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专题11 书面表达(期末必背满分范文,20篇)
1.(23-24九年级上·江苏泰州·期末)幸福是什么?幸福是忙碌后的一杯清茶;幸福是迷茫时的一本好书;幸福是寒夜中的 一盏明灯!幸福是父母为你营造的温馨的家;幸福是老师望向你的赞许的目光;幸福是朋友送来的一份甜点;幸福是……请你以“My Happiness”为话题,结合亲身经历,谈谈你对幸福的看法。
要点:
1. 你对于幸福的定义;
2. 一件曾经发生过的令你感到幸福的事情;
3. 你的感受与感悟。
要求:
1. 条理清晰,语言流畅,用词准确,字迹工整;
2. 100 词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 文中不得出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
My Happiness
Happiness is important in our life.
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Happiness is important in our lives. In fact, happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it.
I will never forget one thing that happened to me. Once, I got a bad mark in a math test. I was sad and afraid to go home, because I was afraid of being blamed. But when I got back home late, my parents knew what had happened. To my surprise, they said to me in a kind voice, “It doesn’t matter, my dear. Remember we’ll always be with you whenever you need help. We believe you can be better next time. Never give up!” I was moved and made up my mind to work harder and harder. I feel happy.
Courage from my parents when I am frustrated will make me the happiest person in the world. Whenever I am in trouble, I can feel my parents’ love. In the future, I want to be a person who can be the pride of my parents.
2.(23-24九年级上·江苏泰州·期末)新的一年,新的希望,新的开始。学校英语广播站正在以“I look forward to ________ in 2024”为题向同学们征稿,请根据以下征稿内容,用英语向校英语广播站投稿,和大家分享你对新的一年的期待、思考以及如何付诸行动。
内容要点:
★你对新的一年的期待;
★你的理由;
★你的具体行动。
要求:
1.写作前请先补全标题;
2.包含所有要点,表达清晰,过渡合理,衔接自然,可适当拓展;
3.不得使用真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息;
4.词数100左右。
I look forward to ________________ in 2024
The new year has come. I’d like to share my expectation of the new year with everyone. I look forward to _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3.(23-24九年级上·江苏扬州·期末)近日,学校英文报刊开设了有关作业问题的专栏,你所在班级围绕作业问题进行了讨论,同学们表达了自己的观点,请根据以下提示,用英文写一篇简要的报告向专栏投稿,介绍班级讨论的结果,并表明自己的观点。
大部分同学
●帮助复习所学知识
●帮助学生学会独立解决问题
●完成作业是学生的职责,应合理安排好时间
……
少部分同学
●作业量大,耗时多,影响休息或不能做喜欢做的事情
●有些作业机械重复,不感兴趣
……
你自己
……
要求:
1. 内容必须包括以上所有要点,须按照要求适当发挥,补充细节。
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,字迹工整。
3. 不少于100词,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
4. 文中不得出现真实人名、地点或校名。
What Do We Think of Our Homework?
Recently, our class has talked about “homework”. We have different ideas about it.
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4.(23-24九年级上·江苏宿迁·期末)随着现代科技的发展,机器人已经来到我们身边,而且给我们的生活带来了便利。请根据下表所述内容,介绍家用机器人的基本情况,并就如何更好地让机器人为我们服务提出建议。
简介
家用机器人使用范围广,受到了人们的欢迎。
主要功能
1.你有更多的时间从事自己的爱好,可以帮助你做家务,如洗衣服,做饭,打扫卫生;
2.可以做像灭火或高空工作之类的危险工作;
3.在学校机器人可以帮助学生学习,在很多方面帮助老师。
存在问题
1.容易感染病毒,犯愚蠢的错误;有时会把家里搞得一团糟;
2.价格偏高,普通家庭消费不起。
你的建议
……(至少两点)
[要求]
1.表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2.必须包括表格中所有的相关信息,并进行适当发挥;
3.词数100左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数);
4.不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
[参考词汇] 家用机器人 home robots
With the development of modern science and technology, robots have entered our lives, which brings great convenience to us.
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5.(23-24九年级上·江苏南通·期末)新年伊始,学校英语社团将举行以“Look back on the past, Hope for the future”为主题的英语征文大赛。请根据下图提示,就本学期一次难忘的经历谈谈收获及感受,并写写新学期的希望和打算。
注意:
1. 词数在90词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
2. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Look back on the past, Hope for the future
This term is nearly over. As the saying goes “No pain, no gain”. During this term, I experienced a lot.
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6.(23-24九年级上·江苏泰州·期末)我们的家乡泰兴,迄今有一千多年历史,素有“教育之乡”、“银杏之乡”、“建筑之乡”、“提琴之乡”等美誉。为了探寻家乡文化,你校结合“泰兴元素”在上周举办了为期三天的“文化节”活动 (Cultural Festival)。请根据表格中的信息并结合自身经历,用英语写一篇关于“文化节”的报告。
注意:
1. 短文必须包括表格中的所有要点,并适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
3. 词数100左右;标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
When
What I did
What I learned
Feelings
Monday
visit Taixing Museum
…
the long history of the city
Tuesday
visit Huangqiao Ancient Town (黄桥古镇)
taste Huangqiao Sesame Cake (黄桥烧饼)
…
…
…
Wednesday
visit National Ancient Ginkgo Forest Park (国家古银杏森林公园)
…
Cultural Festival
Last week, our school organized an activity — “Cultural Festival”. I was happy that I learned a lot about our hometown.
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7.(23-24九年级上·江苏南通·期末)榜样如同标杆,指引正确的方向,激发责任和激情。青少年的成长需要榜样的引领。请根据下图提示,以“My role model”为题,谈谈你的榜样人物。
role model:榜样
注意事项:
1.词数90左右,不计入总词数;
2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
My role model
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8.(23-24九年级上·江苏扬州·期末)时光飞逝,本学期即将结束。在班会课上,王老师让同学们分享学习心得和人生感悟。假如你是李华,根据以下内容写一篇发言稿。
学习
本学期英语取得了很大进步
生活
看纪录片,学到了关于自然、历史的知识
喜欢读恐怖和神秘侦探故事
最喜欢蓝色,因为……
价值观
像父亲一样善良且乐于助人。他关心独居老人;……(举1个例)
职业规划
自身富有创造力,将来希望成为一名艺术家
要求:
1. 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2. 必须包括提示中的所有信息,并按要求适当发挥;
3. 词数:100词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Dear Mr. Wang and classmates,
I am Li Hua. Today, I’m glad to share my life and thoughts with you. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9.(23-24九年级上·江苏泰州·期末)在初三的英语学习中,我们认识了很多名人,例如:Spud Webb,Tan Dun,Audrey Hepburn,Jackie Chan,Neil Armstrong,Marie Curie,Yuan Longping等,他们都是我们学习的榜样。生活中也有许多优秀的家长、老师、同学等值得我们学习。某英文网站正在开展以“My Role Model (我的榜样)”为话题的征文活动,请你用英语写一篇短文投稿,内容涵盖以下要点:
