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专题18 应用文写作
目录
明晰学考要求
基础知识梳理
考点精讲讲练
考点一 通知,倡议书,演讲稿/发言稿
考点二 建议信,咨询信和求助信
考点三 感谢信,道歉信,邀请信,申请信
实战能力训练
通知
是一种告知特定人员或群体有关事项的专用文稿,目的是让对方知道并执行具体事项。
倡议书
是公开提倡某项有意义的活动或推行某种行之有效的做法的专用书信,目的是引起广泛响应。
演讲/发言稿
是在某些公共场合或较为隆重的仪式上围绕某一主题发表演讲的专用文稿,目的是把观点或主张等传达给听众。
建议信
要求考生就某事向他人或组织提出自己的建议或忠告,希望对方接受自己的想法并解决相关问题。
咨询信
要求考生就自己不太熟悉或不了解的事情向有关部门或人士咨询,获取所需信息。
求助信
要求考生就自己所遇到的问题或困难向有关人士或部门请求帮助,以期问题得到圆满解决。
感谢信
是向帮助、关心和支持过自己的集体或个人表示感谢的书信。
道歉信
是指因过失、疏忽做错了事或不能遵守承诺给别人带来麻烦后,向对方道歉时写的书信。
邀请信
是邀请写作对象前来参加活动的信件。高考的邀请信还包括邀约作品、邀请加入某组织、团体等。
考点一.通知、倡议书、演讲/发言稿
写作结构
段落
通知
倡议书
演讲/发言稿
第一段
说明通知缘由
说明倡议的背景、目的或主题
说明演讲主题
第二段
告知具体事项(时间、地点、内容、注意事项等)
阐述倡议的具体内容或理由
就主题展开阐述或提出看法
第三段
表示欢迎或期待
提出呼吁或发出号召
进行总结或提出希望并表示感谢
2. 模板
(1)通知模板
With the aim of ① , We have decided to hold a/an ② .
→活动主题及安排
Please gather at/in ③ at ④ . Please remember that ⑤ .
→活动时间、地点和注意事项
I’m sure you’ll have a lot of fun. We hope you can come on time.
→希望参加
⑥
答案: ①活动目的②活动③地点④时间⑤注意事项⑥发布通知的单位
(2)倡议书模板
Dear ,
As ① , more and more people are concerned about ② . Now we are appealing to you ③ .
There are some benefits. For one thing, ④ . For another, ⑤ . More importantly, ⑥ .
It is everyone’s responsibility to ⑦ . If we , we can make a big difference. Let’s take action from now on!
⑧
答案: ①介绍;②当前形势下,人们关心的热点,以此引出所发的倡议;③提出倡议的内容;
④⑤⑥所倡议的事情的好处;⑦再次发出倡议;⑧发出倡议者
(3)演讲/发言稿模板
Boys and Girls/Ladies and Gentlemen,
It is my honor to stand here. The topic of my speech is ① . →说明主题
As is known to all, ② . However, ③ . How can we solve these problems then? As far as I’m concerned, ④ . For one thing, ⑤ . For another, ⑥ . What’s more, ⑦ . →分析问题,提出解决方案
Finally, I’d like to summarize the main point. ⑧ . →总结主题
Thank you for listening!→结束语
答案:①主题②现象③问题④方法⑤⑥⑦理由1、2、3⑧总结
3. 例题讲解
例: 你校正在举行一个有关“如何高效学习英语”演讲活动,假如你是李华,你报名参加了本次活动,现在你需要根据演讲活动的要求写一篇演讲稿,然后参加活动。
演讲目的
如何高效学习英语
演讲内容
学习英语的方法、怎样合理安排时间才能提高效率
注意:1.词数80词左右(已给的词不计入总词数);
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Hello, everyone!
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【答案】
Hello, everyone!I’m Li Hua. Today, I’d like to share with you some tips on how to learn English efficiently.
Firstly, it’s important to create an English learning environment, such as listening to English songs and watching English movies. Secondly, we should practice speaking English as much as possible, don’t be afraid of making mistakes. Also, reading English books and newspapers can help us expand our vocabulary. Finally, we need to make a reasonable schedule, set specific goals and stick to them.
That’s all. Thank you!
【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇演讲稿,参加学校正在举行的“如何高效学习英语”演讲活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议:tip → suggestion
高效地:efficiently → with efficiency
增加词汇:expand vocabulary → enrich vocabulary
最终地:finally → at last
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Today, I’d like to share with you some tips on how to learn English efficiently.
拓展句:Today, I’d like to share with you some tips on how you can learn English efficiently.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Firstly, it’s important to create an English learning environment, such as listening to English songs and watching English movies.(运用了it作形式主语的结构和动名词作宾语)
【高分句型2】 Also, reading English books and newspapers can help us expand our vocabulary.(运用了动名词作主语的结构)
考点二 建议信、咨询信、求助信
1. 写作结构
段落
建议信
咨询信
求助信
第一段
交代背景,表明意图
自我介绍,表明写信目的
表明身份,交代写信目的
第二段
提出具体建议,陈述理由
询问具体信息,逐条或分层陈述
说明自己问题并请求帮助
第三段
希望有用,表示祝愿
表示感谢,期盼回复
致谢并期待回复
2. 模板
(1)建议信模板
Dear ______,
I am sorry to hear that you ① . In your letter, you said that ② . My suggestions are as follows.
Initially, ③ because ④ . Besides, you should ⑤ because ⑥ . Thirdly, it’s a good idea to ⑦ , which might help you ⑧ .
Only in this way cay you ⑨ . I hope my suggestions will be helpful to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案:①事由②问题③建议1④原因1⑤建议2⑥原因2⑦建议3⑧原因3⑨解决问题
(2)咨询信模板
Dear ______,
I am ① . I am writing to ask you to provide some information regarding ② .
First of all, could you please tell me ③ ? Secondly, I’m wondering ④ . Finally, I would be glad if ⑤ .
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Hua
答案:①自我介绍②询问主题③询问内容1④询问内容2⑤询问内容3
(3)求助信模板
Dear ______,
I’m ① . I’m writing to turn to you for help.
I’ve determined to ② . But there’s something wrong with ③ . And I don’t know ④ . Would you like to ⑤ ?In the meanwhile, I beg you to ⑥ so that ⑦ . Also, I would like you to ⑧ .
