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专题10 书面表达12篇 1．（23-24高二上·上海·期末）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是Jerry，你的朋友Lear准备设计一款智能手机app，可以帮助高中学生学习。他来信征求你的建议。请你给他回信，内容包括： （1）你需要的app的名称和功能； （2）你需要该app的理由； （3）你给该app的建议。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（23-24高二上·上海黄浦·期末）Directions: Write an English composition in about 100 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是启明中学高二学生李明。你的笔友约翰近日发邮件和你说，他拟使用数字化学习工具来辅助完成作业，想听取你的意见。请回复电子邮件给笔友，内容须包含： 1. 对此做法的态度； 2. 结合个人经历给出你的理由。 (文章中请不要出现真实的校名和姓名) ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（23-24高二上·上海·期末）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 从“食物选择”的角度，谈谈你对“低碳生活”的看法，怎样做到“低碳生活”，提出合理建议，并说明理由。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（23-24高二上·上海浦东新·期末）Directions: Write an English composition in around 120 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 线上学习期间，你班（校）一定开展过各种丰富多彩的线上活动。请以An Unforgettable Online Class (or School) Activity为题，记叙一次让你难忘的线上活动。 内容须包括：介绍该线上活动的主要内容；该活动对你的影响。 (*注意：不要出现真实的校名、姓名) ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（23-24高二上·上海宝山·期末）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学的学生吴磊，你校英文报《英语拾零》（English Sidelights）正庆祝创刊十周年，请你写一篇文章投稿，内容包括： ● 读报的经历； ● 喜爱的栏目； ● 期望和祝福。 （文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称） ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（23-24高二上·上海浦东新·期末）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 学校规定，学生在校期间不得使用手机，有的同学认为这是一项非常好的制度，但也有同学不以为然。请谈谈你对这一规定的看法，并给出理由。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．（23-24高二上·上海崇明·期末）Directions: Write an English composition in at least 100 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是李华，你的同班同学小明觉得自己手机太旧，想要一部最新的iPhone，但是他的父母不同意，小明为此很苦恼，请给他写一封信，谈谈你对此事的看法。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（23-24高二上·上海·期末）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学学生王磊，你的好朋友李明最近收到了心仪已久的一所美国大学的offer， 但是因为疫情(pandemic)原因，李明非常纠结是奔赴美国完成学业，还是申请“间隔年(gap year)”。作为他的好友，请你写封信给他。你的信应包含以下内容： 1.你的建议； 2.你提出此建议的理由。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．（23-24高二上·上海·期末）Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是李华，你的同班同学小明觉得自己的手机太旧，想买个最新款的iPhone，可是他的父母不同意，为此他很苦恼。请你给他写封信，谈谈你的看法。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．（22-23高二上·上海·期末）Directions:Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 学校计划对校园环境进行优化，校长就设计方案征求学生的意见。假设你是李华，给校长写一封信，对设计方案提出一些建议。你的信必须包括以下内容： 1. 谈谈你建议的具体内容； 2. 说明你的理由（从学生的学习、活动等角度进行说明） ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11．（21-22高二上·上海虹口·期末）Directions: Write an English composition in 120 - 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是明启中学的李华，学校校报正在开展关于线上直播课(live-streamed lessons)的讨论。有人觉得线上直播课让学习更加灵活，拓展了学习的空间和时间。然而，也有人觉得线上直播课存在缺乏互动、学习效率不高等问题。请投稿给学校校报，就此话题结合个人实际谈谈你的看法。 你的投稿须包含： 1. 你对此话题的看法； 2. 你的个人实际。 12．（21-22高二上·上海奉贤·期末）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 现在中国购物网站非常繁荣，很多人选择网上购物而不是去商场实体店购物，你更倾向于哪种购物方式，并说出你的理由。 注意:请勿出现真实的学校及姓名。 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！22 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 专题10 书面表达12篇 1．（23-24高二上·上海·期末）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是Jerry，你的朋友Lear准备设计一款智能手机app，可以帮助高中学生学习。他来信征求你的建议。请你给他回信，内容包括： （1）你需要的app的名称和功能； （2）你需要该app的理由； （3）你给该app的建议。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】I need an APP to prevent class slippage. It's called Stay Awake. Its main function is that when I feel sleepy, the APP will automatically issue an alarm to remind me to improve my attention in class. More and more students are sleeping in class. I really want to control this bad habit, but we find it difficult to control ourselves. In order to better improve class efficiency and my state, I need an App that can feel heat and breath and remind me to not to sleep at all times. The APP should be designed to be easy to use, and have computational capabilities and data display function without disturbing the people around me. I hope I can benefit from your invention. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生的朋友Lear准备设计一款智能手机app，可以帮助高中学生学习。他来信征求考生的建议。请考生给他回信。 【详解】1.词汇积累 提高：improve→promote 控制：control→contain 有：have→possess 想要做某事：want to do sth→would like to do sth 2.句式拓展 同义句 原句：The APP should be designed to be easy to use, and have computational capabilities and data display function without disturbing the people around me. 拓展句：The APP should be designed to be easy to use, having computational capabilities and data display function without disturbing the people around me. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Its main function is that when I feel sleepy, the APP will automatically issue an alarm to remind me to improve my attention in class.（运用了that引导的表语从句和when引导的时间状语从句） 【高分句型2】In order to better improve class efficiency and my state, I need an App that can feel heat and breath and remind me to not to sleep at all times.（运用了不定式作目的状语和that引导的定语从句） 2．（23-24高二上·上海黄浦·期末）Directions: Write an English composition in about 100 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是启明中学高二学生李明。你的笔友约翰近日发邮件和你说，他拟使用数字化学习工具来辅助完成作业，想听取你的意见。请回复电子邮件给笔友，内容须包含： 1. 