内容正文:
如何写一篇人物简介
人物介绍是高中生基础写作任务中常见的一种话题类型。人物介绍的写作要点可分为三部分:
第一部分Beginning:引出人物---简要介绍基本信息如生平,教育,职业等
第二部分Body:介绍人物主要经历---挑较重要的事迹进行描写,贡献或成就等
第三部分Ending:人物评价及对作者的影响---人格,贡献,闪光点
注意:运用正确的时态。描写人物的外貌、性格、兴趣等常用 ,而描写人物的出生地、教育背景、经历、事迹时常用 。
1.引出人物:
When it comes to (当谈及到)..., The person I admire most is…,
Of all the outstanding people, I admire… the most.
There are many respectable people around us. The one who I admire most is....
(出生日期/出生地+职业/兴趣) : 出生于:_________________________
从小_____________________ 对……感兴趣;热爱某事:___________________________
在……方面有天赋:____________________ 从某大学毕业:______________________
When he was a boy, he ______________________(对...的热情)maths.
______________(出生于) Shanghai, on September 12th, 1980, Yao Ming is one of the best basketball players in China.
归纳总结句型
Born in +地点+时间,人物 graduated from….
Born into a ….family, 人物…
1. Born in Beijing in 1930, Yuan graduated from Southwest Agricultural College.
2. Born into a rich family, Song Qingling got a good education and went to study in USA.
3. Born into a musical family, he showed her talent for music when she was a little girl.
练一练:
袁隆平1930年9月7日出生于重庆,刻苦学习,酷爱农业科学。
①可以先分解成两个句子。
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② 确定定语从句部分
③ 确定关系词
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再思考一下,有没有其他更好的方式:
(1)(用分词做状语)
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(2)(用定语从句)
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2.介绍人物主要经历
1) 重要词汇 做…工作:_____________ 获得硕士/博士学位 ____________________
起关键性作用:_______________________ 坚定的决心:_________________________ 在…获得巨大的成功:________________ 投身于/致力于/把…奉献于___________________
使某人能够做某事:____________________ 下定决心做某事:_____________________
_____________________(从……毕业) Peking University in 1993, he___________(做……工作)
a teacher in Wuhan University.
2) 重要句型
1. After graduation from…., he/she spend most of his /her time in doing/on…
2. In order to ..., he made up his mind to do...
3. With strong will and great determination, he achieve the great success in...
4. Despite many difficulties, he/she managed to overcome them.
5. He/She put his/her heart into …and made great contributions to…
练一练:
1.毕业后他决定从事农业方面的研究工作。
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2. 他把他的一生奉献给了水稻研究。_______________________________________________________________________________
3.___________________________________ (有着很强的意志力和坚定的决心), Madame Curie______________________ (在……获得巨大的成功) discovering radium, which _____________________(使她能够赢得) the Nobel Prize.
3.人物评价及对作者的影响
为某人赢得好名声:_______________ 高度评价__________________________
做出巨大贡献:________________________ 被授予……:________________________
作为……而闻名:______________________ 被尊称为___________________________
树立好榜样:________________________ 值得我们崇拜和尊重:______________________
永远活在人们心中 ______________ of the people forever.
1. As a great...,he/she will be remembered by us forever.
2. It is his determination that inspires me to go on when I have difficulty in learning.
3. Having set a great example for us, he is an excellent person who fully deserves our admiration and respect.
练一练:
1. 她为科研献出了一切, 对国家作出了巨大贡献。
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2. 因此,他被尊称为“计算机科学之父”并闻名,因他对世界的巨大贡献被授予了许多奖项。___________________________________________________________________________
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3. 他给我们树立了好的榜样,他真的是一位出色的科学家,值得我们崇拜和尊重。_______________________________________________________________________________
The person I admire most
When it comes to the person I admire most, I think of Yuanlongping, who is regarded as the father of hybrid rice.
Born in1930, Yuan Longping had a passion for swimming at an early age. After graduation, he committed himself to agricultural research in Hunan, breeding the hybrid rice successfully in 1975. Not only did he make numerous contributions to solving the problem of world hunger, but also inspired more people to join him. In 2019, he was awarded to the Medal of the Republic for his outstanding contributions to the hybrid rice breeding. On 22 May 2021, Yuan passed away, and our whole country mourned the great loss of a brilliant scientist.
The reason why I admire him is that his dedication to work and to people sets me an good example, which truly inspires me to become a person like him in the future.
Practice:应用文写作
你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投
稿,内容包括:
1.人物简介及事迹;
2.意义或启示。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
A Historical Figure in China
Of all the brilliant historical figures in China, I admire Sima Qian most, who is best-known for his brilliant work Shi Ji, or Historical Records.
With a great passion for history when he was young, Sima Qian visited almost every corner of China to collect first-hand information about historical events and figures. In 109 BCE, Sima Qian began to write his historical work, Historical Records. Even though he was sent to prisonlater for political reasons, he never gave up and finished the grand project in the end.
Undoubtedly, Sima Qian's Historical Records is considered to be the greatest historical work in China, His passion for his career and his persistence in his mission will always motivate us to keep working hard for our dreams.
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