Unit1 Cultural Heritage 倡议书写作一轮复习课件-2025届高考英语人教版（2019）必修第二册

Unit 1 Cultural Heritage 1 1.______3,000-year-old rabbit relic went2.______display recently at the Jinguo Museum in Linfen, Shanxi province, inspiring many 3._______(get) closer to rabbit culture during the Spring Festival period this year — the Year of the Rabbit in the4.___________(China) zodiac. The jade rabbit relic, 5.____________(date) to the Shang Dynasty ( 16th century to 11th century BC), 6.______(be) only 0.9 centimeters in diameter and 2.1 cm in 7._________(high), 8._________ is about the size of a jujube pit（枣核）. The rabbit was probably used as a 9.________(decorate), or 10.______ (possible) as a ritual vessel, according to experts. A on to get Chinese dating is height which decoration possibly Quiz Lenovo (L) - 一件3000年前的兔子文物最近在山西省临汾市的金国博物馆展出，这激发了许多人在今年春节期间——中国生肖兔年——更接近兔子文化。 这件玉兔文物可以追溯到商代（公元前16世纪至11世纪），直径只有0.9厘米，高度只有2.1厘米，大约相当于一个枣坑的大小。 据专家介绍，这只兔子可能被用作装饰品，也可能被用作仪式器 watch a video Lead-in: 2. How can we protect Mogao Caves? 1. What problems are Mogao Caves facing? 3 watch a video Lead-in: 2. How can we protect Mogao Caves? 1. What problems are Mogao Caves facing? They are disappearing. We can move Dunhuang artworks outside of the Mogao Caves . 5 夯实词汇 语基拓展 01 6 话 题 语 块 1.one of the wonders of the world 世界上的奇迹之一 2.date back to the Tang Dynasty 追溯至唐朝 3.be built in a fancy style 建筑风格奇异 4.be decorated with... 由……装饰着 5.build such a great architecture 建造如此伟大的建筑物 6.traditional crafts 传统工艺品 7.a symbol of Chinese culture 中国文化的象征 8.world heritage site 世界遗产 话题语块 Review 7 话题句式 Review 话 题 句 式 1.__________________________, the castle has _________ too much coming and going in history. 这座城堡建于16世纪，它见证了太多的历史沉浮。 2._____________ for its extraordinary quality, beautiful design and brilliant color, _____________________________________________ _________________________________________________. 中国丝绸以其非凡的质量、美丽的设计和明亮的色泽而闻名，已被 认为是中国文化的象征。 Built in the 16th century witnessed Well-known Chinese silk has been regarded as a symbol of Chinese culture. 8 Yoyo's Efforts for the Protection of Cultural Heritage In order to ______________________（提高...的意识）of keeping balance between development and protection, the Cultural Heritage Protection Committee started ____________ (合作)Yoyo's school. A department was established, __________ (目的是)guide students to investigate the condition of local cultural relics and__________(提建议) to the committee, which will ____________________ (进行保护活动)to make sure that all the cultural relics________________ (被保护的很好). Yoyo was delighted to see everyone _____________________________________ (积极参加保护活动). In conclusion, Yoyo ________________ (坚信)that it is worthwhile to do so. 小试牛刀---话题词块应用 promote students' awareness cooperating with aiming to make proposals conduct protection activities are well preserved take an active part in the preservation activity is firmly convinced 9 Let’s read them again. 10 重点词组 Pair work Work in pairs and find out some words and expressions based on the following topics by reviewing the whole unit. · cultural heritage · The damages caused and measures to protect them · The meaning of protecting them cultural heritage cultural relics 文化遗产 ancient ruins 古遗址 paper-cutting 剪纸 stone carvings 石刻 arts and crafts 艺术与工艺 embroidery 刺绣 TCM- traditional Chinese medicine 中医 secret prescription handed down from one’s ancestors 祖传秘方 6 8 1 5 2 4 7 3 cultural heritage cultural relics 文化遗产 ancient ruins 古遗址 paper-cutting 剪纸 stone carvings 石刻 arts and crafts 艺术与工艺 embroidery 刺绣 TCM- traditional Chinese medicine 中医 secret prescription handed down from one’s ancestors 祖传秘方 damages economic development 经济发展 give way to 给...