I would be greatful if you could help me. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Hua
答案:①自我介绍②计划安排③问题④处理方法⑤委婉提出请求⑥请求内容⑦请求目的⑧表达期望
3. 例题讲解
例: 假定你是李华,你的笔友Alice想提高她的汉语水平,向你求助。请你根据下列提示给她写一封建议信,内容包括:
1. 写信目的;
2. 三点建议;
3. 提出希望。
注意:
1. 语句通顺,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
2. 词数80 左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
3. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
Best ways to learn
Examples
immerse(沉浸在) yourself in Chinese media
watch movies, listen to music, and read books
engage in language exchange to practice speaking
use language learning apps like HelloChinese for interactive lessons
spend time writing and reading Chinese characters daily
…
Dear Alice,
I’m thrilled to hear about your interest in improving your Chinese!
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Alice,
I’m thrilled to hear about your interest in improving your Chinese! I’m writing to share some advice on how to learn Chinese well.
Firstly, to boost your proficiency, immerse yourself in Chinese media — watch movies, listen to music, and read books. Secondly, engage in language exchange to practice speaking. Use language learning apps like HelloChinese for interactive lessons. Lastly, dedicate time to writing and reading Chinese characters daily. With consistent effort, you’ll see significant progress. Enjoy the learning process, and feel free to ask for help anytime!
I hope the advice above is of help and that you make rapid progress in Chinese.
Yours,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给笔友Alice写一封建议信,帮助她提高汉语水平。
【详解】1. 词汇积累:
① 沉浸:immerse → engross/submerge
② 语言交换:language exchange → conversation exchange/linguistic swap
③ 互动课程:interactive lessons → engaging lessons/participatory sessions
④ 坚持努力:consistent effort → persistent dedication/sustained endeavor
2. 句式拓展:
简单句变复合句
原句:Lastly, dedicate time to writing and reading Chinese characters daily.
拓展句:Lastly, make it a daily habit that you dedicate time to writing and reading Chinese characters.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I’m thrilled to hear about your interest in improving your Chinese!(使用了形容词+to do的结构以及动名词作宾语)
【高分句型2】I hope the advice above is of help and that you make rapid progress in Chinese.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
考点三 感谢信、道歉信、邀请信、申请信
1. 写作结构
第一段
第二段
第三段
感谢信
表达感谢之情并说明原因
具体描述对方给予自己的帮助
再次致谢或表达回报意愿
道歉信
表达歉意
说明具体原因并提出补救措施
再次致歉,请求原谅
邀请信
说明写信目的,发出邀请
介绍活动内容(时间、地点、安排、意义等)
期待回复
申请信
说明写信目的,提出申请
陈述申请理由或优势
表达感谢、期望和决心
2. 模板和常用表达
(1)感谢信模板
【表达感谢、说明原因】I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for ____________(原因). If it had not been for your assistance in ____________(某事), I fear that I would have been ____________(后果).
【具体描述对方给予自己的帮助】It is you who helped me with____________(某事), as a result of which, ____________(结果). Never will I forget whenever I was faced with difficulties, you kept ____________. Words can’t describe how thankful I am.
【再次感谢】Thanks again for your generous help and I do hope to have the opportunity to repay your help.
(2)道歉信模板
【表达歉意】I’m excessively sorry that I won’t be able to ____________(道歉内容), and I am writing to make an apology to you.
【解释原因并提出补救措施】Owing to the fact that ____________(原因), I can’t ____________. As you know, ____________(原因), so I have no choice but to ____________. Hope you can understand my situation and accept my apology for this unhappy experience. To make up for my fault, ____________(补救措施).
【再次致歉】Once again, I sincerely apologize to you for any inconvenience caused by this unexpected change. Looking forward to your early reply.
(3)邀请信模板
【说明写信目的、发出邀请】There will be a ____________(活动) in ____________(地点). Knowing that ____________(理由), I can’t wait to invite you to participate in it.
【介绍活动内容】 To _____________(目的), _____________(活动) will take place on ____________(日期), whose theme is ____________(主题). Undoubtedly, it’s a good chance for you to ____________(理由). In addition, ____________(补充内容). If interested, please sign up for it.
【期待回复】Looking forward to your early reply to confirm your participation.
(4)申请信模板
【提出申请】I’m Li Hua, a student who ____________(自我介绍). Learning that ____________(招募信息), I can’t wait to apply for the position/job.
【个人优势】 I’m convinced that I am qualified for the position/job. To begin with, I have a good command of both ____________ and ____________, especially ____________(知识/学术优势). Additionally, being open-minded and warm-hearted, I’m willing to ____________(性格优势). Also, my rich experience as a volunteer can enable me to ____________(经验优势).
【决心与期待】If accepted, I will spare no effort to live up to your expectations. I’d appreciate it if you could consider my application.
3. 例题讲解
例: 根据题目所提出的具体要求,在答题卡上写出一篇连贯完整的短文。词数不少于60。
假设你是李华,你校将举办读书日活动(ReadingDay)。请参考下表提供的信息,用英语写封邮件告诉英国交换生Jack有关读书日活动的安排,并邀请他参加活动。
邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Time
October 18th
Place
in the school hall
Activities
● share your favourite books and your reading experience with others
● donate your books to the school library
● make posters to encourage others to read books
● …
Dear Jack,
I’m writing to tell you that we will have a Reading Day in our school.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best regards,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jack,
I’m writing to tell you that we will have a Reading Day in our school.
It will be held in the school hall on October 18th. There will be different activities. If you come, you can share your favourite books and your reading experiences with others, donate your books to the school library, or make posters to encourage others to read books.
I know you’re interested in reading. So why not come and join us? Please let me know if you need my company.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生参考下表提供的信息,用英语写封邮件告诉英国交换生Jack有关读书日活动的安排,并邀请他参加活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
不同的:different → various
捐赠:donate → give away
鼓舞:encourage → motivate
需要:need → be in need of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:There will be different activities.
拓展句:There will be different activities, which will surely appeal to plenty of students.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I know you’re interested in reading.(运用了省略that的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Please let me know if you need my company.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
Passage 1
1.(22-23高三上·山东泰安·阶段练习)假定你是李华,上周你的英国朋友 Allen 来你校进行了学习交流,现已回国。他给你发来邮件说他对英语课堂上老师用英汉双语授课的方法提出异议。请你给他回一封邮件,内容包括:
1.对这一异议作出解释;
2.提出你自己的看法。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 邮件的开头语和结束语已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Allen,
In your e-mail, you expressed disagreement about our teachers speaking both English and Chinese in English classes.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Allen,
In your e-mail, you expressed disagreement about our teachers speaking both English and Chinese in English classes. I’m writing to give you some explanations.
