2.主题范畴一 人与自我(教师用书)-【加速度中考】2025年青海中考备考加速度英语写作突破练

主题范畴一 人与自我 话题1 学校生活 孕一阶素材积累 ●开头句 It's very important for us. 1.[冀教七上U1P6]Hello,Jack.Welcome to our 结尾句 school.Let me show you around. 1.[冀教八上U8P124]I work hard in school and I 2.[人教九全U14PIO8]My time in junior high hope to go to college someday. school has been enjoyable. 2.In short,we've learned much about the world 3.[冀教七下U4P58]I am learning a lot of through our wonderful school activities. interesting things at school. ●谚语 。中间句 1.[冀教七下U8PI22]Education is not preparation 1.[外研七上M5P28]I go to school on weekdays, for life;education is life itself..教育不是为生 but not on Saturday and Sunday. 活做准备：教育就是生活本身」 2.[冀教八上U2P20]Ms.Liu gives us lots of 2.No road is long with good company.路上有良 interesting projects in English class 伴，不觉路途远 3.[冀教八上U2P31]Of all the subjects,I like3.A candle lights others and consumes itself.蜡 English best because it's so useful and interesting. 烛照亮别人却牺牲了自己。 二阶典例探究 [2024青海]假如你是某外国语学校的一名学生，你们班正在选举班级之星，请根据所给的两 位候选人信息，结合自己的看法，任选一位写一篇推荐稿 Candidates(候选人) Aspects(方面) study hard and have good grades Li Wei exercise every day and be good at sports ☆be confident and optimistic(乐观的) be always willing to help classmates Ma Li organize art shows and be good at singing and dancing be kind and easy-going 写作要求：1.语句通顺，逻辑清晰，书写规范： 2.可根据要点，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯： 3.词数80左右。作文开头已给出，不计人总词数： 4.文中不能出现真实姓名和校名等信息。 第一步：申题立意定基调 1.文体：说明文： 2.人称：第三人称： 3.时态：一般现在时： 4.主题：推荐候选人。 4 第二步：谋篇布局成框架 介绍自己要推 I think...should be the star of Beginning 荐哪位候选人 the class.Here are my reasons First of all,... Recommend 分点说明推荐 Body Secondly,...What's more... Candidate 的原因 Thirdly,… I think he/she is the best candidate for Ending 点题 the star of the class. 第三步：语篇润色成佳作 衔接成篇 润色升华 I think Li Wei should be the star of the class.Here are my reasons. First of all,Li Wei is a diligent boy.During the class,he always listens to the teachers very carefully.He often studies hard,so he can get good grades on his usual ①尝试用“who”引导的定语从句改写： tests.DSecondly.Li Wei is an athletic boy.He exercises Secondly,Li Wei is an athletic boy who every day.In his free time,he likes to play soccer and exercises every day. baseball.He joins the sports club.What's more.he is the captain of the school soccer team.Thirdly,Li Wei is a ②尝试用“such as”改写： very confident and optimistic boy.He is very active and He likes to take part in all sorts of school outgoing.2 He likes to take part in all sorts of school activities,such as speech competition and activities.For example,speech competition and science science competition. competition. ③尝试用“All in all”升格： 3 So I think he is the best candidate for the star of All in all,I think he is the best candidate for the class. the star of the class. ◆写作范例模板 My School Life School is a place for students to learn knowledge and make friends.Different students have different ideas about life at school..I like my school life very much.[点明主题，引出下文] First,we have different subjects at my school and the teachers there are very kind to us.They always give us a hand when we need help.Second,the students are very friendly and I make many friends here.Last but not least,there are all kinds of interesting activities after class and I joined the English club last term.It is helpful for me.[分点叙述] In a word,my school life is rich and colorful.[ 孕三阶实战演练 一、句子仿写与升格 1.I made a decision to study harder and make my parents be proud of me.(用动词不定式表目的升格 句子) I made a decision to study harder to make my parents be proud of me. 2.I become more outgoing than before.I get along well with people around me.not only...but also .合并为一个句子) I not only become more outgoing than before,but also get along well with people around me. 3.Problem-solving is a skill and it will benefit us throughout our school lives.