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学科网 考点大串讲 通教材，过考点，练好题 专题12书面表达（紧贴新教材主题，满分范文20篇） 根据上海新教改，精心挑选匹配新教材知识点的题目，帮助广¨大师生备战期末！ 1.要求：请以“My favourite dish"为题，写一个段落，内容包括菜名以及喜欢的理由（至少两个理由）。 My favourite dish 2.Write a passage of at least50 words about the topic“My favourite animal'”,(以“我最喜欢的动物”为 写一篇不少于50个词的短文。)内容包含： (1)你最喜欢的动物是什么？ (2)它长什么样子？ (3)你是如何与它相处的？（例如：带它一起散步、玩游戏等） My favourite animal Hello,I'm Li Hua.My favourite animal is That's my favourite animal.Do you like him? 3.Suppose your friend Ben is going to travel to Shanghai next week.Please design a travel plan and write a letter to tell him about it..Write at least60 words.(假设你的朋友Ben下周要来上海旅游，请你为他设计一份旅 行计划书并写信告知他。不少于60个词。) Dear Ben, I'm glad to know that you are going to visit Shanghai 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网 考点大串讲 通教材，过考点，练好题 Yours. Lin Dong 4.Write a passage of at least50 words about the topic“My favourite sport”(以“我最喜欢的运动”为题写 一篇不少于50个词的短文) 要点提示： 1.最喜欢的一项运动：游泳： 2这项运动的好处：强身健体、放松身心： 3做这项运动时的注意事项：应有家长陪同；要做好准备活动；（请自拟一点）： 4.建议人们多运动。 My favourite sport 5.假如你是李华，你们学校英语广播站正在举行以“健康饮食快乐生活”为主题的英语演讲活动。请根 据以下提示，写一篇英语短文参赛。 基本信息 处名 李华 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 2 学科网 考点大串讲 通教材，过考点，练好题 年龄 13 电话 0531.-765836 喜欢的食物及理由 饮食习惯 不喜欢的食物及理由 爱好特长 打网球 其他方面 注意： (1)用第一人称： (2)60词左右： (3)文中不得出现真实人名、校名等信息： (4)开头己给出，不计入总词数。 Hello! 6.假如你是王凯，你的笔友Ec来信说对中国美食文化很感兴趣，请给他回邮件介绍你最喜欢的一道菜 以及做法，并欢迎对方来中国品尝美食。 要求：(1)语言准确，语句通顺，表达连贯； (2)书写认真规范，不少于80词。 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 3 命学科网 考点大串讲 vw.ZXXK 通教材，过考点，练好题 7.(以“A special dish for my friend'为题，写一段不少于50字的短文，标点符号不占格。)（注意： 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。) The following questions are for reference only.(以下问题仅供参考) 1.What is the special dish? 2.How do you make it? 8.Write a passage of at least60 words about the topic"My mother'"(以“我的妈妈"为题写一篇不少于60 个词的短文) Suggested questions: played together cooked together happy t times had a trip together ()介绍母亲（外貌、职业、爱好等）： (2)回顾快乐时光（事件、感受）： (3).… My mother 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网 考点大串讲 通教材，过考点，练好题 9.家是我们心灵的港湾，家人是我们人生路上的坚强后盾。假设你是Helen.,学校正在举办主题为My Family”的征稿活动，请根据思维导图给的提示，用英文写一篇短文进行投稿。 注意事项： 1)必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥： 2)意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范： 3)请勿在文中使用真实的姓名，校名及地名： 4)词数60左右。 tall,policemanfather beautiful,nursemother family activitics(家庭话动)watch films,,. My Family cute,Grade 7 feelings(感受)happy. like: My Family Hello,everyone!I'm Helen.I'm happy to talk about my family l0.假设你是初中生Eric,你所在社区的一家动物收容所(animal shelter)正在招募志愿者。请你根据 以下提示，给负责人Ms Brown写一封英文邮件，申请成为志愿者。 写作提示： 1.Why do you want to be a volunteer? 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 5 6学科网 考点大串讲 通教材，过考点，练好题 2.Did you look after any animals in the past? 3.What can you do for animals? 要求： 1.短文应包含提示内容，并适当发挥。 2.词数70左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Ms Brown, I hear your animal shelter needs some volunteers.I'd like to be a volunteer to help the animals Yours. Eric 11.Write5-8 sentences about your school life.(你的学校生活是怎样的？请写5-8句话描述你的学校生活。) My school day The following questions are for references. 1 When does your school day start and end? 2What do you like most about your school day?Why? 3What do you think of your school day?Why? 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 6 命学科网 考点大串讲 /W.ZXX 通教材，过考点，练好题 12,动物和人类共处一个世界，是人类的朋友。有的动物美丽，有的动物可爱，有的动物活泼，有的 动物腼腆。你最喜欢哪种动物？为什么？请写一篇60词以上的英文短文（不含已给文字），介绍你最喜欢 的动物及原因，可适当发挥。 My Favorite Animal There are many animals in the world But my favorite animal 13.一批美国孩子到你家乡的光明动物园来参观熊猫和老虎。假如你是一名志愿解说者，请根据以下 内容提示给远道而来的客人做个解说吧。 