Undoubtedly, lessons taught only in English provide students with a good English-learning environment, which enables them to learn more quickly and efficiently. However, this method only works for students with a high level of English proficiency. For students with poor English grades, this method may make it difficult for them to follow the teachers. Consequently, they will lose interest in learning English. In this sense, the bilingual teaching method is more effective. Personally, whichever teaching method is adopted depends largely on the students. We should focus more on learning outcomes of the teaching rather than the teaching methods.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据提示给英语课堂上老师用英汉双语授课的方法提出异议的英国朋友 Allen 回一封邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
无疑地:undoubtedly → without doubt
提供:provide → offer
然而:however → nevertheless
因此:consequently → as a consequence
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句:Consequently, they will lose interest in learning English. In this sense, the bilingual teaching method is more effective.
拓展句:Consequently, they will lose interest in learning English, in which sense, the bilingual teaching method is more effective.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Undoubtedly, lessons taught only in English provide students with a good English-learning environment, which enables them to learn more quickly and efficiently.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】 Personally, whichever teaching method is adopted depends largely on the students.(运用了whichever引导的主语从句)
2.(2023高二上·江苏苏州·学业考试)假如你是校学生会主席李华,为庆祝建国74周年,你校决定举办一场学生书画作品展,主题为“我心中的祖国”,现向全校同学征集作品。请你代表学生会写一则通知,内容包括:
1)展览的时间、地点、主题等;
2)参赛作品要求;
3)报名注意事项。
注意:写作词数应不低于80词。
Notice
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Students’ Union
【答案】One possible version:
Notice
To celebrate/mark the 74th anniversary of the founding of the PRC, a calligraphy and painting exhibition is scheduled for this Friday in the library. The themed exhibition will serve as a platform for students to extend love to the party and our country.
All the entries should be centred around the theme ‘Motherland in My heart’. Contents, such as praising people’s diligence and representing the fast development of our country, are highly recommended.
Anyone interested is welcome to submit their works to the Students’ Union. The deadline for submission is Wednesday.
Students’ Union
【语篇解读】这是一篇应用文。学校将举办一场学生书画作品展,主题为“我心中的祖国”,现向全校同学征集作品。要求考生代表学生会写一则通知。
【详解】词汇积累
充当:serve as → act as
表扬:praise → commend
代表:represent → stand for
快速的:fast → rapid/speedy
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Anyone interested is welcome to submit their works to the Students’ Union.
拓展句:Anyone who is interested is welcome to submit their works to the Students’ Union.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】To celebrate/mark the 74th anniversary of the founding of the PRC, a calligraphy and painting exhibition is scheduled for this Friday in the library.(运用了不定式作目的状语和be scheduled for高级表达)
【高分句型2】Anyone interested is welcome to submit their works to the Students’ Union.(运用了过去分词作定语)
3.(2022·江苏·一模)假如你是李华,2月27日你们全班同学参观了市博物馆。请你为校英文报写一篇新闻报道,内容包括:1. 参与人员、 时间;2. 活动内容; 3. 活动反响。
注意:1. 写作词数应为 80 左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
A Visit to the City Museum
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【答案】
A Visit to the City Museum
On March 20th, all the students in Class 7, Grade 12 paid a visit to the city museum, which turned out to be a rewarding and productive journey.
With the guidance of the museum staff, the students walked from one exhibition hall to another, appreciating the delicate art works made by our ancestors with keen interest. They were also lucky enough to get involved in a hands-on activity where they practiced some traditional crafts.
This immersive experience was highly spoken of by every student, who gained a deeper insight into magnificent Chinese culture and consequently took more pride in our time-honored civilization.
【语篇解读】本篇是应用文写作。要求考生为校英文报写一篇新闻报道,报道2月27日你们全班同学参观了市博物馆的情况。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
原来是:turn out → prove to be
欣赏:appreciate → enjoy
幸运的:lucky → fortunate
获得:gain → obtain
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:With the guidance of the museum staff, the students walked from one exhibition hall to another, appreciating the delicate art works made by our ancestors with keen interest.
拓展句:The students, who were guided by the museum staff, walked from one exhibition hall to another and appreciated the delicate artworks made by our ancestors with keen interest.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]On March 20th, all the students in Class 7, Grade 12 paid a visit to the city museum, which turned out to be a rewarding and productive journey.(whhich引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]They were also lucky enough to get involved in a hands-on activity where they practiced some traditional crafts.(where引导的限制性定语从句)
4.(23-24高三上·江苏淮安·期末)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Jackson来信询问你未来的人生规划,请你回信,内容包括:
1.你的人生规划;
2.解释原因;
3.请他提出建议。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jackson,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jackson,
I’m writing to share with you my life plan in the future. When I grow up, I want to be a journalist. I think working for a newspaper and reporting news from all over the world would be really exciting. Journalists are to be very enthusiastic, independent and good at communicating with people. Hence I am trying to improve my speaking and writing skills. And of course, absorbing as much knowledge as possible at this stage in my life is what I must do.
What do you think of my life plan? Any suggestions are welcome.
Yours,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Jackson来信询问你未来的人生规划,请你回信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
将来:in the future → hereafter
擅长:be good at → be skilled in
当然:of course → certainly
考虑:think of → think about
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:Journalists are to be very enthusiastic, independent and good at communicating with people. Hence I am trying to improve my speaking and writing skills.
拓展句:Journalists are to be very enthusiastic, independent and good at communicating with people, so I am trying to improve my speaking and writing skills.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】When I grow up, I want to be a journalist.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】And of course, absorbing as much knowledge as possible at this stage in my life is what I must do.(运用了what连接的表语从句)
5.(2019高二·山东·学业考试)假如你是李华,准备参加学校举办的题为“how to be a good student” 的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿,内容如下:
1. 努力学习;
2. 积极锻炼身体;
3. 和同学友好相处。
注意:
1. 词数80-100;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。
Good afternoon, everyone!
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Thank you!
【答案】
Good afternoon, everyone!
What are the qualities of a good student? I think he or she should have the following qualities.
First, a good student should work hard and use the knowledge acquired to solve problems. Because our knowledge is to be used to bring benefit to the mankind. Second, a good student should exercise regularly to keep fit. If we aren’t healthy, we can do nothing. Third, a good student should have good behavior. He would like to help others. His behavior shows the good quality. People like to make friends with him because he is friendly. It’s more important than knowledge.
Whoever has these qualities will be a good student.
Thank you!
【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“how to be a good student”为题,写一篇英语演讲稿。
【详解】1 词汇积累
我认为:I think → In my view
解决:solve → figure out
利益:benefit → profit
展现:show → display
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Second, a good student should exercise regularly to keep fit.
