专题04书面表达【考点串讲】-2024-2025学年九年级英语上学期期末考点大串讲(鲁教版五四制)

2024-2025学年九年级上期末考点大串讲（鲁教版五四制） 专题04 书面表达 考点串讲 1. 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！4 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 主题一:人类发明与创新 内容要求：介绍某项发明的历史或用途 要求:正确使用一般过去时的被动语态 【写作示例】 根据下面的提示内容,写一篇有关纸的改良历史的英语短文。 内容提示: 1.世界上原来没有纸,人们在石头或者木片、竹简上写字; 2.中国的蔡伦改良了纸张,他教会人们用各种废料来造纸; 3.纸张的改良推动了人类文明的进步,人们会永远记住这位伟大的发明家。 要求:不得逐字翻译内容提示,可适当增加细节,使短文更加连贯。 【参考范文】 　　About two thousand years ago, there was no paper in the world.People used to carve characters on wood, stone or bamboo slip.① The rich people wrote on silk or sheepskin. A Chinese inventor named Cai Lun tried his best to improve paper②.He taught people to make paper from waste materials like bark, used cloth and fishing nets.In the year around 105, paper of good quality was finally invented.It could be used for writing③. After the improvement,books became more and more popular all around the world④.The improvement of paper is very important in the development of human civilization.Cai Lun is a great inventor and we should remember him all the time.⑤ ①介绍没有纸人们是如何写字的。 ②try one’s best表达了蔡伦的努力程度。 ③be used for意为“用来……”,表达纸的用途。 ④采用more and more popular,增强了表达效果。 ⑤利用we should remember him all the time表达个人情感。 主题二:学校与班级规则 内容要求：介绍行为规则;对规则(制度)进行评价 要求:正确使用情态动词;观点明确 【写作示例】 　　校报英语版征文,题目为“Follow and Grow”,请你写一篇关于家规的90词左右的文章投稿,内容包括:(1)至少两条家规;(2)你对家规的认识;(3)如何回报你的家人。 【参考范文】 Follow and Grow A country has its laws and a family has its rules, too.① My family also has some rules. My parents don’t allow me to play computer games② in my free time.I am not allowed to stay up late because they think teenagers should have enough sleep to keep healthy③.I can’t go out on school nights.Because they worry about my safety.④ ①and连接并列句,引出话题。 ②使用allow描述不允许做的事情。 ③because引导原因状语从句,增强表达效果。 ④worry about表达了父母的担忧。 主题三:勤学善思 内容要求：围绕神秘事物进行推测判断；正确运用情态动词进行推测判断,表达自己的观点或看法;注意描述神秘事物的相关词汇和句式结构 【写作示例】 　　假如你在雨夜突然听到敲门声,请根据以下提示,写一篇不少于80词的短文。 　　提示: 　　(1)不可能是父母,因为他们正在隔壁睡觉; 　　(2)可能是狗,但是狗在客厅躺着; 　　(3)可能是小偷,但小偷不会敲门; 　　(4)一定是风,因为天正在下雨。 【参考范文】 　　One rainy night,while I was sleeping, suddenly, someone knocked at the door and woke me up.① ①while/suddenly等词的运用起到了很好的渲染效果。 　　I felt really scared.② It can’t be my parents because they were sleeping in the next room.So I thought it might be our dog, but it was lying in the sitting room.But then, what could it be? Could it be a thief? However, a thief never knocked at the door! ③ Oh, I see,it must be the wind because it was raining and the wind was strong outside.④ Finally, I felt much better and fell asleep again. ②该句描述了当时“我”的恐惧,从而为下面的各种猜测做好铺垫。 ③So/But then/However等词的运用使文章连贯顺畅;并恰当运用can’t,might,could等情态动词进行合理推测。 ④运用must做出肯定推测,并运用because从句说明推测的依据,逻辑严谨。 主题四:文学、艺术与体育 内容要求：谈论自己或他人对音乐和电影的喜好;谈论音乐和电影对人们生活的影响；正确使用复合句。 【写作示例】 　　音乐在人们的生活中占有很重要的位置,因为音乐能给人们带来力量和快乐。不同的人喜欢不同的音乐。请根据表格中的提示,用英语介绍他们对音乐的爱好及理由。词数80左右。 注意:文章中必须使用定语从句。 Name What kind of music Reason Mary dance music enjoying dancing Tom rock music and dance music interesting Linda country music relaxing I ... ... 【参考范文】 　　Music is important in our daily life.It can bring us energy and joy.However, different people like different kinds of music.①Here are different opinions about music. 　　Mary likes music that she can dance to,②because she enjoys dancing.Tom enjoys rock music and dance music very much③. He thinks they are interesting.Linda prefers music that is relaxing,② so she likes country music a lot③. I also like country music because it can make me feel quiet. 　　I think we can choose different kinds of music depending on our feelings.We should love music, and love life.④ ①However的运用使文章转入正题,连贯、自然。 ②定语从句的使用使句子内容丰富、结构集中。 ③very much, a lot等程度副词(短语)的运用,展现了作者深厚的语言功底。 ④总结提升,指导生活。 主题五:跨文化沟通与交流,语言与文化 内容要求：介绍不同国家的风俗习惯;根据不同的风俗习惯提供合适的建议。正确使用be supposed/expected to;注意表达风俗习惯的词汇的运用。 【写作示例】 　　Tom要到中国来学习,并且受邀到中国朋友家做客,他向你请教一些中国的礼节。假设你是王华,请你用英语给Tom写一封80词左右的电子邮件,告诉他一些要注意的事项。 提示:1.准时到达;　2.买一份小礼物; 3.用餐时赞美菜的味道。 【参考范文】 Dear Tom, 　　Welcome to China.① I know that you will visit your Chinese friend’s home. I am glad to tell you some good manners in China. If you do the following, I think you will feel comfortable. 　　First②, you are supposed to④ arrive on time. Being late is impolite.③ It is also good to④ bring a small gift, such as flowers or fruit. You will probably use chopsticks to eat dinner. You’re not supposed to④ stick your chopsticks into your food. You should say that the food is delicious while you are eating. Last but not least②, you are expected to④ say thanks after dinner. 　　I hope you’ll have a good time in China. Good luck! Yours, Wang Hua ①开头使用Welcome to China,彰显中国礼仪,很热情,很亲切。 ②First/Last but not least的运用使罗列建议条理分明。 ③使用动名词作主语,语言简洁。 ④短语和句式的交替使用使原本单调的建议罗列不再枯燥无味。 主题六:积极的学习体验 内容要求：事情简述;情感表达正确使用make;选择恰当的形容词描述感受;正确运用时态;合理运用连词。 【写作示例】 　　假如你是李华,请根据下列提示写一篇短文,分享你的经历和感受。 时间 做法 结果 感受 上周 不努力学习、熬夜玩电脑游戏 考试不及格 难过,担心 本周 家长鼓励、同学和老师帮助、认真听课、按时完成作业 考试取得好成绩,受到表扬 高兴,自豪 总结经验:合理利用时间;努力学习…… 要求:可适当发挥,但必须包括表格中所给的所有信息;词数:80左右。 【参考范文】 　　Hi, I’m Li Hua. Now let me share some of my experiences and feelings with you. 　　Last week, I didn’t work hard. I stayed up late to play computer games. As a result, I failed the exam.① It made② me sad and worried. I let my parents down②. Luckily, my parents encouraged me to work hard. My teachers and classmates also helped me a lot. I listened carefully in class and finished my homework on time. This week, I got good grades and high praise② from my teachers. That made② me happy and proud. 　　From this experience, I know that we should use our time wisely and work hard every day.③ That can make② us succeed. ①As a result 的使用使叙述连贯流畅。 ②运用本单元重要词汇短语make/let...down/praise等,学以致用。 ③句中既对自己的经历进行总结提升,又令文章结构更加完整。 主题七:身心健康,抗挫能力,珍爱生命的意识 内容要求：描述幸运或不幸运的一天。正确使用时态;使用恰当的连词、副词,使叙述连贯自然;正确使用形容词表述个人感受 【写作示例】 　　你经历过糟糕的一天吗?那天发生了什么事情?你是如何度过那一天的呢?请以“My Bad Day”为题,用英语写一篇短文,给某英语杂志的“Your Voices”专栏投稿。 要求:1.不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名; 2.