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读后续写遇险脱险类 高考英语近来所考察的话题主要是人与社会，人与自我，人与动物，人与自然等几个板块，其中，人与自然包括一个话题就是遇险类的读后续写。这类话题可以按照思路分为三个阶段，即第一阶段：遇到危险；第二阶段：出现转机；第三阶段：脱离危险。在每个阶段应该储备积累一定的续写语料做好整体的规划，不能只是单纯的套用，应该有思考，有布局，有与文章细节的结合。 在阅读原文时，关注主要人物（次要人物等）的心理变化，时间、地点、环境的变化等因素，也要关注文章中所暗含的“续写的楔子”，在后文风险化解的过程中巧妙的结合原文，融入文章。因此，对遇险脱险类话题： ‌提炼六个要素‌：首先，需要提炼出阅读文本的六个基本要素：who（人物）、where（地点）、when（时间）、what（事件）、why（原因）和how（方式）。这有助于总结文章大意和故事情节，进而推断作者的写作意图‌1。 ‌理清故事脉络‌：记叙文通常有两条线索：情节线索和情感线索。利用图表法或思维导图法理清故事的发展脉络，把握作者的情感变化。这样在续写时才能更好地遵循原文的思路、风格和语言‌ ‌分析段落首句‌：续写后的段落首句对提高内容与原文的融洽度至关重要。分析两个段首句之间的逻辑关系（顺承、转折、因果等），并根据这些关系设计小问题，如续写开始写什么、接下来写什么、段尾如何衔接等‌1。 ‌设计结尾情节‌：续写时，要围绕故事的发展脉络，展开合理的想象，巧妙设计结尾情节。可以借助前文的故事脉络设计具体问题，确保结尾既能照应前文，又能拔高价值取向‌。 ‌情感描写‌：遇险脱险类话题通常涉及情感变化，从最初的惊慌害怕、绝望无助，到想办法救援，到最后获救的宽慰和感激。在续写中，要注意这些情感的变化和描写，使故事更加生动和感人。 . 读后续写题目读懂才能写先读，后写 第二节（满分25分） A high-pitched scream stopped Laura Douglas in her tracks. Spinning around on the narrow dirt path, she thought that her cousin Cassie was in danger. Instead, Cassie was knee deep in flowers that covered the meadow（草地）like a quilt. "Cassie! You scared me to death!" Laura scolded, her voice echoing through the meadow. "I am sorry," Cassie, absorbed in her photography, didn't notice the thick fog rolling in, consuming the nearby mountains. "Not again!" Laura complained, her eyes shifting to the approaching clouds. "We gotta go!" Cassie's focus remained on her camera, capturing the short-lived beauty of the moment. Laura tied a red scarf around her hair, "Let's go back to the campsite." The girls quickly ran down the winding path, the meadow now covered by a thick fog and a steady, cold rain. The road turned slippery, and they had to move slowly to avoid sliding down. "It's dangerous! We need shelter now!" Cassie screamed after a loud crack of thunder, the storm's strength increasing rapidly. Laura's keen eyes found a small cave in the rock face, partly hidden by overhanging branches. It wasn't much, but it offered a chance to escape the rain. "Cassie, over here!" Laura called out, her voice barely carrying over the wind. Cassie, wet and shaking, stumbled towards the place of Laura's voice. As she approached, she could see the shelter. It wasn't perfect, but it was better than nothing. "Smart thinking, Laura," Cassie said, her teeth chattering（打颤）with cold as she pressed her backpack close to her chest. The backpack, a tough and waterproof（防水的）model, had been a gift from her father, an experienced hiker who had insisted on its numerous pockets and sections for emergency supplies. Little did they know, his advice would prove invaluable on this day. 注意: 1. 续写词数应为150左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 P1: "Check your backpack," Laura instructed, her voice being hopeful.                 P2: As night fell, the storm finally began to die down. 认真审读原文 Find your enthusiasm A high-pitched scream stopped Laura Douglas in her tracks. Spinning around on the narrow dirt path, she thought that her cousin Cassie was in danger宾从. Instead, Cassie was knee deep in flowers that covered the meadow（草地）like a quilt.  "Cassie! You scared me to death!" Laura scolded, her voice echoing through the meadow（独立主格）. "I am sorry," Cassie, absorbed in her photography（非谓语动词短语做后置定语）, didn't notice the thick fog rolling in（非谓语动词做后置定语）, consuming the nearby mountains（非谓语动词短语做伴随动作）. "Not again!" Laura complained, her eyes shifting to the approaching clouds（独立主格）. "We gotta go!" Cassie's focus remained on her camera, capturing the short-lived beauty of the moment（非谓语动词短语做后置定语）. Laura tied a red scarf around her hair, "Let's go back to the campsite." The girls quickly ran down the winding