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U6写作提优——如何写介绍日常生活类文章 话题分析 本单元的话题是“描述日常生活”，要求同学们围绕这一话题谈论作息时间和作息习惯。在写作层面，要求同学们能根据所学，写一篇短文介绍自己或他人的日常生活。 写作积累 常用词汇 four thirty 4 点 30分 take a shower 淋浴 get dressed 穿衣服 brush one's teeth 刷牙 do some reading 做一些阅读 before/ after class课前/后 on duty 值班 have breakfast/ lunch/ dinner吃早饭/午饭/晚饭 do( one’ s) homework做家庭作业 go to bed 上床睡觉 at/ on weekends 在周末 between lessons 两节课之间 after that在那之后 go to my ice hockey club 去我的冰球俱乐部 prepare... for... 为······准备······ make( good) use of(充分)利用…… daily routines日常生活 常用句型 It's time( for sb) to do sth I usually get up/ go to school... at... After school, I often... When I get home, I usually... After dinner, I sometimes... I'm busy every day, but... 典例讲解 假如你是李华，你的英国朋友 Mike发来邮件询问你的日常生活安排，请你用英语写一封80词左右的电子邮件，告诉他你的日常生活是如何安排的以及你的感受。 提示词: get up, have lessons, go to school clubs, do homework 提示问题:· What's your day like? · How do you feel every day? Dear Mike, I'm glad to receive your email. Yours, Li Hua 审题思路 1.审体裁：应用文(电子邮件)。 2.审人称：本文以介绍自己的日常生活为主，所以人称方面应该以第一人称为主。 3.审时态：因为文章的主题是介绍日常生活，关键词“日常”说明动作行为是常态，不涉及特殊的时间状语，所以我们用一般现在时。 注意事项 写作时注意按照一定的顺序编写，使文章结构清晰，在描述完自己或他人一天的生活后可适当表达感受或作出评价。 写作提纲 优秀范文 Dear Mike, I'm glad to receive your email. Here is my day. I usually get up at half past six in the morning. My school starts at 8:00 o’ clock. I have six lessons every day. After school, I often go to the ice hockey club because I enjoy playing ice hockey very much. When I get home,I usually do my homework first. After dinner, I do some reading or take a walk. At nine thirty, it's time for me to go to bed. I am very busy every day, but I have a lot of fun. Yours, Li Hua 实战演练 假如你是 Jack，现在在中国，你想给你的好朋友 Lucy写一封信，向她介绍一下自己的日常生活时间表(至少描述五个日常活动)。 要求：1.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；2.文章内容需包括以上要点，可适当发挥；3.不少于80词，开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Lucy, I'm writing to tell you about my daily life. What about you? Please write to me and tell me. Yours, Jack One possible version: Dear Lucy, I'm writing to tell you about my daily life. In the morning I get up at 5:40. Then I have breakfast at 6:30. After breakfast, I go to school at7:30. I have four classes in the morning and I have lunch at twelve. I have two classes in the afternoon.I go to the sports club to play sports at four o’ clock. That’ s an important part of my everyday life. I usually get home at 5:30. Then I do my homework first. I have dinner with my parents at6:30. After that, I read with my parents for an hour. Then I prepare my schoolbag for the next day. I go to bed at about nine o’ clock. What about you? Please write to me and tell me. Yours, Jack 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ U5写作提优——如何写社团俱乐部的招聘海报或申请信 话题分析 本单元的话题是“趣味俱乐部”，要求同学们围绕这一话题谈论自己在某方面的能力、喜好和意愿，并根据自己的喜好选择想加入的俱乐部。在写作层面，要求同学们能根据所学，为社团俱乐部写一则招聘海报或向其写一封申请信。 写作积累 常用词汇 in different clubs在不同的社团 choose a school club 选择一个学校社团 read with feeling 有感情地朗诵 interests and talents 兴趣和才能 play the guitar 弹吉他 play ping-pong打乒乓球 play the violin拉小提琴 play Chinese chess下中国象棋 play the drums 打鼓 start a music club 成立一个音乐社团 play a musical instrument 演奏一种乐器 act out stories表演故事 more than多于;不仅是 fall in love with 爱上…… take good photos 拍出好照片 collect plants and insects 收集植物和昆虫 right under your nose 就在你眼前 open one's mind使某人思想开阔 be interested in 对……感兴趣 常用句型 What club do you/ does she/ he... want to join? I would like/ want to join... I can... /I can't... I can... but I can't... I'm good at... I'm really interested in... 典例讲解 假如你是李华，你校英语俱乐部正在招募新成员，你想加入该社团，请根据以下提示，用英语给该俱乐部负责人( Mr Zheng)写一封申请信，表达你想加入该俱乐部的意愿。 