词数80左右。 【参考范文】 My Bad Day Life is full of the unexpected. I will always remember that day—September 1st.① It was the first day of this new term. My alarm clock didn’t go off. When I woke up in the morning, it was nearly 7 o’clock. I rushed to school without having breakfast.② 　　However, when I got to school, I realized that I had left my backpack at home.③Then I went back home to get it. On the way home, I ran as quickly as I could. Suddenly, I was knocked down by a bike and my knees were badly hurt.④ I was sent to hospital. 　　What a bad day I had! 2 开门见山,点明主题。 ②运用rushed to而不是went to,很好地表现了当时的急迫。 ③However的使用凸显了“rushed”带来的后果。正确运用过去完成时。 ④Suddenly,badly的运用使故事跌宕起伏。 主题八:环保意识和行为 内容要求：描述污染问题及原因;提出合理的环境保护措施。正确使用不同的时态和语态。 【写作示例】 　　保护人类共同的家园——地球,是每个人的责任和义务。我们在生活中的点滴小事上也能做出自己的贡献。根据表格内容,谈一谈你平时为保护环境做过哪些努力,将来还打算如何去做。 要求:1.词数:80左右; 2.意思连贯,条理清晰,适当发挥。 turn off the lights when you leave a room turn off the shower while washing hair stop using paper napkins take your own bags when shopping stop riding in cars ride a bike recycle books and paper 【参考范文】 　　It’s our duty to protect the earth.① I always turn off the lights when I leave a room. While I am washing my hair②,I usually turn off the shower. Besides,I stop using paper napkins and if I want to shop,I always take my own bags instead of using plastic bags.③ And I have decided to do more things to protect our earth, such as stopping riding in cars, riding a bike,and recycling books and paper④. I think my actions can make a difference! Let’s take action now!⑤ ①开篇点题,表明责任。 ②when,while从句的运用,使语境更充分。 ③Besides的运用,使表达层次更清晰。 ④运用such as进行举例说明,措施表达更加具体、充实。 ⑤运用祈使句发出呼吁,增强表达效果,首尾呼应。 主题九:谈论习惯 内容要求：描述交友,饮食,锻炼等方面的习惯,介绍好习惯的益处；正确辨别好习惯与坏习惯；写作时要注意描述习惯的单词、短语及句式的运用；辨别好习惯与坏习惯对我们的影响 【写作示例】 国家把每年 6月6日定为爱眼日,请你结合自己的体会,就如何爱护眼睛,给校报英语栏目写一篇短文。内容包括: 1.吃有益于眼睛的食物,如胡萝卜、鸡蛋等; 2.多做眼保健操,长时间用眼后可看看远方; 3.养成良好的用眼习惯,如不躺着玩手机或看书等。 注意:1.词数 80左右; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.开头已给出,不计入总词数。 Nowadays, more and more students are getting near-sighted, so National Eye Care Day is set on June 6 every year. 【参考范文】 　　Nowadays, more and more students are getting near-sighted, so National Eye Care Day is set on June 6 every year. As we all know, eyes are the windows of the soul. We should try our best to protect them. Here are some suggestions for good eye health①. First, eat some foods that are good for eyes, such as carrots and eggs. Second, do more eye exercises to make them relax②. Also, it’s helpful to look far away from time to time after studying long. Finally, make sure to have good habits of using eyes③. Don’t read books or use a cell phone in bed. In a word, eyes are so important that all of us should do what we can to keep them healthy④. ①点明主题,引出下文。 ②使用不定式作目的状语,表现出了深厚的英语语法功底。 ③make sure表达了作者的强烈建议。 ④表达个人观点,自然收篇结尾。 主题十:丰富、充实、积极向上的生活 内容要求：回顾初中三年来的学校生活并展望未来,记叙初中学习和生活中对你影响最大的人或事,并表达自己的观点。正确使用人称及不同的时态和语态。 【写作示例】 你们学校即将举办以“School Is a Big Family”为题的英语演讲比赛。请根据下列要求,从结构图的三个方面写一篇英文演讲稿。 要求:1.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整; 2.词数:100词左右。(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。) Good afternoon, everyone! I am glad to be here to give a speech.My topic is “School Is a Big Family”. 　　Thank you for your time! 【参考范文】 Good afternoon, everyone! I am glad to be here to give a speech.My topic is“School Is a Big Family”. ①School is a warm place to me. Many people around me are kind and friendly to me.②For example, my teachers are strict but patient. Whenever I meet difficulties in my study,③they are always there to help me.Then, my classmates are the friendliest.④Last year I broke my arm.They all took turns to buy lunch for me. I was so moved.In return, I am good with others.I often help my classmates clean the classroom. ⑤I believe we all need to play a part in keeping our school clean and warm. Thank you for your time! ①句子“School is a warm place to me.” 起到总领全文的作用 ②短语for example用于举例,使用恰当 ③always一词起突出强调作用,一个乐于助人的群体,活灵活现 ④列举去年摔断胳膊的例子,增强文章说服力 ⑤结尾表达自己观点,积极向上。 考点精练 1．假如你是李华，你喜欢发明创造。在学校科技节上，你的最新发明“My smart schoolbag”获一等奖。请以“My smart schoolbag”为题，根据下面表格中的内容，写一篇发言稿，介绍你的新发明。 外观 看起来和普通书包一样，有一个显示屏 材料 布 (cloth)，塑料 (plastic) 优点 查单词，与父母联系，讲笑话哄主人开心…… 缺点 重量大…… 历时 2个月 评价 …… 注意： （1）短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。 （2）词数80个左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. I’d like to introduce my new invention to you. It is______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．假设你们学校校报开展英语征文，题目为“Follow and Grow (家规促成长)”，请你写一篇英文短文投稿，文章包括以下内容： 1．两条家规； 2．对你的影响； 3．如何回报你家。 要求： 1.词数90左右； 2．适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．文中不能出现任何真实信息。 Follow and Grow __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．安全对每个人都很重要。为了进一步增强中学生的安全意识，提高自我保护能力，你校将开展以“安全”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请根据以下提示及要求，以“Safety rules at school”为题写一篇演讲稿，介绍你们在学校应该注意的安全准则。 提示：1. 上、下楼梯不要拥挤；2. 不要从楼上往下扔杂物；3. 玩耍时不能使用刀等尖锐物品；4. 在学校不抽烟、不喝酒。 要求：1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；4. 演讲稿开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Safety rules at school Hello, everyone! It’s important for us to keep safe at school. To be safe, we must follow these rules at school. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you! 4．请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，描述上周三你生日那天发生的一件神秘的事。 要点提示：1. 放学回家后，家里没有人；2. 我发现我的房间很乱；3. 分析可能的原因，如小偷闯入；4. 后来发现是一只小狗在房间里，这是妈妈送给我的生日礼物。 写作要求：1. 词数90左右 (开头已经给出，不计入总词数)；2. 根据要点提示，可以适当发挥；3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。 参考词汇：in a mess乱糟糟；break in闯入 It was my birthday last Wednesday. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．艺术总是伴随着人的成长，无论是当我们沉浸在幸福中，还是面临困难挫折，它总能给人带来温暖、勇气和力量。在你成长过程中，是不是也有这么一本书、一首歌或者一部电影，对你有特别的影响和意义呢？请你以 My favorite _________为题，介绍一本书、一首歌或者一部电影。 注意事项： 1）字数：100 词左右； 2）短文内容应包含提示的要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．假如你是李辉，你的一位英国笔友Kate发来电子邮件，说她下星期来中国，她向你询问中国的餐桌礼仪。