内容正文:
unit 3
Family
matters
writing about a family memory
writing
Read the journal entry and answer the questions.
1. What brought back the author's lovely memory?
2. What happened in the author’s memory?
3.Why is it a lovely memory?
An old photo.
The author wanted to surprise her mother with home-made scrambled eggs on her mother’s birthday. Unluckily, the eggs were burnt, but they ended up laughing about it and eating them all anyway.
Because it shows the love between the author and her mother.
Who was in the memory?
When did it happen?
Where did it take place?
What happened?
Why is it special or memorable?
read the passage agian and complete the table.
I
ten years ago
at home
cook home -made strabled eggs
love is indeda magical ingredient
Narration 记叙文
Narration 记叙文
记叙文是通过对人物的描写和对事件的叙述使读者了解人物和事件的一种文体
the thing
the memory
the ending
who
when
where
what
why
how
◌ the past continuous tense
◌ the simple past tense
◌ the past perfect tense
◌ the past future tense
◌ the future tense
读后续写(150字左右,25分)
考纲解读:阅读以下语言材料,要求依据该材料内容,所给段落开头和所表示关键词进行续写(150词左右),将其发展成为一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接,情节和结构完整的短文
Writing practice
One day, you did very poorly in English compitition, and you were disappointed and discourage. Then your parents brought you to go hiking and had a brief talk with you so as to cheer you up.This is the diary about this memory
确立体裁
明确时态人称
文章框架布局
确定文章要点
记叙文 ,和家人之间的故事
一般过去时,第一人称为主
1 段首:表明主题
2 段中:叙述故事
3 段尾:升华情感主题,感恩家人
1 感谢家人的爱和鼓励
2 回忆往事,遇到成长烦恼,
家人支持鼓励帮助成长
3感谢家人,珍惜亲情,
根据以上材料审题
Think of a special family memory of meterial and complete the table.
Who was in the memory?
When did it happen?
Where did it take place?
What happened?
Why is it special or memorable?
my parents and I
last autumn
road
my parents cheer me up
love is great power
Now write a short story about this memory. Use the expressions in the box to help you.
Useful expressions
● Last summer/autumn, …/ In 2015, …/ Many years ago, …
● I was at…
● It made me feel so…
● I remember this because…
● I learnt that…
Pra1: There are many happy memories in my life. But for me, the most unforgettable one is that my parents went hiking along the road with me last autumn.
Pra2: I still remember that day because I got worse in English competition ...
Pra3: I was touched by their love.
what and where
who
when
why
have a brief chat
how
express feelings
In my mind stores many happy memories . But for me, the most memorable one is that my parents and I went hiking last autumn .
I still remember that day because I got worse inmy English compitition. I felt and disappointed and discourage and didn't know how to go on with my English learning. It was my parents who asked me to go hiking with them .The jounery was too long and there was no station to rest. So I was soon out of breath and felt heavy with my legs. But my father told me never to give up and my mother cheered me up by handing my hand. Finally we reached the destination and they congratulated me as if I was admitted by a top university.
I was touched by their love. I learnt that life is like go hiking . Maybe it is a long way to go . but if we never give up, we can always get to the destination . I really benefited a lot from this go hiking.
What brings your special family memory?
What is your special family memory?
What do you learn from the special family memory?
Homework
Write a short story about your special family memory.
Elements
who
what
why
Where
when
how
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