应用文写作 致外教 George 的感谢信：感谢您助力我在英文诗歌比赛中夺冠 讲义-湖南省长沙市第一中2024-2025学年高二上学期期中考试英语试题

应用文写作 假定你是李华，你在刚刚结束的校英文诗歌创作比赛中荣获一等奖。请给帮助你的外教 George写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 告知比赛结果； 2. 回顾他在诗歌创作技巧方面对你的帮助； 3. 表达感谢。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 写作提纲 第一段：告知比赛结果 · 开头问候：礼貌地问候外教 George。 · 说明主题：“I'm writing to share some great news. I won the first prize in the school English poetry writing competition.”（我写信是想分享一个好消息。我在学校英文诗歌创作比赛中获得了一等奖。） 第二段：回顾帮助 · 技巧指导：“I really appreciate your help with poetry - writing techniques. You taught me how to use vivid imagery, like comparing the moon to a silver plate.”（我非常感谢您在诗歌创作技巧方面对我的帮助。您教我如何使用生动的意象，比如把月亮比作银盘。） · 启发灵感：“You also inspired me to find inspiration from daily life, which broadened my creative vision.”（您还启发我从日常生活中寻找灵感，这拓宽了我的创作视野。） 第三段：表达感谢 · 诚挚感谢：“Thank you again. Your guidance has been invaluable to me, and I'll keep working hard on poetry writing.”（再次感谢您。您的指导对我来说非常宝贵，我会继续努力写诗。） 语言积累 1. “I'm so excited to tell you that I achieved the first - place honor in the competition.”（我很兴奋地告诉你我在比赛中获得了第一名的荣誉。） 2. “Your lessons on rhyme and rhythm have been extremely helpful in my poem - creating process.”（您关于韵律和节奏的课程在我的诗歌创作过程中非常有帮助。） 3. “You showed me how to make my poems more expressive by using metaphors.”（您向我展示了如何通过使用隐喻使我的诗歌更有表现力。） 4. “Thanks to your advice, I learned to create a unique atmosphere in my poems.”（多亏了您的建议，我学会了在我的诗歌中营造独特的氛围。） 5. “I'm deeply grateful for your patient guidance in polishing my poetic language.”（我深深感谢您在润色我的诗歌语言方面的耐心指导。） 6. “Your encouragement and instruction have made a huge difference in my poetry - writing journey.”（您的鼓励和指导在我的诗歌创作之旅中产生了巨大的影响。） 7. “You helped me understand the importance of choosing the right words in poetry.”（您帮助我理解了在诗歌中选择正确词汇的重要性。） 8. “I remember when you taught me to structure a poem logically.”（我记得您教我如何有逻辑地构建一首诗歌的时候。） 9. “Your insights into poetry have opened a new door for me in the creative world.”（您对诗歌的见解在创作领域为我打开了一扇新的门。） 10. “I can't thank you enough for your assistance in making my poem outstanding.”（我非常感谢您帮助我使我的诗歌脱颖而出。） 写作示范（三篇） 第一篇 Dear George, Hello! I'm writing to tell you that I won the first prize in the school English poetry writing competition. I'm really excited. I want to thank you for your help. You taught me many useful poetry - writing techniques. You told me to focus on the details and use them to convey deep emotions. You also explained how to make the lines flow smoothly with rhythm. Thank you again. Your help has been crucial to my success. Best regards, Li Hua 第二篇 Dear George, I hope this email finds you well. I have some wonderful news to share. I just won the first prize in the school English poetry writing contest. I can't forget how you helped me with my poetry writing. You introduced me to various styles of poetry and helped me understand how to use different poetic devices to make my work more engaging. For example, you taught me how to use alliteration to create a musical effect. Thank you from the bottom of my heart. Your support and guidance have meant so much to me. Yours, Li Hua 第三篇 Dear George, Greetings! I'm Li Hua. I'm writing to let you know that I got the first prize in the recent school English poetry writing competition. I'm truly grateful for your assistance. You spent so much time teaching me how to structure a poem, like having a clear beginning, middle, and end. You also taught me to use symbolism to add depth to my poems. Your tips on making the language concise yet powerful have been really useful. Thank you once again. I look forward to learning more from you. Sincerely, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear George, I hope this email finds you well! I am more than excited to keep you informed that I have won the first prize in the English. poetry competition which has just ended in our school. I still remember the days when you corrected my grammatical mistakes and instructed me how to create sound and sense with great patience. It is your professional knowledge and rigorous teaching attitude that benefit me a lot. Without your help, I would not have made such great progress. Words fail to express my gratitude for your help and support. Your generous assistance has not only improved my writing skills, but-also stimulated my enthusiasm and confidence in English learning. Yours, Li Hua 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$