老虎(Tai Ge):来自吉林省，4岁，有点懒，喜欢吃肉。 熊猫LL):米自四川省，3岁，害羞，喜欢吃竹子和睡觉。 l4.Write at least50 words about the topic“My trip to..”(以“ly trip to..”为题写一篇不少于50个词的 短文，标点符号不占格) Suggested questions: Where will you go? How will you get there? What have you bought for the trip? 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网 考点大串讲 通教材，过考点，练好题 What will you do there? 15.Suppose you are going to have a trip to a place again.Write at least 50 words on the topic"The second tpto.”(以“再一次去.…旅游”为题写一篇不少于50词的短文，标点符号不占格)。 Suggested points: 1.Where are you going to travel again? 2.Why are you going to this place again? 3.What are you going to do in this place? 16.假如你是王梅，你的澳大利亚笔友Lu©y一家寒假要米中国旅游。他们对于去北京、哈尔滨还 是三亚犹豫不决。请你根据思维导图及提示写封邮件给他们推荐一个城市，并讲述一下原因。 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 8 学科网 考点大串讲 W.ZXXK 通教材，过考点，练好题 Beijing north of China-the Palace Museum Cities Harbin north of China-Harbin Ice-Snow World Sanya south of China-beautiful beach 提示：1.Which city can they go to? 2.Why is the city a good choice(选择)？ (①location方位②weather③famous places④) 要求：1短文须包括所有提示内容，并适当发挥： 2.短文中不能出现真实人名： 3.词数：60左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数） Dear Lucy. Welcome to China! I hope you will have a good time there. Yours. Wang Mei 17.你是LiMg,你的外国网友Bil对你的饮食习惯和运动习惯很感兴趣。请你根据表格提示，用 英语给B写一封电子邮件，介绍你的习惯。 注意：(1)表达正确，语句通顺； (2)邮件须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥： (3)60词左右（邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 早饭 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 9 6学科网 考点大串讲 通教材，过考点，练好题 午饭 晚饭 晚饭后 Dear Bill Let me tell you something about my habits. Yours, Li Ming 18。每年的8月8日是“全民健身日”，为了让这项活动更加深入人心，某英文杂志的运动与健康” 栏目正在以Let's Do Exercise Together为题，向广大中学生征文。内容提示： 运动的重要性 运动的时间与方式 ●日常步行或骑自行车到学校 ●保持健康 ●上体育课时做各种锻炼（跑步、打篮球） ●丰富生活 周末与朋友去爬山、游泳等 写作要求： (I)须包含以上提示信息，并进行适当补充。 (②)词数在80左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 10 专题12 书面表达（紧贴新教材主题，满分范文20篇） 根据上海新教改，精心挑选匹配新教材知识点的题目，帮助广大师生备战期末！ 1．要求：请以“My favourite dish”为题，写一个段落，内容包括菜名以及喜欢的理由(至少两个理由)。 My favourite dish ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Favourite dish My favourite dish is fried chicken. Firstly, it tastes delicious. The crispy skin and tender meat make it very appealing. Secondly, it’s convenient to get. You can find it in many restaurants and even buy it from some fast food chains. Whenever I have a craving for something tasty, fried chicken is always my top choice. It brings me a lot of satisfaction and joy. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：本文主要是介绍自己最喜欢的菜以及喜欢的理由，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己最喜欢的菜是什么； 第二步，介绍喜欢的理由。 [亮点词汇] ①buy sth. from...从……买某物 ②a lot of satisfaction and joy很多满足感和快乐 [高分句型] Whenever I have a craving for something tasty, fried chicken is always my top choice. (时间状语从句) 2．Write a passage of at least 50 words about the topic “My favourite animal”. (以“我最喜欢的动物”为题写一篇不少于50个词的短文。) 内容包含： (1) 你最喜欢的动物是什么？ (2) 它长什么样子？ (3) 你是如何与它相处的？(例如：带它一起散步、玩游戏等) My favourite animal Hello, I’m Li Hua. My favourite animal is _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s my favourite animal. Do you like him? 【答案】One possible version: My fnvourite animal Hello, I’m Li Hua. My favourite animal is a dog. We have a small dog in my family. He is brown with curly hair. We call him Peter. I love him very much. Every morning I get up early and take him to have a walk outside. Then we play some games for some time. In the evening, I do my homework and he sits next to me. He doesn’t make any noise. That’s my favourite animal. Do you like him? 