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专题11 书面表达 1. （23-24九年级上·广东深圳南山区·期末）假如你是李华，你在英国的朋友Peter因学习压力过大和交友问题，向你倾诉了他的苦恼。你在观看“深圳市青少年心理剧展演”后，受到了启发，请你给Peter写一封邮件。 内容： 1．表达关心； 2．与他分享此次观看心理剧展演的感受 (心理展演作品有关学业压力、亲子关系等问题)； 3．给出建议：①寻求老师、同学的帮助；②…… 要求： 1．80词左右，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．作文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称； 参考词汇：psychological drama performance for teenagers 青少年心理剧展演 Dear Peter, I’m happy to hear from you. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Please let me know how you are doing!                                                            Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Peter, I’m happy to hear from you. I know you have been under pressure from studying and making friends. I really care about you. Recently I have watched a psychological drama performance for teenagers. It’s about stress from study and family relationship. I’ve learned an important lesson. I’d like to share with you. Here is my advice. At first, don’t be afraid to ask your teachers or classmates for help. Getting support can make a difference. Then, doing some sports or listening to music may help you release pressure. Stay hopeful, my dear friend. With some positive changes you can find more balance. I look forward to good news from you. Please let me know how you are doing! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己听到此消息的感受并表达关心； 第二步，与他分享此次观看心理剧展演的感受； 第三步，给出建议。 [亮点词汇] ①share with与……分享 ②ask for help请求帮助 ③make a difference起作用 [高分句型] ①Stay hopeful, my dear friend. (祈使句) ②Getting support can make a difference. (动名词短语作主语) 2. （22-23九年级上·广东深圳龙岗区·期末）初三生活忙碌而充实，有汲取知识的欢乐，也有即将面临中考的压力。假设你叫John，是阳光中学的一名初三学生。你被学校选为学生代表，写一篇英语演讲稿(How to keep healthy)，谈谈初三学生在迎接中考的阶段如何保持身心健康。请从以下两个方 面，用英语写出你的具体做法。 保持身体健康 健康饮食； ……(自由发挥) ……(自由发挥) 保持心理健康 交流沟通； ……(自由发挥) 注意： （1）短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯； （2）词数100左右，短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总次数； （3）短文中不得提及考生所在学校及自己的姓名等信息。 参考词汇：physical 生理的，    mental 心理的 How to Keep Healthy Dear classmates, Good morning. I am John from Class 1, Grade 9. As we all know, health is very important. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for listening! 【答案】例文： How to Keep Healthy Dear classmates, Good morning. I am John from Class 1, Grade 9. As we all know, health is very important. Today I will tell you what I do to keep healthy in my life. It is important to keep physical healthy. So I try to have a healthy diet. I have milk every day and always remind myself to eat more fruit and vegetables. Also, I keep doing exercise. Whenever I have time, I practice volleyball or go running. Having enough sleep is necessary as well. I manage my time properly and plan my day carefully. As a result, I seldom stay up late. At the same time, I do my best to keep mental healthy. Good communication is of great help. I share my worries with my parents and classmates. If I have problems, I will go to my teachers for help. Besides, I get relaxed by listening to music. I like folk music best as it has strong local colour. Thanks for listening! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿。 ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。 ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，根据文章开头提示，直奔主题，告诉大家自己如何保持健康。 第二步，介绍自己保持身体健康的方式。 第三步，介绍自己保持心理健康的方式。 [亮点词汇] ①keep doing exercise 保持锻炼 ②as well 也 ③of great help 很有帮助 [高分句型] I like folk music best as it has strong local colour. (as引导的原因状语从句) 3. （22-23九年级上·广东深圳光明区实验学校·期末）每年的3月21日是世界睡眠日。今年世界睡眠日的中国主题是：“良好睡眠，健康同行”。假设你是李华，是一名九年级的学生。在英语课上，你们将进行关于睡眠的讨论。请你根据以下内容提示，用英语写一篇短文，为讨论做好准备。 提示： 1. 你的睡眠状况怎样； 2. 你认为好的睡眠环境是什么样的； 3. 号召大家关注睡眠。 Hello, everyone. I’m happy to share something about sleep with you. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Hello, everyone. I’m happy to share something about sleep with you. I sleep very well. I go to bed at 10 o’clock every day, and then I get up at 7 o’clock. We need to know that a sleep environment includes three aspects: the bedroom environment, the quilt environment, and our own body environment. The quality of the sleep environment will also directly affect our sleep quality. We should pay more attention to sleep. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿，属于材料作文写作； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接短文开头，介绍你的睡眠情况如何； 第二步，介绍你认为好的睡眠环境是什么样的，可分点介绍，也可列举具体的事例； 第三步，号召大家关注睡眠并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①pay more attention to更关注…… [高分句型] ①We need to know that a sleep environment includes three aspects: the bedroom environment, the quilt environment, and our own body environment.（that引导的宾语从句） 4. （22-23·九年级上·广东深圳龙岗区龙城高级中学·期末）David最近很烦恼，临近一模考试，他觉得自己的学习压力很大，可是在家里父母依然要求他做家务。他认为做家务就是浪费时间。假如你是李华，David写信向你求助，请你给David写一封回信，帮助他解决烦恼。 要点：1. 家务劳动的意义：1. 教会我们独立，可以自己照顾自己（再补充至少1条）； 2. 合理安排学习和家务劳动的建议：1. 合理安排时间；2. 用劳动去放松自己的学习压力（再补充至少1条）。 要求：1. 词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥； 3. 不得出现真实姓名和校名； 4. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。 Dear David, I am sorry to hear that you are upset these days. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope these suggestions may help you. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】Dear David, I am sorry to hear that you are upset these days. You feel a lot of pressure in your studies, but your parents still expect you to do chores at home. You believe that doing chores is a waste of time. In fact, doing chores is meaningful. Firstly, it teaches us independence and the ability to take care of ourselves. By doing chores, we learn some important life skills, such as cooking, cleaning, and organizing. These skills are good for our daily lives. Additionally, doing chores helps us develop a sense of responsibility. Here are some suggestions for balancing studies and household chores. Properly managing time for both studying and household chores is important. You can relax and relieve study pressure by doing chores. Create a good plan for studying and household chores. I hope these suggestions may help you. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点介绍，可以适当增加，注意保持主谓一致性，无语法和标点错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。以“他觉得自己的学习压力很大，可是在家里父母依然要求做家务”来引出问题； 第二步，写出家务劳动的意义：教会我们独立，可以自己照顾自己； 第三步，写出合理安排学习和家务劳动的建议：合理安排时间；用劳动去放松自己的学习压力，制定计划。 [亮点词汇] ①pressure压力 ②independence独立 ③chores家务 ④a waste of time浪费时间 [高分句型] ①You believe that doing chores is a waste of time.（that引导的宾语从句） ②Here are some suggestions for balancing studies and household chores.（倒装句） 5. （22-23九年级上·广东深圳福田区红岭中学石厦初中部·期末）假如你是某校九年级学生李想，下个月打算竞选校广播站的英语广播员。在准备竞选演讲的过程中你遇到了一些问题。请你根据下面的提示，给学校英语俱乐部的外教Mr Brown写一封邮件求助。 提示： 1.参加竞选的原因； 2.请Mr Brown帮助纠正发音并给出一些建议； 3.约定拜访时间和地点。 要求: 1.要点齐全，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅； 3.不少于 80 词（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。参考词语：pronunciation 发音 Dear Mr Brown, I hope this email finds you well. I am Li Xiang, a Grade 9 student of our school. Next month, I’m going to compete for the English announcer of our school’s radio station. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Xiang 【答案】例文 Dear Mr Brown, I hope this email finds you well. I am Li Xiang, a Grade 9 student of our school. Next month, I’m going to compete for the English announcer of our school’s radio station. I think it can help me improve my spoken English. I can also share something useful about English with others. My pronunciation is not good, so I want to practice my pronunciation by communicating with others. I hope you can give me some advice on how to make a good presentation. I have time this weekend afternoon. Is it convenient to go to your house? I would be very thankful if you can give me a hand. Yours, Li Xiang 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件。 ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。 ③提示：文章为“第一人称”，介绍自己想竞选英语广播员，但口语发音不好，希望得到布朗先生的帮助，提示内容描述完整，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，自我介绍，引出写电子邮件的原因； 第二步，具体介绍在竞选准备中遇到的问题，约定拜访的时间和地点； 第三步，表达感谢如果对方能够提供帮助。 [亮点词汇] ① share with分享 ② something useful一些有用的 ③ want to do sth.想要做某事 ④ convenient方便的 ⑤ give sb. a hand帮助某人 [高分句型] ①I think it can help me improve my spoken English.（宾语从句） ②I hope you can give me some advice on how to make a good presentation.（宾语从句+how+动词不定式） ③I would be very thankful if you can give me a hand.（条件状语从句） ④My pronunciation is not good, so I want to practice my pronunciation by communicating with others. （so并列句+by+动词ing的方式状语） 1. （22-23九年级上·广东深圳南山区·期末）现如今，越来越多学生的视力正在减退，许多学生从小学开始就戴上眼镜了。这一现象引起了你校老师的高度重视，假设下周一你们班的英语课上将针对这一现象进行讨论，请你根据下列提示内容写一篇如何保护视力的英语发言稿为下周的讨论做准备。 要点提示： 1. 一些学生过度使用眼睛的现状； 2. 介绍一些如何保护眼睛的方法； 3. 号召大家一起保护眼睛。 参考词汇： eyesight 视力 写作要求： 1. 短文须包含所有提示信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 条理清楚，语言流畅，语句通顺，标点正确； 3. 80词左右。 