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专题13 书面表达(满分范文,20篇)
1.(23-24九年级上·江苏泰州·期末)幸福是什么?幸福是忙碌后的一杯清茶;幸福是迷茫时的一本好书;幸福是寒夜中的 一盏明灯!幸福是父母为你营造的温馨的家;幸福是老师望向你的赞许的目光;幸福是朋友送来的一份甜点;幸福是……请你以“My Happiness”为话题,结合亲身经历,谈谈你对幸福的看法。
要点:
1. 你对于幸福的定义;
2. 一件曾经发生过的令你感到幸福的事情;
3. 你的感受与感悟。
要求:
1. 条理清晰,语言流畅,用词准确,字迹工整;
2. 100 词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 文中不得出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
My Happiness
Happiness is important in our life.
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Happiness is important in our lives. In fact, happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it.
I will never forget one thing that happened to me. Once, I got a bad mark in a math test. I was sad and afraid to go home, because I was afraid of being blamed. But when I got back home late, my parents knew what had happened. To my surprise, they said to me in a kind voice, “It doesn’t matter, my dear. Remember we’ll always be with you whenever you need help. We believe you can be better next time. Never give up!” I was moved and made up my mind to work harder and harder. I feel happy.
Courage from my parents when I am frustrated will make me the happiest person in the world. Whenever I am in trouble, I can feel my parents’ love. In the future, I want to be a person who can be the pride of my parents.
2.(23-24九年级上·江苏南通·期末)新年伊始,学校英语社团将举行以“Look back on the past, Hope for the future”为主题的英语征文大赛。请根据下图提示,就本学期一次难忘的经历谈谈收获及感受,并写写新学期的希望和打算。
注意:
1. 词数在90词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
2. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Look back on the past, Hope for the future
This term is nearly over. As the saying goes “No pain, no gain”. During this term, I experienced a lot.
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3.(23-24九年级上·江苏无锡·期末)
青春期是我们成长的必经之路,往往伴随着各种各样的困扰。Teenagers校刊针对当前青少年面临的问题进行了调查,结果如图所示。请你以“Teenage Problems”为题,写一篇短文,分别介绍你已经解决和依然存在的问题,谈谈具体表现和解决方法。
注意事项:
1. 短文须自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;
2. 词数在100个左右;
3. 短文中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息;
4. 短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
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4.(23-24九年级上·江苏盐城·期末)某英文网站正在开展以“天道酬勤”为主题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿,讲述你通过勤奋,获得成功的经历,并谈谈你的感受。
提示问题:
What did you achieve by working hard?
What did you do to achieve it?
How did you feel about it?
注意事项:1.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;2.词数:100词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总次数);3.文章必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
Diligence is a must for us to realize our dreams.____________________________________________________
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5.(23-24九年级上·江苏泰州·期末)我们的家乡泰兴,迄今有一千多年历史,素有“教育之乡”、“银杏之乡”、“建筑之乡”、“提琴之乡”等美誉。为了探寻家乡文化,你校结合“泰兴元素”在上周举办了为期三天的“文化节”活动 (Cultural Festival)。请根据表格中的信息并结合自身经历,用英语写一篇关于“文化节”的报告。
注意:
1. 短文必须包括表格中的所有要点,并适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
3. 词数100左右;标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
When
What I did
What I learned
Feelings
Monday
visit Taixing Museum
…
the long history of the city
Tuesday
visit Huangqiao Ancient Town (黄桥古镇)
taste Huangqiao Sesame Cake (黄桥烧饼)
…
…
…
Wednesday
visit National Ancient Ginkgo Forest Park (国家古银杏森林公园)
…
Cultural Festival
Last week, our school organized an activity — “Cultural Festival”. I was happy that I learned a lot about our hometown.
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6.(23-24九年级上·江苏宿迁·期末)岁月不负追梦人。谭盾的音乐梦始于兴趣,韦伯的篮球梦敬于执着,赫本的演员梦久于大善。最近,你班就“Our dreams”展开了一次讨论。下面是你们小组的谈论情况汇总,请你根据所给要点写一篇英语短文向英语校刊投稿。
Name
Dream
Jimmy
想当侦探,找出真相,防范危险。
Millie
想当舞蹈家,搭建东西方艺术的桥梁。
I
想当青少年辅导员,帮助青少年解决压力问题。
为了实现梦想,努力学习,……(自拟一点)
参考词汇:侦探 detective 青少年辅导员 youth worker 压力 stress
注意:
1. 短文须包括所给内容要点,要求语句通顺、意思连贯;
2. 不得出现真实姓名,校名等;省略号处作适当发挥;
3. 90 词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Our dreams
Recently, we have held a discussion to talk about our dreams. Here is the report about our ideas. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7.(23-24九年级上·江苏扬州·期末) 三年的初中生活让你收获满满。假如你校英语报邀请你写一篇短文,谈谈你初中三年学习生活的感受,并给学弟学妹们提一些如何适应初中生活的建议。请你结合自己的学习(或生活)经历,根据以下提示和要求,用英语完成一篇短文。
Have a Meaningful School Life
你三年的学习生活感受。
你的收获:
学习上; 课外生活。
你的建议:
1.保持身心健康;
2.(补充 1—2 点)
要求:
(1) 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
(2) 必须包括提示中的所有信息,并按要求适当发挥;
(3) 词数:100 词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(4) 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
How time flies! My three years of middle school life is coming to an end.
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I hope you will enjoy your school life and achieve your dreams.
8.(23-24九年级上·江苏扬州·期末)近日,学校英文报刊开设了有关作业问题的专栏,你所在班级围绕作业问题进行了讨论,同学们表达了自己的观点,请根据以下提示,用英文写一篇简要的报告向专栏投稿,介绍班级讨论的结果,并表明自己的观点。
大部分同学
●帮助复习所学知识
●帮助学生学会独立解决问题
●完成作业是学生的职责,应合理安排好时间
……
少部分同学
●作业量大,耗时多,影响休息或不能做喜欢做的事情
●有些作业机械重复,不感兴趣
……
你自己
……
要求:
1. 内容必须包括以上所有要点,须按照要求适当发挥,补充细节。
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,字迹工整。
3. 不少于100词,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
4. 文中不得出现真实人名、地点或校名。
What Do We Think of Our Homework?
Recently, our class has talked about “homework”. We have different ideas about it.
