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2024-2025学年一线教师制作精品系列资料，已编校！ 2024-2025学年一线教师制作精品系列资料，已编校！ Unit8 Detective stories 单元话题写作（侦探故事）满分范文15篇 1．根据中文提示，写一篇70词左右的短文： 昨天当王先生下班回家的时候，他在他家门外发现了一条项链，他想可能有人掉了项链。 他准备第二天把项链拿到警察局去，他想警察可能能够找到项链的主人。第二天当他到警察局的时候，他吃惊地看见了失主。失主非常感激他。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．请根据以下提示写一篇100词左右的小故事。 提示：1.我妈妈一直和我们隔壁的一个邻居相处得不好。妈妈说他看起来很不友好。 2.一天，妈妈回到家，发现她昨天刚买的手表不见了。我们决定立刻报警。 3. 突然有人敲门，原来是我们的新邻居。他手里拿着手表，说昨天他在电梯里发现的，想问问是不是妈妈的。 4. 妈妈很感激他，最后他们成了好朋友。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．书面表达 假设你是张通，去年寒假去美国探亲。2018年2月18日，你目击了一起交通事故。警察局让你写一份材料，说明当时的情况。请根据下列叙述写出报告。 1. 2018年2月18日早晨7：30左右发生了一起交通事故； 2. 我在公园路上散步； 3. 一位老人从公园里出来，穿过公园路； 4. 一辆黄颜色小汽车从第三街道开过来右转弯进入公园路； 5. 小汽车撞倒了老人并向西开走； 6. 我看见驾驶员是位年轻妇女，记住了车牌号（the plate number）是AC864，并送老人去了医院。 注意： 1. 词数：90左右； 2. 结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ About two minutes later, I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital. Zhang Tong 4．书面表达 根据下面提示，写一篇90词左右的短文，描述一起谋杀案件。 1.昨晚11点到12点之间，人民路上发生了一起谋杀案，被害者是一名司机，四十多岁 2.案发时，有人听到被害者求救。受害人受了刀伤，流血过多而死。 3.警方已经悬赏五万元，以获取重要线索。 4.如果你有任何信息，请拨打110和警方联系。 5．今天早上， 有人在一家工厂里发现了一具尸体。被害者是一名工程师， 男性， 40岁， 被刀所刺， 因流血过多而死亡。根据警方的推断， 此案发生于凌晨三点至四点之间， 而且工厂不是案发现场。目前， 警方悬赏十万元人民币寻找破案线索。请根据以上提示， 用英语写一篇80词左右的短文描述这起案件。 写这篇短文时， 你可以从以下四个方面构思： 1.案发时间和地点； 2.被害人性别、 年龄、 职业等信息； 3.案件分析； 4.警方动态。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．书面表达。 请根据以下线索写一篇句意连贯的小故事。 1.我婶婶一直和她的一个新邻居相处得不好，婶婶说他看起来很不友好; 2.一天，我婶婶回到家，发现她昨天刚买的项链不见了; 3.她回想自己去过哪儿，觉得可能是那个邻居偷了她的项链，因此她决定立刻报警; 4.突然有人敲门，原来是她的新邻居; 5.他手里拿着项链，说昨天在门口发现的; 6.婶婶很感激他，并愿意和他交朋友。 7． 根据所给提示，以A Theft为题，写一篇90词左右的短文。内容必须包括以下要点： 案件 贵重物品被盗 时间 5月2号晚上 地点 布朗先生的商店 目击者描述 两个小偷戴着面具，一个高大强壮，另一个中等个子；每个人背着一个沉重的包，气喘吁吁 警方 正在现场查找指纹和其他线索，会尽快破案 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．书面表达 请根据下面的中文要点提示，以“A Young Businessman Was Murdered”为题写一篇不少于90词左右的英语短文。 要点如下： 1.昨晚十点到凌晨一点之间，发生了一起谋杀案； 2被害人是一名年轻商人，年仅35岁。案发时，有人听到了呼救的声音； 3.据警方描述，被害人是因为刀伤，流血过多而死； 4.目前凶手在逃，警方悬赏10,000元人民币寻求重要线索，……(请发挥1-2句) ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．书面表达 昨天下午在回家的路上, 你恰好碰上了一起银行抢劫案, 你目睹了整个过程。作为现场目击者, 请你向警察描述你所看见的一切, 包含以下要点： 1．抢劫案大约发生在下午3点50分； 2．有三个人参与了抢劫, 其中一个人很高, 黄头发, 小眼睛, 大嘴巴, 大鼻子, 穿一件深蓝色的外套； 3．他们从银行出来后, 开着一辆黑色轿车逃走了。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．假设你是吴华，刚刚在网上结识了一位美国朋友Bob，他写邮件询问你的爱好和梦想。请你根据下表提示内容，给他回一封邮件。 爱好 听音乐、看电影… 梦想 当一名侦探(原因自拟) 写作要求： 1.包含表格中所有提示要点，可适当发挥，使行文连贯； 2.语篇完整，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范； 3.80词左右(短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 Dear Bob, I’m happy to get your email. Now, let me tell you something about my hobbies and dream._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ What about your hobbies and dream? Please write to me soon. Best wishes! Yours, Wu Hua 11．人人都有梦想，梦想是指引我们前进的灯塔，为我们照亮未来的路。2022年也是习近平总书记提出“中国梦”十周年。“同心筑梦”是每一个中华儿女的理想和追求。请你以“My dream”为题，写一篇英语短文，讲述你对自己梦想的所知所感。 提示如下： What 梦想成为侦探／音乐家／导演／……（任选其一） Why 1.空闲时读侦探故事并且很感兴趣；敢于阻止违法犯罪行为（crime）；保护人民和国家安全；希望人民生活幸福平安…… 2.喜欢音乐，给别人带来快乐，搭建中西方文化的桥梁…… 3.喜欢当导演因为…… 4.…… （根据自己的梦想选择其中某一个方面内容，合理即可） How 为了实现梦想，努力学习，强身健体；遇到困难不放弃；相信自己…… 要求：1.内容须包含以上要点，语句通顺，意思连贯，适当发挥; 2. 词数90个左右； 3.