对此做法的态度； 2. 结合个人经历给出你的理由。 (文章中请不要出现真实的校名和姓名) ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear John, I’m glad to hear you’re considering using digital learning tools to aid your studies. I fully support this idea. In my own experience, digital tools have greatly enhanced my learning efficiency. They provide instant access to a wealth of resources, from online tutorials to interactive simulations. Moreover, these tools often make complex concepts more visual and understandable. I believe they can be equally beneficial for you. Feel free to explore and experiment with various tools to find the ones that suit you best. I’m confident they will help you achieve your academic goals. Yours, Li Ming 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你的笔友约翰近日发邮件说，他拟使用数字化学习工具来辅助完成作业，想听取你的意见。要求考生回复电子邮件给笔友。 【详解】1.词汇积累 高兴的：glad→delighted 考虑：consider→take into account 支持：support→approve 有益的：beneficial→rewarding 2.句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：In my own experience, digital tools have greatly enhanced my learning efficiency. They provide instant access to a wealth of resources, from online tutorials to interactive simulations. 拓展句：In my own experience, not only do digital tools have greatly enhanced my learning efficiency, but also they provide instant access to a wealth of resources, from online tutorials to interactive simulations. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Feel free to explore and experiment with various tools to find the ones that suit you best. (运用了that引导定语从句) [高分句型2] I believe they can be equally beneficial for you. (运用了省略that的宾语从句) 3．（23-24高二上·上海·期末）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 从“食物选择”的角度，谈谈你对“低碳生活”的看法，怎样做到“低碳生活”，提出合理建议，并说明理由。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】When it comes to food choices, first of all, I prefer the vegetables grown in natural sunlight instead of in the heated greenhouses and those not stored in plastic containers because they are eco-friendly. We can also avoid the imported foods since more fuels are used and lots of emission is released when we transport food over long distances. What’s more, I will bring cloth bags for my next trip to the supermarket, because the plastic bags provided by the supermarket usually go to the rubbish dump since they are not recyclable. Last but not least, I’d eat less meat. Cows, sheep and pigs produce more gases that are bad for the environment such as methane when their food is digested. In short, there will be greenhouse gases released into the atmosphere because of human’s daily activities. Therefore, we, as global citizens, should shoulder duties to protect our earth. 【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生从“食物选择”的角度，谈谈对“低碳生活”的看法，怎样做到“低碳生活”，提出合理建议，并说明理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 此外：What’s more→In addition 提供：provide→ supply 对……有害：be bad for→be harmful to 因为：because of →due to 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：What’s more, I will bring cloth bags for my next trip to the supermarket, because the plastic bags provided by the supermarket usually go to the rubbish dump since they are not recyclable. 拓展句：What’s more, I will bring cloth bags for my next trip to the supermarket, because the plastic bags which are provided by the supermarket usually go to the rubbish dump since they are not recyclable. 【点睛】【高分句型1】We can also avoid the imported foods since more fuels are used and lots of emission is released when we transport food over long distances.（运用了since引导的原因状语从句和when引导的时间状语从句） 【高分句型2】Cows, sheep and pigs produce more gases that are bad for the environment such as methane when their food is digested. （运用了that引导的限制性定语从句和when引导的时间状语从句） 4．（23-24高二上·上海浦东新·期末）Directions: Write an English composition in around 120 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 线上学习期间，你班（校）一定开展过各种丰富多彩的线上活动。请以An Unforgettable Online Class (or School) Activity为题，记叙一次让你难忘的线上活动。 内容须包括：介绍该线上活动的主要内容；该活动对你的影响。 (*注意：不要出现真实的校名、姓名) ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】An Unforgettable Online Class Activity During the online learning period, my class organized a memorable online activity which I will never forget. It was a virtual cultural exchange program where we got to interact with students from a school in a different country. During the program, we got to learn about the cultural practices, beliefs, and values of the students from the other country. We shared our own cultural practices, beliefs, and values in return. It was a great opportunity to learn about different cultures and to appreciate diversity. This activity had a profound impact on me. I became more open-minded, and I learned to embrace diversity and different perspectives. It was an enriching experience that taught me to be more respectful of people from different backgrounds. It also helped me to improve my communication and interpersonal skills. Overall, this virtual cultural exchange program was an unforgettable experience, and I’m grateful to have had the opportunity to participate in it. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以An Unforgettable Online Class (or School) Activity为题，讲叙一次让自己难忘的线上活动。 