读后续写 野餐突变 洪流困厄后的希望之舟 讲义 山东省曹县第一中学2024-2025学年高三上学期开学英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 After a busy week , Lucy and her parents planned a mountain picnic to appreciate the beauty of nature and spend some quality time together. Little did they know, their trip was going to have some surprises. Upon reaching the mountain’s foot, they came across a house where Jack and his dad were securing a boat onto their truck. Lucy, curious about the best picnic spot, approached them for advice. Jack, familiar with the mountain, recommended a spot about a two-hour hike away. “It’s truly a sight to pay attention to,” he promised. They parked next to Jack’s truck, gathered their picnic supplies, and set foot on the scenic path. Thick trees lined one side of the road, while a gentle stream flowed on the other, guiding them to an impressive grassland adorned (装饰) with bright wildflowers. There, they enjoyed their tasty sandwiches, fresh fruits, and treats, all the while sharing delightful conversation. As they were wrapping up their meal and looking forward to a leisurely rest, dark clouds gathered overhead, signaling the approach of rain. In a hurry, they pitched the tent they had fortunately brought along. No sooner had they taken shelter than the heavens opened, and a downpour began, turning the world outside into a blurry, watery canvas (油画布). With no other option, they waited out the storm. The rain finally stopped, and it felt as if they had been waiting for a century. Lucy and her parents quickly packed up, eager to head back. Their relief didn’t last; the stream had grown into a huge, rushing flood, blocking their way. With no cell phone signal, they were cut off from the outside world. Adding to their dilemma, night was fast approaching, casting a shadow over their situation. Despite the challenges, they gathered close together, using the tent as a temporary shelter against the approaching darkness. As they sat there, they realized that this unexpected event had brought them even closer as a family, turning a simple picnic into a memorable adventure they would never forget. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Suddenly, they heard a truck noise coming from the other side of the river. ____________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Lucy and her parents got on Jack’s boat and crossed the river safely. _________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意：Lucy 一家计划去山中野餐，在山脚下向 Jack 父子打听最佳野餐地点后前往。野餐时遇暴雨，雨停后发现溪流涨水阻断归路，且无手机信号。他们被困后相互依偎，等待未知情况，将这次野餐变成了难忘冒险。 故事山分析： · 开场：Lucy 一家计划并前往山中野餐，在山脚与 Jack 父子交流。 · 上升：按推荐地点野餐时遇雨被困，雨停后又被洪水阻隔且与外界失联。 · 高潮：未确定，需续写揭示如何解决被困困境。 · 下降：无 · 结局：未完成，待续写。 五处伏笔及回应： · 伏笔：Jack 父子在固定船到卡车上。回应：续写中 Jack 开船来救援。 · 伏笔：野餐地点距山脚有两小时徒步路程。回应：可写救援后返程的艰辛或对该路程的感慨。 · 伏笔：溪流在道路一侧。回应：因溪流涨水导致被困，续写中船成为渡河工具。 · 伏笔：Lucy 一家将车停在 Jack 卡车旁。回应：获救后可提及取车等后续安排。 · 伏笔：Lucy 一家带了帐篷。回应：被困时帐篷成为临时避难所，续写中可描述收起帐篷等细节。 续写要点： · 第一段：听到卡车声后，发现是 Jack 开着卡车带着船前来救援，描写他们看到救援者的惊喜与激动，Jack 如何将船放入水中并靠近他们，过程中可能遇到一些小困难，如水流湍急难以控制船等。 · 第二段：Lucy 一家上船后安全渡河，表达对 Jack 的感激之情，上岸后可能会有一些后续行动，如一起返回停车处，回顾这次经历并感慨，最后总结这次经历对家庭关系和面对困难态度的影响。 情感线：从最初野餐时的轻松愉悦，到遇雨被困的焦虑担忧，听到卡车声时的惊喜与希望，渡河时的紧张，到安全后的感激与释然，最后对这次经历有更深的感悟与珍惜家庭情感。 故事线： 1. 突然听到河对岸卡车声。 2. 发现是 Jack 带着船来救援，他准备放船入水。 3. Jack 克服困难将船靠近 Lucy 一家。 4. Lucy 一家上船并渡河。 5. 上岸后向 Jack 道谢并一起行动。 6. 回顾经历并总结对家庭和自身的影响。 主旨升华句： 1. Adversity is the touchstone of family unity and human resilience.（逆境是家庭团结和人类韧性的试金石。） 2. In the face of unexpected trials, the bond of family and the kindness of strangers become our guiding lights.（面对意外的考验，家庭的纽带和陌生人的善意成为我们的指路明灯。） 3. Unforeseen hardships test not only our survival skills but also our capacity to find hope and gratitude.（意外的艰难困苦不仅考验我们的生存技能，也考验我们寻找希望和感恩的能力。） 4. The journey through difficulties reveals the true strength within us and the value of human connection.（穿越困难的旅程揭示了我们内心的真正力量和人际关系的价值。） 5. When nature throws challenges our way, it is love and support that help us navigate through the storm.（当大自然给我们带来挑战时，是爱和支持帮助我们穿越风暴。） 写作示范一： Suddenly, they heard a truck noise coming from the other side of the river. It was Jack! He had come to their rescue. Jack and his dad carefully unloaded the boat from the truck and launched it into the swollen stream. The current was strong, and the boat swayed precariously as they rowed towards Lucy's family. Lucy and her parents watched with bated breath, their hearts filled with hope and gratitude. With great effort, Jack managed to bring the boat close enough. Lucy and her parents got on Jack’s boat and crossed the river safely. They thanked Jack profusely, their voices choked with emotion. Jack just smiled and said it was the right thing to do. As they walked back to their parked cars, they talked about the day's events. They realized that this experience had made them more resilient and had strengthened their family ties. They knew they would always remember this adventure and the kindness of a stranger who had turned a potentially dangerous situation into a story of hope and survival. 写作示范二： Suddenly, they heard a truck noise coming from the other side of the river. To their great relief, it was Jack. He quickly drove the truck as close to the riverbank as possible and then started to lower the boat. The rushing water made it a difficult task, but Jack was determined. He tied a rope to a tree to steady the boat and then slowly made his way across. Lucy and her parents waved frantically, signaling their position. Lucy and her parents got on Jack’s boat and crossed the river safely. Once ashore, they hugged Jack tightly. They were extremely grateful for his timely help. Jack accompanied them back to their vehicles. Along the way, they reflected on the day. They understood that life was full of uncertainties, but with the support of family and the kindness of others, they could overcome any obstacle. This unexpected adventure had not only brought them closer but also taught them to cherish every moment and be prepared for the unexpected. 读后续写参考答案 Suddenly, they heard a truck noise coming from the other side of the river. It was Jack’s truck they saw as it turned the corner, and this made them feel less worried. Jack had noticed the darkness settling and Lucy’s car still parked near his house. Remembering the heavy rain, he worried and set out with his father in the truck to find them. As they neared the picnic area, Jack heard cries for help and spotted Lucy and her parents signaling for help. Quickly, Jack and his father launched their boat into the water to reach out to them. Lucy and her parents got on Jack’s boat and crossed the river safely. They then rode back to the mountain’s start in his truck. They were thankful to Jack and his dad for helping them in time and being kind. They said “thank you” with tears in their eyes. This special day taught them that being kind is powerful and they should keep helping others. They also learned always to be ready when going out into nature. This mountain picnic was a day they will remember forever. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$