表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。 My dream Everyone has their own dream, which plays an important role in the daily life. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．一个民族有自己的“民族梦”，一个国家有自己的“国家梦”，同样，每个人也应有属于自己的“美丽梦想”。最近，你班就“我们的梦想”展开了一次讨论。下面是你们小组的谈论情况汇总，请根据所给要点写一篇英语短文，向英语校刊投稿。 Name Dream Tony 想当一个社会工作者，尤其是帮助孩子们解决青少年问题，曾经：…… （举一例给青少年的帮助） Amy 比起做导演更想当演员，她在校戏剧社 (Drama Club) 担任主角，2018年首次在电视上亮相. I 擅长解谜，梦想成为一名侦探, 查明一切真相 为了实现梦想，我认为……（至少两点） 要求：1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2. 必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；   3. 词数：100个词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 Our dreams Recently, we have held a discussion to talk about our dreams. Here is the report about our ideas.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．包拯是一个中国的电影明星，他不仅年轻而且英俊，深受影迷喜爱。1998年，包拯拍了一部恐怖 片，在影片中他扮演了一位侦探。在片中，这位侦探查看了现场，询问邻居一些问题，寻找到了线索，最终抓住了杀人犯。由于包拯在这部影片中担任了重要角色并演得十分精彩，他获得了奥斯卡最佳男演员奖。下星期天晚上7：00－9：00这部影片将在金色电视台播出。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14．假如你是李华，你和朋友们准备开展一次侦探故事读书交流活动，你打算邀请你们班交换生Peter参加。请你用英语写一封邮件，告诉他读书交流活动的时间和地点，活动内容，以及需要准备什么。 提示词语：room, talk, read, story 提示问题：● When and where are you going to have the activity? ●What are you going to do? ●What do you advise Peter to prepare for the activity? Dear Peter, How is it going? I’m writing to invite you to our reading activity about detective stories. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ If there is anything that I can do, please let me know. Yours, Li Hua 15．Suppose you are Mark. You witnessed a crime. Write a diary in 60-120 words about it. (假设你是Mark，看到了一起犯罪活动，就你所见所为写一篇60-120个词的日记，标点符号不占格) The following questions are for reference（以下问题仅供参考）: Who did you see?   When and where did you see them?   What were they doing?    How did you feel?   What did you do then? 8 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 9 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 2024-2025学年一线教师制作精品系列资料，已编校！ 2024-2025学年一线教师制作精品系列资料，已编校！ Unit8 Detective stories 单元话题写作（侦探故事）满分范文15篇 1．根据中文提示，写一篇70词左右的短文： 昨天当王先生下班回家的时候，他在他家门外发现了一条项链，他想可能有人掉了项链。 他准备第二天把项链拿到警察局去，他想警察可能能够找到项链的主人。第二天当他到警察局的时候，他吃惊地看见了失主。失主非常感激他。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Yesterday when Mr Wang came home from work, he found a necklace outside his door. He thought maybe someone dropped the necklace. He planned to take it to the police station the next day. He thought the police would be able to find the owner. The next day when he went to the police station, he was surprised to see the owner. The owner was very grateful to him. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：中文提示已给出，考生结合所学知识，写一篇作文，可适当发挥，使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，首先确定时间，地点，人物，以及发生的事情； 第二步，具体阐述所给的中文提示，按照时间顺序行文。 [亮点词汇] ①came home from work下班回家 ②the next day第二天 ③be able to能够 ④be surprised to对……感到吃惊 [高分句型] ①Yesterday when Mr Wang came home from work, he found a necklace outside his door.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②He thought maybe someone dropped the necklace（省略that的宾语从句） 2．请根据以下提示写一篇100词左右的小故事。 提示：1.我妈妈一直和我们隔壁的一个邻居相处得不好。妈妈说他看起来很不友好。 2.