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热点题型·写作攻略
专题23 应用文写作书信类
天津历年高考英语的作文题材涉及到:
文化交流:包括中英文化交流活动、向外国友人介绍中国文化、与外国学校学生交流等;
学习与教育:包括学生学习方法、学校活动策划、学生辅导等;
个人发展与交往:包括个人规划、交换生互动、机器人技能竞赛等;
文学艺术:包括推荐书籍、讲座话题选择、观剧邀请等。
体裁主要有:信件、发言稿等
考点覆盖:词汇、语法、长难句
需在正确表达的基础上,适当加入长难句、高级词汇,可以预先积累作文模版素材,但注意不要照搬模版。
年份
体裁
难度系数
2024
演讲稿
0.65
留言稿
0.65
2023
申请信
0.65
2023
电子邮件
0.65
2022
短文投稿
0.65
2021
短文投稿
0.65
【解题技巧】
应用文写作的语境主要涉及交际的时间、地点、情境等环境因素,也涉及参与人的交际目的、交际身份、处境及心情等个体因素。
角色代入教学法可以帮助学生疏通好写作的心理通道,逐渐建立起写作的信心,不断针对既定的写作目标进行结构、语言和思维的铺垫,再从主题层面提升学生的思维品质,从而帮助其提高应用文写作模拟的能力。
步骤一:认真审题,明确主题语境、寻找立足点
比如:书信类应用文一般可以分为三段:首段介绍写作背景和写信目的;尾段根据情景,结合常识礼仪,客套总结全文。剩余的题目要求的内容全部写在第二段。若题目的写作内容要点中没有包括写信目的和客套结尾,考生都应该自行补充。合理分段,统筹全文,避免走题偏题。
步骤二:审题后,寻求合理建构、真实交际
正式写作前,还需对内容要点进行具体的构思与阐释。正文的三部分,从逻辑上来说就是:目的—过程—感受;从时间上来说就是:活动前—活动中—活动后;
步骤三:梳理要点、信息分层
对应用文背景材料进行要点分类,哪些重点着墨,哪些稍微描述,仔细权衡。信息上,也要分层处理,有些点可以做一些调整,不一定按照要点提示顺序来写作,合理布局。如果能对所叙述之事越感同身受越容易激发写作欲望。
经过审题、反思、输入环节之后,需要将内容框架与具体信息转换为英语表达,在由输入到输出的转化过程中,掌握与写作话题相关的词汇和基本句式、表达是基础。针对不同层次的学生,有针对性地指导其连词成句、连句成段、构建篇章是提升其应用文写作输出有效性的关键。
步骤四:连句成文,注重美观和高级
高分作文一般应该是书写工整流畅,卷面整洁美观,语句间、段落间衔接有效。内容适当拓展,符合主题,语言丰富。应用文写作需要学生打破体裁模板的限制,注重交际内容之间的关系,以传达意义为主,简化语言提示,找到写作题的开放性与限制性之间的结合点。
应用文书面表达提高措施:
A.经常练笔,每日三五句。背诵小短文或漂亮句子,多多益善。最好的练习材料就是近几年各地的高考试题。多听、多说、多读对写作的提高至关重要。
B.背会连接词语:to tell the truth;last but not least;on the contrary;that is;believe it or not;so far as I know;in the middle of;next to;9. in addition;in general;in short;so long as;to begin with;
in case;what’s more;as a matter of fact;on the other hand;as a result;generally speaking;in my opinion
C.熟练运用基础句型:最基本句型5个:1. 主语+谓语;2. 主语+谓语+宾语;3. 主语+系动词+表语;4. 主语+谓语+宾语+宾语补足语;5. 主语+谓语+双宾语。
D.背诵高考范文例句:如写人、写地点、写事、表达理由观点或讨论结果、数据与图表说明、写信和写通知的例句。
E.认真研读高考范文:1. 对比议论类;2. 数字图表类;3. 地点介绍;4. 人物类;5. 活动安排;6. 记叙文。
F.掌握地道的英语,避免常见错误,学会变换句型。
以下几点也需要做到:
1. 卷面清爽,减少修改。卷面整洁的高考作文分数一般都不会太低,阅卷老师喜好阅读字迹工整的文章,让人看上去舒服的卷面,应尽量减少修改,如果字体优美的话就更占优势了。
2. 杜绝错误拼写。高考作文应杜绝拼写错误的单词,尤其是简单的词汇。如果考生有拿不准的单词应尽量替换为熟悉的单词。如果有拼写错误的单词不仅会因此扣分,还会影响整体作文分数的等级。
3. 善用实词,替换常用词。在英语考试中,我们应该增加实字的使用,减少虚字的使用。例如,当你说某人“不错”时,别总是用“不错”这种过于简单而又虚伪的字眼。应该尽可能多地使用“generous”、“人”、“人”、“人”、“聪明”、“聪明”、“聪明”、“温暖”等形容词。
作文得不到好成绩的主要原因就在于,千篇一律。因此,在写文章的时候,使用不同的词语,可以为您的文章增添很多的新鲜和加分。
题型01 邀请信
【题型诠释】
段落要点
首段
邀请目的
正文
介绍活动具体内容,并说明受邀人参加理
结尾
期待对方接受邀请,并尽快回复
思路点拨:
1. 表明写作意图,向某人发出邀请;
2. 说明邀请的具体原因,邀请的内容;
3. 表示强烈的期盼,并希望尽快得到答复。
开头打招呼:
- How are you doing? -你好吗?
- How have you been? /What’s going on?- 你最近怎么样?
阐述目的:
- [On behalf of ....(the classmates/my school/the student union..)], I am writing to invite you to come and attend it/my birthday party, if you can spare the time.
- [代表 ....(同学们/我的学校/学生会..)],我写信邀请你来参加它/我的生日派对,如果你有空的话。
- I’d like to invite you to join us for a visit to .... - 我想邀请您加入我们,参观 ....
- The purpose of writing this letter is to invite you to join in... - 写这封信的目的是邀请您加入...
【写作模板】
Dear ______ (称谓)
In a bid to ______(活动目的), a/an ______(活动) is scheduled to be held in/at ______(地点). I would like to invite you to participate in it.
As scheduled, the ______(活动) falls on ______(具体日期), lasting from______ to______(具体时间点) , during which time a wide variety of ______ (活动内容) will be put on. For example, ______(具体内容). In addition, /As far as I can see, ______(其他活动/重要意义).
Hopefully, you can spare time to join us. Should you have any question, please don’t hesitate to let me know. May you have a good time!
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
题型02 感谢信
【题型诠释】
段落要点
首段
表达感激之情,简单陈述的原因
正文
说明要感谢的事由或介绍一些的情况
结尾
再次表感谢及真诚祝福
思路点拨:
1. 写信目的,表达真挚谢意
2. 解释感谢的原因或对方的帮助给自己带来的好处
3. 结尾段:再次感谢
第一部分:表达真挚谢意
万能句型:I'm writing to express my thanks/gratitude(感激)to you for sth/doing sth.
我写信是为了表达对于你做。。。的感谢。
例句:
1. Thank you so much for your generous help.
非常感谢您慷慨的帮助。
2.1 am sincerely grateful to you for your timely help.
我真诚地感谢你及时的帮助。
3.1t was so kind of you to treat me as your own sister.
谢谢你把我当作自己的妹妹。
4.1 am so grateful to you for what you have done for me.
我很感谢你为我所做的一切。
5.1 would like to convey my thanks to you for your kind help.
我想感谢你的帮助。
6. I’m writing to thank you for the few wonderful days in London.
我写信感谢你帮我在伦敦度过的快乐日子。
7.1 am writing to express/show/convey my sincere thanks to you for your help.
我写信真诚地感谢你的帮助。
8. For this reason, I am writing this letter to express my sincere thanks to you.
为此,我写这封信是为了表达我对你真诚的感谢。
第二部分:解释感谢的原因或对方的帮助给自己带来的好处
1.Thanks to your help, I have made rapid progress in my English.
多亏了你的帮助,我的英语有了飞速的进步。
2. Without/But for your help(lf it were not for your help) ,I would not have made so much progress in my English.
要是没有你的帮助,我的英语不会取得如此大的进步。
3.1 extend you again a thousand thanks for the great favor.
我太感谢你的帮助了。
第三部分:再次感谢
1.Thanks again for helping me.
再次感谢你对我的帮助。
2.Thank you again for your generous help.
再次感谢你的慷慨帮助。
3. 1 would appreciate it if you could accept my sincere thanks.
如果你能接受我诚挚的感谢,我将不胜感激。
4. Your kindness and help will always be remembered.
我将永远铭记你的善意和帮助。
5.1 deeply/greatly appreciate your hospitality(款待).
我深深感谢你们的盛情款待。
【写作模板】
Dear ______ (称谓)
I am eagerly writing to extend my heartfelt gratitude to you for ______(感谢的原因). Undoubtedly,had it not been your assistance in ______(对方给予的具体帮助), I fear that I would have been______ (没有对方帮助时的后果).
Whenever I encounter difficulties, you ______(具体事由和感想) .
