Unit 6 - Unit 10 写作训练及范文 2024-2025学年人教版英语八年级上册

Unit 8 单元话题写作专练 【话题分析】 本单元的内容是描述食物的制作过程。写此类文章应首先交代清楚你要制作的食物是什么以及需要的材料，然后介绍制作食物的步骤和方法。特别要注意在写作时应使用相关表示顺序的词，如 first, next, then, finally等,同时也要注意祈使句的运用。 【写作积累】 常用词汇 1. cut up 切碎 2. pour … into … 把……倒入…… 3. add… to … 给……添加…… 4. fill … with … 用……装满…… 5. mix together … 把……混合在一起 6. a piece of 一片/块………; two cups of 两杯………; three spoons of 三勺…… 7. cover ... with ... 用······覆盖······8. make a list of … 列一份……的清单 9. mix up 混合 常用句式 1. Here is one way to make ... 2. First … Next … Then … Finally … 3. Don't forget to … 【典例讲解】 今天是6月16 日，父亲节。假设你是李明，你早起为爸爸做了一份早餐——一碗鸡蛋面。现在请你按照下表提示内容，用英语写一则日记。 煮面条的过程 水、面条、鸡蛋、佐料……(3-4个步骤) 爸爸吃面条的感受和对面条的评价 高兴、夸奖；美味…… 你的感受和打算 高兴、自豪，多帮助父母分担家务…… 要求： 1.请使用恰当的关联词叙述做面条的过程； 2.可以适当增加内容； 3.词数80左右。 日记开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Sunday, June 16 Sunny Today is Father's Day. I got up early and 【审题思路】 1.审体裁：讲述给爸爸做面条的过程，所以体裁应为记叙文； 2.审人称：文章主题是介绍“我”做鸡蛋面的过程，所以人称应该以第一人称为主； 3.审时态：做鸡蛋面是已经发生的事情，所以时态以一般过去时为主。 【写作提纲】 【优秀范文】 Sunday, June 16 Sunny Today is Father's Day. I got up early and cooked breakfast— egg noodles for my father. First, I boiled some water in the pot for several minutes. And then, I put an egg and noodles into the pot. Next, I washed some vegetables and cut them into small pieces. Finally, I put the vegetables into the pot and added some oil and salt. The breakfast was ready to serve. My father was happy and said it tasted delicious. I feel very happy and proud of myself. I decide to help my parents do more housework in the future. 【实战演练】 为培育时代新人，新时代劳动教育又回到学校教育中。劳动教育鼓励中学生要掌握一定的生活技能，其中炒菜做饭不仅能提高我们的生活自理能力，还能增强我们的家庭责任意识。请以“An Experience to Make ”为题，用英语写一篇短文，介绍一次你制作一道美食的经历及感受。 要求：1. 请先将题目补全后，再作答； 2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数80左右； 3.文中不得使用真实姓名和校名。 An Experience to Make One possible version: An Experience to Make Scrambled Eggs and Tomatoes At the class meeting, we were asked to make a dish for our parents after school. Seeing the vegetables in the kitchen, I chose to cook the scrambled eggs and tomatoes. After watching the video on how to cook it, I started. Unfortunately, it burned and I failed. It was at that moment that I realized if I didn't add enough oil, the eggs would be easily stuck to the pan and be burnt. Changing the way, I succeeded in the end. After my parents saw my dish, they were so moved and happy that they ate it up. Through this experience, I learned that labor can not only be a meaningful thing but also make me feel satisfied and happy. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 9 单元话题写作专练 【话题分析】 本单元的话题是“邀请”，与此相关的写作题目往往与发出邀请、接受邀请或拒绝邀请有关。无论是向别人发出邀请还是因故拒绝别人的邀请，都应注意语气委婉而不失礼貌。写作时应注意邀请函的格式,一般包括称呼语、正文、结束语及签名等。 可用 Can you...? 或 Would you like to...?等句型礼貌地发出邀请。 【写作积累】 常用词汇 1. turn down 拒绝 2. prepare for… 为……做准备 3. the day after tomorrow 后天 4. the day before yesterday 前天 5. another time 其他时间;别的时间 6.hear from 接到(某人的)信、电话等 7. help out (帮助)分担工作 8. invite sb. to do sth. 邀请某人做某事 常用句式 1. Can/ Could you come to...? 2. Would you like to...? 3. Thanks so much for inviting me. 4. I'd love to go to your party, but.../ Sure, I'd love to./ Sure, that sounds great./ Sorry, I'm not available. 