读后续写 跨越性格鸿沟的友谊之桥 讲义-2024届福建省福州市高三下学期三模考试英语试卷

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I was never “that girl” — the one who had charming appearance, and who enjoyed a colorful social life. I was another girl entirely, one who was considered “nice girls”, and the top student in class. Not that I didn’t care about friends or fun, I just didn’t think it was worth putting lots of time and effort into changing how I looked, how I acted, even as I started high school. Marissa was “that girl” — fun to be around, good to know. We are different, but our friendship began the first time we met at an exciting soccer match, on the second day of freshmen year. The excitement of the game and our shared interest in soccer connected us, I was deeply impressed with her enthusiasm, while she admired my calm. Our conversations went smoothly, and our relationship quickly turned into a close bond. However, as the school year progressed, Marissa’s outgoing personality began to conflict with my reserved nature. She stood out in social situations, constantly asking me to attend parties and social events. While I appreciated her efforts to include me, I felt awkward and uncomfortable to be forced into unfamiliar surroundings. Our once harmonious friendship started to crack, I tried to turn down her invitations, but in vain. One evening, Marissa persuaded me to attend a large party at a classmate’s house. Surrounded by loud music and strange faces, I felt uneasy and upset. Marissa was the queen of the party, leaving me feeling extremely lonely. Her personality attracted others to her, creating a barrier between us. 注意: 1.续写词数应为150个左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: At that moment, I realized the growing divide between us. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Since then, we worked together to find a balance of our personalities. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意：“我” 是个内向的学霸，而 Marissa 是个外向受欢迎的女孩，我们因一场足球赛结缘成为好友。但随着时间推移，性格差异使我们的友谊出现裂痕，Marissa 常邀 “我” 参加社交活动，让 “我” 感到不适，在一次派对上，“我” 倍感孤独，这让 “我” 意识到我们之间的隔阂在加深。 5 处伏笔及续写中的回应 1. 伏笔：“我” 和 Marissa 性格迥异，“我” 内向，Marissa 外向。 1. 回应：在续写中，我们通过坦诚交流，互相理解并接纳对方的性格。“我” 尝试克服内心的不安，参加一些小型聚会，而 Marissa 也会陪 “我” 去图书馆等安静的地方，两人找到性格互补的相处方式，使友谊更加稳固，不再因性格差异而产生冲突。 2. 伏笔：Marissa 常邀 “我” 参加社交活动，“我” 虽感激但内心抗拒。 2. 回应：Marissa 意识到这一点后，在组织活动时会更加考虑 “我” 的感受，选择一些更安静、氛围更舒适的场合，或者提前告知 “我” 活动的具体情况，让 “我” 有心理准备，从而不再让 “我” 感到被强迫和不自在，增进了彼此的信任和理解。 3. 伏笔：在派对上 “我” 感到孤独，凸显两人之间的隔阂。 3. 回应：事后 “我” 向 Marissa 倾诉内心感受，她表示理解并道歉，这一情节成为我们修复友谊的契机，让我们更加珍惜彼此，学会站在对方角度思考问题，避免类似情况再次发生，使友谊得以升华。 4. 伏笔：“我” 一开始认为外貌和社交生活不值得花费时间精力改变，暗示 “我” 对自身性格和生活方式的坚持。 4. 回应：在寻找相处平衡的过程中，“我” 虽然有所改变，但也保留了自己的本真，Marissa 也尊重 “我” 的选择，没有强行改变 “我”，而是共同探索适合两人的相处模式，体现了友谊中的相互尊重和包容。 5. 伏笔：两人因足球赛结缘，最初相处和谐，为后面友谊的修复和升华做铺垫。 5. 回应：后来我们会一起回忆起初次见面的场景，重温当时的快乐和默契，这让我们更加坚定要维护好这份友谊，也意识到彼此的友谊基础深厚，即使遇到困难，也能通过沟通和理解克服，使友谊更加长久。 续写要点 情感线： · 第一段：“我” 起初因意识到与 Marissa 的隔阂而内心痛苦、失落，对友谊的未来感到迷茫和担忧，甚至有些生气和埋怨，但同时也有一丝不舍和期待，希望能挽救这段友谊。 · 第二段：从决定修复友谊开始，我们逐渐变得更加包容、理解和信任对方，内心充满温暖和欣慰，对友谊的发展充满信心和期待，感受到彼此的成长和友谊的升华。 故事线： · 第一段：“我” 悄悄离开派对，回家后心情沉重，思考着是否要与 Marissa 谈谈我们的友谊。几天后，“我” 鼓起勇气约她见面，坦诚地说出在派对上的感受以及这段时间内心的挣扎，担心我们的友谊无法继续。Marissa 听后十分震惊和自责，她表示没有意识到自己的行为给 “我” 带来这么大的伤害。 · 第二段：我们约定以后要更加坦诚地交流彼此的感受和需求。Marissa 会在邀请 “我” 参加活动前，先询问 “我” 的意愿，并选择一些更合适的场合。“我” 也会努力克服自己的内向，尝试参加一些小型的聚会，和 Marissa 一起享受社交的乐趣。同时，我们也会保留各自的空间，做自己喜欢的事情，如一起看足球赛、“我” 教 Marissa 学习功课等，让友谊在相互尊重和理解的基础上更加稳固和美好。 主旨升华句 1. True friendship isn't about being the same, but about accepting and loving each other's differences, and growing together through the challenges.（真正的友谊不在于彼此相同，而在于接受和喜爱对方的差异，并在挑战中共同成长。） 2. In the journey of friendship, we often encounter bumps and turns. But it is through these trials that we learn the value of understanding, compromise, and the beauty of a bond that can withstand the test of our diverse selves.（在友谊的旅程中，我们常常会遇到坎坷和曲折。但正是通过这些考验，我们才懂得理解、妥协的价值，以及一种能够经受住我们不同自我考验的纽带之美。） 3. The cracks in our friendship became the openings for new growth and deeper connection. We discovered that when we are brave enough to face the truth and work together, we can build a bridge that spans over our differences and leads us to a more fulfilling and lasting relationship.（我们友谊中的裂痕成为了新的成长和更深层次联系的契机。我们发现，当我们足够勇敢地面对真相并共同努力时，我们可以搭建一座跨越差异的桥梁，引领我们走向一种更充实、更持久的关系。） 4. Friendship is like a delicate flower that needs both sunshine and rain to bloom. Our differences were the rain, and our efforts to understand and accept each other were the sunshine, allowing our friendship to blossom into something more beautiful and resilient than ever before.