Again, no words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am. Many thanks to you. I wish ______(表达祝愿或者回报意愿).
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
题型03 推荐信
【题型诠释】
1. 词汇
能力:have a gift for, be skilled in, be experienced in, be an expert in, speak fluent English, creative, a boy with great ability, efficient, intelligent, etc.
经历:graduate from, be a graduate from, major in, gain/win/get the first grade scholarship, get good grades, an all-around student with excellent grades in, excellent grades in all subjects, be given the title of, gain/win the first prize/place, win a gold/silver/copper medal, etc.
性格:outgoing, easy to get along with, enthusiastic, enthusiasm is part of his character, etc.
2. 经典句型
(1) He is an all-around student with excellent grades in all subjects. He has been given the title of the "excellent student".
(2) As a boy with great potential, he is good at solving difficult problems.
(3) Li Ming, a graduate from Peking University, majors in computer software design.
(4) He has enjoyed the reputation/title of the Excellent Graduate.
3. 写作套路
开头:
(1) I am writing to recommend to you…
(2) I would like to recommend to you…
(3) It is a great honor for me to recommend to you…
(4) I take the pleasure in recommending to you…
结尾:
(1) If he can join your company, he will give full play to his talent. And your company will also be greatly benefited. So I strongly recommend… to you.
(2) In a word, he would be a good choice. I would be grateful if you would like to consider my recommendation.
(3) I hope you can give him a chance. I believe he will make a great contribution to your company.
(4) I hope that you would take my recommendation into consideration/account.
【写作模板】
Dear ______ (称谓)
In response to your request for ______(推荐事由), I would like to recommend ______(具体推荐事项). I recommend it mainly for the following three reasons.
Initially, ______(推荐理由一) . Additionally/Aside from it, ______(推荐理由二) . Plus, ______(推荐理由三) . If you want details, please______(联系方式) .
Your taking my recommendation into consideration will be highly appreciated/expected.
Keenly anticipate your prompt reply.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
题型04 告知信
【题型诠释】
段落要点
首段
告知内容(原因、背景等)
正文
告知具体事宜(时间、地点等)
结尾
表达期待愿望
【常用词汇】
1.inform sb. of sth. 告知某人某事
2.introduce sth.to sb. 向某人介绍某物
3.provide some information for sb. 为某人提供一些信息
4.work out my schedule 制订我的计划
5.as follows 列举如下
6.show sb. around... 带领某人参观某处
7.have a try 试试看,尝试一下
8.sign up for.. 报名参加
9.wok as/serve as/act as. 任……职,当……
10.mean/intend to do sth. 打算做某事
11.spare some time to do sth. 抽出时间做某事
12.take a course 参加一门课程
13.pay a visit to..… 去参观
14.make a difference 有影响;起(重要)作用
15.hesitate to do sth. 犹豫,有所顾虑
16.be scheduled at/on... 被安排在
17.make preparations for.. 为……准备
18.make an arrangement for sth. 为……做安排
19.be intended to sth. 打算,意图
【常用句型】
1. Now, I am writing to inform you of some relevant details.
2. You are supposed/expected to …
3. You should/ You’d better …
4. There will be a lecture on ….
5. The lecture will last 3 hours. / The lecture will begin at … and end at …
6. Hopefully, these suggestions would be helpful for you.
7. Please get there on time. / Please get everything ready ahead of time.
8. Don’t miss the chance. /Don’t be late.
9. Everyone is welcome to ……
10. I sincerely invite you to…
【写作模板】
Dear ______ (称谓)
Aware of your enthusiasm for /Delighted to learn that ______(活动主题、你对主题的兴趣), I’m writing to extend my ______(看法、关心、欢迎等) and inform you of some relevant information.
______(活动信息). To begin with, ______(要点一). Furthermore, ______(要点二). To sum up, ______(要点三).
I highly expect the experience to be rewarding, perfectly mixing learning and fun.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
题型05 建议信
【题型诠释】
段落要点
首段
写信目的
正文
提出建议、说明原因
结尾
表达期望和祝愿
I am writing to express my views concerning... 我写此信来表达我关于……的观点。
You have asked me for my advice about...,and I will try to make some conducive suggestions. 对于你来信问我关于……的事,现提供几条有益的建议。
I would like to suggest that... 我建议……
Why not.../ Why don't you...?为何不……?
I think it will be a good idea/more beneficial if you could... 我认为……是个好办法/有利的。
It's important to.../ It helps to...It should be a good idea to... 很重要/有帮助/是个好主意。
I am writing to put up some suggestions concerning... 我提出几条有关于……的建议。
Please take good consideration of my advice.Thanks. 请仔细考虑我的建议,谢谢。
I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations helpful/useful. 希望这些建议对你有帮助。
Thank you for your attention.感谢你对此事的关注。
【写作模板】
Dear ______ (称谓)
You can’t imagine how ______(情感) I am hearing about ______(写信的原因). I’m more than glad to offer my advice for your reference.
Firstly, you are supposed to ______ (建议一) . Additionally(For one reason), it makes sense to ______ (建议二/理由一) . Moreover(For another reason), ______ (建议三/理由二)is also a good choice . Do bear in mind that (Therefore)______ (建议四/理由三)
I am fully convinced that use the tips above and we will______ (以上建议的好处) . I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into account (表达希望接受建议).
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
题型06 道歉信
【题型诠释】
段落要点
首段
表表示歉意,道歉的原由
正文
解释原因,提出弥补措施;
结尾
再次请求原谅。
I would like to express my apology for... 对于……,我想要表达我的歉意。
Will you be good enough to excuse me for.../Excuse me for... 请原谅我……
Please accept my sincerest and deepest apology for... 请接受我最真诚的致歉……
I'm terribly sorry to tell you that.../ I regret to inform you that...很抱歉地告诉你……
I write to you to express my deep regret. 我写此信向你表示深深的懊悔。
I am writing to apologize to you for... 我写信向你致歉,因为……
Would you mind if I...?你是否介意如果我……?
To make up my thoughtless behavior,I...为了弥补我欠考虑的行为,我……
I wish I could be given a chance to make up for my inconsideration. 我希望你能给我一个机会来弥补我的考虑不周。
【写作模板】
Dear ______ (称谓)
I 'm terribly sorry to inform you that ______(写信事由). Thus, I am writing to apologize for not keeping my word. Something unexpected happened and ______(失约理由) .
Shall we fix another time? I’ll be available any time after______(补救办法). Will ______(另约时间) suits your convenience? If it’s ok, let’s meet at ______(见面地点). If not, let me know what time suits you best. I hope the adjustment won’t put you into much trouble.
Keenly anticipate your prompt reply.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
题型07 申请信
【题型诠释】
段落要点
首段
简要介绍自己,说明信息来源,并提出申请
正文
突出自己特点,具体说明胜任理由
结尾
请求给予机会,期望尽快回复
I wish to apply for a position of which you advertised in today's newspaper. 我想申请你们今天报纸上刊登的广告中的一个职位。
I have learned from a friend that... 我从一个朋友那得知……
I shall be glad to provide you with any further information concerning my education and personal experience. 我很乐意提供关于我的教育及个人经验方面的更多信息。
My name is...I graduated from...university in...,majoring in...我的名字是……。我毕业于……大学,专业是……
I am confident my professional knowledge has prepared me to handle the job. 我相信我的专业知识能让我胜任这份工作。
I am skilled in/good at...我擅长……
I had good performance in every course,especially in... 我每门课成绩都很好,特别是……
I trust that I am capable of doing the work well. 我相信我能干好这份工作。
I believe that I am well qualified for the position as... 我相信我定能胜任作为……的工作。
【写作模板】
Dear ______ (称谓)
I am really delighted to learn that ______(职位) is required, and I feel this ______(职位或机会) is specially tailored to me.
To start with, my advantage first lies in the fact that ______(优势一) . Furthermore, ______(优势二) . Finally, there is no problem with ______(优势三) .
I do hope my ______(资质或能力) will win me a favorable consideration from your side. Should you need any details related to my application, feel free to contact me at______(联系方式).
Keenly anticipate your prompt reply.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
题型08 咨询信
【题型诠释】
段落要点
首段
写信目的
正文
咨询详情
结尾
表达谢意,期盼回复
【常用词汇】
1.inquire about sth. 询问……的情况
2.seek for sth. 寻求
3.obtain some information 获得一些信息
4.regarding/concerning/with regard to sth. 关于
5.provide sb. with sth. 提供给某人某物
6.inform sb. of sth. 通知某人某事
7.prompt/immediate reply 及时的回复
8.take into account of sth./take sth. into account 考虑到……
9.detailed information 详情
10.be grateful/obliged to sb. for sth. 因某事而感谢某人
11.express one's appreciation for... 对某事表示感激
12.be concerned about... 对……关心
13.attend a summer school 参加暑期学校
14.during the summer vacation 暑假间
15.a six-week English course 一个为期六周的英语课程。
16.per week 每周
17.as for 至于,关于
18.including extra fee for sth. 包括……额外费用
19.cover the entrance fees .. 怎么样?(提出建议或用以引出活题)
20.What about..…?/How about.…? ……怎么样?