一天，妈妈回到家，发现她昨天刚买的手表不见了。我们决定立刻报警。 3. 突然有人敲门，原来是我们的新邻居。他手里拿着手表，说昨天他在电梯里发现的，想问问是不是妈妈的。 4. 妈妈很感激他，最后他们成了好朋友。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My mother didn’t get on well with my neighbour who lived next door. My mother said he seemed to be strange. One day, when my mother came home from work, she realized that she had lost her new watch which she had bought the day before. She was very worried. She wondered where she had been. She thought that perhaps the man who lived next door had stolen her watch. We planned to call the police at once. Just then, someone was knocking at the door. It was the young man, our new neighbour. I was shocked that my mother’s watch was in his hand. He told us that he found it in the lift. He wondered whether it belonged to my mother. It is the watch that my mother lost. My mother was very thankful. At last, they became best friends. 【详解】1.题干解析：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据要点提示写一则语意连贯的100词左右的小故事。题目中提示的内容需要全部包括在内。 2.写作指导：本文时态为一般过去时。要组织正确的语言，将句意完整地表达出来。写作中注意表达的条理性，用好连接词；为丰富文章的文采，尽量使用间接引语和定语从句等复合句。要特别注意间接引语的人称和时态以及定语从句的引导词。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误，写好后反复读几遍，适当修改。 3．书面表达 假设你是张通，去年寒假去美国探亲。2018年2月18日，你目击了一起交通事故。警察局让你写一份材料，说明当时的情况。请根据下列叙述写出报告。 1. 2018年2月18日早晨7：30左右发生了一起交通事故； 2. 我在公园路上散步； 3. 一位老人从公园里出来，穿过公园路； 4. 一辆黄颜色小汽车从第三街道开过来右转弯进入公园路； 5. 小汽车撞倒了老人并向西开走； 6. 我看见驾驶员是位年轻妇女，记住了车牌号（the plate number）是AC864，并送老人去了医院。 注意： 1. 词数：90左右； 2. 结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ About two minutes later, I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital. Zhang Tong 【答案】It was about 7:30 on the morning of February 18, 2018. I was taking a walk along Park Road. I saw an old man coming out of the park. Just then a yellow car drove down Third Street and made a right turn into Park Road. The next moment the car hit the old man while he was crossing the road. He fell down with a cry. The car didn't stop but drove off at a great speed heading west.  I noticed the driver was a young woman and the plate number was AC864. About two minutes later，I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital. Zhang Tong 【详解】题干解读：该题目属于材料作文，主要应该以记叙文为主，文章结尾已给出。要求描述你目击的一场交通事故，事故细节已给出中文信息。 例文点评：例文用第一人称进行叙述，时态主要采用一般过去时。例文将背景、事件发生的时间、地点、现场细节等交代得非常清楚全面，材料给出的要求都已涉及；文章叙述逻辑清晰，条例分明。 高分亮点： 短语：take a walk；just then；drive down；fall down；drive off。 句型：see sb. doing sth.；while引导的时间状语从句。 4．书面表达 根据下面提示，写一篇90词左右的短文，描述一起谋杀案件。 1.昨晚11点到12点之间，人民路上发生了一起谋杀案，被害者是一名司机，四十多岁 2.案发时，有人听到被害者求救。受害人受了刀伤，流血过多而死。 3.警方已经悬赏五万元，以获取重要线索。 4.如果你有任何信息，请拨打110和警方联系。 【答案】Last night, a murder took place between eleven and twelve on Renmin Road. A driver was murdered. He was in his forties. At the time of the crime, someone heard him shouting for help. The victim was attacked with a knife and bled to death as a result. So far, the police have offered a reward of 50,000 yuan for important clues. If you have any information, please call/ contact the police on 110. 【详解】本文属于材料作文，描述一起谋杀案件。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。 【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如take place, at the time of, victim, as a result, so far, clue以及contact。