【详解】1.词汇积累 机会：opportunity →chance 不同的：different →varied 总的来说：overall →on the whole 参加：participate in →take part in 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：This activity had a profound impact on me.   拓展句：This activity which I took part in had a profound impact on me. 【点睛】[高分句型1] During the online learning period, my class organized a memorable online activity which I will never forget. (运用了which引导的定语从句) [高分句型2] It was a virtual cultural exchange program where we got to interact with students from a school in a different country. (运用了where引导的定语从句) 5．（23-24高二上·上海宝山·期末）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学的学生吴磊，你校英文报《英语拾零》（English Sidelights）正庆祝创刊十周年，请你写一篇文章投稿，内容包括： ● 读报的经历； ● 喜爱的栏目； ● 期望和祝福。 （文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称） ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 English Sidelights and Me I have been an avid reader of English Sidelights since the day my teacher recommended it to me. I remember that the first time I picked up a copy of the paper, I was struck by the quality of the writing and the depth of the coverage. Since then, I have made it a habit to read it every day. One of my favorite sections is the Opinion. I appreciate the diverse range of views and perspectives presented in this section. The editorials are well-researched and thought-provoking, and the guest commentaries offer fresh insights into a variety of issues. I expect the paper to stay true to its core values and to continue to provide readers with high-quality reporting and analysis. On this special occasion of the 10th anniversary of English Sidelights, I hope the paper will thrive and grow in the years ahead. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校英文报《英语拾零》正庆祝创刊十周年，要求考生按照要求写一篇文章投稿。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 热衷的：avid→ keen 呈现：present→ show 提供：offer→ provide 各种各样的：a variety of→ various 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I appreciate the diverse range of views and perspectives presented in this section. 拓展句：I appreciate the diverse range of views and perspectives that are presented in this section. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I remember that the first time I picked up a copy of the paper, I was struck by the quality of the writing and the depth of the coverage.（运用了that引导的宾语从句、the first time引导的时间状语从句） 【高分句型2】On this special occasion of the 10th anniversary of English Sidelights, I hope the paper will thrive and grow in the years ahead.（运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句） 6．（23-24高二上·上海浦东新·期末）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 学校规定，学生在校期间不得使用手机，有的同学认为这是一项非常好的制度，但也有同学不以为然。请谈谈你对这一规定的看法，并给出理由。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】   In my opinion, the school regulation prohibiting the use of mobile phones during school hours is a commendable policy. While some students may disagree, I believe this restriction fosters a conducive learning environment for several reasons.    Firstly, banning mobile phones reduces distractions in the classroom. Students are less likely to be tempted by social media, games, or text messages, allowing them to focus on the lesson at hand. This contributes to a more attentive and engaged classroom atmosphere, ultimately enhancing the quality of education.    Secondly, the restriction promotes face-to-face communication among students. Without the constant presence of phones, students are encouraged to interact with their peers directly, fostering interpersonal skills and building a sense of community. This social aspect is vital for personal development and creates a positive school culture.    Additionally, limiting mobile phone use helps prevent academic dishonesty. Students may be tempted to use their phones for cheating during exams or class assessments. By enforcing this regulation, the school ensures the integrity of the educational process and upholds the values of honesty and fairness.    In conclusion, the school’s policy on mobile phone use is a necessary and beneficial regulation. It minimizes distractions, encourages face-to-face communication, and safeguards academic integrity, all contributing to a more effective and positive learning environment. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生对学校规定学生在校期间不得使用手机这一规定发表个人看法。 【详解】1.词汇积累 禁止：prohibit→forbid 导致：contribute to→lead to 促进；鼓励：foster→promote 至关重要的：vital→crucial 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Students are less likely to be tempted by social media, games, or text messages, allowing them to focus on the lesson at hand. 拓展句：It is less likely that students will be tempted by social media, games, or text messages, allowing them to focus on the lesson at hand. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Firstly, banning mobile phones reduces distractions in the classroom.(运用了动名词短语作主语) 【高分句型2】While some students may disagree, I believe this restriction fosters a conducive learning environment for several reasons.(运用了while引导的让步状语从句) 7．