请你根据下面提示给她回一封电子邮件，告诉她有关情况。词数80~ 100。参考词汇： toast (vt. 为……举杯敬酒) 提示： 1. 等大家都到齐了再开吃； 2. 让长辈或客人先动筷； 3. 不能用筷子敲碗； 4. 不要将手伸到饭桌对面夹菜； 5. 为主人的健康、成功干杯…… Dear Kate, I’m glad to receive your email. Now I want to tell you something about the Chinese table manners. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hui 7．电影《你好，李焕英》讲述了妈妈和女儿之间的故事。影片将母爱诠释得恰到好处，令观众感动不已。我们总以为自己已经很爱妈妈了， 但妈妈远比你想象中还要爱你。生活中，你和妈妈之间肯定发生过很多令你难以忘记的事情，请用英语介绍你的妈妈，讲述一件你们经历过的事情，并说说你会用什么实际行动来报答妈妈。 内容包括： •something about your mother（外表，性格，爱好） •an experience you had with your mother •what you will do to thank her 要求： 1. 词数不少于80； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．假如你是李华，你和你的家人想在新家举办一次乔迁聚会 (a housewarming party)，请根据下面要点和要求，用英文给你的朋友们写一则不少于40词的邀请函。 要点：1. 新家地址—和平路5号； 2. 开始时间—本周日晚上7点； 3. 提供服务—美食和饮料； 4. 回复时间—本周五之前。 要求：字迹工整；要点齐全；表述通顺；简洁得体。（答题卡上直接写正文） Dear friends, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua 9．近日，我区多次出现雾霾（haze）天气，引发了人们对环境污染的广泛关注。为了提高同学们的环保意识，你们班将要举行“How to Protect the Environment”的主题班会。请你围绕“环境保护”这一主题，谈谈作为中学生该如何保护环境，写一篇发言稿。 注意： (1)结构工整，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范； (2)发言稿中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； (3)词数 80~100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear teachers and friends, Good afternoon, everyone! It’s a great honor for me to speak here. Now more and more people have realized the importance of protecting the environment. As students, it’s our duty to protect our earth. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thanks for listening! 10．习总书记强调，全民健身是全体人民增强体魄、健康生活的基础保障。假如你校校园广播《英语之声》以热爱运动为主题征稿。请结合自身经历，介绍你的运动喜好，并谈谈原因及影响。 要点如下： 1）热爱的运动； 2）热爱的理由； 3）产生的影响。 注意事项： 1）词数80—100； 2）文中不能出现真实人名和校名。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11．每个人在学校期间，都有自己难忘的老师。假如你叫李雷，毕业在即，请你根据以下提示给你的英语老师(Miss Zhao)写一封信。内容包括： 1. 表达感激之情； 2. 回忆印象最深的一件事(一次帮助，或一次鼓励，或一次批评……)； 3. 你的感想或建议； 4. 100词左右。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．下周英语角的话题为“My Favorite Invention”。请你根据下面的提示和要求，写一篇80词左右的发言稿。 提示：1. 你最喜欢的发明是什么? 2. 这个发明有什么用途? 3. 你为什么喜欢它? 要求：1. 内容包括提示中所有的写作要点； 2. 条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； 3. 文中不能出现真实的人名、学校等信息。 My Favorite Invention _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．假如你是九年级三班的学生盛明，今天英语课上你们班同学就“课间是否该放音乐”这一话题进行了讨论。请你根据下表中的提示内容, 以“Should music be played between classes?”为题，写一篇英语短文。 赞同意见 音乐使他们觉得快乐、放松，音乐使他们的课间生活丰富多彩 反对意见 吵闹的音乐使他们更兴奋，不利于课间休息 你的看法 . . . . . . 要求: 1）短文应包括提示中列有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； 2）短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名； 3）不少于 80 词。 Should music be played between classes? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14．假如你是李华，你校正在举办以“科技改变生活”为主题的演讲比赛。请你根据以下思维导图的提示，用英语写一篇演讲稿，介绍一些身边的科技发明及其优点。 参考词汇：convenient, shop online, have video calls, save time, easy to travel, environmental-friendly, … 要求：1. 可选择使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥；2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；4. 词数：不少于70词。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数） Hello, everyone! I am Li Hua. It’s a great honor for me to speak here. The rapid development of science and technology brings us great inventions and the inventions make our life better and better.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all my speech. Thank you! 参考答案 1． Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. I’d like to introduce my new invention to you. It is my smart schoolbag. It looks like an ordinary schoolbag, but it has a special screen. It is made of cloth and plastic. There are many advantages of my smart schoolbag. It can help me look up new words easily. I can also use it to communicate with my parents. Sometimes, it can tell jokes to make me happy. However, it is a little heavy. I spent two months inventing it. I believe it will be better in the future. Good morning, everyone! Today, I’m excited to show you my smart schoolbag. My bag looks like a normal one but has a special screen. It’s made of cloth and plastic, which are friendly to our planet. The screen helps me talk to my parents and find new words easily. There’s also a “joke” button that makes me laugh when I’m feeling down. My schoolbag is a bit heavy, but it’s good for carrying some books. I worked hard for two months to make this bag, and I think it’s really cool. Thanks for listening! [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇讲稿。 ②时态：一般现在时和一般过去时。 ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点内容，可适当发挥。注意写作时要按第一人称写。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，介绍自己的最新发明“My smart schoolbag”。 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，智能书包的外观、材料、优点、缺点、评价等。 第三步，书写结语，相信智能书包未来会更好。 [亮点词汇] ①look up new words查新单词 ②spent two months inventing it花了两个月时间发明它 [高分句型] It’s made of cloth and plastic, which are friendly to our planet. （非限制性定语从句） 2．One possible version： Follow and Grow A country has its laws and a family has its rules, too. My family also has some rules. My parents don’t allow me to play computer games in my free time. I am not allowed to stay up late because they think teenagers should have enough sleep to keep healthy. I can’t go out on school nights. Because they worry about my safety. I think my parents are too strict with me. But I understand they really love me. I communicate with my parents as much as possible, sharing my happiness and sadness with them. And I often help them with housework. All in all, I love my family rules which make me grow. [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，介绍自己的家规； 第二步，介绍家规对自己的影响 第三步，介绍自己如何回报家。 [亮点词汇] ①allow sb. to do sth.允许某人做某事 ②stay up late熬夜 ③keep healthy保持健康 ④worry about担心 ⑤be strict with sb.对某人严格要求 ⑥communicate with sb.与某人沟通 [高分句型] I am not allowed to stay up late because they think teenagers should have enough sleep to keep healthy.(because引导原因状语从句) 3．