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9.(23-24九年级上·江苏无锡·期末)寒假即将来临,请以“How to have a meaningful winter holiday”为题写一篇演讲稿,给你的同学们讲一讲应该如何过一个充实而有意义的寒假。
要点如下:
学习
(1)仔细计划好每一天;
(2)……(至少一点);
阅读
(1)多看书,因为……(至少一点);
(2)推荐一本书;
听音乐
(1)自小就对音乐感兴趣,因为……(至少一点);
(2)计划……(至少一点);
看电影
(1)推荐一部值得看的电影;
(2)……是你最喜欢的演员之一,因为……(至少一点)。
注意事项:
(1)词数100左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
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10.(23-24九年级上·江苏宿迁·期末)学期即将结束,学校评选本学期优秀团员。假如你是李华,请写一篇推荐张波同学为优秀团员的短文。要求如下:
基本情况
张波, 九 (1) 班班长;
有绘画天赋, 喜欢红色, 因为……(自拟一点)。
兴趣爱好
1.喜欢观看纪录片, 因为……(自拟一点);
2.喜欢音乐, 最喜欢乡村音乐, 因为……(自拟一点)。
优秀事迹
1.富有爱心,上个月把零用钱捐给甘肃地震灾区的人们;
2.乐于助人, 这个学期, 帮助警察找到小偷;
3.……(自拟一点)。
未来梦想
希望成为一名工程师,为家乡沭阳设计出连接北京的高铁。
注意: (1) 词数90 左右;
(2) 短文应包括所给内容要点,可适当发挥,使文章连贯;
(3) 表达中请勿提及真实校名、姓名。
Dear sir/madam,
Zhang Bo is the monitor of Class 1, Grade 9. I would like to recommend him as an excellent League Member this term.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
We think Zhang Bo is the most suitable person to be an excellent League Member. We hope that you can agree with us.
Yours,
Li Hua
11.(23-24九年级上·江苏连云港·期末)走进艺术世界,感受艺术魅力。你校英语社团正在组织“Enjoy Art”学习交流活动。假如你是李华,请你根据以下图式,写一篇英语发言稿参加活动。
注意:
(1)词数90左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)发言稿应包括所给内容要点,可适当发挥,使文章连贯;
(3)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
Enjoy Art
Hello, I am Li Hua. I’m happy to give you a speech on enjoying art.
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That’s all for my speech. Thanks for listening!
12.(23-24九年级上·江苏扬州·期末)生命,对于每个人来说只有一次,我们该如何保护自己的人身安全呢?Teens正在举办以“Protect Ourselves,Cherish (珍爱) Our Lives”为题的征文活动,请你从提供的六个类别里选择三个,谈谈相应的保护自身安全的措施,并分享你的体会。
Contents (内容)
Categories (类别)
school safety
food safety
traffic safety
Internet safety
life safety
electricity safety
Solutions (措施)
......(请按你自选的三类内容分别写两点)
Understanding (体会)
cherish our lives;......(请写1-2点)
提示词汇: electricity safety用电安全 cherish 珍爱 vt.
注意:
词数100词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
内容须包括所给要点,可适当发挥,条理清楚、语句连贯;
文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等信息。
Protect Ourselves,Cherish Our Lives
Safety is very important. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
13.(23-24九年级上·江苏宿迁·期末)随着现代科技的发展,机器人已经来到我们身边,而且给我们的生活带来了便利。请根据下表所述内容,介绍家用机器人的基本情况,并就如何更好地让机器人为我们服务提出建议。
简介
家用机器人使用范围广,受到了人们的欢迎。
主要功能
1.你有更多的时间从事自己的爱好,可以帮助你做家务,如洗衣服,做饭,打扫卫生;
2.可以做像灭火或高空工作之类的危险工作;
3.在学校机器人可以帮助学生学习,在很多方面帮助老师。
存在问题
1.容易感染病毒,犯愚蠢的错误;有时会把家里搞得一团糟;
2.价格偏高,普通家庭消费不起。
你的建议
……(至少两点)
[要求]
1.表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2.必须包括表格中所有的相关信息,并进行适当发挥;
3.词数100左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数);
4.不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
[参考词汇] 家用机器人 home robots
With the development of modern science and technology, robots have entered our lives, which brings great convenience to us.
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14.(23-24九年级上·江苏镇江·期末)假如你是李华,阳光英语社团提供了两位笔友的基本信息,你想选择其中一名作为你的笔友,请用英语介绍他(她)的情况,并谈一谈你选择的理由。
Name
Lucy (from China)
Steven (from America)
Personality
creative, outgoing
helpful, energetic
Hobby
music
films
Hero
Tan Dun
Audrey Hepburn
Dream
a music teacher
a volunteer
要求:
(1)所写内容必须包括其中一位笔友的所有信息,需适当发挥;
(2)请说明你选择的理由;
(3)词数:不少于90词,文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等信息。
Sunshine English Club has provided some information about two excellent pen friends. I would like to choose ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
15.(23-24九年级上·江苏无锡·期末)“双减”政策推行之后,中学生的学习生活发生了很大的变化。为了达成“五育”并举的培养目标,学校在延时服务时段开展了丰富多彩的社团活动。以“The Art Club I Enjoy Most”为题写一篇短文。
• Which club do you enjoy?
• Why do you join it?
• What do you do in it?
• What can you learn from it?
要求:
1. 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2. 须包含要点提示中的所有信息,可适当发挥;
3. 词数100左右;
4. 不得使用真实姓名和校名。
The Art Club I Enjoy Most
I’m a student in Grade 9.
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16.(23-24九年级上·江苏·期末)家庭对你意味着什么?每个人都有不同的理解, 请以 “A home means ________ for me” 为题,用英语写一件发生在你家中有趣的,或者让你学到知识的,或者让你感受到关爱的,或者让你明白人生道理的,或者其他的经历,并简要谈谈你对家的理解。
要求: 1、补全题目,并围绕自拟题目适当发挥,使行文连贯,通顺,完成一篇文章;
2、字数100词左右;
3、文中不得出现真实的校名、人名。
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17.(23-24九年级上·江苏扬州·期末)成长像一次长途旅行,成长过程中有收获,也有困惑。请以“My growing up”为题,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你成长过程中的点滴和你的感受。
提示:
(1) How do you learn about the world? (2 points)
(2) What is your problem? How do you solve it?
(3) What are your feelings during the process of growing up? (2 points)
要求:
(1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
(2)必须包括所有要点内容,并适当发挥;
(3)语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清晰,书写规范;
(4)词数100词左右,文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My growing up
Growing up is like a journey, full of discoveries and challenges. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
18.(23-24九年级上·江苏常州·期末)掌握日常生活技能(如烹饪、种植、修理、救护方法……) 能增强青少年的自信心,形成独立自主能力,提高生活质量和健康水平。请结合下列提示,以“Little life skills are a big help”为题,用英语写一篇短文在课堂上分享。
提示:
1. What life skills do you have?
2. Which life skill do you think is the most useful, and why?
注意:
1. 内容须涵盖所有要点,并适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 词数:100词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Little life skills are a big help
Life skills are necessary for us teenagers. They help us live more healthily and happily. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
19.(23-24九年级上·江苏泰州·期末)请根据阳光中学校刊English Corner栏目的征稿内容,用英语写一篇短文,表达你的想法。
As we all know, art plays an important role in our life. So this week, we want to know your ideas about the topic “My favourite art form”.
