读后续写--惊现负鼠！派对之夜的家庭和解之旅 讲义-2025届广东佛山顺德区高三上学期教学质量检测（一）

阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 What? Laura’s going to be home the night of my party?” I screamed. My sister was the last person I wanted around the night of my party. I was really looking forward to having the house all to myself while my friends were over. After all, it was my birthday! Trying to get my mother to understand, I said, “Mom, can’t you find someplace for Laura to go, like cousin Ellie’s? Having her here will ruin everything!” I had finally talked my parents into letting me invite a few of my school friends to my home for my twelfth birthday. I had been waiting for this night for weeks. Now I had to put up with my older sister being around. It was completely unfair. “Now, Emily,” my mother said to me, trying to calm me down. Laura will stay in her own room. Besides, I don’t understand why you’re so upset about her being here.” “She’ll hang out and steal all the attention. It’s going to ruin the whole party!” I argued. “Laura being home will only ruin it if you let it” my mother responded. “You need to get a better attitude, young lady, or there won’t be a party at all!” I rushed into my bedroom and threw myself on the bed. Frustrated, I thought, How can my mom say I need a better attitude. Laura was the teenager with the attitude, not me! My anger was getting the best of me as I buried my face in my pillow to hide my sobbing. “Why do I have to have an older sister anyway? Why couldn’t I have been an only child?” I thought. The days passed slowly but finally the time for the party arrived. The air was filled with excitement while I waited for my friends to come. At last I was going to have the special birthday party I had been waiting for. I could only hope that Laura would stay in her room. Everything went as planned. The girls were all in the living room, ready for the big party. Suddenly, I noticed movement behind the curtain by the window. 注意： 1.续写的词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 As we stepped over, a possum (负鼠) came running out, heading toward us. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Later that night, I went to my mom to thank her for the party. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意：“我” 十二岁生日，好不容易说服父母让 “我” 邀请朋友来家里开派对，却得知姐姐 Laura 当晚也会在家，“我” 觉得她会抢风头，破坏派对，为此和妈妈争吵后还生气地回房哭泣。派对当晚，一切按计划进行，朋友们都在客厅时，“我” 发现窗边窗帘后有动静。 五处伏笔及续写回应： · 伏笔 1：“我” 担心姐姐会抢风头破坏派对，续写中负鼠出现引发混乱后姐姐帮忙化解，使派对更精彩，证明姐姐并非如 “我” 所想。 · 伏笔 2：妈妈说 Laura 会待在自己房间，续写中负鼠出现后姐姐从房间出来帮忙。 · 伏笔 3：“我” 抱怨有个姐姐很糟糕，续写中经历负鼠事件后 “我” 对姐姐的态度转变。 · 伏笔 4：派对时 “我” 注意到窗边窗帘有动静，续写中发现是负鼠从而引发后续故事。 · 伏笔 5：妈妈曾警告 “我” 要有好态度否则没有派对，续写中 “我” 在经历事件后意识到自己的错误并改变态度。 续写要点： 第一段：As we stepped over, a possum (负鼠) came running out, heading toward us. Girls screamed and scattered in all directions. The chaos was beyond imagination. Just then, Laura rushed out from her room. She quickly grabbed a broom and tried to shoo the possum away. She shouted instructions to us, telling us to open the doors and windows to let it escape. With her calm and quick actions, the possum was finally driven out of the house. 第二段：Later that night, I went to my mom to thank her for the party. I also told her that I was sorry for my bad attitude before. I realized that Laura wasn't a troublemaker. She could be a great helper. I learned that we shouldn't judge people too quickly and that family members can always surprise us. I was glad that this incident made me understand the importance of family unity and a positive attitude. 情感线：开始是对姐姐的不满与愤怒，负鼠出现时的惊恐，看到姐姐帮忙后的惊讶与感激，最后是对自己之前态度的愧疚与对家庭关系的感悟。 故事线：派对上出现负鼠引发混乱，姐姐出来帮忙解决，之后 “我” 向妈妈道谢并反思自己之前对姐姐的态度，认识到家庭的重要性。 主旨升华句（英文）： 1. Family is a precious gift, and we should cherish and understand each other.（家庭是珍贵的礼物，我们应该相互珍惜和理解。） 2. Don't let prejudice blind you; give family members a chance to show their kindness.（不要让偏见蒙蔽双眼；给家庭成员一个展示善良的机会。） 3. In times of trouble, family support often comes from unexpected quarters.（在困难时刻，家庭的支持往往来自意想不到的地方。） 4. True understanding of family is achieved through experiences and reflections.（通过经历和反思才能真正理解家庭。） 5. A change in attitude can transform our perception of family and enhance family bonds.（态度的改变可以改变我们对家庭的看法并加强家庭纽带。） 写作示范一： As we stepped over, a possum (负鼠) came running out, heading toward us. The girls shrieked in horror. I froze, not knowing what to do. Laura, however, sprang into action. She calmly told us to stay still and then used a blanket to corner the possum. She managed to trap it and then carried it outside. Everyone was impressed by her bravery. The incident turned into a funny story that we all shared and laughed about. Later that night, I went to my mom to thank her for the party. I admitted that I was wrong about Laura. Mom smiled and said that family is about accepting and loving each other. I then went to Laura's room and apologized. She hugged me and said it was okay. We talked and laughed about the possum adventure. I realized that having a sister can be a wonderful thing and that I should be more grateful for my family. 写作示范二： As we stepped over, a possum (负鼠) came running out, heading toward us. It was a total chaos. Laura emerged from her room, unfazed. She asked us to form a line and slowly guide the possum towards the door. She showed great leadership and courage. With our combined efforts, the possum was safely out of the house. The party resumed with a new sense of excitement and a story to tell. Later that night, I went to my mom to thank her for the party. I also expressed my gratitude for having Laura at home. I said that I had learned my lesson about judging too quickly. Mom nodded and said that family is a place where we grow and learn. I felt a new closeness to Laura and looked forward to building a better relationship with her. I knew that this birthday party would be a memorable one for more than just the celebration. 【答案】    As we stepped over, a possum (负鼠) came running out, heading toward us. The possum was obviously scared and began dashing around wildly. Chaos erupted. Girls were screaming and trying to hide from this nasty thing at the same time. I stood motionless until Laura ran in to see what was happening. When she entered the living room, the possum scampered toward her. At the very last second, Laura opened the front door and allowed it to run out. Thank goodness! If the possum had bitten someone, or gotten into the food, it would have been a total disaster! We all sighed with relief. I was pleasantly surprised that my sister was there to help with all the chaos. Later that night, I went to my mom to thank her for the party. “Did you have a good time?” My mother asked, “I sure did, Mom,” I answered. “Things went really well and there were some great surprises too.” “Oh, really?” my mother responded. “Like what kind of surprises?” I got a silly grin on my face when I said, “Oh, like possums and older sisters.” My mother had a puzzled look on her face, but before she could ask the obvious questions, I skipped out of the room, still with my smile spreading across my face. I was beaming and thinking that being twelve and having an older sister wasn’t so bad at all. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$