提示：1.介绍个人基本信息；2.介绍你的兴趣爱好；3.介绍你想加入的理由。 要求：1.习作须包括提示内容，可适当发挥；2.词数70左右(开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数)。 Dear Mr Zheng, Best wishes, Li Hua 审题思路 1.审体裁：应用文(书信)。 2.审人称：本文以自我介绍为主，所以人称方面应该以第一人称为主。 3.审时态：本文是客观介绍个人信息、爱好等，所以时态方面应该用一般现在时。 注意事项 写申请信时要注意格式；写作时注意逐条表述，使逻辑清晰；适当运用本单元所学词汇以及恰当的连词连接上下文。 写作提纲 优秀范文 Dear Mr Zheng, My name is Li Hua. I'm 13 years old. I'm really interested in your club. I enjoy reading all kinds of English books because I think they can open my mind. And I often listen to English songs and watch English films in my free time. I think it's fun and helpful for my English listening. I'd like to make more friends and talk with them in the English club. I will be very happy if I can join the club. I'm waiting for your answer. Best wishes, Li Hua 实战演练 假如你是李华，新学期来临，MusicClub需要招募新成员。请根据以下提示为这个社团制作一张70词左右的招募海报。 提示：1.社团活动时间及地点：周一下午5点，606室；2.社团活动：演奏乐器，学习跳舞……；3.联系人及邮箱地址: Li Hua,lihua66@music.com。 One possible version: Music Club Wanted! Can you sing? Are you interested in playing the piano? Do you want to learn to dance? Come to our music club! We can enjoy the beautiful music and play all kinds of musical instruments. You can also sing songs and dance to music. It's really fun. Come and join us in Room 606 at 5:00 p. m. on Mondays. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ U7写作提优——如何写庆祝生日的文章 话题分析 本单元的话题是“庆祝生日”，主要围绕“生日准备”和“生日庆祝”两方面展开。要求同学们围绕这一话题写一封邮件或留言邀请朋友参加生日聚会、介绍自己/他人如何庆祝生日或介绍自己如何为他人/自己的生日做准备。 写作积累 常用词汇 a surprise party 一个惊喜派对 buy sth for sb= buy sb sth为某人买某物 have a sale 降价销售 eat birthday noodles吃长寿面 for example例如 make a wish 许愿 blow out the candles 吹灭蜡烛 mark one's height on the door在门上标出某人的身高 do something different 做些不一样的事 on birthday在生日那天 a symbol of... ……的象征 open birthday gifts打开生日礼物 常用句型 I'd like to tell you something about my birthday. My birthday is on... How do you usually celebrate your birthday? I have a birthday party on... Long noodles are a symbol of long life. We sing the“Happy Birthday” song. 典例讲解 假如你是陈杰，在一个英语论坛中看到网友们在讨论过生日的话题，你也想参与。请你根据下面的提示，跟帖介绍自己是如何庆祝生日的。 日期 12 月 21 日 食物 生日蛋糕、长寿面、其他美味的食物 活动 唱生日歌、拍照、玩游戏 感受 非常愉快 要求：1.短文须包含所给的提示信息，可适当发挥；2.80词左右。 By Chen Jie on 10/08 19:30 PM 审题思路 1.审体裁：应用文(网络帖子)。 2.审人称：人称方面，本文是介绍自己的生日，用第一人称，当然，在这类写作中也可能会涉及他人的一些行为动作，所以也可能用到第三人称，这里需要我们具体问题具体分析。 3.审时态：因为文章的主题是介绍生日和当天的活动，说明动作行为是常态，不涉及特殊的时间状语，所以我们用一般现在时。 写作提纲 优秀范文 By Chen Jie on 10/08 19:30 PM Hi, I am Chen Jie. I want to tell you how I celebrate my birthday. My birthday is on December 21st. My family always have a birthday party for me. The party usually starts at 6:30 p. m. and some of my relatives and friends come to my party. My parents make birthday noodles and other delicious food for us. Long noodles are a symbol of long life. Then we sing the“Happy Birthday” song. Next, we enjoy the birthday cake and take photos. We also play games together and everyone has a good time at the party. Do you have any good ideas for celebrating birthdays? 实战演练 假设你是李华，最近收到了英国笔友 Michael的求助邮件，请你仔细阅读邮件后给 Michael 回一封邮件。 Dear Li Hua, How's everything going? I'm writing this email to ask you for help. As you know, my mum's birthday is next Friday. This year, I want her to have a different birthday party. But when and where will be the best choice(选择) for the party? Who should I invite? How can I make it special? There are so many things I should think about! I don't know what to do now. Could you give me some advice? I'm looking forward to(盼望) your reply. Yours, Michael 要求：1.