拓展句:Second, a good student should exercise regularly so that he can keep fit.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]If we aren’t healthy, we can do nothing.(if引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型2]Whoever has these qualities will be a good student.(whoever引导的主语从句)
6.(2022·天津津南·模拟预测)假如你是李津, 你的英国朋友Edward正在学习汉语, 希望你推荐一个适合他学习汉语的网站. 请你根据以下内容, 给他回复邮件.
推荐网站:www. edchinese. com
网站内容:
1. 网络课程:中文情景对话、中国风俗、成语;
2. 其它:中文电影、中文歌曲、唐诗等;
3. 有在线教师答疑解惑.
费用:全部免费
注意:1. 词数不少于100词;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯.
Dear Edward,
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Yours,
Li Jin
【答案】
Dear Edward,
I'm more than pleased to know that you are learning Chinese. I'd like to recommend www.edchinese.com to you.
It's a good website for non‐Chinese speakers who are learning Chinese, especially for beginners. Firstly, it provides you with a variety of online courses, such as Chinese idioms, dialogues and customs. Besides, it will help you learn Chinese in interesting and effective ways. Here you can learn to sing some Chinese songs, enjoy Tang poems and watch Chinese movies. More importantly, there are teachers online whom you can turn to for help. And all these are free of charge.
I hope you will find this website attractive and helpful. Wish you a happy learning time.
Yours,
Li Jin
【语篇解读】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。你的英国朋友Edward正在学习汉语, 希望你根据要求,推荐一个适合他学习汉语的网站。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:pleased → delighted
此外:besides → what’s more
提供:provide → supply
吸引人的:attractive → charming
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Firstly, it provides you with a variety of online courses, such as Chinese idioms, dialogues and customs.
拓展句:Firstly, it provides you with a variety of online courses which include Chinese idioms, dialogues and customs.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】It's a good website for non‐Chinese speakers who are learning Chinese, especially for beginners.(运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】More importantly, there are teachers online whom you can turn to for help.(运用了whom限制性定语从句)
7.(2022高二下·江苏·学业考试)学校图书馆需要购置一批新书,现向学生征求意见。假定你是李华,请你用英语给图书馆Thomas老师写一封邮件,推荐科普类图书(popular science books)和文学类图书(literary books),并分别说明推荐理由。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Thomas,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Thomas,
Knowing that our library is going to buy books, I'd like to give some suggestions.
What we need most are popular science books.Usually popular science books explain basic principles of nature in a simple and interesting way. They help us understand science better and arouse our curiosity about scientific discoveries.In addition to reading for knowledge, we read for fun and inspiration.That is why I recommend another category of books: literary books. Classic works, written by masters, present great thoughts through fascinating stories and language. They not only offer us joy and excitement, but also encourage us to think critically.
I'll be glad if you can consider my recommendation.
【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向图书馆Thomas老师写一封邮件,推荐科普类图书和文学类图书,并分别说明推荐理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
购买:buy → purchase
建议:suggestion → tip
提供:offer → provide
鼓励某人做某事:encourage sb. to do sth. → inspire sb. to do sth.
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句: Classic works, written by masters, present great thoughts a through fascinating stories and language.
拓展句: Classic works, which were written by masters, present great thoughts a through fascinating stories and language.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]What we need most are popular science books.(运用了what引导的主语从句)
[高分句型2]That is why I recommend another category of books: literary books.(运用了why引导的表语从句)
8.(20-21高二上·天津·阶段练习)假设你是李华,打算高考完7月去伦敦旅游一周,现在就此事发e-mail 给伦敦的朋友Bob,主要内容:
1.询问当地的天气情况以及你要的准备的东西;
2.询问当地的景点以及收费情况;
3.请Bob帮你在宾馆预定一个房间;
4.询问Bob 当地的法规以防出错。
Dear Bob,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Bob,
I’m happy to tell you that I will visit London after my entrance examination in July. So I am writing to ask you a favor.
First, I don’t know whether it will be good weather in July in London. Would you please keep me informed of it during the week, so that I can bring with me suitable clothes. Besides, is it convenient for you to prepare me a list of places of interest and their fees. I want to enjoy traditional cultures and customs in London. What’s more, I would appreciate it if you can order a room in a hotel for me. What’s the most important is that it will be better if I can learn much about local generations and rules before arriving in London.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】本文是应用文。要求考生给伦敦的朋友Bob发e-mail询问有关高考完7月去伦敦旅游一周的相关情况。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴:happy → glad
参观:visit → pay a visit to
通知:keep sb. informed of sth.→ inform sb. of sth.
此外:Besides → What’s more
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Besides, is it convenient for you to prepare me a list of places of interest and their fees. I want to enjoy traditional cultures and customs in London.
拓展句:Besides, is it convenient for you to prepare me a list of places of interest and their fees with which I could enjoy traditional cultures and customs in London more freely.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I’m happy to tell you that I will visit London after my entrance examination in July.(由that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】First, I don’t know whether it will be good weather in July in London.(由whether引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型3】Would you please keep me informed of it during the week, so that I can bring with me suitable clothes.(由so that引导的结果状语从句)
【高分句型4】What’s more, I would appreciate it if you can order a room in a hotel for me.(由if引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型5】What’s the most important is that it will be better if I can learn much about local generations and rules before arriving in London.(由what引导的主语从句,that引导的宾语从句和if引导的条件状语从句)
9.(2021高三·辽宁·学业考试)假设你是李华,你校将于下周五晚八点在体育馆举行一场中国功夫(Kungfu)的表演。你想邀请外教Michael一起观看演出。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 具体时间和地点;
2. 邀请原因;
3. 表演简介。
注意:
1. 开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现考生的真实个人信息;
4. 词数100左右。
Dear Michael,
I am glad to hear that
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【答案】
Dear Michael,
I am glad to hear that you’ve been interested in Chinese Kungfu culture. I am writing to invite you to watch a performance in our school stadium at 8: 00 p. m. next Friday.
Chinese Kungfu has a long history in China, and it plays an important role in Chinese traditional sports culture. It not only serves as a means of self-defense, but also does good to people’s health. Up to now, Chinese Kungfu has millions of fans at home and abroad. Several Kungfu masters have been invited to come and perform that day. Thus, you should not miss this performance.
I’m sure it will be an unforgettable experience .I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给外教Michael写封信,邀请他一起观看下周五晚八点在体育馆举行的一场中国功夫的表演。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
高兴的:glad → delighted
难忘的:unforgettable → memorable
在……起重要作用:play an important role in → play an important part in
到目前为止:up to now → so far
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Chinese Kungfu has a long history in China, and it plays an important role in Chinese traditional sports culture.