（友谊就像一朵娇嫩的花朵，需要阳光和雨水才能绽放。我们的差异是雨水，而我们努力理解和接受对方就是阳光，使我们的友谊绽放出比以往任何时候都更美丽、更有韧性的花朵。） 5. Instead of letting our differences drive us apart, we chose to let them bring us closer. We learned that in the tapestry of friendship, every thread, no matter how different, weaves together to create a unique and precious pattern that enriches our lives in ways we could never have imagined.（我们没有让差异使我们分开，而是选择让它们使我们更亲近。我们懂得了在友谊的织锦中，每一根线，无论多么不同，都交织在一起，创造出一种独特而珍贵的图案，以我们从未想象过的方式丰富着我们的生活。） 写作示范 第一篇 Paragraph 1: At that moment, I realized the growing divide between us. I quietly slipped out of the party, my heart heavy with disappointment and confusion. On my way home, I couldn't help but question whether our friendship was doomed to fail. For days, I avoided Marissa, unsure of how to address the issue. But the thought of losing her as a friend made me sadder than the awkwardness I felt at those parties. Finally, I gathered the courage to ask her to meet me at our favorite coffee shop. With a trembling voice, I told her how I had felt left out and uncomfortable at the party, and how I feared our friendship was slipping away. Marissa's eyes widened in surprise and then filled with remorse. Paragraph 2: Since then, we worked together to find a balance of our personalities. Marissa became more mindful of my feelings and started suggesting quieter get-togethers, like movie nights at home or walks in the park. I, in turn, made an effort to step out of my comfort zone and join her for some of the smaller social events she organized. We also discovered new shared interests that didn't require a big crowd, such as painting classes and volunteering at the local animal shelter. Our friendship grew deeper and more meaningful as we learned to appreciate and celebrate each other's uniqueness. We realized that true friendship isn't about conforming to each other's lifestyles but about supporting and loving one another through all of life's adventures. 第二篇 Paragraph 1: At that moment, I realized the growing divide between us. I felt a pang of loneliness and sadness wash over me. Standing in the corner of the noisy room, I watched Marissa laugh and chat with others, and I knew I couldn't continue like this. The next day at school, I was distant towards her, not knowing how to handle the situation. Marissa noticed my coldness and confronted me. I finally blurted out my feelings, tears welling up in my eyes. I told her that while I cherished our friendship, I couldn't keep up with her social whirlwind. Marissa was taken aback, but she listened intently. Paragraph 2: Since then, we worked together to find a balance of our personalities. We decided to have "friendship days" where we would alternate choosing the activity. One week, Marissa took me to a small concert of a local band she loved, and the next, I introduced her to the peaceful world of the library's reading nook. We also made a pact to communicate openly and honestly about our feelings before any social event. Slowly, the tension between us dissolved, and our friendship became stronger. We learned that by respecting and understanding each other's differences, we could create a friendship that was both comfortable and exciting. We were no longer trying to fit into each other's molds but were building a unique bond that celebrated our individuality. 参考答案 At that moment, I realized the growing divide between us. The yawning gap between Marissa's exuberance and my reticence became painfully evident. Her lively presence at the party only enhanced my sense of isolation. I felt a sense of sorrow as I watched her effortlessly mingle, while I remained a mere spectator in the shadows. Since then, we worked together to find a balance of our personalities. We embarked on a journey of mutual understanding, with candid dialogues and a willingness to compromise. Marissa began to value the calmness of quiet moments, and I ventured beyond my comfort zone, joining her in social engagements that were less daunting. We explored shared interests beyond soccer, such as community service and book discussions, which fostered a deeper connection. Our friendship, once swaying on the brink, now flourished with a newfound appreciation for our individuality. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$