1. Who is your role model?
2. What meaningful things he/she did influence you most?
3. What can you learn from him/her?
注意:
1. 词数100左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 内容涵盖要点,全文连贯通顺,可适当发挥;
3. 请勿提及真实校名、姓名等信息。
My Role Model
Everyone has a role model. My role model is _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
10.(23-24九年级上·江苏南京·期末)义务教育阶段“双减政策”实施后,周末培训机构不再提供服务,校内课后服务全面覆盖。为更好地帮学生自主安排课余时间,校网站张贴了一份问卷。假如你是张宁,请根据问卷内容,用英语给校长回一封电子邮件。
要求:1. 词数80左右(已给出的文章开头,不计入总词数)。
2. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
Dear headmaster,
Thanks for offering us such meaningful chances. I am glad to tell you something about my after-school activities.
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Yours faithfully,
Zhang Ning
11.(23-24九年级上·江苏盐城·期末)时代呼唤英雄,英雄光耀时代。其实,英雄就在我们身边,这些“英雄”可能是我们的亲人、朋友、老师……他们把英雄精神体现在平凡的岗位中,普通的生活里。请根据下列提示,以“A Hero in My Heart”为题写一篇100词左右的英语短文,向《英语广场》杂志投稿,分享你心中的英雄。
提示:
1. 你心中的英雄是谁;
2. 记述你印象深刻的一件事;
3. 对你的影响。
A Hero in My Heart
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12.(23-24九年级上·江苏苏州·期末)学校计划邀请同学们参加“Takeover Challenge”活动,即用一天的时间体验某种工作,例如画家、工程师、医生、运动员、音乐家、演员等。请以“The job I want to take over for a day”为题,根据以下提示,写一篇英语短文。
内容包括:
1. What job would you like to take over for a day?
2. What qualities does this job require? Choose a person in the picture as an example.
3. Why do you choose this job?
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.内容需涵盖所有要点,可适当发挥;
3.请勿提及真实校名、姓名等信息。
★take over: 接管
The job I want to take over for a day
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13.(23-24九年级上·江苏盐城·期末)某英文网站正在开展以“天道酬勤”为主题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿,讲述你通过勤奋,获得成功的经历,并谈谈你的感受。
提示问题:
What did you achieve by working hard?
What did you do to achieve it?
How did you feel about it?
注意事项:1.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;2.词数:100词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总次数);3.文章必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
Diligence is a must for us to realize our dreams.____________________________________________________
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14.(23-24九年级上·江苏常州·期末)掌握日常生活技能(如烹饪、种植、修理、救护方法……) 能增强青少年的自信心,形成独立自主能力,提高生活质量和健康水平。请结合下列提示,以“Little life skills are a big help”为题,用英语写一篇短文在课堂上分享。
提示:
1. What life skills do you have?
2. Which life skill do you think is the most useful, and why?
注意:
1. 内容须涵盖所有要点,并适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 词数:100词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Little life skills are a big help
Life skills are necessary for us teenagers. They help us live more healthily and happily. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
15.(23-24九年级上·江苏徐州·期末)艺术陶冶情操,艺术使生活丰富多彩。你校英文报正举办以My favourite art form为题的征文活动,请你写一篇短文投稿,介绍你最喜欢的艺术形式,内容包括:
1.你最喜欢的艺术形式;
2.分享一个与之相关的自己的故事;
3.你的感受。
注意:
1.词数:90左右;
2.短文需包括所给要点,可适当发挥;
3.短中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
提示词汇:绘画 painting 书法 calligraphy 戏剧 drama 剪纸 paper-cutting
舞蹈 dancing 唱歌singing 摄影 photography 乐器 musical instrument
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16.(23-24九年级上·江苏泰州·期末)请根据阳光中学校刊English Corner栏目的征稿内容,用英语写一篇短文,表达你的想法。
As we all know, art plays an important role in our life. So this week, we want to know your ideas about the topic “My favourite art form”.
·What is your favourite art form?
·What do you know about this art form?
·Do you have stories about it?
We are sure you have a lot to say. We are looking forward to hearing from you soon.
注意:(1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
(2)语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
(3)词数100左右。
My favourite art form
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17.(23-24九年级上·江苏宿迁·期末)风景在旅途中,成长在过程中,改变在不知不觉中。请以“I am not a child any more”为题,根据表格内容写一篇英语短文,详述“我”在学习、生活中的经历,说明“我”的成长变化。
过去
不仅常玩电脑游戏而且熬夜看侦探小说;因缺少睡眠,上课打瞌睡;
家庭作业多,但别无选择只能做;
帮助
老师们帮助解决很多麻烦,并不断地鼓励我;
现在
仔细计划每一天,在学业和爱好间努力寻求平衡;已把大部分精力投入到学习中,取得了很大进步;
空余时间多和父母、老师交流;积极锻炼;
将来
成为一个心理学家(psychologist),帮助学生们解决各种青少年问题。
注意:
1. 文中不得出现真实的校名、人名。
2. 内容完整、层次清楚、语法正确、上下文连贯。
3. 请不要逐句翻译,可以适当发挥。
4. 100词左右,文章标题、首句已给出,不计入总词数。
I am not a child any more
I am a Grade 9 student. I am not tall but a little fat. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
18.(23-24九年级上·江苏扬州·期末)一个榜样不仅具备优秀的能力和品质,更重要的是他的人格魅力和对社会贡献的付出。生命中总有一些值得我们学习的榜样。最近,江苏教育电视台将举办题为“The Great Person I Admire Most”的英语演讲比赛,请根据以下流程图写一篇英文演讲稿参加比赛。
要求:
(1)必须包括提示中的所有信息,并按要求适当发挥;
(2)词数 100 词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(3)不得使用真实姓名、校名等。
The Great Person I Admire Most
It is my great honour to stand here to make a speech.