拓展句:Chinese Kungfu, which has a long history in China, plays an important role in Chinese traditional sports culture.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]I am glad to hear that you’ve been interested in Chinese Kungfu culture.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]I’m sure it will be an unforgettable experience .(运用了that引导的宾语从句,省略了引导词that)
10.(2020高三上·江苏苏州·学业考试)假定你是李华,得知近期你市将举办中英青少年历史体验夏令营活动(China and Britain History Summer Camp For Teenagers)。请你给活动的负责人Mr. Clark写一封邮件,申请做志愿者,内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2.个人优势;
3.表达意愿。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Ms. Clark,
I have learned that China and British History Winter Camp For Teenagers will be held and you are in need of volunteers, so I am writing this letter with the hope of being one of them.
I'm Li Hua and I can speak fluent English as well as standard Chinese. Besides, as a history lover, I once worked as a tour guide and was highly praised for my vivid and precise introduction of the places of interests in our city. Young and energetic, I'm so keen on communicating with foreign friends that I'm convinced I am qualified for the job. As a president of the Students' Union, I can appeal to the after-class clubs in my school to be in support of the project if necessary, which I'm definite will contribute a lot to a more lively and meaningful visit here for the foreign friends.
I would be grateful if my application could meet with your approval. I will devote myself to what I am supposed to do. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给活动的负责人Ms. Clark写一封邮件,申请做志愿者。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时。
结构:总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1. 写信目的;
2. 个人优势;
3. 能做的事情。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
in need of; with the hope of; as well as; be highly praised for; be keen on; be qualified for; appeal to; in support of; contribute…to…; be supposed to; look forward to
第三步:连词成句
1. I have learned that China and British History Winter Camp For Teenagers will be held and you are in need of volunteers, so I am writing this letter with the hope of being one of them.
2. Besides, as a history lover, I once worked as a tour guide and was highly praised for my vivid and precise introduction of the places of interests in our city.
3. Young and energetic, I'm so keen on communicating with foreign friends that I'm convinced I am qualified for the job.
4. As a president of the Students' Union, I can appeal to the after-class clubs in my school to be in support of the project if necessary, which I'm definite will contribute a lot to a more lively and meaningful visit here for the foreign friends.
5. I would be grateful if my application could meet with your approval.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1. 表并列补充关系:Besides, as well as
2. 表因果关系:so
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】
[高分句型1]Young and energetic, I'm so keen on communicating with foreign friends that I'm convinced I am qualified for the job.(so...that...引导的结果状语从句中包含宾语从句)
[高分句型2]As a president of the Students' Union, I can appeal to the after-class clubs in my school to be in support of the project if necessary, which I'm definite will contribute a lot to a more lively and meaningful visit here for the foreign friends.(含有which引导的非限制性定语从句)
11.(2020·黑龙江哈尔滨·三模)假定你是李华,你校为了弘扬中华文化,计划举办一场中国古诗英语翻译大赛,请你写信邀请对中国古诗有一定研究和兴趣的交换生George一同参加,内容包括:
1. 大赛举办的目的;
2. 大赛的时间和规则;
3. 你邀请的理由。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear George,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear George,
I am writing to tell you a piece of good news. In order to promote Chinese culture, our school is going to hold a classical Chinese poetry translation contest. Students who are interested can choose a poem and translate it into English. The deadline is May 28th, and the results will be announced on June 6th. Excellent works will be displayed on the school website. You are crazy about classical Chinese poetry, so it is a great opportunity for you to take part in the contest. If you’re interested, please let me know and I can help you sign up. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,假定你是李华,你校为了弘扬中华文化,计划举办一场中国古诗英语翻译大赛,请你写信邀请对中国古诗有一定研究和兴趣的交换生George一同参加,内容包括:1. 大赛举办的目的;2. 大赛的时间和规则;3. 你邀请的理由。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组):a piece of good news(一则好消息);in order to (为了);Chinese poetry translation contest (中国古诗英语翻译大赛);be crazy about (着迷于)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时和一般将来时。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如Students who are interested can choose a poem and translate it into English.运用了who引导的定语从句;If you’re interested, please let me know and I can help you sign up.运用了if引导的条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
12.(2018高三·广东·学业考试)假如你是李华,你的朋友 Robert来信说要来中国学汉语,想了解你校情况。你回信告知:你校建于1950年,校园环境优美,有教学楼、图书馆、音乐舞蹈室、游泳池和运动场,而且你校的老师都优秀,对学生很有耐心。
内容要点:
(1)听说 Robert要来你校学习,你很高兴。
(2)简单介绍你校情况。
(3)期待早日在中国见到 Robert。
注意:1、词数80左右。
2、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3、开头和结尾已给出,不算字数。
Dear Robert,
I'm glad you're coming to our school to learn Chinese.
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Yours
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Robert,
I'm glad you're coming to our school to learn Chinese. Our school was built in 1950, with beautiful campus environment. On the left is the teaching building, on the right is the library, where we study in our spare time. Besides, there are music rooms and dance rooms, where we can sing and dance. Swimming pool and playground are the places where we exercise. The teachers in our school are excellent and patient with the students.
Looking forward to seeing you in China as soon as possible.
Yours,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生回信Robert告知学校基本情况。
【详解】第一步: 审题
体裁: 应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构: 总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1.听说 Robert要来你校学习,你很高兴。
2.简单介绍你校情况。
3.期待早日在中国见到 Robert。
第二步: 列提纲 (重点词组)
look forward to;in our spare time;be patient with;as soon as possible.
第三步: 连词成句
I'm glad you're coming to our school to learn Chinese.
Our school was built in 1950, with beautiful campus environment.
On the left is the teaching building, on the right is the library, where we study in our spare time.
Besides, there are music rooms and dance rooms, where we can sing and dance.
Swimming pool and playground are the places where we exercise.
he teachers in our school are excellent and patient with the students.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步: 连句成篇 (衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second,And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand,On the other hand,while,as for
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步: 润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了定语从句,如: On the left is the teaching building, on the right is the library, where we study in our spare time. Besides, there are music rooms and dance rooms, where we can sing and dance.运用了where引导的定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
13.(2019高二上·广东·学业考试)假定你是李华。为了庆祝春节,你们班将举行个露天音乐会(open-air concert),老师和同学们都会参加。请给外籍老师Alice写封信,邀请她参加并表演个节目。
内容要点:
(1)时间: 1月20晚8:00;
(2)地点:学校操场;
(3)节目类型:唱歌、跳舞、乐器演奏或自己擅长的任何表演形式。
注意:1.词数80左右:
2.开头和结尾已经给出,不算词数:
3.可以适当增加细节,并将开头和结尾抄写在答题卡上,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Alice,
How is it going? I’m writing to sincerely invite you to take part in our concert in the open air, which will be held at 8 p.m on Jan 20th on the playground in our school by our class for the purpose of celebrating the coming Spring Festival.