(用定语从句升格句子) Problem-solving is a skill that will benefit us throughout our school lives. 4.Our school life is very wonderful.(用how引导的感叹句升格句子) How wonderful our school life is! 二、写作 第一篇 作为青少年，我们都想拥有多姿多彩、健康快乐的校园生活。请参考图文信息，以“Having a School Life”为题，写一篇英语短文 School environment Having a Good health School activities School Life Good relationship 写作要求：1.补全标题： 2.语句通顺，逻辑清晰，书写规范： 3.词数60-80左右： 4.文中不能出现真实姓名和校名等信息 Having a Colorful School Life I am a junior high school student.I have a colorful and enjoyable school life. The moment you enter this school,you will see a large and beautiful campus with trees and flowers here and there.In this school,we are living like a big family.Teachers here are as kind as parents and classmates get along well with each other like brothers and sisters.We have different kinds of clubs,such as dance clubs,English clubs and sports clubs.You can choose what you are interested in.During the break,I often do exercise to keep healthy. I really like my school life. 第二篇 国有国法，家有家规。在你的学校中一定有很多规章制度来规范中学生的行为，使学生们都 能健康成长。请根据下表提示，以“My School Rules”为题，写一篇英语短文。 Things we can do: Things we can't do: listen to the teachers carefully ★talk in class keep the classroom clean take food into the classroom ★wear school uniforms ★fight with each other Your opinions... 写作要求：1.语句通顺，逻辑清晰，书写规范： 2.可根据要点，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯： 3.词数80左右： 4.文中不能出现真实姓名和校名等信息 My School Rules Every school has rules for students.As students,we must obey them.First of all,in class,we shouldn't talk but listen to the teachers carefully.We are not supposed to take food or drinks into the classroom.We should keep our classroom quiet and clean.Then,after class,we should finish our homework on time.One more thing,we should wear our school uniforms at school.Besides,we should protect trees,grass and flowers there because they make our school more beautiful.At last, we should get on well with our teachers and classmates.Don't fight with each other. Although we have different views on the rules,I think everyone should obey the school rules. 话题2经历与感受 多一阶素材积累 一开头句 ·结尾句 1.[凳教七上U8PI17]Look at this photo from my 1,[人教八下U3Pi9]I finally understand that we goodbye party.I am so happy all of my friends need to share the housework to have a clean and were there. comfortable home. 2.[沪教九下U5P67]Last year,my parents took2.[人教九全UI2Pgl]My bad luck had unexpectedly me on a very special holiday. turned into a good thing. ●中间句 3.[人教九全UI2P96]hat a lucky/an unlucky day！ 1.[人教七下U1lP65]The rooms were really dark 4.Generally speaking,what I value most is my and it was difficult to take photos,so I didn't family. take any. 5.I have learned that spending time with family 2.[人教八上U1P2]I just stayed at home most of and friends is really important for us. the time to read and relax. >谚语 3.[人教八下U2PIl]I get such a strong feeling of1.Love me,love my dog..爱屋及乌。 satisfaction when I see the animals get better and 2.A journey of a thousand miles begins with a the look of joy on their owners'faces. single step.千里之行，始于足下。 4.Some students worry about their exams,while3.Where there is a will,there is a way.有志者， other students can't get on well with their 事竟成。 classmates or parents. 4.Experience is the best teacher.实践出真知。 二阶典例探究 [2024贵州]成长的道路上，我们努力改变以提升自我。假如你是李华，你校英语广播站正在 开展主题为“The Change Made Me ”(改变让我 )的征文活动。请参考图文信 息，积极投稿。 The Change Made Me (Better/Improve/...) weak→strong change careless-→careful What happened? story Who was in the story? It made me... feelings)I got to know... 写作要求：1.补全标题： 2.语句通顺，逻辑清晰，书写规范： 3.词数60-80左右： 4.文中不能出现真实姓名和校名等信息。 第一步：申题立意定基调 1.文体：记叙文： 2.人称：第一人称： 3.时态：一般过去时： 4.主题：介绍自己的经历及感受。 