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19.(23-24九年级上·江苏宿迁·期末)初三上学期即将结束,通过对九上和九下课本的学习,我们不仅学到了更多的语言知识和语言技能,也对艺术、文学、文化等有了更深刻的了解,请你根据以下要点提示,以“What I have learned in English class”为题写一篇英语作文。
艺术形式
音乐、戏剧等。最喜欢谭盾的音乐(请列举1—2点原因)
电视节目
动画片、纪录片等。(请结合自身情况谈一谈最喜欢的电视节目以及原因)
世界文化
北京是中国的首都。(请列举1点北京的优秀文化)
个人感受
学好英语很重要,它是我们认识世界的一个工具。(补充1点)
要求:
1. 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2. 必须包括表格中所有的相关信息,并适当发挥;
3. 词数:90词左右(征文的开头已给出,不计入总词数);
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
What I have learned in English class
I have really learned a lot from my English lessons. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
20.(23-24九年级上·江苏南京·期末)现在,越来越多的外国学生对中华传统文化很感兴趣。假如你是李华,请根据你的笔友David的邮件,用英语给他回一封邮件。
Dear Li Hua,
How are you going these days? Our school held a Chinese Culture Day last week. We felt the beauty of Chinese music, the charm of Chinese paintings and the wisdom of Chinese literature. That’s so amazing! I want to learn more. Could you introduce your favourite one to me? Please tell me your story about it. And what do you think of it?
I’m looking forward to your share.
Yours,
David
注意:
1.内容涵盖所有要点,全文连贯通顺。
2.词数不少于70词(已给出的邮件开头和结尾不计入总词数)。
3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
Dear David,
I’m glad to know you are interested in Chinese culture._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hope to hear from you soon.
All the best,
Li Hua
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专题11 书面表达(期末必背满分范文,20篇)
1.(23-24九年级上·江苏泰州·期末)幸福是什么?幸福是忙碌后的一杯清茶;幸福是迷茫时的一本好书;幸福是寒夜中的 一盏明灯!幸福是父母为你营造的温馨的家;幸福是老师望向你的赞许的目光;幸福是朋友送来的一份甜点;幸福是……请你以“My Happiness”为话题,结合亲身经历,谈谈你对幸福的看法。
要点:
1. 你对于幸福的定义;
2. 一件曾经发生过的令你感到幸福的事情;
3. 你的感受与感悟。
要求:
1. 条理清晰,语言流畅,用词准确,字迹工整;
2. 100 词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 文中不得出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
My Happiness
Happiness is important in our life.
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【答案】例文
My Happiness
Happiness is important in our lives. In fact, happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it.
I will never forget one thing that happened to me. Once, I got a bad mark in a math test. I was sad and afraid to go home, because I was afraid of being blamed. But when I got back home late, my parents knew what had happened. To my surprise, they said to me in a kind voice, “It doesn’t matter, my dear. Remember we’ll always be with you whenever you need help. We believe you can be better next time. Never give up!” I was moved and made up my mind to work harder and harder. I feel happy.
Courage from my parents when I am frustrated will make me the happiest person in the world. Whenever I am in trouble, I can feel my parents’ love. In the future, I want to be a person who can be the pride of my parents.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作方向已给出,写作时注意不要遗漏提示内容,注意表述清晰,逻辑连贯,做到无语法和单词拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步,总体说明如果你用心感受,幸福是无处不在的;
第二步,介绍曾经发生在自己身上的幸福的事情;
第三步,写出父母的爱对我成长的作用。
[亮点词汇]
①happen to sb.发生在某人身上
②be afraid to do sth.害怕做某事
③to one’s surprise令某人吃惊的
④give up放弃
⑤in trouble处于困难中
⑥make one’s mind to do sth.下定决心做某事
[高分句型]
① I will never forget one thing that happened to me. (that 引导的定语从句)
②I was moved and made up my mind to work harder and harder. (make one’s mind to do sth.下定决心做某事)
2.(23-24九年级上·江苏泰州·期末)新的一年,新的希望,新的开始。学校英语广播站正在以“I look forward to ________ in 2024”为题向同学们征稿,请根据以下征稿内容,用英语向校英语广播站投稿,和大家分享你对新的一年的期待、思考以及如何付诸行动。
内容要点:
★你对新的一年的期待;
★你的理由;
★你的具体行动。
要求:
1.写作前请先补全标题;
2.包含所有要点,表达清晰,过渡合理,衔接自然,可适当拓展;
3.不得使用真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息;
4.词数100左右。
I look forward to ________________ in 2024
The new year has come. I’d like to share my expectation of the new year with everyone. I look forward to _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
I look forward to making great progress in 2024
The new year has come. I’d like to share my expectation of the new year with everyone. I look forward to making great progress in my study in 2024.
Last year, I did not do very well in my study. I spent a lot of time playing computer games. My teacher and my parents were worried about my study. Therefore, I want to make progress in the new year.
In order to reach my goal, I have to develop a good habit. First, I will spend more time studying hard instead of playing games. Second, I want to do some more readings. Books are the best resources to get knowledge. So I will make good use of books to improve my knowledge. Finally, do exercise regularly. A healthy body is the basic of other things. I must take part in exercise to keep healthy and energetic.
I hope all my plans can be true in the new year.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文写作。
②时态:本文应主要使用一般过去时和一般将来时。
③提示:写作时应注意包含所有要点提示,可根据要求适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点题,介绍自己的新年愿望。
第二步,介绍理由。
第三步,写出具体行动并结尾。
[亮点词汇]
①make great progress取得巨大进步
②do well in擅长
③be worried about担忧
[高分句型]
①I must take part in exercise to keep healthy and energetic.(动词不定式作目的状语)
②I hope all my plans can be true in the new year.(宾语从句)
3.(23-24九年级上·江苏扬州·期末)近日,学校英文报刊开设了有关作业问题的专栏,你所在班级围绕作业问题进行了讨论,同学们表达了自己的观点,请根据以下提示,用英文写一篇简要的报告向专栏投稿,介绍班级讨论的结果,并表明自己的观点。
大部分同学
●帮助复习所学知识
●帮助学生学会独立解决问题
●完成作业是学生的职责,应合理安排好时间
……
少部分同学
●作业量大,耗时多,影响休息或不能做喜欢做的事情
●有些作业机械重复,不感兴趣
……
你自己
……
要求:
1. 内容必须包括以上所有要点,须按照要求适当发挥,补充细节。
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,字迹工整。
3. 不少于100词,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
4. 文中不得出现真实人名、地点或校名。
What Do We Think of Our Homework?
Recently, our class has talked about “homework”. We have different ideas about it.
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【答案】Possible Version:
Recently, our class has talked about “homework”. We have different ideas about it.
Most students have positive attitudes towards homework. They think homework can not only help them go over what they’ve learnt before but also help them deal with the problems alone. Also, they think it’s a student’s duty to finish the homework and they need to plan their time carefully. Of course, they all think homework can improve their study and help them get high marks in the exams.
