燃希望之火,引领我们回到文明的温暖怀抱。) 4. The trials and tribulations of the jungle taught Tom that life's greatest treasures are not found in conquest, but in the simple acts of kindness and the bonds we form along the way.(丛林中的艰难困苦让汤姆明白,生命中最珍贵的东西不是征服,而是在旅途中简单的善举和我们建立的纽带。) 5. In the face of nature's unforgiving challenges, Tom discovered that the human spirit, when paired with the compassion of the wild, has the power to overcome even the most daunting obstacles and find its way home.(面对大自然无情的挑战,汤姆发现人类的精神,当与野生动物的同情相结合时,有能力克服最艰巨的障碍并找到回家的路。) 写作示范 第一篇 To his surprise, the monkeys responded to him friendly. They led him to a cluster of berry bushes, chattering excitedly as if instructing him which ones were safe to eat. Tom gratefully filled his stomach with the sweet berries and quenched his thirst from a nearby stream the monkeys guided him to. The monkeys then motioned for him to follow. As they journeyed through the thick foliage, Tom observed their behavior closely and learned how to avoid certain dangerous plants and insects. With newfound energy and knowledge, he followed the monkeys' lead, trusting them to guide him out of the treacherous jungle. As Tom stepped out of the jungle, he was greeted by the sight of a small village. Relief washed over him as he realized his nightmare was finally over. The villagers were astonished to see a weary stranger emerge from the jungle. They offered him food and shelter, and Tom gratefully accepted. As he rested and recovered, he thought about his incredible adventure and the unlikely friends who had saved his life. He knew he would carry this experience with him forever, a reminder of the power of kindness and the resilience of the human spirit. From that day on, Tom returned home a changed man, with a newfound appreciation for life and all its wonders. 第二篇 To his surprise, the monkeys responded to him friendly. One of the monkeys climbed up a tree and tossed down some coconuts. Tom, understanding their intention, managed to open them and drank the refreshing juice. The monkeys then led him along a hidden path, away from the dangerous areas he had been struggling through. Along the way, they showed him how to use certain leaves to soothe his blistered feet. Tom was amazed by their intelligence and kindness. With their help, he felt more confident and determined to make it out of the jungle alive. As Tom stepped out of the jungle, he was greeted by the sight of a small village. Tears welled up in his eyes as he saw the signs of human habitation. The villagers gathered around him, curious and concerned. Tom recounted his harrowing tale, and the villagers provided him with warm clothes and a hot meal. He spent a few days in the village, recuperating and reflecting on his journey. He realized that even in the most desperate situations, there is always a glimmer of hope and kindness to be found. This experience had not only tested his physical and mental strength but also deepened his understanding of the bond between all living beings. Tom vowed to share his story and the lessons he learned, inspiring others to embrace the unknown with courage and an open heart. 参考答案 To his surprise, the monkeys responded to him friendly. They seemed intrigued by his attempts to communicate and even brought him some fruits, apparently as a gesture of goodwill. Tom gratefully accepted the offering, realizing that these monkeys could potentially be his lifeline. Over the next few days, he followed the monkeys, learning from their behavior and survival skills in the jungle. They led him to water sources and edible fruits, helping him sustain his strength. The experience was surreal, but it gave Tom hope and renewed energy to continue his struggle for survival. As Tom stepped out of the jungle, he was greeted by the sight of a small village. Relief flooded through his body as he realized he had finally found civilization. Weak and exhausted, he stumbled towards the nearest hut. Villagers gathered around him, their faces filled with curiosity. Tom explained his situation, and they offered him food, shelter, and clothing. As he rested and recovered, he reflected on his journey. Despite the hardships and near-death experiences, Tom felt a sense of accomplishment. He had survived the jungle, thanks to his resilience, courage, and an unlikely alliance with a group of monkeys. 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $$

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