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天一大联考 20242025学年 高中毕业班阶段性测试（四） 第二节(满分 25 分) 阅读下面短文,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 “John Tan! Wake up! You are late!” The loud voice of my mother rang in my ears. “Five more minutes...” I said sleepily, covering my ears with my pillow. I had a habit of being late for school every morning. Despite the repeated warnings of my discipline master and parents, I found it difficult to change. “ I have no time to drive you to school anymore. I need to get to work. Walk to school by yourself !” my mother said in annoyance as she hurried out of the door. As I was about to close my eyes again, realization hit me Today I was taking my mathematics test! I glanced at the beside clock. Aminute before 7:30 am. “ Oh no! I am going to be late !” I panicked as I jumped out of bed. I got changed, grabbed my schoolbag and ran out of the house like a bolt of lightning. Just as I was about to run across the road, dark clouds filled the sky, appearing above like a heavy curtain. I dug in my shoolbag anixously for an umbrella but to my regret, I had not packed one as I was late. Running now, I could see the school gate. Then, the heavens opened and I was wet from head to toe. Iglanced at my watch. I was out of breath as I was ten minutes late for school! what if the examination had already started? What if I was not allowed to sit it because I was late? A lot of questions flooded my mind at the thought of missing the examination. 注意: (1)续写词数应为 150左右; (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: I rushed towards the examination hall, my heart pounding in my chest. Paragraph 2: After the examination, I walked out of the hall with a mixture of relief and regret. 原文分析：红色定从/定语；蓝色宾从；黄色状从，只标连词；下划线标黄单词为需掌 握积累单词；从句类会用斜体标注；需积累部分黑体加粗下划线；(定语从句 1) 第二节(满分 25 分) 阅读下面短文,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 “John Tan! Wake up! You are late!” The loud voice of my mother rang in my ears. “Five more minutes...” I said sleepily, covering my ears with my pillow(非谓语动词做伴随动作). I had a habit of being late for school every morning. Despite the repeated warnings of my discipline master and parents, I found it difficult to change. “ I have no time to drive you to school anymore. I need to get to work. Walk to school by yourself !” my mother said in annoyance as she hurried out of the door(as状从). As I was about to close my eyes again(as状从), realization hit me-- Today I was taking my mathematics test! I glanced at the beside clock. Aminute before 7:30 am. “ Oh no! I am going to be late !” I panicked as I jumped out of bed(as状从). I got changed, grabbed my schoolbag and ran out of the house like a bolt of lightning. Just as I was about to run across the road(as状从), dark clouds filled the sky, appearing above like a heavy curtain(非谓语动词短语做定语). I dug in my shoolbag anixously for an umbrella but to my regret, I had not packed one as I was late(as状从). Running now(非谓语动词做伴随动作), I could see the school gate. Then, the heavens opened and I was wet from head to toe. I glanced at my watch. I was out of breath as I was ten minutes late for school! (as状从)what if the examination had already started? What if I was not allowed to sit it because I was late(状从)? A lot of questions flooded my mind at the thought of missing the examination. 注意: (1)续写词数应为 150左右; (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: I rushed towards the examination hall, my heart pounding in my chest. Paragraph 2: After the examination, I walked out of the hall with a mixture of relief and regret. 本文属于 校园成长类，聚焦于主角因迟到引发的心理波动与情节发展，结尾可通过反 思和成长深化主题。 