内容正文:
高考英语应用文写作练习与讲解
一、求助信:成长的烦恼
(华中师范大学新高考联盟2025届高三第二次教学质量测评)
假定你是高中生李华,你看到外教Catherine在个人博客开设了“Growing Pains”栏目,请你给该栏目写一篇帖子,内容包括:1.你成长中的烦恼;2.你希望获得的帮助。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卷的相应位置作答。
Dear Catherine,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
写作注意要点
1.基本时态为一般现在时。
2.写作思路:三段论。第一段介绍写信目的;第二段说明自己成长中的烦恼(要点1);第三段期待获得帮助(要点2)。
【参考范文】
Dear Catherine,
I'm Li Hua, a senior 3 student, and I'm delighted to have added my voice to your special columm on "Growing Pains" . Along the journey of my growth, I've had my share of headaches too.
The academic pressure is my greatest challenge at present, especially when it comes to science subjects. I find it so difficult to move forward in my learning as to doubt my ability. Plus, despite my strong emphasis on getting along with my friends, at times I'm bothered by misunderstandings and disputes, leaving me at a loss how to better address and solve them.
I would appreciate it if you could provide me with some guidance on how to strike a balance between study and life, and manage interpersonal connections. Your experience and wisdom will be a great treasure to me. Thank you! (138 words)
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【中文翻译】
亲爱的凯瑟琳:
我是高三学生李华,很高兴在您的“成长的烦恼”栏目里留下我的足迹。在成长的旅途中,我也遇到了不少烦恼。
学业压力是我目前最大的挑战,特别是理科的学习,总感觉自己进步缓慢,有时候甚至会怀疑自己的能力。此外,虽然我很在意与朋友的相处,但有时候,一些误会和摩擦让我感到困扰,不知道如何更好地沟通和解决。
我希望您能给我一些关于如何平衡学习和生活,以及处理人际关系的建议。您的经验和智慧,对我来说将是宝贵的财富。谢谢!
李华
【参考范文解析】
01
应用文写作思路
(1)审题判定文体为求助信;
(2)因是给个人博客投稿,故李华的身份要交代;
(3)因文体主体部分为介绍自己成长中的烦恼,故本文总体时态定调为一般现在时。
02
本文亮点
(1)headaches头疼的事情;
(2)so ... as to=so ... that(前提:主从句主语一致);
(3)plus此外=besides, what's more, moreoever, furthermore, additionally, in addition;
(4)despite尽管;
(5)leaving me at a loss分词短语作结果状语;
(6)address动词,意为“解决”;
(7)I would appreciate it if you could如果...我将不胜感激;
(8)strike a balance between达到平衡。
二、建议信:口语训练随机分组
2023年全国新高考英语I卷
假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括:1.说明问题;2.提出建议。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Rhan,
I'm Li Hua from Class 3.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
写作注意要点
1.基本时态为一般现在时。
2.写作思路:三段论。第一段说明问题(要点1);第二段提出具体建议(要点2);第三段期待回复。
【参考范文】
Dear Rhan,
I'm Li Hua from Class 3. I have a few thoughts to share with you regarding your proposal of randomly dividing students into pairs for oral practice after class. Random grouping, I’m afraid, might result in a risk of significant difference in language proficiency or preferences between partners, thereby undermining effective communication and personal progress.
I recommend grouping students in accordance with their language skills and interests, as this will facilitate effortless communication and spark their interest in learning. Alternatively, giving students the opportunity to choose their own partners might make them feel more at ease and motivate them to participate more actively in oral practice.
I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestion into consideration. Thank you! (114 words)
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【中文翻译】
尊敬的瑞恩老师:
我是三班学生李华。关于您提议将学生随机分为两人一组进行课后口语练习,我有一些想法想与您分享。随机分组可能导致搭档间语言水平或兴趣差异过大,不利于有效沟通和进步。
我建议根据学生的语言能力和兴趣点进行分组,这样既能保证交流顺畅,又能激发学习热情。或者,我们也可以尝试让学生自主选择搭档,这样可能更有助于他们放松心情,更积极地参与到口语练习中。
希望您能充分考虑我的建议。谢谢!
李华
【参考范文解析】
01
应用文写作思路
(1)审题判定文体为建议信;
(2)李华的身份文本已经交代;
(3)因文体主体部分为指出口语训练分组存在的问题并提出建议,故本文总体时态定调为一般现在时。
02
本文亮点
(1)regarding关于;
(2)result in导致;
(3)a risk of冒风险;
(4)proficiency熟练程度;
(5)preferences偏爱,喜好;
(6)thereby undermining分词短语作结果状语,意为“因此破坏”;
(7)in accordance with根据;
(8)facilitate effortless communication使得不费力的交流更容易;
(9)spark their interest in激发他们对...的兴趣;
(10)alternatively二者择一地,或者;
(11)feel more at ease感到更轻松;
(12)I would appreciate it if you could如果您可以...我将不胜感激。
三、报道:八十周年校庆
重庆市2025届高三第四次质量检测
假设你是李华,是校报英语专栏的记者。你的学校刚刚举行了建校八十周年的系列庆典活动。请你根据以下要点用英语写一篇报道。内容包括:1.活动时间及地点;2.活动内容和影响;3.简短评论。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The 80"Anniversary Celebration
写作注意要点
1.基本时态为一般过去时。
2.写作思路:三段论。第一段写活动的时间、地点(要点1);第二段写活动内容及影响(要点2);第三段写简短评论(要点3)。
【参考范文】
The 80"Anniversary Celebration
These days have witnessed the 80"Anniversary Celebration of our school in the stadium. Running from last Saturday to Monday, the event drew numerous alumni back to the campus to share the glory of the occasion.
The celebration boasted a great variety of activities, ranging from art performances, and alumni forums, to school history exhibitions. The art performances were a dynamic showcase of the talent of both teachers and students, and the alumni forum served as a platform featuring shared triumphs, boosting both the pride and recognition of our school.
80 years of trials and triumphs have seen the remarkable accomplishments of our school. May our school continue to boom, building on its past achievements and creating new glories! (118 words)
【中文翻译】
80周年校庆活动
近日,我校在体育馆隆重举行了建校八十周年的系列庆典活动。活动自上周六持续至本周一,吸引了众多校友返校共襄盛举。
庆典内容丰富多样,包括文艺汇演、校友论坛、校史展览等。文艺汇演展现了师生们的多才多艺;校友论坛则分享了成功经验,提升了学校的自豪感和整体声誉。
八十载风雨兼程,我校取得了辉煌成就。希望我校能继往开来,再创佳绩!
【参考范文解析】
01
应用文写作思路
(1)审题判定文体为报道;
(2)因文本是报道,故李华的身份不必交代;
(3)因文体主体部分为介绍刚举办的八十周年校庆活动,故本文总体时态定调为一般过去时。
02
本文亮点
(1)These days have witnessed运用无灵主语结构;
(2)boasted a great variety of activities拥有各种各样的活动;
(3)ranging from ... and ... to列举活动的多样性;
(4)a dynamic showcase of动态展示;
(5)serve as作为;
(6)featuring用作后置定语,意为“以...为特色”;
(7)80 years of trials and triumphs have seen运用无灵主语结构。
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