内容正文:
写 作 指 导
写一封建议信
建议信一般采用三段式结构
1、表明写信的原因、建议的内容、提出建议的理由
2、内容简明扼要、目的明确。
3、语气要诚恳/委婉,注意礼貌当先。
4、建议的角度要多样化,并要注意建议之间的衔接。
首段:一般针对对方的信任表示感谢或指明提建议的初衷。
(总结来信重点信息,告诉人家你要写什么)
中段:围绕对方的困惑、烦恼等问题,委婉地提出自己的建议或解决办法
(1、2、3、建议+原因)
尾段: 表达希望。
(希望自己的建议能对对方有所帮助),
(希望对方可以采纳),
(希望早日收到对方来信等)。
建议信
首段:写信原因(目的)
中间段:列出具体建议+原因
尾段:表达愿望.
Dear________,
I'm delighted to receive you letter asking for my advice on how to________(引出建议主题).Here are some suggestions.
To begin with, It would be wise to do sth(建议1). If you do this, you can not only ___________but also__________.(原因1)Besides,I recommend that you should do sth(建议2).By doing this, you will _____________.(原因2)Last but not least, doing sth(建议3) is also a good choice,which will _________.(原因3)
I hope you will find these suggestions helpful.I would appreciate it if you could consider my advice.
假设你是李华,你的美国笔友Jenny是一名高中新生,来信告知你她感觉高中生活很累,请你用英语给她回一封邮件,给出建议。
内容包括:
1.合理饮食
2.锻炼身体,积极参加课外活动。
3.调整心态
Dear________,
I'm delighted to receive you letter asking for my advice on how to________(引出建议主题).Here are some suggestions.
来信告知你她感觉高中生活很累
Dear Jenny,
I'm delighted to receive you letter asking for my advice on how to relieve the exhaustion of senior high school.Here are some suggestions.
如何缓解高中生活的疲惫?
1.合理饮食
2.锻炼身体,积极参加课外活动。
3.调整心态
have a balanced diet
take regular exercises and take an active part in extra-curricular activities
be positive about everything
内容要点:
1.合理饮食
2.锻炼身体,积极参加课外活动。
3.调整心态
原因:有更多能量学习、有一个好心情
have more energy to study/ have a good mood
原因:保持健康、缓解压力
keep fit and relieve stress
原因:帮你交到好朋友,分享快乐与悲伤。
help you make more friends to share joys and sorrows
内容要点:
To begin with, It would be wise to do sth(建议1). If you do this, you can not only ___________but also__________.(原因1)Besides,I recommend that you should do sth(建议2).By doing this, you will _____________.(原因2)Last but not least, doing sth(建议3) is also a good choice,which will _________.(原因3)
1.合理饮食
2.锻炼身体,积极参加课外活动。
3.调整心态
have a balanced diet
take regular exercises and take an active part in extra-curricular activities
be positive about everything
To begin with, It would be wise to have a balanced diet. If you do this, you can not only have more energy to study,but also have a good mood.Besides,I recommend that you should take regular exercises and take an active part in extra-curricular activities.By doing this, you will keep fit and relieve stress.Last but not least, being positive about everything is also a good choice,which will help you make more friends to share joys and sorrows.
原因:有更多能量学习、有一个好心情
have more energy to study/ have a good mood
原因:保持健康、缓解压力
keep fit and relieve stress
原因:帮你交到好朋友,分享快乐与悲伤。
help you make more friends to share joys and sorrows
I hope you will find these suggestions helpful.I would appreciate it if you could consider my advice.
Dear Jenny,
I'm delighted to receive you letter asking for my advice on how to relieve the exhaustion of senior high school.Here are some suggestions.
To begin with, It would be wise to have a balanced diet. If you do this, you can not only have more energy to study,but also have a good mood.Besides,I recommend that you should take regular exercises and take an active part in extra-curricular activities.By doing this, you will keep fit and relieve stress.Last but not least, being positive about everything is also a good choice,which will help you make more friends to share joys and sorrows.
I hope you will find these suggestions helpful.I would appreciate it if you could consider my advice.
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