第二步：谋篇布局成框架 Many things in our life can help us to 表明写作 Beginning 意图 be better.In my opinion/From my point of view/As far as I am concemed/Personally speaking....my changes have made me better/improve/strong/... The Change Made Me 介绍自己 In the past,I was afraid to/in fear offused Boby 的经历 After/Because of/Thanks to....I changed a lot.I became... 表达自己 All of these changes made me better/more Ending 的感受 confident/.. 第三步：语篇润色成佳作 衔接成篇 润色升华 The Change Made Me Better ①尝试用“There be句型”改写： 1 Many things in our life can help us to be better. In my opinion,I think my changes have made me better. There are many things in our life that can help us to be better. I used to be weak because of my bad habits.After communicating with my teacher,I ate on time every day and exercised regularly,so I am strong now.What ②尝试用“so.hal.”改写： was more,2 I was careless.I made many mistakes I was so careless that I made many mistakes in my exams. in my exams.My teacher advised me to check my ③尝试用“and”合并为一个句子： answers carefully and develop good learning habits. 3 These good changes made me better.They also These good changes made me better and brave enough to face new challenges. made me brave enough to face new challenges. ◆写作范例模板 Dear John, How are you doing these days?I'm writing to share my voluntary experience with you.Let me tell you something about it.[表明写信目的] On the morning of May 16,my classmates and I went to the local community to help people sort out the waste.This activity not only helps us to take part in social activities,but also gives us the opportunity to help people in need.I think it is very meaningful and can enrich our life experiences.In the afternoon,we went to a nursing house.We helped and took care of the elderly.It helps us to experience life,understand society and make friends.We also know more about the current situation of the elderly.We will do more things to care about the elderly in the future.[描述经历与惑受] 8 I think the volunteer service that day was quite fruitful.[表达感想] Yours, Li Hua 三阶实战演练 一、句子仿写与升格 1.It was a little hard for us,we still need to have confidence.(用although引导的让步状语从句升格句子) Although it was a little hard for us,we still need to have confidence. 2.I will never forget it and I have understood the importance of teamwork since then.because 的原因状语从句升格句子) I will never forget it because I have understood the importance of teamwork since then. 3.Exercise an hour every day is necessary for us.(用it作形式主语升格句子) It is necessary for us to exercise an hour every day. 4.We should have a good relationship with others and we can live a happier life.(用现在分词短语作 状语升格句子) Having a good relationship with others,we can live a happier life. 二、写作 第一篇[2024福建改编] 假如你是李华，学校上周五开展了为期一天的实践活动。你的笔友Hey对这次活动很感兴 趣。请参考图文信息，用英语给他写一封信，谈谈活动过程及你的感想 istory ◇learn about the Long March(长征) listen to the stories of the Red Army enjoy paper cutting art 写作要求：1.逻辑清晰，内容完整，书写规范； 2.词数80左右。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数： 3.文中不能出现真实姓名和校名等信息。 Dear Henry, I'm glad that you're interested in our school study tour last Friday.Let me tell you something about In the morning,we visited the History Museum.We learned about the history of the Long March.Then we listened to the stories of the Red Army,which greatly touched us.After lunch, we went to the Folk Culture Center,where we enjoyed paper cutting art.We also watched local opera performances that are educational. The tour not only deepens our love for our country but also enriches our understanding of the traditional art of China. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 9 第二篇[2024陕西改编 假如你是李斌，开学初老师在劳动实践课(labor class)上布置了一项作业，内容是栽培一种植 物（绿植、花、水果、蔬菜等），观察并记录它（们）的生长变化。你完成了这项作业并且觉得很有 趣，打算写一封邮件和你的笔友Tom分享此次经历和感受。 