作文讲义 新闻+读后续写 -2025届高三上学期英语一轮复习专项

新闻报道&知错就改 Part I 新闻报道 1. 必备词汇 1. 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 2. encourage ... to do 3. take an active part in 4. be required to do 5. have a better understanding of 6. attend 7. witness 8. draw one’s attention 9. measure 10. speak highly of 11. provide ... for ... 12. competition→contest 13. have a good command of → have a good knowledge of 14. thrilled→excited 15. evident→obvious 16. flavor →help 17. raise →improve 18. theme →topic 21.situation= condition 2. 高分句式 第一段：事件的目的、时间、地点和参与者。 1. In order to enrich our school life, our school organized.... 2. Nowadays, more and more people realize/are aware of the importance of.... 3. Recently the issue/problem of.........has been brought into focus/brought to public attention/concern. 4. Last Friday there was a big painting exhibition in our school, which is to help us learn more about ...and improve our awareness of protecting... 5. Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country running race, which nearly drew the attention of every student and teacher of our school. 6. Last week witnessed the first Culture Festival themed “the Beauty of Chinese Traditional Culture” held by our school. 7. Last Saturday, our school held the English Classic Recitation Competition at the lecture hall to encourage us students to appreciate English culture. 第二段：叙述事件的经过。 1.As scheduled, the activity started at 8 o’clock on Saturday morning and it lasted for three hours. 2.It was not until half past six in the evening that the activity came to an end. 3.The activity was so popular with the students and teachers that it attracted hundreds of them. 4.After a while, some students were so tired that they couldn’t keep up with their classmates. 5. The competition started at 7 p.m. and lasted two hours.→ The competition which started at 7 p.m. lasted two hours. 6. After the heated competition, the student who gave superb performance was presented an award by our head teacher. 7. Looking at these pictures, all people realized the importance of ...protection and they all said they would do whatever they can to protect ... and to make the oceans cleaner. 8. The class meeting, which is composed of three parts, began with a touching video about a girl tending her sick mother. 9. Finally, some students shared their personal feelings and experiences in front of the class, which impressed us deeply. 10. Representatives of each class took an active part in the competition. 11. Participants were required to prepare an English classic poem to recite within 5 minutes. 12. At last, competitors who were good at both voice control and emotional expression reached the final. 13. The students selected from every class took part in the competition. 14. The route measured five kilometers, from our school gate to the foot of ..... Mountain. 15. At last, all the runners managed to arrive the finishing line, receiving cheers from all the directions. 16. Every runner was trying their best, with their classmates giving them help and encouragement all the way. 第三段：自己的感悟或评价或事情的意义。 1.The activity was indeed extremely successful, and the students involved realized that even small acts could make a difference to the earth. 2.In my opinion, the activity relieved our mental pressure. More importantly, it is a good chance to strengthen our will, which is beneficial to our life and study in the future. 3.Undoubtedly, this event can not only enrich our school life, but offer us opportunities to learn more daily practical skills! 4、The activity was highly spoken of because not only did it enrich our school life but also developed our feeling of love for English language. 5. The competition offered a wonderful opportunity for us to have a better understanding of English classics, evoking our love for English culture. 6. Every runner tried their best to finish the task, with their classmates along the way giving them necessary help as well as encouragement. 8. The activity is highly spoken of, because not only does it provide chance for us to exercise, but makes us more cohesive. 9. Not only did it offer us chance to exercise but also promoted the friendship among us. 3. 满分模板 正文框架： ★第一段：事件发生的时间、地点、目的以及参与者。 ★第二段：详细叙述调查或活动的经过和意义。 ★第三段：对事件的评价或自己的感悟或事件的意义。 （一）活动报道模板 In order to______________(目的)，Our school organized_______________________(活动时间、地点)。 As scheduled, ________lasts_______________,(活动延续时间),__________________(参与者)。First of all,____________(活动内容一) Besides, ___________________(活动内容二) At last __________________(活动内容三) ___________________________(结果).__________________(活动意义) Undoubtedly， this ____________ not only_________________, but also________________(评价或自己的感悟)。 （二）活动报道模板 In order to encourage the students to 活动目的,our school organized a 活动项目 on 活动时间. Hundreds of us took part in it. It was a nice day. At 8: 00 a.m. ,we gathered at 集合地点 and set out for the 目的地 in high spirits. 路上发生的事情About 2 hours later, we all arrived. Bathed in sunshine, we jumped and cheered with joy. The activity benefited us a lot. Not only好处一 but 好处二. What a wonderful time! （三）调查报道模板 In order to _____________(调查目的), I have recently made a survey among_______________(调查对象). In this survey, _____________(被采访人物)were interviewed. They were asked _________________(调查内容)。 