布局设计 第一段（续写段一）：主角在赶往考场途中及进入考场的经历，强调焦虑、紧张与 周围环境描写。 第二段（续写段二）：考试后的情绪变化与内心反思，展现主题升华。 框架提炼 开头承接：主角心跳加速，赶向考场。 中段推进：描写考试过程中的心理活动与周围环境。 结尾收束：考试后情感的转变，思考与行动决心。 实施策略 注重细节描写，如心跳、步伐、考场环境和考官表情。 结合心理与动作描写推动情节发展。 用语连贯衔接，体现情节逻辑性。 注意事项 承接原文：保持人物性格一致，如主角迟到的习惯与紧张的心理。 整体注意：避免情节突兀，结尾需呼应主题，体现成长或教训。 巧妙设计 在第一段加入考场的小插曲（如门没关好，试卷声音），增强真实感。 在第二段表现主角的决心，如明确制定早起计划。 2. 故事山模式与衔接点分析 1. 起因：主角因迟到跑向学校。 2. 发展：考试即将开始，主角紧张冲刺考场。 3. 高潮：考试中的心理煎熬，担心时间不够或遗漏题目。 4. 解决：考试结束后，主角反思迟到教训。 5. 结尾：主角决心改变。 要点分析 分析角度 内容 原文反应句 人物刻画 懒惰、紧张、反思 “I had a habit of being late…” “Oh no! I am going to be late!” 情感层次 焦虑 → 紧张 → 松一 口气 → 后悔 “What if I was not allowed to sit it…” “with a mixture of relief and regret.” 关键情节点 发现考试日、雨中奔跑、 考试后反思 “Today I was taking my mathematics test!” 语言特色 动态描述与心理描写并 用 “ran out of the house like a bolt of lightning.” 关键词分析 rain, pounding, regret “dark clouds filled the sky…” 分析角度 内容 原文反应句 心理描写 担忧考试，迟到自责 “A lot of questions flooded my mind…” 动作描写 奔跑、翻找雨伞 “I jumped out of bed.” “I dug in my schoolbag…” 环境描写 天气突变、考场环境 “dark clouds filled the sky.” 隐含主题 懒惰与成长 暗示主角的性格与后续变化 情感变化 后悔迟到导致不良后果 无需显性表述，融合心理独白 空间转换 家中 → 路上 → 考场 自然描述主角的行动轨迹 时间过渡 迟到时间与考试过程 “A minute before 7:30 am.” “ten minutes late…” 3. 情境下推荐例句 动作描写 1. "He dashed up the stairs, each step echoing like a drumbeat." 2. "Her trembling hands struggled to open the door." 3. "I wiped the sweat off my forehead as I sprinted." 4. "His feet skidded slightly on the wet pavement." 5. "She gripped the pen tightly, her knuckles turning white." 心理描写 1. "A wave of panic washed over him, leaving him breathless." 2. "Her mind raced with a thousand worstcase scenarios." 3. "The thought of failure gnawed at his confidence." 4. "A mixture of dread and hope churned in his stomach." 5. "His heart sank as he realized the inevitable." 环境描写 1. "The rain lashed against the windows, obscuring the world outside." 2. "Thunder rumbled in the distance, a low, menacing growl." 3. "The narrow hallway smelled of damp paper and ink." 4. "The classroom buzzed with whispers, a sea of nervous energy." 5. "The dim light cast long shadows, adding to the sense of urgency." 常见单词替换 情绪场景: panic → alarm, regret → remorse 动作场景: run → dash, search → rummage 环境场景: rain → downpour, darkness → gloom 4. 高中语法现象与搭配分析 语法现象 1. 动名词作主语: "Despite the repeated warnings…" 2. 现在分词作状语: "covering my ears with my pillow." 3. 时间状语从句: "Just as I was about to run across the road…" 搭配与语料 搭配 take a test → sit an exam run out → dash out be late for → miss 可积累短语 "like a bolt of lightning" "dark clouds filled the sky" 情感类可积累语料 情感类别 句子 词汇与短语 忧虑与绝望 1. His mind was clouded with fear, unable to think of a solution. panic, despair, anxiety, unease, troubled, restless 2. A sinking feeling in her stomach told her the worst was yet to come. a sense of doom, racing thoughts, heavy heart, dread 3. The endless waiting felt like a storm brewing in his chest. overwhelmed, powerless, helpless, trembling, faltering 4. Tears welled up in her eyes as she realized the hopelessness of the situation. tear-streaked, choked voice, trembling hands 悲伤与沮丧 1. His shoulders slumped as if carrying the weight of the world. grief-stricken, crushed, sorrowful, downcast, heartbroken 2. Her laughter faded into silence, replaced by an aching emptiness. hollow, burdened, melancholic, despairing 3. Every step felt heavier, as if the earth itself conspired against him. mournful, forlorn, somber, a shadow over her heart 4. He stared blankly at the rain, each drop mirroring his silent tears. weary, drained, defeated, resigned 后悔、内疚与 自责 1. If only I could turn back time, I would have done things