One possible version: Safety rules at school Hello, everyone! It’s important for us to keep safe at school. To be safe, we must follow these rules at school. First, don’t crowd when we go upstairs or downstairs, or we may hurt ourselves by falling off steps. Second, we are not allowed to throw rubbish out of the windows of tall buildings. Third, we mustn’t use sharp things like knives when we play with our classmates. Fourth, smoking and drinking are not allowed at school, either. They’re bad for our health. Last, we should be friendly to our teachers and classmates. Don’t fight with our classmates. Remember these rules, and we’ll be safe at school. That’s all. Thank you! [总体分析] ①题材：本文是演讲稿； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的几个要点均要一一阐述，适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表明写作意图。借用“在学校保持安全非常重要”来引出重点介绍的内容。 第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——不要拥挤、不要扔杂物、不拿尖锐物品、不抽烟喝酒均要一一阐述。 第三步：书写结语。表达“谢谢您的聆听”的感谢。 [亮点词汇] ①follow these rules遵守这些规则 ②hurt ourselves伤害我们自己 ③fight with与……战斗 [高分句型] ①Third, we mustn’t use sharp things like knives when we play with our classmates. (when引导的状语从句） ②Don’t fight with our classmates. (祈使句) 4． It was my birthday last Wednesday. After school, I came home as usual. To my surprise, I found my room was in a mess when I opened the door. My books were everywhere. I didn’t know who did that. There must be someone visiting my room. I was very angry and decided to find out who did this. I guessed it might be a thief who broke in my room, but other rooms were clean and tidy. Then I thought it could be my little brother, who played in my room. However, he was too short to open the door. As I wondered, a lovely dog came out. At the same time, my parents came and told me it was my birthday present. I was so happy that I didn’t care about the mess anymore. That birthday present is the best one that I’ve ever received. [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。 ②时态：本文应使用“一般过去时”。 ③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“放学后回到家后，房间的情况”；“见到房间很乱，心里活动是什么样的”；以及“最后发觉是妈妈送的宠物狗”等要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍事件发生的背景。 第二步，介绍事件发生的经过，重点介绍作者的心理活动。 第三步，收尾并表达作者对礼物的喜爱之情。 [亮点词汇] ①mess混乱 ②angry生气的 ③birthday present生日礼物 [高分句型] ①There must be someone visiting my room.（there be句型） ②Then I thought it could be my little brother, who played in my room. （定语从句） 5． My favorite movie My name is Li Hua. I like movies very much. I think a good movie can teach us about life, or explain what the meaning of life is, what real friendship is and so on. Zootopia is one of my favorite movies. It is a cartoon movie. The story is about a rabbit that joins the police force and solves a difficult case with a fox. I like the movie because it teaches me to stick to my dream and then to achieve it. “If you don’t try anything new, you’ll never succeed.” These words from the movie influenced me a lot. [总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ② 时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③ 提示：写作题目已给出，考生应注意完善题目，文章适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，补全题干； 第二步，整体对作品介绍； 第三步，介绍你喜爱的理由。 [亮点词汇] ①stick to坚持 ②achieve实现 [高分句型] ①I think a good movie can teach us about life, or explain what the meaning of life is, what real friendship is and so on.（what引导宾语从句） ②I like the movie because it teaches me to stick to my dream and then to achieve it.（because引导原因状语从句） 6． Dear Kate, I’m glad to receive your email. Now I want to tell you something about the Chinese table manners. In China, we must wait until everyone is at the table. And when the dinner starts, the host doesn’t eat every dish first. He waits for the guests and elders to dig in. We don’t tap bowls with the chopsticks, which is considered impolite. We shouldn’t reach across the table to get something to eat, because in that case, we may break or knock something over. Besides, we usually toast good health or success of the host and thank him for his treat. Hope to see you in China and everything goes well. Yours, Li Hui [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作的要点提示已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏任何要点，可适当添加细节，使邮件内容意思完整。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接已给出的开头，并按照内容提示，一一介绍中国的餐桌礼仪； 第二步，书写结语，表示期待见到Kate，并给予祝福。 [亮点词汇] ① in that case 在那种情况下 ② at the table 在餐桌上 ③ everything goes well 一切顺利 [高分句型] ① And when the dinner starts, the host doesn’t eat every dish first. (when引导时间状语从句) ② We don’t tap bowls with the chopsticks, which is considered impolite. (which引导非限制性定语从句) 7．范文: My mother is a kind and gentle woman. She is a pretty woman with a round face and two big black eyes. She always has a smile on her face. And she likes cooking and reading. I love my mother very much. I still remember it was the summer vacation in Grade 8 when I felt painful in my foot and found that I was bitten by a snake. Without saying anything, my mother took me to the hospital in a rush. Thanks to my mother, the doctor saved me in time. It took me a few days to fully recover. What a great mother she is! My mother loves me so much. To thank my mother, I will always listen to her and never do anything that makes her angry. And I will make every effort to do the housework to help my mother reduce the burden. [总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；   ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；   ③提示：根据所给的内容提示完成写作，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。   [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍妈妈的外表，性格，爱好，并表明很爱妈妈；   第二步，讲述你和妈妈之间难忘的一件事；   第三步，介绍自己将如何感谢妈妈。   [亮点词汇]   ①in a rush匆忙地   ②thanks to由于 ③make every effort to do尽一切努力去做 ④do the housework做家务 [高分句型] ①I still remember it was the summer vacation in Grade 8 when I felt painful in my foot and found that I was bitten by a snake. （宾语从句；when引导的定语从句） ②What a great mother she is!