Module 3 Unit 2 Writing课件2024-2025学年外研版八年级英语下册

Module 3 Unit 2 We have not found life on any other planets yet. Writing 23027 Retell the passage with the help of clues below. Review 23027 1 2 能根据提示正确描述图片, 介绍外星人的活动。 能运用现在完成时编写简短的科幻故事。 学习过程 学习总结 学习目标 23027 目标:能正确描述图片，用现在完成时编写简短的科幻故事 Activity 1 Free Talk Do you believe in the existence of aliens? And if so, what do the aliens often do? 学习总结 学习目标 学习过程 23027 Activity 2 5 Look at the picture from a science story for children and answer the questions. What have the scientists just received? (a massage from one of our spaceships) They have just received a message from one of our spaceships. 学习总结 学习目标 学习过程 23027 1. Where has the spaceship landed? (Mars) 2. What has the spaceship discovered? (people on Mars) 3. Why have the people on Mars not sent us a message? (do not know how to) 4. Why have the people on Mars not visited us on the earth? (do not know how to) It has landed on Mars. It has discovered people on Mars. Because they do not know how to send us a message. They haven't visited us because they do not know how to visit us on the earth. 学习总结 学习目标 学习过程 23027 Activity 3 6 Write a passage to describe the picture. Use your answers below to help you. It has landed on Mars. It has discovered people on Mars. Because they do not know how to send us a message. They haven't visited us because they do not know how to visit us on the earth. What do aliens often do? 学习总结 学习目标 学习过程 23027 go swimming play football lie in the chair listen to the music ... read books What do the aliens often do? How to write a passage to describe the picture? Writing Steps: → → → → beautify think list add connect 审→列→加→连→美 学习总结 学习目标 学习过程 23027 Think（审题） Group Discussion List（用简单句列出文章的要点） 话题:_______________________________________ 人称:________________ 时态:_________________ 列出要点： 以第三人称为主 以现在完成时为主 描述外星人活动的图片 where — the spaceship landed; aliens why — the people on Mars not sent us a message; the people on Mars not visited us on the earth what — the spaceship discover; activities 学习总结 学习目标 学习过程 23027 Add (将要点合理加在不同部分使文章完整) Group Discussion 正文 where — the spaceship landed; aliens why — the people on Mars not sent us a message; the people on Mars not visited us on the earth what — the spaceship discover; activities 开头 We have just received a message from our spaceship to Mars. 结尾 In a word, .../We hope... (可省) 学习总结 学习目标 学习过程 23027 审→列→加→连→美 Group Discussion 连词: 过渡词： 表示列举的词： 总结性的短语、句子： when, if, because, so, but,… therefore (因此), besides, also, what’s more... First, ...Second,... in my opinion, in a word, in short, in general, I think… 学习总结 学习目标 学习过程 23027 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ time to write Requirements: ★ 草稿 ★ 自检错误 ★ 文字推敲、润饰 ★ 初步定稿 Activity 4 6 Write a passage to describe the picture. 学习总结 学习目标 学习过程 23027 Activity 5 Task 1: Checking in pairs 同桌交流习作，通过辨认并 改正彼此内容中句子结构、语法以及用词等的错误。 Task 2: Class correction 听班级反馈。选出一篇学生 习作，通过投影进行讨论并集体修改，让1-2位同学 提出修改意见。 学习总结 学习目标 学习过程 23027 We have just received a message from our spaceship to Mars. Our spaceship has discovered aliens there. They have never sent us a message because they don’t know how to communicate with us. They have not visited the earth because they don’t know how to fly to our planet, and they prefer life on Mars. They seem very happy on their planet. They have used parts from the other spaceships from the earth to make TVs, radios, etc. We hope they don’t do the same with this one. 学习总结 学习目标 学习过程 23027 Show time Pick out one or two good compositions for class display. 学习目标 学习过程 学习总结 23027 $$