内容正文:
应用文写作
假定你是李华,在上周的英语读后续写作文大赛中获得了第一名。为此,学校英语沙龙邀请你作相关写作分享。请写一篇发言稿,内容包括:
1. 获奖感受;
2. 写作建议。
参考词汇:读后续写 continuation writing
注意:
1. 词数 80 左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Fellow Students,
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Thank you!
写作提纲:
第一段:表达对学校英语沙龙邀请自己分享读后续写经验的感谢,并简要提及自己在比赛中获奖的事情以及此刻激动的心情。
第二段:详细阐述写作建议,包括仔细阅读原文把握情节与人物特点、分析段落开头语确定续写方向、注重细节描写(如环境、心理、动作描写)使文章生动、合理运用高级词汇和句式提升文章档次等。
第三段:再次感谢大家的聆听,并鼓励同学们积极参与英语写作活动,相信大家都能取得进步。
语言积累:
1. I am extremely honored to be here and share my experience of winning the first prize in the English continuation writing competition last week.(我非常荣幸能在这里分享我上周在英语读后续写作文大赛中获得第一名的经历。)
2. When I learned that I got the first place, I was overjoyed and deeply grateful for this recognition.(当得知自己获得第一名时,我欣喜若狂,并对这份认可深表感激。)
3. The key to a good continuation writing is to understand the original text thoroughly.(一篇好的读后续写的关键是透彻理解原文。)
4. Pay close attention to the plot development and the characteristics of the characters.(密切关注情节发展和人物特点。)
5. Analyze the given paragraph starters carefully to figure out the direction of the continuation.(仔细分析给定的段落开头语以确定续写方向。)
6. Vivid details such as descriptions of the environment, characters' inner thoughts and actions can make your writing more attractive.(生动的细节,如环境描写、人物内心想法和动作描写,可以使你的写作更具吸引力。)
7. Try to use advanced vocabulary and sentence structures appropriately to enhance the quality of your writing.(尝试恰当地使用高级词汇和句式来提升写作质量。)
8. Don't forget to check your grammar and spelling errors after finishing writing.(写完后别忘了检查语法和拼写错误。)
9. Reading a lot of excellent model essays can also help you improve your writing skills.(阅读大量优秀范文也能帮助你提高写作技巧。)
10. I hope my sharing can be of some help to you all.(我希望我的分享能对大家有所帮助。)
写作示范一:
Dear Fellow Students,
I'm truly grateful for the invitation from the English Salon. Winning the first prize in the English continuation writing competition last week was a huge surprise to me. I was ecstatic and felt a sense of accomplishment.
For writing continuation, first, read the original text carefully to grasp the plot and character traits. Then, based on the paragraph starters, plan the plot logically. Use vivid details like describing the scene and characters' emotions. Also, enrich your writing with advanced words and complex sentences. For example, use adjectives and adverbs to make the description more vivid.
Thank you!
写作示范二:
Dear Fellow Students,
Thank you for giving me this opportunity. I was extremely excited when I won the top prize in the continuation writing contest.
When it comes to writing, start by understanding the context and characters in the original. Analyze the given sentence beginnings to know where to go. Make your writing alive with detailed environmental and psychological descriptions. Employ advanced sentence patterns such as non - restrictive attributive clauses. And always proofread to avoid mistakes.
Thank you!
写作示范三:
Dear Fellow Students,
I'm very honored to stand here and share. I was over the moon about winning the first in the English continuation writing competition.
In writing, carefully study the original work's plot and character features. Figure out the 续写思路 from the paragraph starters. Add details of actions and inner thoughts of characters. Use advanced vocabulary like synonyms and antonyms to make the language more diverse. And check the coherence and consistency of the whole text.
Thank you!
One Possible Version
Dear Fellow Students,
I’m honored to stand here today after winning first place in last week’s continuation writing contest. This achievement means a lot to me, which not only boosts my confidence but motivates me to explore more in creative writing.
As for writing tips, I believe there are a few key aspects to focus on. Always read original works to enrich your vocabulary and enhance the authenticity of your language. Practice writing regularly, paying close attention to possible plot twists, character developments and themes. Don’t forget to revise your drafts thoroughly, checking grammar, detailed descriptions, and the overall flow of the narrative.
Remember, writing is a journey. Enjoy the process and let your imagination flow!
Thank you!
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