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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
As a sixth grader, I found it hard to fit in and make friends.
Our teacher had assigned (分派, 布置) “secret friends” for the coming week. She wrote each kid's name on a piece of paper and threw them into a glass; then we each closed our eyes and picked out one. By the middle of the week,everyone had turned this assignment into a competition to see whose secret friend could leave the best gift. It seemed that everyone was getting cool presents from their friend except me.
On the last morning of our assignment. I walked into my classroom and noticed a package with a box of powder (胭脂粉). The girls sitting near me laughed at the gift I had received. What's worse, the powder had already been opened.
I tried to forget about the embarrassing gift, but when I was in the bathroom during the break, the girls started speaking ill of my secret friend of giving it to me. I quickly joined in. “How terrible,” I heard myself saying “What could my friend be thinking by giving me such a stupid gift? My grandmother wouldn't even want it.” The girls laughed at my remarks (评论) and rushed out of the bathroom. I stayed to wash my hands and let water run through my fingers as I thought about what I had just said. It wasn't normal like me to say mean (刻薄的) things like that about someone.
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Then I saw my classmate Janet come out of a bathroom booth (厕所隔间), tears streaming down her face.
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Along with my apologies, I explained the reason.
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文章大意:六年级时,老师布置了 “秘密朋友” 任务,大家都在比谁收到的礼物更好,而 “我” 收到一盒已开封的胭脂粉,遭同学嘲笑,“我” 也加入说刻薄话。没想到这礼物是 Janet 送的,她从厕所隔间出来满脸泪水,让 “我” 意识到自己的错误。
伏笔及回应:礼物是胭脂粉且已开封,为后文揭示是 Janet 送的且她听到 “我” 的恶语埋下伏笔。在续写中,“我” 看到 Janet 哭泣而明白真相,从而向她道歉并解释原因。
续写要点:
· 第一段:描述 Janet 哭泣的样子,“我” 内心的愧疚与懊悔,主动走向她并道歉。
· 第二段:说明 “我” 因受同学影响、想融入群体而说出那些话,强调自己并非真心,表达对 Janet 礼物的理解与感激,提及友谊的珍贵。
情感线:从最初因礼物被嘲笑的难堪与不满,到说刻薄话后的些许得意,再到看到 Janet 哭泣的愧疚、懊悔与自责,最后在道歉和解中体会到友谊的重要与包容。
故事线:老师布置任务 - 收到不受欢迎的礼物 - 嘲笑礼物 - Janet 因听到而哭泣 - “我” 道歉和解。
主旨升华句:
1. True friendship is not about perfect gifts, but about understanding and forgiveness.(真正的友谊不在于完美的礼物,而在于理解与原谅。)
2. In the journey of friendship, we may stumble, but it's the sincere apology and acceptance that matter.(在友谊的旅程中,我们可能会犯错,但真诚的道歉与接受才是关键。)
3. A kind heart can heal the wound caused by hasty words in friendship.(一颗善良的心可以治愈友谊中因草率言语造成的伤口。)
4. Friendship is a bond that withstands the test of thoughtless mistakes.(友谊是一种能经受住无心之失考验的纽带。)
5. The essence of friendship lies in the ability to admit our faults and cherish each other.(友谊的本质在于承认错误并珍惜彼此的能力。)
写作示范一:
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Then I saw my classmate Janet come out of a bathroom booth, tears streaming down her face. My heart plummeted. I knew instantly that I had deeply hurt her. I walked over to her, my legs feeling like lead. “Janet, I'm so sorry,” I stammered. She looked at me with red, swollen eyes, and I felt a pang of remorse. I should have known better than to join in the cruel banter.
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Along with my apologies, I explained the reason. I told her that I was just trying to fit in with the other girls and didn't mean what I said. I said that I actually appreciated her gift and that it was very kind of her. Janet listened quietly. Then she said, “I just wanted to give you something nice. I thought you might like it.” We hugged, and I realized that a true friend is more precious than any cool gift.
写作示范二:
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Then I saw my classmate Janet come out of a bathroom booth, tears streaming down her face. I froze, the guilt washing over me. I couldn't believe I had been so mean. I stepped forward and gently touched her arm. “Janet, I'm terribly sorry. I was wrong,” I said, my voice quivering. She sobbed, and I felt like the worst person in the world.
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Along with my apologies, I explained the reason. I admitted that I let the peer pressure get to me and that my words were completely out of line. I told her how much I regretted it and that her gift was special because it came from her. Janet slowly stopped crying. She said, “I forgive you. Let's be better friends.” At that moment, I understood that friendship is about accepting each other's flaws and growing together.
【参考答案】
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Then I saw my classmate Janet come out of a bathroom booth(厕所隔间), tears streaming down her face. She shouted at me with anger, “If you don’t want my gift you can just leave it instead of laughing at it. This is the best powder from my mum! “Before I could say a word, Janet dashed out, leaving me dumb with deep regret. But soon I clenched my fingers and made up my mind to find Janet and say sorry to her. There she was, sitting in a tree shadow wiping her eyes.
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Along with my apologies, I explained the reason. I was not a mean girl by judging people’s presents. The reason why I complained in front of the girls was that I wanted to fit in, having a sense of belonging in the group. Hearing my sincere words, Janet calmed herself down after constant sobs and said, “True friendship comes from genuine care and love for each other. I think that’s our teacher’s intention of this ‘secret friend’ assignment”. That day, I learned to cherish real friendship.
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