2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习+忙碌的夏天：三重任务的挑战与成长 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 忙碌的夏天：三重任务的挑战与成长 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 I knew I would have a beyond-busy summer I would be a junior teacher for the Little Dragons Karate(空手道) Camp. And I had to do summer swim team. And Ollie and I already had two customers for our dog-walking business, “You might be biting off more than you can chew,” my mom said with a warning glimpse when I talked to her about it and announced, “I want to do everything!” “Don't worry.” I grinned “I have strong teeth!” My mom smiled back. “In this case, it's your organizational skills, not your teeth, that need to be strong.” I didn't take it to my heart. 4 4 续写原文 And the first week really was no problem. My friend Ollie was out of town and karate camp hadn't started, so my swim stuff was all I needed to worry about. The next week was great too. I swam, and a Little Dragon at karate camp told me I was his favorite teacher ever! I did learn, though, that staying organized with two activities was harder. My backpack was already stuffed with a towel and swim things, so I needed another for my karate clothing. Riding my bike from karate camp to the pool with two backpacks was a challenge. But I still had it under control until Ollie got back. “We’re late getting our business together!” he said. “We’ll have to spend every spare minute preparing.” “But I don't have any spare minutes!” I said. 5 5 续写原文 “Did you forget we agreed to walk Alfie every Saturday? And Muffin on Tuesdays at 4:00?” Ollie asked. I couldn't let Ollie down, so I took out a third backpack and filled it with dog toys, treats, and plastic bags. I thought I was all set. But I was wrong! It didn't take long for my dog-walking stuff and karate stuff and swim stuff to get all mixed up, forgotten, or lost. One day, I forgot my karate backpack and had to borrow Emma's extra outfit, which was too tight. The next day, I remembered my karate stuff but forgot my swimsuit, so I had to help out in the snack shop and stay out of the pool all afternoon. And another time, when I reached into my dog-walking pack for plastic bags, all I could find were swim goggles(护目镜) and sunscreen. 6 6 段首句 Paragraph 1: Worse still, I had to keep track of all the special times. Paragraph 2: Luckily, I, with my parents, came up with a solution to get organized. 7 7 Part 2 题目分析 8 8 续写原文分析 9 本文以人物为线索展开，文章讲述作者成为了小龙空手道训练营的初级老师，负责遛狗，空手道和游泳的业务，过了一段时间，作者发现总是不能安排好这几项业务。 9 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 1Worse still, I had to keep track of all the special times. “更糟糕的是，我还得记住所有特别的时间”，故事的发展方向可以推测为主人公逐渐发现自己承担的任务越来越多，时间越来越紧张，导致无法高效地管理所有活动的时间安排，可能会因为记错或安排不当而出现更多的困扰或冲突。 11 11 续写思路分析 Para 2：Luckily, I, with my parents, came up with a solution to get organized. “幸运的是，我和父母一起想出了一个方法来保持有序”，可以推测，故事的结局可能会转向解决问题的方式，主人公意识到单靠自己无法应对一切，于是和父母商量制定了更合理的时间表或工具（例如制定日程表、使用提醒工具或分担任务），帮助主人公将所有的活动重新组织起来。 12 12 续写思路分析 故事的发展方向 主人公学会了如何平衡各项任务，并且通过与父母和朋友的合作，最终不仅能够高效完成所有事情，而且收获了成长和组织能力的提升。 13 13 续写思路分析 故事的结局 This conclusion resolves the tension around managing time and responsibilities, showing that the character's hard work and willingness to seek help leads to a more balanced, organized life. It also offers a sense of growth, where the character learns the value of planning and prioritizing. 14 14 Part 3 范文呈现 15 15 范文呈现 Worse still, I had to keep track of all the special times. I had to arrive early for the karate test on Monday. I had to stay later to help with swimming pool cleanup on Friday.I had to pick up Alfie 15 minutes early on Saturday. I had to walk Muffinon Tuesday afternoons. I ran around like a chicken with its head off, on the verge of breaking down. It was then that I recalled my mother's warning. Although embarrassed beyond words, I worked up the nerve and walked to my parents, making a clean breast of my trouble and calling for backup. 16 16 范文呈现 Luckily, I, with my parents, came up with a solution to get organized. We started with a calendar, on which I marked all my tasks with a red marker. Then we found three bags respectively used for my dog-walking stuff, karate stuff and swim stuff. We also put a whiteboard in the kitchen to make sure that I took the right bag on the appropriate day. From then on, my beyond-busy summer was smooth sailing, during which I learned a valuable lesson: If you tried to use the dog's rope as your karate belt, it's time to improve your organizational skill 17 17 升级版范文呈现 Worse still, I had to keep track of all the special times. It was like trying to juggle a dozen clocks, each ticking in a different direction. With karate camp, swimming practice, and dog-walking shifts, I found myself constantly checking my phone for schedules. There were times when I had no idea whether I was supposed to be at the pool or on a walk, and worse, I’d miss appointments or show up late. The more I tried to keep up, the more confused I became. Even Ollie noticed, and he’d ask, “Are you sure you’re okay? You’re looking a bit frazzled.” To be honest, I was overwhelmed, and I knew it was time to do something before it all came crashing down. 18 18 升级版范文呈现 Luckily, I, with my parents, came up with a solution to get organized. One evening, after yet another stressful day of scrambling to find my swim gear, my mom suggested creating a daily planner. We sat down and worked out a detailed schedule for each activity, color-coding it to keep everything clear. I even had a designated spot for my backpacks, one for each activity. My dad, who’s always been good with technology, helped me set reminders on my phone, so I wouldn't forget the smaller tasks like feeding the dogs or picking up treats. Soon, everything became much easier to manage, and my stress levels dropped dramatically. With the new system in place, I was able to enjoy all my activities without feeling like I was drowning. 19 19 Part 4 努力方向 20 20 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 21 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 21 22 Thank you! $$