As we all know, eyes are important to us. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 As we all know, eyes are important to us. But many students are experiencing declining eyesight and wearing glasses from a young age. To solve this issue, we must take action to protect our eyes. Firstly, we should give our eyes a break while using digital devices, and ensure proper lighting and safe distance from the screen. Secondly, we should also maintain a suitable reading distance and spend time outdoors. Additionally, a healthy diet rich in vitamins A and C is important for eyesight. Together, we can protect our eyes and enjoy clear vision for a better future. Thank you! 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文为一篇应用文，为发言稿； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：要点提示已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍一些学生过度使用眼睛的现状； 第二步，介绍一些保护眼睛的方法； 第三步，呼吁大家一起保护眼睛。 [亮点词汇] ① take action采取行动 ② digital devices数码设备 ③ rich in vitamins富含维生素 [高分句型] ① To solve this issue, we must take action to protect our eyes.（动词不定式作目的状语） ② Firstly, we should give our eyes a break while using digital devices, and ensure proper lighting and safe distance from the screen.（while引导的时间状语从句） 2. （22-23九年级上·广东深圳罗湖区外国语中学·期末）假设你是Charles，你所在的小区正在进行”模范家庭”的评选活动，请根据所给图表的内容，给社区中心写一封英文推荐信，向他们推荐你的家庭。 注意事项： 1. 词数：100词左右（文章开头已给出, 不计入总词数) ； 2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息； 3. 文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。 Dear sir, I would like to recommend my family for “Model Family” in our neighborhood this year. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope we can get the award. I am looking forward to your answer. Yours faithfully, Charles 【答案】例文 Dear sir, I would like to recommend my family for “Model Family” in our neighbourhood this year. There are five people in my family. They are my grandparents, my parents and me. We are hardworking and glad to take on new challenges. We care for and respect each other. We get on well with our neighbors and often help each other. When we have problems, we are always ready to help. People here are like a big family. We think it’s important to live a green life. We always protect the environment. We never throw litter everywhere. We often help to clean the garden in our neighborhood. We have a balanced diet to keep healthy. We often take an active part in volunteer activities to help people in need. My mother and I used to work in the old people’s home as volunteers. We have sent food and clothes to the students in the poor villages. I hope we can get the award. I am looking forward to your answer. Yours faithfully, Charles 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封推荐信； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己的家庭成员之间的关系。 第二步，介绍与邻居之间的关系。 第三步，介绍如何为环境保护做出的努力。 第四步，表达愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①take on new challenges迎接新的挑战 ②care for照顾 ③get on well with和……相处融洽 [高分句型] ①When we have problems, we are always ready to help. (when引导时间状语从句) ②We think it’s important to live a green life. (省略that的宾语从句) 3. （20-21九年级上·广东深圳宝安区·期末）你所在的学校与广西都安三只羊中学是对口帮扶学校，为了传递爱心，你们将组织一次为期5天的 “帮扶姊妹校” 活动。作为这次活动的主要负责人，请你以学生会的名义，根据以下信息要点拟定一份广播稿，呼吁大家积极参与。 写作要点：1. 捐献书籍及文具；为增进友谊，你们一起参加读书会；进行一次篮球赛； 2. 路途遥远，注意安全；因为是山区请注意保暖； 3. 鼓励大家参加的原因。(至少一点) 写作要求：1. 不得在作文中出现学校、班级的真实名称和学生的真实姓名； 2. 语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 提示词：donate 捐献；stationery 文具；reading salon 读书会 Dear students, We’re planning a five-day trip named “Helping our Sister School” in Sanzhiyang Middle School, Du’an, Guangxi Province during the first week of our winter holiday. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Join us and I believe that you’re sure to enjoy a more meaningful holiday! Students’ Union 【答案】例文 Dear students, We’re planning a five-day trip named “Helping our Sister School” in Sanzhiyang Middle School, Du’an, Guangxi Province during the first week of our winter holiday. First, we will donate some books and stationery for them to help them with their schooling. Second, we will have a reading salon and a basketball match together to build up our friendship. However, it’s necessary for us to pay attention to safety because it’s really a long way to go. In addition, it is a mountainous area, so please take enough clothes to keep you warm. If you take part in it, you can not only show your love for the poor children, but you can also learn to cherish your present life today. What a special experience! Join us and I believe that you’re sure to enjoy a more meaningful holiday! Students’ Union 【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求根据提示写一份广播稿，呼吁大家积极参与你们将组织的一次为期5天的活动。