（23-24高二上·上海崇明·期末）Directions: Write an English composition in at least 100 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是李华，你的同班同学小明觉得自己手机太旧，想要一部最新的iPhone，但是他的父母不同意，小明为此很苦恼，请给他写一封信，谈谈你对此事的看法。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Xiao Ming, I’ve heard that your parents disapproved of your desire to substitute the latest iPhone for your worn-out cell phone, which made you annoyed. From my perspective, they’re right and you shouldn’t blame them for it. First, there is no need to follow the trend. As the products of the Apple are, indeed, growing in popularity, we adolescents, should resist the temptation of following fashion. Secondly, never take it for granted that your parents have the obligation to buy everything you want for you. They have brought you up and hope that you will be successful one day, so you should live up to their expectation. Last but not least, if you really need a cell phone at present, surf on the Internet and choose a not-so-fancy but useful one. All in all, you should depend on yourself as you’re going to be a real adult. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给“因父母不同意自己买个最新款iPhone而很苦恼”的小明写封信，谈谈你的看法。 【详解】1.词汇积累 观点：perspective →point of view 首先：first→first and foremost 购买：buy→purchase 选择：choose→select 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：First, there is no need to follow the trend. 拓展句：First, I hold the belief that there is no need to follow the trend. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I’ve heard that your parents disapprove d of your desire to substitute the latest iPhone for your worn-out cell phone, which made you annoyed.（运用了that引导的宾语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】Last but not least, if you really need a cell phone at present, surf on the Internet and choose a not so fancy but useful one.（运用了连词if引导的条件状语从句。） 8．（23-24高二上·上海·期末）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学学生王磊，你的好朋友李明最近收到了心仪已久的一所美国大学的offer， 但是因为疫情(pandemic)原因，李明非常纠结是奔赴美国完成学业，还是申请“间隔年(gap year)”。作为他的好友，请你写封信给他。你的信应包含以下内容： 1.你的建议； 2.你提出此建议的理由。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考样文 1： Dear Li Ming, Congratulations on being admitted to your dream university. I’ve heard that you are hesitating over whether or not to continue your study overseas or apply for a gap year. Tough though the present condition is under the pandemic, as your friend, I genuinely suggest you go abroad to finish your study. Time waits for no man. After many trials that you have gone through, I believe that you are now ready to step onto a higher platform. A gap year without detailed and practical plans will probably drain your self-discipline and stock of knowledge. Undoubtedly, both of us are unwilling to see your hard work end in vain. Besides, there is no prospect of the present condition getting better. Even worse, the turbulent and tense international situation is unpredictable, which may lead to the cancellation of your visa. Concerning time and financial cost, under no circumstance should you let slip away this the chance to go abroad. What’s more, you can be reassured that our country is strong enough to guarantee your safety abroad. We Chinese are lucky enough to live in a country where everyone has equal access to vaccines. You can rely on the Chinese embassy if you are in trouble in America. In brief, I think it is sensible to continue your study overseas. While enjoying your colorful life on campus, make sure to reinforce your personal care against the virus and keep a safe distance with others. Remember to keep in touch with me as I want to hear about all your joys and worries. Yours, Wang Lei 参考样文 2： Dear Li Ming First, I must congratulate you on successfully obtaining an offer to enter your ideal university. I’ve heard that you are hesitating over whether or not to accept the offer or to apply for a gap year to avoid venturing into the complicated situation in America. My suggestion is that you should stay in China for a year. Right now, safety should be our prime concern and it is apparently safer to stay in China. This might seem minor to you, but you have to take your family’s feelings into account. Nobody cares for you more than they do. So, consider how they feel while you’re ambitiously marching towards your academic success. Second, a gap year grants you a precious opportunity to reflect on your future. Entering your ideal university might bring confusion and challenges along with the initial euphoria. There’s no reason to simply regard the gap year as a waste of time. On the contrary, you can take advantage of this time to reflect on your career goals and relieve post-graduation anxiety. Finally, you should also consider the gap year itself as a challenge. It’s almost certain that in the gap year you’ll question your decision. You’ll experience self-doubt, regret, anxiety and anger. However, you should view these trials as a grindstone, fashioning a forceful, confident and firm person out of the previous one. Sometimes waiting can be a torture, but if you can use the gap year to become a stronger person, you will receive substantial benefits. The pandemic poses threats to everyone. However, with proper preparations you can turn the challenge into your stepping stone and achieve something meaningful. Yours, Wang lei 【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文，要求考生就是奔赴美国完成学业，还是申请“间隔年(gap year)”写一封建议信。 