By the way, you’re particularly expected to sing, dance and play some musical instruments or perform anything you’re good at.
I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation and looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写一封信。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,本篇为一封书信;假定你是李华。为了庆祝春节,你们班将举行个露天音乐会(open-air concert),老师和同学们都会参加。请给外籍老师Alice写封信,邀请她参加并表演个节目。内容要点:(1)时间: 1月20晚8:00;(2)地点:学校操场;(3)节目类型:唱歌、跳舞、乐器演奏或自己擅长的任何表演形式。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如:take part in our concert in the open air(参加露天音乐会);for the purpose of celebrating the coming Spring Festival.(为了庆祝即将到来的春节);particularly expected to sing, dance(特别期待唱歌、跳舞)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。I’m writing to sincerely invite you to take part in our concert in the open air, which will be held at 8 p.m on Jan 20th on the playground in our school by our class for the purpose of celebrating the coming Spring Festival.句中使用which引导的非限制性定语从句和一般将来时态的被动语态;I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation and looking forward to your coming.句中使用if引导的从句。
14.(2016·北京·高考真题)假设你是李华。你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣,并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物。请你给Jim回信,内容包括:
1、该人物是谁;
2、该人物的主要贡献;
3、该人物对你的影响。
注意:1. 词数不少于100;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours
Lihua
【答案】
Dear Jim,
It’s great to hear from you. I feel proud knowing your interest in Chinese history.
As for my favorite figure in Chinese history, it must be Wei Yuan, a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty. He, in his book, Haiguo Tuzhi (Maps and Records of the World), introduced modern technologies and ideas to China, which opened our eyes to the world. So he and his works are still worthy of being respected by us now. In fact, he inspires me to major in English in college, to be a bridge between China and the world.
Interested in knowing more? I can find you some books! Just let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给英国朋友Jim写封信,介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物,内容包括:1、该人物是谁;2、该人物的主要贡献;3、该人物对你的影响。
【详解】1.词汇积累
激励:inspire → motivate
至于,关于:as for → with regard to
值得做:be worthy of being done → be worth doing
事实上:in fact → as a matter of fact
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:As for my favorite figure in Chinese history, it must be Wei Yuan, a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty.
拓展句:As for my favorite figure in Chinese history, it must be Wei Yuan, who was a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]So he and his works are still worthy of being respected by us now. (运用了动名词的被动式作宾语)
[高分句型2]He, in his book, Haiguo Tuzhi (Maps and Records of the World), introduced modern technologies and ideas to China, which opened our eyes to the world.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
15.(2011高一上·江苏·学业考试)最近,你们班上将要组织一场以 “To be self-confident”为题的主题班会。你是英语课代表,请根据以下内容准备一篇120词左右的文章作为发言稿。
提示:1. 简述自信的重要性。
2. 假设你以前缺乏信心…(1) 谁给了你鼓励? (2)什么事让你改变?
3. 适当加入自己的评论
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【答案】
Boys and Girls,
Life is but a hard and bitter journey. Therefore, I would like to say, “No matter what happens, be self-confident.”
I’d like to share my own experience with you. When I was 14, I suffered from a lack of confidence. I didn’t dare to answer teachers’ questions in class and was afraid to speak in public. Later, something happened and changed my life. It was a speech contest held at our school. My mother persuaded me to participate, and she had great confidence in me. I chose a topic most appropriate to me—Self-confidence and Success. I tried my best to recite my whole speech and practiced it more than 100 times before a mirror. With my mother’s great love and encouragement, I won the first prize in the contest!
Since then, I feel strongly self-confidence is the first step towards success. So, dear friends, be self-confident and have a brighter future.
Thank you!
【语篇解读】本文是提纲类写作。体裁为发言稿。根据内容可以确定以第一人称,一般现在时与一般过去时。要求已经给出:1.自信重要性;2.自身经历;3.自己的评论。
【详解】由于发言稿在命题形式上侧重于考查正文的写法,所以写正文时要注意:条理要清晰,适当增加关联词和细节。语言要简洁明快,少用复杂句,多用简单句。话说的要准确、易懂,最好运用大众语言。但文中的句型也要善于变化,不要过于单一。
全文亮点:1、要点齐全,层次分明。重点表述在正文部分,首先本文开门见山,提出观点。 I would like to say, “ No matter what happens, be self-confident.”,其次用Later, something happened and changed my life.过渡自然,最后写I feel strongly self-confidence is the first step towards success.首尾呼应,水到渠成,行文连贯。2、措辞准确,句式多变,词数适当。简单句和复合句穿插使用,使文章简洁生动又错落有致。灵活运用了多个短语和搭配,如suffer from … , persuade sb. to do sth., try one’s best to do sth. …I have felt strongly that …等的运用,为文章增色不少。
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专题18 应用文写作
目录
明晰学考要求
基础知识梳理
考点精讲讲练
考点一 通知,倡议书,演讲稿/发言稿
考点二 建议信,咨询信和求助信
考点三 感谢信,道歉信,邀请信,申请信
实战能力训练
通知
是一种告知特定人员或群体有关事项的专用文稿,目的是让对方知道并执行具体事项。
倡议书
是公开提倡某项有意义的活动或推行某种行之有效的做法的专用书信,目的是引起广泛响应。
演讲/发言稿
是在某些公共场合或较为隆重的仪式上围绕某一主题发表演讲的专用文稿,目的是把观点或主张等传达给听众。
建议信
要求考生就某事向他人或组织提出自己的建议或忠告,希望对方接受自己的想法并解决相关问题。
咨询信
要求考生就自己不太熟悉或不了解的事情向有关部门或人士咨询,获取所需信息。
求助信
要求考生就自己所遇到的问题或困难向有关人士或部门请求帮助,以期问题得到圆满解决。
感谢信
是向帮助、关心和支持过自己的集体或个人表示感谢的书信。
道歉信
是指因过失、疏忽做错了事或不能遵守承诺给别人带来麻烦后,向对方道歉时写的书信。
邀请信
是邀请写作对象前来参加活动的信件。高考的邀请信还包括邀约作品、邀请加入某组织、团体等。
考点一.通知、倡议书、演讲/发言稿
写作结构
段落
通知
倡议书
演讲/发言稿
第一段
说明通知缘由
说明倡议的背景、目的或主题
说明演讲主题
第二段
告知具体事项(时间、地点、内容、注意事项等)
阐述倡议的具体内容或理由
就主题展开阐述或提出看法
第三段
表示欢迎或期待
提出呼吁或发出号召
进行总结或提出希望并表示感谢
2. 模板
(1)通知模板
With the aim of ① , We have decided to hold a/an ② .
