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湘豫名校联考2024年11月高三一轮复习诊断考试英语试题 第二节 (满分25分) 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I, together with my neighbor, arrived in Mali, West Africa, to visit her child, Mary, who was volunteering there. That was a poor area and people lived in mud huts without modern conveniences. However, the villagers appeared content. I had expected we would spend our time helping the poor villagers-- we brought many soccer balls, pens, and inexpensive watches-- believing that somehow we could improved the villagers’ lives. Instead they were teaching us that having less meant less to worry about and more time and energy for each other. These wonderful people of a different faith taught me an important lesson. And I felt honored and appreciated living there-- the opposite of what I’d felt nine months earlier when I’d felt pressured to resign from my job. For twelve years I’d worked at the hospital. One day they told me I was no longer needed. I understood that it was a cost-cutting move to replace me with someone with less experience and a lower salary. But my understanding didn’t remove the pain of feeling useless. When I was sad and worried about my future, a fellow health educator at another hospital said to me, “I’ve just learned the most helpful tool, “ she said. “ No matter what the situation is, there is an opposite, a benefit. Our typical response is to focus on the losses of jobs, marriage, home or even health. Instead, the speaker told us to concentrate on finding what we gained with our loss.” At first, I resisted her advice and didn’t care about “opposites”. I forgot my dream to travel around the world in a trailer(房车) and forgot everything I wished to do when I was busy. I only wanted my job back. I missed my office, my coworkers, the routine. I missed the meaningful challenges of organizing health education classes for sick people. But as time passed , I grew tired of my sorrow and loneliness. Maybe I should try my friend’s advice and seek some opposites. 注意: 1.续写词数应为 150 词左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 The opposite of loneliness would be friendship, so I called a kind-hearted neighbor. These activities enriched my life, but the trip to Africa changed my life completely. 原文分析：红色定从/定语；蓝色宾从；黄色状从，只标连词；下划线标黄单词为需掌握积累单词；从句类会用斜体标注；需积累部分黑体加粗下划线；(定语从句1) 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 湘豫名校联考2024年11月高三一轮复习诊断考试英语试题 第二节 (满分25分) 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I, together with my neighbor, arrived in Mali, West Africa, to visit her child, Mary, who was volunteering there(定语从句). That was a poor area and people lived in mud huts without modern conveniences. However, the villagers appeared content. I had expected we would spend our time helping the poor villagers(宾从)-- we brought many soccer balls, pens, and inexpensive watches-- believing that somehow we could improved the villagers’ lives(非谓语动词做伴随动作+宾从). Instead they were teaching us that having less meant less to worry about and more time and energy for each other(宾从). These wonderful people of a different faith taught me an important lesson. And I felt honored and appreciated living there(非谓语做伴随动作)-- the opposite of what I’d felt nine months earlier(宾从) when I’d felt pressured to resign from my job(状从). For twelve years I’d worked at the hospital. One day they told me I was no longer needed(宾从). I understood that it was a cost-cutting move to replace me with someone with less experience and a lower salary(宾从). But my understanding didn’t remove the pain of feeling useless. When I was sad and worried about my future, a fellow health educator at another hospital said to me, “I’ve just learned the most helpful tool, “ she said. “ No matter what the situation is(状从), there is an opposite, a benefit. Our typical response is to focus on the losses of jobs, marriage, home or even health. Instead, the speaker told us to concentrate on finding what we gained with our loss(宾从).” At first, I resisted her advice and didn’t care about “opposites”. I forgot my dream to travel around the world in a trailer(房车) and forgot everything I wished to do(定从) when I was busy(状从). I only wanted my job back. I missed my office, my coworkers, the routine. I missed the meaningful challenges of organizing health education classes for sick people. But as time passed(as状从) , I grew tired of my sorrow and loneliness. Maybe I should try my friend’s advice and seek some opposites. 