内容正文:
英语新闻报道写作技巧、句式和模版
文体概述
新闻报道是媒体传递信息最常使用的手段。为了让读者对整个事情有清楚的了解,英语新闻报道(或评论)必须包含六个要素:时间(when)、地点(where)、人物(who)、事件(what)、方式(how),以及原因(why)。新闻报道是以客观事实为基础的朴实的文体,但是在写作过程中,我们仍然要根据不同的内容灵活运用各种表达方法,如记叙、描写、议论、夹叙夹议等。新闻报道的语言应该是具体、真实的,所以我们应该尽量少用抽象的概念。同时,时态上一般都是一般过去时和一般现在时的结合。
情境呈现
(2020•新高考Ⅰ卷)假定你是李华,上周日你校举办了5千米越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:1.参加人员;2.跑步路线:从校门口到南山脚下;3.活动反响。注意:写作词数应为80左右。
A Cross-Country Running Race
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写作指导
一、审题
该写作要求写一篇新闻报道。新闻、活动报道是典型的应用文体裁,也是记叙文的一种。掌握新闻的6要素——5个W和1个H,即人物(who)、事件(what)、时间(when)、地点(where)、原因(why)和方式(how)。时态以一般过去时为主。
二、谋篇
新闻报道时态:一般过去时。
结构通常分为四个部分:标题、导语、主体、结束语。
3、 写作框架及语料
Para.1 活动简要概述(when/ where/ who/ what/ why)
Para .2 活动发生的主要细节,即活动内容
Para. 3 活动感受、评价
第一段:活动目的、时间、地点、事件;
1.【相关短语】
in order to do
aimed at doing
in an effort/attempt to do
for the purpose of
with the aim/objective of
2.活动的目的
relieve our pressure/stress 缓解压力
broaden/ widen our view/ horizons拓展视野
enrich our life/ knowledge about丰富生活/ 关于...知识
sharpen our skills 磨练技能
equip us with necessary knowledge 使具备必要知识
raise one’s awareness of 提高意识
boost/build up our confidence增强信心
enhance our ability 提高能力
promote our friendship促进友谊
foster our development 促进发展
arouse our interest /curiosity 激发兴趣/好奇心
deepen our understanding of … / gain a deeper insight into 加深理解
cultivate our love/passion for 培养对…的热爱
benefit us in the future 使我们受益
improve learning efficiency 提高学习效率
get us close to nature 接近大自然
expose/introduce us to使我们接触…
enhance physical fitness 提升身体素质
broaden our horizons 开阔我们的眼界
2.【相关句式】
句型:_____(某时间或地点) saw/witnessed ____(某活动) organized by_______(活动举办方) in ______(活动地点),which is aimed at ____(活动的目的).
翻译:为了丰富学生们的校园生活,我们学校于上周五在301报告厅举办了一场英语歌唱比赛。(Last Friday witnessed/saw an English Singing Competition organized by our school in the lecture hall 301, which is aimed at enriching students' school life.)
· Last Sunday witnessed/saw a “Getting to know the plants around” activity launched /organized in our school botanical garden, which was thought-provoking and entertaining.
上周日我们学校举办了“认识我身边的植物”的活动,非常有趣且发人深省。
· In an effort to relieve students’ learning pressure and enhance their physical and mental health, our school embarked on an appealing field trip to Zhaomiao yesterday.
为了缓解学生的学习压力,增强他们的身心健康,我们学校昨天组织了一次令人向往的到赵庙的远足活动。
· In order to raise students’ cultural awareness and enrich school life, an activity themed “An Introduction to Quanzhou Nanyin” was successfully held in our school last Saturday.
为了提高同学们的文化意识,丰富校园生活,上周六,我校成功举办了“泉州南音介绍”活动。
· With the purpose of relieving our high school students of pressure and enrich our school life,our school held/organized a running race on the school playground from 9 am to 12 am on October 23.
为了缓解我们高中生的压力,丰富我们的校园生活,我们学校于10月23日上午9点到12点举行了一场跑步比赛。
第二段:活动具体内容
1. 【相关短语】
2.常见活动
(1)an English drama performance 英语话剧表演
(2)a calligraphy exhibition 书法展览
(3)a seminar on career planning 职业规划研讨会
(4)a class meeting 班会
(5)a voluntary activity 志愿活动
(6)a poster design contest 海报设计比赛
(7)an environmental protection campaign 环保运动
(8)an indoor commending ceremony 室内表彰仪式
(9) filed trip研学
2.【相关句式】
句型:sb did sth, doing sth(现在分词短词做结果状语)
A.翻译:十六组充满自信且才华横溢的选手报名参加了此次的比赛, 成功展示了自己的歌唱才华和英语能力。
Sixteen groups of confident and talented competitors __________________ the contest, __________ successfully their singing talents as well as English skills. (signed up for; showing)
B翻译:参加了一个生物专家的讲座后,我们拥有了观察植物物种的基本技能。
We attended a lecture by the expert in biology, _____________________________ of observing plant species. (equipping us with basic skills)
1.出发的时间、地点、交通方式及参与人员(部分报道需要)
As scheduled,we gathered on the playground at 8am and travelled to the destination by bus.
