Unit 5 Animals and us 单元话题写作（人与动物）满分范文15篇（分层练习）英语沪教版五四学制2024六年级上册

Unit5 Animals and us 单元话题写作（人与动物）满分范文15篇（分层练习） 1．动物是人类的好朋友。每个人都有自己喜爱的动物。你最喜欢什么动物呢？请以“My Favorite Animal”为题，根据下面要求，写一篇短文。 写作要求：1）你最喜欢的动物是什么，你为什么喜欢； 2）简单介绍一下这种动物； 3）说一下自己对这种动物的感受； 4）词数70左右。 My Favorite Animal ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．动物是人类的好朋友，我们人类的生活和动物紧密相连，而作为熊猫的国宝，深受国内外友人的喜爱。学校英语俱乐部举办英语征文比赛，话题为Protect Pandas。请你写一篇文章参加投稿， 内容包括： 1.保护猫的原因； 2.熊猫的简介：外貌、家乡、生活习性等（补充词汇：竹子bamboo，皮毛fur) 3.号召人们保护熊猫。 注意： 1.词数60—80词，可以适当增加内容，使行文流畅。 2.开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Pandas are a kind of world-famous wild animals. People around the world love them very much. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．英语课上，老师要求同学们采访周围的朋友，并以“Favorite Animals”为题完成一篇英语短文。假如你是Dick，以下是你对四位朋友的采访结果。请你根据以下表格和要求，写一篇英语短文。 Name What Animals he/she likes Why he/she likes them George Dogs Friendly Jack Pandas Cute Lisa Giraffes Beautiful Mary Koalas Interesting 要求： 1.    句子通顺、语意连贯、语法正确； 2.    必须包含表格中所有内容，可适当发挥； 3.    不少于60词（标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Favorite Animals My name is Dick. Here are my four friends. What animals do they like? Let’s have a look!____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．请以“Dogs can be helpful”为题写一篇短文，词数80左右。 应包括以下信息点： 1. 狗一直以来都是人类的好朋友。现在，它们不仅是宠物，更是家庭的一员； 2. 狗在很多方面帮助人们： （1）有了狗的陪伴，现在有很多独居老人不再感到孤独； （2）狗是孩子们的朋友，能使孩子们快乐； （3）警犬可以帮助警察找到东西并抓获坏人； （4）导盲犬能帮助盲人生活与出行； 3. 我们应该善待并照顾好它们。 点拨： 谋篇布局 1. 人称：第一、三人称 2. 时态：一般现在时 好词 1. be helpful to对……有帮助 2. feel lonely感到孤单 3. catch the bad guys抓坏人 4. with the help of在……的帮助下 5. be kind to善待 好句 1. They are not only our pets, but also our family members.它们不仅是我们的宠物，而且是我们的家庭成员。 2. Dogs are helpful to us in many ways.狗在很多方面对我们有帮助。 牛刀小试 Dogs can be helpful Dogs are always good friends of human beings. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．动物与人类的生活息息相关。人类应该关爱所有动物，关注濒危动物。你最喜欢哪种动物呢？请根据思维导图的提示信息，以“My Favorite Animal”为题，用英语写一篇短文介绍你最喜欢的小动物。 写作要求： 1. 须包含思维导图的所有信息，可适当拓展； 2. 不少于60词； 3. 不得出现真实个人信息。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．假如你是李华，你的朋友张芸来信询问你最喜欢的动物，请你用英文给她写一封来信，谈谈你最喜欢的动物。 提示： 1. What kind of animals do you like? 2. Where are they from? 3. What are the animals like? 4. What do you think of them? 要求： 1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)； 4. 词数：不少于70词。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．你校动物保护俱乐部(Animal Protection Club)需要招募主席(chairperson)，你班所有同学都推荐Amy参选。假如你是David，请你根据以下信息，给学校写一封推荐信。 要求：1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2.必须包括所有要点内容，并适当发挥； 3.词数在100词左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)； 4.不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 Dear Sir/Madam, I would like to recommend Amy to be the chairperson in the Animal Protection Club. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ We look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, David 8．假设你是彭超，你的叔叔有一个农场。请根据下面所给要点，写一篇短文，介绍一下这个农场。 要点: 1. 农场很大，有许多花和树； 2. 农场里有一所房子，里面有12头奶牛和15只鸡； 3. 农场里有一个大湖，湖面有14只鸭子。 要求: 1. 条理清楚、意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确； 2. 50～60词。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．假设你是Eric，你所在社区的一家动物收容所 (animal shelter) 正在招募志愿者。请你根据以下提示，给负责人Brown女士写一封英文邮件，申请成为志愿者。 写作提示： 1. Why do you want to be a volunteer? 2. What can you do for animals? 要求： 1.短文应包含提示内容，并适当发挥； 2.词数70左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 Dear Ms Brown, I hear your animal shelter needs some volunteers. I’d like to be a volunteer to help the animals. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Eric 10．假如你是王丽，你新认识的美国笔友Mike很想了解一下你的情况。请你根据以下信息，给Mike写一封电子邮件，向他介绍一下自己加入保护动物俱乐部的情况。 写作要点： 1.