path, the meadow now covered by a thick fog and a steady, cold rain（独立主格）. The road turned slippery（主系表，turn为系动词）, and they had to move slowly to avoid sliding down（目的状语）. "It's dangerous! We need shelter now!" Cassie screamed after a loud crack of thunder, the storm's strength increasing rapidly（独立主格）. Laura's keen eyes found a small cave in the rock face, partly hidden by overhanging branches（非谓语动词短语做后置定语）. It wasn't much, but it offered a chance to escape the rain（非谓语动词短语做后置定语）. "Cassie, over here!" Laura called out, her voice barely carrying over the wind（独立主格）. Cassie, wet and shaking, stumbled towards the place of Laura's voice. As she approached（状语从句）, she could see the shelter. It wasn't perfect, but it was better than nothing. "Smart thinking, Laura," Cassie said, her teeth chattering（打颤）with cold（独立主格） as she pressed her backpack close to her chest（形容词做补语）. The backpack, a tough and waterproof（防水的）model（同位语）, had been a gift from her father, an experienced hiker who had insisted on its numerous pockets and sections for emergency supplies（定语从句）. Little did they know（倒装句）, his advice would prove invaluable on this day. 重点词汇和短语分析日积月累才是捷径重点词汇短语 1. stop (someone) in (one's) tracks      意思: 使某人突然停下来，通常因为惊讶、恐惧或其他强烈情感。    常见搭配:      - stop someone in their tracks（使某人突然停住）    例句:      - The sight of the huge spider stopped her in her tracks.      - The news stopped him in his tracks.  2. narrow (adj.)      意思: 狭窄的，有限的。    常见搭配:      - narrow escape（侥幸逃脱）      - narrow path（狭窄的小路）      - narrow view（狭隘的视角）    例句:      - They walked carefully along the narrow dirt path.      - She had a narrow escape from the accident.  3. knee-deep (adj.)      意思: 膝深的，浸没至膝的；也可以形容陷入某事的程度。    常见搭配:      - knee-deep in (something)（在某物中膝深，形容陷入某事之中）    例句:      - The children were knee-deep in snow as they played.      - She is knee-deep in work and can't take a break.  4. scare (v.)      意思: 使惊吓，使害怕。    常见搭配:      - scare someone to death（把某人吓得要死）      - scared stiff（吓呆了）      例句:      - The loud noise scared me to death.      - He was scared stiff when he saw the snake.  5. absorb (v.)      意思: 全神贯注于，吸收。    常见搭配:      - absorb in (something)（专注于某事）      - absorb information（吸收信息）    例句:      - She was completely absorbed in her book and didn’t hear the phone ring.      - Plants absorb water from the soil.  6. rolling in (v. phrase)      意思: 涌入，进来（通常形容雾气、云层、潮水等大面积地缓慢涌来）。    常见搭配:      - fog/clouds/tides rolling in（形容自然现象的进入）    例句:      - The fog started rolling in from the ocean, making it hard to see.      - Dark clouds were rolling in, signaling a storm.  7. steady (adj.)      意思: 稳定的，持续的。    常见搭配:      - steady rain（持续不断的雨）      - steady improvement（稳步改善）      - steady hand（稳定的手，形容镇定）    例句:      - The steady rain continued throughout the afternoon.      - His grades have shown a steady improvement this semester.  8. slippery (adj.)      意思: 滑的，容易打滑的。    常见搭配:      - slippery road（滑路）      - slippery slope（指局势可能迅速恶化的过程）    例句:      - The road became slippery after the rain.      - The company is on a slippery slope towards bankruptcy.  9. crack of thunder (n. phrase)      意思: 雷声巨响，形容突然的雷声。    常见搭配:      - crack of lightning/thunder（形容雷电的响声或闪电）    例句:      - A loud crack of thunder shook the house.      - We jumped at the sudden crack of thunder overhead.  10. overhanging (adj.)      意思: 悬垂的，悬挂在上方的。    常见搭配:      - overhanging branches（悬垂的树枝）      - overhanging cliff（悬崖峭壁）    例句:      - We took shelter under the overhanging branches.      - The house was built near an overhanging cliff.  11. press close to (v. phrase)      意思: 紧贴，靠近。    