让路 face the danger of disappearing 面临消失的危险 cause severe damage to 造成巨大伤害 natural disasters 自然灾害 rapid development of tourism 旅游业的快速发展 lack of cultural awareness 缺乏文化意识 6 1 5 2 4 7 3 measures to protect them economic development 经济发展 give way to 给...让路 face the danger of disappearing 面临消失的危险 cause severe damage to 造成巨大伤害 natural disasters 自然灾害 rapid development of tourism 旅游业的快速发展 lack of cultural awareness 缺乏文化意识 measures to protect them attach importance to/lay stress on 着重，重视 work together to protect cultural relics 共同努力保护文化遗产 cultural heritage protection 文化遗产保护 investigate the issue 调查问题 visit local places and talk to local people 去当地参观并和当地人交谈 establish a committee of experts/professionals 成立专家委员会 raise funds/money 筹集资金 further educate people about the importance of... 进一步教育大众...的重要性 keep the right balance between progress and the protection of cultural sites 在社会发展和文化遗址保护之间保持平衡 6 8 1 5 2 4 7 3 9 measures to protect them attach importance to/lay stress on 着重，重视 work together to protect cultural relics 共同努力保护文化遗产 cultural heritage protection 文化遗产保护 investigate the issue 调查问题 visit local places and talk to local people 去当地参观并和当地人交谈 establish a committee of experts/professionals 成立专家委员会 raise funds/money 筹集资金 further educate people about the importance of... 进一步教育大众...的重要性 keep the right balance between progress and the protection of cultural sites 在社会发展和文化遗址保护之间保持平衡 The meaning of protecting them find a path to the future 找到通向未来的道路 present it to the future generations 将它呈现给后代 safeguard historic and cultural relics for future generations 为子孙后代保护历史文化遗产 promote wider interest in culture and history 推动更广泛的对文化和历史的兴趣 further educate people 进一步教育民众 spiritual legacy 精神财富 promote international communication and understanding 促进国际交流和理解 6 1 5 2 4 7 3 have a better understanding of traditional Chinese culture 更好地了解中国传统文化 let cultural imprint/spirit live on 让文化印记/精神传承下去 the spirit is still alive 精神永存 a meeting point for different culture 不同文化的交汇处 1 2 4 3 The meaning of protecting them find a path to the future 找到通向未来的道路 present it to the future generations 将它呈现给后代 safeguard historic and cultural relics for future generations 为子孙后代保护历史文化遗产 promote wider interest in culture and history 推动更广泛的对文化和历史的兴趣 further educate people 进一步教育民众 spiritual legacy 精神财富 promote international communication and understanding 促进国际交流和理解 The meaning of protecting them have a better understanding of traditional Chinese culture 更好地了解中国传统文化 let cultural imprint/spirit live on 让文化印记/精神传承下去 the spirit is still alive 精神永存 a meeting point for different culture 不同文化的交汇处 02 主题引领·情境写作〔大观念之学科素养〕 22 写作一 应用文写作——保护民族文化遗产 【话题呈现】 假定你是李华,你校英文报正在征稿,主题为“保护民族文化遗产”。请你写一篇英语短文投稿。 23 【实战演练】 Step 1 要点提示（黑体部分请用本单元所学知识点） 1.文化遗产是人类共同的财富,因此它不仅应该受到某一个国家的保护,而且 应该受到全人类的保护。（not only...but also...） __________________ is the wealth of all human beings and thus ________________________________________________________________ ____________. Cultural heritage it should be preserved not only by one country, but also by all mankind 2.任何破坏文化遗产的行为都应该受到惩罚。 Any destruction of cultural heritage _____________________. should be punished 3.我提议我们应该为保护它贡献一份力量。 ________________________________________________________________ I make a proposal that we should contribute to protecting it. 24 5.全世界的人们都应该积极参与这项活动。 People all over the world ___________________________________________. should take an active part in this activity 6.我相信我们推进人类文明发展的新时代到来了。 ________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________ I am convinced that a time when we promote the development of human civilisation comes. Step 2 升级句式 7.用倒装句改写句6 ________________________________________________________________ __________________ I am convinced that there comes a time when we open up human civilisation. 