【常用句型】
I am writing to ask for information about how to be a volunteer for the Asian Winter Games. 我写信来是为了咨询如何成为亚洲冬季运动会志愿者。
I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding /concerning /on how to learn Chinese well. 我写信来是为了想知道您是否可以给我提供一些关于如何才能学好中文的信息。
I am writing to you for further information about the English training. 我写信来是为了进一步了解英语培训。
I’m writing for more information about how to better learning habits. 我写信来是为了进一步获取有关改善学习习惯的信息。
I am writing in response to your advertisement. 我写这封信是为了回复、回应你们的广告。
Could you please tell me something about how to be a volunteer for the Asian Winter Games?您能向我介绍一下如何成为亚洲冬季运动会志愿者吗?
I would greatly appreciate it if you could tell me something about the rebuilt Qianmen Street in Beijing. 如果您能告诉我有关改建后北京前门大街的情况,我将感激不尽。
I wonder if /whether you could tell me something about English speech contest to be held in our school on June 1st. 我想要知道您是否可以告诉我一些有关我们学校将在6月1日举行的英语演讲比赛的情况。
I would like to know if /whether you could tell me something about summer courses. 我想要知道您是否可以告诉我暑期课程的情况?
I would be much obliged to you if you let me know something about the summer camp. 如果你能告诉我有关夏令营的情况, 我将不胜感激。
Could you (be so kind as to)tell me something about students’ visiting group. 您是否可以告诉我有关学生访问团的情况。
I would (also)like to inquire something about a spokesman for animals. 我(也)想咨询动物代言人的情况事宜。
I would be grateful if it’s so kind of you to give me some essential information. 如果您能告知一些必要的信息,我将不胜感激。
I’d like to know something more about the volunteer activity. 我想要了解志愿者活动。
I would be grateful to receive a prompt reply.如果您能回复,我将感激不尽。
I’d appreciate it very much if you could give me a reply.如果您能回复,我将感激不尽。
【写作模板】
Dear ______ (称谓)
I am ______(自我介绍). I am writing to inquire about ______(要询问的内容).
The following is my confusion. First of all, I’m tempted to know ______. Secondly, when will ______ ? Thirdly, is ______?(要咨询的问题罗列)
I would be much appreciated if you can furnish me with the above information and you can contact me via ______ (表达感谢).
Thank you and your prompt reply will be highly appreciated.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
题型09 求助信
【题型诠释】
段落要点
首段
求助目的
正文
具体求助内容
结尾
再次表示期望和感谢。
①第一种类型:请求提供信息
如:“我”要去海外求学,请求对方提供相关学校的学费、住宿等信息。这种请求信也叫“咨询信”,
【内容分析】
a.客观描述(靠翻译)
b.喜爱/推荐原因
重点准备:中国文化类,如节日,中国结,唐诗等中国元素相关的内容。
②第二种类型:请求对方付出建议或者某种行为(脑力或体力)
如:“我”要参加竞赛,请对方给“我”建议;
“我”是校报编辑,请求对方写文章。此种请求信也叫“约稿信”。
约稿信的变体:“我”是主办方代表,请求对方为某次展览提供摄影或绘画作品。
【写作模板】
Dear ______ (称谓)
I am ______(自我介绍) . I am writing to seek for your help in______(写信目的).
Now, I struggle a lot in ______(遇到的困难). I’ve found that ______(描述自己的困难). For one thing, ______(困难一). For another, ______(困难二).
Therefore, could you please put forward some practical suggestions? I am convinced that I will benefit a lot from your valuable and timely advice.
I would appreciate it if you could respond at your earliest convenience.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
题型10 祝贺信
【题型诠释】
【写作模板】
Dear ______ (称谓)
I am writing to extend to you my utmost congratulations on ______(祝贺事由). As ______(身份关系), I just want you to know how delighted I was when______(祝贺事由) .
For these years, you ______(被祝贺人过去的经历). Not only did/have/were______(被祝贺人的努力), but also______(被祝贺人的努力). It is a reward you richly deserve for your ______(被祝贺人的优点) .
All my best wishes for an even more prosperous future!
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
题型11 慰问信
【题型诠释】
【写作模板】
Dear ______ (称谓)
Words fail me to convey my worry when I heard that ______(写信原由). I am writing to extend sincere pity and care for you (I hope that the unexpected failure/trouble won’t let you down).
You must ______(表达对遭遇的理解). However,if you were brave enough not to ______(悲观失望等), which is admirable. Anyway,It can’t be better if you can lift your spirits to face up to the result. Plus, ______(提供建议或帮助) . Remember, I won’t be far away.
I hope you can find my encouragement helpful(Hope you can have your troubles removed soon).
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
【高考真题】
(2023·天津·高考真题)假设你是晨光中学的学生李津,通过交换生项目在英国某中学就读,校方为加强中英文化交流,将举办“中国工坊” 活动。该活动主题涉及中华美食、中国传统手工艺、中国书法和绘画,拟招募学生现场教授相关技能。请按照以下提示,写一封申请信:
(1)申请参加本次活动;
(2)阐述你对本次文化交流活动意义的理解;
(3)结合个人兴趣和特长,说明拟教授何种技能,并阐述原因。
参考词汇:中国工坊 Chinese Workshop
中华美食 Chinese cuisine
手工艺 handicraft
书法 calligraphy
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Sincerely yours,
Li Jin
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Jin, an exchange student from China. Knowing that Chinese Workshop will be held in the school, I am writing to apply for taking part in the activity.
The theme of the activity involves Chinese food, traditional Chinese handicrafts, Chinese calligraphy and painting. So I think this activity is very significant, which is conducive to spreading excellent traditional Chinese culture and promoting cultural exchanges between China and Britain. As a Chinese, I have a passion for making Chinese cuisine, for example dumplings. Not only can I teach participants how to make dumplings, but also let them fall in love with Chinese cuisine.
I would appreciate it if you would enroll me in the event. Looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely yours,
Li Jin
【难度】0.65
【知识点】中国文化与节日、学校活动
【导语】本文是应用文。假设你是晨光中学的学生李津,通过交换生项目在英国某中学就读,校方为加强中英文化交流,将举办“中国工坊” 活动。请按照以下提示,写一封申请信:(1)申请参加本次活动;(2)阐述你对本次文化交流活动意义的理解;(3)结合个人兴趣和特长,说明拟教授何种技能,并阐述原因。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举办:hold→host
参加:take part in→participate in
有助于:be conducive to→contribute to
促进、推动:promote→facilitate
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句: I would appreciate it if you would enroll me in the event.
拓展句:I would be very appreciative if you would enroll me in the event.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing that Chinese Workshop will be held in the school, I am writing to apply for taking part in the activity.(运用了that引导的宾语从句以及现在分词Knowing作原因状语)
【高分句型2】 So I think this activity is very significant, which is conducive to spreading excellent traditional Chinese culture and promoting cultural exchanges between China and Britain. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型3】Not only can I teach participants how to make dumplings, but also let them fall in love with Chinese cuisine.(not only...but also连接句子时,not only位于句首引起的部分倒装)
(2023·天津·高考真题)假设你是晨光中学学生李津。你的英国朋友 Chris热爱学习汉语,上周他在邮件中向你询问“活雷锋”这一表达是什么意思。请根据以下提示回复邮件:
(1)解释“活雷锋”的意思;
(2)举一个身边“活雷锋”的例子;
(3)鼓励他继续学习汉语。
参考词汇:活雷锋 a living Lei Feng
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
Happy to hear from you.
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Sincerely yours;
Li Jin
【答案】Dear Chris,
Happy to hear from you. I'm glad that you're interested in the expression “活雷锋”. In Chinese, “活雷锋” means a person who is kind, helpful, and selfless, just like the legendary hero Lei Feng. This expression is used to describe someone who is always ready to lend a helping hand to others without expecting anything in return.
To give you an example, let me introduce you to Zhang Jian, a student from our school. Zhang Jian is known as the “living Lei Feng” among his classmates and teachers. He is always the first one to offer help when someone is in need. Whether it's helping a classmate with their studies, assisting a teacher with classroom duties, or volunteering for community services, Zhang Jian is always there to lend a hand.
I encourage you to continue your study of Chinese language. I wish you all the best in your studies and hope to hear more from you soon.
Sincerely yours,
Li Jin
【难度】0.65
【知识点】语言与文化
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是晨光中学学生李津。你的英国朋友 Chris热爱学习汉语,上周他在邮件中向你询问“活雷锋”这一表达是什么意思。
【详解】1.词汇积累
期待:expect→anticipate
提供帮助:lend a hand→give a hand
高兴的:glad→delighted
继续:continue→carry on with
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Zhang Jian is known as the “living Lei Feng” among his classmates and teachers. He is always the first one to offer help when someone is in need.
拓展句:Zhang Jian is known as the “living Lei Feng” among his classmates and teachers because he is always the first one to offer help when someone is in need.