常见搭配:      - press close to someone（紧紧靠近某人）      例句:      - The child pressed close to his mother during the thunderstorm.      - The puppy pressed close to its owner for comfort.  12. prove invaluable (v. phrase)      意思: 被证明是无价的、非常有价值的。    常见搭配:      - prove invaluable to someone/something（对某人或某事证明非常有价值）    例句:      - His advice proved invaluable during the crisis.      - The hiking gear proved invaluable in the storm. 重点语法分析 语法项是写作非常重要的加分点 1. 现在分词作状语    解释: 现在分词可以表示伴随动作、时间、原因、结果等。它与主句的主语一致。    例句:      - Spinning around on the narrow dirt path, she thought that her cousin was in danger. （时间状语，表示同时发生的动作）      - Absorbed in her photography, she didn’t notice the thick fog rolling in. （原因状语，表示因为摄影入迷导致没注意）    - Holding her breath, she waited for the thunderstorm to pass.      - Running as fast as they could, the girls escaped the incoming storm. 2. 独立主格结构    解释: 独立主格结构是由一个名词或代词加分词、形容词、副词、介词短语等构成，用来补充说明一个情况，主语与主句不同。    例句:      - Her voice echoing through the meadow, Laura scolded her cousin.      - The meadow now covered by thick fog, the girls had to move slowly.    - The sun setting, they decided to set up camp for the night.      - Her heart racing, she opened the door to the dark room. 3. 动词不定式作目的状语    解释: 动词不定式常用于表示目的，放在句中或句末。    例句:      - The girls ran down the path to avoid sliding down.      - They found a cave to escape the rain.    - She turned off the lights to save energy.      - He ran faster to catch the last bus. 4. 过去分词作状语    解释: 过去分词表示被动或完成的动作，用作状语时，通常表示原因、条件或时间。    例句:      - Consumed by the fog, the mountains were barely visible. （原因状语，表示山脉被雾气吞没）      - Hidden by overhanging branches, the cave offered some shelter. （条件状语，表示树枝遮挡）    - Frightened by the sudden noise, she quickly hid behind the door.      - Exhausted from the long hike, they finally reached the top of the mountain. 5. 强调句型    解释: 强调句型用于强调句子中的某个成分，结构为“It is/was + 被强调部分 + that/who...”    例句:      - It was Cassie who scared Laura with her scream.      - It was a small cave that offered them a chance to escape the rain.    - It was his determination that helped him succeed.      - It was at that moment that she realized the truth. Possible version 1 来源于网络 "Check your backpack," Laura instructed, her voice being hopeful. "We might have something that can help us start a fire." Cassie nodded, her fingers trembling(独立主格) as she unzipped the side pocket of her backpack状语从句. She was relieved to find a flashlight, a compact emergency blanket and a small, waterproof pouch containing waterproof matches非谓语动词作后置定语. "Bingo!" she exclaimed, her voice filled with a mix of surprise and relief(独立主格). They quickly set to work, using the waterproof matches to ignite a small fire with the dry leaves and twigs(非谓语动词短语做伴随动作) Laura had collected(定语从句). The survival blanket was spread out, providing a thin layer of insulation against the cold, damp ground(非谓语动词做后置定语). As night fell(状语从句), the storm finally began to die down. The girls, exhausted but determined, decided to make a move. They knew the trail would be risky in the dark(宾语从句), but staying in the shelter wasn't an option either. Using the flashlight(非谓语动词短语做伴随动作), they carefully navigated the slippery path, following the markers(非谓语动词短语做伴随动作) they had set earlier(定语从句). The fog had lifted, and the moon provided just enough light to see by. Hours later, they finally reached the edge of the forest. The lights of the campsite were a welcome sight. Cassie grinned, her teeth no longer chattering(独立主格), "We made it back." Laura nodded, her eyes meeting Cassie's(独立主格). Their adventure had been terrifying, but it had also been a testament to their bond and their survival skills. And as they sat by the fire(状语从句), sipping hot chocolate(非谓语动词短语做伴随动作), they knew they would never forget the day they had faced the storm together(定语从句).  