25 Cultural heritage is the wealth of all human beings and thus it should be preserved not only by one country, but also by all mankind. Any destruction of cultural heritage should be punished. I make a proposal that we should contribute to protecting it. However， balancing development progress and the protection of cultural sites will be a big challenge. Therefore, people all over the world should take an active part in this activity. I am convinced that there comes a time when we promote the development of human civilisation. Step 3 衔接成文（注意使用适当的过渡衔接词：however、therefore） 26 假如你是李华, 是校学生会主席。在中国文化遗产日到来之际, 请根据下面的写作提示,给同学们写一封英语倡议书, 内容包括:1. 保护文化遗产的重要性;2. 可采取的措施;3. 发出呼吁。注意: 1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。 Homework Beginning---发出倡议的目的和有关背景 1. 随着……的临近，我想号召大家…… With the approaching of...I’d like to call on everyone to... As ... is approaching, I’m calling on sb. to do 2. 采取措施做某事 take action/measures to do. measures should be taken to do 倡议书属于应用文的一种，由标题、称呼、正文、结尾、落款五部分组成。 首段 点明发出倡议的目的和有关背景 正文 详细说明倡议的内容和具体措施 结语 倡议者的决心和希望 假如你是李华, 是校学生会主席。在中国文化遗产日到来之际, 请根据下面的写作提示,给同学们写一封英语倡议书, 内容包括: 1. 保护文化遗产的重要性; 2. 可采取的措施; 3. 发出呼吁。 02 Thinking 话题: 环境保护 时态：一般现在时， 现在进行时 体裁: 倡议书 （呼吁学生保护文化遗产） Thinking (审题） Step 1 人称: 第一人称 话题: 环境保护 时态：一般现在时， 现在进行时 29 开头 正文 结尾： Para.1 Para.2 Para.3 总结倡议，表达希望。 要点1：背景原因+文化遗产现状 (what) 要点2 具体措施和作用 (how and why) Outlining （列出提纲） Step 2 交代背景、原因和目的。 写明倡议的具体内容和要求。 要点3 发出倡议 (a call for action) 第一人称、第二人称为主 一般现在时、一般将来时 常用语块 1.导致 2.对…有积极（消极）的影响 3. 全力以赴做某事 4.采取措施做某事 5.提高……的意识 6.呼吁某人做某事 7. 对…负责；是…的原因 8.保护……免受伤害 9.对……有害 10.环境友好的 contribute to/ lead to/ result in/ give rise to have a positive/ negative effect on spare no efforts to do sth. adopt/ take measures to do sth enhance the awareness of appeal to sb to do sth be responsible for environmentally friendly/ environment-friendly protect … from … be harmful to Para 1:倡议的背景和目的。 Recently, there exists /is a problem that…(问题内容)，leading to many bad effects. Therefore, we call on people to do… (最近， 存在一个关于…的问题，导致了不良后果，因此，我们号召人们…) We are now faced with the problem that…(问题内容)，so on behalf of…, I call on you to do… (目前，我们面临…的问题，代表…,我号召大家…) Due to / Because of sth, …is/are now under threat. （因为…原因，…正受到威胁。） 句子，leaving(使得)…under threat / in danger. （因为…原因，…正处于危险中。） There exists a phenomenon（现象）that .... Therefore, it is high time for us to make efforts to ... (存在一个关于…的现象，因此，我们号召人们…) 时间+ has witnessed sth/that+从句（现象） The past decades has witnessed that many marine animals are dying out. With ... activity held in ... With sb doing .../With sth done/ + With sth coming/ approaching/ in the corner 随着...活动/事情举办/发生，...越来越受到关注/变得越来越流行/日益严重。 people cares more about.../ ... become more and more popular/serious ...has become a heated topic. 随着……的临近，我想号召大家…… With the approaching of...I’d like to call on everyone to... As ... is approaching, I’m calling on sb. to do Para 2: 倡议的具体内容（建议或好处） I think we should take some effective measures. First, we should keep the environment of the cultural heritage sites clean. For instance, throw rubbish into a dustbin instead of littering everywhere. Besides, it is also very important for us to obey the rules of visiting a cultural heritage site. Only if we do this, can we keep it good enough for our future generation. 引起下文（主题句）： 1) I think we should take some effective measures. 2）In an effort to do sth, I think we should take some effective measures. Para 2: 倡议的具体内容（建议或好处） In order to do…, we are encouraged / supposed / required /expected to do sth. (为了达成…目的，我们被鼓励做…) It is suggested that we (should) do… (倡议我们做…) It would be better if we could do…（如果我们做…,结果会更好。） It is highly recommended that…, which aims to do / enables us to do (使我们能).... （强烈推荐…,目的使为例让我们能够…） It’s beneficial for sb to do It's highly recommended/required that sb should do... 