However, a few students don’t think so. First, they think it takes so much time to do lots of homework that they have little time to rest or do anything they like. Second, they have to do the same boring exercises many times. As a result, they have no interest in homework anymore. And sometimes they can’t keep a balance between homework and their hobbies.
In my opinion, I think it’s important for us to do our homework on time. Homework can help us consolidate our knowledge. Make a good plan before doing homework so that we can have more time for our interests.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:方向已给出,写作时注意表述清晰、逻辑连贯,做到无语法和单词拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接开头,点明主题;
第二步,分别给出大部分同学和少部分同学的观点;
第三步,给出个人观点。
[亮点词汇]
①not only...but also...不仅……而且……
②deal with处理
③go over复习
④as a result结果
⑤keep a balance between在某事与某事间保持平衡
⑥on time准时
⑦consolidate巩固
[高分句型]
①They think homework can not only help them go over what they’ve learnt before but also help them deal with the problems alone.(句型:宾语从句,that省略)
②they think it’s a student’s duty to finish the homework and they need to plan their time carefully.(句型:宾语从句,that省略)
③they all think homework can improve their study and help them get high marks in the exams.(句型:宾语从句,that省略)
④they think it takes so much time to do lots of homework that they have little time to rest or do anything they like.(句型:宾语从句,that省略)
⑤it takes so much time to do lots of homework that they have little time to rest or do anything they like(句型:结果状语从句,so...that引导)
⑥Make a good plan before doing homework so that we can have more time for our interests(句型:目的状语从句,so that引导)
4.(23-24九年级上·江苏宿迁·期末)随着现代科技的发展,机器人已经来到我们身边,而且给我们的生活带来了便利。请根据下表所述内容,介绍家用机器人的基本情况,并就如何更好地让机器人为我们服务提出建议。
简介
家用机器人使用范围广,受到了人们的欢迎。
主要功能
1.你有更多的时间从事自己的爱好,可以帮助你做家务,如洗衣服,做饭,打扫卫生;
2.可以做像灭火或高空工作之类的危险工作;
3.在学校机器人可以帮助学生学习,在很多方面帮助老师。
存在问题
1.容易感染病毒,犯愚蠢的错误;有时会把家里搞得一团糟;
2.价格偏高,普通家庭消费不起。
你的建议
……(至少两点)
[要求]
1.表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2.必须包括表格中所有的相关信息,并进行适当发挥;
3.词数100左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数);
4.不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
[参考词汇] 家用机器人 home robots
With the development of modern science and technology, robots have entered our lives, which brings great convenience to us.
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【答案】例文
With the development of modern science and technology, robots have entered our lives, which brings great convenience to us.
Home robots are widely used and popular with people. Home robots have many functions. Firstly, they can be used to cook and clean rooms. You can have more time to take up your own hobby. Secondly, they can do dangerous jobs such as putting out fires or working at heights. Moreover, they can help students learn and help teachers in many ways.
On the other hand, the technology used in home robots is not developed well enough to solve all the safety problems. They are easy to get viruses, and make stupid mistakes. Even they will mess up the house. What’s more, the price is too high for common people to afford it.
Personally, robots should be used to improve people’s lives. Meanwhile, more advanced technology should be developed to ensure the safety and the price is expected to be brought down as well.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容介绍家用机器人的基本情况,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,引出介绍随着科技的发展,机器人已经来到了我们的身边;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容,从“主要功能和存在问题”两个方面重点介绍家用机器人的情况;
第三步,阐述自己的建议并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①with the development of 随着……的发展
②be used to 被用来
③take up your own hobby 从事自己的爱好
④On the other hand 另一方面
[高分句型]
①Meanwhile, more advanced technology should be developed to ensure the safety and the price is expected to be brought down as well.(含情态动词的被动语态)
5.(23-24九年级上·江苏南通·期末)新年伊始,学校英语社团将举行以“Look back on the past, Hope for the future”为主题的英语征文大赛。请根据下图提示,就本学期一次难忘的经历谈谈收获及感受,并写写新学期的希望和打算。
注意:
1. 词数在90词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
2. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Look back on the past, Hope for the future
This term is nearly over. As the saying goes “No pain, no gain”. During this term, I experienced a lot.
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【答案】例文
This term is nearly over. As the saying says “No pain, no gain”. During this term, I experienced a lot.
Last October, I quarreled with mother about the time I spent on hobbies. I thought hobbies helped me relax but she didn’t think so. I felt upset then. Luckily, there were many true friends who offered me valuable advice. Now I can get along better with Mother and have a deeper understanding of her love.
Next term, we’ll face an important exam. I hope to be successful. So I plan to use my time more wisely. I decide to list my goals and try to make them come true.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”,描述过去的经历用“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容,适当增加细节,并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,描述过去的经历及感受;
第二步,描绘新学期的希望和打算。
[亮点词汇]
①quarrel吵架
②upset心烦
③valuable advice有价值的建议
④wisely明智地
[高分句型]
①Last October, I quarreled with mother about the time I spent on hobbies. (定语从句)
②I thought hobbies helped me relax but she didn’t think so. (宾语从句)
6.(23-24九年级上·江苏泰州·期末)我们的家乡泰兴,迄今有一千多年历史,素有“教育之乡”、“银杏之乡”、“建筑之乡”、“提琴之乡”等美誉。为了探寻家乡文化,你校结合“泰兴元素”在上周举办了为期三天的“文化节”活动 (Cultural Festival)。请根据表格中的信息并结合自身经历,用英语写一篇关于“文化节”的报告。
注意:
1. 短文必须包括表格中的所有要点,并适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
3. 词数100左右;标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
When
What I did
What I learned
Feelings
Monday
visit Taixing Museum
…
the long history of the city
Tuesday
visit Huangqiao Ancient Town (黄桥古镇)
taste Huangqiao Sesame Cake (黄桥烧饼)
…
…
…
Wednesday
visit National Ancient Ginkgo Forest Park (国家古银杏森林公园)
…
Cultural Festival
Last week, our school organized an activity — “Cultural Festival”. I was happy that I learned a lot about our hometown.
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【答案】例文
Last week, our school organized an activity — “Cultural Festival”. I was happy that I learned a lot about our hometown.
Last Monday, I visited Taixing Museum with my classmates and enjoyed the beauty of traditional works of art. Everyone was excited to learn about the long history of Taixing. We all enjoyed ourselves.
