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专题9应用文写作
(一)
(23-24高二上河北保定·期末)上周日你校举办了主题为“科技改变生活”的科技节。请你为校英文报写
一篇报道,内容包括:
1,活动时间和地点:
2.活动内容:
3.活动反响。
注意:
1,写作词数应为80个左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Day Feeling the Impact of Technology
(二)
(23-24高二上·江苏盐城期末)假定你是李华,在上周的高二年级读后续写竞赛中,你的得分为14分
(满分25分),你觉得此分数偏低不太合理。请你给外教评委Rya用英语写一份邮件,内容包括:
1.说明问题:
2给出理由。
注意:
1写作词数应为80个左右:
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯:
3请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇:读后续写continuation writing
Dear Ryan,
I'm Li Hua from Grade 2.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(三)
(23-24高二上·浙江杭州期末)假定你是校戏剧社成员李华,戏剧社本周面向全校师生举办了一次英语戏
剧节活动。请你写一封邮件给校戏剧社外教Jack,内容包括:
1,你对该活动的评价:
2.提出新建议以改进活动:
3.表达你的期望。
注意:
1,写作词数应为80左右:
2.开头和结尾已写出,不计入总词数:参考词汇:英语戏剧节(the Thespian Festiva)
(四)
(23-24高二上·安徽合肥·期末)假定你是李华,在某海外购物网站上订购了一款智能手表作为新年礼物送
给母亲,但是收货之后出现了一些问题,请你给该网站客服写一封邮件,内容包括:1.投诉内容:2.你的
诉求。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右:2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sir or Madam
I'm writing to express my dissatisfaction with the smartwatch I recently purchased from your online store.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(五)
(23-24高二上·福建宁德·期末)假设你是某国际学校学生会主席李华,你校将于下周开展以“Hppy
Labor,Happy Life”为主题的劳动周活动,请你用英文写一封倡议书,内容包括:
1,劳动的意义:
2.倡议参加劳动周活动。
注意:
1,写作词数应为80左右:
2,请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear fellow students.
The Students'Union
(六)
(23-24高二上·江西宜春·期末)假如你是某中学学生李华,请你给校委员会写一封信,就开办艺术画廊给
出自己的建议及理由,内容包括:
1.提出建议:
2.说明开办艺术画廊的好处。
注意:1词数80左右:2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Committee members.
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Yours faithfully.
Li Hua
(七)
(23-24高二上·山东淄博·期末)假定你是李华,上周你校举办了一系列的冬日健身活动,掀起了健身热潮。
请你为校报英语专栏写一篇报道。内容包括:
1.活动概况:
2活动意义。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
(八)
(2324高二上河南驻马店·期末)假定你是李华,上周你校举办了“绿色校园”主题活动,请你为校英文
报写一篇报道,内容包括:
1活动内容:
2活动反响。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右:
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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(九)
(23-24高二上·湖北黄冈·期末)假定你是李华,你校将举办体艺节需要选择一门学生最喜爱的体育运动。
请你向学生会主席John推荐一门体育运动,内容包括:
1,体有运动的具体项目:
2推荐理由。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
(十)
(23-24高二上·湖南娄底·期末)假设你是李华,春节(the Spring Festival)即将来临,你的澳大利亚笔友
Peter写信给你询问有关春节的相关信息。请你写一封回信给他,回信要点:
1.春节时间(农历lunar calendar正月初一,通常在1月底至二月20日左右)
2.春节期间主要活动(如家人团聚family reunion、送祝福send greetings、走亲访友visit relatives and
friends)
3.春节的意义:象征反思(reflection)、更新(renewal)和复兴(rejuvenation)的时刻,强调(emphasize)家庭、团
结(unity)和对繁荣(prosperous)的新的一年的希望。
注意:1.词数80词左右:2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯
Dear Peter.