活动内容是“帮扶姊妹校”。提示内容要写全。 2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称为主来行文，时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。本文可分为四段，第一段写将如何帮扶姊妹校，第二段写注意安全，第三段写鼓励大家参加的原因，第四段结尾，说明如果参加的话就会享受一个更有意义的假期。写作内容要齐全，注意保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。 4. （2020·广东深圳·中考真题）深圳市正在争创全国文明城市、假定你是鹏城中学学生会主席，希望同学们为"创文'做出自己的贡献。请你按照所提示的要点，代表学生会写一篇倡议书。 环境保护 ①垃圾分类；②绿色出行 公益慈善 ①志愿服务；②…… 人际交往 ①诚信友善；②…… 要求： 1、词数80左右(开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数)； 2、要点齐全，可适当发挥； 3、条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范； 4、文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 参考词汇：分类 sort out    志愿者volunteer     贡献 contribution Dear friends, As we know, Shenzhen is working hard to win the title of China's National Civilized City. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. All in all, Shenzhen is our home. It's time to take action. The Student Union July 20, 2020 【答案】Dear friends, As we know, Shenzhen is working hard to win the title of China's National Civilized City.(引出话题) It's well known that Shenzhen is striving for one of the ten civilized cities in China, and now it is a good opportunity for us to make our own contributions.(倡议缘由) Firstly, more changes in our daily life, such as sorting out the rubbish and travelling in a greener way, can be made to protect the city environment. What's more, to make Shenzhen a loving city, we are also supposed to help those in need by doing some voluntary work or raising donations.【高分句型一】 Last but not least, get along with others in an honest and friendly way. We'd better avoid talking about others' privacy if we want to show our respect.(具体介绍如何做) I strongly believe that we will make Shenzhen a more civilized and beautiful city with our joint efforts.(展望) All in all, Shenzhen is our home. It's time to take action.【高分句型二】(号召) The Student Union July 20, 2020 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于倡议书写作。在写作时应承接短文开头；第一段引出话题；第二段写倡议缘由；第三段具体介绍如何做；第四段进行展望；第五段号召大家行动起来。 2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来进行写作；时态采用一般现在时为主，写作时要注意语句通顺，语意连贯，紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡，要注意涵盖所给提示。 5. （20-21九年级上·广东深圳盐田区·期末）上周班会课，你的班级对同学们进行了亲子关系调查，数据显示有很多同学与父母沟通方面存在困难。假设你是班长，请你写一份发言稿，针对如何与父母沟通的问题，给同学们提出合理建议。 要求: 1、至少提3点建议 2、字数80词左右, 3、发言稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：agree, disagree, quarrel with sb, solve the problem, be patient, get a satisfactory result, find an acceptable answer, put oneself in one’s shoes (换位思考) Dear friends, I’m so sorry to hear that most of us have trouble communicating with our parents. Today I’d like to _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thanks for your listening. 【答案】One possible version: Dear friends, I’m so sorry to hear that most of us have trouble communicating with our parents. Today I’d like to give some suggestions. Nowadays, students cannot communicate with parents well. Many students think it’s hard to talk with their parents. How to communicate with our parents? Here are some suggestions. Firstly, talk to your parents politely, or they will not feel like to talk to you. Second, try to think about your parents more, so you will find that you can understand them. Also, do not forget to care your parents, they will be pleased if you do that and they will be happy to listen to you too. If you feel hard to communicate with them, you can tell your parents about this situation, maybe they will think about themselves and try to understand you. By doing these things, you can talk to your parents more easily. That’s all. Thanks for your listening. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇发言稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开头已给出，引出本文主题； 第二步，就如何与父母沟通，提出合理的建议； 第三步，感谢聆听。 [亮点词汇] ①have trouble doing sth做某事有困难 ②communicate with与……沟通 ③think about考虑 [高分句型] ①Here are some suggestions.（倒装句） ②If you feel hard to communicate with them, you can tell your parents about this situation（if引导条件状语从句） 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！10 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！