内容正文:
Travel
Unit 2 Travelling Around
reading for writing
1. Know about the main idea and the structure of the e-mail.
2. Master the structure of a travel plan and know how to write a travel plan.
Learning aims
Key point & difficult point
key point: master the main idea and structure of passage.
difficult point: writing a travel plan.
Guess: where it is?
Bell Tower
Terracotta Army
Do you want to travel to Xi'an?
If you are going to visit Xi’an,
how do you make the travel plan?
The email
transport
main purpose for the trip
other plans for the trip
final thoughts
Paragraph Main idea Detail
1 main purpose the trip go to Xi’an to see the Terracotta Army
2 other plans for the trip visit some other places in
Xi'an, such as Shaanxi History Museum and Xi'an City Wall...
3 transport by train
4 final thoughts write soon; send photos; ask for friends’ plan
While-writing
Pretend you are Xiao Li and reply to Richard's email.
At the end of Richard’s email, he said “……Do you have any plans for the coming holiday? Hope to hear from you soon.”
Structure Analysis of e-mail
solutation/greeting
beginning
body
ending
signature
Draft
Based on our discussion, you need to write a brochure about your travel place that you are interested in or you have traveled.
When we share travel plans, what elements do we usually talk about?
Writing
假如你是小李,给Richard写一封回信,介绍你国庆期间要去济南的旅行计划
提示词:
趵突泉 Baotu Spring 千佛山 Qianfo Mountain
大明湖 Daming Lake 小吃街 a snack street
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
谋篇布局
1、明确体裁话题:告知信:告知朋友旅行计划
2、确定时态人称:现在进行时表将来、一般将来时;
第一人称
3、布局文章框架:Para1:点明写信目的
Para2:详细介绍旅行计划
Para3:心得体会,期待回复等
Dear Richard,
Thank you for your email about your travel plan in Xi'an(表明收到来信). I am extremely pleased to tell you something about my plans for the coming holiday.(写信目的).
With the holiday coming, my family are going to pay a visit to Hangzhou.(旅游目的地) As we all know, Hangzhou is famous for West Lake, a landmark of the city. I can't wait to take a boat on the lake, admiring the scenery and recalling the love story between a white snake Bai Suzhen and a man Xuxian. Besides, what also attracts us is the local food. (旅游计划)
We will take the train and spend 6 days there, from Jan.1th to Jan. 6th. (说明交通工具和旅游时长)In my opinion, travel can not only enrich our knowledge, but also broaden our horizons. I am sure we will have a good time.(心得体会) I am looking forward to your photos in Xi'an.(期待回复)
Yours sincerely, Xiao Li
Dear Richard,
Thank you for your letter about your trip in Xi'an(表明收到来信), which is amazing. I am writing to tell you something about my plans for the coming holidays(写信目的).
Para1:谢谢你的来信(告诉我)关于你在西安的旅行,这真是太令人惊叹了。我写信是想告诉你我即将到来的假期计划。
I am travelling around Jinan for three days to see its breathtaking sights with my family(说明旅游目的). On the first day, We're planning to enjoy Baotu Spring, one of the most spectacular in Jinan’s one thousand springs.Then, we are spending next day exploring Qianfo Mountain. The last day, shared bicycles are taking us to Daming Lake. In the evening, we're wandering around to taste the local unique traditional food. (旅游计划)
I am certain that we will have a wonderful holiday.(心得体会)I'm looking forward to your early reply.(期待回复)
Yours,
Xiao Li
Homework
Porish your draft and hand in.
THANKS FOR WATCHING
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