differently. regret, guilt, remorse, self-reproach, conscience-stricken 2. The thought of her mistake kept haunting her, like a ghost she couldn’t shake off. shame, torment, agonize, rue, distressed 3. A wave of self-blame washed over him, making it hard to breathe. atone, repentance, pangs of conscience, bitter regret 4. Her heart clenched as she realized the pain her actions had caused. weighed down, overwhelmed by guilt, wrestling with regret 宽慰与温暖 1. A gentle smile spread across her face, chasing away the storm inside her heart. warmth, comfort, reassurance, solace, soothing 2. He felt the burden lifting as his friend’s kind words embraced him like a warm hug. relief, light-hearted, serenity, tranquil, unburdened 3. Her tears of despair transformed into ones of gratitude, glistening in the sunlight. heartfelt, uplifted, thankful, blessed, glowing 情感类别 句子 词汇与短语 4. The memory of his mother’s hug lingered, a beacon of hope in his darkest moments. cherished, glowing warmth, radiant smile, a spark of hope 成长感悟 1. It was in the chaos that she discovered her strength, hidden but unwavering. realization, epiphany, maturity, self-awareness, enlightenment 2. He learned that failure was not the end but a stepping stone to success. perseverance, resilience, determination, fortitude 3. The storm taught her a valuable lesson: to cherish the calm when it came. insight, profound understanding, appreciation, newfound confidence 4. With every stumble, he grew wiser, ready to face life’s challenges head-on. life lesson, silver lining, optimistic outlook, inner strength Paragraph 1 I rushed towards the examination hall, my heart pounding in my chest(独立主格). The heavy rain had soaked me completely, and water dripped from my hair onto the cold tiled floor as I entered(as状从).My legs felt like jelly, and my wet shoes squeaked embarrassingly with every step. Exam administrator glanced at me strictly, her raised eyebrows speaking volumes about my tardiness(独立主格). “Take your seat quickly,” she ordered.My hands trembled as I reached for my pen(as状从), realizing I had only fortyfive minutes left(非谓语动词做伴随动作+宾从). Fighting off the fear of failure(非谓语动词做伴随动作), I focused on the paper,my mind racing against the ticking clock(独立主格). Paragraph 2 After the examination, I walked out of the hall with a mixture of relief and regret. The storm outside mirrored my chaotic thoughts. I had answered most questions but doubted their accuracy due to my panic. Gazing at the rainsoaked schoolyard(非谓语动词做伴随动作), I promised myself this would be the last time I let my bad habits control my life(宾从). Determined to change(adj.做状语), I resolved to start waking up earlier and organizing my things the night before. As I walked home(as状从), I couldn’t help but think: perhaps today’s lesson was worth the storm. 亮点分析 1. 情绪描写: "My heart pounding in my chest" 描述紧张情绪。 "A mixture of relief and regret" 体现复杂心理状态。 2. 动作描写: "My wet shoes squeaked embarrassingly" 描绘主角的细节动作。 "Fighting off the fear of failure" 展现主角心理与行动结合。 3. 环境描写: "The storm outside mirrored my chaotic thoughts" 通过天气表现内心波动。 4. 词汇升级: soaked → drenched sternly → harshly chaotic → tumultuous Paragraph 1 I rushed towards the examination hall, my heart pounding in my chest. And my breath was coming in short gasps. The rain continued to pour, drenching me further with every step(非谓语动 词做伴随动作). At last, I reached the entrance, only to be greeted by the disapproving gaze of the teacher on duty. “You're late,” she said angrily, handing me a paper(非谓语动词做伴随动作). “Hurry up.” My hands were clammy as I sat down(as状从), struggling to focus on the questions(非谓语动词 做伴随动作). The words blurred momentarily, and I blinked hard to clear my vision. I told myself to calm down and gave my best effort despite the limited time(宾语). Paragraph 2 I walked out of the hall with a mixture of relief and regret. The rain had stopped, leaving the air fresh and cool.