读后续写--困境求助：陌生人的善意之光 讲义-湖北省十堰市示范高中教联体测评联盟2023-2024学年高一上学期11月联考英语试题

读后续写 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I always wondered how people would react if I tried to approach a stranger for help in a busy place like a street corner or in a bustling mall. I personally have hurried past a stranger who tried to catch my attention in a busy place. Yesterday I had a taste of being stuck in such a desperate situation where your only hope of help would have to come from a total stranger. I was in a busy shopping mall buying a large piece of luggage. After the purchase in one of the large and expensive shops, I picked up my phone from my pocket to call my driver waiting in the parking lot and my phone was dead. I then requested the shop assistant selling me the luggage, which was not cheap at all, if she could ring the number of my driver for me. She replied, still all smiles, “I’m sorry Sir, but it is the shop policy that we cannot use mobile phones while working in the shop.” As I was wondering what kind of policy that was, I saw a nice-looking teenage boy coming toward me. Remember my wife’s interesting theory that beautiful people are more likely to give you a hand when you’re in trouble, I thought I might have a chance. But before I could say a word, he walked past me. It turned out he simply didn’t see me. I waited in the mall but it seemed nobody bothered to look at me. Disappointed and tired, I got out of the shop on to the busy street in front. I stood there with people rushing by, looking at their faces to see if they will show kindness to me. I began wondering how many times I had reacted to strangers like the shop girl and the teenager. 注意：1. 续写的短文词数应为100左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 That was when I saw a young mother with her two kids. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Finally a man wearing a cheap T-shirt and dirty jeans seemed to notice me. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意：作者一直好奇在街头或商场向陌生人求助会得到何种反应，自己也曾对求助者视而不见。昨日作者在商场买完昂贵行李后手机没电，向店员求助遭拒，店员称店内规定工作时不能用手机。看到一帅气少年以为有希望，少年却未注意到他。作者在商场及街边等待，无人理会，陷入失望与疲惫。 伏笔及续写回应： · 伏笔：“I personally have hurried past a stranger who tried to catch my attention in a busy place.” 续写中可在作者被帮助后反思自己曾经的行为，意识到自己也曾让他人有过类似的无助。 · 伏笔：“I was in a busy shopping mall buying a large piece of luggage.” 续写中可提及行李在他人决定是否帮忙时起到的作用，比如让帮忙者相信作者的处境真实。 · 伏笔：“She replied, still all smiles, ‘I’m sorry Sir, but it is the shop policy that we cannot use mobile phones while working in the shop.’” 续写中可在作者得到他人帮助后对比店员的拒绝，从而对人性和帮助有更深的感悟。 · 伏笔：“Remember my wife’s interesting theory that beautiful people are more likely to give you a hand when you’re in trouble, I thought I might have chance. But before I could say a word, he walked past me.” 续写中可在不同类型的人给予帮助后，打破对人的外貌与是否愿意帮忙的刻板印象。 · 伏笔：“I waited in the mall but it seemed nobody bothered to look at me. Disappointed and tired, I got out of the shop on to the busy street in front.” 续写中可描写作者在得到帮助时从这种失望疲惫到感激欣慰的情感转变。 续写要点： · 第一段：续写年轻母亲对作者求助的反应，从怀疑到相信并帮助作者联系司机，以及帮助后的简单交流与分别。 · 第二段：续写穿着普通的男子主动询问作者并毫不犹豫借手机的情节，还有作者在得到帮助后的内心触动与感悟。 情感线：开始是对在商场和街边无人理会自己的失望与疲惫，向年轻母亲求助时的忐忑不安，得到母亲帮助后的感激，被男子主动询问时的惊喜，得到男子帮助后的释然与对人性温暖的感动。 故事线：作者手机没电被困商场外街边，先向年轻母亲求助，母亲起初怀疑后帮忙，接着一位普通男子主动询问并借手机给作者，作者最终成功联系上司机。 主旨升华句： 1. “True kindness often emerges from the most unexpected sources, breaking down our prejudices.” 真正的善良常常来自最意想不到的地方，打破我们的偏见。 2. “In the face of a stranger's need, a simple act of help can bridge the gap between indifference and warmth.” 面对陌生人的需求，一个简单的帮助行为可以弥合冷漠与温暖之间的差距。 3. “The value of assistance lies not in the appearance or status of the helper, but in the purity of the act itself.” 帮助的价值不在于帮助者的外表或地位，而在于行为本身的纯粹性。 4. “When we reach out a hand to a stranger, we are not only giving help but also sowing the seeds of a kinder world.” 当我们向陌生人伸出援手时，我们不仅是在给予帮助，也是在播撒一个更友善世界的种子。 5. “A small act of kindness can be a powerful antidote to the poison of indifference in a busy world.” 在忙碌的世界里，一个小小的善举可以成为冷漠之毒的有力解药。 写作示范一： Paragraph 1: That was when I saw a young mother with her two kids. She was walking briskly, her attention mainly on her children. I stepped forward and haltingly asked if she could lend me her phone. She paused, eyeing me warily. But when I gestured to my new luggage and explained my plight, her expression softened. She dug into her purse and retrieved her phone. As I made the call, she watched, her kids curiously peeking. After I thanked her, she said, "We all need help sometimes." Then she led her children away, leaving me with a glimmer of hope and a newfound appreciation for human kindness. Paragraph 2: Finally a man wearing a cheap T-shirt and dirty jeans seemed to notice me. He sauntered over and asked in a gruff voice if something was wrong. I told him about my phone issue. He immediately pulled out his battered phone and handed it to me. I dialed, and soon connected with my driver. Returning the phone, I thanked him sincerely. He grinned, "Don't mention it. People should help each other." His words struck a chord. I realized that kindness knows no bounds of appearance or social status, and that we should be more open to helping and being helped. 写作示范二： Paragraph 1: That was when I saw a young mother with her two kids. She was engrossed in her children's chatter as they walked. I mustered the courage to approach her. I apologized for the interruption and explained my desperate situation. She looked me up and down, then at my shopping bag. After a moment's hesitation, she unlocked her phone and passed it to me. I quickly called my driver. When I finished, I thanked her profusely. She simply smiled and said, "It's okay. Just passing on the kindness." Her response made me think about how kindness can be contagious. Paragraph 2: Finally a man wearing a cheap T-shirt and dirty jeans seemed to notice me. He strolled up and asked if I was okay. I recounted my problem. Without a second thought, he offered his phone. I was a bit taken aback by his immediate generosity. I made the call and informed my driver. As I handed back the phone, I expressed my gratitude. He shrugged, "No biggie. We're all in this together." This encounter made me understand that kindness is a universal language that can break through any barriers and that we should not judge a person's willingness to help by their outward appearance. 参考范文： That was when I saw a young mother with her two kids. She was talking on the phone, and her voice told me she was a gentle and patient lady. The two kids were neatly dressed and waited quietly beside her. This must be a nice family, I thought to myself. Therefore, I approached to make a request. But as soon as I said, “Excuse me madam,” she grabbed both her kids and went away. Did I look like someone trying to hurt people? I felt my heart sinking horribly. Finally a man wearing a cheap T-shirt and dirty jeans seemed to notice me. I didn’t know why but I just stopped him and made my request. I was expecting him to rush past but he immediately called the number of my driver and waited till my car came to be sure I was picked up, turned around before I could thank him adequately and was gone. Surprised by his kindness, I promised I would do likewise to strangers who sought my help. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$