语句通顺，语法正确，行文连贯，书写工整；2.80词左右(邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 Dear Michael, Yours, Li Hua One possible version: Dear Michael, I'm glad to know that you want to prepare a special birthday party for your mother. It's a great idea! Your mother's birthday is on Friday. Why don't you have the party on Friday evening at your home? You don't go to school and your parents don't go to work on Saturday. You can enjoy yourselves at the party. I think you can invite your grandparents and your aunt and uncle to the party. You can take a family photo. You can also make birthday noodles with eggs for your mother because long noodles mean long life in China. Wish you have a good time next Friday! Yours, Li Hua 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ U4写作提优——如何写介绍个人喜好类文章 话题分析 本单元的话题是“科目”，要求同学们围绕这一话题谈论自己的喜好并说明理由。在写作层面，要求同学们能根据所学，写一篇短文介绍自己最喜欢的科目并说明理由。 写作积累 常用词汇 favourite subject 最喜欢的科目 learn about学习;了解 be good at 擅长…… be good with 灵巧的;善于应付······的 help sb with 帮助某人做(某事) difficult but important难却很重要 listen to 听;倾听 make the class interesting 让课堂有趣 this term/ year这个学期/今年 make sb happy让某人开心 all kinds of interesting instruments各种各样的有趣的乐器 work out计算出;解决 in the future将来;未来 常用句型 … favourite subject is……, because… I like all the subjects, but... Why do you like IT/ science/ maths…? It's useful/ fun/ exciting/ to do... Music/ Maths… makes me… I/ He/ She want(s) to be a singer/ scientist/… 典例讲解 假设你是七年级五班的李杰，请根据表格信息，写一篇演讲稿向大家介绍自己最喜欢的科目及原因。 Name: Li Jie Age: 13 From: Qingdao Favourite subject: science Reasons: · The subject: relaxing... · The teacher: patient(有耐心的), humorous(幽默的)… · The class: do experiments(实验)… Future job: a scientist 要求：1.演讲稿须包括表格中的所有信息，可适当发挥；2.词数70左右，开头部分已给出，不计入总词数；3.文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。 Hello, everyone! 审题思路 1.审体裁：应用文(演讲稿)。 2.审人称：介绍自己最喜欢的科目多用第一人称I，具体阐述原因时，可能会用到第三人称。 3.审时态：本文是客观介绍喜欢的科目和原因等信息，这些都是表述事实情况，所以我们用一般现在时。 注意事项 在阐述喜欢某一学科的原因时,可以恰当使用描述性形容词(如 fun, relaxing, interesting等),从而使得对原因的阐述更加具体、清晰；文章也可使用连词 and，but，because，使文章衔接更加紧密。 写作提纲 优秀范文 Hello, everyone! My name is Li Jie. I am a 14-year-old boy. I'm from Qingdao. Let me tell you something about my favourite subject. My favourite subject is science, because it's relaxing and useful. Mr Wang is my science teacher. He is patient and kind. We all like him. He is also humorous. He always makes his classes interesting. We often do experiments in science classes. I think it's meaningful. In the future, I want to be a scientist. So I need to study hard. What's your favourite subject and why? 实战演练 为满足学生的个性发展需求，各个学校都自行设计和开发了校本课程( school-based lesson)。请以“My favourite school-based lesson”为题写一篇英语短文,谈谈你喜欢的校本课程。 内容包括: 1.学校开设的校本课程(如画画、音乐、摄影、舞蹈、书法、篮球等)； 2.你喜欢上的一门校本课程及其开课情况(如上课时间、活动等)； 3.喜欢的原因。 写作要求：1.内容包含所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2.文中不得透露真实个人信息；3.70词左右(短文标题和开头部分已给出，不计入总词数)。 参考词汇: 校本课程 school-based lesson 画画 painting 摄影 photography 书法 calligraphy舞蹈 dance 篮球 basketball My favourite school-based lesson There are many different kinds of school-based lessons in our school. One possible version: My favourite school-based lesson There are many different kinds of school-based lessons in our school. They are painting, music, photography, dance, calligraphy, basketball and so on. However, my favourite school-based lesson is basketball. I have two basketball classes a week. It is from3 p. m. to 4 p. m. on Tuesday and Thursday. And our school has a basketball match in June every year. It is the best time for us to show our basketball skills. I enjoy playing basketball because it makes me happy and I can make new friends. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$