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步、承接已给的开头，介绍自己最喜欢的动物是什么； 第二步、介绍它的外貌特征； 第三步、介绍自己和它相处的方式并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①curly卷曲的 ②get up起床 ③have a walk散步 ④next to紧邻 [高分句型] ①We call him Peter.(名词作宾补) 3．Suppose your friend Ben is going to travel to Shanghai next week. Please design a travel plan and write a letter to tell him about it. Write at least 60 words. (假设你的朋友Ben下周要来上海旅游，请你为他设计一份旅行计划书并写信告知他。不少于60个词。) Dear Ben, I’m glad to know that you are going to visit Shanghai. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Lin Dong 【答案】例文 Dear Ben, I’m glad to know that you are going to visit Shanghai. I will meet you at the airport. Then I will show you around the Bund of Shanghai. You will see many famous buildings here. Of course, I will also take you to taste our local food. I will also show you around the museum. You can visit many historical relics here. I will also show you around the Central Street. You can shop here. You will have a great time. I look forward to your coming. Yours, Lin Dong 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。对朋友要来上海旅游表示欢迎； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。给朋友讲述来上海旅游的行程安排； 第三步，书写结语。对朋友即将到上海表示期待。 [亮点词汇] ①show sb. around 带某人四处参观 ②take sb. to do sth. 带某人做某事 ③have a good time 玩得开心 ④look forward to 期待 [高分句型] I’m glad to know that you are going to visit Shanghai. (that引导的宾语从句) 4．Write a passage of at least 50 words about the topic “My favourite sport” (以“我最喜欢的运动”为题写一篇不少于50个词的短文) 要点提示： 1.最喜欢的一项运动：游泳； 2.这项运动的好处：强身健体、放松身心； 3.做这项运动时的注意事项：应有家长陪同；要做好准备活动；……(请自拟一点)； 4.建议人们多运动。 My favourite sport _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My favourite sport My favourite sport is swimming. I love it because it makes me strong and healthy, and helps me relax. When I swim, I always feel refreshed and energized. However, it’s important to swim safely. We should be accompanied by parents and do warm-up exercises beforehand. It’s also crucial not to swim in unsafe waters. Swimming is a great way to keep fit, and I encourage everyone to engage in sports regularly to stay healthy. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据提示内容进行写作，可适当增添细节，注意行文连贯，并突出重点写作。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍最喜欢的运动是游泳，并表达这项运动的好处； 第二步，介绍做这项运动时的注意事项； 第三步，建议人们多运动。 [亮点词汇] ①be accompanied by sb在某人的陪同下 ②crucial至关重要的 ③keep fit保持健康 [高分句型] ①I love it because it makes me strong and healthy, and helps me relax. (because引导原因状语从句) ②When I swim, I always feel refreshed and energized. (when引导时间状语从句) 5．假如你是李华，你们学校英语广播站正在举行以“健康饮食快乐生活”为主题的英语演讲活动。请根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文参赛。 基本信息 姓名 李华 年龄 13 电话 0531-765836 饮食习惯 喜欢的食物及理由 …… 不喜欢的食物及理由 …… 爱好特长 打网球…… 其他方面 …… 注意： （1）用第一人称； （2）60词左右； （3）文中不得出现真实人名、校名等信息； （4）开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Hello! ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文：     Hello! My name is Li Hua. I am 13 years old. My phone number is 0531-765836.     Good habits are necessary. I eat different kinds of fruit and vegetables. I think they are healthy. I don’t like eating meat because it’s not good for my health and it makes me gain weight. I am good at playing tennis. Doing sports makes me happy and strong. I read books every day because reading gives me a lot of pleasure. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：表格所给内容需完整表达，未提示内容自行补充请勿遗漏。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己的基本信息； 第二步，写出自己的饮食喜好及原由； 第三步，介绍自己的爱好特长等内容。 [亮点词汇] ①different kinds of不同种类的 ②be good for...对……有利 ③be good at擅长做某事 [高分句型] ①I think they are healthy.（宾语从句） ②Doing sports makes me happy and strong.（动名词短语作主语） ③I read books every day because reading gives me a lot of pleasure.