10 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 专题11 书面表达 1. （23-24九年级上·广东深圳南山区·期末）假如你是李华，你在英国的朋友Peter因学习压力过大和交友问题，向你倾诉了他的苦恼。你在观看“深圳市青少年心理剧展演”后，受到了启发，请你给Peter写一封邮件。 内容： 1．表达关心； 2．与他分享此次观看心理剧展演的感受 (心理展演作品有关学业压力、亲子关系等问题)； 3．给出建议：①寻求老师、同学的帮助；②…… 要求： 1．80词左右，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．作文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称； 参考词汇：psychological drama performance for teenagers 青少年心理剧展演 Dear Peter, I’m happy to hear from you. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Please let me know how you are doing!                                                            Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Peter, I’m happy to hear from you. I know you have been under pressure from studying and making friends. I really care about you. Recently I have watched a psychological drama performance for teenagers. It’s about stress from study and family relationship. I’ve learned an important lesson. I’d like to share with you. Here is my advice. At first, don’t be afraid to ask your teachers or classmates for help. Getting support can make a difference. Then, doing some sports or listening to music may help you release pressure. Stay hopeful, my dear friend. With some positive changes you can find more balance. I look forward to good news from you. Please let me know how you are doing! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己听到此消息的感受并表达关心； 第二步，与他分享此次观看心理剧展演的感受； 第三步，给出建议。 [亮点词汇] ①share with与……分享 ②ask for help请求帮助 ③make a difference起作用 [高分句型] ①Stay hopeful, my dear friend. (祈使句) ②Getting support can make a difference. (动名词短语作主语) 2. （22-23九年级上·广东深圳龙岗区·期末）初三生活忙碌而充实，有汲取知识的欢乐，也有即将面临中考的压力。假设你叫John，是阳光中学的一名初三学生。你被学校选为学生代表，写一篇英语演讲稿(How to keep healthy)，谈谈初三学生在迎接中考的阶段如何保持身心健康。请从以下两个方 面，用英语写出你的具体做法。 保持身体健康 健康饮食； ……(自由发挥) ……(自由发挥) 保持心理健康 交流沟通； ……(自由发挥) 注意： （1）短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯； （2）词数100左右，短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总次数； （3）短文中不得提及考生所在学校及自己的姓名等信息。 参考词汇：physical 生理的，    mental 心理的 How to Keep Healthy Dear classmates, Good morning. I am John from Class 1, Grade 9. As we all know, health is very important. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for listening! 【答案】例文： How to Keep Healthy Dear classmates, Good morning. I am John from Class 1, Grade 9. As we all know, health is very important. Today I will tell you what I do to keep healthy in my life. It is important to keep physical healthy. So I try to have a healthy diet. I have milk every day and always remind myself to eat more fruit and vegetables. Also, I keep doing exercise. Whenever I have time, I practice volleyball or go running. Having enough sleep is necessary as well. I manage my time properly and plan my day carefully. As a result, I seldom stay up late. At the same time, I do my best to keep mental healthy. Good communication is of great help. I share my worries with my parents and classmates. If I have problems, I will go to my teachers for help. Besides, I get relaxed by listening to music. I like folk music best as it has strong local colour. Thanks for listening! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿。 ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。 ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，根据文章开头提示，直奔主题，告诉大家自己如何保持健康。 第二步，介绍自己保持身体健康的方式。 第三步，介绍自己保持心理健康的方式。 [亮点词汇] ①keep doing exercise 保持锻炼 ②as well 也 ③of great help 很有帮助 [高分句型] I like folk music best as it has strong local colour. (as引导的原因状语从句) 3. （22-23九年级上·广东深圳光明区实验学校·期末）每年的3月21日是世界睡眠日。今年世界睡眠日的中国主题是：“良好睡眠，健康同行”。假设你是李华，是一名九年级的学生。在英语课上，你们将进行关于睡眠的讨论。请你根据以下内容提示，用英语写一篇短文，为讨论做好准备。 提示： 1. 你的睡眠状况怎样； 2. 你认为好的睡眠环境是什么样的； 3. 号召大家关注睡眠。 Hello, everyone. I’m happy to share something about sleep with you. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Hello, everyone. I’m happy to share something about sleep with you. I sleep very well. I go to bed at 10 o’clock every day, and then I get up at 7 o’clock. We need to know that a sleep environment includes three aspects: the bedroom environment, the quilt environment, and our own body environment. The quality of the sleep environment will also directly affect our sleep quality. We should pay more attention to sleep. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿，属于材料作文写作； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接短文开头，介绍你的睡眠情况如何； 第二步，介绍你认为好的睡眠环境是什么样的，可分点介绍，也可列举具体的事例； 第三步，号召大家关注睡眠并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①pay more attention to更关注…… [高分句型] ①We need to know that a sleep environment includes three aspects: the bedroom environment, the quilt environment, and our own body environment.（that引导的宾语从句） 4. （22-23·九年级上·广东深圳龙岗区龙城高级中学·期末）David最近很烦恼，临近一模考试，他觉得自己的学习压力很大，可是在家里父母依然要求他做家务。他认为做家务就是浪费时间。假如你是李华，David写信向你求助，请你给David写一封回信，帮助他解决烦恼。 要点：1. 家务劳动的意义：1. 教会我们独立，可以自己照顾自己（再补充至少1条）； 2. 合理安排学习和家务劳动的建议：1. 合理安排时间；2. 用劳动去放松自己的学习压力（再补充至少1条）。 要求：1. 词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥； 3. 不得出现真实姓名和校名； 4. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。 Dear David, I am sorry to hear that you are upset these days. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope these suggestions may help you. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】Dear David, I am sorry to hear that you are upset these days. You feel a lot of pressure in your studies, but your parents still expect you to do chores at home. You believe that doing chores is a waste of time. In fact, doing chores is meaningful. Firstly, it teaches us independence and the ability to take care of ourselves. By doing chores, we learn some important life skills, such as cooking, cleaning, and organizing. These skills are good for our daily lives. Additionally, doing chores helps us develop a sense of responsibility. Here are some suggestions for balancing studies and household chores. Properly managing time for both studying and household chores is important. You can relax and relieve study pressure by doing chores. Create a good plan for studying and household chores. I hope these suggestions may help you. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点介绍，可以适当增加，注意保持主谓一致性，无语法和标点错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。以“他觉得自己的学习压力很大，可是在家里父母依然要求做家务”来引出问题； 第二步，写出家务劳动的意义：教会我们独立，可以自己照顾自己； 第三步，写出合理安排学习和家务劳动的建议：合理安排时间；用劳动去放松自己的学习压力，制定计划。 [亮点词汇] ①pressure压力 ②independence独立 ③chores家务 ④a waste of time浪费时间 [高分句型] ①You believe that doing chores is a waste of time.（that引导的宾语从句） ②Here are some suggestions for balancing studies and household chores.（倒装句） 5. （22-23九年级上·广东深圳福田区红岭中学石厦初中部·期末）假如你是某校九年级学生李想，下个月打算竞选校广播站的英语广播员。在准备竞选演讲的过程中你遇到了一些问题。请你根据下面的提示，给学校英语俱乐部的外教Mr Brown写一封邮件求助。 提示： 1.参加竞选的原因； 2.请Mr Brown帮助纠正发音并给出一些建议； 3.约定拜访时间和地点。 要求: 1.要点齐全，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅； 3.不少于 80 词（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。参考词语：pronunciation 发音 Dear Mr Brown, I hope this email finds you well. I am Li Xiang, a Grade 9 student of our school. Next month, I’m going to compete for the English announcer of our school’s radio station. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Xiang 【答案】例文 Dear Mr Brown, I hope this email finds you well. I am Li Xiang, a Grade 9 student of our school. Next month, I’m going to compete for the English announcer of our school’s radio station. I think it can help me improve my spoken English. I can also share something useful about English with others. My pronunciation is not good, so I want to practice my pronunciation by communicating with others. I hope you can give me some advice on how to make a good presentation. I have time this weekend afternoon. Is it convenient to go to your house? I would be very thankful if you can give me a hand. Yours, Li Xiang 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件。 ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。 ③提示：文章为“第一人称”，介绍自己想竞选英语广播员，但口语发音不好，希望得到布朗先生的帮助，提示内容描述完整，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，自我介绍，引出写电子邮件的原因； 第二步，具体介绍在竞选准备中遇到的问题，约定拜访的时间和地点； 第三步，表达感谢如果对方能够提供帮助。 [亮点词汇] ① share with分享 ② something useful一些有用的 ③ want to do sth.想要做某事 ④ convenient方便的 ⑤ give sb. a hand帮助某人 [高分句型] ①I think it can help me improve my spoken English.（宾语从句） ②I hope you can give me some advice on how to make a good presentation.（宾语从句+how+动词不定式） ③I would be very thankful if you can give me a hand.（条件状语从句） ④My pronunciation is not good, so I want to practice my pronunciation by communicating with others. （so并列句+by+动词ing的方式状语） 1. （22-23九年级上·广东深圳南山区·期末）现如今，越来越多学生的视力正在减退，许多学生从小学开始就戴上眼镜了。这一现象引起了你校老师的高度重视，假设下周一你们班的英语课上将针对这一现象进行讨论，请你根据下列提示内容写一篇如何保护视力的英语发言稿为下周的讨论做准备。 要点提示： 1. 一些学生过度使用眼睛的现状； 2. 介绍一些如何保护眼睛的方法； 3. 号召大家一起保护眼睛。 参考词汇： eyesight 视力 写作要求： 1. 短文须包含所有提示信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 条理清楚，语言流畅，语句通顺，标点正确； 3. 80词左右。 As we all know, eyes are important to us. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 As we all know, eyes are important to us. But many students are experiencing declining eyesight and wearing glasses from a young age. To solve this issue, we must take action to protect our eyes. Firstly, we should give our eyes a break while using digital devices, and ensure proper lighting and safe distance from the screen. Secondly, we should also maintain a suitable reading distance and spend time outdoors. Additionally, a healthy diet rich in vitamins A and C is important for eyesight. Together, we can protect our eyes and enjoy clear vision for a better future. Thank you! 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文为一篇应用文，为发言稿； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：要点提示已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍一些学生过度使用眼睛的现状； 第二步，介绍一些保护眼睛的方法； 第三步，呼吁大家一起保护眼睛。 [亮点词汇] ① take action采取行动 ② digital devices数码设备 ③ rich in vitamins富含维生素 [高分句型] ① To solve this issue, we must take action to protect our eyes.（动词不定式作目的状语） ② Firstly, we should give our eyes a break while using digital devices, and ensure proper lighting and safe distance from the screen.（while引导的时间状语从句） 2. （22-23九年级上·广东深圳罗湖区外国语中学·期末）假设你是Charles，你所在的小区正在进行”模范家庭”的评选活动，请根据所给图表的内容，给社区中心写一封英文推荐信，向他们推荐你的家庭。 注意事项： 1. 词数：100词左右（文章开头已给出, 不计入总词数) ； 2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息； 3. 文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。 Dear sir, I would like to recommend my family for “Model Family” in our neighborhood this year. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope we can get the award. I am looking forward to your answer. Yours faithfully, Charles 【答案】例文 Dear sir, I would like to recommend my family for “Model Family” in our neighbourhood this year. There are five people in my family. They are my grandparents, my parents and me. We are hardworking and glad to take on new challenges. We care for and respect each other. We get on well with our neighbors and often help each other. When we have problems, we are always ready to help. People here are like a big family. We think it’s important to live a green life. We always protect the environment. We never throw litter everywhere. We often help to clean the garden in our neighborhood. We have a balanced diet to keep healthy. We often take an active part in volunteer activities to help people in need. My mother and I used to work in the old people’s home as volunteers. We have sent food and clothes to the students in the poor villages. I hope we can get the award. I am looking forward to your answer. Yours faithfully, Charles 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封推荐信； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己的家庭成员之间的关系。 第二步，介绍与邻居之间的关系。 第三步，介绍如何为环境保护做出的努力。 第四步，表达愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①take on new challenges迎接新的挑战 ②care for照顾 ③get on well with和……相处融洽 [高分句型] ①When we have problems, we are always ready to help. (when引导时间状语从句) ②We think it’s important to live a green life. (省略that的宾语从句) 3. （20-21九年级上·广东深圳宝安区·期末）你所在的学校与广西都安三只羊中学是对口帮扶学校，为了传递爱心，你们将组织一次为期5天的 “帮扶姊妹校” 活动。作为这次活动的主要负责人，请你以学生会的名义，根据以下信息要点拟定一份广播稿，呼吁大家积极参与。 写作要点：1. 捐献书籍及文具；为增进友谊，你们一起参加读书会；进行一次篮球赛； 2. 路途遥远，注意安全；因为是山区请注意保暖； 3. 鼓励大家参加的原因。(至少一点) 写作要求：1. 不得在作文中出现学校、班级的真实名称和学生的真实姓名； 2. 语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 提示词：donate 捐献；stationery 文具；reading salon 读书会 Dear students, We’re planning a five-day trip named “Helping our Sister School” in Sanzhiyang Middle School, Du’an, Guangxi Province during the first week of our winter holiday. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Join us and I believe that you’re sure to enjoy a more meaningful holiday! Students’ Union 【答案】例文 Dear students, We’re planning a five-day trip named “Helping our Sister School” in Sanzhiyang Middle School, Du’an, Guangxi Province during the first week of our winter holiday. First, we will donate some books and stationery for them to help them with their schooling. Second, we will have a reading salon and a basketball match together to build up our friendship. However, it’s necessary for us to pay attention to safety because it’s really a long way to go. In addition, it is a mountainous area, so please take enough clothes to keep you warm. If you take part in it, you can not only show your love for the poor children, but you can also learn to cherish your present life today. What a special experience! Join us and I believe that you’re sure to enjoy a more meaningful holiday! Students’ Union 【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求根据提示写一份广播稿，呼吁大家积极参与你们将组织的一次为期5天的活动。