·What is your favourite art form?
·What do you know about this art form?
·Do you have stories about it?
We are sure you have a lot to say. We are looking forward to hearing from you soon.
注意:(1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
(2)语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
(3)词数100左右。
My favourite art form
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20.(23-24九年级上·江苏扬州·期末)一个榜样不仅具备优秀的能力和品质,更重要的是他的人格魅力和对社会贡献的付出。生命中总有一些值得我们学习的榜样。最近,江苏教育电视台将举办题为“The Great Person I Admire Most”的英语演讲比赛,请根据以下流程图写一篇英文演讲稿参加比赛。
要求:
(1)必须包括提示中的所有信息,并按要求适当发挥;
(2)词数 100 词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(3)不得使用真实姓名、校名等。
The Great Person I Admire Most
It is my great honour to stand here to make a speech.
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专题13 书面表达(满分范文,20篇)
1.(23-24九年级上·江苏泰州·期末)幸福是什么?幸福是忙碌后的一杯清茶;幸福是迷茫时的一本好书;幸福是寒夜中的 一盏明灯!幸福是父母为你营造的温馨的家;幸福是老师望向你的赞许的目光;幸福是朋友送来的一份甜点;幸福是……请你以“My Happiness”为话题,结合亲身经历,谈谈你对幸福的看法。
要点:
1. 你对于幸福的定义;
2. 一件曾经发生过的令你感到幸福的事情;
3. 你的感受与感悟。
要求:
1. 条理清晰,语言流畅,用词准确,字迹工整;
2. 100 词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 文中不得出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
My Happiness
Happiness is important in our life.
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【答案】例文
My Happiness
Happiness is important in our lives. In fact, happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it.
I will never forget one thing that happened to me. Once, I got a bad mark in a math test. I was sad and afraid to go home, because I was afraid of being blamed. But when I got back home late, my parents knew what had happened. To my surprise, they said to me in a kind voice, “It doesn’t matter, my dear. Remember we’ll always be with you whenever you need help. We believe you can be better next time. Never give up!” I was moved and made up my mind to work harder and harder. I feel happy.
Courage from my parents when I am frustrated will make me the happiest person in the world. Whenever I am in trouble, I can feel my parents’ love. In the future, I want to be a person who can be the pride of my parents.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作方向已给出,写作时注意不要遗漏提示内容,注意表述清晰,逻辑连贯,做到无语法和单词拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步,总体说明如果你用心感受,幸福是无处不在的;
第二步,介绍曾经发生在自己身上的幸福的事情;
第三步,写出父母的爱对我成长的作用。
[亮点词汇]
①happen to sb.发生在某人身上
②be afraid to do sth.害怕做某事
③to one’s surprise令某人吃惊的
④give up放弃
⑤in trouble处于困难中
⑥make one’s mind to do sth.下定决心做某事
[高分句型]
① I will never forget one thing that happened to me. (that 引导的定语从句)
②I was moved and made up my mind to work harder and harder. (make one’s mind to do sth.下定决心做某事)
2.(23-24九年级上·江苏南通·期末)新年伊始,学校英语社团将举行以“Look back on the past, Hope for the future”为主题的英语征文大赛。请根据下图提示,就本学期一次难忘的经历谈谈收获及感受,并写写新学期的希望和打算。
注意:
1. 词数在90词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
2. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Look back on the past, Hope for the future
This term is nearly over. As the saying goes “No pain, no gain”. During this term, I experienced a lot.
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【答案】例文
This term is nearly over. As the saying says “No pain, no gain”. During this term, I experienced a lot.
Last October, I quarreled with mother about the time I spent on hobbies. I thought hobbies helped me relax but she didn’t think so. I felt upset then. Luckily, there were many true friends who offered me valuable advice. Now I can get along better with Mother and have a deeper understanding of her love.
Next term, we’ll face an important exam. I hope to be successful. So I plan to use my time more wisely. I decide to list my goals and try to make them come true.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”,描述过去的经历用“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容,适当增加细节,并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,描述过去的经历及感受;
第二步,描绘新学期的希望和打算。
[亮点词汇]
①quarrel吵架
②upset心烦
③valuable advice有价值的建议
④wisely明智地
[高分句型]
①Last October, I quarreled with mother about the time I spent on hobbies. (定语从句)
②I thought hobbies helped me relax but she didn’t think so. (宾语从句)
3.(23-24九年级上·江苏无锡·期末)
青春期是我们成长的必经之路,往往伴随着各种各样的困扰。Teenagers校刊针对当前青少年面临的问题进行了调查,结果如图所示。请你以“Teenage Problems”为题,写一篇短文,分别介绍你已经解决和依然存在的问题,谈谈具体表现和解决方法。
注意事项:
1. 短文须自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;
2. 词数在100个左右;
3. 短文中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息;
4. 短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
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【答案】例文:
Teenage Problems
In our growth process, we will always encounter various problems. I wasn’t very good at sports in the past. Later, with the encouragement of my teacher, I now enjoy sports, especially playing basketball. So I am very slim and healthy. I used to have a lot of homework and finished very late every day. But now I have very little homework. I can complete them at school. However, there are still some problems that we cannot solve very well now. For example, I have almost no friends. Sometimes my relationship with my parents is not very good.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:考生应根据图片中的调查结果,紧扣主题进行写作,介绍已经解决和依然存在的问题,谈谈具体表现和解决方法,可适当添加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山,表明写作意图,介绍青少年的问题;
第二步,详细介绍已经解决的问题;
第三步,具体阐述依然存在的问题。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at擅长
②with the encouragement of sb.在某人的鼓励下
③enjoy doing sth.享受做某事
④used to do sth.过去常常做某事
[高分句型]
①But there are still some problems that we cannot solve very well now. (定语从句)
4.(23-24九年级上·江苏盐城·期末)某英文网站正在开展以“天道酬勤”为主题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿,讲述你通过勤奋,获得成功的经历,并谈谈你的感受。
提示问题:
What did you achieve by working hard?
What did you do to achieve it?
How did you feel about it?
注意事项:1.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;2.词数:100词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总次数);3.文章必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
Diligence is a must for us to realize our dreams.____________________________________________________
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【答案】例文
Diligence is a must for us to realize our dreams. I never realized it until I tried every effort to win the English speech competition last year.