（原因状语从句） 6．假如你是王凯，你的笔友Eric来信说对中国美食文化很感兴趣，请给他回邮件介绍你最喜欢的一道菜以及做法，并欢迎对方来中国品尝美食。 要求：(1)语言准确，语句通顺，表达连贯； (2)书写认真规范，不少于80词。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear Eric, I’m glad you’re interested in Chinese food culture. Scrambled Egg with Tomato is one of the traditional dishes in China. We’re going to prepare the ingredients, wash the tomatoes, cut them into small pieces, and the others are going to mix the eggs in a bowl. When everything is ready, it’s time to cook! First, we pour the oil into the pan. Then when you put the eggs in, flip the eggs, add the tomatoes, and you’re done. I hope you come to China to taste the food. Your, Wang Kai 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封书信作文； ②时态：“一般现在时”； ③提示：具体阐述写作内容，丰富细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表达自己对听到笔友对中国美食文化感兴趣的消息的喜悦之情。 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“介绍你最喜欢的一道菜以及做法，并欢迎对方来中国品尝美食”展开，适当补充，丰富细节。 第三步，书写结语，写希望对方来中国品尝美食。 [亮点词汇] ①be interested in…对……感兴趣 ②one of………的其中之一 ③be going to do sth打算做某事 ④cut sth into small pieces把某物切成小块 ⑤pour sth into…把某物倒入…… ⑥come to来 [高分句型] ①When everything is ready, it’s time to cook!（when引导时间状语从句） ②I hope you come to China to taste the food.（hope后接省略that的宾语从句） 7．（以“A special dish for my friend”为题，写一段不少于50字的短文，标点符号不占格。）（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。） The following questions are for reference only. （以下问题仅供参考） 1. What is the special dish? 2. How do you make it? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Today is my friend’s birthday. I make a special dish for him, it is scrambled eggs with tomatoes. First, buy three tomatoes, two eggs. Next, cut up tomatoes and broke eggs. Then, fry tomatoes and eggs. After a few minutes, add some salt. Finally, put in the scallions, and the dish is ready. My friend says it is very nice after eating it. I’m very glad that he likes the dish. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出主题，为朋友做了一份特别的菜。 第二步，介绍做菜的过程。 第三步，表达朋友和自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①cut up切开 ②after a few minutes几分钟后 [高分句型] ①I’m very glad that he likes the dish. (宾语从句) 8．Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “My mother”(以“我的妈妈”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文) Suggested questions: (1) 介绍母亲（外貌、职业、爱好等）； (2) 回顾快乐时光（事件、感受）； (3) …… My mother __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My mother My mother is 39 years old. She is tall and slim. She is a beautiful woman with long black hair and glasses. She works as a nurse. She is patient and kind. She always has a smile on her face. People all like her. She is also hard-working. Sometimes she works at night. My mother likes cooking very much. I think that she can make the most delicious meal in the world. So we often cook together. My mother and I are like friends. We often play and chat together. I remember that we would have a trip together when the holidays came. And each time I had a different harvest. I love my mother very much. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的妈妈，可适当增添细节，注意行文连贯，表述完整并突出重点写作。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍母亲的基本信息； 第二步，介绍自己与母亲一起度过的快乐时光； 第三步，表达自己对母亲的爱。 [亮点词汇] ①hard-working努力的 ②be like像 ③have a smile on one’s face面带微笑 [高分句型] ①She is a beautiful woman with long black hair and glasses. (with表伴随) ②I think that she can make the most delicious meal in the world. (that引导宾语从句) 9．家是我们心灵的港湾，家人是我们人生路上的坚强后盾。假设你是Helen，学校正在举办主题为“My Family”的征稿活动，请根据思维导图给的提示，用英文写一篇短文进行投稿。 注意事项： 1) 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥； 2) 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3) 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名，校名及地名； 4) 词数60左右。 