Possible Version 2 "Check your backpack," Laura instructed, her voice hopeful. Cassie fumbled through the compartments of her waterproof backpack, her cold fingers trembling(独立主格) as she searched for anything useful. "Here!" she exclaimed, pulling out a small flashlight and an emergency blanket(非谓语动词短语做伴随动作). Laura quickly wrapped the blanket around Cassie, hoping it would keep her cousin warm(非谓语动词短语做伴随动作). "Good thinking, Cassie. Now let’s see what else you've got," Laura encouraged, taking the flashlight to examine the cave(非谓语动词短语做伴随动作). It was small, but the rocky walls provided solid shelter.Cassie rummaged further and found some energy bars. "We can eat these while we wait," she said, handing one to Laura(非谓语动词短语做伴随动作). The storm outside raged on, the sound of rain pounding against the rocks(独立主格). The flashlight’s weak beam bounced off the cave walls, providing a small circle of light in the otherwise pitch-black surroundings(非谓语动词短语做后置定语). They sat close together, sharing the small space(非谓语动词短语做伴随动作), their spirits lifted slightly by the food and warmth. As night fell(状语从句), the storm finally began to die down. The rain eased into a soft drizzle, and the wind became less intense. "It’s calming down," Laura whispered. "We might be able to leave soon." Cassie nodded, grateful for the reprieve but still shivering under the blanket. "Let’s rest a bit," Laura suggested, knowing they would need their strength to find their way back in the morning(非谓语动词短语做伴随动作，插入宾语从句). With that, the two cousins leaned against the cave wall, listening to the gentle rain(非谓语动词短语做伴随动作), and eventually drifted into an uneasy sleep, safe for now. 1. fumbled      - 词性: 动词      - 词义: 笨拙地处理或做某事，通常指手忙脚乱地寻找或抓住。     - 近义词: grope, mishandle, stumble      - 联想词: drop, grasp, awkward      - 例句:        - He fumbled in his pocket for the keys.        - She fumbled with the lock before finally opening the door.  2. compartment      - 词性: 名词      - 词义: 隔间，分隔的空间或部分。     - 近义词: section, division, chamber      - 联想词: cabin, box, container      - 例句:        - She put her phone in the glove compartment of the car.        - Each compartment in the suitcase is designed for specific items.  3. rummaged      - 词性: 动词      - 词义: 翻找，通常指迅速而杂乱地寻找某物。     - 近义词: search, rifle, dig through      - 联想词: explore, scatter, uncover      - 例句:        - He rummaged through his bag, looking for his wallet.        - She rummaged in the drawer for a pen.  4. raged on      - 词性: 短语动词      - 词义: （风暴、战斗等）持续激烈地进行。     - 近义词: continue violently, storm, persist      - 联想词: fight, war, storm      - 例句:        - The storm raged on for hours, causing widespread damage.        - The battle raged on, with no end in sight.  5. beam      - 词性: 名词 / 动词      - 词义:        - （名词）光束，光线；（动词）微笑，发光。     - 近义词: shine, glow, radiate      - 联想词: ray, smile, light      - 例句:        - A beam of sunlight entered the room.        - She beamed with pride after receiving the award.  6. die down      - 词性: 短语动词      - 词义: （强度、力量等）逐渐减弱，消退。     - 近义词: subside, diminish, ease off      - 联想词: calm, settle, fade      - 例句:        - The wind began to die down after sunset.        - The excitement around the event eventually died down.  7. drizzle      - 词性: 名词 / 动词      - 词义: 毛毛雨，小雨；下毛毛雨。     - 近义词: sprinkle, light rain, mist      - 联想词: rain, shower, moisture      - 例句:        - The forecast said there would be a light drizzle this afternoon.        - It started to drizzle just as we left the house.  8. reprieve      - 词性: 名词 / 动词      - 词义: 缓刑，暂缓；（动词）暂缓某事的实施。     - 近义词: delay, postponement, suspension      - 联想词: pardon, relief, stay      - 例句:        - The prisoners were granted a reprieve from execution.        - The rain provided a temporary reprieve from the heat.  9. shivering      - 词性: 动词（现在分词）      - 词义: 颤抖，因寒冷或害怕而发抖。     - 近义词: trembling, shaking, quivering      - 联想词: cold, fear, shudder      - 例句:        - He was shivering from the cold wind.        - She stood outside, shivering as the snow fell.  10. drifted into      - 词性: 短语动词      - 词义: 漂进，缓缓进入某状态或地方。     - 近义词: float into, wander into, move slowly into      - 联想词: glide, flow, slip      - 例句:        - The boat drifted into the harbor.        - She slowly drifted into sleep. Possible Version 3 "Check your backpack," Laura instructed, her voice hopeful. Cassie quickly opened the main compartment, pulling out a thermal blanket and a first-aid kit(非谓语动词短语做伴随动作). "Thank goodness I brought this," she said with relief, unfolding the blanket and draping it over both of them(非谓语动词短语做伴随动作). Laura nodded, "Your dad was right about packing for emergencies." The warmth from the blanket helped to ease the cold that had seeped into their bones(定从), but the storm outside showed no sign of stopping. "Maybe there’s something to start a fire," Cassie murmured, digging further into her backpack(非谓语动词短语做伴随动作). Her hands soon found a pack of waterproof matches and some fire starters. "Perfect!" Laura exclaimed. "Let’s get a small fire going." With some dry leaves and twigs found inside the cave, Laura managed to ignite a tiny fire. The flames flickered warmly, providing them a sense of comfort in the otherwise bleak situation(非谓语动词短语做伴随动作). As night fell, the storm finally began to die down. The crackling fire cast a soft glow around the cave, and the once deafening thunder was replaced by a steady drizzle. "It’s almost over," Laura said with a sigh of relief. Cassie smiled faintly, though exhaustion was evident on her face. "I guess we’ll be okay," she whispered. The warmth from the fire and the security of the cave gave them the strength to endure. They both knew that when morning came, they would have to find their way back to the campsite. But for now, they were safe, and that was all that mattered. 1. seeped into      - 词性: 短语动词      - 词义: 渗入，逐渐进入（液体、气体或感情等）      - 近义词: permeate, infiltrate, leak into      - 联想词: soak, absorb, penetrate      - 例句:        - Water slowly seeped into the basement after the heavy rain.        - Fear seeped into her mind as the storm intensified. 2. crackling      - 词性: 名词 / 形容词 / 动词（现在分词）      - 词义: 发出噼啪声，通常指火焰燃烧时的声音      - 近义词: popping, snapping, sizzling      - 联想词: fire, burn, spark      - 例句:        - The fire was crackling in the fireplace, giving the room a warm glow.        - She heard the faint crackling of leaves underfoot. 3. deafen      - 词性: 动词      - 词义: 使耳聋；使震耳欲聋      - 近义词: stun, overwhelm, muffle      - 联想词: loud, sound, noise      - 例句:        - The explosion was loud enough to deafen anyone nearby.        - The cheering from the crowd almost deafened her. 4. faintly      - 词性: 副词      - 词义: 微弱地，模糊地      - 近义词: slightly, weakly, dimly      - 联想词: barely, softly, gently      - 例句:        - She could faintly hear the sound of music coming from the distance.        - The stars shone faintly in the night sky. 5. exhaustion      - 词性: 名词      - 词义: 精疲力竭，极度疲劳      - 近义词: fatigue, tiredness, weariness      - 联想词: stress, drain, weakness      - 例句:        - After the marathon, she collapsed from exhaustion.        - The long hike left him in a state of complete exhaustion. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$