读后续写 山地自行车赛风波：错误后的抉择与成长 讲义-浙江省9+1高中联盟2023-2024学年高二上学期期中考试英语试题

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 A man’s voice came suddenly from the loud speakers: “Participants in the Five-Mile Junior Fat-Tire Race, please gather behind the orange flags.” Hannah was very excited. First prize was a blue mountain bike. On such a bike, she’d fly through the woods. “Good luck, junior mountain bikers,” the loud-speaker voice came again. “Three, two, one, and go!” The lead-out was a girl with red braids(辫子). She pedaled off hard down the dirt road. The racers followed behind. The girl with red braids made a turn onto a part of single track and gathered speed. Hannah pulled up behind her, who sped up again. Hannah followed close behind her. Hannah watched for the orange arrows(箭头)marking the course and biked through the muddy fields. At the edge of the forest, the girl was kneeling(跪)by her bike. She must have gotten a flat tire. Hannah biked faster. She wiped the sweat from her eyes, breathless. Now Hannah was close enough to see the girl putting the chain on the chain ring. Hannah felt a jolt of energy as she passed the girl into the woods. Maybe she could win. In the middle of a small meadow, Hannah looked back. The girl was coming up behind her at a fast speed. Hannah entered the woods again. At a fork(岔口)in the trail, to her left, was the sign with the orange arrow. When she turned, her foot slipped off the pedal, and she accidentally kicked the sign over. I need to stop and fix the sign, she thought. The other racers might get lost. But even as she was thinking this, her feet kept moving faster, faster. “Hannah Anderson, winner of the Five-Mile Junior Fat-Tire Race!” a voice announced as she passed the finish line. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150个左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 “Hey!” Hannah turned and saw the girl with the braids jumping off her bike. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking at the new mountain bike, Hannah made a decision. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意： 汉娜参加五英里少年山地自行车赛，冠军奖品是一辆蓝色山地自行车。比赛中，扎着红辫子的女孩一开始领先，但中途在森林边缘因车胎爆了而停下修理。汉娜超过她进入树林，在树林中的岔路口转弯时，不小心踢倒了标记赛道的指示牌，虽有过回去扶正的念头，但因求胜心作祟未停下。最终汉娜冲过终点线赢得比赛。 伏笔及回应： · 伏笔：比赛途中扎红辫子女孩车胎爆了。 回应：在续写中可提及女孩因爆胎影响比赛结果，进而引发后续与汉娜的交流互动等情节。 · 伏笔：汉娜踢倒指示牌且未及时扶正。 回应：后续可能会因这个行为产生内心的愧疚挣扎，或者被其他选手发现后引发争议等情节。 续写要点： 第一段： · 故事线：红辫子女孩找汉娜理论，指责她故意踢倒指示牌，汉娜内心愧疚不知如何回应，周围观众开始议论纷纷，场面陷入僵局。 · 情感线：汉娜从夺冠的兴奋转为愧疚不安，女孩则是愤怒不满。 第二段： · 故事线：汉娜决定放弃冠军奖品，向赛事组委会坦白自己踢倒指示牌的行为，并提议和女孩一起重新比赛，女孩被汉娜的真诚打动，两人和解，赛事组委会同意重新比赛，其他选手也为她们的行为鼓掌。 · 情感线：汉娜从愧疚中走向释怀和坦然，女孩也从愤怒转为理解和敬佩，观众则被她们的行为所感染，充满赞赏之情。 主旨升华句： 1. “True victory lies not only in winning but also in facing one's mistakes with courage and integrity.”（真正的胜利不仅在于获胜，还在于勇敢且正直地面对自己的错误。） 2. “Honesty is the best policy, especially when it comes to the fairness of competition.”（诚实为上策，尤其在涉及比赛公正性时。） 3. “Admitting mistakes is a sign of strength and maturity, which can lead to a more honorable outcome.”（承认错误是力量和成熟的标志，这能带来更荣耀的结果。） 4. “In the pursuit of success, one's character is tested, and choosing the right path defines true greatness.”（在追求成功的道路上，人的品格受到考验，选择正确的道路才能定义真正的伟大。） 5. “The value of a competition is not just about the prize but also about the lessons of sportsmanship and integrity learned.”（比赛的价值不仅在于奖品，还在于所学到的体育精神和正直的品质。） 写作示范一： “Hey!” Hannah turned and saw the girl with the braids jumping off her bike. “You kicked over the sign on purpose, didn't you? That's not fair play!” The girl's face was flushed with anger. Hannah felt her cheeks burning with guilt. She opened her mouth but no words came out. The surrounding audience started to whisper and point. Hannah knew she had made a serious mistake. Looking at the new mountain bike, Hannah made a decision. She walked over to the event organizer and said, “I'm sorry. I accidentally kicked the sign over and didn't fix it. I don't deserve to win. I want to give up the prize and suggest a rematch with this girl.” The girl was taken aback by Hannah's confession. She looked at Hannah and said, “You're honest. Maybe we can have a fair race.” The organizer agreed, and the other racers applauded. Hannah felt a sense of relief, realizing that doing the right thing was more important than winning. 写作示范二： “Hey!” Hannah turned and saw the girl with the braids jumping off her bike. The girl stormed up to Hannah, her eyes blazing. “You knocked down the sign and left us all in the lurch. How could you?” Hannah's heart sank. She knew she had been in the wrong. She stammered, “I... I didn't mean to. I was just so focused on winning.” But the girl didn't seem to believe her. The crowd around them grew silent, waiting to see what would happen. Looking at the new mountain bike, Hannah made a decision. She took a deep breath and addressed the crowd. “I made a mistake. I shouldn't have left the sign down. This win isn't right. I want to forfeit the prize and have a proper race with all of you.” The girl's expression softened. “Okay, let's do it right this time.” The organizer reset the race, and Hannah felt a newfound respect from the other riders. She understood that in sports, integrity mattered more than any trophy. 【参考答案】 “Hey! Hannah turned and saw the girl with the braids jumping off her bike. “Good job,” the girl called to Hannah panting. “I thought I almost had you. but I must have missed a trail marker.” “You would have won if it hadn’t been for your bike chain and getting lost” Hannah mumbled. The girl was smiling, saying it was all part of racing. Hannah swallowed hard. The girl’s bike was rusty. No wonder her chain had jumped. Leading her new bike away after the award ceremony, Hannah felt like crying. She looked around for the girl with the braids and found her by the water stand. Looking at the new mountain bike. Hannah made a decision. “I accidently kicked the sign over.” Hanna said softly. The girl was quiet. “You know, at the fork in the trail. I tipped the sign,” Hannah said, a little louder. As she handed over the bike to the shocked girl, Hannah felt the lump in her throat disappear. “Are you sure...?” the girl asked. Hannah nodded. She was never so sure that she was doing the right thing in her life. The girl was beaming now, her finger moving along the shiny blue frame. Excited and earnest, she invited hannah to race in Copper Harbor taking place the next weekend. Hannah grinned, “Yes. Let’s see who wins then. Fair and square.” 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$