参考词汇：grow,look after,watch,record(u.记录)，a feeling of satisfaction,fun,leam, 写作要求：1.逻辑清晰，内容完整，书写规范： 2.词数80左右。邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数； 3.文中不能出现真实姓名和校名等信息。 Hi Tom, How's it going?I'd like to share the interesting experience of my labor homework with you. This term,my teacher assigned me a project to grow a plant and record its changes.I chose a sunflower and named it Sunny.I put the seed in a nice container and carefully recorded its changes.Each day,I watered and looked after Sunny with care.It was fascinating to see how it slowly grew taller and stronger.When I saw the sunflower grow well,I got a strong feeling of satisfaction.And the funny shape of the sunflower made me deeply interested in it. The interesting experience taught me patience and the beauty of nature.I hope you try this too!Can you share your interesting experience with me?Looking forward to your reply. Li Bin 第三篇 互相帮助是一种美德。请参考图文信息，以“Helping Others Makes Me ”为题，写一 篇短文，谈谈自己的一次助人为乐的经历及感受 share your experience express your feelings ”What happened? What did you learn from it? 。When did it happen? How did you feel about it? Who did you help? 写作要求：1.补全标题： 2.语句通顺，逻辑清晰，书写规范： 3.词数60-80左右： 4.文中不能出现真实姓名和校名等信息。 Helping Others Makes Me Happy Helping others is a really happy thing for me. It was on a snowy afternoon when I was walking back home.Just at the street corner,I found an old man sitting on the ground.He was cold and tired.I asked him what was the matter.He told me that he had no money for food and he was very hungry.I used my pocket money to buy a bowl of noodles for him.He ate the noodles quickly and thanked me very much. And I gave him all of my pocket money then.Seeing his thankful smile,I felt happy that I could help a man in need.From then on,I never spent money on useless things and always tried to help the poor and the old. I think helping others in need is one of my pleasures. 10 话题3活动、计划与安排 ,一阶素材积累 P开头句 will learn and have fun at the same time. 1.[冀教七下U8PI22]I'm really excited about my 2.[冀教七下U4P60]Did you have a good summer plans.I'm going to live with a family in weekend?What are you going to do next the countryside.It will be a good experience. weekend? 2.[冀教七下U8PI24]I will experience a new life 3.[冀教七下U8P122]f's going to be a fun in another part of China.I am going to write summer.You all have wonderful plans. down all of my experiences and share them with 4.[冀教九全U8PI24]We are planning another you.It will be fun.I am really looking forward trip to Chinatown during the Spring Festival.I to it! love festivals. 3.[外研七下M3P16]I'm going to enjoy myself 谚语 during the May Day holiday. 1.Great plans should be carefully considered.FL 4.[外a研七下M3PI6]Usually I spend the summer 谋之道，周密为宝。 holiday at home,but this year is going to be 2.By failing to prepare,you are preparing to fail. very different because I'm going on a summer 凡事预则立，不预则废。 camp in Sydney,Australia. 3.It takes as much energy to wish as it does to 一中间句 plan.计划和希望需要的精力是一样的。 L.[冀教七下U4P51]I am going to be a volleyball4.A man who does not plan long ahead will find player in the future.I enjoy volleyball so much! trouble at his door.人无远虑必有近忧。 2.[冀教七下U4P56]I'm going to learn something 5.Before everything else,getting ready is the new this Saturday. secret of success.做好准备是成功的首要秘决。 3.[冀教七下U8PIl4]We made a long list.We6.Well begun is half done.良好的开端是成功的 will go swimming and play in the sun every day! 一半。 4.[外研七下M3P14]On Saturday morning,Tm 7.A good plan today is better than a perfect plan going to check my email and do my homework. tomorrow..今天的一个好计划胜于明天的完美 Then I'm going to help with the housework. 计划。 ·结尾句 8.Only a life with a goal has a direction,and a 1.