按照计划,我们早上8点在操场集合,然后乘公共汽车前往目的地。
2.活动细节
The visit began with a brief introduction by the museum guide, who gave us a glimpse into the rich history of our city.
参观开始于博物馆导游的简短介绍,他让我们瞥见我们城市丰富的历史。
On arriving at the destination, we were warmly greeted by a knowledgeable guide who took us through the museum, providing insights into the historical artifacts and their significance.
当到达目的地后,一位知识渊博的导游热情地迎接了我们,他带我们参观了博物馆,深入了解了历史文物及其意义。
We explored various exhibits, ranging from ancient artifacts to sculptures, which showcased the cultural heritage of our ancestors.
我们探索了各种展品,从古代文物到雕塑,展示了我们祖先的文化遗产。
It was fascinating to see how our city has evolved over time.
看到我们的城市随着时间的推移而演变,真是令人着迷。
What followed was an instructive lecture by a renowned historian, covering a wide range of historical topics, from ancient civilizations to modern history.
随后是一位著名历史学家的指导性讲座,涵盖了从古代文明到现代历史的广泛历史主题。
But what impressed me most was a historical documentary related to the museum's collection, followed by a Q&A session with experts.
但最让我印象深刻的是一部与博物馆藏品相关的历史纪录片,随后是与专家的问答环节。
The highlight came when we were encouraged to engage ourselves in fun activities designed specifically for us, including treasure hunts, interactive games, and storytelling sessions centered around historical events.
亮点是,我们被鼓励参与专门为我们设计的有趣活动,包括寻宝、互动游戏和以历史事件为中心的讲故事会。
第三段:收获与感受
1.【相关短语】
①深受欢迎的(adj.) well-received
②某人高度评价… think/speak highly of...
③丰富某人的校园生活enrich one’s campus life
④拓宽某人的视野broaden one’s horizon/view
⑤缓解学习压力relieve stress from our study
⑥增进...与...的友谊promote friendship between ... and ...
⑦提高某人做某事的意识raise one’s awareness of doing sth
⑧给某人提供做某事的机会offer sb an opportunity to do sth
⑨使某人更深入了解… enable sb to gain more insights into sth
2.【相关句式】
句型:____(活动) was spoken highly of because not only did it do sth,but it also did sth.
翻译:人们高度评价这场激动人心的比赛,因为其不仅缓解了学生们紧张的学习压力,而且使学生更深入了解了英语文化。(The exciting contest was spoken highly of because not only did it relieve the students’ pressure, but it also enabled them to gain more insights into English culture.)
The activity turned out to be a rewarding experience, from which we benefited a lot.Not only did the trip broaden student’s horizons but it also significantly enhance their learning motivation.
这次活动最终证明是一次有收获的经历,我们从中获益良多。这次旅行不仅拓宽了学生的视野,还显著提高了他们的学习动力。
The activity greatly won our favor/ won wide popularity.By learning about the struggles and challenges faced by previous generations, we was inspired,determined to cherish our present life and strive hard to contribute to the progress of the city.
这次活动非常受欢迎,赢得了广泛的好评。通过了解前辈们所经历的奋斗和挑战,我们深受启发,决心珍惜现在的生活,努力为城市的发展做出贡献。
Exhausted as we were, we all felt the activity was rewarding. This activity turned out/ended up to be an enormous success receiving enthusiastic responses /feedbacks /with students thinking highly of it. Not only did we got close to the nature, but also we grasped how to tend to and preserve the plants.
尽管我们筋疲力尽,但大家都觉得这次活动很有收获。评价活动并指出具体意义:活动非常成功,受到学生热情响应/高度评价。我们不仅亲近了自然,并且明白了如何照顾保护植物。
What a meaningful experience the activity was! The activity not only offered us students an opportunity to get exposed to this local art, but also stimulated our passion for promoting Chinese traditional culture.
这次活动是多么有意义的经历啊!此次活动不仅让同学们有机会接触到当地的艺术,更激发了同学们弘扬中国传统文化的热情。
美文赏析
假定你是李华,你校昨天组织学生去召庙开展研学活动(field trip)。请你为校学生英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:
1.活动的具体内容;
2.发现与感受。
A Field Trip to Zhaomiao
In an effort to relieve students’ learning pressure and enhance their physical and mental health, our school embarked on an appealing field trip to Zhaomiao yesterday.
为了缓解学生的学习压力,增强身心健康,我们学校昨天组织了一次去召庙的研学游。
Students explored the magnificent ancient temples and delved deep into the abundant religious and cultural heritage. Additionally, students carefully learned the historical background, appreciated the architectural splendor and enjoyed the magical natural landscape of Zhaomiao.Exhausted but happy, students benefited a lot from the activity.
学生们探索了召庙宏伟的古代寺庙,深入挖掘了召庙丰富的宗教和文化遗产。此外,学生们仔细了解了召庙的历史背景,欣赏了召庙的建筑的辉煌,并享受了召庙神奇的自然景观。虽然疲惫但快乐,学生们从这项活动中受益匪浅。
Not only did the trip broaden student’s horizons but it also significantly enhance their learning motivation.
这次旅行不仅拓宽了学生的视野,而且极大地增强了他们的学习动力。
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