（感叹句） 8． Dear friends,             We’re planning a housewarming party at our new house this Sunday. Can you come? Our house is at 5 Heping Road. The party will begin at 7:00 p.m. We will serve delicious food and drink. Please let us know by Friday if you can come. Hope you can make it! Li Hua [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，是邀请函； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并注意适当添加细节，突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“你的家人和你想在新家举行一次乔迁聚会”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，分别从聚会的时间，地址，美食，饮料及回复时间等方面去叙述。 [亮点词汇] ①a housewarming party乔迁聚会 ②serve上菜 [高分句型] ①Please let us know by Friday if you can come.（“if”引导宾语从句） ②Hope you can make it!（祈使句） 9．: Dear teachers and friends， Good afternoon, everyone! It’s a great honor for me to speak here. Now more and more people have realized the importance of protecting the environment. As students, it’s our duty to protect our earth. In my daily life, I always turn off the lights when I leave a room. Besides, if I go shopping, I always take my own bags instead of plastic ones. I have decided to do more things, such as recycling books and stopping riding in cars. It’s good for us to ride bikes or walk to school. I never throw litter everywhere. I’ll make the public places clean. We can also plant more trees to improve the air around us. In a word, no matter what a small effort we make, it does make a difference. Let’s take action now! That’s all. Thank you for your listening! [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：考试应紧扣“环境保护”这一主题进行发挥，不要遗漏要点，表达清楚。 [写作步骤] ①第一步，强调保护环境的重要性； ②第二步，介绍日常保护环境的例子； ③第三步，呼吁大家保护环境，行动起来。 [亮点词汇] ①turn off the lights关灯 ②instead of代替 ③in a word总而言之 [高分句型] ①I always turn off the lights when I leave a room.（when引导的时间状语从句）                                                                                 ② Besides, if I go shopping, I always take my own bags instead of plastic ones.（if引导的条件状语从句） 10．参考范文 President Xi pointed out the importance of doing sports for all Chinese. As a Chinese student, it’s my duty to build up my body and keep fit. And among various kinds of sports activities, I like swimming best. When I was a little girl, I was weak all the time. One day, a friend of mine told me that swimming can improve my physical fitness so I decided to have a try. Day by day, I couldn’t believe that I fall in love with swimming. Swimming keeps me healthy. There’s no doubt that people who swim a lot have stronger bodies than those who don’t. Swimming contributes to a powerful lung and also reduces the risk of heart disease. Thanks to swimming, I have seldom been sick in the past few years. What’s more, to my surprise, I find that swimming is an effective way to help me lose weight and have a slim figure. Last summer, I kept swimming for 3 days a week. After two months, I’ve lost 5kg weight in total! All in all, swimming not only keeps me healthy, but also helps me with a slim figure. I think if we want to live a better life, we must make an effort to do sports as much as possible. [总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍你热爱的运动； 第二步，结合自身经历谈谈原因及影响。 [亮点词汇] ① all the time一直 ② have a try试一试 ③ what’s more更重要的是 ④ all in all总而言之 [高分句型] ①When I was a little girl, I was weak all the time.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②Day by day, I couldn’t believe that I fall in love with swimming.（that引导的宾语从句） ③I think if we want to live a better life, we must make an effort to do sports as much as possible.（if引导的条件状语从句） 11． Dear Miss Zhao, As you know, I’ve made great progress in English with your help. At this moment, I want to say “Thank you”． I still remember when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it. I lost confidence and almost gave it up. As soon as you knew it, you had a long talk with me about how to learn English well. You always encouraged me whenever I made a little progress. Ever since then I have been interested in it and improved myself a lot. Though I have to say goodbye to you very soon, I still think I am so lucky to be your student. I hope you can relax yourself and keep healthy. Best wishes to you! Yours, Li Lei [总体分析] ① 题材：这是一篇书信作文，为应用文； ② 时态：主要采用“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：写作内容包括表达感激之情、回忆往事、感想或建议；注意书信作文的格式。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表达对赵老师的感激之情； 第二步，讲述和赵老师之间印象最深的一件事； 第三步，表达感想和祝福。 [亮点词汇] ① make great progress in 在……方面取得很大进步 ② lose confidence 失去信心 ③ as soon as 一……就…… ④ ever since then 从那以后 [高分句型] ① No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it.（让步状语从句） ② I hope you can relax yourself and keep healthy.（宾语从句） 12． My Favorite Invention The mobile phone is my favorite invention. The first mobile phone was invented in1940 in America. And it makes our life more convenient. First, mobile phones help people communicate with each other no matter where they are. They are used for calling. Second, they can also be used for sending short messages to express our feelings. What’s more, we can surf the Internet on mobile phones. That helps us open our eyes to the outside world. And we can get the information we want to know easily. And when we feel tired, we can listen to the music to make us relaxed. I think this invention has made our life more convenient and colourful. ［总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇发言稿； ② 时态：主要用一般现在时； ③ 提示：介绍最喜欢的发明，需要遵照所给要求，信息覆盖全面，适当补充细节。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，说明自己最喜欢的发明，引出下文； 第二步，介绍这个发明有什么用途以及喜欢的理由； 第三步，总结全文。 ［亮点词汇］ ① communicate with 和某人交流 ②be used for被用来 ③listen to music听音乐 ［高分句型］ ① Second, they can also be used for sending short messages to express our feelings.（动词不定式作目的状语） ② And when we feel tired, we can listen to the music to make us relaxed.