读后续写 黑暗中的惊喜：Sally 生日的波折与温暖 讲义-湖南省长沙市第一中学2024-2025学年高二上学期期中考试英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Sally’s birthday was approaching, and the excitement that usually filled her heart was now replaced with disappointment and stress. Turning eleven was a big deal, and she had always celebrated it with a grand party surrounded by her friends. However, this year was different. The burden of excessive homework and her parents’ struggling business weighed heavily on her, forcing Sally to make the difficult decision of not having a birthday party, even though it was an event she enjoyed. dearly every year. One day, during the break, her best friend, Jane, with a curious look in her eyes. approached. “Are you going to have a birthday party this year? ” Jane asked, sensing Sally’s sadness. “No, ” Sally sighed and replied sadly, “there’s just too much going on and my parents are going through financial difficulties. ” She smiled weakly, trying to conceal her immense disappointment and stress, but Jane saw through her pretence easily. Jane nodded thoughtfully and did not say anything. After the break, Sally saw her talking to one of their classmates, Sarah, secretively. Curious, Sally went over to them, but as soon as Jane saw her, she quickly walked away. Sally was startled（使受惊）by Jane’s strange actions and turned towards Sarah. “What did she say? ” Sally asked. However, Sarah simply shrugged and walked away, leaving Sally standing there, feeling left out and anxious. “What is happening? ” Sally wondered anxiously. “Are they keeping something from me? ” As Sally’s birthday drew nearer, Jane was often found chatting softly with their other classmates. Whenever Sally went over to them, they would just walk away or tell her that they were talking about a secret which Sally was not allowed to know. “Jane has never kept secrets from me before, ” Sally thought. Her heart fell. Even her friends were distancing themselves from her! She swung between confusion and sadness with each passing moment, desperately trying to figure out what was happening. Why were her friends distancing themselves from her? And what were they hiding?     注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。       第一段：On the day of Sally’s birthday, she went to school and found her classroom in total darkness.            第二段；Tears sprang from Sally’s eyes and her face broke into a radiant smile.  文章大意 Sally 的生日快到了，但因作业繁重和父母生意困难，她决定不办生日派对。好友 Jane 询问后，行为变得很奇怪，常和其他同学悄悄交谈，每当 Sally 靠近，他们就走开或说在谈秘密不让 Sally 知道，这让 Sally 既困惑又伤心，怀疑朋友们在疏远自己。 几处伏笔以及在续写中的回应 · 伏笔：Jane 和同学们的神秘举动，如悄悄聊天、避开 Sally。 · 回应：在续写中揭示他们是在为 Sally 准备生日惊喜。 续写要点 第一段（情感线：惊讶、疑惑；故事线：发现教室黑暗，不知所以） On the day of Sally’s birthday, she went to school and found her classroom in total darkness. Her heart raced with a mix of surprise and confusion. As she stood at the doorway, she wondered if something had gone wrong. Just then, a soft sound caught her attention. Before she could react, the lights suddenly flashed on, and she was greeted by the sight of her classmates and teacher, all wearing big smiles. 第二段（情感线：感动、喜悦；故事线：明白是惊喜派对，感动落泪） Tears sprang from Sally’s eyes and her face broke into a radiant smile. She realized that her friends hadn't been distancing themselves at all. They had been planning this surprise for her. In the middle of the classroom, there was a beautiful cake with eleven candles. Jane came forward and hugged her. “Happy birthday, Sally! We couldn't let your birthday pass without a celebration.” Sally felt an overwhelming sense of love and gratitude. 主旨升华句（5 句英文） 1. True friendship shines brightly even in the darkest times of our lives. 2. The love of friends can turn a disappointing situation into a beautiful surprise. 3. Sometimes, what seems like betrayal is actually a hidden act of kindness from friends. 4. In friendship, secrets can be the seeds of the most heartwarming surprises. 5. Friends are the ones who make our difficult days filled with unexpected joys. 两篇写作示范 第一篇 第一段：On the day of Sally’s birthday, she went to school and found her classroom in total darkness. She felt a shiver of fear run down her spine. Her mind raced with all sorts of possibilities. Was this some kind of prank? As she took a hesitant step forward, she heard a faint whisper. Then, the lights flickered on, and she saw colorful balloons floating everywhere. Her classmates emerged from behind desks and cabinets, shouting “Surprise!” 第二段：Tears sprang from Sally’s eyes and her face broke into a radiant smile. She understood now that all the secrecy was for this wonderful moment. Her heart swelled with love for her friends. Jane came up to her and said, “We knew you were sad about not having a party, so we wanted to make it special for you.” Sally realized that friendship can overcome any obstacle and create beautiful memories. 第二篇 第一段：On the day of Sally’s birthday, she went to school and found her classroom in total darkness. She was bewildered and a bit scared. But then she noticed a faint glow at the back of the classroom. As she walked towards it, she could hear muffled giggles. When she got closer, she saw a path of candles leading to a table filled with presents. 第二段：Tears sprang from Sally’s eyes and her face broke into a radiant smile. She was deeply touched by this unexpected surprise. Her friends had not abandoned her. Instead, they had worked hard to give her a memorable birthday. She hugged each of them tightly, knowing that their friendship was truly precious. It was a reminder that even in tough times, love and friendship can bring light. 参考答案 On the day of Sally’s birthday, she went to school and found her classroom in total darkness. A wave of confusion washed over her as she stepped hesitantly into the room, her heart pounding. She reached for the light switch, but before her hand could find it, a chorus of voices broke the silence. “Surprise! ” her classmates, led by Jane, jumped out from’ all sorts of hiding places. As the room was flooded with light, Sally’s eyes widened in surprise and disbelief. The classroom was decorated with balloons and streamers, a beautiful cake sitting on the teacher’s desk, and in the corner, a pile of presents waiting to be unwrapped. Tears sprang from Sally’s eyes and her face broke into a radiant smile. She turned towards Jane, who was grinning from ear to ear. “We knew you couldn’t have a party this year, so we decided to bring the party to you, ” Jane said, her eyes twinkling with naughtiness. The confusion that fogged her brain was cleared as she realized that her friends hadn’t been distancing themselves from her, and they were planning this surprise all along. The sadness that had been looming over her disappeared, replaced with joy and gratitude. One thing Sally was sure of was that it was indeed the most fantastic birthday party she had had.                学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$