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读后续写微技能之扩句
技巧一:动作链
(她打开门,走进房间,然后坐在椅子上。)
(他拿起书,翻到一页,然后开始阅读。)
(男孩起床,穿上衣服,然后跑出了房子。)
(她拿出笔,写下她的名字,然后交上了试卷。)
(他走到商店,买了一些食物,然后回到了家。)
She opened the door, walked into the room and sat on the chair.
He picked up the book, turned to a page and started reading.
The boy got up, put on his clothes and ran out of the house.
She took out her pen, wrote down her name and handed in the paper.
He walked to the store, bought some food and came back home.
技巧二:非谓语(分词)作状语
1.I flashed him another apologetic smile.I begged him for a delayed payment.
2.I was stunned by his heartwarming words. I promised to return.
3.She saw the beautiful scenery. She couldn't help taking out her camera.
4.He was tired after a long day. He went straight to bed.
5.She was encouraged by his words. She decided to try again.
6.I caught the last glimpse of him. His figure faded into the night.
Flashing him another apologetic smile, I begged him for a delayed payment.
Stunned by his heartwarming words, I promised to return.
Seeing the beautiful scenery, she couldn't help taking out her camera.
Tired after a long day, he went straight to bed.
Encouraged by his words, she decided to try again.
I caught the last glimpse of him, (with) his figure fading into the night.
技巧三:独立主格结构作状语
1.The storm passed. We ventured outside to assess the damage.
2.The rain stopped. They continued their journey with renewed spirits.
3.The sun set. The sky was filled with beautiful colors. The sky made the scene even more enchanting.
4.The condition is favorable. He may succeed.
5.All things are considered. He has done a good job.
The storm having passed, we ventured outside to assess the damage.
The rain having stopped, they continued their journey with renewed spirits.
The sun setting, the sky was filled with beautiful colors, making the scene even more enchanting.
The condition being favorable, he may succeed.
All things considered, he has done a good job.
技巧四:with的复合结构作状语
The sun was shining brightly. We went for a walk.
With the sun shining brightly, we went for a walk.
The work was finished. He could take a rest.
With the work finished, he could take a rest.
She had a book in her hand. She sat quietly.
With a book in her hand, she sat quietly.
He had a smile on his face. He greeted us warmly.
With a smile on his face, he greeted us warmly.
Her eyes were fixed on the screen. She was absorbed in the movie.
With her eyes fixed on the screen, she was absorbed in the movie.
He had a lot of problems to solve. He felt stressed.
With a lot of problems to solve, he felt stressed.
The light was on. The room was bright.
With the light on, the room was bright.
技巧五:形容词作状语
He was cold. He was hungry. He walked slowly in the street.
Cold and hungry, he walked slowly in the street.
She was tired. She was sleepy. She lay down on the bed.
Tired and sleepy, she lay down on the bed.
She was surprised. She was delighted. She opened the gift.
Surprised and delighted, she opened the gift.
They were happy. They were excited. They jumped up and down.
Happy and excited, they jumped up and down.
He was sad. He was disappointed. He hung his head.
Sad and disappointed, he hung his head.
技巧六:副词作状语
I found my lost key. It was fortunate.
Fortunately, I found my lost key.
We will have a great time tomorrow. It is hopeful.
Hopefully, we will have a great time tomorrow.
He is very angry. It is obvious.
Obviously, he is very angry.
She won the first prize. It was surprising.
Surprisingly, she won the first prize.
The old man passed away. It was sad.
Sadly, the old man passed away.
技巧七:倒装(部分倒装+完全倒装)
1.句首:含有否定意义的词(Hardly...when.../No sooner...than.../Seldom/Rarely/Never/Little)
2.句首:only+状语
3.句首:So...that; Such...that...
4.句首:not only+倒装,but also+正常语序
5.句首:here/there/up/down/out/off等方位介词短语(完全倒装)
only+状语
1. only+副词短语位于句首
Only then did I realize my mistake.
Only recently have we known the truth.
2.only+介词短语位于句首
Only in this way can you improve your English.
Only by working hard will you achieve your goal.
3.only+状语从句位于句首
Only when he came back did I leave.
We can succeed only in this way.
He not only likes reading, but also likes writing.
I had hardly arrived home when it began to rain.
I have never seen such a beautiful place.
Only in this way can we succeed.
Not only does he like reading, but he also likes writing.
Hardly had I arrived home when it began to rain.
Never have I seen such a beautiful place.
The scenery is so beautiful that I can't help taking pictures.
A tiger/under the tree/lay
Out/ a bear/rushed
Here/came/he
So beautiful is the scenery that I can't help taking pictures.
Under the tree lay a tiger.
Out rushed a bear.
Here he come.
规则说谎 lie-lied-lied
不规则躺 lie-lay-lain
躺过下蛋 lay-laid-laid(放置)
技巧八:强调
结构:It is +被强调部分+that/who+剩余部分
It is Tom who/that won the first prize.
It was in the park that I met her yesterday.
It is because of his hard work that he achieved great success.
It is English that I am good at.
It was at 8 o'clock that the meeting began.
在那一刻,她意识到,是家人的温暖和陪伴,让她度过了这段艰难的时光。
At that moment, she realized that it was the warmth and company of her family that enabled her to go through this difficult time.
技巧九:无灵主语
1.a wave/surge/sense/feeling of +情感名词+seized/overwhelmed/took hold of/washed over/flooded over/swept over/crept over/boiled over/enveloped+sb.
2.A look/An expression of +情感名词+flashed across/spread across/crossed/lit up one’s face
3.情感名词+welled up inside/in/within sb. (“涌上心头”)
4.(表高兴、激动的)情感名词+ was shining/twinkling/sparkling/
或shone/twinkled/sparkled in one’s eyes
5.Tears (of +情感名词) flowed down/streamed down one’s cheeks
6.Tears (of +情感名词) welled up in one’s eyes
A wave of relief washed over him as he finally completed the difficult task.
A look of surprise crossed his face when he saw his fast friends.
A wave of emotions welled up in my heart.
Happiness was sparkling in my mum’s eyes.
Tears of joy flowed down my cheeks.
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