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湖北省九师联盟 2025届高三 11月质量检测英语试题 第四部分写作（共两节，满分 40分） 第一节（满分 15分） 假定你是李华，你的留学生朋友William邀请你参加他本周六的生日派对， 但你因故无法前往，特提前给他邮寄了一份礼物。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括： 1.表达歉意并说明原因； 2.提醒他查收礼物。 注意：1.写作词数应为 80个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear William, _________________________________________________________________ ___________________________ _________________________________________________________________ ___________________________ _________________________________________________________________ ___________________________ Yours, Li Hua 第二节（满分 25分） 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整 的短文。 In a small village in the Philippines, there lived a family of five. The parents, Juan and Maria, had three children: two boys and a girl. They lived in a small house made of bamboo, surrounded by many trees and the sound of the nearby river. Juan and Maria lived a happy life with their three children: Miguel, Jose and Ana. The eldest son, Miguel, was a hardworking young man who helped his father with the farm work. He was responsible and always took care of his younger brother and sister. The couple always told their children that they were happy as long as the family was together. Though Jose and Ana were too young to understand that, Miguel, who treasured a photo of his family, bore that in mind. One day, while the family was having dinner, they heard a loud knock on the door. It was the village chief, who had come to deliver some bad news: The village was in danger of being flooded due to heavy rain, and they needed to evacuate (撤离) immediately. Juan and Maria quickly gathered their children and some essentials, and they set off towards the evacuation center. Before leaving for the center, Miguel took the precious family photo in a hurry. The journey was long and full of danger, with the rain pouring down heavily and the wind beating them violently. The children were scared and tired, but Juan and Maria held their hands to reassure them, telling them that everything was going to be alright. When they finally reached the evacuation center, they were greeted by other families who had also been forced to leave their homes. The center was crowded and uncomfortable, but the family was grateful to have a roof over their heads and some food to eat. Days turned into weeks, and Juan and Maria grew restless. They missed their home and their farm, and they were worried about what would happen to their crops. Several weeks later, the day came when the floodwaters slowly receded (消退). 注意：1.续写词数应为 150个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1：Juan and Maria decided to take their children back home. Paragraph 2：“No! We still have something precious,” said Miguel. 第二节（满分 25分） 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整 的短文。 In a small village in the Philippines, there lived a family of five. The parents, Juan and Maria, had three children: two boys and a girl. They lived in a small house made of bamboo(非谓语动词短语作后置定语), surrounded by many trees and the sound of the nearby river(非谓语动词短语作后置定语). Juan and Maria lived a happy life with their three children: Miguel, Jose and Ana. The eldest son, Miguel, was a hardworking young man who helped his father with the farm work(定从). He was responsible and always took care of his younger brother and sister. The couple always told their children that they were happy(宾从) as long as the family was together(状从). Though Jose and Ana were too young to understand that(状从), Miguel, who treasured a photo of his family(定从), bore that in mind. One day, while the family was having dinner(状从), they heard a loud knock on the door. It was the village chief, who had come to deliver some bad news(定从): The village was in danger of being flooded due to heavy rain, and they needed to evacuate (撤离) immediately. Juan and Maria quickly gathered their children and some essentials, and they set off towards the evacuation center. Before leaving for the center, Miguel took the precious family photo in a hurry. The journey was long and full of danger, with the rain pouring down heavily and the wind beating them violently(with复合结构). The children were scared and tired, but Juan and Maria held their hands to reassure them, telling them that everything was going to be alright(宾从). When they finally reached the evacuation center(状从), they were greeted by other families who had also been forced to leave their homes(定从). The center was crowded and uncomfortable, but the family was grateful to have a roof over their heads and some food to eat. Days turned into weeks, and Juan and Maria grew restless. They missed their home and their farm, and they were worried about what would happen to their crops(宾从). Several weeks later, the day came when the floodwaters slowly receded(状 从) (消退). 注意：1.续写词数应为 150个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1：Juan and Maria decided to take their children back home. Paragraph 2：“No! We still have something precious,” said Miguel. 1. 高考读后续写分析 （1）文章类型分析 这篇文章属于情感延续型读后续写。文章描述了 Juan和Maria一家人的日常生活以及他们 在灾难中的经历。文章结尾处提到洪水逐渐消退，续写需要处理家庭面临的挑战，特别是在 他们能够回家之后，如何恢复生活以及对失去的东西的情感反应。 （2）思路构思 情感发展：本篇文章的情感主题围绕家庭、失落与希望展开。续写应聚焦于家庭在洪水过 后如何恢复平静，并通过一些富有象征意义的行动表达他们对家庭的珍视，以及对未来的希 望。 情节延续：续写的情节应延续原文中的冲突和情感。家庭重新回到家中的描写应该突出 他们的感情波动，尤其是Miguel对家庭照片的执着以及他在关键时刻的决心。 布局与框架： 第一段： 家庭的决定：Miguel和家人决定回到家中，尽管面临不确定性和困难，但他们的决心 象征着对家的归属感。 动作描写：细致地描写家庭回家的情景，包括路途的艰辛和他们的心理活动。 第二段： Miguel的坚持：Miguel反思洪水带来的损失，但强调家人对彼此的珍视。此时，家庭 照片作为情感的象征，意味着他们始终拥有的“珍贵”东西。 结局温暖：通过Miguel的一句话，展示家庭成员之间深厚的情感纽带，给出一个希望 和正能量的结局。 （3）承接原文的事项 情感延续：续写要延续原文家庭之间的亲情和困境中的坚韧。Miguel持有家庭照片的行为 表明了家庭在灾难面前的重要性，续写时应保持这种情感联系。 情节过渡自然：从原文的“洪水渐退”到家庭回家的决策需要自然过渡，不要出现突兀的情 节变化。 （4）整体注意事项 语气平稳且感人：续写应保持温暖和感人的语气，体现出家庭团结、对未来的信心和坚持。 