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。 点睛：写作时可以从以下几个方面做起： 认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。 构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。 初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。 修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。 5．今天早上， 有人在一家工厂里发现了一具尸体。被害者是一名工程师， 男性， 40岁， 被刀所刺， 因流血过多而死亡。根据警方的推断， 此案发生于凌晨三点至四点之间， 而且工厂不是案发现场。目前， 警方悬赏十万元人民币寻找破案线索。请根据以上提示， 用英语写一篇80词左右的短文描述这起案件。 写这篇短文时， 你可以从以下四个方面构思： 1.案发时间和地点； 2.被害人性别、 年龄、 职业等信息； 3.案件分析； 4.警方动态。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Someone found a dead body in a factory this morning. The victim was a man who was an engineer and he was 40 years old. The victim was wounded with a knife and bled to death. The police supposed that the murder happened between 3 a.m. and 4 a.m. Besides, the fact proved that he was killed somewhere else and then brought to the factory. The police are offering a reward of 100,000 yuan for any clue that leads to the arrest of the murderer. 【详解】这是一篇给材料作文，要求用英语写一篇短文描述所发生的案件。根据所给材料内容可知本文主要用一般过去时态，人称主要是第三人称。在写作的时候，要根据提示内容把所发生的案件用英语正确的表达出来。可以从以下四个方面构思： 1.案发时间和地点； 2.被害人性别、 年龄、 职业等信息； 3.案件分析； 4.警方动态。 在表述时语言应该符合英语语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯，同时注意理顺要点，防止漏写；做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。另外，可以用上一些句型、短语，较高级的语言，这样会使文章更出色。 6．书面表达。 请根据以下线索写一篇句意连贯的小故事。 1.我婶婶一直和她的一个新邻居相处得不好，婶婶说他看起来很不友好; 2.一天，我婶婶回到家，发现她昨天刚买的项链不见了; 3.她回想自己去过哪儿，觉得可能是那个邻居偷了她的项链，因此她决定立刻报警; 4.突然有人敲门，原来是她的新邻居; 5.他手里拿着项链，说昨天在门口发现的; 6.婶婶很感激他，并愿意和他交朋友。 【答案】My aunt got along well with all her neighbours except the man who lived next door.  My aunt said he didn't look friendly at all. One day, when my aunt came home from work, she realized that she had lost her new necklace which she had bought the day before. She was very worried. She recalled where she had been just then. She thought that perhaps the man who lived next door had stolen her necklace. So she planned to call the police at once. Just then, someone knocked at the door. It was the young man, her new neighbour. She was shocked that her necklace was in his hand.  He told her that he found it at the doorway. And he thought it must be my aunt's, so he came to return it. Yes, that's true. It was the necklace that my aunt lost. My aunt was very thankful. She told her new neighbour that they could be good friends later. 【详解】【亮点说明】这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如get along well with，next door，at all，the day before，just then，at once，knock at，in his hand，at the doorway等。而My aunt said he didn't look friendly at all./ One day, when my aunt came home from work, she realized that she had lost her new necklace which she had bought the day before./ And he thought it must be my aunt's, so he came to return it.等多种复杂从句结构的运用，使本文内容丰富，表达流畅，是本文的最大亮点。 点睛：这是一篇材料作文，根据提示内容可知用一般过去时，可把提示的内容逐条翻译并拓展成不同的句子，最后把这些句子连在一起即可。 7． 根据所给提示，以A Theft为题，写一篇90词左右的短文。