[冀教七下U4P52]Join our chess club!Chess life with a plan is more wonderful.有目标的人 challenges you and makes you think hard.You 生才有方向，有规划的人生才更精彩。 子二阶典例探究 [2024眉山改编]假如你是李华，打算在即将到来的暑假期间前往北京旅行，请参考图文信息， 给你的英国笔友David写一封邮件，分享你的旅行计划。 写作要求：1.语句通顺，逻辑清晰，书写规范： 2.词数80左右； 3.文中不能出现真实姓名和校名等信息。 When will you go there? What activities will you do? Who will you go with? (2 activities) My Travel Plan to Beijing Ho How long will you stay? will you go there? Why will you do the activities? (2 reasons) 第一步：审题立意定基调 1.文体：应用文： 2.人称：第一人称： 3.时态：一般将来时、一般现在时： 4.主题：介绍暑假去北京的旅行计划。 第二步：谋篇布局成框架 The summer vacation is coming soon.and I have 开门见山， Beginning many exciting plans.I plan to/am going to...with 直接介绍主题 my parents/friends... We will go there by plane/train...in...and stay there for... days/weeks. My Travel Plan 介绍具体 First.we will go to...because... to Beijing Boby 细节 Second....is also a good choice for us to enjoy... What's more,we are going to...We think...is an amazing place which is well worth a visit.There are... I believe that we will have fun/have a good time/enjoy 总结并询问 Ending ourselves...there.So what are your plans for the summer 对方的计划 vacation/What about your summer plan?/... 第三步：语篇润色成佳作 衔接成篇 润色升华 Dear David. How's it going? With the summer vacation coming soon,I feel so①尝试用“would like to do”改写： excited that my parents have promised to take my sister and Now I would like to share my travel plan me to Beijing.1 Now I want to share my travel plan with with you. you. 12 续表 衔接成箇 润色升华 We'll go there by plane in July and stay for 5 days. ②尝试用“which”引导的非限制性定语从句 During that period,we're going to visit the Palace Museum 改写： first and know about stories of the past.Besides,another Besides,another place we must go to is the place we must go to is the Great Wall.It is the longest wall Great Wall,which is the longest wall in the in the world.We're going to take a walk there because it's a world. great place which is worth a visit. 3 We'll enjoy ourselves in Beijing.What about your ③尝试用“thal”引导的宾语从句改写： summer plan? I believe/hope that we'll enjoy ourselves in Li Hua Beijing. ◆写作范例模板 My New Year's Plan Hello,everyone！The New Year is coming..It's a good time to make plans..[介绍主题] My first New Year's plan is about my health.Swimming is a good way to exercise.Next year,I will try to swim to improve my health.I'd like to have healthy food to develop healthy eating habits.Second, I will study hard as much as possible so that I can get better grades.My third plan has to do with my hobbies.I love drawing and singing in my free time,so I am going to finish drawing two nice works as well as getting chances to go to some concerts..[分点介绍其体计划] If's difficult to do,but I will do my best to keep to all my plans.[表达决心] 子三阶实战演练 一、句子仿写与升格 l.I go to visit some places like museums..I will keep quiet and wait in line politely.(用if引导的条件 状语从句合并为一个句子)》 If I go to visit some places like museums,I will keep quiet and wait in line politely. 2.Our school can also organize some reading activities.Students can learn a lot from reading activities. (用which引导的定语从句合并为一个句子) Our school can also organize some reading activities,from which students can learn a lot. 3.I am going to develop a new hobby.(用take up升格句子) I am going to take up a new hobby. 4.You can come and have fun with us during the International Food Festival..(用祈使句升格句子) Come and have fun with us during the International Food Festival. 5.Why does Li Yang make great progress in such a short time?All teachers are talking about it. wy引导的宾语从句升格句子) All teachers are talking about why Li Yang makes great progress in such a short time. 二、写作 第一篇[2024齐齐哈尔改编] 时光飞逝，难忘的初中生活即将结束，你们将迎来一个轻松、愉快的假期。如何能让你的假期 更加丰富多彩呢？请结合下面表格，以“How to Spend a Meaningful Summer Vacation'”为题，写一篇 13