My Family Hello, everyone! I’m Helen. I’m happy to talk about my family. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Family Hello, everyone! I’m Helen. I’m happy to talk about my family. There are three people in my family. They are my mother, my father and I. My father is tall. He is a policeman. My mother is very beautiful. She is a nurse. I am a student in Grade 7. I am very cute. I like hiking with my friends. We often do many things together. We often watch films on weekends. Sometimes, we go to the park for a picnic on Sundays. We feel very happy. I love my family very much and I enjoy the time with my family. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，作者家庭的话题； 第二步，介绍家庭成员的情况； 第三步，介绍家庭的周末活动及感受。 [亮点词汇] ①There are… 有，表示存在或拥有 ②like doing sth. 喜欢做某事 ③watch films  看电影 ④feel happy 感到高兴 [高分句型] I love my family very much and I enjoy the time with my family. (并列句) 10．假设你是初中生Eric，你所在社区的一家动物收容所(animal shelter)正在招募志愿者。请你根据以下提示，给负责人Ms Brown写一封英文邮件，申请成为志愿者。 写作提示： 1. Why do you want to be a volunteer? 2. Did you look after any animals in the past? 3. What can you do for animals? 要求： 1. 短文应包含提示内容，并适当发挥。 2. 词数70左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Ms Brown, I hear your animal shelter needs some volunteers. I’d like to be a volunteer to help the animals.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Eric 【答案】例文 Dear Ms Brown, I hear your animal shelter needs some volunteers. I’d like to be a volunteer to help the animals. I love animals and enjoy playing with them. I hope to give a helping hand to your shelter and learn more skills at the same time. I keep a lovely dog and a cat at home. I know how to feed, clean and play with them. And I also know how to look after them when they’re sick sometimes. I have enough free time to do volunteer work. I believe I can be helpful to your shelter. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Eric 【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，写应聘信，要点要包括题目中提到的所有三个问题，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。 2. 写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，本文应该用第一人称来展开描述；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确精炼，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。 11．Write 5-8 sentences about your school life.（你的学校生活是怎样的？请写5-8句话描述你的学校生活。）My school day The following questions are for references. ① When does your school day start and end? ② What do you like most about your school day? Why? ③ What do you think of your school day? Why? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 My school day starts at half past seven in the morning and ends at four o’clock in the afternoon. I like exercising at school most, because I can run as much as I want. Besides, it keeps a balance between study and health. I think my school day is colorful. Our school not only provides us with various cultural courses, but also many life lessons, like cleaning and cooking. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍学校生活开始和结束的时间。 第二步，介绍在学校最喜欢的事情，并说明原因。 第三步，评价你的学校生活，并说明原因。 [亮点词汇] ① like doing sth. 喜欢做某事 ② keep a balance 保持平衡 ③ provide sb. with sth. 给某人提供某物 [高分句型] ① Our school not only provides us with various cultural courses, but also many life lessons, like cleaning and cooking.（not only...but also...连接句子） 12．动物和人类共处一个世界，是人类的朋友。有的动物美丽，有的动物可爱，有的动物活泼，有的动物腼腆。你最喜欢哪种动物？为什么？请写一篇60词以上的英文短文（不含已给文字），介绍你最喜欢的动物及原因，可适当发挥。 