到应该做...的时候了 It’s of great importance/significance to… by doing so, not only can we..., but we can also.... 注意： 1）倡议后面可适当拓展（原因、好处、举例等）； 2）多个倡议之间可适当使用 过渡词： first and foremost/ in addition/ besides/ what’s more/ furthermore/ moreover 3) 句式多样化 4) 提供具体、多方面、可操作性的建议；非原则 一、套用模板 Dear , I'm Li Hua, chairman of the Students Union.　In recent years, we have to face the problem （具体问题）, which is becoming more and more serious. In order to (引出倡议目的), I'd like to call on all the students to _________. Faced with the problem, we should take some effective measures. On the one hand, ________（解决措施一+理由）. On the other hand, （解决措施二+理由）. More importantly, （解决措施三+理由）. 倡议后面可适当拓展（原因、好处、举例等） It is high time that we should _____(号召人们解决这一问题）. Only with our efforts can we expect a brilliant future. Student Union Para 3: 倡议者的决心和希望（提出号召、动员） Let's take action together to protect cultural heritage from now on! Para 3: 倡议者的决心和希望（提出号召、动员） 结尾相关句型: 1. Such measures can definitely make a remarkable improvement in... (在什么方面提高). We would like all of you to attach importance to ... (主题)! 2. It is high time that we ... (解决这一问题）. In a word, only with our joint efforts can we expect a brilliant future. 3. All in all, please don't hesitate to .... Let's take action together from now on! (总之，请不要犹豫去做...。让我们从现在开始，一起行动起来!) 4. Let's take action to ...! 让我们行动起来，...... 5. Please remember that every little effort does matter. Therefore, let’s spare no efforts to ... from now on! 请记住，每一份小小的努力都很重要。所以，现在请让我们不遗余力去...... 1. 为了引起人们节约用水的意识，我们学生应该做…… To raise people’s awareness of saving water, we students are required that/ we students are supposed to... 2. 为了……，我们应该采取一系列措施。 With the aim of..., we are supposed to carry out a series of measures. 3. 我认为有必要强调的是……I think it necessary to lay stress on... 4. 我们该做点什么…… It’s high time that we should do something to...  5. 我们的环境正在被严重破坏，为了保护环境，我们学生应该从我们自己做起，从小事做起。 To protect the environment, which is being seriously damaged, we students are supposed to start from ourselves and do out bits. 6. 现在，越来越多的人意识到，那些灾害与我们对地球的所作所为有很大的关系。 Now more and more people become aware that those disasters have much to do with what we have done to the earth. 7. 众人拾柴火焰高。让我们共同努力保护我们的地球。 Together, individuals can make a great difference. Let’s make joint efforts to protect our earth. 8. 总之，如果我们能在生活方式上做出微小的改变，我们就能给地球带来巨大的影响！ In a word, if we can make small changes in our way of life, we can make a big difference to the earth! 一、套用模板 Dear , I'm Li Hua, chairman of the Students Union.　In recent years, we have to face the problem of/that （具体问题）, which is becoming more and more serious. In order to ______(引出倡议目的), I'd like to call on all the students to _________. Faced with the problem, we should take some effective measures. first and foremost, ________（解决措施一）. Additionally, （解决措施二）. More importantly, （解决措施三）. In my opinion, I'm convinced that（我的解决措施）.Meanwhile, it is high time__________ (号召人们解决这一问题）. In a word, only with our efforts can we expect a brilliant future. Student Union Dear fellow students, I'm Li Hua, chairman of the Students Union. In recent years,we have to face the problem of the destruction of our cultural heritage,which is becoming more and more serious. In order to preserve our precious cultural legacy, I'd like to call on all the students to get involved in the initiative to safeguard our historical treasures. Cultural heritage is a extremely important resource. It is an important way for people to understand the ancient civilization. However, some