The next day, I went to Huangqiao Ancient Town, a beautiful town in the east of Taixing. It was exciting that I tasted Huangqiao Sesame Cake. I also saw many old houses there. Now Huangqiao is well-known around the country and attracts a lot of tourists every year.
Taixing is known as the home of Ginkgo, so I visited National Ancient Ginkgo Forest Park on Wednesday. It was wonderful to see lots of ancient ginkgo trees there. I was very happy to learn that the ginkgo products in our hometown are very popular.
These experiences have not only helped me have a better understanding of our city, but also left a lasting influence on my heart and mind.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”,描述经历用“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏表格中信息提示的内容,适当增加细节,并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,分段介绍周一至周三的行程以及学到的东西;
第二步,书写结语,表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①traditional works of art传统艺术作品
②excited兴奋的
③attract吸引
④lasting持久的
[高分句型]
①I was very happy to learn that the ginkgo products in our hometown are very popular. (宾语从句)
②These experiences have not only helped me have a better understanding of our city, but also left a lasting influence on my heart and mind. (并列句)
7.(23-24九年级上·江苏南通·期末)榜样如同标杆,指引正确的方向,激发责任和激情。青少年的成长需要榜样的引领。请根据下图提示,以“My role model”为题,谈谈你的榜样人物。
role model:榜样
注意事项:
1.词数90左右,不计入总词数;
2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
My role model
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【答案】One possible version:
My role model
My role model is my Maths teacher Miss Li. She is tall and slim and she always has a smile on her face.
Miss Li teaches us Maths. She is so smart that she can work out difficult problems quickly. As a result, all of us admire her very much. Miss Li is also patient. Whenever we have questions, she is ready to explain them to us with great patience. She tries different methods to make it easier for us to understand. With her help, I have made great progress in Maths. To me, Miss Li is more than a teacher. She is a good friend who cares about us all the time. She often listens to my problems and offers me valuable suggestions. I am really lucky to have a teacher like her.
Miss Li has influenced me a lot. I would like to be a teacher like her when I grow up. I have decided to work hard and become a teacher with both much knowledge and kindness.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,介绍自己心目中的榜样,不能遗漏信息,以第一人称和第三人称进行叙述。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山,介绍自己心目中的榜样是李老师;
第二步,具体阐述为什么她是自己的榜样;
第三步,最后书写结尾,自己长大后也想成为像李老师一样的老师。
[亮点词汇]
①work out解出
②As a result结果
③is ready to准备
④With her help在她的帮助下
⑤made great progress取得巨大进步
⑥grow up长大
⑦both…and…两者都
⑧influence影响
[高分句型]
①She is so smart that she can work out difficult problems quickly.(so…that…引导结果状语从句)
②I would like to be a teacher like her when I grow up.(when引导时间状语从句)
③She is a good friend who cares about us all the time.(who引导限制性定语从句)
8.(23-24九年级上·江苏扬州·期末)时光飞逝,本学期即将结束。在班会课上,王老师让同学们分享学习心得和人生感悟。假如你是李华,根据以下内容写一篇发言稿。
学习
本学期英语取得了很大进步
生活
看纪录片,学到了关于自然、历史的知识
喜欢读恐怖和神秘侦探故事
最喜欢蓝色,因为……
价值观
像父亲一样善良且乐于助人。他关心独居老人;……(举1个例)
职业规划
自身富有创造力,将来希望成为一名艺术家
要求:
1. 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2. 必须包括提示中的所有信息,并按要求适当发挥;
3. 词数:100词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Dear Mr. Wang and classmates,
I am Li Hua. Today, I’m glad to share my life and thoughts with you. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
Dear Mr. Wang and classmates,
I am Li Hua. Today, I’m glad to share my life and thoughts with you.
This term, I have made great progress in English. When I am free, I like watching documentaries and I have learnt a lot about nature and history from them. I also enjoy reading detective stories that are full of horror and mysteries. My favourite colour is blue, as it is a calm colour and it brings peace to our mind and body.
I want to be a kind and helpful person like my father. He cares for the old who live alone. Whenever he has some money left, he gives it to someone in need.
I am creative, so I want to be an artist in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容,可适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,分享学习、生活、价值观以及职业规划的心得体会;
第二步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①made great progress取得很大进步
②are full of充满
③cares for关心
[高分句型]
①I also enjoy reading detective stories that are full of horror and mysteries.(that引导的限制性定语从句)
②When I am free, I like watching documentaries and I have learnt a lot about nature and history from them. (when引导的时间状语从句)
9.(23-24九年级上·江苏泰州·期末)在初三的英语学习中,我们认识了很多名人,例如:Spud Webb,Tan Dun,Audrey Hepburn,Jackie Chan,Neil Armstrong,Marie Curie,Yuan Longping等,他们都是我们学习的榜样。生活中也有许多优秀的家长、老师、同学等值得我们学习。某英文网站正在开展以“My Role Model (我的榜样)”为话题的征文活动,请你用英语写一篇短文投稿,内容涵盖以下要点:
1. Who is your role model?
2. What meaningful things he/she did influence you most?
3. What can you learn from him/her?
注意:
1. 词数100左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 内容涵盖要点,全文连贯通顺,可适当发挥;
3. 请勿提及真实校名、姓名等信息。
My Role Model
Everyone has a role model. My role model is _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
My Role Model
Everyone has a role model. My role model is Spud Webb.
When Spud Webb was young, he was small, but he had a big dream. He wanted to play in the NBA. He was refused to join the school basketball team because of his height, but he never gave up. He kept on practising playing basketball hard. His talent for basketball was fully developed through his hard work. At last, his dream came true. His story of becoming an NBA player has influenced me most.
When I meet difficulties during my study, I always think of my role model Spud Webb. I can get courage from him to go ahead. I will work hard and never lose heart like him to fight for my dream. Spud Webb is always my hero!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据提示内容介绍自己的榜样,要求要点齐全,语句连贯,可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,直接点题,点明谁是自己的榜样;
第二步,介绍榜样做的哪些有意义的事情对自己影响最大;
第三步,表达自己从榜样身上学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①kept on doing sth继续做某事
②give up放弃
③think of想起
④go ahead前进
[高分句型]
①When Spud Webb was young, he was small, but he had a big dream. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②He was refused to join the school basketball team because of his height, but he never gave up. (but连接的并列句)
10.(23-24九年级上·江苏南京·期末)义务教育阶段“双减政策”实施后,周末培训机构不再提供服务,校内课后服务全面覆盖。为更好地帮学生自主安排课余时间,校网站张贴了一份问卷。假如你是张宁,请根据问卷内容,用英语给校长回一封电子邮件。
要求:1. 词数80左右(已给出的文章开头,不计入总词数)。
2. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
Dear headmaster,
Thanks for offering us such meaningful chances. I am glad to tell you something about my after-school activities.