It was quite a big challenge for me because I was not confident about my oral English and I was too shy to speak in public. To give a better performance, I made full use of my spare time to prepare for it. I recorded my lines and asked my foreign teacher to correct my pronunciation. Then I kept practising day and night. Besides, I seized every chance to speak in front of my family or friends. The more I practised, the more confident I became. In the end, I won the competition and got a prize. It was so great that all my efforts paid off. I felt so proud of myself.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文。
②时态:本文应使用“一般过去时”为主。
③提示:写作要点应注意题干给出的“通过勤奋,获得成功的经历”并适当补充,使文章内容充实,行文应使用第一人称。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点题,说明勤奋的重要性。
第二步,具体介绍自己的一次通过勤奋获得成功的经历。
第三步,收尾,说明这次经历带给自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①in public当众
②prepare for准备
[高分句型]
①It was quite a big challenge for me because I was not confident about my oral English and I was too shy to speak in public.(because引导的原因状语从句)
②To give a better performance, I made full use of my spare time to prepare for it.(不定式作目的状语)
5.(23-24九年级上·江苏泰州·期末)我们的家乡泰兴,迄今有一千多年历史,素有“教育之乡”、“银杏之乡”、“建筑之乡”、“提琴之乡”等美誉。为了探寻家乡文化,你校结合“泰兴元素”在上周举办了为期三天的“文化节”活动 (Cultural Festival)。请根据表格中的信息并结合自身经历,用英语写一篇关于“文化节”的报告。
注意:
1. 短文必须包括表格中的所有要点,并适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
3. 词数100左右;标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
When
What I did
What I learned
Feelings
Monday
visit Taixing Museum
…
the long history of the city
Tuesday
visit Huangqiao Ancient Town (黄桥古镇)
taste Huangqiao Sesame Cake (黄桥烧饼)
…
…
…
Wednesday
visit National Ancient Ginkgo Forest Park (国家古银杏森林公园)
…
Cultural Festival
Last week, our school organized an activity — “Cultural Festival”. I was happy that I learned a lot about our hometown.
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【答案】例文
Last week, our school organized an activity — “Cultural Festival”. I was happy that I learned a lot about our hometown.
Last Monday, I visited Taixing Museum with my classmates and enjoyed the beauty of traditional works of art. Everyone was excited to learn about the long history of Taixing. We all enjoyed ourselves.
The next day, I went to Huangqiao Ancient Town, a beautiful town in the east of Taixing. It was exciting that I tasted Huangqiao Sesame Cake. I also saw many old houses there. Now Huangqiao is well-known around the country and attracts a lot of tourists every year.
Taixing is known as the home of Ginkgo, so I visited National Ancient Ginkgo Forest Park on Wednesday. It was wonderful to see lots of ancient ginkgo trees there. I was very happy to learn that the ginkgo products in our hometown are very popular.
These experiences have not only helped me have a better understanding of our city, but also left a lasting influence on my heart and mind.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”,描述经历用“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏表格中信息提示的内容,适当增加细节,并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,分段介绍周一至周三的行程以及学到的东西;
第二步,书写结语,表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①traditional works of art传统艺术作品
②excited兴奋的
③attract吸引
④lasting持久的
[高分句型]
①I was very happy to learn that the ginkgo products in our hometown are very popular. (宾语从句)
②These experiences have not only helped me have a better understanding of our city, but also left a lasting influence on my heart and mind. (并列句)
6.(23-24九年级上·江苏宿迁·期末)岁月不负追梦人。谭盾的音乐梦始于兴趣,韦伯的篮球梦敬于执着,赫本的演员梦久于大善。最近,你班就“Our dreams”展开了一次讨论。下面是你们小组的谈论情况汇总,请你根据所给要点写一篇英语短文向英语校刊投稿。
Name
Dream
Jimmy
想当侦探,找出真相,防范危险。
Millie
想当舞蹈家,搭建东西方艺术的桥梁。
I
想当青少年辅导员,帮助青少年解决压力问题。
为了实现梦想,努力学习,……(自拟一点)
参考词汇:侦探 detective 青少年辅导员 youth worker 压力 stress
注意:
1. 短文须包括所给内容要点,要求语句通顺、意思连贯;
2. 不得出现真实姓名,校名等;省略号处作适当发挥;
3. 90 词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Our dreams
Recently, we have held a discussion to talk about our dreams. Here is the report about our ideas. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Our dreams
Recently, we have held a discussion to talk about our dreams. Here is the report about our ideas.
Jimmy wants to be a detective. He is good at solving mysteries and he can always find out the truth. In addition, he hopes we can guard against any possible danger around us.
Millie would like to be a dancer. All her teachers and classmates think she has a real gift for Chinese ballet. So she insists that she will build a bridge between the East and the West by dancing.
As for me, I prefer to be a youth worker, especially to help teenagers solve their stress. I’m willing to give them valuable suggestions on how to deal with teenage problems.
In order to realize our dreams, we must study hard to improve ourselves. Moreover, we should be brave enough to take on new challenges any time in our daily life. Then we can succeed in making our dreams come true.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:以“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏任何要点提示,可适当添加细节,使作文内容意思连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接已给出的开头,详细介绍小组讨论后的情况汇总——每个人的梦想;
第二步,介绍该如何实现梦想。
[亮点词汇]
① want to be 想成为
② be good at 擅长
③ find out 查明
④ have a gift for 有……的天赋/才能
⑤ be willing to 愿意去做某事
⑥ succeed in doing sth. 成功做某事
[高分句型]
① In addition, he hopes we can guard against any possible danger around us. (宾语从句)
② I’m willing to give them valuable suggestions on how to deal with teenage problems. (“疑问词+不定式”作宾语)
7.(23-24九年级上·江苏扬州·期末) 三年的初中生活让你收获满满。假如你校英语报邀请你写一篇短文,谈谈你初中三年学习生活的感受,并给学弟学妹们提一些如何适应初中生活的建议。请你结合自己的学习(或生活)经历,根据以下提示和要求,用英语完成一篇短文。
Have a Meaningful School Life
你三年的学习生活感受。
你的收获:
学习上; 课外生活。
你的建议:
1.保持身心健康;
2.(补充 1—2 点)
要求:
(1) 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
(2) 必须包括提示中的所有信息,并按要求适当发挥;
(3) 词数:100 词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(4) 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
How time flies! My three years of middle school life is coming to an end.
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I hope you will enjoy your school life and achieve your dreams.
【答案】例文:
How time flies! My three years of middle school life is coming to an end. In the last three years, I have made great progress.