内容必须包括以下要点： 案件 贵重物品被盗 时间 5月2号晚上 地点 布朗先生的商店 目击者描述 两个小偷戴着面具，一个高大强壮，另一个中等个子；每个人背着一个沉重的包，气喘吁吁 警方 正在现场查找指纹和其他线索，会尽快破案 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 A Theft On the evening of May 2nd, a theft happened in Mr Brown’s shop. Two thieves broke into Mr Brown’s shop and a lot of valuable things were stolen. The thieves were seen to run away from the shop. One witness said the two thieves were wearing masks. One was strong and tall, and the other was a man of medium height. Each of them was carrying a heavy bag on his back and was breathing heavily. Mr Brown reported the theft to the police as soon as he discovered it. Now the police are checking the scene for fingerprints and other clues. They say they will solve the case as soon as possible. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“过去进行时”； ③提示：中文提示已给出，考生结合所学知识，动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步，首先描述时间，地点，人物，以及发生的事情； 第二步，具体描述目击者的所见以及警方的态度。 [亮点词汇] ①broke into闯入 ②run away from逃离…… ③One...the other...一个……另一个…… ④as soon as possible尽可能快 [高分句型] ①Mr Brown reported the theft to the police as soon as he discovered it.（as soon as引导的时间状语从句） ②They say they will solve the case as soon as possible.（省略引导词that的宾语从句） 8．书面表达 请根据下面的中文要点提示，以“A Young Businessman Was Murdered”为题写一篇不少于90词左右的英语短文。 要点如下： 1.昨晚十点到凌晨一点之间，发生了一起谋杀案； 2被害人是一名年轻商人，年仅35岁。案发时，有人听到了呼救的声音； 3.据警方描述，被害人是因为刀伤，流血过多而死； 4.目前凶手在逃，警方悬赏10,000元人民币寻求重要线索，……(请发挥1-2句) ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】A murder took place between 10 p. m. last night and 1 a. m. this morning. The victim was a young businessman. He was only 35 years old. Someone heard shouting for help at the time of the crime. The police said that the victim was wounded with a knife and bled to death as a result. The murderer hasn’t been caught so far. The police have offered a reward of 10, 000 yuan for the important clues. Anyone who can provide useful information should contact the police. 【详解】这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如take place，between…and，shout for help，at the time of，as a result，so far等。而The police said that the victim was wounded with a knife and bled to death as a result./ Anyone who can provide useful information should contact the police.等多种从句的运用更是为文章增色不少。 点睛：这是一篇材料作文。根据提示内容可知用一般现在时，可以把所提示的汉语翻译成英文，然后在写作中进行适当性的发挥。 9．书面表达 昨天下午在回家的路上, 你恰好碰上了一起银行抢劫案, 你目睹了整个过程。作为现场目击者, 请你向警察描述你所看见的一切, 包含以下要点： 1．抢劫案大约发生在下午3点50分； 2．有三个人参与了抢劫, 其中一个人很高, 黄头发, 小眼睛, 大嘴巴, 大鼻子, 穿一件深蓝色的外套； 3．他们从银行出来后, 开着一辆黑色轿车逃走了。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Yesterday afternoon I went home after I said goodbye to my teacher. I was singing my favourite song while I was passing the bank as usual. Suddenly I saw something unusual. Three men rushed into the bank with guns in their hands. I was too frightened to move. After a while I began to know what was happening. They were robbers, and they were robbing the bank. I noticed that one of them was very tall with yellow hair, small eyes, a big mouth and a big nose and he wore a dark blue coat. They drove away quickly in a black car before I could call the police. 【详解】解析：这是一篇给材料作文。此题考查学生语言的综合运用能力和书面表达能力。着力开发学生对英语写作的兴趣。本篇书面表达注意时态用一般过去时，另外在写作时应该注意重点词汇和句子的翻译。 写作思路：考生首先需要看清题意，然后再展开作文；其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点： 1．抢劫案大约发生在下午3点50分； 2．有三个人参与了抢劫, 其中一个人很高, 黄头发, 小眼睛, 大嘴巴, 大鼻子, 穿一件深蓝色的外套； 3．