Yours
Li Hua
(十一)
(23-24高二上·广东湛江·期末)学校是教育学生节约粮食的主阵地,你校为了提高学生珍惜粮食的意识举
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办了一系列的活动。假定你是校英语报的记者,请你为校英语报写一篇活动报道,内容包括:1.活动过程:
2.活动反响。
注意:1词数80词左右:2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
(十二)
(23-24高二上·重庆·期末)假如你是某中学学生会主席李华,近期你校正开展“关注有机食品,享受健康
生活”的活动。请你代表学生会用英文给全校学生写一封倡议书,要点包括:
1,当前饮食习惯现状:
2该活动的重要性:
3,发出倡议
注意:1.字数80词左右:
2可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯:
3开头结尾已给出,但不计入总词数
Dear Schoolmates,
I'm Li Hua,chairman of the Student Union.
Yours,
Li Hua
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专题9应用文写作
(一)
(23-24高二上·河北保定·期末)上周日你校举办了主题为“科技改变生活”的科技节。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:
1. 活动时间和地点;
2. 活动内容;
3. 活动反响。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Day Feeling the Impact of Technology
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【答案】One possible version:
A Day Feeling the Impact of Technology
In order to promote science education and arouse students' interest in technology, a science festival was held in the school auditorium last Sunday, with the theme of “Science and Technology Changing Life”.
The festival featured a wide range of activities. There were science exhibitions where students could learn about robotics, artificial intelligence, and renewable energy. In addition, interactive workshops were also organized where students could get hands-on experience.
The festival received an overwhelming positive response from both students and teachers. It was a great success and everyone learned a lot about the impact technology has on our daily life.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的报道。要求考生为校英文报写一篇报道,报道学校上周日举办的主题为“科技改变生活”的科技节。
【详解】1.词汇积累
为了:in order to→so as to
此外:in addition→ what’s more
获得:get → attain
影响:impact → influence
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:In order to promote science education and arouse students' interest in technology, a science festival was held in the school auditorium last Sunday, with the theme of “Science and Technology Changing Life”.
拓展句:In order to promote science education and arouse students' interest in technology, a science festival was held in the school auditorium last Sunday, whose theme was “Science and Technology Changing Life”.
【点睛】【高分句型1】There were science exhibitions where students could learn about robotics, artificial intelligence, and renewable energy.(运用了where引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】In addition, interactive workshops were also organized where students could get hands-on experience.(运用了where引导的定语从句)
(二)
(23-24高二上·江苏盐城·期末)假定你是李华,在上周的高二年级读后续写竞赛中,你的得分为14分(满分25分),你觉得此分数偏低不太合理。请你给外教评委Ryan用英语写一份邮件,内容包括:
1.说明问题;
2.给出理由。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇:读后续写 continuation writing
Dear Ryan,
I'm Li Hua from Grade 2.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Possible version 1:
Dear Ryan,
I am Li Hua from Grade 2, a participant in the last continuation writing competition. Having scored only 14 for my continuation writing, I felt it unfair, so I am writing to you to state my reasons.
For my writing, I felt it totally meets the requirements put forward in the contest. To begin with, the structure of my composition is definitely clear and the plot develops reasonably, no prolixity at all. Additionally, the words and sentences used are colorful, without repeatedly using the same word. I even wrote some compound sentences to update my writing, such as attributive clause, the emphatic pattern, inverted sentence and so on. Finally, a well-known saying is used to end my article, which I think is a perfect highlight of the passage.
In a word, with the merits mentioned above, I wonder why I got such a low score. If it is convenient for you, please give me an explanation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Possible version 2:
Dear Ryan,
I am Li Hua from Grade 2, a participant in the last continuation writing competition. I received a score of 14 out of 25, and I believe this score is unreasonably low.
Firstly, I carefully followed the guidelines and requirements of the competition. I made sure to address the given topic and structure my writing appropriately. Secondly, I also paid attention to grammar, vocabulary, and coherence in my composition. Therefore, I believe my writing should have been evaluated more favorably.
In conclusion, I feel that my score of 14 does not accurately represent my writing abilities. I kindly request you to reconsider my score and provide me with a fair evaluation.
Thank you for your attention to this matter. I look forward to your prompt response.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生就读后续写竞赛得分问题给外教评委Ryan用英语写一份邮件,内容包括:1.说明问题;2.给出理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
首先:firstly→to begin with
提供某人某物:provide sb with sth→offer sb sth
总之:in conclusion→in a word
感谢:thank→appreciate
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I am Li Hua from Grade 2, a participant in the last continuation writing competition.