注意: 1.续写词数应为 150 词左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1:The opposite of loneliness would be friendship, so I called a kind-hearted neighbor. Paragraph 2:These activities enriched my life, but the trip to Africa changed my life completely. 读后续写类型分析及布局建议 类型分类 根据文章内容，这属于“人物自我成长类”读后续写，聚焦主人公从失落到通过非凡经历找到生活意义的转变。 布局与构思 1. 布局建议： - 第一段：围绕“寻求友谊与帮助”展开，通过主人公寻找邻居的帮助，逐渐摆脱孤独。可描写情感从迷茫到希望的转变。 - 第二段：聚焦“非洲旅行的转变意义”，通过环境描写和情感渲染，展示主人公如何通过活动和旅行发现生活的新意义。 2. 构思技巧： - 用行动、对话推进情节发展。 - 强调心理描写（情绪变化）。 - 适当结合环境烘托主人公的心理转变。 巧妙设计续写内容 - 呼应前文主题：从“寻找失去的意义”过渡到“生活意义的发现”。 - 融合高级语法点（如强调句型、虚拟语气、非谓语动词等）。 - 通过情节高潮（如非洲村民的感悟）和主人公感慨升华主题。 亮点语法及得分技巧 1. 亮点语法： - 强调句型：It was ... that ... 用于强调感悟和生活转变的意义。 - 虚拟语气：If I hadn’t gone to Africa, I wouldn’t have realized the beauty of simplicity. - 非谓语动词：Participating in daily life there, I found unexpected joy. - 定语从句：The experience, which reshaped my mindset, was invaluable. 2. 得分技巧： - 避免机械叙述，用语言生动描述情感和动作。 - 运用高分词汇和短语丰富语言。 Possible Answer 1 The opposite of loneliness would be friendship, so I called a kind-hearted neighbor. She warmly welcomed me to join her weekly volunteer group at the community center. At first, I was hesitant and reserved, but as I immersed myself in activities like organizing events and helping the elderly(as状从), I began to feel a sense of purpose again. I could sense my old self returning, with confidence and passion gradually replacing despair. These activities enriched my life, but the trip to Africa changed my life completely. The warm smiles of the villagers, their open hearts, and the simplicity of their lives profoundly moved me. Walking through the village(非谓语动词做伴随), I saw children playing with makeshift toys, their laughter filling the air(独立主格). It was then that I realized true happiness lies not in material wealth but in the richness of human connection(强调句). This eye-opening journey reshaped my perspective on life and gave me newfound gratitude. Possible Answer 2 The opposite of loneliness would be friendship, so I called a kind-hearted neighbor. She invited me to her home, where we shared stories over a warm cup of tea(定从). Encouraged by her optimism(非谓语动词做原因状语), I began to step out of my comfort zone. Together, we started small initiatives, like neighborhood clean-ups and charity bake sales. Each activity brought smiles and built bonds, filling the void in my heart with genuine companionship(非谓语动词做伴随动作). These activities enriched my life, but the trip to Africa changed my life completely. The villagers taught me the joy of living in the moment, unburdened by material pursuits(非谓语短语). One evening, watching the sunset with Mary and her village friends(非谓语动词做时间状语), I felt a deep sense of peace. The simplicity of their daily routines and their gratitude for life inspired me to cherish every small blessing. I returned home with a renewed sense of purpose, determined to live fully and joyfully. Possible Answer 3 The opposite of loneliness would be friendship, so I called a kind-hearted neighbor. She encouraged me to take up a new hobby, painting, and invited me to join her art club. With each stroke of the brush, my mind started to relax, and a sense of calm washed over me. I shared my work with others, and the compliments they gave(定从) helped rebuild my confidence bit by bit. These activities enriched my life, but the trip to Africa changed my life completely. Living among the villagers(非谓语动词做原因状语), I found beauty in their unpretentious lifestyle. They showed me how to appreciate the present moment(宾从)—whether it was sharing a simple meal or enjoying a heartfelt conversation(同位语从句). Through their eyes, I began to see my struggles as opportunities for growth. When I returned home, I was no longer burdened by loss but excited about the endless possibilities ahead. --- 亮点词汇及语法分析 情绪描写亮点词汇 - 词汇： - contentment (满足感) → 同义词：satisfaction；联想词：serenity - despair (绝望) → 同义词：hopelessness；联想词：anguish - 短语： - "a sense of purpose" (使命感) - "to be overwhelmed with gratitude" (充满感激) 动作描写亮点词汇 - 词汇： - immerse (沉浸) → 替换词：engage - rebuild (重建) → 替换词：restore - 短语： - "to step out of one’s comfort zone" (走出舒适区) - "to reshape one’s perspective" (重塑视角) 例句 1. The villagers, who seemed to have so little, were rich in spirit, teaching me the true meaning of happiness. 