很高兴成为他的笔友。 2.介绍你的情况： （1）13岁的女孩儿。短黑发，圆脸，中等身高。 （2）喜欢小动物，养了一只会两条腿走路的小狗。 （3）加入了保护动物俱乐部(Animal Protection Club)，每周六参加俱乐部举办的活动。 3. 请说说参加保护动物俱乐部的好处。 Dear Mike, How is everything going? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Wang Li 11．假如你是学校英文报的一名记者，请你以 “Protecting our animal friends”为题，写一篇不少于70词的英语短文。须包含以下所给的要点提示，可适当发挥。 要点： 1.现状：很多动物濒临灭绝。 2.原因： 1）人们随意捕杀野生动物； 2）乱砍树木，破坏森林，使动物生存的空间越来越小。 3）呼吁：全校师生行动起来，爱护自然环境，保护动物。 Protecting our animal friends ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．I Love ______ 请补全题目，例如：我爱我的英语老师、父母亲、朋友、宠物狗、星期天、野餐活动、三餐……用你所学知识去表达你要写的人或事。 书面表达的写作要求： 1．请同学们任选一个题目，将标题写在答题卡上再作答； 2．书写工整，卷面整洁；词数不少于60词； 3．注意围绕提示的内容，可作适当发挥； 4．短文不得出现真实的姓名、班级和学校名称，否则记0分。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．同学们，相信你和你的朋友们都喜欢去动物园，那么你们喜欢哪些动物呢？老虎、狮子、大象还是树袋熊呢？请根据实际情况，介绍一下你和你的朋友们喜欢的动物及原因。70词左右。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14．2018年3月20日地球上仅存的最后一头雄性北方白犀牛苏丹离开世界。苏丹的死亡让我们意识到越来越多的动物濒临灭绝，保护动物是我们每个人义不容辞的责任。请你根据以下要点提示，以“Wild Animals in Danger”为题为某学生英语报写一篇英语短文。 要点 1. 动物临灭绝的原因(生活环境遭到破坏，食物短缺，过度猎杀…) 2. 如何保护野生动物(保护环境，建立保护区，禁止捕杀和买卖…) 要求 1. 要点充分，内容充实 2. 80-100词(开头已给出，不计入总词数) 3. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名词。 参考词汇: destroy破坏 endangered源临灭绝的 protection regions保护区 Wild Animals in Danger Now a growing number of wild animals are dying out every year. More and more wild animals are in great danger for many reasons. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15．Write at least 60 words on the topic “Be friends with animals”. （以“和动物做朋友”为题写话，至少60个单词，标点符号不计入。） Before writing, you may think about… ♢Why is it important to be kind to animals as our friends? ♢What can we do in our daily life to be friendly to animals? （注意：文章不得出现考生真实姓名、校名等其他相关信息，否则不给予评分。） _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 7 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit5 Animals and us 单元话题写作（人与动物）满分范文15篇（分层练习） 1．动物是人类的好朋友。每个人都有自己喜爱的动物。你最喜欢什么动物呢？请以“My Favorite Animal”为题，根据下面要求，写一篇短文。 写作要求：1）你最喜欢的动物是什么，你为什么喜欢； 2）简单介绍一下这种动物； 3）说一下自己对这种动物的感受； 4）词数70左右。 My Favorite Animal ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My Favorite Animal Animals are our friends. What animal do you like best? For me, my favorite animal is the monkey. I like monkeys because they are very cute. They can do many things just like people. They can climb the trees quickly and they eat food with their hands easily. I often go to the zoo to watch monkeys. Monkeys like bananas very much. Every time I go to the zoo, I buy some bananas to feed them. I always enjoy myself with them. What about you? What’s your favorite animal? 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不要犯语法错误，可适当发挥，注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己最喜爱的动物以及理由； 第二步，简单介绍自己最喜爱的动物； 第三步，阐述自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①climb the trees爬树 ②enjoy oneself玩得开心 ③like sth. very much非常喜欢 [高分句型] ①I like monkeys because they are very cute.（原因状语从句） ②Every time I go to the zoo, I buy some bananas to feed them.（时间状语从句） 2．动物是人类的好朋友，我们人类的生活和动物紧密相连，而作为熊猫的国宝，深受国内外友人的喜爱。学校英语俱乐部举办英语征文比赛，话题为Protect Pandas。请你写一篇文章参加投稿， 内容包括： 1.保护猫的原因； 2.熊猫的简介：外貌、家乡、生活习性等（补充词汇：竹子bamboo，皮毛fur) 3.号召人们保护熊猫。 注意： 1.词数60—80词，可以适当增加内容，使行文流畅。 2.开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Pandas are a kind of world-famous wild animals. People around the world love them very much. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Pandas are a kind of world-famous wild animals. People around the world love them very much. The black-and-white animals like eating bamboo. They are cute, shy as well as friendly. People consider them as the symbol of friendship and luck. Pandas have lived on the Earth for at least eight hundred years. As a result, we regard them as our national treasure and a living fossil. However, there are fewer and fewer pandas on the Earth. One of the main reasons is that people cut down a lot of trees, which destroys the habitat of pandas. Another reason is that some people hunt pandas, which is cruel to them. We should take action to protect pandas. For example, we can stop cutting down trees or donate money to animal charities. Pandas are our friends. Protecting them is protecting ourselves. Let’s call on more people to protect them. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。首先介绍保护熊猫的原因； 第二步，从熊猫的外貌、家乡、生活习性等具体阐述； 第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受，提出倡议。 [亮点词汇] ①consider…as…把……看作 ②at least至少 ③For example例如 [高分句型] ①Protecting them is protecting ourselves.(动名词作主语) ②Let’s call on more people to protect them. (祈使句) 3．英语课上，老师要求同学们采访周围的朋友，并以“Favorite Animals”为题完成一篇英语短文。假如你是Dick，以下是你对四位朋友的采访结果。请你根据以下表格和要求，写一篇英语短文。 Name What Animals he/she likes Why he/she likes them George Dogs Friendly Jack Pandas Cute Lisa Giraffes Beautiful Mary Koalas Interesting 要求： 1.    句子通顺、语意连贯、语法正确； 2.    必须包含表格中所有内容，可适当发挥； 3.    不少于60词（标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Favorite Animals My name is Dick. Here are my four friends. What animals do they like? Let’s have a look!____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Favorite Animals My name is Dick. Here are my four friends. What animals do they like? Let’s have a look! George likes dogs best. He thinks dogs are friendly and they are people’s good friends. He has a pet dog and he likes playing with it. Jack’s favorite animals are pandas. He thinks pandas are very cute. Lisa likes giraffes very much. They are her favorite animals. She thinks giraffes are beautiful. What about Mary? She likes koalas best. She thinks koalas are lazy but very interesting. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态为 “一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误，注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步：引出话题——我的朋友喜欢什么动物； 第二步，介绍George和Jack喜欢的动物以及原因； 第三步，介绍Lisa和Mary喜欢的动物以及原因。 [亮点词汇] ① like...best 最喜欢 ② like doing sth. 喜欢做某事 ③ play with与 ……一起玩 [高分句型] She thinks koalas are lazy but very interesting.（宾语从句） 4．请以“Dogs can be helpful”为题写一篇短文，词数80左右。 应包括以下信息点： 1. 狗一直以来都是人类的好朋友。现在，它们不仅是宠物，更是家庭的一员； 2. 狗在很多方面帮助人们： （1）有了狗的陪伴，现在有很多独居老人不再感到孤独； （2）狗是孩子们的朋友，能使孩子们快乐； （3）警犬可以帮助警察找到东西并抓获坏人； （4）导盲犬能帮助盲人生活与出行； 3. 我们应该善待并照顾好它们。 点拨： 谋篇布局 1. 人称：第一、三人称 2. 时态：一般现在时 好词 1. be helpful to对……有帮助 2. feel lonely感到孤单 3. catch the bad guys抓坏人 4. with the help of在……的帮助下 5. be kind to善待 好句 1. They are not only our pets, but also our family members.它们不仅是我们的宠物，而且是我们的家庭成员。 2. Dogs are helpful to us in many ways.狗在很多方面对我们有帮助。 牛刀小试 Dogs can be helpful Dogs are always good friends of human beings. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dogs can be helpful Dogs are always good friends of human beings. Now, they are not only our pets, but also our family members. Dogs are helpful to us in many ways. With dogs’ help, many old people living by themselves will not feel lonely. Dogs are kids’ friends and make them happy. The police dogs can help the police find things and catch the bad guys. The guide dogs take care of the blind people in their daily life and lead them to the places they want to go. We should be kind to dogs and take good care of them. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：采用“一般现在时” ③提示：要求包含所有要点提示，内容完整，句子衔接自然，注意标点符号的使用。 [写作步骤] 第一步，总述狗是人类的好朋友； 第二步，具体阐述狗在很多方面有帮助； 第三步，倡议人们善待狗。 [亮点词汇] ①not only...but also....