拓展句:I am Li Hua from Grade 2, who is a participant in the last continuation writing competition.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
In conclusion, I feel that my score of 14 does not accurately represent my writing abilities.(运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2]
I kindly request you to reconsider my score and provide me with a fair evaluation.(运用了动词不定式作宾语补足语)
(三)
(23-24高二上·浙江杭州·期末)假定你是校戏剧社成员李华,戏剧社本周面向全校师生举办了一次英语戏剧节活动。请你写一封邮件给校戏剧社外教 Jack,内容包括:
1. 你对该活动的评价;
2. 提出新建议以改进活动;
3. 表达你的期望。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 开头和结尾已写出,不计入总词数;参考词汇:英语戏剧节(the Thespian Festival)
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Dear Jack,
I’m writing to share my feedback on the Thespian Festival organized by our drama club this week.
First of all, I would like to express my sincere appreciation for the efforts of the club in organizing this event.
However, I also have some suggestions for improvement. For example, it would be great if we could have more interactive activities during the festival, such as workshops or Q&A sessions with the actors and directors. This would help to engage the audience more deeply and enhance their understanding and appreciation of English drama.
I hope that our drama club will continue to organize more events like this in the future, and I look forward to participating in them.
Your,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的信件。要求考生给校戏剧社外教 Jack写信,就学校戏剧社面向全校师生举办的一次英语戏剧节活动给出自己的评价,提出新的建议并表达期望。
【详解】1.词汇积累
真诚的:sincere→ genuine
建议:suggestion → advice
提高:enhance → improve
参加:participate in→ take part in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m writing to share my feedback on the Thespian Festival organized by our drama club this week.
拓展句:I’m writing to share my feedback on the Thespian Festival which was organized by our drama club this week.
【点睛】【高分句型1】For example, it would be great if we could have more interactive activities during the festival, such as workshops or Q&A sessions with the actors and directors.(运用了if引导的状语从句)
【高分句型2】I hope that our drama club will continue to organize more events like this in the future, and I look forward to participating in them.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
(四)
(23-24高二上·安徽合肥·期末)假定你是李华,在某海外购物网站上订购了一款智能手表作为新年礼物送给母亲,但是收货之后出现了一些问题,请你给该网站客服写一封邮件,内容包括:1. 投诉内容;2. 你的诉求。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sir or Madam
I’m writing to express my dissatisfaction with the smartwatch I recently purchased from your online store.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir or Madam
I’m writing to express my dissatisfaction with the smartwatch I recently purchased from your online store.
I ordered it as a Mother’s Day gift in advance; however, the product arrived long after Mother’s day has passed, causing great inconvenience as I couldn’t present the gift to my mother on that very day. So I’m extremely disappointed with the slow delivery. Furthermore, the product I received is different from what was advertised. It lacks the promised features and functions, which makes it a poor choice as a gift. Therefore, I would like a full refund and I hope that future orders can be delivered promptly to avoid similar inconvenience.
I hope you’ll take my complaints seriously. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一份投诉信,就在网上购买的智能手表进行投诉。
【详解】1.词汇积累
礼物:gift→present
提前: in advance→ahead of time
此外:furthermore→moreover
因此:therefore→thus
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I ordered it as a Mother’s Day gift in advance.
拓展句:I ordered it as a Mother’s Day gift in advance, which will give my mother a surprise.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Furthermore, the product I received is different from what was advertised. (运用了what引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】It lacks the promised features and functions, which makes it a poor choice as a gift. (运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句)
(五)
(23-24高二上·福建宁德·期末)假设你是某国际学校学生会主席李华,你校将于下周开展以“Happy Labor, Happy Life”为主题的劳动周活动,请你用英文写一封倡议书,内容包括:
1. 劳动的意义;
2. 倡议参加劳动周活动。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear fellow students,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The Students’ Union
【答案】Dear fellow students,
Currently, labor education has been increasingly attached great significance to, and it is necessary for us to engage in labor, so our school will hold an labor week activity next week, whose theme is “Happy Labor, Happy Life” .