他们从银行出来后, 开着一辆黑色轿车逃走了。 10．假设你是吴华，刚刚在网上结识了一位美国朋友Bob，他写邮件询问你的爱好和梦想。请你根据下表提示内容，给他回一封邮件。 爱好 听音乐、看电影… 梦想 当一名侦探(原因自拟) 写作要求： 1.包含表格中所有提示要点，可适当发挥，使行文连贯； 2.语篇完整，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范； 3.80词左右(短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 Dear Bob, I’m happy to get your email. Now, let me tell you something about my hobbies and dream._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ What about your hobbies and dream? Please write to me soon. Best wishes! Yours, Wu Hua 【答案】One possible version: Dear Bob. I’m happy to get your email. Now, let me tell you something about my hobbies and dream. I have a lot of hobbies. For example, I enjoy listening to music, especially classical music and country music. They both help my mind and body relax. I also like watching movies in my free time, and documentaries and detective films are my favourite. From documentaries, I can always learn something. And detective films which are full of mysteries always catch my attention. That’s also the reason why I want to be a detective when I grow up. I hope to help the police solve cases and make our world a safe place to live in. What about your hobbies and dream? Please write to me soon. Best wishes! Yours, Wu Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是篇电子邮件； ②时态：本文的时态为一般现在时； ③提示：本文要点已给出，注意衔接顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，总述电子邮件的内容是介绍爱好和梦想； 第二步，详细介绍爱好和梦想； 第三步，结束语，你的爱好和梦想是什么。 [亮点词汇] especially尤其是 a safe place to live in居住的安全地 [高分句型] And detective films which are full of mysteries always catch my attention.（定语从句） 11．人人都有梦想，梦想是指引我们前进的灯塔，为我们照亮未来的路。2022年也是习近平总书记提出“中国梦”十周年。“同心筑梦”是每一个中华儿女的理想和追求。请你以“My dream”为题，写一篇英语短文，讲述你对自己梦想的所知所感。 提示如下： What 梦想成为侦探／音乐家／导演／……（任选其一） Why 1.空闲时读侦探故事并且很感兴趣；敢于阻止违法犯罪行为（crime）；保护人民和国家安全；希望人民生活幸福平安…… 2.喜欢音乐，给别人带来快乐，搭建中西方文化的桥梁…… 3.喜欢当导演因为…… 4.…… （根据自己的梦想选择其中某一个方面内容，合理即可） How 为了实现梦想，努力学习，强身健体；遇到困难不放弃；相信自己…… 要求：1.内容须包含以上要点，语句通顺，意思连贯，适当发挥; 2. 词数90个左右； 3.表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。 My dream Everyone has their own dream, which plays an important role in the daily life. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My dream Everyone has their own dream, which plays an important role in the daily life.    My dream is to be a detective when I grow up. I think it is meaningful for me to become a detective. I often read detective stories in my spare time, and I have learnt a lot from them. Moreover, I’m very interested in them. So I think protecting people and my country from danger is my duty. In our daily life, if I find the crime, I will be brave enough to prevent it. I hope people in my country can live happily and peacefully forever. In order to realize my dream, I am going to study really hard and do lots of sports to keep fit and strong. Whenever I meet difficulties, I will never give up. With all my hard work, I believe my dream will come true. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材: 本文是材料作文; ②时态: 时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”; ③提示: 写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示的要点，在每个要点下要适当增加细节，使表述内容更完整。 [写作步骤] 第一步，作文开头已给出，应领悟首句内容衔接好下文，明确自己的梦想及意义； 第二步，根据提示材料，分别从不同方面具体介绍自己的梦想，如：我的兴趣让我有了这样的梦想，我希望我的梦想能为他人带来积极向上或幸福平安的生活; 第三步，介绍怎样实现自己的梦想，并确信自己能实现梦想。 [亮点词汇] ①plays an important role in the daily life在日常生活中起着重要作用 ②in my spare time在我的业余时间 ③live happily and peacefully forever永远快乐和平地生活 ④keep fit and strong保持健康和强壮 [高分句型] ① My dream is to be a detective when I grow up.（when引导时间状语从句） ② I think it is meaningful for me to become a detective.（省略that的宾语从句） ③In our daily life, if I find the crime, I will be brave enough to prevent it.（if引导条件状语从句） ④Whenever I meet difficulties, I will never give up. （whenever引导让步状语从句） 12．一个民族有自己的“民族梦”，一个国家有自己的“国家梦”，同样，每个人也应有属于自己的“美丽梦想”。最近，你班就“我们的梦想”展开了一次讨论。下面是你们小组的谈论情况汇总，请根据所给要点写一篇英语短文，向英语校刊投稿。 Name Dream Tony 想当一个社会工作者，尤其是帮助孩子们解决青少年问题，曾经：…… （举一例给青少年的帮助） Amy 比起做导演更想当演员，她在校戏剧社 (Drama Club) 担任主角，2018年首次在电视上亮相. I 擅长解谜，梦想成为一名侦探, 查明一切真相 为了实现梦想，我认为……（至少两点） 要求：1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2. 必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；   3. 词数：100个词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 Our dreams Recently, we have held a discussion to talk about our dreams. Here is the report about our ideas.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Our dreams Recently, we have held a discussion to talk about our dreams. Here is the report about our ideas. Tony wants to be a social worker, especially to help children solve their problems. Last year, a student in his neighborhood couldn’t fall asleep every night because of too much stress. When he heard this, he had a talk with him and encouraged him to do exercise together. Two weeks later, the student slept well and thanked him a lot. Amy prefers being an actor to being a director. She plays the lead role in the School Drama Club. She made her first appearance on TV in 2018. She is talented in acting. I am good at solving mysteries. I dream to be a detective and can find out the truth. I hope we can live in a peaceful world by helping the people in need. I think if we want to realize our dreams, we should be kind, warm-hearted, and be willing to help others. What’s more, each of us should work hard and improve ourselves. Then we can do what we can to help others. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求根据班里围绕“我们的梦想”讨论情况汇总，介绍Tony；Amy和你的梦想，并阐述自己的观点。要求要点覆盖全面，可适当扩充。 2. 写作指导：本文用到的一般现在时态和一般过去时态，人称用第一人称和第三人称单数。文章开头已给出，写作时，注意承接上文，写作中注意一些常用句式的表达，如宾语从句，条件状语从句等。注意在表达不同观点时，连词的使用。内容上应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。 13．包拯是一个中国的电影明星，他不仅年轻而且英俊，深受影迷喜爱。1998年，包拯拍了一部恐怖 片，在影片中他扮演了一位侦探。在片中，这位侦探查看了现场，询问邻居一些问题，寻找到了线索，最终抓住了杀人犯。由于包拯在这部影片中担任了重要角色并演得十分精彩，他获得了奥斯卡最佳男演员奖。下星期天晚上7：00－9：00这部影片将在金色电视台播出。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Bao Zheng is a Chinese film star. He is not only young but also handsome. He has a lot of fans and all of them like him very much. In 1998, Bao Zheng played the role of a detective in a horror film. In the film, this detective checked the scene, asked the  neighbours some questions and found the clues, at last he caught the murderer. Because Bao Zheng played an important role and played very wonderfully, he won an Oscar for Best Actor. This film will be shown on Golden TV at 7:00 –– 9:00 p.m. next Sunday. 