【详解】1.词汇积累 建议：suggest→recommend 愿意做某事：be willing to do sth.→prefer to do sth. 充分利用：take advantage of=make full use of 应该：should→be supposed to 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：A gap year without detailed and practical plans will probably drain your self-discipline and stock of knowledge. 拓展句：A gap year which has no detailed and practical plans will probably drain your self-discipline and stock of knowledge. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Tough though the present condition is under the pandemic, as your friend, I genuinely suggest you go abroad to finish your study.（运用了though引导的让步状语从句和倒装句，suggest后面为省略了that的宾语从句） [高分句型2] Even worse, the turbulent and tense international situation is unpredictable, which may lead to the cancellation of your visa.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） 9．（23-24高二上·上海·期末）Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是李华，你的同班同学小明觉得自己的手机太旧，想买个最新款的iPhone，可是他的父母不同意，为此他很苦恼。请你给他写封信，谈谈你的看法。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Xiao Ming, I’ve heard that your parents disapproved of your desire to substitute the latest iPhone for your worn-out cell phone, which made you annoyed. From my perspective, they’re right and you shouldn’t blame them for it. First, there is no need to follow the trend. As the products of the Apple are, indeed, growing in popularity, we adolescents, should resist the temptation of following fashion. Secondly, never take it for granted that your parents have the obligation to buy everything you want for you. They have brought you up and hope that you will be successful one day, so you should live up to their expectation. Last but not least, if you really need a cell phone at present, surf on the Internet and choose a not so fancy but useful one. All in all, you should depend on yourself as you’re going to be a real adult. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给“因父母不同意自己买个最新款iPhone而很苦恼”的小明写封信，谈谈你的看法。 【详解】1.词汇积累 观点：perspective→point of view 首先：first→first and foremost 购买：buy→purchase 选择：choose→select 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：First, there is no need to follow the trend. 拓展句：First, I hold the belief that there is no need to follow the trend. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I’ve heard that your parents disapproved of your desire to substitute the latest iPhone for your worn-out cell phone, which made you annoyed. (运用了that引导的宾语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】Last but not least, if you really need a cell phone at present, surf on the Internet and choose a not so fancy but useful one. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句) 10．（22-23高二上·上海·期末）Directions:Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 学校计划对校园环境进行优化，校长就设计方案征求学生的意见。假设你是李华，给校长写一封信，对设计方案提出一些建议。你的信必须包括以下内容： 1. 谈谈你建议的具体内容； 2. 说明你的理由（从学生的学习、活动等角度进行说明） ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】     Hearing that our school is planning to optimize the campus environment, I am offering the following suggestions. First of all, I think the school should include environmental protection knowledge and health knowledge into the teaching tasks of various subjects, combined with the teaching content, which could help to cultivate and strengthen students’ environmental awareness. Secondly, each class should set up its own environmental cleaning area, and the school should strengthen the inspection and management of student dormitory environment, which will be beneficial for students to keep the dormitory clean and tidy. At the same time, in order to provide students with a good environment for study and dining, schools should improve the canteen facilities, replace the screens, add necessary equipment, such as drinking water equipment, sports equipment and update the computer teaching facilities. Sincerely, I hope that my suggestion will be helpful to you and finally be accepted. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给校长写一封信，就学校校园环境优化计划提出建议。内容包括：建议的具体内容，以及阐述理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 建议：suggestion→advice 首先：first of all → first and foremost 诚挚地：sincerely→genuinely 希望：hope→ expect 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Hearing that our school is planning to optimize the campus environment, I am offering the following suggestions. 拓展句：Because I hear that our school is planning to optimize the campus environment, I am offering the following suggestions. 【点睛】【高分句型1】First of all, I think the school should include environmental protection knowledge and health knowledge into the teaching tasks of various subjects, combined with the teaching content, which could help to cultivate and strengthen students' environmental awareness.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】Sincerely, I hope that my suggestion will be helpful to you and finally be accepted.