（时间状语从句） 13． Should music be played between classes? We had a discussion about whether music should be played between classes in English class. Some think listening to music between classes is a good idea. Music can make them feel happy and relaxed. Music can make their lives colorful. However, others are against the idea. They think music may have a bad influence because some music is too noisy and they may get too excited to take a break. In my opinion, it’s good to play some soft and peaceful music instead of loud noisy music during the class break. In this way, students can enjoy music as well as having a good rest. Besides, I suggest playing music that is suitable for middle school students. [总体分析] ①题材： 本文是一篇议论文； ②时态： 时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示： 写作要点已给出，考生应注意避免“信息遗漏”，根据表格的提示，分别写出赞同意见、反对意见以及自己的看法。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。表明班级开展了一次讨论，引出下文； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。根据表格的提示，分别写出赞同意见、反对意见以及自己的看法； 第三步，书写结语。表达自己的观点。 [亮点词汇] ①discussion讨论 ②relaxed放松的 ③take break休息 ④suitable合适的 [高分句型] ①We had a discussion about whether music should be played between classes in English class. (whether引导的宾语从句） ②In my opinion, it’s good to play some soft and peaceful music instead of loud noisy music during the class break. (it句式结构) 14．参考范文： Hello, everyone! I am Li Hua. It’s a great honor for me to speak here. The rapid development of science and technology brings us great inventions and the inventions make our life better and better. Today, I want to talk about four great inventions. They are smart phones, robots, high-speed trains and electric cars. The smart phones make our life convenient. We can shop online, watch movies, and have video calls by using the smart phone. As for the robot, it can help us with housework. It saves us a lot of time. The high-speed train has greatly improved our travel speed. Travelling becomes easier than before. The electric car has also changed our life. It can not only save energy but also protect the environment. That’s all my speech. Thank you! [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿。 ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中一些身边的科技发明及其优点的介绍，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“请你根据以下思维导图的提示，用英语写一篇演讲稿，介绍一些身边的科技发明及其优点”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“智能手机、高铁、机器人等”几个方面重点介绍一些身边的科技发明及其优点的具体情况； 第三步，书写结语，表达感谢。 [亮点词汇] ①want to do sth想要做某事； ②by doing sth通过做某事； ③as for至于； ④not only, but also不仅，而且。 [高分句型] ①It’s a great honor for me to speak here. (“It’s a great honor for sb to do sth”句型) ②Travelling becomes easier than before. (动名词作主语) 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！4 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 2024-2025学年九年级上期末考点大串讲（鲁教版五四制） 专题04 书面表达 考点串讲 1. 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！4 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 主题一:人类发明与创新 内容要求：介绍某项发明的历史或用途 要求:正确使用一般过去时的被动语态 【写作示例】 根据下面的提示内容,写一篇有关纸的改良历史的英语短文。 内容提示: 1.世界上原来没有纸,人们在石头或者木片、竹简上写字; 2.中国的蔡伦改良了纸张,他教会人们用各种废料来造纸; 3.纸张的改良推动了人类文明的进步,人们会永远记住这位伟大的发明家。 要求:不得逐字翻译内容提示,可适当增加细节,使短文更加连贯。 【参考范文】 　　About two thousand years ago, there was no paper in the world.People used to carve characters on wood, stone or bamboo slip.① The rich people wrote on silk or sheepskin. A Chinese inventor named Cai Lun tried his best to improve paper②.He taught people to make paper from waste materials like bark, used cloth and fishing nets.In the year around 105, paper of good quality was finally invented.It could be used for writing③. After the improvement,books became more and more popular all around the world④.The improvement of paper is very important in the development of human civilization.Cai Lun is a great inventor and we should remember him all the time.⑤ ①介绍没有纸人们是如何写字的。 ②try one’s best表达了蔡伦的努力程度。 ③be used for意为“用来……”,表达纸的用途。 ④采用more and more popular,增强了表达效果。 ⑤利用we should remember him all the time表达个人情感。 主题二:学校与班级规则 内容要求：介绍行为规则;对规则(制度)进行评价 要求:正确使用情态动词;观点明确 【写作示例】 　　校报英语版征文,题目为“Follow and Grow”,请你写一篇关于家规的90词左右的文章投稿,内容包括:(1)至少两条家规;(2)你对家规的认识;(3)如何回报你的家人。 【参考范文】 Follow and Grow A country has its laws and a family has its rules, too.① My family also has some rules. My parents don’t allow me to play computer games② in my free time.I am not allowed to stay up late because they think teenagers should have enough sleep to keep healthy③.I can’t go out on school nights.Because they worry about my safety.④ ①and连接并列句,引出话题。 ②使用allow描述不允许做的事情。 ③because引导原因状语从句,增强表达效果。 ④worry about表达了父母的担忧。 主题三:勤学善思 内容要求：围绕神秘事物进行推测判断；正确运用情态动词进行推测判断,表达自己的观点或看法;注意描述神秘事物的相关词汇和句式结构 【写作示例】 　　假如你在雨夜突然听到敲门声,请根据以下提示,写一篇不少于80词的短文。 　　提示: 　　(1)不可能是父母,因为他们正在隔壁睡觉; 　　(2)可能是狗,但是狗在客厅躺着; 　　(3)可能是小偷,但小偷不会敲门; 　　(4)一定是风,因为天正在下雨。 【参考范文】 　　One rainy night,while I was sleeping, suddenly, someone knocked at the door and woke me up.① ①while/suddenly等词的运用起到了很好的渲染效果。 　　I felt really scared.② It can’t be my parents because they were sleeping in the next room.So I thought it might be our dog, but it was lying in the sitting room.But then, what could it be? Could it be a thief? However, a thief never knocked at the door! ③ Oh, I see,it must be the wind because it was raining and the wind was strong outside.④ Finally, I felt much better and fell asleep again. ②该句描述了当时“我”的恐惧,从而为下面的各种猜测做好铺垫。 ③So/But then/However等词的运用使文章连贯顺畅;并恰当运用can’t,might,could等情态动词进行合理推测。 ④运用must做出肯定推测,并运用because从句说明推测的依据,逻辑严谨。 主题四:文学、艺术与体育 内容要求：谈论自己或他人对音乐和电影的喜好;谈论音乐和电影对人们生活的影响；正确使用复合句。 【写作示例】 　　音乐在人们的生活中占有很重要的位置,因为音乐能给人们带来力量和快乐。不同的人喜欢不同的音乐。请根据表格中的提示,用英语介绍他们对音乐的爱好及理由。词数80左右。 注意:文章中必须使用定语从句。 Name What kind of music Reason Mary dance music enjoying dancing Tom rock music and dance music interesting Linda country music relaxing I ... ... 【参考范文】 　　Music is important in our daily life.It can bring us energy and joy.However, different people like different kinds of music.①Here are different opinions about music. 　　