As a matter of fact, time spent laboring is rewarding. It can promote our practical skills, strong will, unity and cooperation. At the same time, we will also be given the precious opportunity to contribute our share and rewarded with a spiritual fulfillment.
As a result, actively engage in our activity and take our obligation both at home and at school, which will turn out to be very beneficial and essential.
The Students’ Union
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是某国际学校学生会主席李华,你校将于下周开展以 “Happy Labor, Happy Life” 为主题的劳动周活动,请你用英文写一封倡议书。
【详解】1.词汇积累
重视:attach great significance to→put emphasis on
实际上:as a matter of fact→in fact
同时:at the same time→meanwhile
机会:opportunity→chance
2.句式拓展
拓展句:合并简单句
原句:As a matter of fact, time spent laboring is rewarding. It can promote our practical skills, strong will, unity and cooperation.
拓展句:As a matter of fact, time spent laboring is rewarding because it can promote our practical skills, strong will, unity and cooperation.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Currently, labor education has been increasingly attached great significance to, and it is necessary for us to engage in labor, so our school will hold an labor week activity next week, whose theme is “Happy Labor, Happy Life” .(运用了it作形式主语,动词不定式作真正的主语的句型和whose引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] As a result, actively engage in our activity and take our obligation both at home and at school, which will turn out to be very beneficial and essential.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
(六)
(23-24高二上·江西宜春·期末)假如你是某中学学生李华,请你给校委员会写一封信,就开办艺术画廊给出自己的建议及理由,内容包括:
1. 提出建议;
2. 说明开办艺术画廊的好处。
注意:1.词数80 左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Committee members,
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Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Committee members,
I wish to make a suggestion about starting a school art gallery.
There are many students who are good at painting in our school. The school art gallery can provide these students with a very good platform to display their own paintings, offer them a chance to admire the artistic achievements and the development of school culture. If you were to offer such an opportunity to the students who are fond of art, I believe they would give you a big surprise.
I would be more than happy if my suggestion could be considered.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,求考生给校委员会写一封信,就开办艺术画给出自己的建议及理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议:suggestion→advice
展示:display→show
提供:offer→provide
喜欢:be fond of→like
2.句式拓展
同义句替换
原句:I would be more than happy if my suggestion could be considered.
拓展句:I will be more than happy if my suggestion can be considered.
【点睛】【高分句型1】There are many students who are good at painting in our school. (运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】If you were to offer such an opportunity to the students who are fond of art, I believe they would give you a big surprise. (运用了虚拟语气条件状语从句)
(七)
(23-24高二上·山东淄博·期末)假定你是李华,上周你校举办了一系列的冬日健身活动,掀起了健身热潮。请你为校报英语专栏写一篇报道。内容包括:
1.活动概况;
2.活动意义。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】Last week witnessed a series of winter fitness activities, which sparked enthusiasm for exercise among students.
During school breaks, events like long-distance racing, rope skipping, badminton, and basketball were held separately. Engaged in these activities, students jumped and ran vigorously in the stadium or on the playground, which aroused our passion for sports and fostered our friendship.
These colorful sports activities greatly improved our physical health, academic focus and enhanced teamwork spirits, creating a lively and joyful atmosphere for the winter campus.
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生为校报英语专栏写一篇报道,介绍上周学校举办的一系列的冬日健身活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
一系列的:a series of→a sequence of
参加:engage in→participate in
令人愉快的:joyful→pleasant
加强:enhance→strengthen
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:During school breaks, events like long-distance racing, rope skipping, badminton, and basketball were held separately.
拓展句:During school breaks, events which included long-distance racing, rope skipping, badminton, and basketball were held separately.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Last week witnessed a series of winter fitness activities, which sparked enthusiasm for exercise among students.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]
These colorful sports activities greatly improved our physical health, academic focus and enhanced teamwork spirits, creating a lively and joyful atmosphere for the winter campus.(运用了现在分词作状语)
(八)
(23-24高二上·河南驻马店·期末)假定你是李华,上周你校举办了“绿色校园”主题活动,请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:
1.活动内容;
2.活动反响。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】In order to help save energy and raise students’ awareness of protecting the environment, last week our school organized an activity whose theme was green campus.