(运用了that引导的宾语从句以及情态动词的被动语态结构) 11．（21-22高二上·上海虹口·期末）Directions: Write an English composition in 120 - 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是明启中学的李华，学校校报正在开展关于线上直播课(live-streamed lessons)的讨论。有人觉得线上直播课让学习更加灵活，拓展了学习的空间和时间。然而，也有人觉得线上直播课存在缺乏互动、学习效率不高等问题。请投稿给学校校报，就此话题结合个人实际谈谈你的看法。 你的投稿须包含： 1. 你对此话题的看法； 2. 你的个人实际。 【答案】Dear editor, The students in our school have held a discussion on live-streaming lessons. Some people point out that live streaming makes learning more flexible and expands the space and time for learning. However, there are also some students who put forward some problems with the lack of interaction and learning efficiency. I am writing to share my views on this topic. In my opinion, it is good for us students. It enriches students' learning style. Now the network resources are very rich, and there are many platforms to choose from. Many platforms are live broadcasting and recording, and all have the course playback function. If students can't participate in the learning during the live time, they can play back the class video and learn independently, which makes it possible for the students to make up for the missing courses. For the students who are strictly self-disciplined, the effect of online autonomous learning will be better . I took live-streamed lessons during last summer holiday, which helped me improve my grades. It made me more self-disciplined and improve my ability to plan my study. 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给学校校报投稿，就线上直播课这一话题结合个人实际谈谈自己的看法。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 然而：however→nevertheless 交流：interaction→communication 观点：view→opinion 参加：participate in→take part in 2．句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：In my opinion, it is good for us students. It enriches students' learning style. 拓展句：In my opinion, it is good for us students because it enriches students' learning style. 【点睛】[高分句型1]However, there are also some students who put forward some problems with the lack of interaction and learning efficiency.（运用了who引导的定语从句） [高分句型2]If students can't participate in the learning during the live time, they can play back the class video and learn independently, which makes it possible for the students to make up for the missing courses.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） 12．（21-22高二上·上海奉贤·期末）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 现在中国购物网站非常繁荣，很多人选择网上购物而不是去商场实体店购物，你更倾向于哪种购物方式，并说出你的理由。 注意:请勿出现真实的学校及姓名。 【答案】Nowadays, online shopping has become an irreversible trend. Some people claim that online shopping has more advantages while others maintain that physical stores are better. From my perspective, I prefer online shopping for three reasons. First of all, its super convenience is of vital importance to me because it enables me to save more time and energy for my work. Secondly，more choices and more different kinds of commodities are offered on the Internet so that I can compare prices，types，qualities and can even refer to people's comments before choosing the appropriate one for me. Last but not least, online shopping enables me to buy things across different countries without travelling around the world, which is of great convenience on a daily basis. All in all, online shopping is more appealing to me and will definitely keep accompanying me in the future. 【分析】本篇书面表达属于议论文，要求考生就“选择网上购物还是去商场实体店购物”谈谈自己的看法，喜欢哪种购物方式，并说出你的理由。 【详解】第一步：审题 体裁：议论文 时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时,少量现在完成时。 结构：总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求： 1. 你更倾向于哪种购物方式； 2. 你选择某种购物方式的理由。 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） online shopping; physical stores; of vital importance to sb.; enable sb. to do sth.; different kinds of sth.; refer to sth.; appeal to sb.; keep accompany sb. 第三步：连词成句 1. Some people claim that online shopping has more advantages while others maintain that physical stores are better. 2. First of all, its super convenience is of vital importance to me because it enables me to save more time and energy for my work. 3. Secondly，more choices and more different kinds of commodities are offered on the Internet so that I can compare prices，types，qualities and can even refer to people's comments before choosing the appropriate one for me. 4. All in all, online shopping is more appealing to me and will definitely keep accompanying me in the future. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） 1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Secondly, Last but not least, All in all 2.表转折对比关系：while 3.表因果关系：because 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。 【点睛】[高分句型1] Some people claim that online shopping has more advantages while others maintain that physical stores are better.用了that引导的宾语从句。 [高分句型2] Last but not least, online shopping enables me to buy things across different countries without travelling around the world, which is of great convenience on a daily basis. 用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！22 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$