不但……而且…… ②in many ways在很多方面 ③take care of照顾 [高分句型] ①The guide dogs take care of the blind people in their daily life and lead them to the places they want to go. （and并列结构） 5．动物与人类的生活息息相关。人类应该关爱所有动物，关注濒危动物。你最喜欢哪种动物呢？请根据思维导图的提示信息，以“My Favorite Animal”为题，用英语写一篇短文介绍你最喜欢的小动物。 写作要求： 1. 须包含思维导图的所有信息，可适当拓展； 2. 不少于60词； 3. 不得出现真实个人信息。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My Favorite Animal Of all the animals, I like pandas best. Pandas mainly come from Sichuan and Gansu Province in China. They are black and white. They have two big eyes. They look like bears. They are quiet and peaceful. They eat bamboo shoots and leaves. I like pandas because they are friendly to people. We should cut down less forests and get on well with animals to protect endangered animals. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：材料所给信息不得遗漏，可适当补充细节，以使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点题说明自己最喜欢的动物； 第二步，描写熊猫的外形特征和习性； 第三步，写出喜欢熊猫的原因，以及提出如何帮助动物的建议。 [亮点词汇] ①come from来自 ②look like看起来像 ③cut down减少；砍伐 ④get on well with与……相处得好 [高分句型] ①I like pandas because they are friendly to people.（原因状语从句） ②We should cut down less forests and get on well with animals to protect endangered animals.（动词不定式作目的状语） 6．假如你是李华，你的朋友张芸来信询问你最喜欢的动物，请你用英文给她写一封来信，谈谈你最喜欢的动物。 提示： 1. What kind of animals do you like? 2. Where are they from? 3. What are the animals like? 4. What do you think of them? 要求： 1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)； 4. 词数：不少于70词。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 Dear Zhang Yun,     I like animals very much and I can see many animals in my life. My favorite animals are pandas because they are very cute and nice. They come from Sichuan, China. They are black and white. They look fat and walk slowly. They like to eat bamboo. Most of the time, they’re eating. Pandas are the symbol of China. Now they are loved by people all over the world. I hope we all can protect pandas.     What’s your favorite animal? I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文一封书信； ②时态：应使用一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点包括动物的种类、来源、特性和个人对动物的看法。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。可以简单介绍自己对动物的喜爱，引出最喜欢的动物； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从动物的种类、来源、特性等方面详细描述最喜欢的动物； 第三步，书写结语。表达对动物的喜爱和希望与朋友分享这份喜爱的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①cute可爱的 ②symbol象征 ③look forward to doing期待做某事 [高分句型] ①My favorite animals are pandas because they are very cute and nice. (because引导原因状语从句) ②I hope we can all protect pandas. (I hope接宾语从句) 7．你校动物保护俱乐部(Animal Protection Club)需要招募主席(chairperson)，你班所有同学都推荐Amy参选。假如你是David，请你根据以下信息，给学校写一封推荐信。 要求：1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2.必须包括所有要点内容，并适当发挥； 3.词数在100词左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)； 4.不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 Dear Sir/Madam, I would like to recommend Amy to be the chairperson in the Animal Protection Club. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ We look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, David 【答案】例文： Dear Sir/Madam, I would like to recommend Amy to be the chairperson in the Animal Protection Club. Amy is a clever girl. She learns things quickly and she learns a lot about animals. When she is free, she will go to the library to read books about animals. Sometimes, she can introduce different animals to us. Amy is always kind. She loves animals and often looks after her pet by herself at home. She likes to brush the dog’s fur and walk it every day. Besides, she feeds her dog meat and dog food and she enjoys it very much. Amy is also helpful. she often helps the cat without the owners. Last weekend, I saw her take a cat to the animal center. We all think Amy should be the chairperson. We look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, David 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文为一篇应用文，为书信作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：要点信息已给出，注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，完善表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，向学校推荐Amy成为动物保护俱乐部的主席； 第二步，具体阐述Amy的个人信息，从“性格、能力”等方面来说明推荐Amy担任主席的理由； 第三步，书写结语，紧扣写信的意图，强调全班同学都想要推荐Amy担任主席。 [亮点词汇] ① look after照顾 ② look forward to期待 [高分句型] ① When she is free, she will go to the library to read books about animals.（when引导的时间状语从句） ② We all think Amy should be the chairperson.（省略that的宾语从句） 8．假设你是彭超，你的叔叔有一个农场。请根据下面所给要点，写一篇短文，介绍一下这个农场。 要点: 1. 农场很大，有许多花和树； 2. 农场里有一所房子，里面有12头奶牛和15只鸡； 3. 农场里有一个大湖，湖面有14只鸭子。 要求: 1. 条理清楚、意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确； 2. 50～60词。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My name is Peng Chao. My uncle has a big farm. You can see a lot of flowers and trees. A big house is on the farm and twelve cows and fifteen chickens are in it. Can you see a big lake? Oh, what are those on the lake? They are ducks. Fourteen ducks are on the lake. I like my uncle’s farm. What about you? 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，介绍叔叔家有一个农场； 第二步，具体阐述农场里面的景象； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①a lot of许多 ②on the lake在湖面上 ③What about you你呢 [高分句型] ①A big house is on the farm and twelve cows and fifteen chickens are in it. (并列结构) 9．假设你是Eric，你所在社区的一家动物收容所 (animal shelter) 正在招募志愿者。请你根据以下提示，给负责人Brown女士写一封英文邮件，申请成为志愿者。 写作提示： 1. Why do you want to be a volunteer? 2. What can you do for animals? 要求： 1.短文应包含提示内容，并适当发挥； 2.词数70左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 Dear Ms Brown, I hear your animal shelter needs some volunteers. I’d like to be a volunteer to help the animals. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Eric 【答案】例文 Dear Ms Brown, I hear your animal shelter needs some volunteers. I’d like to be a volunteer to help the animals. I love animals and enjoy playing with them. I hope to give a helping hand to your shelter and learn more skills at the same time. I keep a lovely dog and a friendly cat at home. I always feed, clean and play with them. I can also look after them when they’re sick. I have enough free time to do volunteer work. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Eric 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图是想要成为一名帮助动物的志愿者； 第二步，说明要做志愿者的原因以及能为动物做的事情； 第三步，书写结语，表达期待。 [亮点词汇] ①give a hand帮助 ②enjoy doing sth.喜欢做某事 ③look after照顾 [高分句型] ①I can also look after them when they’re sick. (when引导的时间状语从句) ②I hope to give a helping hand to your shelter and learn more skills at the same time. (and并列句) 10．假如你是王丽，你新认识的美国笔友Mike很想了解一下你的情况。请你根据以下信息，给Mike写一封电子邮件，向他介绍一下自己加入保护动物俱乐部的情况。 写作要点： 1.很高兴成为他的笔友。 2.介绍你的情况： （1）13岁的女孩儿。短黑发，圆脸，中等身高。 （2）喜欢小动物，养了一只会两条腿走路的小狗。 （3）加入了保护动物俱乐部(Animal Protection Club)，每周六参加俱乐部举办的活动。 3. 请说说参加保护动物俱乐部的好处。 Dear Mike, How is everything going? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Wang Li 【答案】例文 Dear Mike, How is everything going? I’m Wang Li. I’m glad to be your pen pal. Let me introduce myself to you. I am a girl who is 13 years old. And I’m of medium height. I have a round face and short black hair. I love animals, so I have a little dog that can walk on two legs. I also join Animal Protection Club, and I take part in the activities of the club every Saturday. As a member of the club, I can learn more about animals and I can also know the importance of protecting animals. At the same time, I can make more friends. I am so happy. How about you? Can you introduce yourself? Best wishes! Yours, Wang Li 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏“要点”中参加保护动物俱乐部的好处，注意要点要齐全。 [写作步骤] 第一步，短文开头已给出，表达很高兴成为他的笔友； 第二步，具体介绍自己的情况； 第三步，介绍参加保护动物俱乐部的好处； 第四步，书写结语，询问对方是否能详细介绍自己。 [亮点词汇] ①introduce...to...向……介绍…… ②be of medium height中等身高 ③take part in参加 ④learn about了解，学习 ⑤at the same time同时 ⑥make friends交朋友 [高分句型] ①I am a girl who is 13 years old.（who引导的定语从句） ②I love animals, so I have a little dog that can walk on two legs.（that引导的定语从句） 11．假如你是学校英文报的一名记者，请你以 “Protecting our animal friends”为题，写一篇不少于70词的英语短文。须包含以下所给的要点提示，可适当发挥。 要点： 1.现状：很多动物濒临灭绝。 2.原因： 1）人们随意捕杀野生动物； 2）乱砍树木，破坏森林，使动物生存的空间越来越小。 3）呼吁：全校师生行动起来，爱护自然环境，保护动物。 Protecting our animal friends ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Protecting our animal friends In recent years, a number of animals are becoming endangered. Some kinds have even died out. Why is that? Some cruel people kill wild animals and sell their meat or fur for money. Besides, with the rapid development of cities and towns, people cut down too many trees and destroy some forests. Because of this, some animals lose their homes. Their living space is becoming smaller and smaller. What’s worse, the polluted water is not fit for the animals. We hope everyone can take action and do something helpful from now on. It is everyone’s duty to care for the environment and protect our animal friends. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步，描述一些动物们濒临灭绝的现状； 第二步，具体阐述造成该现状的原因； 第三步，呼吁大家积极行动，保护动物。 [亮点词汇] ①a number of很多 ②die out灭绝 ③cut down砍伐 ④take action采取行动 [高分句型] ①Their living space is becoming smaller and smaller.（比较级+比较级表示“越来越……”） ②It is everyone’s duty to care for the environment and protect our animal friends.（it句型） 12．I Love ______ 请补全题目，例如：我爱我的英语老师、父母亲、朋友、宠物狗、星期天、野餐活动、三餐……用你所学知识去表达你要写的人或事。 书面表达的写作要求： 1．请同学们任选一个题目，将标题写在答题卡上再作答； 2．书写工整，卷面整洁；词数不少于60词； 3．注意围绕提示的内容，可作适当发挥； 4．短文不得出现真实的姓名、班级和学校名称，否则记0分。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： I Love My Pet Dog I have a 2-year-old pet dog. I call it Coco. It looks lovely. It is black and white and has soft fur. It has small eyes, big ears and a long tail. It is a birthday present from my parents. When my parents are not at home, it stays with me. I like playing with it in my free time. My parents sometimes take it for a walk in the evening. Coco is a good friend of mine and I love it very much. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：这是一篇话题作文，为记叙文； ② 时态：主要采用“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：选择话题，用所学知识进行表达，没有限制介绍哪些方面；建议用学过的词汇、短语和句型；注意动词三单形式等。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍宠物狗Coco的外貌特征； 第二步，介绍Coco与我和家人的相处； 第三步，总结Coco是我的好朋友。 [亮点词汇] ① a 2-year-old pet dog 一只两岁的宠物狗 ② in my free time 在我空闲时间 ③ take it for a walk 带它散步 ④ a good friend of mine 我的一位好朋友 [高分句型] When my parents are not at home, it stays with me.（时间状语从句） 13．同学们，相信你和你的朋友们都喜欢去动物园，那么你们喜欢哪些动物呢？老虎、狮子、大象还是树袋熊呢？请根据实际情况，介绍一下你和你的朋友们喜欢的动物及原因。70词左右。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： I often go to the zoo with my friends. We can see lots of animals there. We all like them. My friend Henry likes elephants. He thinks they’re very friendly. Linda likes pandas because she thinks they are very cute. Bob likes swimming so he likes dolphins. He wants to swim with them in the pool. Susan likes giraffes because they’re very beautiful. I like monkeys because they’re very clever. What animals do you like? 【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求介绍自己和朋友们喜欢的动物并给出原因。 2.写作指导：写作时要以第一、三人称为主，时态采用一般现在时。可采用一段式写作，介绍各自喜欢的动物及喜欢这种动物的原因。