【点睛】[高分句型1] This expression is used to describe someone who is always ready to lend a helping hand to others without expecting anything in return. (运用了who引导定语从句)
[高分句型2] He is always the first one to offer help when someone is in need.(运用了when引导时间状语从句)
(2021·天津·高考真题)假设你是晨光中学的李津。我市为外国友人提供生活信息的某英文网站新增了 《最美中华》栏目,请你给该栏目投稿,介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。内容包括:
(1)该地方的基本情况(如名称、地理位置等);
(2)该地方的特色(如文化、景点等);
(3)你对该地方的印象和感受。
注意:(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
A Beautiful Place in China
March 19, 2021
By Li Jin
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【答案】A Beautiful Place in China
March 19, 2021
By Li Jin
Sichuan Province is located in southwestern part of China. It enjoys many world-famous places of interest, such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan Irrigation project.
Jiuzhaigou National Park is a nature reserve in the north of Sichuan Province. What is the most impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes. What’s more , walking in the nature reserve, you have a chance to see rare animals like giant pandas, golden monkeys. There are also many species of rare plants protected here. Another famous scenic spot is Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. It dates from over 2,000 years ago. However, it is still playing an important part in irrigation today.
I’m sure the visitors will be amazed by the beautiful scenery in Jiazhaigou as well as the construction Dujiangyan Irrigation Project.
【难度】0.4
【知识点】自然地理
【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文,要求给英文网站《最美中华》栏目投稿,介绍介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:说明文
时态: 一般现在时
结构:总分法
第一段是文章的总起段,说明四川省有很多著名的景点;第二段介绍景点九寨沟和都江堰灌溉工程,第三部分说明你对该地方的印象和感受。
要求:
1. 说明四川省有很多著名的景点
①四川的地理位置:中国西南部
②著名景点:九寨沟、都江堰灌溉工程
2. 介绍景点九寨沟和都江堰灌溉工程
① 九寨沟是自然保护区
②给人印象最深的层层叠叠的瀑布和五颜六色的湖泊,有很多珍稀动植物
③都江堰灌溉工程始于2000多年前,现在仍然起着灌溉的作用
3. 你对该地方的印象和感受:九寨沟的美景和都江堰灌溉工程的建造会让你惊叹
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
be located in;world-famous;places of interest;a nature reserve ;impressive;multi-level waterfalls;have a chance to do…;rare animals;scenic spot;date from;play an important part in;be amazed by
第三步:连词成句
(1) Sichuan Province is located in southwestern part of China.
(2) It enjoys many world-famous places of interest, such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan Irrigation project.
(3)Jiuzhaigou National Park is a nature reserve in the north of Sichuan Province.
(4) What is the most impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes.
(5) Walking in the nature reserve, you have a chance to see rare animals such as giant pandas, golden monkeys.
(6) There are many species of rare plants protected here.
(7) Another famous scenic spot is Dujiangyan Irrigation Project.
(8) It dates from over 2,000 years ago.
(9) It is still playing an important part in irrigation today.
(10) I’m sure the visitors will be amazed by its construction.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇
1.表递进关系:what is more
2.表转折关系:however
3.表示列举:such as, like
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
What is the most impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes.(what引导的主语从句)
[高分句型2]
Walking in the nature reserve, you have a chance to see rare animals such as giant pandas, golden monkeys.(现在分词作状语)
(2022·天津·高考真题)假设你是晨光中学英语口语社的成员李津。为招募新成员,口语社请你用英语为社团纳新活动录制一段短视频。请按照以下提示,撰写视频的文字稿:
(1)向同学们发出入社邀请;
(2)介绍口语社的主要活动(如英语演讲比赛、观看英语电影等活动);
(3)分享本人入社以来的收获。
注意:(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
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【答案】
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Jin, a member of the Spoken English Club of our school. I’m here to invite you to join us. This will be a good chance for all English lovers.
The club offers various interesting activities. We can participate in English speech contests, watch classic English movies, sing English songs and attend inspiring lectures. All of them help to stimulate our interest in learning English and make our school life much more enjoyable.
The club activities have benefited me a lot. I have not only improved my spoken English, but also made a lot of friends.
Now, it’s your turn to join us. We are looking forward to having you in the club!
【难度】0.65
【知识点】学校活动
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为英语口语社的纳新视频写一段文字稿,向同学们发出邀请,并介绍口语社的主要活动,分享入社以来的收获。
【详解】1.词汇积累
机会:chance →opportunity
参加:participate in →take part in →join in
愉快的:enjoyable →joyful
激发:stimulate →motivate →activate
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The club activities have benefited me a lot.
拓展句:The club activities which I have joined in have benefited me a lot.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】We are looking forward to having you in the club!(运用了动名词作宾语)
【高分句型2】I have not only improved my spoken English, but also made a lot of friends.
(运用了not only…but also…连接并列结构)
2020天津卷|应用文写作-介绍成人礼活动
题目要求
假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你校于6月8日举办了成人礼活动,你的英国朋友Chris很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris回一封电子邮件,介绍关情况,内容包括:
(1)成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾、观看校友抗疫事迹录像等);
(2)对活动的感受;
(3)对自己未来的展望。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:
成人礼 the coming-of age ceremony
新冠脑炎 COVID-19
Dear Chris,
I’m so glad to hear from you.
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Yours,
Li Jin
范文赏析:
Dear Chris,
I’m so glad to hear from you. I am writing to you to introduce the following adult ceremony activities organized by our school on June 8.
The coming-of-age ceremony, usually at the age of 18 for boys and girls ,symbolizes the march towards adulthood. In the bar mitzvah, usually in some parts of China, the bar mitzvah also popular Han clothing, worship Confucius and other customs.
We knelt on our knees/kneel on the ground to express our gratitude to our parents for their upbringing. Rite is designed to make us understand maturity and sense of responsibility. At the event scene, we watched the video of alumni anti-epidemic, deeply moved.
As a new generation of teenagers, I must be motivated to study hard, growing up to become a useful person for the country to society.
Yours,
Li Jin
2019天津卷|应用文写作-有关西方艺术的讲座征求意见
题目要求
假设你是晨光中学的李津,英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间,英方教师Chris 将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件:
(1)你喜欢的讲座话题(从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一);
(2)选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容;
(3)希望从中有何收获。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
I'm Li Jim,a student at Chenguang High School.
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Thank you for your time.
Yours,
参考范文
Dear Chris,
I'm Li Jin, a student at Chenguang High School. As far as I am concerned, a lecture about western art will be given in the coming interchange activity in summer vacation. I’m writing to give some suggestions about the topic of the lecture.
As a music lover, I’m greatly fond of classic music, therefore I would appreciate it if you could talk about something about western classical music such as the origin and developing progress of it. In addition, some representative figures and their masterpieces are also expected to be introduced.
I believe this lecture will enrich my knowledge about western classical music and develop students’ interest in western art. Last but not least, I sincerely hope that you will take my suggestions into serious account and hope you a wonderful trip to our school.
Best wishes!
2018天津卷|应用文写作-邀请加入机器人兴趣小组
题目要求
假设你是晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津,你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校,他曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖。你打算邀请他加入你的团队,参加即将于7月底在天津举行的世界青少年机器人技能竞赛。请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件。
1.比赛的时间、地点;
2.邀请他的原因;
3.训练计划将发送其邮箱,请他提出建议。
注意:
1.词数不少于100;
2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:
世界青少年机器人技能竞赛the World Adolescent Robotics Competition
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范文赏析:
Dear Chris,
I have good news to tell you. The World Adolescent Robotics Competition will be held in Tianjin at the end of July. Hearing that you once took part in a robotics competition and won an award, I, on behalf of the Robotics Hobby Group, intend to invite you to join our team in the coming competition. I am sure that your participation will not only help us win the award but also enhance the friendship between our two schools.
With this email I also send you our training plan, about which I wish to get your advice because you are more experienced than us. We sincerely hope that we can participate in the competition as team partners.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
2017天津卷|应用文写作-介绍最近学习和生活
题目要求
假设你是李津,与你以前的外籍教师Mrs.Green 一直保持联系。近日她来信询问你的近况,请根据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。
1.简要介绍自己的学习和生活;
2.告知你已成为八月底在津举办的第十三届全运会的志愿者,并介绍为此所做的准备(如深入了解天津等);
3.希望她有机会重访天津。
注意:1.词数不少于100;
2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
3.开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:第十三届全运会 the 13th National Games
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范文赏析:
Dear Mrs. Green,
I’m so glad to hear from you. In your last letter, you asked me about my study and life. I’m very pleased to tell you that I have made great progress in my spoken English since you left. As for my life, I take exercise regularly and do more outdoor activities, which builds up my body and character as well.
I have good news to tell you that I have been chosen to be a volunteer in the coming 13th National Games to be held in Tianjin at the end of August. To be a qualified volunteer, I made some preparations. I interviewed many people from all walks of life, which improved and deepened my understanding of Tianjin.
I hope you can revisit Tianjin if you have a chance. Looking forward to seeing you again.