cultural relics in our country are in danger of disappearing. Faced with this pressing issue,we should take some effective measures. first and foremost, raising public awareness about the importance of cultural heritage is crucial, which will help to foster a sense of responsibility among individuals to protect these invaluable heritage. Additionally, the government shoulder the responsibility to implement policies and regulations that protect our cultural relics. More importantly,we as students can contribute by organizing fund-raising events to support the conservation of our cultural heritage. By doing so, not only can we promote wider interest in culture and history, but also ensure that future generations can learn from and appreciate our rich history. It is high time that we should act together to protect our cultural heritage. Only with our collective efforts can we expect a brilliant future where our splendid ancient civilization continues to thrive and inspire. Student Union Dear fellow students, As Chinese Culture Heritage Day is approaching, I’m calling on all of you to take action to protect cultural heritage.【引入话题】 Cultural heritage is a very important resource. It is an important way for people to understand the ancient civilization. 【1】However, some cultural relics in our country are in danger of disappearing (有消失的危险). So how to protect them has become an urgent need. In my opinion, firstly, people's awareness of protecting cultural relics should be improved. Secondly, the government should shoulder the main responsibility to protect them (承担起保护它们的主要责任).【2】If necessary，laws should be made to punish those who destroy them on purpose. Moreover, as students, we can help to raise money for (为……筹款) protecting cultural relics.【保护文化遗产的重要性及措施】 Let us join hands together to protect our splendid ancient civilization.【发出呼吁】 假如你是某国际学校学生会主席李华，在世界环境日（6月5日）到来之际，请你向报社投稿并发出倡议，要点如下： 1. 环境现状；2. 具体措施；3. 发出倡议。 An example of proposal 题型解读：倡议书由个人或集体发出，作用是 倡导某项活动。 03 同类型作文润色 43 Look at the pictures below Lead-in: The development of industry has caused serious air pollution. Global warming has led to melting glaciers and drought. Rising sea level and extreme weather are also severe problems of our environment. What can we do to protect our environment? Given all these serious environmental problems? Talk with your partner 44 Topic-based chunk Check your memory 1. 空气污染 ______________ 2. 全球气候变暖 __________ 3. 冰川融化 ______________ 4. 干旱 __________________ 5. 海平面上升 ____________ 6. 极端天气 ______________ 7. 栖息地减少 _____________ 1. make some rules _________________ 2. publicize relevant knowledge ________________________________ 3. call on sb. to do... _________________ 4. keep ecological balance ________________________________ 5. improve people's understanding of... ________________________________ 6. take actions ______________________ 7. live in harmony with... ______________ 8. try one's best to do..._______________ air pollution global warming melting glaciers drought rising sea level extreme weather habitat loss 制定规则 宣传相关知识 呼吁某人做... 维持生态平衡 提高人们对...的认识 采取行动 与...和谐共处 竭尽全力做... 45 假如你是某国际学校学生会主席李华，在世界环境日（6月5日）到来之际，请你向报社投稿并发出倡议，要点如下： 1. 环境现状；2. 具体措施；3. 发出倡议。 An example of proposal 题型解读：倡议书由个人或集体发出，作用是 倡导某项活动。 Steps of Writing a Composition Thinking (审题） 01 Outlining（列提纲,写要点） 02 Expanding（扩词成句） 03 Linking（连句成篇） 04 Polishing（润色） 05 假如你是某国际学校学生会主席李华，在世界环境日（6月5日）到来之际，请你给报社投稿并发出倡议，要点如下： 环境现状；2. 具体措施；3. 发出倡议。 02 Thinking 话题: 环境保护 时态：一般现在时， 现在进行时 体裁: 倡议书 （呼吁学生保护环境） Thinking (审题） Step 1 人称: 第一人称 话题: 环境保护 时态：一般现在时， 现在进行时 48 开头 正文 结尾： Para.1 Para.2 Para.3 总结倡议，表达希望。 要点1 环境现状 (what) 要点2 具体措施和作用 (how and why) Outlining （列出提纲） Step 2 交代背景、原因和目的。 