【详解】1. 首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。 2.文章的文体是记叙文、人称用第三人称、用一般现在时和过去时交替使用。 3. 运用适当的短语表达中心思想，增加作文的可读性。完成提示词时也要符合事实。 4. 最后要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。 14．假如你是李华，你和朋友们准备开展一次侦探故事读书交流活动，你打算邀请你们班交换生Peter参加。请你用英语写一封邮件，告诉他读书交流活动的时间和地点，活动内容，以及需要准备什么。 提示词语：room, talk, read, story 提示问题：● When and where are you going to have the activity? ●What are you going to do? ●What do you advise Peter to prepare for the activity? Dear Peter, How is it going? I’m writing to invite you to our reading activity about detective stories. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ If there is anything that I can do, please let me know. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Peter, How is it going? I’m writing to invite you to our reading activity about detective stories. It will be held this Friday at 1 p.m. in the lecture hall. We will mainly talk about your favorite detective story book and why you like it. So if you attend, please prepare some detective stories about your favorite detective stories and their reasons in advance. You can also read some parts you like. Please attend on time. If there is anything that I can do, please let me know. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇电子邮件。写一封邮件给Peter，告诉他侦探故事读书交流活动的时间、地点和内容，以及他需要准备的东西。 2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主；人称以第二人称为主。写作时根据提示问题，正确的把重点内容叙述清楚，不要有单词语法错误，力求语句通顺。 15．Suppose you are Mark. You witnessed a crime. Write a diary in 60-120 words about it. (假设你是Mark，看到了一起犯罪活动，就你所见所为写一篇60-120个词的日记，标点符号不占格) The following questions are for reference（以下问题仅供参考）: Who did you see?   When and where did you see them?   What were they doing?    How did you feel?   What did you do then? 【答案】Today I came across a terrifying event. After supper, I walked my dog in the park near my home as usual. At a turning corner of the park, my dog noticed a number plate of a car and I was quite curious. Walking forward, I found something unusual. I saw four men and a car there. A man was carrying several packs to the trunk, I could see it was plenty of money inside the packs. Two men were painting the car in another color, while the last men were changing the number plate of the car in front of it. I knew immediately that I had witnessed a crime and those criminals were trying to uncover the crime. I felt terrified, but I knew it was my duty to report it to the police. So I quietly left there and went to the police station right away. At last, the police caught those criminals successfully. I felt proud of myself. 【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目属于看图作文，要求根据图片内容描述一次事件，其实是记叙文写作。根据要求首先要根据图片理清事件的内容，其次可采用参考内容中给出的叙事方向。 2. 例文点评：例文用第一人称来叙述个人的经历，时态采用一般过去时为主；此次事件的描述前因后果、时间地点、人物及其行为等都描写得非常完整，逻辑清晰、条理分明。 3. 高分亮点： 短语：come across；as usual；in front of；try to do；right away；at last；feel proud of sb.。 句型：that引导的宾语从句；while引导的时间状语从句；it’s+n.+to do sth.。 16 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 17 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$