Yours,
Li Jin
2015天津卷|应用文写作-告知捐赠图书
题目要求
假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李津,你校拟向美国友好交流学校的中文班捐赠一批图书。请根据以下提示,写一封邮件与中文班班长Chris联系,并告知将于今年七月赴对方学校参加夏令营时带去赠书。
1.自我介绍;
2.拟捐赠图书的类型、册数、用途等;
3.询问对方的其他需求。
注意:1.词数不少于100;
2.请适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
参考词汇:学生会 the Student Union
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范文赏析:
Dear Chris,
First of all, please allow me to introduce myself to you. I’m president of the Student Union of Chenguang Senior High School. Our school has planned to present your school with a large number of books, including books on history, literature, sports and so on. The number of the books is 10,000 or so, which can be used for improving your knowledge of Chinese culture.
If you have some other requirements, don’t hesitate to inform us. We’ll spare no effort to offer help to you. By the way, I’ll go to your school to take part in the summer camp in July, when I’ll take the books along with me.
I’m looking forward to receiving your reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
【最新模拟】
(2024届天津北辰·统考三模)假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。在第16个全国防灾减灾日到来之际,你们学校开展了一次“安全进校园”的主题活动。你的英国朋友Chris很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris回一封电子邮件,介绍相关情况,内容包括:
(1)活动目的;
(2)活动安排(专家讲座、学习防灾减灾和自救等);
(3)活动感受。
注意:
(1) 词数不少于 100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:
全国防灾减灾日—National Disaster Prevention and Reduction Day
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Jin
Dear Chris,
How is it going recently? Learning that you are enthusiastic about the educational activity held by our school, I’d like to share with you some details.
With the approaching of the 16th National Disaster Prevention and Reduction Day, our school carried out a theme activity of safe entry into the campus, which aims to raise students’ awareness of safety, equip us with safety knowledge and protect us from potential natural disasters.
In order to better promote the activity, our arrangements are as follows: To start with, an expert from a professional rescue team delivered a lecture on how to react when disasters strike us, such as fires and earthquakes, equipping us with basics of evacuation. In addition, we learnt the practical tips on disaster prevention and reduction on campus. Furthermore, in the face of danger, we were encouraged to grasp how to save ourselves.
We students have benefited greatly from the activity. I’m looking forward to your coming and sharing some practical suggestions on this issue.
Yours,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Chris介绍学校开展的一次“安全进校园”主题活动的相关情况。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
对……充满热情:be enthusiastic about→be passionate about
想要做某事:would like to do sth.→feel like doing sth.
此外:furthermore→what’s more
鼓励:encourage→inspire
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:In addition, we learnt the practical tips on disaster prevention and reduction on campus.
拓展句:In addition, we learnt the practical tips on disaster prevention and reduction on campus, which is beneficial to life.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Learning that you are enthusiastic about the educational activity held by our school, I’d like to share with you some details. (运用了现在分词作状语,that引导的宾语从句和过去分词作后置定语)
【高分句型2】With the approaching of the 16th National Disaster Prevention and Reduction Day, our school carried out a theme activity of safe entry into the campus, which aims to raise students’ awareness of safety, equip us with safety knowledge and protect us from potential natural disasters. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
(2024届天津滨海新区·统考三模)假设你是晨光中学的李津,你在天津的留学生朋友Chris正在策划一次为期一周的以“美丽天津”为主题的留学生社团活动。他发来邮件询问你的建议,请你用英语回信,内容包括:
(1)活动形式(城市漫步、摄影展等);
(2)推荐以上活动的理由;
(3)预祝活动成功。
参考词汇:
城市漫步 city walk 摄影展 photographic exhibition
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Jin
Dear Chris,
I’m thrilled to hear about your plan for a week-long event whose theme is “Beautiful Tianjin” ! I’d love to contribute some thoughts on how to make it an unforgettable experience.
A city walk would be a fantastic start. Imagine strolling through the historic streets of Tianjin, like the European-style buildings along the Five Avenues or the lively Ancient Culture Street. This firsthand exploration allows participants to absorb Tianjin’s unique blend of history and modernity, enhancing their understanding and appreciation of the city’s heritage. Following the exploration, organize a photographic exhibition where students can exhibit their visual narratives of Tianjin. Capturing the city’s scenic riverfront, bustling markets, or serene parks, this platform encourages artistic expression while sharing Tianjin’s beauty from diverse perspectives.
I recommend these activities because they offer immersive experiences that go beyond sightseeing, nurturing a sense of belonging and fostering connections among students from different backgrounds. I wholeheartedly wish your event to be a tremendous success.
Yours,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给留学生朋友Chris写一封回信,给他正在策划的为期一周的以“美丽天津”为主题的留学生社团活动一些建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感到兴奋的:thrilled→excited
活动:event→activity
展览:exhibit→display
提高:enhance→improve
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句: I’d love to contribute some thoughts on how to make it an unforgettable experience.
拓展句:I’d love to contribute some thoughts on how you can make it an unforgettable experience.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I’m thrilled to hear about your plan for a week-long event whose theme is “Beautiful Tianjin” !(运用了whose引导的限定性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Following the exploration, organize a photographic exhibition where students can exhibit their visual narratives of Tianjin.(运用了where引导的限定性定语从句)
(2024届天津南开区·统考三模)假设你是学生会主席李津,为提升同学们的环保意识,你校准备于下周六开展 “垃圾分类助推活动”,请代表学生会写一封邀请信,向留学生介绍活动的具体安排。内容包括:
1.活动意义:提高学生环保意识,促进校园垃圾分类;
2.具体安排:
Time
Place
Activities
8am -10am
Lecture room
著名专家关于目前环境问题及解决措施的讲座
10am-11am
Lecture room
两名志愿者讲解垃圾分类建议
2pm-4pm
Campus
校园垃圾分类实践
4pm
Activity room
经验与体会分享
3.报名方式:校园网主页报名
参考词汇:垃圾分类 garbage sorting 报名 sign up
注意:
1. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 词数不少于 100,开头和格式已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear exchange students in our school,
I’m Li Lin, president of the Student Union. I’m honored to invite you to Garbage Sorting Activities.
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Li Jin
Student Union President
【答案】
Dear exchange students in our school,
I’m Li Lin, president of the Student Union. I’m honored to invite you to Garbage Sorting Activities.
Aiming to raise students’ awareness of environmental protection and promote garbage sorting on campus, our school will conduct a series of activities next Saturday. Detailed arrangements are as follows:
First of all, from 8 am to 10 am, a lecture on current environmental problems and possible solutions will be given by a renowned environmentalist in the lecture room. For the following hour, two community workers will give useful tips on garbage sorting.
At 2 pm, participants will walk around campus, pick up trash and practice garbage sorting. At 4 pm, a sharing meeting will be held in the activity room, where participants will share their experience and reflection on today’s activities.
If you are interested in these activities, please sign up on the homepage of our school’s website. You’re welcome to join us!
Li Jin,
Student Union President
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邀请信,邀请留学生参加学校准备于下周六开展 的“垃圾分类助推活动”,并介绍垃圾分类活动的意义及具体安排。
【详解】1.词汇积累
促进:promote→boost
实施:conduct→carry out
建议:tip→advice/suggestion
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Aiming to raise students’ awareness of environmental protection and promote garbage sorting on campus, our school will conduct a series of activities next Saturday.
