读后续写--恶作剧的代价与救赎：汤姆的成长之路 讲义-湖北省宜荆荆随重点高中2023-2024学年高一上学期11月期中英语试题

. 注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 When he reached the door, he stood, fearing to enter. _ But stepping back surprisedly, their uncle cried, “Oh! It’s you!” _ 文章大意:汤姆是村里很粗鲁的男孩,常欺负他人。一天,他对一位路过的陌生人搞恶作剧,先打掉其帽子,后又扔石头致其眼睛受伤。回家后,妹妹卡罗琳告知他外出多年的叔叔回来了,带了礼物且在来家途中被坏男孩扔石头伤了眼,妈妈已处理。汤姆心怀愧疚,听到父亲叫他下楼,吓得浑身发抖。 伏笔及续写回应: 伏笔:“Tom was one of the rudest boys in the village where he lived.” 续写中可体现汤姆因一贯的粗鲁行为而害怕面对被他伤害的叔叔,如 “Tom was terrified that his past rudeness would be revealed and he would be severely punished.” 伏笔:“His dress was old but clean.” 续写中可通过叔叔的穿着再次被提及来确认身份,例如 “Tom recognized the same old but clean dress and realized his grave mistake.” 伏笔:“The man turned and saw him, but Tom ran away quickly.” 续写中可在叔叔见到汤姆时有相关反应,像 “Uncle remembered the fleeing figure and began to suspect.” 伏笔:“the man caught him by the arm and held him fast. However, he just looked at Tom a moment, and then pushed him away.” 续写中可提及叔叔当时未严惩汤姆的疑惑在此时解开,“Now Uncle understood why he had let the naughty boy go that time.” 伏笔:“She said that while he was coming through the village some bad boys threw stones at him, and hurt his eye badly, which had been treated by their mom.” 续写中可描述妈妈对汤姆的反应,“Mom glared at Tom with disappointment and anger in her eyes.” 续写要点: 第一段:续写汤姆站在门口不敢进屋时的内心活动,如对自己行为的懊悔,想象进屋后的可怕场景,以及听到屋内的动静等。 第二段:续写叔叔见到汤姆后的反应,包括惊讶、认出汤姆后的复杂情绪,以及其他人的反应,如父亲的质问、妈妈的态度等,最后汤姆的认错与结局。 情感线:汤姆开始是恶作剧后的得意,伤害陌生人后的害怕,得知叔叔受伤后的愧疚,站在门口时的恐惧,面对叔叔时的懊悔与羞耻,最后被原谅或受罚后的释然或难过。 故事线:汤姆在门口犹豫不敢进屋,最终进去后面对叔叔,叔叔认出他,大家知晓真相,父亲质问,妈妈不满,汤姆认错,叔叔决定是否原谅他,故事有一个关于汤姆成长与接受惩罚或被宽容的结局。 主旨升华句: 1. “Rudeness begets regret, and kindness is the path to redemption.”(粗鲁带来悔恨,善良是救赎之路。) 2. “One’s actions, whether good or bad, always return to haunt or bless.”(一个人的行为,无论好坏,总会回来困扰或祝福自己。) 3. “The consequences of our deeds are the teachers of our character.”(我们行为的后果是我们品格的老师。) 4. “Mistakes are the stepping stones to a better self, if we have the courage to face them.”(如果我们有勇气面对,错误就是通往更好自我的垫脚石。) 5. “In the end, forgiveness and repentance are the keys to mending a broken spirit.”(最终,原谅和忏悔是修复破碎心灵的关键。) 写作示范一: Paragraph 1: When he reached the door, he stood, fearing to enter. Tom's heart pounded violently. He regretted his actions deeply, thinking of how his thoughtless behavior had led to this dreadful moment. He pictured his uncle's anger and his father's disappointment. The voices from inside the room seemed like a storm about to engulf him. He wished he could turn back time and undo what he had done. But he knew he had to face the music. With a trembling hand, he pushed the door open slightly. Paragraph 2: But stepping back surprisedly, their uncle cried, “Oh! It’s you!” The room fell silent. Father looked at Tom with a stern gaze, demanding an explanation. Mother shook her head in dismay. Tom, with tears in his eyes, fell to his knees and begged for forgiveness. He admitted his guilt and promised to change. Uncle, after a long pause, sighed and said, “I forgive you, but you must learn from this.” Tom nodded, realizing that his actions had consequences and that he had to strive to become a better person. 写作示范二: Paragraph 1: When he reached the door, he stood, fearing to enter. Tom was paralyzed with fear. His mind was filled with images of his uncle's injured eye and the pain he had caused. He dreaded the thought of seeing the disappointment in his family's eyes. He could hear his father's footsteps approaching the door. He wanted to run away, but his legs felt like lead. He closed his eyes and took a deep breath, trying to muster the courage to face what was waiting for him inside. Paragraph 2: But stepping back surprisedly, their uncle cried, “Oh! It’s you!” Everyone in the room was stunned. Father's face flushed with anger and he asked Tom what had happened. Mother's face was pale. Tom stammered an apology, his voice barely audible. Uncle looked at him with a mixture of sadness and understanding. He said, “I hoped it wasn't you, but now that it is, you must make amends.” Tom promised to do so, and the family decided to give him a chance to prove himself, making Tom determined to reform and atone for his wrongdoings. 【答案】 When he reached the door, he stood, fearing to enter. His mother said, “Tom, why do you not come in? You are not usually so shy. See this beautiful watch, which your uncle has brought for you.” What a sense of shame Tom now felt! Little Caroline seized his arm, and pulled him into the room. Inside the room sat the stranger, or rather, his uncle, with his forehead bound up, talking happily with his father. But he hung down his head and covered his face with his hands. His uncle went up to him, and kindly taking away his hands, said, “Tom, will you not bid me welcome?” But stepping back surprisedly, their uncle cried, “Oh! It’s you!” But when his uncle saw the puzzled father, he immediately explained that he just met Tom in the street. In a flash, Tom learned that his uncle was ready to forgive him and forget the injury. But facing such a kind uncle, he couldn’t conceal his guilt. Having confessed what he had done to his uncle, Tom felt relieved. But his father would never permit Tom to have the gold watch, nor the beautiful books, which his uncle had brought for him. His sister Caroline was loaded with presents. Tom was forced to content himself with seeing her happy. He never forgot this lesson so long as he lived. It cured him entirely of his low and rude manners. 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $$