读后续写--艺术赛场风云：友情与竞争的交织与升华 讲义 -黑龙江省哈师大青冈实验中学2024-2025学年高二上学期期中考试英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was a sunny day. Anabia, an 11-year-old girl, was excited because today was the drawing contest at her school. Anabia was really good at drawing and usually got the highest marks in art. Her teachers would often ask her to make posters for school plays and call on her during free periods to help with cuttings, drawing, shading, colouring and much more. There was an art competition taking place in school and Anabia had worked really hard and wanted to win it. But there was one thing that was disturbing her today. Recently, a new girl, Rida, had joined her class. She was also interested in art but she was not as good at drawing as Anabia was. Miss Saima, the art teacher, helped Rida and taught her tips and tricks to improve her drawing skill. And now Rida was also considered among the best artists in grade six. Rida was quick, smart and intelligent. Anabia became jealous of Rida’s intelligence and felt that the new girl would be tough to beat. So that day, for the art competition, Miss Saima took all the students to the art room, told them their roll numbers and gave important instructions. Anabia’s roll number was 16, while Rida was number 17. The bell rang, indicating the beginning of the contest. Miss Saima wrote on the board: make a scene of a sunset with a flowing river and a sailing boat. Anabia knew that the best tools to make a sunset were oil pastels (油画棒). Anabia started to look for her oil pastels in her art bag. Then, after looking through the bag, she remembered that she had left them at home. Immediately, she got up to tell Miss Saima. Miss Saima was disappointed at Anabia’s carelessness and told her that she could not help her, as it was her responsibility to be prepared for the contest that had been announced a week in advance. Anabia’s best friends were also there, but none of them offered to share anything, much to Anabia’s surprise and disappointment. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Anabia’s eyes were filled with tears. Then Rida held Anabia’s hand, and the two girls waited for the winners to be announced. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意：11 岁的 Anabia 擅长绘画，学校有绘画比赛，她志在必得。但新同学 Rida 在美术老师指导下绘画水平也不错，这让 Anabia 心生嫉妒。比赛时 Anabia 发现自己忘带油画棒，老师因她粗心不愿帮忙，她的好朋友也未伸出援手，这让她又惊又失望。 伏笔及回应： 1. 伏笔：Anabia 平时在绘画方面表现出色且常帮老师做相关工作，回应：为她想在此次比赛中夺冠及因忘带工具而沮丧的情节做铺垫，突出她对比赛的重视。 2. 伏笔：Rida 新加入班级且在老师帮助下绘画水平提升，回应：解释了 Anabia 嫉妒 Rida 的原因，也为后文 Rida 的友善举动形成对比。 3. 伏笔：老师提前一周宣布比赛，回应：说明老师因 Anabia 未做好准备而不帮忙的合理性，也强调了 Anabia 的粗心。 4. 伏笔：Anabia 忘带油画棒后老师表示失望，回应：烘托出 Anabia 当时的无助与后悔，推动情节发展。 5. 伏笔：Anabia 的好朋友未帮忙，回应：加深了 Anabia 的失望情绪，也为后文 Rida 的友好行为更显珍贵埋下伏笔。 续写要点： 第一段： · 故事线：Anabia 因无法参赛而落泪，Rida 看到后主动询问并将自己的油画棒借给她，Anabia 起初犹豫后接受并开始作画。 · 情感线：Anabia 从绝望、感动到感激，Rida 则表现出友善与大方。 第二段： · 故事线：比赛结束后两人一起等待结果，Anabia 对 Rida 表示感谢并为之前的嫉妒道歉，Rida 表示不在意，结果公布，不论谁胜谁负，两人都收获了友谊。 · 情感线：Anabia 心怀愧疚与感恩，Rida 宽容豁达，最后两人的情感都升华为对友谊的珍视。 主旨升华句： 1. True friendship is shown in times of need, not just in good times.（真正的友谊在困难时刻彰显，而非仅在顺境中。） 2. Kindness can break down the walls of jealousy and build bridges of friendship.（善良能推倒嫉妒之墙，筑起友谊之桥。） 3. A helping hand in a difficult situation is worth more than a thousand words of friendship.（困境中的援手比千言万语的友谊宣言更有价值。） 4. When we let go of envy and embrace kindness, we open the door to beautiful friendships.（当我们摒弃嫉妒，拥抱善良，便开启了美好友谊之门。） 5. The best way to overcome jealousy is to experience the power of genuine kindness.（克服嫉妒的最佳方式是感受真挚善良的力量。） 写作示范一： Anabia’s eyes were filled with tears. She felt completely hopeless and was on the verge of giving up. Just then, Rida noticed Anabia’s distress. She leaned over and asked softly, “What’s wrong, Anabia?” Anabia explained her situation. Without hesitation, Rida held out her own set of oil pastels and said, “You can use mine.” Anabia was taken aback. She had been jealous of Rida, yet here she was, being so kind. After a moment, Anabia accepted gratefully and started to draw, her heart full of newfound respect for Rida. Then Rida held Anabia’s hand, and the two girls waited for the winners to be announced. Anabia turned to Rida and said, “Thank you so much. I was jealous of you, but you were so nice to me. I’m sorry.” Rida smiled and replied, “It’s okay. We’re all here to create beautiful art.” When the results were declared, whether they won or not didn't matter as much. They had both gained something more precious - a true friendship that had overcome jealousy and selfishness. 写作示范二： Anabia’s eyes were filled with tears. She was sobbing quietly, thinking her chance to win was ruined. Suddenly, Rida walked over. She saw Anabia’s tears and quickly understood. “Don’t cry. Here, you can have my oil pastels,” Rida said, handing them to her. Anabia looked up in shock. She couldn’t believe Rida’s generosity. She finally took the pastels and began to paint, her tears slowly drying as she focused on the task, filled with a mixture of gratitude and shame for her earlier jealousy. Then Rida held Anabia’s hand, and the two girls waited for the winners to be announced. Anabia whispered, “I was wrong to be jealous. Thank you for helping me.” Rida squeezed her hand and said, “Let’s forget about it. We should support each other.” When the announcement came, they both smiled, realizing that the real victory was the friendship they had formed. Their story proved that kindness and forgiveness could transform a relationship from one of rivalry to one of mutual respect and friendship. 参考答案 Anabia’ s eyes were filled with tears. She found something hard to swallow. To her sadness, she lost the art competition before she even started. Just then, a box of oil painting sticks appeared in front of her eyes. “If you don’t mind, I think we can share these,” Rida, the girl who she once hoped to beat, extended a helping hand. Anabia hesitated, but quickly they were both devoted to their works. Time flied in the blink of an eye. After handing in their works, Anabia reached out her hand. Then Rida held Anabia’s hand, and the two girls waited for the winners to be announced. “I’m sorry. I once became jealous of your intelligence and hoped to beat you,” Anabia apologized sincerely. Rida hugged her delightedly and said she hoped they would be friends in the future. It seemed that who would be the winner was not so important at the moment. The sun shone warm sunlight into the room and also shone on the hearts of the two girls. The world always prepares surprise for the people who like the sun. They both got the first place. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$