My Favorite Animal There are many animals in the world. But my favorite animal is__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My Favorite Animal There are many animals in the world. But my favorite animal is dog. I like dogs best because they are cute and smart. Many people keep dogs as pets. They can help people do a lot of things and they can also play with people. Dogs have a good sense of smell. So people often ask dogs to find the lost things. Dogs also have a good sense of hearing. They can hear what people can’t hear. Dogs are our friends. We should treat them kindly and protect them. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍最喜欢的动物，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，开门见山介绍最喜欢哪种动物； 第二步，介绍喜欢该动物的原因； 第三步，呼吁大家友好对待并保护该动物。 [亮点词汇] ①like ... best最喜欢 ②play with和……一起玩 ③a good sense of smell良好的嗅觉 [高分句型] ①I like dogs best because they are cute and smart.（because引导原因状语从句） ②They can help people do a lot of things and they can also play with people.（and连接的并列句） 13．一批美国孩子到你家乡的光明动物园来参观熊猫和老虎。假如你是一名志愿解说者，请根据以下内容提示给远道而来的客人做个解说吧。 老虎(Tai Ge)：来自吉林省，4岁，有点懒，喜欢吃肉。 熊猫(Li Li)：来自四川省，3岁，害羞，喜欢吃竹子和睡觉。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Welcome to Guangming Zoo. I want to tell you about two animals—a tiger(Tai Ge) and a panda(Li Li). This is Tai Ge. He is from Jilin. He is four years old. He likes to eat meat. He’ s scary and kind of lazy. This is Li Li. She is from Sichuan. She is three years old. She likes to eat bamboo and she also likes to sleep. She is beautiful, but she is shy, so please be quiet. How cute the two animals are! I hope they can bring you great pleasure. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为解说稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意时态为一般现在时，当第三人称单数作主语时，谓语动词用动词三单形式。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。直接介绍两个动物主角和他们的名字； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。分别介绍老虎和熊猫来自哪里、年龄和特点； 第三步，书写结语。称赞两个动物主角并希望客人玩得开心。 [亮点词汇] ①welcome to 欢迎来到 ②kind of 稍微；有点儿 ③please be quiet 请安静 ④bring sb. sth. 带给某人某物 [高分句型] ①I want to tell you about two animals—a tiger(Tai Ge) and a panda(Li Li).（want to do sth.“想做某事”） ②How cute the two animals are!（How引导的感叹句） 14．Write at least 50 words about the topic “My trip to…”.  (以“My trip to…”为题写一篇不少于50个词的短文，标点符号不占格) Suggested questions: Where will you go? How will you get there? What have you bought for the trip? What will you do there? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My trip to Guilin I will go to Guilin to see my aunt and uncle. They have lived there for several years. My parents will go with me. We are going there by air at Hongqiao Airport. We have bought a lot of local food for my aunt. We have also bought some stamps of 2010 Expo for my uncle. Guilin is a wonderful place. We will go there to see the beautiful mountains and the clear rivers. Certainly, we will take lots of photos. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生先把题目补充完整，然后结合提示问题写出自己的旅行计划。 [写作步骤] 第一步，补全题目，写出旅行的目的地； 第二步，具体介绍自己的旅行计划。 [亮点词汇] ①by air 乘飞机 ②buy sth. for sb. 为某人买某物 ③lots of许多 [高分句型] We will go there to see the beautiful mountains and the clear rivers.（动词不定式作目的状语） 15．Suppose you are going to have a trip to a place again. Write at least 50 words on the topic “The second trip to...”（以“再一次去……旅游”为题写一篇不少于50词的短文，标点符号不占格）。 Suggested points: I. Where are you going to travel again? 2. Why are you going to this place again? 3. What are you going to do in this place? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考例文 The second trip to Guilin I am going to visit Guilin again. It’s my second trip to this place. My aunt and uncle have lived there for several years. They will meet me at the airport. I have bought a lot of local food of Shanghai for them. Guilin is a wonderful place. I have been there with my father and my mother when I was only 7 years old. That was a nice trip. I have visited some beautiful mountains and the clear rivers. And I have made a lot of foreign friends during that trip. Now I am 16 years old, and I will visit it by myself again. I am very exciting. I hope that I can also have a very nice trip! 