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UNIT 3 THE INTERNET
Reading for Writing
高中英语 必修第二册 UNIT 3 THE INTERNET
学习目标
1. 找出博客文章的组织结构和语言特征。
2. 写一篇关于网络安全的博客。
3.养成对网络安全进行批判性思考的习惯。
高中英语 必修第二册 UNIT 3 THE INTERNET
Preview
1. blog about a question ________________
2. stay safe online ________________
3. bad experiences on the Internet________________
4. golden rule ________________
5. post comments ________________
6. click on ________________
7. identity theft ________________
8. chat room ________________
9. draft your blog post ________________
10. post embarrassing photos ________________
就某一问题写博客
在网上保持安全
不好的上网经历
黄金法则
帖子评论
点击
身份盗窃
聊天室
起草博客帖子
张贴尴尬照片
高中英语 必修第二册 UNIT 3 THE INTERNET
Reading for Writing
What ways do you usually use to talk about your opinions or suggestions on the Internet?
QQ Space
Sina Blog
WeChat articles
...
高中英语 必修第二册 UNIT 3 THE INTERNET
Li Ziqi wrote a blog post about making Chinese food from roses.
高中英语 必修第一册 UNIT 3 SPORTS AND FITNESS
Look at the following two pictures and answer how many parts they have ?
They have two parts,including
The blog part
The comment part
高中英语 必修第二册 UNIT 3 THE INTERNET
My friend Tom was cheated of money on the Internet. Can you give him some advice to help him stay safe online and avoid bad experiences on the Internet?
Lead in
Keep away from strange sites.
Use strong passwords.
Protect your privacy.
…
Reading for main idea
Read the blog post quickly and answer the questions.
1.What’s the main purpose of the blog post?
2. What’s Paragraph 2 mainly about?
3. Can you write a title for it?
It is to tell the readers how to stay safe online and avoid bad experiences on the Internet.
Three suggestions given by the blogger on how to surf the Internet more safely.
Online safety/How to stay safe online
Reading for organization and language features
Tick what the writer tells the reader in Paragraph 1.
definition of online safety the writer's knowledge
background information the topic of the post
√
√
What words and phrases does the writer use to organise the information in the second paragraph?
First of all;
Second;
Third.
How does the writer end the post?
By asking for comments.
Online safety
Introduction: the topic of the post
Body: advice (First of all;Second;Third)
Ending: ask for comments
Draw a mind map to show the structure of the blog.
Introduction
Body
Ending
Let’s write
【写作指导】
【文体剖析】
网络博客文体是包含了网友评论、相关新闻链接在内的一种新兴的新闻文体。它通常就某一问题发表自己的观点, 体现了个性化的交流。文章通常以陈述句居多, 也较多地采用疑问句和感叹句, 用来表达强烈的情感。
话题语料积累
How to write a blog post?
1. Today I thought I'd blog about a question that has been asked many times: how to.....?今天,我想我会在博客中谈论一个已被问过很多次的问题——你如何....?
2. First of all,... Second,....Third,...首先,...第二...第三...
3. Have you ever had bad /similar/unforgettable experience online?
你有什么糟糕的/相似的/难忘的在线经历吗?
4. Do you have good advice/suggestions for ....? 你有应对...的好的建议吗?
5. Post your comments below. 请跟帖评论。
How to stay safe online?
1. Please keep in mind the golden rule of the Internet: If you see or read something that makes you feel uncomfortable, leave the site immediately.
请记住互联网的黄金法则:如果你看到或读到一些让你不舒服的内容,请立即离开这个网站。
2. Don't post comments or click on anything. 不要发表评论或点击任何内容。
3. Do not give out personal information, such as your full name, phone number, and home or work address.
不要泄露个人信息,如姓名,电话号码,家庭或工作地址。
4. Don't visit a website or click on a link you are not familiar with. 不要访问或点击你不熟悉的网址或链接。
5. Be polite online.
6. Avoid responding to messages from strangers, in general. 避免回复陌生人的信息。
Can you think of more expressions used to make suggestions?
Writing a blog post about Online shopping safety
I recommend that you should…
I think you should…
Why not…?
It is a good idea/choice to do…
How about/What about doing…?
I suggest that you should…
You’d better…
Preparations for writing
Topic
Online shopping safety tips
Write a blog.
A 3-step method
p
Introduction
Body
Ending
Introduce the topic and what you know about the topic.
Tell readers what they should do or keep in mind.
Ask readers to write comments.
Step 1:文章结构
Step 2:收集信息:
1.Use the website you are familiar with
2.Use strong password
3.Don't use public computers
Useful expressions
1. 发表关于...的博客_____________ 2. 网上购物安全___________________
3. 略知一个______________________ 4.对....熟悉__________________
5. 这是一个好的选择________________
6.避免使用这个密码_________________________
7. 越复杂,越安全_______________________
8. 在公共场所__________________
9.黑客的目标____________________
10.在家购物______________________
11.发表你的评论 __________________
know a thing or two
It's a good choice.
avoid using this password
be familiar with
the more difficult.... the safer...
shop at home
blog about ......
post your comments
the target of/for hackers
online shopping safety
in public places
Useful expressions
1. Today, I want to blog ______ online shopping safety, which has caused ______________ (广泛的关注) nowadays.
2. Many years ____(作为一名) an online shopper have taught me ____________ (略知一二) about this topic .
3. Use the website you are _________ _____ (熟悉的).
4. Shopping at a familiar website is _____________(好的选择)
5. _______, _____ ______(此外,避免使用) your birthday and phone number as your password.
a thing or two
a good choice
Besides avoid using
familiar with
about
as
a wide attention
Useful expressions
6. It's better ______(use) a mix of numbers and letters as your password.
7. _________difficult the password is , ________________(密码越复杂,你就越安全)
8. Some people shop online at public places , _______can make them become the______ (目标) of hackers.
9. It is much safer to _____________.(在家网购)
10.Do you have some good _______________(好的建议分享?)
the safer you are.
The more
shop at home
which
advice to share
target
to use
first... second... besides, on one hand, on the other hand, so that, however, that /which/who(关系词) ......
Step 3:选择适当的连接词
主题写作--网络与电脑
假设你是李华,是某报社的编辑。一位名叫 Sarah 的读者来信询
问你有关安全网购的知识。请根据提示,写一封回信。
①挑选你熟悉的购物网站;
② 使用较为复杂的密码;
③ 不使用公共电脑购物……
注意:①文章应包括以上要点,可适当发挥;② 词数 80 左右
写作思路(一审、二定、三明确、四分段)
(1)一审:确定写作体裁和主题
体裁:应用文(回信)
主题:安全网购注意事项
(2)二定:确定时态和人称(与体裁和主题息息相关)时态
一般现在时为主
人称:第二人称为主
(3)三明确 :明确写作要点:
1.开篇点题,指出要谈论的是网购安全问题
2.网购的具体的安全措施和原因作全解
(4)四分段(与写作要点息息相关)结合写作要点,正文部分适当分段
Dear Sarah,
When it comes to shopping online safety , here are some useful tips for you to keep in mind.
First, use the shopping websites you are familiar with. Download
familiar apps or software. Second, when registering a shopping website,
use a complex password and keep it well. Third, never use public computers to shop online, or your privacy will be recorded here. Thus
others may keep track of your information easily.
Do you have any other questions about shopping online? You can write to me.
Yours, LiHua
1. Continue to polish your draft.
2. Finish YOUR writing.
homework
THE END
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