拓展句:Our school will conduct a series of activities next Saturday, which aim to raise students’ awareness of environmental protection and promote garbage sorting on campus,
【点睛】
【高分句型1】At 4 pm, a sharing meeting will be held in the activity room, where participants will share their experience and reflection on today’s activities.(运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】 If you are interested in these activities, please sign up on the homepage of our school’s website. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
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热点题型·写作攻略
专题23 应用文写作书信类
天津历年高考英语的作文题材涉及到:
文化交流:包括中英文化交流活动、向外国友人介绍中国文化、与外国学校学生交流等;
学习与教育:包括学生学习方法、学校活动策划、学生辅导等;
个人发展与交往:包括个人规划、交换生互动、机器人技能竞赛等;
文学艺术:包括推荐书籍、讲座话题选择、观剧邀请等。
体裁主要有:信件、发言稿等
考点覆盖:词汇、语法、长难句
需在正确表达的基础上,适当加入长难句、高级词汇,可以预先积累作文模版素材,但注意不要照搬模版。
年份
体裁
难度系数
2024
演讲稿
0.65
留言稿
0.65
2023
申请信
0.65
2023
电子邮件
0.65
2022
短文投稿
0.65
2021
短文投稿
0.65
【解题技巧】
应用文写作的语境主要涉及交际的时间、地点、情境等环境因素,也涉及参与人的交际目的、交际身份、处境及心情等个体因素。
角色代入教学法可以帮助学生疏通好写作的心理通道,逐渐建立起写作的信心,不断针对既定的写作目标进行结构、语言和思维的铺垫,再从主题层面提升学生的思维品质,从而帮助其提高应用文写作模拟的能力。
比如:书信类应用文一般可以分为三段:首段介绍写作背景和写信目的;尾段根据情景,结合常识礼仪,客套总结全文。剩余的题目要求的内容全部写在第二段。若题目的写作内容要点中没有包括写信目的和客套结尾,考生都应该自行补充。合理分段,统筹全文,避免走题偏题。
正式写作前,还需对内容要点进行具体的构思与阐释。正文的三部分,从逻辑上来说就是:目的—过程—感受;从时间上来说就是:活动前—活动中—活动后;
对应用文背景材料进行要点分类,哪些重点着墨,哪些稍微描述,仔细权衡。信息上,也要分层处理,有些点可以做一些调整,不一定按照要点提示顺序来写作,合理布局。如果能对所叙述之事越感同身受越容易激发写作欲望。
经过审题、反思、输入环节之后,需要将内容框架与具体信息转换为英语表达,在由输入到输出的转化过程中,掌握与写作话题相关的词汇和基本句式、表达是基础。针对不同层次的学生,有针对性地指导其连词成句、连句成段、构建篇章是提升其应用文写作输出有效性的关键。
高分作文一般应该是书写工整流畅,卷面整洁美观,语句间、段落间衔接有效。内容适当拓展,符合主题,语言丰富。应用文写作需要学生打破体裁模板的限制,注重交际内容之间的关系,以传达意义为主,简化语言提示,找到写作题的开放性与限制性之间的结合点。
应用文书面表达提高措施:
A.经常练笔,每日三五句。背诵小短文或漂亮句子,多多益善。最好的练习材料就是近几年各地的高考试题。多听、多说、多读对写作的提高至关重要。
B.背会连接词语:to tell the truth;last but not least;on the contrary;that is;believe it or not;so far as I know;in the middle of;next to;9. in addition;in general;in short;so long as;to begin with;
in case;what’s more;as a matter of fact;on the other hand;as a result;generally speaking;in my opinion
C.熟练运用基础句型:最基本句型5个:1. 主语+谓语;2. 主语+谓语+宾语;3. 主语+系动词+表语;4. 主语+谓语+宾语+宾语补足语;5. 主语+谓语+双宾语。
D.背诵高考范文例句:如写人、写地点、写事、表达理由观点或讨论结果、数据与图表说明、写信和写通知的例句。
E.认真研读高考范文:1. 对比议论类;2. 数字图表类;3. 地点介绍;4. 人物类;5. 活动安排;6. 记叙文。
F.掌握地道的英语,避免常见错误,学会变换句型。
以下几点也需要做到:
1. 卷面清爽,减少修改。卷面整洁的高考作文分数一般都不会太低,阅卷老师喜好阅读字迹工整的文章,让人看上去舒服的卷面,应尽量减少修改,如果字体优美的话就更占优势了。
2. 杜绝错误拼写。高考作文应杜绝拼写错误的单词,尤其是简单的词汇。如果考生有拿不准的单词应尽量替换为熟悉的单词。如果有拼写错误的单词不仅会因此扣分,还会影响整体作文分数的等级。
3. 善用实词,替换常用词。在英语考试中,我们应该增加实字的使用,减少虚字的使用。例如,当你说某人“不错”时,别总是用“不错”这种过于简单而又虚伪的字眼。应该尽可能多地使用“generous”、“人”、“人”、“人”、“聪明”、“聪明”、“聪明”、“温暖”等形容词。
作文得不到好成绩的主要原因就在于,千篇一律。因此,在写文章的时候,使用不同的词语,可以为您的文章增添很多的新鲜和加分。
题型01 邀请信
【题型诠释】
段落要点
首段
邀请目的
正文
介绍活动具体内容,并说明受邀人参加理
结尾
期待对方接受邀请,并尽快回复
1. 表明写作意图,向某人发出邀请;
2. 说明邀请的具体原因,邀请的内容;
3. 表示强烈的期盼,并希望尽快得到答复。
开头打招呼:
- How are you doing? -你好吗?
- How have you been? /What’s going on?- 你最近怎么样?
阐述目的:
- [On behalf of ....(the classmates/my school/the student union..)], I am writing to invite you to come and attend it/my birthday party, if you can spare the time.
- [代表 ....(同学们/我的学校/学生会..)],我写信邀请你来参加它/我的生日派对,如果你有空的话。
- I’d like to invite you to join us for a visit to .... - 我想邀请您加入我们,参观 ....
- The purpose of writing this letter is to invite you to join in... - 写这封信的目的是邀请您加入...
【写作模板】
Dear ______ (称谓)
In a bid to ______(活动目的), a/an ______(活动) is scheduled to be held in/at ______(地点). I would like to invite you to participate in it.
As scheduled, the ______(活动) falls on ______(具体日期), lasting from______ to______(具体时间点) , during which time a wide variety of ______ (活动内容) will be put on. For example, ______(具体内容). In addition, /As far as I can see, ______(其他活动/重要意义).
Hopefully, you can spare time to join us. Should you have any question, please don’t hesitate to let me know. May you have a good time!
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
题型02 感谢信
【题型诠释】
段落要点
首段
表达感激之情,简单陈述的原因
正文
说明要感谢的事由或介绍一些的情况
结尾
再次表感谢及真诚祝福
思路点拨:
1. 写信目的,表达真挚谢意
2. 解释感谢的原因或对方的帮助给自己带来的好处
3. 结尾段:再次感谢
第一部分:表达真挚谢意
万能句型:I'm writing to express my thanks/gratitude(感激)to you for sth/doing sth.
我写信是为了表达对于你做。。。的感谢。
例句:
1. Thank you so much for your generous help.
非常感谢您慷慨的帮助。
2.1 am sincerely grateful to you for your timely help.
我真诚地感谢你及时的帮助。
3.1t was so kind of you to treat me as your own sister.
谢谢你把我当作自己的妹妹。
4.1 am so grateful to you for what you have done for me.
我很感谢你为我所做的一切。
5.1 would like to convey my thanks to you for your kind help.
我想感谢你的帮助。
6. I’m writing to thank you for the few wonderful days in London.
我写信感谢你帮我在伦敦度过的快乐日子。
7.1 am writing to express/show/convey my sincere thanks to you for your help.
我写信真诚地感谢你的帮助。
8. For this reason, I am writing this letter to express my sincere thanks to you.
为此,我写这封信是为了表达我对你真诚的感谢。
第二部分:解释感谢的原因或对方的帮助给自己带来的好处
1.Thanks to your help, I have made rapid progress in my English.
多亏了你的帮助,我的英语有了飞速的进步。
2. Without/But for your help(lf it were not for your help) ,I would not have made so much progress in my English.
要是没有你的帮助,我的英语不会取得如此大的进步。
3.1 extend you again a thousand thanks for the great favor.
我太感谢你的帮助了。
第三部分:再次感谢
1.Thanks again for helping me.
再次感谢你对我的帮助。
2.Thank you again for your generous help.
再次感谢你的慷慨帮助。
3. 1 would appreciate it if you could accept my sincere thanks.
如果你能接受我诚挚的感谢,我将不胜感激。
4. Your kindness and help will always be remembered.
我将永远铭记你的善意和帮助。
5.1 deeply/greatly appreciate your hospitality(款待).
我深深感谢你们的盛情款待。
【写作模板】
Dear ______ (称谓)
I am eagerly writing to extend my heartfelt gratitude to you for ______(感谢的原因). Undoubtedly,had it not been your assistance in ______(对方给予的具体帮助), I fear that I would have been______ (没有对方帮助时的后果).
Whenever I encounter difficulties, you ______(具体事由和感想) .
Again, no words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am. Many thanks to you. I wish ______(表达祝愿或者回报意愿).
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
题型03 推荐信
【题型诠释】
1. 词汇
能力:have a gift for, be skilled in, be experienced in, be an expert in, speak fluent English, creative, a boy with great ability, efficient, intelligent, etc.
经历:graduate from, be a graduate from, major in, gain/win/get the first grade scholarship, get good grades, an all-around student with excellent grades in, excellent grades in all subjects, be given the title of, gain/win the first prize/place, win a gold/silver/copper medal, etc.
性格:outgoing, easy to get along with, enthusiastic, enthusiasm is part of his character, etc.
2. 经典句型
(1) He is an all-around student with excellent grades in all subjects. He has been given the title of the "excellent student".
(2) As a boy with great potential, he is good at solving difficult problems.
(3) Li Ming, a graduate from Peking University, majors in computer software design.
(4) He has enjoyed the reputation/title of the Excellent Graduate.
3. 写作套路
开头:
(1) I am writing to recommend to you…
(2) I would like to recommend to you…
(3) It is a great honor for me to recommend to you…
(4) I take the pleasure in recommending to you…
结尾:
(1) If he can join your company, he will give full play to his talent. And your company will also be greatly benefited. So I strongly recommend… to you.
(2) In a word, he would be a good choice. I would be grateful if you would like to consider my recommendation.
(3) I hope you can give him a chance. I believe he will make a great contribution to your company.
(4) I hope that you would take my recommendation into consideration/account.
【写作模板】
Dear ______ (称谓)
In response to your request for ______(推荐事由), I would like to recommend ______(具体推荐事项). I recommend it mainly for the following three reasons.
Initially, ______(推荐理由一) . Additionally/Aside from it, ______(推荐理由二) . Plus, ______(推荐理由三) . If you want details, please______(联系方式) .