→活动主题及安排
Please gather at/in ③ at ④ . Please remember that ⑤ .
→活动时间、地点和注意事项
I’m sure you’ll have a lot of fun. We hope you can come on time.
→希望参加
⑥
(2)倡议书模板
Dear ,
As ① , more and more people are concerned about ② . Now we are appealing to you ③ .
There are some benefits. For one thing, ④ . For another, ⑤ . More importantly, ⑥ .
It is everyone’s responsibility to ⑦ . If we , we can make a big difference. Let’s take action from now on!
⑧
(3)演讲/发言稿模板
Boys and Girls/Ladies and Gentlemen,
It is my honor to stand here. The topic of my speech is ① . →说明主题
As is known to all, ② . However, ③ . How can we solve these problems then? As far as I’m concerned, ④ . For one thing, ⑤ . For another, ⑥ . What’s more, ⑦ . →分析问题,提出解决方案
Finally, I’d like to summarize the main point. ⑧ . →总结主题
Thank you for listening!→结束语
3. 例题讲解
例: 你校正在举行一个有关“如何高效学习英语”演讲活动,假如你是李华,你报名参加了本次活动,现在你需要根据演讲活动的要求写一篇演讲稿,然后参加活动。
演讲目的
如何高效学习英语
演讲内容
学习英语的方法、怎样合理安排时间才能提高效率
注意:1.词数80词左右(已给的词不计入总词数);
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Hello, everyone!
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考点二 建议信、咨询信、求助信
1. 写作结构
段落
建议信
咨询信
求助信
第一段
交代背景,表明意图
自我介绍,表明写信目的
表明身份,交代写信目的
第二段
提出具体建议,陈述理由
询问具体信息,逐条或分层陈述
说明自己问题并请求帮助
第三段
希望有用,表示祝愿
表示感谢,期盼回复
致谢并期待回复
2. 模板
(1)建议信模板
Dear ______,
I am sorry to hear that you ① . In your letter, you said that ② . My suggestions are as follows.
Initially, ③ because ④ . Besides, you should ⑤ because ⑥ . Thirdly, it’s a good idea to ⑦ , which might help you ⑧ .
Only in this way cay you ⑨ . I hope my suggestions will be helpful to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
(2)咨询信模板
Dear ______,
I am ① . I am writing to ask you to provide some information regarding ② .
First of all, could you please tell me ③ ? Secondly, I’m wondering ④ . Finally, I would be glad if ⑤ .
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Hua
(3)求助信模板
Dear ______,
I’m ① . I’m writing to turn to you for help.
I’ve determined to ② . But there’s something wrong with ③ . And I don’t know ④ . Would you like to ⑤ ?In the meanwhile, I beg you to ⑥ so that ⑦ . Also, I would like you to ⑧ .
I would be greatful if you could help me. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Hua
3. 例题讲解
例: 假定你是李华,你的笔友Alice想提高她的汉语水平,向你求助。请你根据下列提示给她写一封建议信,内容包括:
1. 写信目的;
2. 三点建议;
3. 提出希望。
注意:
1. 语句通顺,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
2. 词数80 左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
3. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
Best ways to learn
Examples
immerse(沉浸在) yourself in Chinese media
watch movies, listen to music, and read books
engage in language exchange to practice speaking
use language learning apps like HelloChinese for interactive lessons
spend time writing and reading Chinese characters daily
…
Dear Alice,
I’m thrilled to hear about your interest in improving your Chinese!
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Yours,
Li Hua
考点三 感谢信、道歉信、邀请信、申请信
1. 写作结构
第一段
第二段
第三段
感谢信
表达感谢之情并说明原因
具体描述对方给予自己的帮助
再次致谢或表达回报意愿
道歉信
表达歉意
说明具体原因并提出补救措施
再次致歉,请求原谅
邀请信
说明写信目的,发出邀请
介绍活动内容(时间、地点、安排、意义等)
期待回复
申请信
说明写信目的,提出申请
陈述申请理由或优势
表达感谢、期望和决心
2. 模板和常用表达
(1)感谢信模板
【表达感谢、说明原因】I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for ____________(原因). If it had not been for your assistance in ____________(某事), I fear that I would have been ____________(后果).
【具体描述对方给予自己的帮助】It is you who helped me with____________(某事), as a result of which, ____________(结果). Never will I forget whenever I was faced with difficulties, you kept ____________. Words can’t describe how thankful I am.
【再次感谢】Thanks again for your generous help and I do hope to have the opportunity to repay your help.
(2)道歉信模板
【表达歉意】I’m excessively sorry that I won’t be able to ____________(道歉内容), and I am writing to make an apology to you.
【解释原因并提出补救措施】Owing to the fact that ____________(原因), I can’t ____________. As you know, ____________(原因), so I have no choice but to ____________. Hope you can understand my situation and accept my apology for this unhappy experience. To make up for my fault, ____________(补救措施).
【再次致歉】Once again, I sincerely apologize to you for any inconvenience caused by this unexpected change. Looking forward to your early reply.
(3)邀请信模板
【说明写信目的、发出邀请】There will be a ____________(活动) in ____________(地点). Knowing that ____________(理由), I can’t wait to invite you to participate in it.
【介绍活动内容】 To _____________(目的), _____________(活动) will take place on ____________(日期), whose theme is ____________(主题). Undoubtedly, it’s a good chance for you to ____________(理由). In addition, ____________(补充内容). If interested, please sign up for it.
【期待回复】Looking forward to your early reply to confirm your participation.
(4)申请信模板
【提出申请】I’m Li Hua, a student who ____________(自我介绍). Learning that ____________(招募信息), I can’t wait to apply for the position/job.
【个人优势】 I’m convinced that I am qualified for the position/job. To begin with, I have a good command of both ____________ and ____________, especially ____________(知识/学术优势). Additionally, being open-minded and warm-hearted, I’m willing to ____________(性格优势). Also, my rich experience as a volunteer can enable me to ____________(经验优势).
【决心与期待】If accepted, I will spare no effort to live up to your expectations. I’d appreciate it if you could consider my application.