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。 14．2018年3月20日地球上仅存的最后一头雄性北方白犀牛苏丹离开世界。苏丹的死亡让我们意识到越来越多的动物濒临灭绝，保护动物是我们每个人义不容辞的责任。请你根据以下要点提示，以“Wild Animals in Danger”为题为某学生英语报写一篇英语短文。 要点 1. 动物临灭绝的原因(生活环境遭到破坏，食物短缺，过度猎杀…) 2. 如何保护野生动物(保护环境，建立保护区，禁止捕杀和买卖…) 要求 1. 要点充分，内容充实 2. 80-100词(开头已给出，不计入总词数) 3. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名词。 参考词汇: destroy破坏 endangered源临灭绝的 protection regions保护区 Wild Animals in Danger Now a growing number of wild animals are dying out every year. More and more wild animals are in great danger for many reasons. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Wild Animals in Danger Now growing number wild animals are dying out every year. More and more wild animals are in danger for many reasons. Air and water are polluted so that the environments which animals live in are destroyed. Besides, since many trees are cut down, many animals lose their homes and they don’t have enough food to eat. What’s worse, many animals are killed for money. As we know, animals are our friends. To protect them is to protect ourselves. First, we can collect money to help protect wild animals and build protection regions for wild animals where no one can kill them. Second, we had better not cut down so many trees as the forest is home of the wild animals. Last but not least, we are supposed not to kill wild animals for their fur or eat their meat. No trading, no killing. In a word, we should learn to live in peace with wildlife. If everyone gives a little love, it will make a big difference. Let’s take action right now. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中对“动物灭绝原因，如何保护野生动物”的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“大量野生动物灭绝的现象”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“动物灭绝原因，如何保护野生动物”几个方面重点介绍关于野生动物的具体情况； 第三步，书写结语。表达“一起行动，保护野生动物”的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①cut down 砍倒 ②protect wild animals 保护野生动物 ③Last but not least 最后但同样重要的 ④take action 采取行动 [高分句型] ①No trading, no killing.（谚语） ②If everyone gives a little love, it will make a big difference. （if引导的条件状语从句） 15．Write at least 60 words on the topic “Be friends with animals”. （以“和动物做朋友”为题写话，至少60个单词，标点符号不计入。） Before writing, you may think about… ♢Why is it important to be kind to animals as our friends? ♢What can we do in our daily life to be friendly to animals? （注意：文章不得出现考生真实姓名、校名等其他相关信息，否则不给予评分。） _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Be friends with animals Animals are very important to us, because they play an important role in balancing our ecosystem and stabilizing natural processes. Also, we rely on animals for food, labor and companionship. Without animals, the world will not be as colorful and different as it is today. To be friends with animals, we can help the communities and groups that take care of animal life in our regions. Moreover, it’s beneficial to recycle as much as plastic products as possible to reduce pollution in the sea and soil, by which we can do a favor to leave more land for animals. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：要求以“Be friends with animals”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍把动物当朋友的重要性； 第二步，针对我们能做些什么来对动物友好给出建议。 [亮点词汇] ①play an important role in在……中扮演重要角色 ②rely on依靠 ③take care of照顾 ④do a favor帮忙 [高分句型] ①Animals are very important to us, because they play an important role in balancing our ecosystem and stabilizing natural processes. （原因状语从句） ②To be friends with animals, we can help the communities and groups that take care of animal life in our regions.（定语从句） 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 7 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$