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Yours faithfully,
Zhang Ning
【答案】例文
Dear headmaster,
Thanks for offering us such meaningful chances. I am glad to tell you something about my after-school activities.
Because of taking part in different after-school activities, my school life is much more colourful and meaningful than before. In my spare time, I like listening to different types of music like pop music, jazz or classical music. While listening, I feel relaxed and calm, especially after a day’s of hard work. I also like painting if I have a lot of time. Every time I paint, I lose myself in the world of colours.
However, it will be more pleasant if our school can organize more activities, such as going hiking, holding art festivals, and reading and speech contest. With more different choices, we students will be more active and improve ourselves better.
I hope you think my advice is worth taking.
Yours faithfully,
Zhang Ning
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主;
③提示:根据问卷内容及要求完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图;
第二步,校内课后服务带自己带来的变化,自己最喜欢的课后活动及原因;
第三步,给出建议;
第四步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
in one’s spare time在某人的业余时间
lose oneself in迷失在
such as例如
[高分句型]
While listening, I feel relaxed and calm, especially after a day’s of hard work.(while引导的时间状语从句)
I also like painting if I have a lot of time.(if引导条件状语从句)
11.(23-24九年级上·江苏盐城·期末)时代呼唤英雄,英雄光耀时代。其实,英雄就在我们身边,这些“英雄”可能是我们的亲人、朋友、老师……他们把英雄精神体现在平凡的岗位中,普通的生活里。请根据下列提示,以“A Hero in My Heart”为题写一篇100词左右的英语短文,向《英语广场》杂志投稿,分享你心中的英雄。
提示:
1. 你心中的英雄是谁;
2. 记述你印象深刻的一件事;
3. 对你的影响。
A Hero in My Heart
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【答案】范文:
A Hero in My Heart
Most people see a hero as someone they look up to. If you ask me who the hero is in my heart, my answer would be Li Lianjie. Li Lianjie is one of the most famous film stars in China. He played a role in a film when he was a child. Through his hard work he has made a lot of films. He is so brave and careful that he always tries his best to make the action perfect. As a Chinese he promises to make every foreigner know Chinese kung fu culture well. He gave away much money to help the children in poor villages.
From Li Lianjie I can learn a lot , such as the resolution to succeed and the thoughts of helping others.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明自己心目中的英雄;
第二步,具体阐述英雄事迹;
第三步,书写结语,表达对自己产生的影响。
[亮点词汇]
①look up to敬仰
②try one’s best尽最大努力
③gave away赠送
[高分句型]
①If you ask me who the hero is in my heart, my answer would be Li Lianjie. (if引导的条件状语从句)
②He is so brave and careful that he always tries his best to make the action perfect. (so...that...句型)
12.(23-24九年级上·江苏苏州·期末)学校计划邀请同学们参加“Takeover Challenge”活动,即用一天的时间体验某种工作,例如画家、工程师、医生、运动员、音乐家、演员等。请以“The job I want to take over for a day”为题,根据以下提示,写一篇英语短文。
内容包括:
1. What job would you like to take over for a day?
2. What qualities does this job require? Choose a person in the picture as an example.
3. Why do you choose this job?
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.内容需涵盖所有要点,可适当发挥;
3.请勿提及真实校名、姓名等信息。
★take over: 接管
The job I want to take over for a day
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【答案】范文:
The job I want to take over for a day
Among so many jobs, I want to work as a youth worker for a day.
To be a youth worker requires attractive qualities, such as being helpful and patient. Take Mr. Friend as an example. When students are in trouble, he’s willing to listen patiently and try to help them out. More importantly, he always puts himself in others’ shoes.
Teenagers of my age may have different problems. I think being a youth worker is possibly a good way to help others deal with worries as well as stress. I’m looking forward to having a meaningful experience and giving a helping hand.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文。
②时态:本文以“一般现在时”为主。
③提示:题目要求根据所给提示介绍自己想花一天时间去体验的某项工作,包括这项工作需要什么素质,并以图片所给的一个人为例进行说明,以及你为什么要选这项工作等内容,写作时注意适当增加细节,不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山,直接点明自己要选择的工作。
第二步,根据所给要点,介绍这项工作需要的素质,并以图中人物为例进行说明。
第三步,最后说明自己选这项工作的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①such as比如
②take...as an example以……为例
③deal with处理,应对
[高分句型]
①To be a youth worker requires attractive qualities, such as being helpful and patient.(动词不定式作主语)
②When students are in trouble, he’s willing to listen patiently and try to help them out.(when引导的时间状语从句)
13.(23-24九年级上·江苏盐城·期末)某英文网站正在开展以“天道酬勤”为主题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿,讲述你通过勤奋,获得成功的经历,并谈谈你的感受。
提示问题:
What did you achieve by working hard?
What did you do to achieve it?
How did you feel about it?
注意事项:1.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;2.词数:100词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总次数);3.文章必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
Diligence is a must for us to realize our dreams.____________________________________________________
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【答案】例文
Diligence is a must for us to realize our dreams. I never realized it until I tried every effort to win the English speech competition last year.
It was quite a big challenge for me because I was not confident about my oral English and I was too shy to speak in public. To give a better performance, I made full use of my spare time to prepare for it. I recorded my lines and asked my foreign teacher to correct my pronunciation. Then I kept practising day and night. Besides, I seized every chance to speak in front of my family or friends. The more I practised, the more confident I became. In the end, I won the competition and got a prize. It was so great that all my efforts paid off. I felt so proud of myself.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文。
②时态:本文应使用“一般过去时”为主。
③提示:写作要点应注意题干给出的“通过勤奋,获得成功的经历”并适当补充,使文章内容充实,行文应使用第一人称。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点题,说明勤奋的重要性。
第二步,具体介绍自己的一次通过勤奋获得成功的经历。
第三步,收尾,说明这次经历带给自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①in public当众
②prepare for准备
[高分句型]
①It was quite a big challenge for me because I was not confident about my oral English and I was too shy to speak in public.(because引导的原因状语从句)
②To give a better performance, I made full use of my spare time to prepare for it.(不定式作目的状语)
14.(23-24九年级上·江苏常州·期末)掌握日常生活技能(如烹饪、种植、修理、救护方法……) 能增强青少年的自信心,形成独立自主能力,提高生活质量和健康水平。请结合下列提示,以“Little life skills are a big help”为题,用英语写一篇短文在课堂上分享。
提示:
1. What life skills do you have?
2. Which life skill do you think is the most useful, and why?
注意:
1. 内容须涵盖所有要点,并适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 词数:100词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Little life skills are a big help
Life skills are necessary for us teenagers. They help us live more healthily and happily. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Little life skills are a big help
Life skills are necessary for us teenagers. They help us live more healthily and happily.