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍你再一次去哪里旅游； 第二步，介绍其中的理由； 第三步，介绍你要在这里做什么。 [亮点词汇] ①a lot of 很多 ②make friends交朋友 ③have a very nice trip旅途愉快 [高分句型] ①I have been there with my father and my mother when I was only 7 years old.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②I hope that I can also have a very nice trip!（that引导的宾语从句） 16．假如你是王梅，你的澳大利亚笔友Lucy 一家寒假要来中国旅游。他们对于去北京、哈尔滨还是三亚犹豫不决。请你根据思维导图及提示写封邮件给他们推荐一个城市，并讲述一下原因。 提示：1. Which city can they go to? 2. Why is the city a good choice (选择)? (① location 方位 ② weather ③ famous places ④ ...) 要求：1. 短文须包括所有提示内容，并适当发挥； 2. 短文中不能出现真实人名； 3. 词数：60 左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数) Dear Lucy, Welcome to China! ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you will have a good time there. Yours, Wang Mei 【答案】范文： Dear Lucy, Welcome to China! I hear that you can’t decide to go to Beijing, Harbin or Sanya. I think you can go to Harbin. Harbin is in the north of China. The weather is cold in winter. Many people like to visit Harbin in winter. There is an Ice and Snow Festival. You can go by underground after getting off the train. Harbin is famous for Ice-Snow World. What’s more, you can eat a lot of delicious food in Harbin. I hope you will have a good time there. Yours, Wang Mei 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，推荐对方去哈尔滨； 第二步，介绍哈尔滨的位置、天气、著名的景点等； 第三步，表达期待。 [亮点词汇] ①decide to do sth决定做某事 ②in the north of 在……北部 ③get off下车 ④be famous for因……而著名 [高分句型] ①There is an Ice and Snow Festival. (there be句型) ②I hope you will have a good time there. (省略that的宾语从句) 17．你是Li Ming，你的外国网友Bill对你的饮食习惯和运动习惯很感兴趣。请你根据表格提示，用英语给Bill写一封电子邮件，介绍你的习惯。 注意：（1）表达正确，语句通顺； （2）邮件须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥； （3）60词左右（邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 早饭 午饭 晚饭 晚饭后 Dear Bill, Let me tell you something about my habits.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Ming 【答案】例文 Dear Bill, Let me tell you something about my habits. I like to have eggs, bread and milk for breakfast. I often have rice, chicken and ice cream for lunch. For dinner, I eat rice, carrots and tomatoes. After dinner, I often eat apples or pears. To keep healthy, I often play sports after dinner. Sometimes I run in the park. Sometimes I play basketball or football with my friends. What about your habits? I look forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Ming 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中自己的饮食习惯和运动习惯的介绍。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己一日三餐的饮食习惯； 第二步，介绍晚饭后自己的饮食习惯和运动习惯； 第三步，书写结束语。表达“期待收到回信”的想法。 [亮点词汇] ① After dinner晚饭后 ② eat apples吃苹果 ③ keep healthy保持健康 ④ look forward to期待 [高分句型] ① I like to have eggs, bread and milk for breakfast.（短语like to+动词原形） ② For dinner, I eat rice, carrots and tomatoes.（for+三餐） ③ To keep healthy, I often play sports after dinner.（不定式表目的） 18．每年的8月8日是“全民健身日”，为了让这项活动更加深入人心，某英文杂志的“运动与健康”栏目正在以Let’s Do Exercise Together为题，向广大中学生征文。内容提示： 运动的重要性 运动的时间与方式 ●保持健康 ●丰富生活 ● …… ● 日常步行或骑自行车到学校 ● 上体育课时做各种锻炼 (跑步、打篮球……) ● 周末与朋友去爬山、游泳等 ● …… 写作要求： (1)须包含以上提示信息，并进行适当补充。 (2)词数在80左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 (3)文中不能出现个人真实姓名和校名。 Let’s Do Exercise Together August 8th is Fitness Day in China.