UNIT 3 Section Ⅴ Writing（Word教参）-【优化指导】2024-2025学年高中英语选择性必修第二册（译林版2020）

Section Ⅴ　Writing [对应学生用书P75] 演讲稿 演讲稿属于应用文的一种，是为演讲准备的书面材料，通常用于对人们普遍关注的事物或问题发表意见、提出建议、发起倡议等。其基本结构如下： 1．称呼：点明听众。 2．主体：点明主题，分析问题，根据具体问题提出具体的解决办法。该部分通常可分为两个段落来写：第一段指出演讲的主题，第二段分析具体问题，并给出解决办法。 3．结尾：发起倡议。切记结尾一定要简洁。 1．thus adv.因此 2．moreover adv.此外，而且 3．have an opportunity to do sth.有机会做某事 4．various troubles各种麻烦 5．have an impact有影响 6．in addition另外，此外 ◎夺人眼球开头句 1．My name is Li Hua. Today I am very glad to have the opportunity to make this presentation. My speech will focus on how the westerners think about friendship. 我是李华。今天很高兴能有机会做这个演讲。我演讲的重点是西方人如何看待友谊。 2．Good morning, everyone! It is my great honour to share with you my opinions on what really matters in guiding a child to read. 大家上午好！关于在指导孩子阅读方面真正重要的是什么，很荣幸能和你们分享我的看法。 3．Ladies and gentlemen/Boys and girls, I'm Li Hua.I'm greatly honoured to speak here on behalf of my school. 女士们、先生们/同学们，我是李华，很荣幸代表我校在此演讲。 ◎亮点出彩篇中间 4．First of all, we should never lose heart when we meet with failure. 首先，当我们遭遇失败时绝不要泄气。 5．What really matters/counts is whether you can concentrate on your lessons. 真正要紧的是你是否能全神贯注于你的功课。 6．Above all/Most important of all, you should believe in yourself. 最重要的是，你要相信自己。 ◎韵味无穷结尾句 7．I hope I have made myself understood. 我希望我已经非常清楚地表达了我的意思。 8．Let's be optimistic about life. We are sure to succeed in the end. 让我们乐观生活每一天。我们最后一定会成功。 9．Finally, I hope that all the younger fellows can make full use of time and work hard. 最后，我希望所有年轻的朋友都能充分利用时间，努力工作。 假如你是迎光中学的高一新生李新，学校将为高一新生举办主题为“What I Want to Learn in the Senior Middle School”的英语演讲活动，以让新生规划自己高中的学习、生活。请结合自身看法与以下要点准备一份演讲稿。 要点包括： 1．学会学习：养成良好的学习习惯(可举例说明)…… 2．学会与人相处：对人真诚、友善，帮助别人，与人相处融洽…… 3．培养良好的品质：坚定、乐观，挑战困难，努力实现梦想…… 写作要求： 1．词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Ladies and gentlemen， Good morning！I'm Li Xin.I feel it an honour to give a speech here about “What I Want to Learn in the Senior Middle School”． 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 Thank you. 体裁 应用文 时态 一般现在时 主题 未来规划 人称 第一人称 结构 第一段：指出演讲主题； 第二段：写出题干所给三个要点； 第三段：个人愿望或者信念 1．form good learning habits养成好的学习习惯 2．be based on以……为基础 3．get along well with others与别人相处融洽 4．have a good relationship with...与……有好的关系 5．develop good qualities培养好品质 6．optimistic乐观的 7．make all efforts尽一切努力 8．overcome difficulties克服困难 9．lead us forward引领我们前行 10．live my life to the fullest充实地度过我每一天的生活 Step Three　句式表达 1．完成句子 ①First，I should form good learning habits to make sure that I can learn well. 首先，我应该养成好的学习习惯以确保我能学好。 ②Furthermore，a class is like a family. I should get along well with others． 而且，一个班级就像一个家庭，我应与别人相处融洽。 ③If we are sincere and kind to others，we can have good relationships with them. 如果我们对别人忠诚、友善，我们就能与他们有一个好的关系。 ④Our determination helps us challenge and overcome difficulties．Our dream leads us forward. 我们的决心帮助我们挑战并克服困难。我们的梦想引领我们前行。 2．句式升级 ⑤用高级词汇替换句①中的“first”和“should”两个词。 To begin with，I am supposed to form good learning habits to make sure that I can learn well. ⑥用定语从句改写句②。 Furthermore，a class is like a family where I should get along well with others. ⑦用only if倒装句改写句③。 Only if we are sincere and kind to others can we have good relationships with them. ⑧用强调句改写句④中的两个分句并用and连接。 It is our determination that helps us challenge and overcome difficulties and it is the dream that leads us forward. Step Four　连句成篇 Ladies and gentlemen， Good morning！I'm Li Xin.I feel it an honour to give a speech here about “What I Want to Learn in the Senior Middle School”． To begin with，I am supposed to form good learning habits to make sure that I can learn well. Clearly，successful study is based on good ways and habits. Furthermore，a class is like a family where I should get along well with others. But how？As we know，only if we are sincere and kind to others can we have good relationships with them. Finally，I will learn to develop good qualities like being determined，being optimistic and so on. Of course，don't forget to set a dream and make all efforts to realize it. It is our determination that helps us challenge and overcome difficulties and it is the dream that leads us forward. I believe I will live my life to the fullest in the senior middle school. Thank you. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$