Mary likes music that she can dance to,②because she enjoys dancing.Tom enjoys rock music and dance music very much③. He thinks they are interesting.Linda prefers music that is relaxing,② so she likes country music a lot③. I also like country music because it can make me feel quiet. 　　I think we can choose different kinds of music depending on our feelings.We should love music, and love life.④ ①However的运用使文章转入正题,连贯、自然。 ②定语从句的使用使句子内容丰富、结构集中。 ③very much, a lot等程度副词(短语)的运用,展现了作者深厚的语言功底。 ④总结提升,指导生活。 主题五:跨文化沟通与交流,语言与文化 内容要求：介绍不同国家的风俗习惯;根据不同的风俗习惯提供合适的建议。正确使用be supposed/expected to;注意表达风俗习惯的词汇的运用。 【写作示例】 　　Tom要到中国来学习,并且受邀到中国朋友家做客,他向你请教一些中国的礼节。假设你是王华,请你用英语给Tom写一封80词左右的电子邮件,告诉他一些要注意的事项。 提示:1.准时到达;　2.买一份小礼物; 3.用餐时赞美菜的味道。 【参考范文】 Dear Tom, 　　Welcome to China.① I know that you will visit your Chinese friend’s home. I am glad to tell you some good manners in China. If you do the following, I think you will feel comfortable. 　　First②, you are supposed to④ arrive on time. Being late is impolite.③ It is also good to④ bring a small gift, such as flowers or fruit. You will probably use chopsticks to eat dinner. You’re not supposed to④ stick your chopsticks into your food. You should say that the food is delicious while you are eating. Last but not least②, you are expected to④ say thanks after dinner. 　　I hope you’ll have a good time in China. Good luck! Yours, Wang Hua ①开头使用Welcome to China,彰显中国礼仪,很热情,很亲切。 ②First/Last but not least的运用使罗列建议条理分明。 ③使用动名词作主语,语言简洁。 ④短语和句式的交替使用使原本单调的建议罗列不再枯燥无味。 主题六:积极的学习体验 内容要求：事情简述;情感表达正确使用make;选择恰当的形容词描述感受;正确运用时态;合理运用连词。 【写作示例】 　　假如你是李华,请根据下列提示写一篇短文,分享你的经历和感受。 时间 做法 结果 感受 上周 不努力学习、熬夜玩电脑游戏 考试不及格 难过,担心 本周 家长鼓励、同学和老师帮助、认真听课、按时完成作业 考试取得好成绩,受到表扬 高兴,自豪 总结经验:合理利用时间;努力学习…… 要求:可适当发挥,但必须包括表格中所给的所有信息;词数:80左右。 【参考范文】 　　Hi, I’m Li Hua. Now let me share some of my experiences and feelings with you. 　　Last week, I didn’t work hard. I stayed up late to play computer games. As a result, I failed the exam.① It made② me sad and worried. I let my parents down②. Luckily, my parents encouraged me to work hard. My teachers and classmates also helped me a lot. I listened carefully in class and finished my homework on time. This week, I got good grades and high praise② from my teachers. That made② me happy and proud. 　　From this experience, I know that we should use our time wisely and work hard every day.③ That can make② us succeed. ①As a result 的使用使叙述连贯流畅。 ②运用本单元重要词汇短语make/let...down/praise等,学以致用。 ③句中既对自己的经历进行总结提升,又令文章结构更加完整。 主题七:身心健康,抗挫能力,珍爱生命的意识 内容要求：描述幸运或不幸运的一天。正确使用时态;使用恰当的连词、副词,使叙述连贯自然;正确使用形容词表述个人感受 【写作示例】 　　你经历过糟糕的一天吗?那天发生了什么事情?你是如何度过那一天的呢?请以“My Bad Day”为题,用英语写一篇短文,给某英语杂志的“Your Voices”专栏投稿。 要求:1.不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名; 2.词数80左右。 【参考范文】 My Bad Day Life is full of the unexpected. I will always remember that day—September 1st.① It was the first day of this new term. My alarm clock didn’t go off. When I woke up in the morning, it was nearly 7 o’clock. I rushed to school without having breakfast.② 　　However, when I got to school, I realized that I had left my backpack at home.③Then I went back home to get it. On the way home, I ran as quickly as I could. Suddenly, I was knocked down by a bike and my knees were badly hurt.④ I was sent to hospital. 　　What a bad day I had! 2 开门见山,点明主题。 ②运用rushed to而不是went to,很好地表现了当时的急迫。 ③However的使用凸显了“rushed”带来的后果。正确运用过去完成时。 ④Suddenly,badly的运用使故事跌宕起伏。 主题八:环保意识和行为 内容要求：描述污染问题及原因;提出合理的环境保护措施。正确使用不同的时态和语态。 【写作示例】 　　保护人类共同的家园——地球,是每个人的责任和义务。我们在生活中的点滴小事上也能做出自己的贡献。根据表格内容,谈一谈你平时为保护环境做过哪些努力,将来还打算如何去做。 要求:1.词数:80左右; 2.意思连贯,条理清晰,适当发挥。 turn off the lights when you leave a room turn off the shower while washing hair stop using paper napkins take your own bags when shopping stop riding in cars ride a bike recycle books and paper 【参考范文】 　　It’s our duty to protect the earth.① I always turn off the lights when I leave a room. While I am washing my hair②,I usually turn off the shower. Besides,I stop using paper napkins and if I want to shop,I always take my own bags instead of using plastic bags.③ And I have decided to do more things to protect our earth, such as stopping riding in cars, riding a bike,and recycling books and paper④. I think my actions can make a difference! Let’s take action now!⑤ ①开篇点题,表明责任。 ②when,while从句的运用,使语境更充分。 ③Besides的运用,使表达层次更清晰。 ④运用such as进行举例说明,措施表达更加具体、充实。 ⑤运用祈使句发出呼吁,增强表达效果,首尾呼应。 主题九:谈论习惯 内容要求：描述交友,饮食,锻炼等方面的习惯,介绍好习惯的益处；正确辨别好习惯与坏习惯；写作时要注意描述习惯的单词、短语及句式的运用；辨别好习惯与坏习惯对我们的影响 【写作示例】 国家把每年 6月6日定为爱眼日,请你结合自己的体会,就如何爱护眼睛,给校报英语栏目写一篇短文。内容包括: 1.吃有益于眼睛的食物,如胡萝卜、鸡蛋等; 2.多做眼保健操,长时间用眼后可看看远方; 3.养成良好的用眼习惯,如不躺着玩手机或看书等。 注意:1.词数 80左右; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.开头已给出,不计入总词数。 Nowadays, more and more students are getting near-sighted, so National Eye Care Day is set on June 6 every year. 【参考范文】 　　Nowadays, more and more students are getting near-sighted, so National Eye Care Day is set on June 6 every year. As we all know, eyes are the windows of the soul. We should try our best to protect them. Here are some suggestions for good eye health①. First, eat some foods that are good for eyes, such as carrots and eggs. Second, do more eye exercises to make them relax②. Also, it’s helpful to look far away from time to time after studying long. Finally, make sure to have good habits of using eyes③. Don’t read books or use a cell phone in bed. In a word, eyes are so important that all of us should do what we can to keep them healthy④. ①点明主题,引出下文。 ②使用不定式作目的状语,表现出了深厚的英语语法功底。 ③make sure表达了作者的强烈建议。 ④表达个人观点,自然收篇结尾。 主题十:丰富、充实、积极向上的生活 内容要求：回顾初中三年来的学校生活并展望未来,记叙初中学习和生活中对你影响最大的人或事,并表达自己的观点。正确使用人称及不同的时态和语态。 【写作示例】 你们学校即将举办以“School Is a Big Family”为题的英语演讲比赛。请根据下列要求,从结构图的三个方面写一篇英文演讲稿。 要求:1.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整; 2.词数:100词左右。(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。) Good afternoon, everyone! I am glad to be here to give a speech.My topic is “School Is a Big Family”. 　　Thank you for your time! 【参考范文】 Good afternoon, everyone! I am glad to be here to give a speech.My topic is“School Is a Big Family”. ①School is a warm place to me. Many people around me are kind and friendly to me.