内容正文:
2025年初中英语中考作文主题语境拔高版
专题5 学校生活
话题解读
课标说明:该话题属于《义务教育英语课程标准》中"人与自我"主题范畴中“生活与学习”这一主题群,涉及"丰富多彩,安全,有意义的学校生活”。该话题冒在引导学生热爱学校,积极参与校园活动,从而丰富自己的校园生活,提升各项能力,更好地投人校园学习中。
考查角度
分析近年各地中考真题可知,该话题一般从以下角度考查:
介绍学校硬件设施,人员构成、课程设置等;2.介绍学校相关社团、课外活动,校外研学等。
素 材 积 累
必备词语
学校设施
gym体育馆 studyroom自习室 sports field运动场
football /soccer field足球场 readingroom阅览室 broadcast room广播室
学校人员与课程
headmaster校长head teacher 班主任 librarian图书管理员 freshman高中/大学一年级学生
foreign teacher外教 social studies/science社会科学 psychology心理学 computer science计算机科学
学校社团与活动
club社团 choir合唱团 sludent union学生会 competition 比赛 concert音乐会
school anniversary celebration 校庆 sports meet运动会 cultural festival文化节
校外研学
summer camp夏令营 winter camp冬令营 study tour研学 research practice研修实践
learning exchange学习交流 cultural exchange文化交流
常用词块
sign up lor….报名参加… go in for….有兴趣参与 take part in/participate in..参加/参与
set goals for 为……设定目标 catch/keep up wihh.追上… make the mostof...充分利用…
be equipped with.配备有 drop out of...退出… pay off取得成功,获得回报
team up with sb与某人合作
参考句式
1.我们学校重视实践技能和创新思维相结合的教学方法。
Our sehool values the teaching method that mixes practical skills with creative thinking. (that 引|导的限制性定语从句:固定搭配mix..with.)
2.我们学校鼓励学生参加课外活动和各种俱乐部。
Our school supports students’ participation in after-school activities and different clubs. (固定搭配
one's participation in 词块:after-school activities)
3,研学为学生提供实践经历,帮助他们将课堂知识与实际应用联系起来。
Study tours provide students with hands - on experiences that help them connect classroom knowledge with practical uses,
(固定搭配provide sb with sth; 词块 hands-on experiences ;that 引导限制性定语从句)
试题精选
目前,很多学校都在开展游学或课外研修活动,有人认为这些活动在很大程度上增加生活的趣味性,但也有人持不同的看法。即将升人高中的你对此有何看法? 请根据提示写一篇英语短文介绍不同学生对此的看法,并阐述你的观点。
Views on Study Tours and Researeh Activities
赞同: 1.有助于培养技能; 2.增强独立、团结协作意识; 3.互相学习,互相帮助。
不赞同: 1.过多占用学生时间; 2,投入过大,增加家庭负担(inerease the burden of one's family)
要求:(1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯; (2)必须包括表格中所有信息,可适当发挥;(3)词数100左右,文章开头已给出,不计入总词数;(4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Views on Study Tours and Research Activities
Nowadays, many schools are carrying on study tours and research nctivities, But different students have different ideas. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
精准审题
学生在审题时,可从以下几个维度思考:(1)审主题:根据题目要求可知,本文主题为学生对游学或课外研修活动的看法;(2)审文体:本文要求就某类活动介绍学生的看法,并阐述自身观点,因此文体为议论文;(3)审人称和时态:介绍学生看法时,应用第三人称;阐述自身观点时用第一人称;针对某类活动介绍学生看法并阐述自身观点时,用一般现在时;(4)审内容要点:介绍提示中学生们对游学与课外研修活动的看法,并发表自己的观点。
思路导航
介绍现状
l. Nowadays, many schools are carying on study tours and researeh uctivities, But different students have different ideas.
2. Recently, the number of schools offering study tours and researeh netivities has increased.
Students have different views on these activities.
3. ln recent times, a lot of schools have started offering study tours and researeh aetivities.This has caused different opinions among students.