It lasts for a whole week. Throughout the week, teachers and students were encouraged to reduce their carbon footprint by using public transportation to get to campus. In addition, volunteers made posters advocating a green lifestyle. Finally, classes in Grade one held class meeting under the title of green campus, offering suggestions for environment improvement.
The activity is such a great success that everyone thinks highly of it. Not only does it contribute to a better environment but provides all the students with a new perspective of environmental protection.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就上周学校举办的“绿色校园”主题活动,为校英文报写一篇报道。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
主题:theme→ topic/subject
减少:reduce → lower/decrease
提倡:advocate→ promote/campaign for
提供:offer→ provide
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:It lasts for a whole week. Throughout the week, teachers and students were encouraged to reduce their carbon footprint by using public transportation to get to campus.
拓展句:It lasts for a whole week, throughout which teachers and students were encouraged to reduce their carbon footprint by using public transportation to get to campus.
【点睛】【高分句型1】In order to help save energy and raise students’ awareness of protecting the environment, last week our school organized an activity whose theme was green campus.(运用了whose引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】 Not only does it contribute to a better environment but provides all the students with a new perspective of environmental protection.(运用了not only...but also引出的部分倒装句)
(九)
(23-24高二上·湖北黄冈·期末)假定你是李华,你校将举办体艺节需要选择一门学生最喜爱的体育运动。请你向学生会主席John推荐一门体育运动,内容包括:
1.体育运动的具体项目;
2.推荐理由。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
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【答案】Dear John,
Hearing that a sport will be selected to be one of the activities of the Sports and Art Festival, I’m writing to recommend my favorite sport, soccer.
As we all know, soccer, with a long history, is a kind of sport that enjoys great popularity among all walks of life. There are various benefits that playing soccer can bring to us. Initially, it was an appropriate approach to building up strengths. Subsequently, known as a teamwork, soccer contributes a lot to improving our ability in cooperation and developing our team spirits. Apart from these, playing soccer broadens our connections with our classmates, making it easier for us to make friends.
I’d appreciate it if you can take my suggestions into account. Keenly anticipate for you early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向学生会主席John推荐一门体育运动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
各种各样的:various→a variety of
好处:benefits→advantages
合适的:appropriate→proper
建议:suggestions→advice
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Subsequently, known as a teamwork, soccer contributes a lot to improving our ability in cooperation and developing our team spirits.
拓展句:Subsequently, soccer which is known as a teamwork, contributes a lot to improving our ability in cooperation and developing our team spirits.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Hearing that a sport will be selected to be one of the activities of the Sports and Art Festival, I’m writing to recommend my favorite sport, soccer.(运用了非谓语动词作状语和that引导的宾语从句 )
【高分句型2】There are various benefits that playing soccer can bring to us.(运用了that引导的定语从句)
(十)
(23-24高二上·湖南娄底·期末)假设你是李华,春节(the Spring Festival)即将来临,你的澳大利亚笔友Peter写信给你询问有关春节的相关信息。请你写一封回信给他,回信要点:
1. 春节时间(农历lunar calendar 正月初一,通常在1月底至二月20日左右)
2. 春节期间主要活动 (如家人团聚family reunion、送祝福send greetings、走亲访友visit relatives and friends)
3. 春节的意义:象征反思(reflection)、更新(renewal)和复兴(rejuvenation)的时刻,强调(emphasize)家庭、团结(unity)和对繁荣(prosperous)的新的一年的希望。
注意:1. 词数80词左右; 2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯
Dear Peter,
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Yours
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter,
Seeing that you have a strong appetite for our Chinese Spring Festival, I am more than delighted to share with you some relevant information.
The Chinese New Year, also known as the Spring Festival, is the most important traditional holiday in China, which falls on the first day of the lunar calendar, usually between January 21 and February 20. The main activities include family reunions, sending greetings, and visiting relatives and friends. It represents a time of reflection, renewal, and rejuvenation, emphasizing family, unity, and hope for a prosperous new year.
That’s all I want to share with you. If you authentically want to know more, how about coming to China to experience it in person.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给澳大利亚笔友Peter回信告诉他有关中国春节的相关信息。
【详解】1.词汇积累
开心的:delighted→glad/pleased/happy
主要的:main→chief
欲望:appetite→desire
重要的:important→crucial
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:That’s all I want to share with you.
拓展句:That’s what I want to share with you.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The Chinese New Year, also known as the Spring Festival, is the most important traditional holiday in China, which falls on the first day of the lunar calendar, usually between January 21 and February 20.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] If you authentically want to know more, how about coming to China to experience it in person.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
(十一)
(23-24高二上·广东湛江·期末)学校是教育学生节约粮食的主阵地,你校为了提高学生珍惜粮食的意识举办了一系列的活动。假定你是校英语报的记者,请你为校英语报写一篇活动报道,内容包括:1. 活动过程;2. 活动反响。
注意:1.词数80词左右:2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
To raise awareness about food conservation, our school launched a series of activities.
We began with an informative assembly, followed by interactive workshops on reducing waste. Students participated in a “Zero Waste Lunch” challenge and created posters to promote the cause. The response was enthusiastic with many students who now actively reduce leftovers and share their experiences.
This initiative, which has fostered a greater appreciation for the value of food among students, has encouraged more mindful eating habits.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校为了提高学生珍惜粮食的意识举办了一系列的活动,要求考生为英语报写一篇活动报道。
【详解】1.词汇积累
活动:activity→event
参加:participate in→take part in
积极地:actively→positively
鼓励:encourage→inspire
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:We began with an informative assembly, followed by interactive workshops on reducing waste.
拓展句:We began with an informative assembly, which was followed by interactive workshops on reducing waste.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The response was enthusiastic, with many students who now actively reduce leftovers and share their experiences.(运用了who引导的限定性定语从句)
【高分句型2】This initiative, which has fostered a greater appreciation for the value of food among students, has encouraged more mindful eating habits.(运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句)
(十二)
(23-24高二上·重庆·期末)假如你是某中学学生会主席李华,近期你校正开展“关注有机食品,享受健康生活”的活动。请你代表学生会用英文给全校学生写一封倡议书,要点包括:
1.当前饮食习惯现状;
2.该活动的重要性;
3.发出倡议
注意:1.字数80词左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头结尾已给出,但不计入总词数
Dear Schoolmates,
I’m Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear fellow students,
I am Lihua, chairman of the Student Union. With the intention of raising students’ awareness of having a healthy lifestyle, our campus is launching a campaign themed ” Eating organic food and living a healthy life“.
As we can see, there exists a common phenomenon that students on our campus tend to eat chemical food instead of organic food due to its low price and availability. However, there is no denying the fact that the long-term use of chemical food where chemical remains exist has a poor effect on both our health and the environment. Therefore, it is of vital importance to switch to organic food, which may alleviate the damage to our health as well as the surroundings, contributing to a healthy lifestyle.
Hence, for the sake of your own health and a more harmonious world, I am standing here, appealing for your active participation in this campaign. Only through our joint efforts can we make a difference to the world.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校正开展“关注有机食品,享受健康生活”的活动,要求考生以某中学学生会主席李华的身份,按照要求代表学生会用英文给全校学生写一封倡议书。
【详解】1.词汇积累
目的:intention→ purpose
意识:awareness→ consciousness
发起:launch→ initiate
运动:campaign→ movement
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:As we can see, there exists a common phenomenon that students on our campus tend to eat chemical food instead of organic food due to its low price and availability.
拓展句:We can see that there exists a common phenomenon that students on our campus tend to eat chemical food instead of organic food due to its low price and availability.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As we can see, there exists a common phenomenon that students on our campus tend to eat chemical food instead of organic food due to its low price and availability.(运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句、that引导的同位语从句)
【高分句型2】However, there is no denying the fact that the long-term use of chemical food where chemical remains exist has a poor effect on both our health and the environment.(运用了that引导的同位语从句)
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