5. We can have fun together next time. 6. I'm looking forward to seeing you at the party. 【典例讲解】 假如你是美国的 Danny，你的中国同学李丽即将结束她在你们学校为期一年的交换生学习生活。为此，你打算本周六晚上在你家给她举办一场送别聚会。请根据以下要点提示，在你们班级群里留言，邀请你们班其他同学参加本次聚会。80词左右。 要点提示：1.对李丽的评价；2.举办此次聚会的原因；3.希望同学们来参加聚会并表演节目( put on a show)。 【审题思路】 1.审体裁：本文是一封邀请函； 2.审人称：本文人物主要是李丽以及被邀请对象(同学们)，所以人称以第二、三人称为主； 3.审时态：时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。 【写作提纲】 【优秀范文】 Hi, everyone, You must know our classmate Li Li. In my eyes, she's so nice. She studies very hard. And she's always glad to help others. I learned more about Chinese culture from her. Sadly, she's going back to China. To show how much we' ll miss her, I' ll have a surprise party for her at my home this Saturday evening. Can you come? If you can, please help with these things: think of some games to play and if you can put on some kinds of shows at the party, that will be great. Let me know if you want to come. I'm looking forward to your coming. Yours, Danny 【实战演练】 Tom 邀请李明这周日参加他的生日宴会，但李明的父母出差了，要到下个月才回来。李明的奶奶卧病在床，需要人照顾。另外，英语考试也即将来临。因此，李明无法前去参加生日宴会。假如你是李明，请你根据以下要点提示写一封80词左右的回信辞谢。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 要点提示： 1.感谢邀请，对不能前去宴会表示遗憾及抱歉； 2.说明不去的原因。 Dear Tom, Thank you very much for inviting me to your birthday party. Yours, Li Ming One possible version: Dear Tom, Thank you very much for inviting me to your birthday party. I'd love to go but I'm afraid I can't. My parents are out on business. They are coming back next month. And now I have to look after my grandma because she is ill in bed. And I also need to study for the coming English test. I'm very sorry that I can't go to your party. Thank you for inviting me again. I hope you can have a good time. Yours, Li Ming 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 10 单元话题写作专练 【话题分析】 本单元主要谈论人们对做某事可能会出现的一些后果进行预测，并根据具体情况提出一些合理的建议。学生在学习和生活中，常常会遇到针对某人、某事或某项活动提出相关建议的写作案例。写此类作文时，首先我们应该掌握常用的提建议的句型，在此基础上，根据情景，明确提建议的方法，最后根据所提供的信息进行合理的发挥，使意思完整。 【写作积累】 常用词汇 1. make a plan 制订计划 2. work out 解决 3. one by one 一个接一个 4. different kinds of 不同种类的 5. spend time on sth. 花时间在某事上 6. between... and... 在······与······之间 7. for example 例如 8. make mistakes 犯错 9. keep... to oneself 保守秘密 10. run away from problems 逃避问题 常用句式 1. I have some suggestions/ advice for you. 2. If you..., you' ll... 3. It's best( not) to do sth. 4. I think you should... 5. You’ d better... 6. It's necessary to... 【典例讲解】 假定你是班长李华，请回复新同学 Mike的求助邮件，给他提至少3条建议并说明理由。词数80左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Hi Li Hua, You know I am new here. I found it hard for me to get along well with people here. When I have trouble with my study, I don't know how to get help. I really want to be a good part of the class. Would you please give me some advice? I am looking forward to your reply. Mike Hi Mike, Li Hua 【审题思路】 1.审体裁：本文是关于建议的文章，所以体裁为说明文； 2.审人称：给对方( Mike)提供建议，所以人称以第二人称为主； 3.审时态：客观陈述建议，所以时态以一般现在时为主。 