(非谓语动词短语做结果状语) I thought about how my laziness had nearly cost me an important opportunity(宾从). This was a wakeup call, and I knew I had to make changes. No more excuses. No more five more minutes. Determined(adj做状语), I decided to set my alarm earlier and stick to it. My heart felt lighter, knowing I had taken the first step toward responsibility(宾从). 亮点分析 1. 情绪描写: "Unable to shake off the disappointment in myself" 直接点明主角情绪。 2. 动作描写: "My hands were clammy as I sat down" 将焦虑通过身体反应表现出来。 3. 环境描写: "The rain had stopped, leaving the air fresh and cool" 自然环境与情绪形成对比，缓解紧张 感。 4. 词汇升级: lingered → stayed disapproving → stern Paragraph 1 I rushed towards the examination hall, the sound of my footsteps echoing in the quiet corridor(独立主格). My uniform clung to my skin uncomfortably, and droplets of water pooled on the floor wherever I stepped(状从). Pushing open the heavy doors(非谓语动词短语做伴随动作), I saw the invigilator’s eyes narrow in displeasure. “You’re late. Take your seat quietly,” she said coldly. As I slid into my chair(as状从), my heart raced. The minutes ticked by mercilessly as I scribbled down answers(as状从), barely stopping to think(非谓语动词做伴随动作). Each question felt like a mountain to climb, and I could only pray I had done enough(宾从). Paragraph 2 When the bell rang(状从) signaling the end of the test(非谓语动词短语做后置定语), I sighed in relief but couldn’t ignore the sting of regret.Walking out into the open air(非谓语动词做伴随动作), I felt the damp breeze cool my flushed cheeks(宾从).My earlier panic seemed distant now, replaced by a firm resolve(非谓语动词短语做结果状语). This couldn’t happen again. I decided to start small—setting a strict bedtime and doublechecking my alarm. As I looked up at the clearing sky(as状从), a faint smile crept across my face. The storm had passed, both outside and within. 亮点分析 1. 情绪描写: "The minutes ticked by mercilessly" 营造时间紧迫感。 "The sting of regret" 表现反思后的心理波动。 2. 动作描写: "Pushing open the heavy doors" 突出环境与动作结合。 3. 环境描写: "The storm had passed, both outside and within" 用天气隐喻情绪变化。 4. 词汇升级: displeasure → disapproval scribbled → jotted 高级词汇与短语替换 着急情绪: panic → agitation rush → dash 环境: soaked → drenched breeze → zephyr 心理: regret → remorse reflection → introspection 语法亮点与例句 1. 非限定性定语从句: “The storm had passed, both outside and within, leaving a sense of calm.” 2. 分词作状语: “Pushing open the heavy doors, I entered the hall nervously.” 3. 条件句: “If only I had woken up earlier, none of this would have happened.” 范文一 Paragraph 1 I rushed towards the examination hall, my heart pounding in my chest. The heavy rain had soaked me completely, and water dripped from my hair onto the cold tiled floor as I entered. My legs felt like jelly, and my wet shoes squeaked embarrassingly with every step. The invigilator glanced at me sternly, her raised eyebrows speaking volumes about my tardiness. “Take your seat quickly,” she ordered. My hands trembled as I reached for my pen, realizing I had only fortyfive minutes left. Fighting off the fear of failure, I focused on the paper, my mind racing against the ticking clock. Paragraph 2 After the examination, I walked out of the hall with a mixture of relief and regret. The storm outside mirrored my chaotic thoughts. I had answered most questions but doubted their accuracy due to my panic. Gazing at the rainsoaked schoolyard, I promised myself this would be the last time I let my bad habits control my life. Determined to change, I resolved to start waking up earlier and organizing my things the night before. As I walked home, I couldn’t help but think: perhaps today’s lesson was worth the storm. 