内容正文:
Writing
Suggestion Letter
建 议 信
Lead in: Free talk
In a piece of English test paper , which part do you think is the most difficult?
Reading?
Close ?
Grammar?
Writing?
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Administrator (A) -
1. Know the structure of suggestion letter.
2. Learn how to write a good suggestion letter and master some good expressions, phrases, and good sentence patterns.
学习目标
假设你是李华,最近收到朋友Bob的一封来信。信中Bob想让你给他提出一些关于课下怎样学习英语的建议。请你就此给他写一封回信。
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Step 1:analyze (审题)
problems conclusion
which person(第几人称)
what type(什么体裁)
what topic(什么主题)
what tense (写作时态)
first person
suggestion letter
suggetions of
learning English
simple present tense
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suggestion letter
beginning
body
ending
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Step 2. Structure(结构)
problems and purposes of writing
suggestions of learning English
hopes and wishes
______ parts
表明意图
提出建议
表明希望
Step 3: Prepare for writing:
Master some sentences for beginning and ending:
para 1: Beginning:
1. I’m glad to receive your letter, asking for my
advice on how to ... , My suggestions are as follows.
2. I've received your letter, saying you have trouble
in... , Here are some suggestions for you.
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para 2: Ending:
1. I hope you will find these proposals /suggestions useful/ helpful/practical.
2. As long as you choose the right approach and
stick to it, You will surely learn English well.
3. ...
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Step4: find key points of the body(要点)
learning English beyond the classroom
listen to English songs
read English books
watch English
films
...
visit English learning website
Brainstorming
useful phrases
1.当提到
2.课下学英语
3.听从某人的建议
4.提高听力技能
5.练习口语
6.开阔我们的视野
7.拓展词汇
8.在我看来
9.非常有益
when it comes to
learn English beyond classroom
/ after classes
follow one's advice
improve listening skills
practice oral/spoken English
broaden our horizons
expand vocabulary
in my opinion/as far as i’m concerned
be of great benefit
Brainstorming
transition words(过渡词)
表先后:
表递进
First,second,... Finally
To begin/start with, ... At last/last but not least
what's more, furthermore, not only...but also, besides,in other words,meanwhile,
for one thing...for another...
Brainstorming
Step 5: Finish para 2: body
group work
1.当提到课下学英语,首先,我认为你最好读一些英语书,
这不仅帮助你学习读英语,而且可以拓展你的视野。
2.此外,在我看来,你可以听英语歌曲,提高听力能力。
3.最后,当与人交流时,我坚信你应该多说英语来练习口语。
翻译下面的句子:
Show Time:
1.当提到课下学英语,首先,我认为你最好读一些英语书,这不仅帮助你学习读英语,而且可以拓展你的视野。
2.此外,在我看来,听英语歌曲来提高听力能力会是明智的。
3.最后,当与人交流时,我坚信你应该多说英语来练习口语。
When it comes to ... , to start with,I think you’d better ... , which can not only help you ... but also...
Besides, In my opinion, it would be wise to ... to ... .
Last but not least, when ... ,I firmly believe that you
should ... as often as possible , ... .
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Step6. polish your writing(润色)
How to polish your writing?
A. excellent words and phrases
(词汇短语的选择灵活新颖)
B. a variety of sentence patterns
(句型结构运用高级多变)
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Use a variety of sentence patterns
丰富句型
1. Reading English books helps a lot.(改为强调句)
___ is reading English books _____ helps a lot.
2.When you communicate with others, you should talk in English as often as possible.(改为省略句)
When ____________ with others, you should talk in English as often as possible.
It
that
communicating
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Use a variety of sentence patterns
3. I want to suggest you reading more English books.(改为名词性从句)
______ I want to suggest is _____ you can read more English books, which will be of great benefit.
4.You should watch English films, because it can develop your listening skills.(改为定语从句加名词性从句)
The reason _____ you should watch English films is _____ it can develop your listening skills.
What
that
why
that
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范文:
Dear Bob,
I’m glad to receive your letter, asking for my advice on how to learn English after classes, My suggestions are as follows.
When it comes to learning English after classes, to start with,I think you’d better read more English books, which can not only help you learn to read English but also broaden your horizons. Besides, In my opinion, it would be wise to listen to English songs to improve your listening skills.Last but not least, when communicating with others,I firmly believe that you should talk in English as often as possible , practicing your oral English.
I hope you will find these proposals useful.
Yours,
Li Hua
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a good
composition
structure
contents
language
beauty
be attractive, finished in a limited time!
Summary
假设你是学生李华,你的朋友Tom
在生活中遇到了一些困难,害羞胆小,在学校没有好朋友,因此他在几天前给你发电子邮件求助,询问怎样结交好朋友。请你给他回复你的建议。
注意:
1.词数:100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,尽量使用课堂上学到的词汇、短语及句型,使行文连贯。
Step 7 Homework :
模板:
Dear XX,
I’m glad to receive your letter, asking for my advice on how to ... , My suggestions are as follows.
When it comes to ... , to start with,I think you’d better ... , which can not only help you ... but also ... . Besides, In my opinion, it would be wise to ... to ... .Last but not least, when ... ,I firmly believe that you should ... , ... .
As long as you choose the right approach and stick to it, You will surely learn English well.
Yours,
Li Hua
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Thank you !
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