【写作提纲】 【优秀范文】 Hi Mike, You told me about your problems in your e-mail. I have some suggestions for you. First, be helpful. If you' re always ready to help others, everybody will be happy to make friends with you. Second, keep smiling. It is a way to show you are friendly. Third, find someone with the same hobbies as you. If you have the same hobbies, you will have more topics to talk about. Then you will be friends soon. Follow the suggestions, and you will get along well with others. I'm sure you' ll be a good part of the class. Li Hua 【实战演练】 假设你是李华，你的朋友 Mike近来有些烦恼。请你根据下列提示，给他发一封电子邮件，告诉他你也遇到过一些烦恼，并结合自身经历，给他一些建议。 写作要点： 1.感谢他的信任。 2.介绍你遇到过的烦恼：数学考试成绩不理想；喜爱唱歌，但父母反对；爱吃垃圾食品，越来越胖。 3.谈谈当我们遇到难题时我们应该怎么办。 写作要求： 1.不得使用真实的姓名和校名；2.可适当加入细节，以使内容充实，行文连贯； 3.字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清晰；4.词数80左右。 Dear Mike, How are you doing? Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua One possible version: Dear Mike, How are you doing? Thanks for your trust and I am sorry to hear that you have troubles these days. Actually, I'm in the same situation like you. I got bad math grade in the latest exam which made me very upset. Besides, my parents don't support my hobby about singing songs but I like singing very much. What's more, I become more and more fat because of my bad eating habits, so I plan to stop eating junk food. However, when facing with troubles, we should try our best to defeat them. I will study hard to improve my math grades and talk with my parents about my hobby. I hope my ways can help you. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$Unit 6 单元话题写作专练 【话题分析】 本单元的话题主要是谈论生活和学习的目标及未来的打算。写作时要注意以下几个方面: 1.能正确使用 be going to, want to be 等句型描述自己的决定和计划; 2.能正确使用一般将来时; 3.能正确地叙述具体的行动计划。 【写作积累】 常用词汇 1. want to be 想成为 2. grow up 长大;成熟;成长 3. keep on doing sth. 继续做某事 4. try one's best 尽某人最大的努力 5. learn … from … 从……了解/学习……6. study/ work hard 努力学习 7. give up 放弃 8. take up a hobby 培养一项爱好 9. make promises 做出承诺 10.come true 实现 11. make sb. a better person 让某人成为一个更好的人 常用句式 1. I'm going to be a … when I grow up. 2. Though I am not good at …, I won't give up my dream. 3. In order to …, I will study hard. 4. Here are some ideas about how to make your dream come true. 5. The resolution may be too difficult to be achieved, but I will keep on trying. 6. I am sure my dream will come true one day. 7. There are different ways to succeed. 【典例讲解】 假如你是林宏,昨天晚上你收到美国朋友 Sam 的邮件,他告诉你将来他想成为一名医生,但是他不知道该怎么做,所以想请你帮他出谋划策。请你给他回一封80词左右的英文邮件,提出你的建议。 Dear Sam, I'm glad to know that you want to be a doctor when you grow up. Here is my advice. Yours, Lin Hong 【审题思路】 1.审体裁:本文是为别人实现梦想提供建议,所以体裁为说明文; 2.审人称:建议对方应该怎么做,所以人称应该以第二人称为主; 3.审时态:客观阐述建议,所以时态应该以一般现在时为主。 【写作提纲】 【优秀范文】 Dear Sam, I'm glad to know that you want to be a doctor when you grow up. Here is my advice. Firstly, you must work hard at school and get good grades if you want to be a doctor in the future. You can enter a top medical school if you get quite high grades in the exam. Secondly, you should read more books on medicine in your spare time so that you can learn more about medicine. Thirdly, you should keep on doing exercise. Being a good doctor needs not only rich knowledge, but also a strong body. Then you can deal with the hard and tiring work. I really hope your dream will come true. Yours, Lin Hong 【实战演练】 你和美国朋友 Jane分享了新年计划之后,她对你的计划表示很感兴趣。