Although I was not very good at several subjects at the beginning, I am now very good at them with the help of my teachers and classmates. I have fallen in love with playing basketball since I was in Grade Seven. I often play basketball with my classmates when I am free. So I’ve made a lot of friends. I’ve been a member of the basketball club for three years.
Here I’d like to tell you something to make your school life more meaningful. First of all, it is important for you to keep healthy, so don’t forget to exercise every day and have a balanced diet. You should always look on the bright side when you’re in trouble. Second, you’ll be able to make great progress if you develop your study skills. Besides, you should finish the exercises on your own.
I hope you will enjoy your school life and achieve your dreams.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:一般现在时,现在完成时;
③提示:结合表格所列出的要点提示,完成短文,注意避免语法错误,不要遗漏写作要点,可适当增加细节,确保上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步:总体介绍初中三年的感受—— 取得了很大进步;
第二步:介绍你在学习上和课外生活上的收获;
第三步:介绍你给学弟学妹的建议;
第四步:书写结语——希望大家都能实现梦想。
[亮点词汇]
①make great progress 取得很大进步
②fall in love with... 爱上……
③on one’s own 独自
[高分句型]
①Although I was not very good at several subjects at the beginning, I am now very good at them with the help of my teachers and classmates. (although引导的让步状语从句)
②Second, you’ll be able to make great progress if you develop your study skills. (if引导的条件状语从句)
8.(23-24九年级上·江苏扬州·期末)近日,学校英文报刊开设了有关作业问题的专栏,你所在班级围绕作业问题进行了讨论,同学们表达了自己的观点,请根据以下提示,用英文写一篇简要的报告向专栏投稿,介绍班级讨论的结果,并表明自己的观点。
大部分同学
●帮助复习所学知识
●帮助学生学会独立解决问题
●完成作业是学生的职责,应合理安排好时间
……
少部分同学
●作业量大,耗时多,影响休息或不能做喜欢做的事情
●有些作业机械重复,不感兴趣
……
你自己
……
要求:
1. 内容必须包括以上所有要点,须按照要求适当发挥,补充细节。
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,字迹工整。
3. 不少于100词,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
4. 文中不得出现真实人名、地点或校名。
What Do We Think of Our Homework?
Recently, our class has talked about “homework”. We have different ideas about it.
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【答案】Possible Version:
Recently, our class has talked about “homework”. We have different ideas about it.
Most students have positive attitudes towards homework. They think homework can not only help them go over what they’ve learnt before but also help them deal with the problems alone. Also, they think it’s a student’s duty to finish the homework and they need to plan their time carefully. Of course, they all think homework can improve their study and help them get high marks in the exams.
However, a few students don’t think so. First, they think it takes so much time to do lots of homework that they have little time to rest or do anything they like. Second, they have to do the same boring exercises many times. As a result, they have no interest in homework anymore. And sometimes they can’t keep a balance between homework and their hobbies.
In my opinion, I think it’s important for us to do our homework on time. Homework can help us consolidate our knowledge. Make a good plan before doing homework so that we can have more time for our interests.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:方向已给出,写作时注意表述清晰、逻辑连贯,做到无语法和单词拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接开头,点明主题;
第二步,分别给出大部分同学和少部分同学的观点;
第三步,给出个人观点。
[亮点词汇]
①not only...but also...不仅……而且……
②deal with处理
③go over复习
④as a result结果
⑤keep a balance between在某事与某事间保持平衡
⑥on time准时
⑦consolidate巩固
[高分句型]
①They think homework can not only help them go over what they’ve learnt before but also help them deal with the problems alone.(句型:宾语从句,that省略)
②they think it’s a student’s duty to finish the homework and they need to plan their time carefully.(句型:宾语从句,that省略)
③they all think homework can improve their study and help them get high marks in the exams.(句型:宾语从句,that省略)
④they think it takes so much time to do lots of homework that they have little time to rest or do anything they like.(句型:宾语从句,that省略)
⑤it takes so much time to do lots of homework that they have little time to rest or do anything they like(句型:结果状语从句,so...that引导)
⑥Make a good plan before doing homework so that we can have more time for our interests(句型:目的状语从句,so that引导)
9.(23-24九年级上·江苏无锡·期末)寒假即将来临,请以“How to have a meaningful winter holiday”为题写一篇演讲稿,给你的同学们讲一讲应该如何过一个充实而有意义的寒假。
要点如下:
学习
(1)仔细计划好每一天;
(2)……(至少一点);
阅读
(1)多看书,因为……(至少一点);
(2)推荐一本书;
听音乐
(1)自小就对音乐感兴趣,因为……(至少一点);
(2)计划……(至少一点);
看电影
(1)推荐一部值得看的电影;
(2)……是你最喜欢的演员之一,因为……(至少一点)。
注意事项:
(1)词数100左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
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【答案】例文
How to have a meaningful winter holiday
Dear classmates,
The winter holiday is coming. To make it meaningful, I have some good ideas to share with you.
We should plan our time carefully. It’s a good way to make a list of all the homework so that we can finish it in time. Reading can help us learn more about the world. Reading is fun. The Diary of a Young Girl is my favourite. Listening to different kinds of music is a good choice. I have been interested in music since I was a child, because it makes me relax. I’m going to learn to play the guitar. I will see a movie called Roman Holiday. Audrey Hepburn is one of my favorite actresses, because she won the best actress award for her role in the film.
Wish you all have a happy and meaningful winter holiday!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:根据表格内容介绍应该如何过一个充实而有意义的寒假,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题;
第二步,详细介绍应该如何过一个充实而有意义的寒假;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①make a list of列出……的清单
②be interested in对……感兴趣
③play the guitar弹吉他
[高分句型]
①It’s a good way to make a list of all the homework so that we can finish it in time. (so that引导的目的状语从句)
②I have been interested in music since I was a child, because it makes me relax. (since引导的时间状语从句,because引导的原因状语从句)
10.(23-24九年级上·江苏宿迁·期末)学期即将结束,学校评选本学期优秀团员。假如你是李华,请写一篇推荐张波同学为优秀团员的短文。要求如下:
基本情况
张波, 九 (1) 班班长;
有绘画天赋, 喜欢红色, 因为……(自拟一点)。
兴趣爱好
1.喜欢观看纪录片, 因为……(自拟一点);
2.喜欢音乐, 最喜欢乡村音乐, 因为……(自拟一点)。
优秀事迹
1.富有爱心,上个月把零用钱捐给甘肃地震灾区的人们;
2.乐于助人, 这个学期, 帮助警察找到小偷;
3.……(自拟一点)。
未来梦想
希望成为一名工程师,为家乡沭阳设计出连接北京的高铁。
注意: (1) 词数90 左右;
(2) 短文应包括所给内容要点,可适当发挥,使文章连贯;
(3) 表达中请勿提及真实校名、姓名。
Dear sir/madam,
Zhang Bo is the monitor of Class 1, Grade 9. I would like to recommend him as an excellent League Member this term.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
We think Zhang Bo is the most suitable person to be an excellent League Member. We hope that you can agree with us.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear sir/madam,
Zhang Bo is the monitor of Class 1, Grade 9. I would like to recommend him as an excellent League Member this term.