3. 例题讲解
例: 根据题目所提出的具体要求,在答题卡上写出一篇连贯完整的短文。词数不少于60。
假设你是李华,你校将举办读书日活动(ReadingDay)。请参考下表提供的信息,用英语写封邮件告诉英国交换生Jack有关读书日活动的安排,并邀请他参加活动。
邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Time
October 18th
Place
in the school hall
Activities
● share your favourite books and your reading experience with others
● donate your books to the school library
● make posters to encourage others to read books
● …
Dear Jack,
I’m writing to tell you that we will have a Reading Day in our school.
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Best regards,
Li Hua
Passage 1
1.(22-23高三上·山东泰安·阶段练习)假定你是李华,上周你的英国朋友 Allen 来你校进行了学习交流,现已回国。他给你发来邮件说他对英语课堂上老师用英汉双语授课的方法提出异议。请你给他回一封邮件,内容包括:
1.对这一异议作出解释;
2.提出你自己的看法。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 邮件的开头语和结束语已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Allen,
In your e-mail, you expressed disagreement about our teachers speaking both English and Chinese in English classes.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
2.(2023高二上·江苏苏州·学业考试)假如你是校学生会主席李华,为庆祝建国74周年,你校决定举办一场学生书画作品展,主题为“我心中的祖国”,现向全校同学征集作品。请你代表学生会写一则通知,内容包括:
1)展览的时间、地点、主题等;
2)参赛作品要求;
3)报名注意事项。
注意:写作词数应不低于80词。
Notice
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Students’ Union
3.(2022·江苏·一模)假如你是李华,2月27日你们全班同学参观了市博物馆。请你为校英文报写一篇新闻报道,内容包括:1. 参与人员、 时间;2. 活动内容; 3. 活动反响。
注意:1. 写作词数应为 80 左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
A Visit to the City Museum
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4.(23-24高三上·江苏淮安·期末)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Jackson来信询问你未来的人生规划,请你回信,内容包括:
1.你的人生规划;
2.解释原因;
3.请他提出建议。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jackson,
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Yours,
Li Hua
5.(2019高二·山东·学业考试)假如你是李华,准备参加学校举办的题为“how to be a good student” 的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿,内容如下:
1. 努力学习;
2. 积极锻炼身体;
3. 和同学友好相处。
注意:
1. 词数80-100;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。
Good afternoon, everyone!
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Thank you!
6.(2022·天津津南·模拟预测)假如你是李津, 你的英国朋友Edward正在学习汉语, 希望你推荐一个适合他学习汉语的网站. 请你根据以下内容, 给他回复邮件.
推荐网站:www. edchinese. com
网站内容:
1. 网络课程:中文情景对话、中国风俗、成语;
2. 其它:中文电影、中文歌曲、唐诗等;
3. 有在线教师答疑解惑.
费用:全部免费
注意:1. 词数不少于100词;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯.
Dear Edward,
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Yours,
Li Jin
7.(2022高二下·江苏·学业考试)学校图书馆需要购置一批新书,现向学生征求意见。假定你是李华,请你用英语给图书馆Thomas老师写一封邮件,推荐科普类图书(popular science books)和文学类图书(literary books),并分别说明推荐理由。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Thomas,
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Yours,
Li Hua
8.(20-21高二上·天津·阶段练习)假设你是李华,打算高考完7月去伦敦旅游一周,现在就此事发e-mail 给伦敦的朋友Bob,主要内容:
1.询问当地的天气情况以及你要的准备的东西;
2.询问当地的景点以及收费情况;
3.请Bob帮你在宾馆预定一个房间;
4.询问Bob 当地的法规以防出错。
Dear Bob,
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Yours,
Li Hua
9.(2021高三·辽宁·学业考试)假设你是李华,你校将于下周五晚八点在体育馆举行一场中国功夫(Kungfu)的表演。你想邀请外教Michael一起观看演出。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 具体时间和地点;
2. 邀请原因;
3. 表演简介。
注意:
1. 开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现考生的真实个人信息;
4. 词数100左右。
Dear Michael,
I am glad to hear that
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10.(2020高三上·江苏苏州·学业考试)假定你是李华,得知近期你市将举办中英青少年历史体验夏令营活动(China and Britain History Summer Camp For Teenagers)。请你给活动的负责人Mr. Clark写一封邮件,申请做志愿者,内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2.个人优势;
3.表达意愿。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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11.(2020·黑龙江哈尔滨·三模)假定你是李华,你校为了弘扬中华文化,计划举办一场中国古诗英语翻译大赛,请你写信邀请对中国古诗有一定研究和兴趣的交换生George一同参加,内容包括:
1. 大赛举办的目的;
2. 大赛的时间和规则;
3. 你邀请的理由。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear George,
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Yours,
Li Hua
12.(2018高三·广东·学业考试)假如你是李华,你的朋友 Robert来信说要来中国学汉语,想了解你校情况。你回信告知:你校建于1950年,校园环境优美,有教学楼、图书馆、音乐舞蹈室、游泳池和运动场,而且你校的老师都优秀,对学生很有耐心。
内容要点:
(1)听说 Robert要来你校学习,你很高兴。
(2)简单介绍你校情况。
(3)期待早日在中国见到 Robert。
注意:1、词数80左右。
2、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3、开头和结尾已给出,不算字数。
Dear Robert,
I'm glad you're coming to our school to learn Chinese.
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Yours
Li Hua
13.(2019高二上·广东·学业考试)假定你是李华。为了庆祝春节,你们班将举行个露天音乐会(open-air concert),老师和同学们都会参加。请给外籍老师Alice写封信,邀请她参加并表演个节目。
内容要点:
(1)时间: 1月20晚8:00;
(2)地点:学校操场;
(3)节目类型:唱歌、跳舞、乐器演奏或自己擅长的任何表演形式。
注意:1.词数80左右:
2.开头和结尾已经给出,不算词数:
3.可以适当增加细节,并将开头和结尾抄写在答题卡上,以使行文连贯。
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14.(2016·北京·高考真题)假设你是李华。你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣,并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物。请你给Jim回信,内容包括:
1、该人物是谁;
2、该人物的主要贡献;
3、该人物对你的影响。
注意:1. 词数不少于100;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours
Lihua
15.(2011高一上·江苏·学业考试)最近,你们班上将要组织一场以 “To be self-confident”为题的主题班会。你是英语课代表,请根据以下内容准备一篇120词左右的文章作为发言稿。
提示:1. 简述自信的重要性。
2. 假设你以前缺乏信心…(1) 谁给了你鼓励? (2)什么事让你改变?
3. 适当加入自己的评论
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