Here are the results./That chart shows that________________(调查结果). There are some reasons for it.________________( 陈述原因)。 To conclude/In conclusions,__________________( 结论)。 【小试牛刀】 In order to _______________(提升学生对保护森林的意识),_______________(学校在上周四礼堂中举办了一场主题为“世界森林日”的讲座). ___________(按照计划), the lecture started at 9 am and lasted about 2 hours. It included some very meaningful parts about _________(森林保护), for example,__________(森林保护的重要性), _________(保护森林的原因) and __________(保护森林的办法). _____________(最令我影响深刻的是保护森林的办法), which taught me how to protect the forest in my daily life. _________________(毫无疑问，这个讲座大获成功). __________________________________(它不仅丰富了我们的校园生活，同时也让我们意识到保护森林的重要性). Part II成长类 知错就该 【故事大意】 Ben 和Laura的孩子Johnny 从_________，变成了____________的人，之后这对夫妻尝试去__________。 【续写情节发展】 1. 思考主题 从消极转为积极的变化，即： 消极 积极 和主题相关的句子 2. 情节构造 【第一段】Para 1: Hearing these words, Johnny lowered his head. (1) 成长篇有关的惭愧描写 表示惭愧的词： 1. Ashamed - 感到羞耻。 2. Embarrassed - 感到尴尬。 3. Guilty - 感到内疚。 4. Shamefaced - 面带愧色。 表示惭愧的短语： 1. Hang one's head - 低垂着头，表示羞愧。 2. Bite one's tongue - 因为说了不该说的话而感到后悔。 3. Feel like a fool - 感到自己很愚蠢。 4. Be/feel embarrassed about - 对...感到尴尬。 5. Be/feel ashamed of - 对...感到羞耻。 6. Have guilt about - 对...感到内疚。 8. Be in disgrace - 处于不名誉或丢脸的状态。 表示惭愧的句子： 1. She________________________________(被内疚和羞愧淹没)(overwhelmed). 她被内疚和羞愧淹没了。 2. A wave of guilt_____________________________(向我袭来)（sweep） and I had to admit the fact that I had gone to the movies and that was the real reason why I was late.一股罪恶感席卷而来，我不得不承认这个事实，我去看电影了，这才是我迟到的真正原因。 3.while I was out having fun with my “friends," inside I_____________________ (充满矛盾，不悦和后悔)(full of). 当我和我的“朋友们”出去玩的时候，内心充满了矛盾、不幸和遗憾。 4.Hearing their talk on the phone,I ________________________________ shamefully.(低下头来)(hang) with tears running down my face. 听到他们在电话里的谈话，我羞愧地低下了头，泪流满面。 (2) 第一段细节描写 1.Johnny的惭愧，衔接句首 For a time, ______________ (他尴尬到要死) , _______________________(担心他的同伴或者其他学生会嘲笑他的父母), even himself one day. 2.Johnny的情感变化，回扣上文，承上启下 _________________________（他不敢相信发生了什么）. 3. Johnny无法面对，跑回家中，和第二段句首衔接。 At the moment, ________________________________（他唯一想做的事情就是尽可能快地消失）. _________________(毫不犹豫), he ___________(他冲回家) and locked himself alone in his own room,____________________(眼泪从脸上流下来). 【第二段】Para 2: After a while, Johnny's parents came back and knocked softly on his door. (1) 成长篇有关的安慰描写： 1. Comfort - 安慰，慰藉。 2. Console [kənˈsəʊl]- 安慰，抚慰。 3. Reassure - 使...安心，打消...的疑虑。 4. Soothe [su:ð]- 安慰，使平静。 5. Comforting - 安慰的，令人欣慰的。 6. Encouraging - 鼓励的，振奋人心的。 短语： 1. Be there for someone - 在某人身旁支持他们。 2. Offer comfort to - 向...提供安慰。 3. Give someone a shoulder to cry on - 给某人一个肩膀哭泣。 4. Offer kind words - 说些亲切的话。 5. Show empathy - 表现出同理心。 6. Extend sympathy - 表示同情。 7. Be understanding - 表示理解。 (2) 第二段细节描写 1. Johnny回应父母的敲门，衔接句首 Unwillingly, Johnny ___________________________(打开门，不解地看着他的父母). 2. Johnny父母安慰教育他，回扣前文 Laura __________(拥抱并且安慰他), "Darling, I know you were hurt, but you know _________(人生来平等). ______________(为了生存), everyone needs to work hard, _____________(无论他是老板还是清洁工) like Stanley. ______________(没有本质区别)." 3. Johnny受到教育，纠正自己错误，结局or升华 Johnny seemed to understand everything, so ___________________________________(他为他的粗鲁行为道歉，并且承诺不再这么做), and that _____________________________________(他会做一些有意义的事情来产生影响). 【应用文参考答案】 A Lecture on World Forest Day In order to improve the students' awareness of protecting the forest, a lecture with the theme of World Forest Day was held in our school lecture hall last Thursday. The lecture started at 9 am and lasted about two hours. It included some very meaningful parts about forest protection, for example, the importance of the forest, the reasons for protecting the forest and the ways of protecting the forest. What impressed me most was the ways of protecting the forest, which taught me how to protect the forest in my daily life. The lecture turned out to be a great success. Not only did it enrich my school life but also made me realize the importance of protecting the forest. 【成长篇有关的惭愧描写答案】 1. She was overwhelmed with guilt and shame 2. A wave of guilt swept over me and I had to admit the fact that I had gone to the movies and that was the real reason why I was late. 3.While I was out having fun with my “friends," inside I was full of conflict, unhappiness and regret. 4. Hearing their talk on the phone,I hung my head shamefully with tears running down my face. 【成长篇有关的惭愧描写答案】 Hearing these words, Johnny lowered his head. For a time, he was embarrassed to death, worried that his followers or other students would laugh at his parents, even himself one day. He couldn't believe what had happened. At the moment, the only thing he wanted to do was to disappear as soon as possible. Without turning around or any stop, he dashed back home and locked himself alone in his own room, tears rolling down his face. After a while, Johnny's parents came back and knocked softly on his door. Unwillingly, Johnny opened the door looking at his parents, puzzled. Laura hugged him and comforted, "Darling, I know you were hurt, but you know everyone was born equal. In order to survive, everyone needs to work hard, whether he is a boss or a cleaner like Stanley. There is no essential difference at all." Johnny seemed to understand everything, so he apologized for his rude behavior and promised not to do that again, and that he would do something meaningful to make a difference. $$