5.题型五 书面表达(教师用书)-【加速度中考】2025年内蒙古中考备考加速度英语课堂精讲本（外研版）

题型五 书面表达 话题1经历与感受 子一阶素材积累 ★开头句 L.Here I am in Paris.Jenny and I arrived by plane the day before yesterday.[外研七下M0P62] 2.Earthquakes always happen suddenly,so it is difficult to wam people about them.[外研八上Ml2p8] 3.Today I went on a school trip.We visited the science museum and it was really interesting.[Ul1 P65] ★中间句 1.I spend a lot of time playing classic music with my friends at school,but I also like dance music-I love dancing！[外研八下MlP4] 2.The Robinsons love seeing the world.They have been to many interesting places.[A M2 P12] 3.The rooms were really dark and it was difficult to take photos,so I didn't take any.U1l P65] 4.Some students worry about their exams.while other students can't get on well with their classmates and parents. ★结尾句 1.So be patient with her and explain to her that she can make friends with your other friends too.[A 下M9P72] 2.I finally understand that we need to share the housework to have a clean and comfortable home.[A U3 P19 3.Generally speaking,what I value most is my family. ★谚语 1.Love me,love my dog.爱层及乌 2.A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.千里之行，始于足下， 3.Where there is a will,there is a way..有志者，事竟成。 二阶典例探究 [2024福建改编]假设你是李华，学校上周五开展了为期一天的 第一步：申题立意定基调 实践活动。你的笔友Heny对这次活动很感兴趣。请你根据以下提 1.文体：应用文 示，用英语给他写一封信，谈谈活动过程及你的感想。 2.人称：第一人称 3.时态： 一般过去时 History Museum ◆learn ahout the Long March(长的) listen to the stories of the Red Army 4.主题： 介绍活动过程及感受 4甲甲中 令njoy paper culling arl Fok Culture Center ncaccooanaodaaga 要求：1.要点齐全，结构清晰，语言流畅，书写规范，可适当增加细节： 2.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和校名： 198 3.词数80一100左右，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Henry, How's it going? Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 第二步：谋篇布局成框架 开篇：问候并表达心情 How's it going?Hearing you're interested in our school study tour last Friday... In the moring,we visited... We learned about.… The Letter 过程 After lunch,we went to... 文：介绍活动过程及感受 We also watched.... 感受 It deepens our...And it also... 结尾：结束语 Best wishes! 第三步：语篇润色成佳作 衔接成篇 润色升华 Dear Henry, How's it going?Hearing you're interested in our school ①尝试用“hal”引导的宾语从句改写： study tour last Friday,I'm very happy.Let me tell you something I'm very happy to hear that you're about it. interested in our school study tour last In the morning,we visited the History Museum.We learned Friday. about the history of the Long March.Then we listened to the stories②尝试用“where”引导的定语从句改写： of the Red Army,which greatly touched us.2 After lunch, After lunch,we went to the Folk Culture we went to the Folk Culture Center.We enjoyed paper cutting art Center,where we enjoyed paper cutting there.We also watched local opera performances that are educational. art. On the way home,I had much feeling about this tour.3It ③尝试用“not only..but also..”改写： deepens our love for our country.And it also enriches our understanding It not only deepens our love for our country of Chinese traditional art! but also enriches our understanding of Best wishes! Chinese traditional art! Yours, Li Hua ◆写作范例赏析 编者语：画线部分引用话题相关短语、经典过渡句等，可根据具体要求进行改写、替换。 Living skills are very important in our daily life.The process of learning it is also meaningful to us. 篇引出下文描述的经历] 199 I learned how to cook meals last summer holiday.I thought it was easy as my mother did it quickly and perfectly.Then I decided to have a try so I could do something nice for my parents and take care of myself.I bought the food I need in the market and then I washed and cut it to get ready.Then my mother taught me how to do it right.I tried several times in the kitchen and finally made it..I felt proud of myself.[具体介绍， 运用丰富的句式使得文章生动饱满] After that,I have realized that my parents do so much for me all the time.More importantly,I found cooking was not an easy thing.We should learn more living skills to make our life better and look after both ourselves and others.[表达感受] 三阶实战演练 第一篇[2024包头] 你校英语报社组织同学们分享自己在社区进行志愿活动的经历，请你根据以下提示写一篇短文投 稿。内容包括： 1.简要描述： 2.体验和感受。 Topic Volunteer Work in Hongxing Community Time last Sunday made eco-friendly(环保的)products Activities gave out reusable water bottles and bags worked at the learning stalls(摊位) 注意：1.