活动内容是“帮扶姊妹校”。提示内容要写全。 2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称为主来行文，时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。本文可分为四段，第一段写将如何帮扶姊妹校，第二段写注意安全，第三段写鼓励大家参加的原因，第四段结尾，说明如果参加的话就会享受一个更有意义的假期。写作内容要齐全，注意保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。 4. （2020·广东深圳·中考真题）深圳市正在争创全国文明城市、假定你是鹏城中学学生会主席，希望同学们为"创文'做出自己的贡献。请你按照所提示的要点，代表学生会写一篇倡议书。 环境保护 ①垃圾分类；②绿色出行 公益慈善 ①志愿服务；②…… 人际交往 ①诚信友善；②…… 要求： 1、词数80左右(开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数)； 2、要点齐全，可适当发挥； 3、条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范； 4、文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 参考词汇：分类 sort out    志愿者volunteer     贡献 contribution Dear friends, As we know, Shenzhen is working hard to win the title of China's National Civilized City. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. All in all, Shenzhen is our home. It's time to take action. The Student Union July 20, 2020 【答案】Dear friends, As we know, Shenzhen is working hard to win the title of China's National Civilized City.(引出话题) It's well known that Shenzhen is striving for one of the ten civilized cities in China, and now it is a good opportunity for us to make our own contributions.(倡议缘由) Firstly, more changes in our daily life, such as sorting out the rubbish and travelling in a greener way, can be made to protect the city environment. What's more, to make Shenzhen a loving city, we are also supposed to help those in need by doing some voluntary work or raising donations.【高分句型一】 Last but not least, get along with others in an honest and friendly way. We'd better avoid talking about others' privacy if we want to show our respect.(具体介绍如何做) I strongly believe that we will make Shenzhen a more civilized and beautiful city with our joint efforts.(展望) All in all, Shenzhen is our home. It's time to take action.【高分句型二】(号召) The Student Union July 20, 2020 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于倡议书写作。在写作时应承接短文开头；第一段引出话题；第二段写倡议缘由；第三段具体介绍如何做；第四段进行展望；第五段号召大家行动起来。 2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来进行写作；时态采用一般现在时为主，写作时要注意语句通顺，语意连贯，紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡，要注意涵盖所给提示。 5. （20-21九年级上·广东深圳盐田区·期末）上周班会课，你的班级对同学们进行了亲子关系调查，数据显示有很多同学与父母沟通方面存在困难。假设你是班长，请你写一份发言稿，针对如何与父母沟通的问题，给同学们提出合理建议。 要求: 1、至少提3点建议 2、字数80词左右, 3、发言稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：agree, disagree, quarrel with sb, solve the problem, be patient, get a satisfactory result, find an acceptable answer, put oneself in one’s shoes (换位思考) Dear friends, I’m so sorry to hear that most of us have trouble communicating with our parents. Today I’d like to _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thanks for your listening. 【答案】One possible version: Dear friends, I’m so sorry to hear that most of us have trouble communicating with our parents. Today I’d like to give some suggestions. Nowadays, students cannot communicate with parents well. Many students think it’s hard to talk with their parents. How to communicate with our parents? Here are some suggestions. Firstly, talk to your parents politely, or they will not feel like to talk to you. Second, try to think about your parents more, so you will find that you can understand them. Also, do not forget to care your parents, they will be pleased if you do that and they will be happy to listen to you too. If you feel hard to communicate with them, you can tell your parents about this situation, maybe they will think about themselves and try to understand you. By doing these things, you can talk to your parents more easily. That’s all. Thanks for your listening. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇发言稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开头已给出，引出本文主题； 第二步，就如何与父母沟通，提出合理的建议； 第三步，感谢聆听。 [亮点词汇] ①have trouble doing sth做某事有困难 ②communicate with与……沟通 ③think about考虑 [高分句型] ①Here are some suggestions.（倒装句） ②If you feel hard to communicate with them, you can tell your parents about this situation（if引导条件状语从句） 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！10 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！10 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$