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I didn't like Del so much. He always called me the nickname “Germy,” which meant “dirty,” instead of my real name “Jamie.” Besides, he was known as a trouble-maker in school. So when the head teacher Mr. Smith asked Del to come to his office, I naturally thought that Del had done something mean to someone. Through the window, I caught sight of a smaller boy crying. Del seemed unhappy, too.
He did not return to class that day. All of us were discussing what had happened to him. What else could such an annoying boy do? “He must have hit the boy and was sent home,” I whispered to my friends. Their eyes widened. It felt good to see them so interested in what I said.
The next morning, the whole school was talking about Del being expelled(开除) for beating up a kid. I was surprised that my assumptions were passed on so quickly. So when Del walked into the classroom, all the kids were shocked. The kids next to him shifted their desks away. “What's your problem?” Del asked. “I don't want you to attack me,” one kid said. Some laughed. “Yeah, I might,” said Del. I could tell he was joking, but many kids thought he admitted he did beat up someone.
During recess(课间休息), Del tried to join the kickball game. “Neither team wants you,” one of the players said. “Why?” Del asked, looking confused. “I always play with you guys.” They ignored him and went on playing. Del sat by himself while the rest of the school enjoyed their recess away from him. Del looked lonely and sad, much different from before. I started to feel sorry for him.
Later that day, I learned what really happened. The kid was Del's little brother and he was crying because their mother fell ill and was sent to hospital. I felt even sorrier for what I said before. I started a rumor(谣言).
注意:
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2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
At recess the next day. I saw Del sitting alone watching the kickball game. _______________________________
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Now that Del had forgiven me. I decided to do more before the recess was over.___________________________
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文章大意:“我” 不喜欢 Del,他总叫 “我” 外号且是学校捣蛋鬼。看到他被老师叫去办公室,“我” 便猜测他欺负了小男孩并将此猜测传播开,导致大家都误解他。第二天他回校被众人疏离,“我” 才得知那小男孩是他弟弟,其母亲生病住院他才被误会,“我” 感到愧疚。
伏笔及回应:伏笔是 “我” 对 Del 的误解以及他被众人孤立后的落寞,续写中应是 “我” 主动去弥补过错,Del 原谅 “我”,然后 “我” 进一步为他做更多事来挽回影响。
续写要点:
· 第一段:“我” 鼓起勇气走向 Del,向他道歉,承认是自己散布谣言导致大家误会他,Del 虽有些惊讶但很快原谅了 “我”,表示理解 “我” 当时的想法,因为他平时形象不佳,这让 “我” 更加愧疚。
· 第二段:“我” 决定在课间结束前为 Del 做更多事,于是走向正在踢球的同学们,向他们解释事情真相,同学们听后都露出愧疚之色,纷纷邀请 Del 一起踢球,Del 开心地加入,“我” 也因弥补了过错而感到欣慰,同时也明白了不能轻易误解他人和传播谣言。
情感线:从最初对 Del 的厌恶,到误解他后的些许得意,再到得知真相后的愧疚,道歉时的忐忑与被原谅后的释然,最后为他挽回局面时的欣慰。
故事线:“我” 讨厌 Del - 见他被老师叫走后误解并传播谣言 - 他回校被孤立 - 得知真相后愧疚 - 道歉并被原谅 - 为他挽回局面。
主旨升华句:
1. A hasty judgment may lead to unjust treatment; a sincere apology can mend a broken connection.(仓促的判断可能导致不公正的对待;真诚的道歉可以修复破裂的关系。)
2. Rumors are like wildfires, burning bridges before the truth is known.(谣言如同野火,在真相大白之前就烧毁了桥梁。)
3. Understanding and forgiveness can heal the wounds caused by misjudgment.(理解和原谅可以治愈误判造成的伤口。)
4. The tongue is a double-edged sword; use it with care to avoid hurting others.(舌头是一把双刃剑;谨慎使用以免伤害他人。)
5. True repentance is the first step towards rebuilding trust and friendship.(真正的忏悔是重建信任和友谊的第一步。)
写作示范一:
At recess the next day. I saw Del sitting alone watching the kickball game. I took a deep breath and walked over to him. I said, “Del, I'm really sorry. I made up that rumor about you. I didn't know the truth.” Del looked at me in surprise. After a moment, he said, “It's okay. I know I'm not always liked. But it hurt when everyone believed it.” I felt even worse.
Now that Del had forgiven me. I decided to do more before the recess was over. I went to the kids playing kickball. I told them what had really happened, that the boy was Del's brother and his mom was sick. They all looked ashamed. Then one of them called out, “Del, come play with us!” Del's face lit up and he ran over. I watched them play and felt relieved that I had made things right.
写作示范二:
At recess the next day. I saw Del sitting alone watching the kickball game. I mustered my courage and approached him. “Del, I'm sorry. I started the rumor. I was wrong.” I said nervously. Del smiled faintly and replied, “I figured it was you. But thanks for coming to me. I was really down.” I was touched by his kindness.
Now that Del had forgiven me. I decided to do more before the recess was over. I walked up to the kickball players and said, “Guys, we misunderstood Del. His brother was upset about their mom's illness. We shouldn't have shunned him.” They stopped playing and nodded. Then they invited Del to join. Del joined in, laughing and playing. I was glad that I could correct my mistake and learned not to judge too quickly.
续写范文
At recess the next day, I saw Del sitting alone watching the kickball game. I walked up to him, so nervous that I could hardly talk. “Hey,” I said. “What do you want, Germy?” Del said impatiently without taking his eyes off the game. I could feel something in his voice sounded more hurt than angry. I summoned up my courage and explained to him the whole story. Surprised and angry, Del looked at me with an unbelievable look. “I will tell everyone the truth,” I promised. Del’s face softened a bit. “Okay, Jamie. I owe you an apology too,” he said with a shrug. It was the first time he'd used my real name. I almost smiled. I knew I had done the right thing.
Now that Del had forgiven me, I decided to do more before recess was over: The game was still going on. I approached the players and asked them to stop for a moment. Everyone, including Del, was surprised. “Guys, I am sorry, but I got something to say.” I admitted that it was I who started the rumor. “Del didn’t beat up anyone,” I said. Upon hearing this, the players were confused for a brief moment but soon figured out what had really happened. “Hey, welcome back,” They waved to Del. Del nodded willingly, with a happy look back to his face. Seeing Del playing the game vigorously, I finally felt relieved that I eventually mended a big mistake.
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