I have many life skills such as cooking, washing clothes, making traveling plans and so on. As for me, cooking is the most useful one. Now, more and more young people like fast food, but I don’t think it’s a healthy lifestyle. I learned how to cook food by myself when I was in Grade Three at primary school. Our teacher taught us how to make tomatoes with eggs. I also learned cooking some other dishes from my mom. So when my parents are not at home, I often cook for myself. It is not only delicious but also meaningful. It always makes me feel proud of myself.
Life skills are a big help, and I will try to learn more to make my life more colourful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:方向已给出,写作时注意表述清晰、逻辑连贯,做到无语法和单词拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接开头,点明主题;
第二步,列出生活技能并挑一个细说;
第三步,总结从中获得的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①and so on等等
②not only...but also...不仅而且
③be proud of为……感到骄傲
[高分句型]
①I learned how to cook food by myself when I was in Grade Three at primary school.(句型:状语从句,when引导时间状语从句)
②So when my parents are not at home, I often cook for myself.(句型:状语从句,when引导时间状语从句)
15.(23-24九年级上·江苏徐州·期末)艺术陶冶情操,艺术使生活丰富多彩。你校英文报正举办以My favourite art form为题的征文活动,请你写一篇短文投稿,介绍你最喜欢的艺术形式,内容包括:
1.你最喜欢的艺术形式;
2.分享一个与之相关的自己的故事;
3.你的感受。
注意:
1.词数:90左右;
2.短文需包括所给要点,可适当发挥;
3.短中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
提示词汇:绘画 painting 书法 calligraphy 戏剧 drama 剪纸 paper-cutting
舞蹈 dancing 唱歌singing 摄影 photography 乐器 musical instrument
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【答案】例文
My favourite art form
Art is an important part of my life. My favourite art is making kites.
As a small kid, I had a big dream of flying. One day when I was five, my grandfather made me a bird kite. That made me really excited. When I held a line to let the bird kite fly into the sky, I had a feeling that my dream of flying came true. Since then, I have made it a rule to make a kite every spring. Now my study is full of colourful kites.
As I’m growing older, like a kite, I will leave my parents. But I know the line is always in my parents’ hand. They will watch me as I fly higher and farther.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己最喜欢的艺术形式;
第二步,分享一个与之相关的自己的故事;
第三步,表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①have a dream of doing sth梦想做某事
②come true实现
③be full of充满
[高分句型]
①One day when I was five, my grandfather made me a bird kite.(when引导的时间状语从句)
② They will watch me as I fly higher and farther.(as引导时间状语从句)
16.(23-24九年级上·江苏泰州·期末)请根据阳光中学校刊English Corner栏目的征稿内容,用英语写一篇短文,表达你的想法。
As we all know, art plays an important role in our life. So this week, we want to know your ideas about the topic “My favourite art form”.
·What is your favourite art form?
·What do you know about this art form?
·Do you have stories about it?
We are sure you have a lot to say. We are looking forward to hearing from you soon.
注意:(1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
(2)语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
(3)词数100左右。
My favourite art form
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【答案】例文
My favourite art form
Art plays an important part of our life. Without it, our life will be dull. Of all the art forms, I like singing best.
Many of my friends praise me when they hear me sing. However, I once didn’t like singing because I always felt nervous when facing a group of people. Then something happened when I was ten years old.
That was my tenth birthday. My friends advised me to sing a song for them at the party. I refused at once. But my friends didn’t give up and they encouraged me. I finally agreed. After hearing it, they said that I had a real gift for singing. It made me feel more confident in myself. Since then, I have been crazy about singing, especially pop songs. I enjoy myself in the world of music every time I sing.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要求已给出,学生不要遗漏题目中的要点,适当添加细节,写作时保持主谓一致,注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步,总起引出话题;
第二步,介绍最喜欢的艺术形式;
第三步,谈谈你的相关故事。
[亮点词汇]
①a group of 一群
②advise sb to do sth建议某人做某事
③at once马上
④be crazy about 热衷于
[高分句型]
①Many of my friends praise me when they hear me sing.(时间状语从句)
②However, I once didn’t like singing because I always felt nervous when facing a group of people.(原因状语从句)
③After hearing it, they said that I had a real gift for singing.(宾语从句)
17.(23-24九年级上·江苏宿迁·期末)风景在旅途中,成长在过程中,改变在不知不觉中。请以“I am not a child any more”为题,根据表格内容写一篇英语短文,详述“我”在学习、生活中的经历,说明“我”的成长变化。
过去
不仅常玩电脑游戏而且熬夜看侦探小说;因缺少睡眠,上课打瞌睡;
家庭作业多,但别无选择只能做;
帮助
老师们帮助解决很多麻烦,并不断地鼓励我;
现在
仔细计划每一天,在学业和爱好间努力寻求平衡;已把大部分精力投入到学习中,取得了很大进步;
空余时间多和父母、老师交流;积极锻炼;
将来
成为一个心理学家(psychologist),帮助学生们解决各种青少年问题。
注意:
1. 文中不得出现真实的校名、人名。
2. 内容完整、层次清楚、语法正确、上下文连贯。
3. 请不要逐句翻译,可以适当发挥。
4. 100词左右,文章标题、首句已给出,不计入总词数。
I am not a child any more
I am a Grade 9 student. I am not tall but a little fat. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
I am not a child any more
I am a Grade 9 student. I am not tall but a little fat. In the past, I not only played computer games but also stayed up to read detective story books. I often felt sleepy in class because of lack of sleep. I had too much homework,but I had no choice but to do it. So I always felt stressed. My teachers helped me solve many problems and kept encouraging to cheer me up.
Now, I plan my day carefully and try my best to achieve a balance between my schoolwork and myhobbies. I have devoted most of time to studying and have made great progress. In my free time, I talk with my parents and teachers. I also take an active part in activities to lose weight.