He has a gift for painting. He likes red best because red represents power and strength.
He likes watching documentaries, because he can learn a lot about nature, history and real-life events. He also likes music, especially country music. Because it makes him feel relaxed and peaceful.
He also has a heart full of love. Last month, he donated his pocket money to the people in Gansu after the earthquake hit it. He is very helpful too. He helped the police find out the thief this term. Beside these, he often helps classmates who are absent from school with their schoolwork. In a word, he is an excellent student in our school.
He has a big dream. He hopes to be an engineer when he grows up. He wants to design a high-speed railway connecting Shuyang and Beijing, in order to make our hometown modern and beautiful. I hope his dreams come true.
We think Zhang Bo is the most suitable person to be an excellent League Member. We hope that you can agree with us.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
题材:记叙文。本文主要介绍张波的个人情况;
时态:整体用一般现在时,讲述优秀事迹时用一般过去时;
提示:省略号部分必须有发挥,时态变化要注意。
[写作步骤]
第一步,根据内容表述的不同方面将文章分段,并将文中可能用到的短语,句型列出来。
第二步,根据表格内容初步完成一稿。
第三步,重读文章,尝试用不同句型将文章句子升格,并检查文中出现的错误,并改正。
[亮点词汇]
①have a gift for doing在某方面有天赋;
②has a heart full of love充满爱心;
③Beside these除此之外。
[高分句型]
①Beside these, he often helps classmates who are absent from school with their schoolwork.(定语从句)
②He hopes to be an engineer when he grows up.(时间状语从句)
11.(23-24九年级上·江苏连云港·期末)走进艺术世界,感受艺术魅力。你校英语社团正在组织“Enjoy Art”学习交流活动。假如你是李华,请你根据以下图式,写一篇英语发言稿参加活动。
注意:
(1)词数90左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)发言稿应包括所给内容要点,可适当发挥,使文章连贯;
(3)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
Enjoy Art
Hello, I am Li Hua. I’m happy to give you a speech on enjoying art.
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That’s all for my speech. Thanks for listening!
【答案】例文
Enjoy Art
Hello, I am Li Hua. I’m happy to give you a speech on enjoying art.
Art is especially important in our lives. There are different forms of art in the world, such as film, painting, dance, music and so on.
My favourite art form is painting. I can feel the beauty when I’m painting. I can also learn a lot about different cultures around the world. I think painting is without boundaries, because it can make us know about the styles not only in China but also in other countries.
We need art in our lives! I hope everybody can experience the value of art.
That’s all for my speech. Thanks for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,围绕“Enjoy Art”来写,注意不要遗漏要点,并注意适当添加细节,以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步,自我介绍,引出主题;
第二步,介绍艺术是什么;
第三步,介绍自己喜欢的艺术形式及喜欢的理由;
第四步,书写结尾,提出希望并感谢别人的倾听。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②and so on等等
③know about了解
④not only…but also…不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①I think painting is without boundaries, because it can make us know about the styles not only in China but also in other countries.(省略that的宾语从句;because引导原因状语从句)
②I can feel the beauty when I’m painting.(when引导时间状语从句)
12.(23-24九年级上·江苏扬州·期末)生命,对于每个人来说只有一次,我们该如何保护自己的人身安全呢?Teens正在举办以“Protect Ourselves,Cherish (珍爱) Our Lives”为题的征文活动,请你从提供的六个类别里选择三个,谈谈相应的保护自身安全的措施,并分享你的体会。
Contents (内容)
Categories (类别)
school safety
food safety
traffic safety
Internet safety
life safety
electricity safety
Solutions (措施)
......(请按你自选的三类内容分别写两点)
Understanding (体会)
cherish our lives;......(请写1-2点)
提示词汇: electricity safety用电安全 cherish 珍爱 vt.
注意:
词数100词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
内容须包括所给要点,可适当发挥,条理清楚、语句连贯;
文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等信息。
Protect Ourselves,Cherish Our Lives
Safety is very important. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
Protect Ourselves,Cherish Our Lives
Safety is very important. Life is only once for everybody. It’s important to cherish our lives. As students, what should we do? Here are some suggestions.
First, school safety. We should get on well with our classmates at school. Don’t fight with them. If we really have trouble in communicating with each other, we can ask our teachers for help. Second, traffic safety. there are more and more cars nowadays. It is necessary for us to follow the traffic rules. Walk on the zebra crossing when crossing the street. Third, Internet safety. We should surf the Internet safely. Especially, don’t give out your personal information when surfing the Internet. Moreover, we shouldn’t meet online friends alone.
Safety comes first. Please guard against any possible danger anytime.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:根据表格中所给内容选择三点介绍保护自身安全的措施,并分享你的体会,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题,点明安全的重要性;
第二步,介绍如何保证学校安全、交通安全和网络安全;
第三步,总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①get on well with和某人相处融洽
②fight with和某人争吵/打架
③have trouble in doing sth做某事有困难
④follow the traffic rules遵守交通规则
[高分句型]
①If we really have trouble in communicating with each other, we can ask our teachers for help. (if引导的条件状语从句)
②Walk on the zebra crossing when crossing the street. (when引导的时间状语从句)
13.(23-24九年级上·江苏宿迁·期末)随着现代科技的发展,机器人已经来到我们身边,而且给我们的生活带来了便利。请根据下表所述内容,介绍家用机器人的基本情况,并就如何更好地让机器人为我们服务提出建议。
简介
家用机器人使用范围广,受到了人们的欢迎。
主要功能
1.你有更多的时间从事自己的爱好,可以帮助你做家务,如洗衣服,做饭,打扫卫生;
2.可以做像灭火或高空工作之类的危险工作;
3.在学校机器人可以帮助学生学习,在很多方面帮助老师。
存在问题
1.容易感染病毒,犯愚蠢的错误;有时会把家里搞得一团糟;
2.价格偏高,普通家庭消费不起。
你的建议
……(至少两点)
[要求]
1.表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2.必须包括表格中所有的相关信息,并进行适当发挥;
3.词数100左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数);
4.不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
[参考词汇] 家用机器人 home robots
With the development of modern science and technology, robots have entered our lives, which brings great convenience to us.