细节描写：细腻的动作、心理和环境描写有助于深化情感表现，展现人物在困境中的坚韧 与希望。 情感层次：通过细腻的情感描写，展示从困境中恢复过来的心路历程，展现Miguel和家庭 成员之间的紧密关系。 动作描写： 1. Juan and Maria held each other’s hands tightly, their steps slow but determined as they made their way back to their home. 2. Miguel took the family photo from his pocket, his fingers brushing over the worn edges as if drawing strength from it. 3. The family trudged through the muddy path, the weight of their loss heavy on their shoulders, but their spirits unbroken. 心理描写： 1. Miguel felt a surge of determination as he stared at the family photo in his hand. No matter what had been lost, he still had something precious. 2. Juan’s heart was heavy with worry, but as they neared their home, hope began to flicker in his chest. 3. Maria looked at her children with tearfilled eyes, grateful that they were together despite the hardship. 环境描写： 1. The once lush fields were now barren, with the remains of the floodwaters still visible in the distance. 2. The sky was clearing, and rays of sunlight began to break through the clouds, signaling the end of the storm. 3. The house, though damaged, stood resilient against the changing tides, much like the family that lived inside it. （6）词汇 Trudge (v.) — 跋涉，吃力地走 近义词：plod, slog 反义词：skip, dance 例句： 1. The family trudged through the muddy roads, exhaustion written on their faces. 2. After the storm, the workers trudged back to their homes, weary but relieved. Surge (v.) — 激增，涌现 近义词：rush, flood 反义词：decline, recede 例句： 1. Miguel felt a surge of emotion as he held the photo, knowing how much it meant to his family. 2. The crowd surged forward, eager to see the concert. Resilient (adj.) — 有弹性的，坚韧的 近义词：tough, strong 反义词：fragile, weak 例句： 1. Despite the damage, the community remained resilient and determined to rebuild. 2. The resilient tree withstood the storm’s fury. 2. 语法现象分析 （1）高中语法现象 过去完成时：“Miguel had taken the precious family photo in a hurry” — 强调动作发生在另一 个过去动作之前，突出了事件发生的时间顺序。 现在完成时：“The floodwaters had receded” — 表示洪水的消退发生在过去并延续至现在， 强调动作的完成性。 虚拟语气：“If we had not evacuated, we would have been trapped” — 描述假设条件，表达与 过去事实相反的情形。 （2）常见搭配与短语 Hold tightly：紧紧抓住（例如，“Juan and Maria held each other’s hands tightly.”）。 Draw strength from：从中汲取力量（例如，“Miguel drew strength from the family photo.”）。 Rise above：克服，超越（例如，“They managed to rise above the difficulties.”）。 Paragraph 1: Juan and Maria decided to take their children back home. Despite the long journey and the challenges ahead, they were determined to rebuild their lives. As they walked through the muddy path(状从), Miguel held the family photo close, drawing strength from the memories it held(定从). Paragraph 2: “No! We still have something precious,” said Miguel. His words rang with determination. “We have each other, and this photo reminds us that no matter what, our family is always together.(宾从)” The family smiled, their hearts full of hope(独立主格) as they faced the future together(状从). Paragraph 1: Juan and Maria decided to take their children back home. The journey was difficult, but their spirits were high. As they passed the river(状从), they looked at the once-flooded land, now slowly recovering. Miguel clutched the family photo, feeling(非谓语做伴随动作) it was the one thing(定从) they could hold onto(定从). Paragraph 2: “No! We still have something precious,” said Miguel. His voice was filled with emotion. “This photo is more than just a picture. It’s a symbol of our strength and love.” Together, they returned to their home, ready to rebuild their lives(主语补语形容词), knowing that they still had each other.(宾从) Paragraph 1: Juan and Maria decided to take their children back home. The roads were tough, but their determination never wavered. As they walked(状从), Miguel felt a sense of peace, knowing that with the photo in his hand, they still had something to hold onto(宾从). Paragraph 2: “No! We still have something precious,” said Miguel. His words brought a sense of calm to the family. They all knew that as long as they had each other, they could overcome anything. The flood had taken much, but it had not taken their hope. One possible version: Dear William, I feel excited to be invited to your birthday party this Saturday. However, I regret to tell you that I’ve been scheduled to visit my grandparents in the countryside. Therefore, I won’t make it to your party, for which I’m deeply sorry(原因状语从句). To celebrate your birthday, I’ve carefully selected a Chinese novel for you since you’ve been passionate about Chinese literature. The gift, sent along with a letter of my sincere wishes(非谓语动词短语后置定语), is likely to reach you this Friday. Please remember to pick it up in time. Happy birthday to you! Yours, Li Hua 第二节 One possible version: Juan and Maria decided to take their children back home. The return journey was full of silence and worries.When they finally arrived at the village(状从), they were depressed to see a scene of devastation: Their crops had been destroyed by the flood. Worse still, their house was in ruins and their possessions were washed away. Overwhelmed by emotion(非谓语动词作伴随动作), Maria fell onto her knees and burst into tears. Though he wanted to comfort his wife(状从), Juan couldn’t help crying out, “We’ve lost everything!” “No!We still have something precious,” said Miguel. Then Miguel showed the family photo to his parents and added, “Everything will be OK as long as we are together(状从). Remember?” Miguel looked at his parents with a determined look. “Yes!” Juan responded and turned to his wife, who was smiling(定从). The couple were delighted that their eldest son remembered(宾从) and reminded them of what mattered most for a family(宾从). They held their children’s hands tightly, believing that they could rebuild their home and farm with joint efforts(非谓语+宾从).