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Let’s Do Exercise Together August 8th is Fitness Day in China. It’s very important for us to do exercise. Doing exercise can not only help us keep fit, but also help to enrich our life. What’s more, doing exercise helps us to study better. We can do exercise whenever we want. It is good for us to go to school on foot or by bike. In PE classes, we can do all kinds of exercise, such as running, jumping, playing basketball and so on. On weekends, we can climb mountains or go swimming with our friends. Also, we can go hiking during the vacations. Let’s do exercise and have a healthy lifestyle together! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍运动的重要性； 第二步，根据提示介绍运动的时间与方式； 第三步，最后呼吁大家一起锻炼身体，拥有健康的生活方式。 [亮点词汇] ①not only... but also...不仅……而且…… ②help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事 ③all kinds of各种各样的 [高分句型] ①We can do exercise whenever we want.（whenever引导的让步状语从句） ②It is good for us to go to school on foot or by bike.（固定句型It is+adj.+for sb.+to do sth.） 19．Write a passage of at least 50 words on the topic “My favorite club” with the help of the following questions. 以“我最喜欢的俱乐部”为题写一篇最少50个单词的作文，标点符号不占格。 1.What is your favourite club? 2.What do you do in the club? 3.When and where do you have the activities in the club? 4.What do you think of the club? _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My favorite club My favourite club is Basketball Club. I love sports and playing basketball can make me stronger. Every day, we begin to practice in the playground after 4：00 p.m. When it rains, we would play it in the gym. When I play basketball, I would feel very excited and happy. In the club, we often have games, and our team often wins the games. I’m happy here. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出“我最喜欢的俱乐部”的话题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“俱乐部名称、活动、感受”等方面进行介绍； 第三步，书写结语，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①favourite最喜欢的 ②begin to do开始做某事 ③playground操场 [高分句型] When I play basketball, I would feel very excited and happy.（when引导的时间状语从句） 20．Write at least 60 words on the topic “Be friends with animals”. （以“和动物做朋友”为题写话，至少60个单词，标点符号不计入。） Before writing, you may think about… ♢Why is it important to be kind to animals as our friends? ♢What can we do in our daily life to be friendly to animals? （注意：文章不得出现考生真实姓名、校名等其他相关信息，否则不给予评分。） _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Be friends with animals Animals are very important to us, because they play an important role in balancing our ecosystem and stabilizing natural processes. Also, we rely on animals for food, labor and companionship. Without animals, the world will not be as colorful and different as it is today. To be friends with animals, we can help the communities and groups that take care of animal life in our regions. Moreover, it’s beneficial to recycle as much as plastic products as possible to reduce pollution in the sea and soil, by which we can do a favor to leave more land for animals. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：要求以“Be friends with animals”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍把动物当朋友的重要性； 第二步，针对我们能做些什么来对动物友好给出建议。 [亮点词汇] ①play an important role in在……中扮演重要角色 ②rely on依靠 ③take care of照顾 ④do a favor帮忙 [高分句型] ①Animals are very important to us, because they play an important role in balancing our ecosystem and stabilizing natural processes. （原因状语从句） ②To be friends with animals, we can help the communities and groups that take care of animal life in our regions.（定语从句） 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 1 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$