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【答案】例文
With the development of modern science and technology, robots have entered our lives, which brings great convenience to us.
Home robots are widely used and popular with people. Home robots have many functions. Firstly, they can be used to cook and clean rooms. You can have more time to take up your own hobby. Secondly, they can do dangerous jobs such as putting out fires or working at heights. Moreover, they can help students learn and help teachers in many ways.
On the other hand, the technology used in home robots is not developed well enough to solve all the safety problems. They are easy to get viruses, and make stupid mistakes. Even they will mess up the house. What’s more, the price is too high for common people to afford it.
Personally, robots should be used to improve people’s lives. Meanwhile, more advanced technology should be developed to ensure the safety and the price is expected to be brought down as well.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容介绍家用机器人的基本情况,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,引出介绍随着科技的发展,机器人已经来到了我们的身边;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容,从“主要功能和存在问题”两个方面重点介绍家用机器人的情况;
第三步,阐述自己的建议并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①with the development of 随着……的发展
②be used to 被用来
③take up your own hobby 从事自己的爱好
④On the other hand 另一方面
[高分句型]
①Meanwhile, more advanced technology should be developed to ensure the safety and the price is expected to be brought down as well.(含情态动词的被动语态)
14.(23-24九年级上·江苏镇江·期末)假如你是李华,阳光英语社团提供了两位笔友的基本信息,你想选择其中一名作为你的笔友,请用英语介绍他(她)的情况,并谈一谈你选择的理由。
Name
Lucy (from China)
Steven (from America)
Personality
creative, outgoing
helpful, energetic
Hobby
music
films
Hero
Tan Dun
Audrey Hepburn
Dream
a music teacher
a volunteer
要求:
(1)所写内容必须包括其中一位笔友的所有信息,需适当发挥;
(2)请说明你选择的理由;
(3)词数:不少于90词,文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等信息。
Sunshine English Club has provided some information about two excellent pen friends. I would like to choose ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
Sunshine English Club has provided some information about two excellent pen friends. I would like to choose Lucy as my pen friend because she shares my interests.
Lucy is a creative and outgoing student from China who loves music and dreams of becoming a music teacher. Tan Dun is her hero. I also have a passion for music and want to pursue a career in music education. I believe that we could have meaningful discussions about our musical experiences and goals. Additionally, Lucy’s outgoing personality suggests that she would be an enthusiastic pen pal.
I am excited to learn more about her culture and experiences in China. I am confident that our exchange of letters would be enjoyable.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏表格中信息提示的内容,适当增加细节,并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。直接说明要选择哪个作为笔友;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍了笔友的信息及选择的理由;
第三步,书写结语。表达自己对与笔友之间友谊的祝福。
[亮点词汇]
①dream of梦想
②passion热爱
③enthusiastic热心的
[高分句型]
①I would like to choose Lucy as my pen friend because she shares my interests. (原因状语从句)
②Lucy is a creative and outgoing student from China who loves music and dreams of becoming a music teacher. (定语从句)
15.(23-24九年级上·江苏无锡·期末)“双减”政策推行之后,中学生的学习生活发生了很大的变化。为了达成“五育”并举的培养目标,学校在延时服务时段开展了丰富多彩的社团活动。以“The Art Club I Enjoy Most”为题写一篇短文。
• Which club do you enjoy?
• Why do you join it?
• What do you do in it?
• What can you learn from it?
要求:
1. 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2. 须包含要点提示中的所有信息,可适当发挥;
3. 词数100左右;
4. 不得使用真实姓名和校名。
The Art Club I Enjoy Most
I’m a student in Grade 9.
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【答案】例文
The Art Club I Enjoy Most
I’m a student in Grade 9. I join Music Club, because I like singing very much. I hope I can sing better and better. What is more, I am interested in playing the guitar. I can learn to play it with the teacher’s help. Luckily, both the teacher and the classmates think I have a real gift for music. They encourage me a lot. I keep practising singing and playing the guitar hard. To my joy, I not only sing better but also play the guitar better. I got the first prize in a singing competition. I learn a lot from the club. I love Music Club.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:本文时态为一般现在时;
③提示:本文的人称为第一人称,注意要点衔接自然顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,总体介绍自己喜欢什么俱乐部;
第二步,详细介绍为什么加入这个俱乐部,及做什么和从中学到什么。
第三步,结束语,喜欢音乐俱乐部。
[亮点词汇]
①better and better越来越好
②have a real gift for对……有真的天赋
[高分句型]
①I join Music Club, because I like singing very much. (because引导原因状语从句。)
②To my joy, I not only sing better but also play the guitar better.( not only...but also)
16.(23-24九年级上·江苏·期末)家庭对你意味着什么?每个人都有不同的理解, 请以 “A home means ________ for me” 为题,用英语写一件发生在你家中有趣的,或者让你学到知识的,或者让你感受到关爱的,或者让你明白人生道理的,或者其他的经历,并简要谈谈你对家的理解。
要求: 1、补全题目,并围绕自拟题目适当发挥,使行文连贯,通顺,完成一篇文章;
2、字数100词左右;
3、文中不得出现真实的校名、人名。
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【答案】范文:
A home means love for me
“What’s up, dear Lily?” Dad asked in a low voice as usual.
“Let’s have some milk tea, my little girl!” Mom’s gentleness surprised me, which was totally opposite to her daily strictness and even terribleness.
“Sister pig, ha ha! Every thing is a piece of cake!” My annoying sister Lucy came and gave me a chocolate.
This is the common family style in my home. Although I just failed an exam and was in low spirits, their love can always give me comfort and power to cheer myself up.
For me, a home means love. It is a place where kindly feelings exist among all the members. A home without love is no more a home as a body without a soul is not a man.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为话题作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:写作话题已给出,考生应注意认真阅读“信息提示”中每一项内容,围绕话题展开,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。开门见山展现家庭情景;
第二步,具体阐述事情的经过;
第三步,书写结语,表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①asked in a low voice用一个低低的声音
②as usual像往常一样
③cheer up振作起来
④no more不再
[高分句型]
①Although I just failed an exam and was in low spirits, their love can always give me comfort and power to cheer myself up. (although引导让步状语从句)
② It is a place where kindly feelings exist among all the members. (where引导定语从句)
17.(23-24九年级上·江苏扬州·期末)成长像一次长途旅行,成长过程中有收获,也有困惑。请以“My growing up”为题,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你成长过程中的点滴和你的感受。
提示:
(1) How do you learn about the world? (2 points)
(2) What is your problem? How do you solve it?