词数为80左右： 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯： 3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称： 4,短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数 Volunteer Work in Hongxing Community Last Sunday I worked in Hongxing Community as a volunteer. Before the event began,we gathered at the entrance of Hongxing Park at 9 o'clock.We volunteers were then divided into groups.Some made eco-friendly products.Others gave out reusable water bottles and the bags we made.I went all out to work at the learning stalls,teaching neighbors how to properly recyele and how to reduce trash here in town. I shared what I know with others through the activity.Sharing is caring.Wish everyone could care about our community and earth. 第二篇[2024大庆改编] 习近平总书记说：“人世间的一切幸福都需要靠辛勤的劳动来创造。”劳动可以增强体质，提升自 信，培养责任感。在生活中，你可能已经掌握了很多劳动技能，比如洗衣、做饭、打扫教室等。现学校英 语报正在征集关于“劳动”的稿件，请你以“Labor Makes a Better Life”为题，写一篇稿件。内容包括： L.你擅长的劳动技能： 200 2.劳动中的感受： 3.劳动带给你的益处」 要求：1.要点齐全，结构清晰，语言流畅，书写规范，可适当增加细节： 2.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和校名： 3.词数80一100左右，短文的题目已给出，不计入总词数。 Labor Makes a Better Life As we all know,labor plays an important role in our lives.I am very good at cooking.I always cook meals for my parents when I am free on weekends.I think cooking is a very important and necessary life skill because I can develop my independence by cooking.I can learn how to take good care of myself instead of making my parents worry about me.Labor can not only give us new experiences but also develop a sense of duty. In the future,I would like to learn how to plant trees so that I can plant more trees on the hill and make my hometown more beautiful. 第三篇 学校近期举行了社会实践活动，你的外国笔友Dad想了解此次活动的情况。假如你是李明，请根 据以下提示给他写一封信，分享你的活动经历及感受。内容包括： 1.简要描述； 2.体验和感受。 Topic Social Practice at Guangming Farm Time March 12th-14th Activities plant trees:grow vegetables:play games in teams 注意：1.词数为80左右： 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯： 3.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4.信件的开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数 Dear David, I'm glad to tell you something about my social practice.We went to Guangming Farm and stayed there from March 12th to 14th. During that time,I had great fun.I planted some trees and grew vegetables with the help of the farmers.I cooked some food with my classmates.It tasted pretty good.The most exciting thing was to play games in teams.At night,we sat around a campfire,singing and dancing. I've learnt a lot from the social practice.It not only develops my love for labor but also improves my labor skills.Besides,I think teamwork is very important. I'm looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Ming 201 话题2 观点与看法 子一阶素材积累 ★开头句 1.It's a good idea to spell and pronounce new words aloud.[外研八上MlP3] 2.In my opinion,it is very important for us teenagers to learn how to take care of ourselves.[M6 P52] 3.Different people have different ideas.Here are my opinions about the survey. ★中间句 1.Some people write to find out about life in another country.Others want to practise their foreign languages or share their hobbies.[外研八下M9p79] 2.Singapore is an English-speaking country,so it's also a good place to practice your English![ 下U970] 3.However,every coin has two sides. ★结尾句 1.fyou're very interested in something,you usually want to be good at it.[外研八下Ml0P86] 2.It's always better to get things out in the open-talk about a problem,come to a solution or move on. ★谚语 1.Actions speak louder than words.事实胜于雄辩 2.Every man has his faults.金无足赤，人无完人 3.Better late than never.亡羊补牢，为时不晚。 子二阶典例探究 [2024青海政编]假如你是某外国语学校的一名学生，你们班正在第一步：审题立意定基调 选举班级之星，请根据所给的两位候选人信息，结合自己的看法，任选1，文体：应用文 位写一篇推荐稿。 2.人称：第一、三人称 Candidates(候选人) Aspects(方面) 3.时态：一般现在时 study hard and have good grades 4.主题：推荐候选人 Li Wei exercise every day and be good at sports ☆be confident and optimistic(乐观的)】 be always willing to help classmates Ma Li organize art shows and be good at singing and dancing be kind and easy-going 要求：1.词数80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）： 2.可适当增加细节，以使内容充实，行文连贯： 3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。 I think should be the star of the class. 202 第二步：谋篇布局成框架 「篇：表明自己要 推荐哪位候选人 I think...should he the star of the class.Here are my reasons Rrcommend 中时段：说明 分点说明原州 First of all,... Candidate 推荐的原因 Sccondly,...What's more.. 'Thirdly,… 钻尾：点题，总结 他她是最佳人选 I thiuk he/she is the best candidate for the stur of the class. 