介绍学生看法
1. Some students think these aetivities are helpful / valuable, First of all. .. Second,. .. what’s more, .. However, some students hold opposite views, They think ... And, .. At last, …
2. While some argue that these aeivities are good for students as ... others feel that…Besides, supporters believe these activities ... yet others worry…
3. Those who suppor these activities say they are … On the other hand, those against these activities feel .. Supporters also stress the importance of … but others point out that…
阐述自身观点
1. I support these activities because I believe that there are more advantages than disadvantages. lt is important to find a balance to make sure that ...
2. Personally, I believe these activities are valuable since ..
3. As for me, while these activities may have some advantages, they often draw us away from……
范文赏析1
Views on Study Tours and Research Aetivities
Nowadays, many schools are carrying on study tours and research aetivities, But different students have different ideas.
Some students like to attend them, First of all, they believe these aetivities are good for develeping important study and life skills. What's more, these aetivities can help build their spirits of independence, While participating in these activities, they also learn to work together and help ench other. This can lead to better teamwork and problem-solving skills.
However, every coin has two sides, There are also some students who hold difrerent views. They think these activities take up too mueh time and may make it diffieult for them to focus on their studies, 'And they worry that the costs can increase the burden of their families. In my opinion, the advantages of study tours and research hactivities, such as personal growth and teamwork skills, are more important than the possible disadvantages.
1. 使用亮点词块 build one's spirit of independence , work together lead to better teamwork take up make it difficult for sb to do sth/ focus on等丰富语言表达。
2.灵活运用省略引导词that的宾语从旬、表示递进的逻辑衔接词What's more, while引导的时闻状语从句等,解释一些学生喜欢游学和课外研修活动的原因。
3.用lowever表示转折,用习语引出与第二段所述不同的观点,形象地表达事物的双面性,增强了语言的表现力。
4.灵活运用who引导的限制性定语从句、表示顺承的逻辑衔接词And和tat引导的宾语从句。,解释一些学生反对游学和课外研修活动的理由。
5. In my opinion引出个人观点,用比较级强调个人看法,并用such as辅之以例证。
范文赏析2
Views on Study Tours and Research Activities
Nowadays, many schools are carrying on study tours and research activities, But different students have differenl
ideas.
Some students support these activities because they are helpful in learning new skills and encouraging independence. When they participate, they also learn how to work together and support each other.
On the other hand, some students are against these activities. They argue that these activities take up too much time, which could be used for studying. Also, these activities often cost a lot of money, increasing the burden of their families. These students believe it is better to focus on schoolwork.
Personally, I think both sides have good points. Study tours and research activities provide valuable experiences and skill development. However, it is important to make sure that they do not harm our learning or put too much pressure on our families. A balanced way would be the best choice.
亮点解读:
1.灵活运用because引导的原因状语从句.when引导的时间状语从句和how+动词不定式结构作宾语,解释一些学生支持游学和课外研修活动的理由;此外,词块儿be helpful in doing sth , work together support each other 等也是写作亮点
2.On the other hand 表示转折,引出与第二段所述不同的观点,有效承接上文,将两种相反的观点连接起来。3.灵活运用that引导的宾语从句,which引导的非限制性定语从句,衔接副词A1so、V-ing形式作结果状语,解释一些学生反对游学和课外研修活动的理由;此外,词块儿be against sth 等也是写作亮点。
4.使用Personally引出了个人观点,同时用However阐述了不同观点利弊,表达了对不同观点的尊重和理解。
5.结尾处用A balanced way提出方案,增强了文章的全面性和客观性。
综合点评:
本文是一篇逻辑清晰,内容条理,语言流畅的议论文。作者通过提出现象、对比不同观点,以个人观点作为总结,有效地传达了对游学和课外研修活动的看法,是一篇具有启发性和感染力的佳作。文章第二段阐述了支持游学和课外研修活动的学生的观点,强调了这些活动在技能学习和独立性方面的好处;第三段则转向反对意见,指出了时间和经济成本的问题:第四段结合个人观点,承认了双方观点均有一定的合理性,并以“平衡的方式是最佳选择”总结全文,给读者留下深刻的印象。文章的写作手法有效地展示了对不同观点的客观分析。使得文章的逻辑性和连贯性得到加强。
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