Your taking my recommendation into consideration will be highly appreciated/expected.
Keenly anticipate your prompt reply.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
题型04 告知信
【题型诠释】
段落要点
首段
告知内容(原因、背景等)
正文
告知具体事宜(时间、地点等)
结尾
表达期待愿望
【常用词汇】
1.inform sb. of sth. 告知某人某事
2.introduce sth.to sb. 向某人介绍某物
3.provide some information for sb. 为某人提供一些信息
4.work out my schedule 制订我的计划
5.as follows 列举如下
6.show sb. around... 带领某人参观某处
7.have a try 试试看,尝试一下
8.sign up for.. 报名参加
9.wok as/serve as/act as. 任……职,当……
10.mean/intend to do sth. 打算做某事
11.spare some time to do sth. 抽出时间做某事
12.take a course 参加一门课程
13.pay a visit to..… 去参观
14.make a difference 有影响;起(重要)作用
15.hesitate to do sth. 犹豫,有所顾虑
16.be scheduled at/on... 被安排在
17.make preparations for.. 为……准备
18.make an arrangement for sth. 为……做安排
19.be intended to sth. 打算,意图
【常用句型】
1. Now, I am writing to inform you of some relevant details.
2. You are supposed/expected to …
3. You should/ You’d better …
4. There will be a lecture on ….
5. The lecture will last 3 hours. / The lecture will begin at … and end at …
6. Hopefully, these suggestions would be helpful for you.
7. Please get there on time. / Please get everything ready ahead of time.
8. Don’t miss the chance. /Don’t be late.
9. Everyone is welcome to ……
10. I sincerely invite you to…
【写作模板】
Dear ______ (称谓)
Aware of your enthusiasm for /Delighted to learn that ______(活动主题、你对主题的兴趣), I’m writing to extend my ______(看法、关心、欢迎等) and inform you of some relevant information.
______(活动信息). To begin with, ______(要点一). Furthermore, ______(要点二). To sum up, ______(要点三).
I highly expect the experience to be rewarding, perfectly mixing learning and fun.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
题型05 建议信
【题型诠释】
段落要点
首段
写信目的
正文
提出建议、说明原因
结尾
表达期望和祝愿
I am writing to express my views concerning... 我写此信来表达我关于……的观点。
You have asked me for my advice about...,and I will try to make some conducive suggestions. 对于你来信问我关于……的事,现提供几条有益的建议。
I would like to suggest that... 我建议……
Why not.../ Why don't you...?为何不……?
I think it will be a good idea/more beneficial if you could... 我认为……是个好办法/有利的。
It's important to.../ It helps to...It should be a good idea to... 很重要/有帮助/是个好主意。
I am writing to put up some suggestions concerning... 我提出几条有关于……的建议。
Please take good consideration of my advice.Thanks. 请仔细考虑我的建议,谢谢。
I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations helpful/useful. 希望这些建议对你有帮助。
Thank you for your attention.感谢你对此事的关注。
【写作模板】
Dear ______ (称谓)
You can’t imagine how ______(情感) I am hearing about ______(写信的原因). I’m more than glad to offer my advice for your reference.
Firstly, you are supposed to ______ (建议一) . Additionally(For one reason), it makes sense to ______ (建议二/理由一) . Moreover(For another reason), ______ (建议三/理由二)is also a good choice . Do bear in mind that (Therefore)______ (建议四/理由三)
I am fully convinced that use the tips above and we will______ (以上建议的好处) . I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into account (表达希望接受建议).
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
题型06 道歉信
【题型诠释】
段落要点
首段
表表示歉意,道歉的原由
正文
解释原因,提出弥补措施;
结尾
再次请求原谅。
I would like to express my apology for... 对于……,我想要表达我的歉意。
Will you be good enough to excuse me for.../Excuse me for... 请原谅我……
Please accept my sincerest and deepest apology for... 请接受我最真诚的致歉……
I'm terribly sorry to tell you that.../ I regret to inform you that...很抱歉地告诉你……
I write to you to express my deep regret. 我写此信向你表示深深的懊悔。
I am writing to apologize to you for... 我写信向你致歉,因为……
Would you mind if I...?你是否介意如果我……?
To make up my thoughtless behavior,I...为了弥补我欠考虑的行为,我……
I wish I could be given a chance to make up for my inconsideration. 我希望你能给我一个机会来弥补我的考虑不周。
【写作模板】
Dear ______ (称谓)
I 'm terribly sorry to inform you that ______(写信事由). Thus, I am writing to apologize for not keeping my word. Something unexpected happened and ______(失约理由) .
Shall we fix another time? I’ll be available any time after______(补救办法). Will ______(另约时间) suits your convenience? If it’s ok, let’s meet at ______(见面地点). If not, let me know what time suits you best. I hope the adjustment won’t put you into much trouble.
Keenly anticipate your prompt reply.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
题型07 申请信
【题型诠释】
段落要点
首段
简要介绍自己,说明信息来源,并提出申请
正文
突出自己特点,具体说明胜任理由
结尾
请求给予机会,期望尽快回复
I wish to apply for a position of which you advertised in today's newspaper. 我想申请你们今天报纸上刊登的广告中的一个职位。
I have learned from a friend that... 我从一个朋友那得知……
I shall be glad to provide you with any further information concerning my education and personal experience. 我很乐意提供关于我的教育及个人经验方面的更多信息。
My name is...I graduated from...university in...,majoring in...我的名字是……。我毕业于……大学,专业是……
I am confident my professional knowledge has prepared me to handle the job. 我相信我的专业知识能让我胜任这份工作。
I am skilled in/good at...我擅长……
I had good performance in every course,especially in... 我每门课成绩都很好,特别是……
I trust that I am capable of doing the work well. 我相信我能干好这份工作。
I believe that I am well qualified for the position as... 我相信我定能胜任作为……的工作。
【写作模板】
Dear ______ (称谓)
I am really delighted to learn that ______(职位) is required, and I feel this ______(职位或机会) is specially tailored to me.
To start with, my advantage first lies in the fact that ______(优势一) . Furthermore, ______(优势二) . Finally, there is no problem with ______(优势三) .
I do hope my ______(资质或能力) will win me a favorable consideration from your side. Should you need any details related to my application, feel free to contact me at______(联系方式).
Keenly anticipate your prompt reply.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
题型08 咨询信
【题型诠释】
段落要点
首段
写信目的
正文
咨询详情
结尾
表达谢意,期盼回复
【常用词汇】
1.inquire about sth. 询问……的情况
2.seek for sth. 寻求
3.obtain some information 获得一些信息
4.regarding/concerning/with regard to sth. 关于
5.provide sb. with sth. 提供给某人某物
6.inform sb. of sth. 通知某人某事
7.prompt/immediate reply 及时的回复
8.take into account of sth./take sth. into account 考虑到……
9.detailed information 详情
10.be grateful/obliged to sb. for sth. 因某事而感谢某人
11.express one's appreciation for... 对某事表示感激
12.be concerned about... 对……关心
13.attend a summer school 参加暑期学校
14.during the summer vacation 暑假间
15.a six-week English course 一个为期六周的英语课程。
16.per week 每周
17.as for 至于,关于
18.including extra fee for sth. 包括……额外费用
19.cover the entrance fees .. 怎么样?(提出建议或用以引出活题)
20.What about..…?/How about.…? ……怎么样?
【常用句型】
I am writing to ask for information about how to be a volunteer for the Asian Winter Games. 我写信来是为了咨询如何成为亚洲冬季运动会志愿者。
I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding /concerning /on how to learn Chinese well. 我写信来是为了想知道您是否可以给我提供一些关于如何才能学好中文的信息。
I am writing to you for further information about the English training. 我写信来是为了进一步了解英语培训。
I’m writing for more information about how to better learning habits. 我写信来是为了进一步获取有关改善学习习惯的信息。
I am writing in response to your advertisement. 我写这封信是为了回复、回应你们的广告。
Could you please tell me something about how to be a volunteer for the Asian Winter Games?您能向我介绍一下如何成为亚洲冬季运动会志愿者吗?
I would greatly appreciate it if you could tell me something about the rebuilt Qianmen Street in Beijing. 如果您能告诉我有关改建后北京前门大街的情况,我将感激不尽。
I wonder if /whether you could tell me something about English speech contest to be held in our school on June 1st. 我想要知道您是否可以告诉我一些有关我们学校将在6月1日举行的英语演讲比赛的情况。
I would like to know if /whether you could tell me something about summer courses. 我想要知道您是否可以告诉我暑期课程的情况?
I would be much obliged to you if you let me know something about the summer camp. 如果你能告诉我有关夏令营的情况, 我将不胜感激。
Could you (be so kind as to)tell me something about students’ visiting group. 您是否可以告诉我有关学生访问团的情况。
I would (also)like to inquire something about a spokesman for animals. 我(也)想咨询动物代言人的情况事宜。
I would be grateful if it’s so kind of you to give me some essential information. 如果您能告知一些必要的信息,我将不胜感激。
I’d like to know something more about the volunteer activity. 我想要了解志愿者活动。
I would be grateful to receive a prompt reply.如果您能回复,我将感激不尽。
I’d appreciate it very much if you could give me a reply.如果您能回复,我将感激不尽。
【写作模板】
Dear ______ (称谓)
I am ______(自我介绍). I am writing to inquire about ______(要询问的内容).