请根据所给提示,写一篇短文介绍你的计划,并说明你打算如何去做以及原因。 我的计划:1.增强体质;2.改善与朋友之间的关系;3.在学校表现得更好。 One possible version: Hey, Jane! Here I want to share my three resolutions with you. My first resolution is about improving my physical health. I'm going to eat more fruit and vegetables and play more sports. My second resolution is about improving my relationships with my friends. I'm going to care more about my friends and help them more. Doing more things together will make us closer. My last resolution is about doing better at school. I'm going to listen more carefully in class and do my homework better. It can help me get better grades. Where there is a will, there is a way.I'm sure I can achieve my resolutions if I try my best. 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $$ Unit 7 单元话题写作专练 【话题分析】 本单元以“预测未来生活”为话题展开，具体到书面表达中，要求同学们能根据所学及题目要求，写一篇介绍未来生活状况的文章。注意写此类作文时，应用一般将来时态，并对某一话题展开充分、合理的想象，同时也可用比较级结构，增强与现在的对比效果。常见的预测未来的话题有：机器人、电脑、环境、旅行、学习、工作等。 【写作积累】 常用词汇 1. bright future 光明的未来 2. be free 有空;空闲 3. in the( near) future 在(不久的)将来 4. be good for 对……有好处 5. take care of 照顾 6. be easy to do sth. 容易做某事 7. spend more time with my parents 花更多的时间陪我父母 8. live a happy life 过着幸福的生活 常用句式 1. In … years, I think I will be … 2. I will live a … life. 3. In my spare time, I' ll ... 4. I think my life in … years will be … 5. I will study/ work hard to make it come true. 【典例讲解】 你们学校将举办一场英语写作比赛。请以“My Life in 2055”为题，写一篇参赛短文，分享你对未来的憧憬。 【审题思路】 1.审体裁：介绍未来的生活，所以体裁为说明文； 2.审人称：介绍未来生活的变化，所以人称应该以第一、三人称为主； 3.审时态：文章要求预测未来的生活，所以最好结合本单元所学的“will+ do”表示的将来时态来描写。 【写作提纲】 【优秀范文】 My Life in 2055 In 2055, my life will be different from now. People will have robots in their homes. The robots can cook delicious food and do everything carefully. The road will be cleaner and the air will be fresher. There will also be more trees and the trees will even be on the buildings. In 2055, I think I will be an artist. Robots can do all the housework so people will have more free time. They will look for beautiful artworks more often, so I will be the one who makes artworks. However, we can't just keep dreaming. Instead, we need to work hard to make our dreams come true. 【实战演练】 本周你们班英语主题班会要求同学们围绕“I Want aRobot”这一话题畅所欲言。请你根据自己的想象及下面的提示，用英语写一篇短文描述你想要的机器人，为此次发言做准备。 提示： 1.你想要的机器人将会是什么样的? 2.你想要的机器人将会为你做什么?(从学习和日常生活两个方面来写) 要求： 1.紧扣主题，表达准确，语句通顺、连贯； 2.词数80左右，短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Hello, everyone! I want a robot. If I have one, Hello, everyone! I want a robot. If I have one, I think my study and life will be much easier. It will be as tall as me. It will be like a dog because I like dogs very much. It will do a lot of things for me. First, it will help me study. I won't have to go to after-school classes. I will study at home. Second, it will cook different kinds of delicious food for me. In this way, my mom won't get very tired. And when I feel sad, it will talk with me like a friend and make me happy. My robot will be lovely and helpful, won't it? 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$