第三步：语篇润色成佳作 衔接成篇 洞色升华 I think Li Wei should be the star of the class.Here are my reasons ①尝试用“who”引导的定语从句改写： First of all,Li Wei is a very hard-working boy.During the class, Secondly,Li Wei is an athletic boy who he always listens to the teachers very carefully.He often studies exercises every day. hard,so he can get good grades on his usual tests.Secondly. ②尝试用“such as'”改写： Li Wei is an athletic boy.He exereises every day.In his free He likes to take part in all sorts of school time,he likes to play soccer and baseball.He joins the sports club. activities,such as speech competition and What's more,he is the captain of the school soccer team.Thirdly, science competition. Li Wei is a very confident and optimistic boy.He is very active and ③尝试用“All in all'"改写： outgoing.2 He likes to take part in all sorts of school activities. All in all,I think he is the best candidate For example,speech competition and science competition. for the star of the class. So I think he is the best candidate for the star of the class. ◆写作范例赏析[2024兰州 Marathon in My Eyes This year,2024 Lanzhou Marathon was successfully held.I feel proud of my hometown.I'd like to share my ideas with you.[点题，引出所要谈论的事件] First,the government organized the event well.It provided excellent services to make sure that all runners could have a perfect and unforgettable experience.Then,the runners were welcome.They tried their best to finish the marathon.After the event,they tasted some delicious foods.Their spirit encouraged more people.Next,the volunteers also played an important role in the event.They worked hard to support the runners.What they did showed the true meaning of selflessness.[分点说明自己对此事件的看法] In my opinion,the event was a great success.We should hold it every year.It is not only good for our health,but also a wonderful way to bring people closer together.[总结全文，表达期望] 令三阶实战演练 第一篇[2024湖南改编] 英语课上老师要求以“Sports make us better'”为话题开展三人一组的讨论。假定你是李华，将代表 小组在全班发言，请根据以下信息写一篇英文发言稿。 203 I like bike riding best. lI makes me... My favnrile sporl is volleyhall. I often play it with my friends. ran Li Hua Cindy 内容包括：1.介绍你们各自喜欢的运动： 2.谈谈运动对你们的影响。 要求：1.要点齐全，结构清晰，语言流畅，书写规范，可适当增加细节： 2.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和校名： 3.词数80一100左右，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Hello,everyone, I'm Li Hua from Group One.Below,on behalf of our group,I will report on our discussion. Cindy's favorite sport is volleyball.She often plays volleyball with her friends.By playing volleyball she has become more confident and healthy.Frank loves riding a bicycle best.By riding a bicycle,his body has become stronger and stronger.I like playing basketball.If I have time,I often go to the park to play basketball with my friends on weekends.Playing basketball has taught me the spirit of teamwork and never giving up. That's all.Thank you. 第二篇 最近，某市中学生英文报做了题为“Reading Outside Class'"的调查报告。报告显示，越来越多的中 学生不能坚持课外阅读。请你根据下表内容，对这一现状进行分析并表明你的看法。 课外阅读的好处 learn more about the world:make us wiser:.. 不能坚持的原因 too much homework;spend too much time on TV;... 你的看法 要求：1.要点齐全，结构清晰，语言流畅，书写规范，可适当增加细节： 2.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和校名： 3.词数80一100左右，标题已给出，不计入总词数。 Reading Outside Class As we all know,reading has many benefits.For one thing,it can help us learn more about the world and make us wiser and richer in life.For another,we can get lots of fun through reading. Here are several reasons why more and more students can't keep reading after class these days. First of all,they're burdened with too much homework.In addition,they haven't formed the good habit of reading.Last but not least,they would rather spend their spare time on TV or the Internet. In my opinion,I think our teachers are supposed to give us less homework so that we can have time to do more reading. 204 话题3 做法与建议 一阶素材积累 ★开头句 1.Hobbies can make you grow as a person,develop your interests and help you learn new skills. 下M6P50] 2.To cut down air pollution,we should take the bus or subway instead of driving.[人教九全Ul3p98] 3.Here are some tips for good interpersonal communication.[冀教九全U9PI32] ★中间句 1.You need to practice speaking more often.Why don't you look for some English-speaking people in your town?[外研八上M1P7] 2.Read the book carefully.Then you will not make mistakes.[外研九上M6P46] 3.You can save electricity by turning off the lights when you leave a room.[人教九全Ul3PIO0] ★结尾句 1.The more you go jogging,.the healthier you will feel..Just try it![外研入上M3P24] 2.All in all,the good habits that I keep make me better,and I'll try to have more good habits! ★谚语 l.Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。 2.Don't put off till tomorrow what should be done today.今日事，今日毕。 