The following is my confusion. First of all, I’m tempted to know ______. Secondly, when will ______ ? Thirdly, is ______?(要咨询的问题罗列)
I would be much appreciated if you can furnish me with the above information and you can contact me via ______ (表达感谢).
Thank you and your prompt reply will be highly appreciated.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
题型09 求助信
【题型诠释】
段落要点
首段
求助目的
正文
具体求助内容
结尾
再次表示期望和感谢。
①第一种类型:请求提供信息
如:“我”要去海外求学,请求对方提供相关学校的学费、住宿等信息。这种请求信也叫“咨询信”,
【内容分析】
a.客观描述(靠翻译)
b.喜爱/推荐原因
重点准备:中国文化类,如节日,中国结,唐诗等中国元素相关的内容。
②第二种类型:请求对方付出建议或者某种行为(脑力或体力)
如:“我”要参加竞赛,请对方给“我”建议;
“我”是校报编辑,请求对方写文章。此种请求信也叫“约稿信”。
约稿信的变体:“我”是主办方代表,请求对方为某次展览提供摄影或绘画作品。
【写作模板】
Dear ______ (称谓)
I am ______(自我介绍) . I am writing to seek for your help in______(写信目的).
Now, I struggle a lot in ______(遇到的困难). I’ve found that ______(描述自己的困难). For one thing, ______(困难一). For another, ______(困难二).
Therefore, could you please put forward some practical suggestions? I am convinced that I will benefit a lot from your valuable and timely advice.
I would appreciate it if you could respond at your earliest convenience.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
题型10 祝贺信
【题型诠释】
【写作模板】
Dear ______ (称谓)
I am writing to extend to you my utmost congratulations on ______(祝贺事由). As ______(身份关系), I just want you to know how delighted I was when______(祝贺事由) .
For these years, you ______(被祝贺人过去的经历). Not only did/have/were______(被祝贺人的努力), but also______(被祝贺人的努力). It is a reward you richly deserve for your ______(被祝贺人的优点) .
All my best wishes for an even more prosperous future!
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
题型11 慰问信
【题型诠释】
【写作模板】
Dear ______ (称谓)
Words fail me to convey my worry when I heard that ______(写信原由). I am writing to extend sincere pity and care for you (I hope that the unexpected failure/trouble won’t let you down).
You must ______(表达对遭遇的理解). However,if you were brave enough not to ______(悲观失望等), which is admirable. Anyway,It can’t be better if you can lift your spirits to face up to the result. Plus, ______(提供建议或帮助) . Remember, I won’t be far away.
I hope you can find my encouragement helpful(Hope you can have your troubles removed soon).
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
【高考真题】
(2023·天津·高考真题)假设你是晨光中学的学生李津,通过交换生项目在英国某中学就读,校方为加强中英文化交流,将举办“中国工坊” 活动。该活动主题涉及中华美食、中国传统手工艺、中国书法和绘画,拟招募学生现场教授相关技能。请按照以下提示,写一封申请信:
(1)申请参加本次活动;
(2)阐述你对本次文化交流活动意义的理解;
(3)结合个人兴趣和特长,说明拟教授何种技能,并阐述原因。
参考词汇:中国工坊 Chinese Workshop
中华美食 Chinese cuisine
手工艺 handicraft
书法 calligraphy
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Sincerely yours,
Li Jin
(2023·天津·高考真题)假设你是晨光中学学生李津。你的英国朋友 Chris热爱学习汉语,上周他在邮件中向你询问“活雷锋”这一表达是什么意思。请根据以下提示回复邮件:
(1)解释“活雷锋”的意思;
(2)举一个身边“活雷锋”的例子;
(3)鼓励他继续学习汉语。
参考词汇:活雷锋 a living Lei Feng
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
Happy to hear from you.
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Sincerely yours;
Li Jin
(2021·天津·高考真题)假设你是晨光中学的李津。我市为外国友人提供生活信息的某英文网站新增了 《最美中华》栏目,请你给该栏目投稿,介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。内容包括:
(1)该地方的基本情况(如名称、地理位置等);
(2)该地方的特色(如文化、景点等);
(3)你对该地方的印象和感受。
注意:(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
A Beautiful Place in China
March 19, 2021
By Li Jin
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(2022·天津·高考真题)假设你是晨光中学英语口语社的成员李津。为招募新成员,口语社请你用英语为社团纳新活动录制一段短视频。请按照以下提示,撰写视频的文字稿:
(1)向同学们发出入社邀请;
(2)介绍口语社的主要活动(如英语演讲比赛、观看英语电影等活动);
(3)分享本人入社以来的收获。
注意:(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
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2020天津卷|应用文写作-介绍成人礼活动
题目要求
假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你校于6月8日举办了成人礼活动,你的英国朋友Chris很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris回一封电子邮件,介绍关情况,内容包括:
(1)成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾、观看校友抗疫事迹录像等);
(2)对活动的感受;
(3)对自己未来的展望。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:
成人礼 the coming-of age ceremony
新冠脑炎 COVID-19
Dear Chris,
I’m so glad to hear from you.
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Yours,
Li Jin
2019天津卷|应用文写作-有关西方艺术的讲座征求意见
题目要求
假设你是晨光中学的李津,英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间,英方教师Chris 将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件:
(1)你喜欢的讲座话题(从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一);
(2)选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容;
(3)希望从中有何收获。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
I'm Li Jim,a student at Chenguang High School.
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Thank you for your time.
Yours,
2018天津卷|应用文写作-邀请加入机器人兴趣小组
题目要求
假设你是晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津,你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校,他曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖。你打算邀请他加入你的团队,参加即将于7月底在天津举行的世界青少年机器人技能竞赛。请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件。
1.比赛的时间、地点;
2.邀请他的原因;
3.训练计划将发送其邮箱,请他提出建议。
注意:
1.词数不少于100;
2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:
世界青少年机器人技能竞赛the World Adolescent Robotics Competition
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2017天津卷|应用文写作-介绍最近学习和生活
题目要求
假设你是李津,与你以前的外籍教师Mrs.Green 一直保持联系。近日她来信询问你的近况,请根据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。
1.简要介绍自己的学习和生活;
2.告知你已成为八月底在津举办的第十三届全运会的志愿者,并介绍为此所做的准备(如深入了解天津等);
3.希望她有机会重访天津。
注意:1.词数不少于100;
2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
3.开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:第十三届全运会 the 13th National Games
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2015天津卷|应用文写作-告知捐赠图书
题目要求
假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李津,你校拟向美国友好交流学校的中文班捐赠一批图书。请根据以下提示,写一封邮件与中文班班长Chris联系,并告知将于今年七月赴对方学校参加夏令营时带去赠书。
1.自我介绍;
2.拟捐赠图书的类型、册数、用途等;
3.询问对方的其他需求。
注意:1.词数不少于100;
2.请适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
参考词汇:学生会 the Student Union
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【最新模拟】
(2024届天津北辰·统考三模)假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。在第16个全国防灾减灾日到来之际,你们学校开展了一次“安全进校园”的主题活动。你的英国朋友Chris很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris回一封电子邮件,介绍相关情况,内容包括:
(1)活动目的;
(2)活动安排(专家讲座、学习防灾减灾和自救等);
(3)活动感受。
注意:
(1) 词数不少于 100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:
全国防灾减灾日—National Disaster Prevention and Reduction Day
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Jin
(2024届天津滨海新区·统考三模)假设你是晨光中学的李津,你在天津的留学生朋友Chris正在策划一次为期一周的以“美丽天津”为主题的留学生社团活动。他发来邮件询问你的建议,请你用英语回信,内容包括:
(1)活动形式(城市漫步、摄影展等);
(2)推荐以上活动的理由;
(3)预祝活动成功。
参考词汇:
城市漫步 city walk 摄影展 photographic exhibition
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Jin
(2024届天津南开区·统考三模)假设你是学生会主席李津,为提升同学们的环保意识,你校准备于下周六开展 “垃圾分类助推活动”,请代表学生会写一封邀请信,向留学生介绍活动的具体安排。内容包括:
1.活动意义:提高学生环保意识,促进校园垃圾分类;
2.具体安排:
Time
Place
Activities
8am -10am
Lecture room
著名专家关于目前环境问题及解决措施的讲座
10am-11am
Lecture room
两名志愿者讲解垃圾分类建议
2pm-4pm
Campus
校园垃圾分类实践
4pm
Activity room
经验与体会分享
3.报名方式:校园网主页报名
参考词汇:垃圾分类 garbage sorting 报名 sign up
注意:
1. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 词数不少于 100,开头和格式已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear exchange students in our school,
I’m Li Lin, president of the Student Union. I’m honored to invite you to Garbage Sorting Activities.
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Li Jin
Student Union President
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