写明倡议的具体内容和要求。 要点3 发出倡议 (a call for action) Para1（Beginning） Expanding (扩词成句） Step 3 ... is coming serious problems getting worse and worse lead to as well as urge sb. to do sth. 1.World Environment Day is coming, many people have realized the serious problems of the environment. 2. Global warming is getting worse and worse，it also leads to extreme weather. 3. Melting glaciers as well as habitat loss are urging us to protect the environment. 世界环境日即将到来，很多人已经意识到了环境的严重问题。 全球变暖正在日益恶化，这也导致了极端天气。 冰川融化和栖息地减少都在敦促我们去保护环境。 make some laws draw people's attention take on responsibilities to do... do less harm to... improve one's understanding of... live a green lifestyle 1. Government should make some laws to draw people's attention on environmental protection. 2. Companies need to take on their responsibilities so as to do less harm to nature. 3. As individuals，we can improve our understanding of environmental protection and live a green lifestyle. Expanding (扩词成句） Step 3 Para2（Body） 政府应该制定相关的法律来吸引人们的关注。 企业应该承担他们的职责以便减少对自然的伤害。 作为个人，我们可以提高环保意识，过绿色生活。 para3（Ending） It is high time that... try one's best to... with our joint efforts pay off Expanding (扩词成句） Step 3 1. It's high time that we should try our best to protect our own planet. 2. I'm firmly convinced that with our joint efforts, our hard work will finally pay off. 是时候竭尽全力来保护我们的地球了。 我坚信在我们的努力下，我们的辛苦付出终会获得回报。 Linking (连句成篇） Step 4 添加合适的过渡词： 1. 表顺序： 首先：Initially,... To begin with,… First and foremost,… In the first place,… What comes first is that... 其次：In addition,... Additionally,... What's more,.. Moreover,... What comes next is that... Aside from that,... 最后：Ultimately,... Last but not least,... 2. 表逻辑： 表原因：since... as... because... due to... owing to... on account of... 表目的：in order to... so as to... in order that... so that... Step 5 make some laws lay down relevant laws improve people's understanding of... enhance people's awareness of... 02 03 get worse and worse get increasingly bad 01 Polishing(锤炼词汇） Step 5 try one's best to... spare no effort to.../ go to one's lengths to... 05 06 keep ecological balance maintain/ sustain ecological banlance 04 remember bear in mind Polishing(锤炼词汇） Step 5 The World Environment Day is coming... The air pollution is getting worse... 01 With World Environment Day coming... with复合结构: with+宾语+宾补 With the air pollution getting worse... approaching... Polishing(锤炼句式1 - 非谓语动词） Step 5 Global warming is getting incrasingly bad. It also leads to extreme weather. People should enhance their awareness of environmental protection. It can help them live a green lifestyle. 02 Global warming is getting incrasingly bad, which also leads to extreme weather. 定语从句合并简单句 Polishing(锤炼句式2 - 定语从句） People should enhance their awareness of environmental protection, which can help them live a green lifestyle. Step 5 Government should lay down relevant laws and companies need to take on their responsibilities. Maintaining ecological balance is so crucial for human beings that we need to live in harmony with nature. 03 Not only should government lay down relevant laws, companies also need to take on their responsibilities. 1. not only..., (but) also... 2. so + adj.位于句首 3. 否定词位于句首 4. only + 状语位于句首 Polishing(锤炼句式3 - 部分倒装） So crucial is maintaning ecological balance for human beings that we need to live in harmony with nature Step 5 Many marine animals are dying out during the past decades. Our environment has been greatly damaged in the past few centuries. 04 The past decades has witnessed that many marine animals are dying out. 