亮点分析 1. 情绪描写: "My heart pounding in my chest"* 描述紧张情绪。 "A mixture of relief and regret"* 体现复杂心理状态。 2. 动作描写: "My wet shoes squeaked embarrassingly"* 描绘主角的细节动作。 "Fighting off the fear of failure"* 展现主角心理与行动结合。 3. 环境描写: "The storm outside mirrored my chaotic thoughts"* 通过天气表现内心波动。 4. 词汇升级: soaked → drenched sternly → harshly chaotic → tumultuous 范文二 Paragraph 1 I rushed towards the examination hall, my heart pounding and my breath coming in short gasps. The rain continued to pour, drenching me further with every step. At last, I reached the entrance, only to be greeted by the disapproving gaze of the teacher on duty. “You're late,” she said curtly, handing me a paper. “Hurry up.” My hands were clammy as I sat down, struggling to focus on the questions. The words blurred momentarily, and I blinked hard to clear my vision. I told myself to calm down and gave my best effort despite the limited time. Paragraph 2 After the examination, I lingered near the hall, unable to shake off the disappointment in myself. The rain had stopped, leaving the air fresh and cool. I thought about how my laziness had nearly cost me an important opportunity. This was a wakeup call, and I knew I had to make changes. No more excuses. No more five more minutes. Determined, I decided to set my alarm earlier and stick to it. My heart felt lighter, knowing I had taken the first step toward responsibility. 亮点分析 1. 情绪描写: "Unable to shake off the disappointment in myself"* 直接点明主角情绪。 2. 动作描写: "My hands were clammy as I sat down"* 将焦虑通过身体反应表现出来。 3. 环境描写: "The rain had stopped, leaving the air fresh and cool"* 自然环境与情绪形成对比，缓解紧张 感。 4. 词汇升级: lingered → stayed disapproving → stern 范文三 Paragraph 1 I rushed towards the examination hall, the sound of my footsteps echoing in the quiet corridor. My uniform clung to my skin uncomfortably, and droplets of water pooled on the floor wherever I stepped. Pushing open the heavy doors, I saw the invigilator’s eyes narrow in displeasure. “You’re late. Take your seat quietly,” she said coldly. As I slid into my chair, my heart raced. The minutes ticked by mercilessly as I scribbled down answers, barely stopping to think. Each question felt like a mountain to climb, and I could only pray I had done enough. Paragraph 2 When the bell rang, signaling the end of the test, I sighed in relief but couldn’t ignore the sting of regret. Walking out into the open air, I felt the damp breeze cool my flushed cheeks. My earlier panic seemed distant now, replaced by a firm resolve. This couldn’t happen again. I decided to start small—setting a strict bedtime and doublechecking my alarm. As I looked up at the clearing sky, a faint smile crept across my face. The storm had passed, both outside and within. 亮点分析 1. 情绪描写: "The minutes ticked by mercilessly"* 营造时间紧迫感。 "The sting of regret"* 表现反思后的心理波动。 2. 动作描写: "Pushing open the heavy doors"* 突出环境与动作结合。 3. 环境描写: "The storm had passed, both outside and within"* 用天气隐喻情绪变化。 4. 词汇升级: displeasure → disapproval scribbled → jotted 综合语料与亮点语法总结 高级词汇与短语替换 着急情绪: panic → agitation rush → dash 环境: soaked → drenched breeze → zephyr 心理: regret → remorse reflection → introspection 语法亮点与例句 1. 非限定性定语从句: “The storm had passed, both outside and within, leaving a sense of calm.”* 2. 分词作状语: “Pushing open the heavy doors, I entered the hall nervously.”* 3. 条件句: “If only I had woken up earlier, none of this would have happened.”*