I hope to become a psychologist to help more students solve all kinds of teenage problems when I grow up.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文;
②时态:时态为一般现在时,一般过去时和一般将来时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏提示中的要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接开头,介绍自己过去的基本情况。
第二步,介绍自己现在的情况;
第三步,介绍自己将来做什么。
[亮点词汇]
①cheer me up 使我振作
②In free time 在空余时间
③lose weight 减肥
[高分句型]
I not only played computer games but also stayed up to read detective story books.(not only…but also…“不仅……而且……”)
I often felt sleepy in class because of lack of sleep.(because of “因为”后接名词,代词,动名词等。)
18.(23-24九年级上·江苏扬州·期末)一个榜样不仅具备优秀的能力和品质,更重要的是他的人格魅力和对社会贡献的付出。生命中总有一些值得我们学习的榜样。最近,江苏教育电视台将举办题为“The Great Person I Admire Most”的英语演讲比赛,请根据以下流程图写一篇英文演讲稿参加比赛。
要求:
(1)必须包括提示中的所有信息,并按要求适当发挥;
(2)词数 100 词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(3)不得使用真实姓名、校名等。
The Great Person I Admire Most
It is my great honour to stand here to make a speech.
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【答案】
例文:
The Great Person I Admire Most
It is my great honour to stand here to make a speech.
Standing here, many great figures come into my mind, scientists, politicians, history makers and so on. Among them, I admire Yuan Longping most, an agricultural pioneer of China. It is known that there are many people suffering from hunger in many countries. To help more people to get enough food, Yuan Longping devoted himself to improving the output of hybrid rice. Thanks to his research, the output has been doubled. More importantly, Yuan Longping was willing to share his achievement with others, which helped the whole world to solve the hunger problem.
As for me, Yuan Longping is the greatest person in the world. It is his devotion that makes him successful and his devotion has inspired me a lot. Actually, I have some difficulty in learning English. However, where there is devotion, there is a way. I really believe that my devotion can make me expert in English.
Thank you for your listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为演讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要注意不要遗漏流程图中的内容,并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“我最尊敬的人是袁隆平”来引出下文中对袁隆平的介绍;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“介绍、经历和贡献”三方面入手,重点介绍袁隆平;
第三步,书写结语。袁隆平的事迹对我有很大的影响。
[亮点词汇]
①and so on 等等
②suffer from 遭受
③devote oneself into 致力于
④thanks to 由于,归功于
⑤as for 至于
⑥have difficulty in doing sth 做某事有困难
[高分句型]
①More importantly, Yuan Longping was willing to share his achievement with others, which helped the whole world to solve the hunger problem.(which引导的定语从句)
②It is his devotion that makes him successful and his devotion has inspired me a lot.(强调句)
③I really believe that my devotion can make me expert in English.(that引导的宾语从句)
19.(23-24九年级上·江苏宿迁·期末)初三上学期即将结束,通过对九上和九下课本的学习,我们不仅学到了更多的语言知识和语言技能,也对艺术、文学、文化等有了更深刻的了解,请你根据以下要点提示,以“What I have learned in English class”为题写一篇英语作文。
艺术形式
音乐、戏剧等。最喜欢谭盾的音乐(请列举1—2点原因)
电视节目
动画片、纪录片等。(请结合自身情况谈一谈最喜欢的电视节目以及原因)
世界文化
北京是中国的首都。(请列举1点北京的优秀文化)
个人感受
学好英语很重要,它是我们认识世界的一个工具。(补充1点)
要求:
1. 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2. 必须包括表格中所有的相关信息,并适当发挥;
3. 词数:90词左右(征文的开头已给出,不计入总词数);
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
What I have learned in English class
I have really learned a lot from my English lessons. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
What I have learned in English class
I have really learned a lot from my English lessons. First, I have learned much about different art forms like dramas, films, paintings, music and so on. Of all the music, I like Tan Dun’s music best. Although Dan usually makes music with common objects like paper and water, his music can create amazing pictures in my mind.
Then, I have also learned a lot about TV programmes. There are many kinds of them, such as cartoons, documentaries, chat shows, game shows and so on. Documentaries are my favourite, from which I can learn a lot about nature, history and real-life events.
Last but not least, I know much about world culture. We all know Beijing is the capital of China. It also has the largest city square in the world. Every morning, lots of tourists gather there to watch the raising of the national flag.
It’s really important to learn English well. It’s not only a tool to understand the outside world but also a key to open up a new world.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:材料已给出,写作时注意表述清晰,做到无语法和单词拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步,详细描述在英语课堂中学到的艺术形式,最爱的艺术形式,并给出原因;
第二步,详细描述学到的电视节目,最爱的节目,并给出原因;
第三步,详细描述学到的世界文化,谈一谈北京的优秀文化;
第四步,谈一谈学好英语的重要性。
[亮点词汇]
①of在……之中
②many kinds of各种各样
③last but not least最后但同样重要的一点
④not only...but also...不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①Although Dan usually makes music with common objects like paper and water, his music can create amazing pictures in my mind.(状语从句:由although引导让步状语从句)
②Documentaries are my favourite, from which I can learn a lot about nature, history and real-life events.(定语从句:由which引导非限定性定语从句)
③Every morning, lots of tourists gather there to watch the raising of the national flag.(不定式表目的)
20.(23-24九年级上·江苏南京·期末)现在,越来越多的外国学生对中华传统文化很感兴趣。假如你是李华,请根据你的笔友David的邮件,用英语给他回一封邮件。
Dear Li Hua,
How are you going these days? Our school held a Chinese Culture Day last week. We felt the beauty of Chinese music, the charm of Chinese paintings and the wisdom of Chinese literature. That’s so amazing! I want to learn more. Could you introduce your favourite one to me? Please tell me your story about it. And what do you think of it?
I’m looking forward to your share.
Yours,
David
注意:
1.内容涵盖所有要点,全文连贯通顺。
2.词数不少于70词(已给出的邮件开头和结尾不计入总词数)。
3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
Dear David,
I’m glad to know you are interested in Chinese culture._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hope to hear from you soon.
All the best,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear David,
I’m glad to know you are interested in Chinese culture. I recommend Journey to the West first to you. It tells the story of Tang Xuanzang and his three disciples who go to India for Buddhist scriptures. During their journey, they bravely face a series of dangers and finally conquer those devils and monsters. This book is not only interesting in content and vivid in language, but also conveys a spirit of courage. In our daily life, we are bound to meet with all kinds of challenges. We should be brave and never give up. The book is well worth reading. I hope you will like it.
Hope to hear from you soon.
All the best,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为一封邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据来信中的内容介绍中国的文学,可适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题,推荐我国的四大名著之——《西游记》;
第二步,详细介绍这本书的内容;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②face a series of dangers面对一系列危险
③not only...but also...不但……而且……
④be bound to一定
⑤be worth doing值得做
[高分句型]
①It tells the story of Tang Xuanzang and his three disciples who go to India for Buddhist scriptures.(定语从句)
②I hope you will like it.(宾语从句)
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