3.It is the first step that costs trouble some.万事开头难 香三阶典例探究 [2024吉林改编]当我们遇到自己无法解决的问题或烦恼时，第一步：申题立意定基调 应该学会积极向他人寻求帮助。请以“Asking for Help”为题，用英L.文体： 记叙文 语写一篇短文。 2.人称：第一、三人称 内容包括：1.积极应对问题或烦恼的必要性： 3.时态：一般现在时、一般过去时 2.寻求帮助的益处： 4.主题：向他人寻求帮助 3.结合生活经历，简述你或他人寻求帮助的一个事例： 4.提供寻求帮助的方法（至少两个）。 要求：1.要点齐全，结构清晰，语言流畅，书写规范，可适当增加细节： 2.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和校名； 3.词数80一100左右，开头已给出，不计人总词数。 Asking for Help There might be some problems or worries in life. 205 第二步：谋篇布局成框架 开篇：点题 积做应对问题的必装性 When we encounter probloms or troublcs.. we should... t's immportant to.… 户己或他人寻求带助的半例 Becanse of.. Asking for lelp 中间段：具体描述 Now I've really learned... lt is normal in... 结尾：提供方法 如何了求帮助 When we meet problems,we can... In addition.we can also... 第三步：语篇润色成佳作 衔接成篇 洞色升华 Asking for Help ①尝试用“山at”引导的定语从句改写： There might be some problems or worries in life.1When we When we encounter problems or meet problems or troubles,we cannot solve them ourselves,we should troubles that we cannot solve learn to actively seek help from others.It's important to ask for help. ourselves,we should learn to actively and it will help you relax. seek help from others. Last year,my English grammar was weak.My English was not good ②尝试用“with the help of”改写： because of this problem.So I went to ask my English teacher for help. 2 Because of my teacher's help and my own efforts.my English score With the help of my teacher and my own efforts,my English score has has gradually improved.Now I've really learned how to learn lessons gradually improved. myself. ③尝试用“In a word'”升格： It is normal to have problems.When we meet problems,we can In a word,it is normal to have ask people around us for help,such as teachers,classmates or parents. problems. In addition,we can also search the Internet for solutions. ◆写作范例赏析 My Proper Time Where has our time gone?How should we spend our time properly?[点题，引出间题] As students,it is important for us to study,so we should make a plan for every day.Most of all,we should listen carefully in class.For homework,we need to work out how much time we need,and then finish them one by one.[从学习方面提出建议] Hobbies are also important in our lives.They can make us feel happy and confident.But we shouldn't spend too much time on them.We should spend time talking with our friends,staying with the family,and watching TV on weekends..[从生活方面提出建议] Ifso,I'm sure we will live a happier life.[表示期望] 子三阶实战演练 第一篇[2024江西改编] 我国义务教育阶段实施“双减”政策以来，学生拥有更多的课余时间。为了引导学生更好地利用课 余时间，增强时间管理意识，学校英语社团以“Making Better Use of Time'”为题向学生征文，请你写一篇 206 短文投稿。 内容包括：l.When do you have free time? 2.What do you often do in your free time?(Give 3 examples) 3.Do you think your free time is better used?Why or why not? 要求：1.要点齐全，结构清晰，语言流畅，书写规范，可适当增加细节： 2.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和校名： 3.词数80一100左右，开头已给出，不计人总词数。 Making Better Use of Time As a junior high school student,I have got more free time in recent years.I am always free on weekends. When I am free,I have many activities.I usually play the piano and football.I like playing football very much.If I have time,I often go to the playground with my brothers to play football on weekends.I have piano lessons twice a week.I also have plenty of time to exercise in the evening. Sometimes,my parents and I look at the stars outside. I think my free time is better used beeause I do what I want to do and I balance study and entertainment. 第二篇[2024河北改编 假定英语课上你们正在就“课堂表现”开展同伴互评活动，下面是你的同伴张军的自我课堂表现记 录(Class Record),请你根据记录内容写一篇短文 内容包括：1.总结五个方面的课堂表现并进行简单评价： 2.就他需要改进的两个方面提出建议 Class Record Name:Zhang Jun Questions Yes No Did you listen to the teacher carefully? Did you answer questions actively? Did you ask any questions? Did you work well in your group? Did you take notes? 要求：1.词数为80左右： 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯： 3.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称： 4.短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数 Well done,Zhang Jun!You listened to the teacher carefully in class and answered questions actively.So you got high marks in most of your subjects.You worked well in your group and you showed your ability to us.However,you didn't ask any questions and you didn't take notes.So we couldn't know if you needed help. In my opinion,you should ask questions if you have any so that you can solve problems in time.What's more,you should take notes so that you can review and digest what you don't understand.I hope my advice is of help. 207