时间 + has witnessed that... Polishing(锤炼句式4 - 巧用witness） The past few centuries has witnessed that our environment has been greatly damaged. Polishing(润色定稿） Step 5 In the last few decades, our earth has been severely polluted. Global warming has caused both rising sea level and extreme weather. These are warning us that protecting the environment is becoming more and more urgent. To protect our environment, we should work together. Firstly, as students, we can design some posters to raise people's understanding of environmental protection. Secondly, companies should never pour polluted water into the ocean because ocean is important for keeping the the ecological balance. Thirdly, our government should also make some rules to ban any illegal behaviors. It's high time that we tried our best to protect our planet from being further polluted. Remember that we can live a happier and healthier life by protecting our environment! 60 In the last few decades, our earth has been severely polluted. Global warming has caused both rising sea level and extreme weather. These are warning us that protecting the environment is becoming more and more urgent. Polishing(润色定稿） Step 5 要点一：环境现状 The last few decades has witnessed that... led to/ brought about/ accounted for which ， increasingly 61 Polishing(润色定稿） Step 5 To protect our environment, we should work together. Firstly, as students, we can design some posters to raise people's understanding of environmental protection. Secondly, companies should never pour polluted water into the ocean because ocean is important for keeping the the ecological balance. Thirdly, our government should also make some rules to ban any illegal behaviors. We should make joint efforts so as to protect our environment. 要点二：具体措施 never should companies pour if of great significance enhance people's awareness maintaining lay down by no means should companies pour 62 Polishing(润色定稿） Step 5 It's high time that we tried our best to protect our planet from being further polluted. Remember that we can live a happier and healthier life by protecting our environment! went to our lengths Bear in mind only by protecting our environment, can we live a happier and healthier life! 要点三：发出倡议 63 Polishing(润色定稿） Step 5 The last few decades has witnessed that our earth has been severely polluted. Global warming has brought about both rising sea level and extreme weather, which are warning us that protecting the environment is becoming increasingly urgent. We should make joint efforts so as to protect our environment. In the first place, as students, we can design some posters to enhance people's awareness of environmental protection. Additionally, by no means should companies pour polluted water into the ocean because ocean is of great significance for maintaining the the ecological balance. Aside from that, our government should also lay down relevant laws to ban any illegal behaviors. It's high time that we went to our lengths to protect our planet from being further polluted. Bear in mind that only by protecting our environment, can we live a happier and healthier life! 64 Summary 1. 词汇： get worse and worse make some laws improve people's understanding of... remember keep ecological balance try one's best to...2. 句式：（1）with复合结构: （2）定语从句 （3）部分倒装: （4）时间 + has witnessed that... get increasingly bad lay down relevant laws enhance people's awareness of... bear in mind maintain ecological balance spare no effort to... go to one's lengths to... 形式美：字体清晰工整、卷面整洁美观、段落层 次分明。 内容美：避免低级错误，语言词汇、句型结构的 准确性、合理性、丰富性和多样性。 逻辑美：使用恰当的连接词，能使文章上下衔接 自然、条理清晰。 Summary 高考作文高分卷的特点 Homework (2022高考真题) 你校将以六月八日海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1. 海洋的重要性； 2. 保护海洋的倡议；注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Thank you! $$