2. Immersing myself in their daily lives, I rediscovered a sense of connection and peace. 3. Had I not joined the community group, I would never have realized the healing power of friendship. --- 无框架续写内容 Finally, I decided to take a closer look at what I had gained from losing my job. Without the demands of work, I now had time to explore hobbies I had long ignored(定从). I signed up for painting classes, something I had always wanted to try but never had time for(定从). Gradually, I found joy in creating colorful landscapes, and my once-buried passion came alive. Additionally, I reconnected with old friends and spent more quality time with my family, building relationships I had neglected(定从) while being consumed by work(状从). This newfound freedom helped me regain a sense of purpose. When we returned from Mali, I felt like a changed person. The villagers had shown me that joy didn’t depend on material possessions or career success(宾从), and my time away had taught me that losing one thing could mean gaining another(宾从). I started volunteering at a community center, sharing my experiences with others and finding fulfillment in helping people in a different way(非谓语动词短语做伴随动作). Sometimes, losing something you thought defined you (定从)opens doors to a richer, more meaningful life. --- 范文中的语法知识点及简要介绍 1. 时态的使用 - 一般过去时：用于描述过去的经历和事件，例如 "I decided to take a closer look..." - 现在完成时：用于描述过去发生但对现在有影响的动作，例如 "I have gained from losing my job." 2. 非谓语动词 - 动名词：例如 "reconnecting with old friends" 表示持续的动作。 - 不定式：例如 "to explore hobbies I had long ignored" 表示目的。 3. 复合句 - 使用从句丰富叙述内容，例如 "I found joy in creating colorful landscapes, and my once-buried passion came alive." 4. 倒装句 - "Sometimes, losing something you thought defined you opens doors to a richer life." 中用 "losing something" 开头，强调句意。 文中比较好的短语 1. take a closer look at - 释义：仔细审视 - 同义短语：examine closely; scrutinize - 替换词：analyze; reflect on 2. reconnect with - 释义：重新联系 - 同义短语：get back in touch with; renew relationships with - 替换词：reestablish contact with; revive bonds with 3. find fulfillment in - 释义：在……中找到满足感 - 同义短语：derive satisfaction from; experience joy through - 替换词：gain contentment in; take pleasure in 高中语法现象分析 1. 时态 - 一般过去时：用于叙述过去发生的具体事件，例如 "I resisted her advice." - 过去完成时：用于描述过去某一时间之前已经发生的事情，例如 "I had worked at the hospital for twelve years." - 现在完成时：用于强调某一动作对现在的影响，例如 "These activities have enriched my life." 2. 非谓语动词 - 动名词作宾语：例如 "organizing health education classes"。 - 不定式表目的：例如 "to visit her child"。 3. 定语从句 - 用于修饰名词，例如 "people who lived in mud huts"。 4. 主语从句 - 用于引导句子主语，例如 "What we gained with our loss was valuable." 5. 虚拟语气 - 例如 "Maybe I should try my friend’s advice" 表示假设或建议。 常见搭配与语料积累 搭配 1. spend time doing something - 释义：花时间做某事 - 例句：We spent our time helping the poor villagers. - 近义词：devote time to doing something - 反义词：save time 2. be tired of something - 释义：厌倦某事 - 例句：I grew tired of my sorrow and loneliness. - 近义词：be fed up with - 反义词：be interested in 语料 1. the opposite of something - 释义：某事的对立面 - 例句：The opposite of loneliness would be friendship. - 近义词：contrast; reverse - 反义词：similarity 2. seek some opposites - 释义：寻找对立面 - 例句：Maybe I should seek some opposites. - 近义词：look for alternatives - 反义词：stick to the same 3. feel honored and appreciated - 释义：感到荣幸和被感激 - 例句：I felt honored and appreciated living there. - 近义词：be proud and valued - 反义词：feel neglected and overlooked 读后续写思路分析 1. 构思 - 把握文章主旨：原文围绕“在失去中发现获得”的主题，续写需延续这种情感基调。 - 确定情节走向：以积极行动弥补失去，传达转变与成长的意义。 2. 提炼框架 - 第一段：邻居带来的陪伴让作者逐渐走出孤独，开始新的社交活动。 - 第二段：非洲之行彻底改变作者的视角，学会感激并拥抱生活。 3. 实施 - 衔接开头：与给定句子自然衔接，扩展动作和心理描写。 - 结尾升华：呼应主题，用感悟总结经历。 4. 注意事项 - 时间逻辑清晰：续写内容要有连贯的时间线。 - 情感真实：突出心理转变，避免刻意拔高。 - 描写细腻：通过细节增强代入感。 推荐的描写例句 动作描写 1. She hesitated for a moment before picking up the phone to make the call. 2. He held my hand firmly, his warm smile melting my unease. 3. We shared laughter while planting flowers in the garden together. 心理描写 1. I felt a wave of relief as she agreed to meet me. 2. Slowly, I began to see a glimmer of hope shining through my despair. 3. Gratitude filled my heart as I realized how much I had gained. 环境描写 1. The dusty streets of the village shimmered under the golden sunlight. 2. A gentle breeze carried the scent of freshly baked bread, calming my restless mind. 3. The room was small but cozy, filled with laughter and the aroma of spiced tea. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$