②For example, my teachers are strict but patient. Whenever I meet difficulties in my study,③they are always there to help me.Then, my classmates are the friendliest.④Last year I broke my arm.They all took turns to buy lunch for me. I was so moved.In return, I am good with others.I often help my classmates clean the classroom. ⑤I believe we all need to play a part in keeping our school clean and warm. Thank you for your time! ①句子“School is a warm place to me.” 起到总领全文的作用 ②短语for example用于举例,使用恰当 ③always一词起突出强调作用,一个乐于助人的群体,活灵活现 ④列举去年摔断胳膊的例子,增强文章说服力 ⑤结尾表达自己观点,积极向上。 考点精练 1．假如你是李华，你喜欢发明创造。在学校科技节上，你的最新发明“My smart schoolbag”获一等奖。请以“My smart schoolbag”为题，根据下面表格中的内容，写一篇发言稿，介绍你的新发明。 外观 看起来和普通书包一样，有一个显示屏 材料 布 (cloth)，塑料 (plastic) 优点 查单词，与父母联系，讲笑话哄主人开心…… 缺点 重量大…… 历时 2个月 评价 …… 注意： （1）短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。 （2）词数80个左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. I’d like to introduce my new invention to you. It is______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．假设你们学校校报开展英语征文，题目为“Follow and Grow (家规促成长)”，请你写一篇英文短文投稿，文章包括以下内容： 1．两条家规； 2．对你的影响； 3．如何回报你家。 要求： 1.词数90左右； 2．适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．文中不能出现任何真实信息。 Follow and Grow __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．安全对每个人都很重要。为了进一步增强中学生的安全意识，提高自我保护能力，你校将开展以“安全”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请根据以下提示及要求，以“Safety rules at school”为题写一篇演讲稿，介绍你们在学校应该注意的安全准则。 提示：1. 上、下楼梯不要拥挤；2. 不要从楼上往下扔杂物；3. 玩耍时不能使用刀等尖锐物品；4. 在学校不抽烟、不喝酒。 要求：1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；4. 演讲稿开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Safety rules at school Hello, everyone! It’s important for us to keep safe at school. To be safe, we must follow these rules at school. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you! 4．请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，描述上周三你生日那天发生的一件神秘的事。 要点提示：1. 放学回家后，家里没有人；2. 我发现我的房间很乱；3. 分析可能的原因，如小偷闯入；4. 后来发现是一只小狗在房间里，这是妈妈送给我的生日礼物。 写作要求：1. 词数90左右 (开头已经给出，不计入总词数)；2. 根据要点提示，可以适当发挥；3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。 参考词汇：in a mess乱糟糟；break in闯入 It was my birthday last Wednesday. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．艺术总是伴随着人的成长，无论是当我们沉浸在幸福中，还是面临困难挫折，它总能给人带来温暖、勇气和力量。在你成长过程中，是不是也有这么一本书、一首歌或者一部电影，对你有特别的影响和意义呢？请你以 My favorite _________为题，介绍一本书、一首歌或者一部电影。 注意事项： 1）字数：100 词左右； 2）短文内容应包含提示的要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．假如你是李辉，你的一位英国笔友Kate发来电子邮件，说她下星期来中国，她向你询问中国的餐桌礼仪。请你根据下面提示给她回一封电子邮件，告诉她有关情况。词数80~ 100。参考词汇： toast (vt. 为……举杯敬酒) 提示： 1. 等大家都到齐了再开吃； 2. 让长辈或客人先动筷； 3. 不能用筷子敲碗； 4. 不要将手伸到饭桌对面夹菜； 5. 为主人的健康、成功干杯…… Dear Kate, I’m glad to receive your email. Now I want to tell you something about the Chinese table manners. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hui 7．电影《你好，李焕英》讲述了妈妈和女儿之间的故事。影片将母爱诠释得恰到好处，令观众感动不已。我们总以为自己已经很爱妈妈了， 但妈妈远比你想象中还要爱你。生活中，你和妈妈之间肯定发生过很多令你难以忘记的事情，请用英语介绍你的妈妈，讲述一件你们经历过的事情，并说说你会用什么实际行动来报答妈妈。 内容包括： •something about your mother（外表，性格，爱好） •an experience you had with your mother •what you will do to thank her 要求： 1. 词数不少于80； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．假如你是李华，你和你的家人想在新家举办一次乔迁聚会 (a housewarming party)，请根据下面要点和要求，用英文给你的朋友们写一则不少于40词的邀请函。 要点：1. 新家地址—和平路5号； 2. 开始时间—本周日晚上7点； 3. 提供服务—美食和饮料； 4. 回复时间—本周五之前。 要求：字迹工整；要点齐全；表述通顺；简洁得体。（答题卡上直接写正文） Dear friends, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua 9．近日，我区多次出现雾霾（haze）天气，引发了人们对环境污染的广泛关注。为了提高同学们的环保意识，你们班将要举行“How to Protect the Environment”的主题班会。请你围绕“环境保护”这一主题，谈谈作为中学生该如何保护环境，写一篇发言稿。 注意： (1)结构工整，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范； (2)发言稿中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； (3)词数 80~100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear teachers and friends, Good afternoon, everyone! It’s a great honor for me to speak here. Now more and more people have realized the importance of protecting the environment. As students, it’s our duty to protect our earth. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thanks for listening! 10．习总书记强调，全民健身是全体人民增强体魄、健康生活的基础保障。假如你校校园广播《英语之声》以热爱运动为主题征稿。请结合自身经历，介绍你的运动喜好，并谈谈原因及影响。 要点如下： 1）热爱的运动； 2）热爱的理由； 3）产生的影响。 注意事项： 1）词数80—100； 2）文中不能出现真实人名和校名。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11．每个人在学校期间，都有自己难忘的老师。假如你叫李雷，毕业在即，请你根据以下提示给你的英语老师(Miss Zhao)写一封信。内容包括： 1. 表达感激之情； 2. 回忆印象最深的一件事(一次帮助，或一次鼓励，或一次批评……)； 3. 你的感想或建议； 4. 100词左右。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．下周英语角的话题为“My Favorite Invention”。请你根据下面的提示和要求，写一篇80词左右的发言稿。 提示：1. 你最喜欢的发明是什么? 2. 这个发明有什么用途? 3. 你为什么喜欢它? 要求：1. 内容包括提示中所有的写作要点； 2. 条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； 3. 文中不能出现真实的人名、学校等信息。 My Favorite Invention _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．假如你是九年级三班的学生盛明，今天英语课上你们班同学就“课间是否该放音乐”这一话题进行了讨论。请你根据下表中的提示内容, 以“Should music be played between classes?”为题，写一篇英语短文。 赞同意见 音乐使他们觉得快乐、放松，音乐使他们的课间生活丰富多彩 反对意见 吵闹的音乐使他们更兴奋，不利于课间休息 你的看法 . . . . . . 要求: 1）短文应包括提示中列有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； 2）短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名； 3）不少于 80 词。 Should music be played between classes? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14．假如你是李华，你校正在举办以“科技改变生活”为主题的演讲比赛。请你根据以下思维导图的提示，用英语写一篇演讲稿，介绍一些身边的科技发明及其优点。 参考词汇：convenient, shop online, have video calls, save time, easy to travel, environmental-friendly, … 要求：1. 可选择使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥；2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；4. 词数：不少于70词。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数） Hello, everyone! I am Li Hua. It’s a great honor for me to speak here. The rapid development of science and technology brings us great inventions and the inventions make our life better and better.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all my speech. 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