(3) What are your feelings during the process of growing up? (2 points)
要求:
(1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
(2)必须包括所有要点内容,并适当发挥;
(3)语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清晰,书写规范;
(4)词数100词左右,文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My growing up
Growing up is like a journey, full of discoveries and challenges. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
My growing up
Growing up is like a journey, full of discoveries and challenges.
I learned about the world in different ways. I like reading books which can help me learn about people in different times and places. And I also learned a lot from my parents. They taught me how to be a kind person.
On the way I also had problems. For example, I could not achieve a balance between working and playing. Then my head teacher told me to make a study plan and work out the time I can spend on my hobbies.
I solved the problems in this way. I think when we face difficulties, we should never give up easily. Having a good relationship with parents, teachers and classmates is important in our lives.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍如何了解这个世界;
第二步,介绍成长过程中的问题以及如何解决的;
第三步,最后表达感受。
[亮点词汇]
① help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事
② achieve a balance取得平衡
③ give up放弃
[高分句型]
①I like reading books which can help me learn about people in different times and places.(which引导的定语从句)
② I think when we face difficulties, we should never give up easily.(when引导的时间状语从句)
18.(23-24九年级上·江苏常州·期末)掌握日常生活技能(如烹饪、种植、修理、救护方法……) 能增强青少年的自信心,形成独立自主能力,提高生活质量和健康水平。请结合下列提示,以“Little life skills are a big help”为题,用英语写一篇短文在课堂上分享。
提示:
1. What life skills do you have?
2. Which life skill do you think is the most useful, and why?
注意:
1. 内容须涵盖所有要点,并适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 词数:100词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Little life skills are a big help
Life skills are necessary for us teenagers. They help us live more healthily and happily. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Little life skills are a big help
Life skills are necessary for us teenagers. They help us live more healthily and happily.
I have many life skills such as cooking, washing clothes, making traveling plans and so on. As for me, cooking is the most useful one. Now, more and more young people like fast food, but I don’t think it’s a healthy lifestyle. I learned how to cook food by myself when I was in Grade Three at primary school. Our teacher taught us how to make tomatoes with eggs. I also learned cooking some other dishes from my mom. So when my parents are not at home, I often cook for myself. It is not only delicious but also meaningful. It always makes me feel proud of myself.
Life skills are a big help, and I will try to learn more to make my life more colourful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:方向已给出,写作时注意表述清晰、逻辑连贯,做到无语法和单词拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接开头,点明主题;
第二步,列出生活技能并挑一个细说;
第三步,总结从中获得的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①and so on等等
②not only...but also...不仅而且
③be proud of为……感到骄傲
[高分句型]
①I learned how to cook food by myself when I was in Grade Three at primary school.(句型:状语从句,when引导时间状语从句)
②So when my parents are not at home, I often cook for myself.(句型:状语从句,when引导时间状语从句)
19.(23-24九年级上·江苏泰州·期末)请根据阳光中学校刊English Corner栏目的征稿内容,用英语写一篇短文,表达你的想法。
As we all know, art plays an important role in our life. So this week, we want to know your ideas about the topic “My favourite art form”.
·What is your favourite art form?
·What do you know about this art form?
·Do you have stories about it?
We are sure you have a lot to say. We are looking forward to hearing from you soon.
注意:(1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
(2)语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
(3)词数100左右。
My favourite art form
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【答案】例文
My favourite art form
Art plays an important part of our life. Without it, our life will be dull. Of all the art forms, I like singing best.
Many of my friends praise me when they hear me sing. However, I once didn’t like singing because I always felt nervous when facing a group of people. Then something happened when I was ten years old.
That was my tenth birthday. My friends advised me to sing a song for them at the party. I refused at once. But my friends didn’t give up and they encouraged me. I finally agreed. After hearing it, they said that I had a real gift for singing. It made me feel more confident in myself. Since then, I have been crazy about singing, especially pop songs. I enjoy myself in the world of music every time I sing.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要求已给出,学生不要遗漏题目中的要点,适当添加细节,写作时保持主谓一致,注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步,总起引出话题;
第二步,介绍最喜欢的艺术形式;
第三步,谈谈你的相关故事。
[亮点词汇]
①a group of 一群
②advise sb to do sth建议某人做某事
③at once马上
④be crazy about 热衷于
[高分句型]
①Many of my friends praise me when they hear me sing.(时间状语从句)
②However, I once didn’t like singing because I always felt nervous when facing a group of people.(原因状语从句)
③After hearing it, they said that I had a real gift for singing.(宾语从句)
20.(23-24九年级上·江苏扬州·期末)一个榜样不仅具备优秀的能力和品质,更重要的是他的人格魅力和对社会贡献的付出。生命中总有一些值得我们学习的榜样。最近,江苏教育电视台将举办题为“The Great Person I Admire Most”的英语演讲比赛,请根据以下流程图写一篇英文演讲稿参加比赛。
要求:
(1)必须包括提示中的所有信息,并按要求适当发挥;
(2)词数 100 词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(3)不得使用真实姓名、校名等。
The Great Person I Admire Most
It is my great honour to stand here to make a speech.
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【答案】
例文:
The Great Person I Admire Most
It is my great honour to stand here to make a speech.
Standing here, many great figures come into my mind, scientists, politicians, history makers and so on. Among them, I admire Yuan Longping most, an agricultural pioneer of China. It is known that there are many people suffering from hunger in many countries. To help more people to get enough food, Yuan Longping devoted himself to improving the output of hybrid rice. Thanks to his research, the output has been doubled. More importantly, Yuan Longping was willing to share his achievement with others, which helped the whole world to solve the hunger problem.
As for me, Yuan Longping is the greatest person in the world. It is his devotion that makes him successful and his devotion has inspired me a lot. Actually, I have some difficulty in learning English. However, where there is devotion, there is a way. I really believe that my devotion can make me expert in English.
Thank you for your listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为演讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要注意不要遗漏流程图中的内容,并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“我最尊敬的人是袁隆平”来引出下文中对袁隆平的介绍;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“介绍、经历和贡献”三方面入手,重点介绍袁隆平;
第三步,书写结语。袁隆平的事迹对我有很大的影响。
[亮点词汇]
①and so on 等等
②suffer from 遭受
③devote oneself into 致力于
④thanks to 由于,归功于
⑤as for 至于
⑥have difficulty in doing sth 做某事有困难
[高分句型]
①More importantly, Yuan Longping was willing to share his achievement with others, which helped the whole world to solve the hunger problem.(which引导的定语从句)
②It is his devotion that makes him successful and his devotion has inspired me a lot.(强调句)
③I really believe that my devotion can make me expert in English.(that引导的宾语从句)
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