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专题15 书面表达
1.
(23-24九年级上·广东广州黄浦区·期末)你在英语课上学习了许多中外故事,如Two geniues,Cao Chong weighs an elephant,The gifts。请从以上3个故事中挑选一个,并围绕以下要点写一份读书报告。
A report on a story
What is the story about?
——the name
——the plot
Which character do you like best?
——the person
——the reason
What can you learn from the story?
注意:
1. 可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2. 词数80词左右(开头已给出,不计入词数);
3. 参考人名词汇:Albert Einstein, Della, Jim;
4. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
This is my report on the story.
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【答案】例文
This is my report on the story. It is a story about Cao Chong. One day, Sun Quan sent Cao Cao a huge elephant. Cao Cao was quite pleased and wanted to know its weight. However, no one knew how to solve this problem. Just then, Cao Chong asked some soldiers to lead the elephant onto a boat. He drew a line on the side of the boat to mark how low it went. Then Cao Chong let the soldiers fill the boats with rocks until water reached the line on the boat. That was the weight of the elephant. I like Cao Chong because he is very intelligent. From this story, I learned that I should deal with problems from another view.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇读书报告,属于材料作文。
②时态:本文应使用“一般过去时”为主。
③提示:写作要点应注意题干给出的“介绍一个故事”;“自己喜欢的人物以及原因”并适当补充,使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点题,介绍自己喜欢的故事。
第二步,介绍故事的过程,以及自己最喜欢的人物。
第三步,分享自己的感受,并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①ask sb to do让某人做某事
②fill with用……填满
[高分句型]
①I like Cao Chong because he is very intelligent.(because引导的原因状语从句)
②From this story, I learned that I should deal with problems from another view.(宾语从句)
2.
(23-24九年级上·广东广州番禺区·期末)假如你是李华,下周五下午你们学校将在礼堂举办 “英语读书节” 活动。你的外国朋友Simon对此很感兴趣,并希望能了解更多的信息。请你根据以下内容写一封电子邮件,向他介绍活动安排。
English Reading Festival
Time
Next Friday afternoon
Place
School Hall
Activities
Share a favorite book;
. . .
Purpose
. . .
注意:
1. 可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2. 词数80个左右(邮件的开头已给出,不计入词数);
3. 不能透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Dear Simon,
How is it going? I am writing to tell you about the English Reading Festival in our school.
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Would you like to join us? I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear Simon,
How is it going? I am writing to tell you about the English Reading Festival in our school.
Our school will hold an English Reading Festival in the School Hall next Friday afternoon. In this event, we will share a book we like. Then everyone will discuss it together. Then we will also watch some movies that have been modified based on these books. The main purpose of this activity is to make everyone enjoy reading and broaden their horizons.
Would you like to join us? I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:以 “一般将来时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏 “英语读书节” 的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接短文开头,在第二段开始叙述 “英语读书节” 的相关信息;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。以表格中所包含的 “时间、地点、活动、目的” 为重点着重介绍,适当拓展,保证条理清晰;
第三步,承接结尾。
[亮点词汇]
①based on 以……为基础
②enjoy doing sth.喜欢做某事
[高分句型]
①In this event, we will share a book we like.(省略that引导的定语从句)
②Then we will also watch some movies that have been modified based on these books.(that引导的定语从句)
3.
(23-24九年级上·广东广州海珠区·期末)假设你是学校读书俱乐部的成员,请你根据以下内容,写一篇介绍《小王子》的文章在读书分享会中推荐这本书。
书名
The Little Prince
作者
Antoine de Saint﹣Exupéry(法国)
主要角色(Main Character)
来自 B﹣612 小行星的小王子
主要内容(Brief Introduction)
(1)一个关于爱和友谊的故事。
(2)小王子对世界充满好奇心,在旅行中寻求答案。
(3)途中遇到各种各样的人,经历了许多冒险。
推荐理由
(1)插图精美。
(2)教会我们如何与他人相处,勇敢面对困难不放弃。
你的评价
……(自由发挥)
注意:
(1)参考词汇:B﹣612小行星(Asteroid B﹣612),对……感到好奇(be curious about),插图(illustration);
(2)词数:80词左右(开头已给出,不计入词数);
(3)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Hello, everyone. Today I’d like to recommend my favourite book The Little Prince written by Antoine de Saint﹣Exupéry to you.
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【答案】例文
Hello I’d like to recommend my favorite book The Little Prince written by Antoine de Saint﹣Exupéry to you. The main character of the book is the little prince from Asteroid B﹣612. The Little Prince is a story about love and friendship. The little prince is curious about the world and look for answers on his travels. He met all kinds of people and experienced many adventures on the journey. I recommend this book because there are many beautiful illustrations. Besides, it teaches us how to get along with others and how to face difficulties bravely and never give up. I think the book is worthreading.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”与“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍推荐的书《小王子》以及作者;
第二步,具体介绍主要角色、主要内容以及推荐理由;
第三步,书写结语,总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①recommend推荐
②adventures冒险
③get along with与……相处
[高分句型]
①I recommend this book because there are many beautiful illustrations.(because引导的原因状语从句)
②I think the book is worthreading.(宾语从句)
4.
(23-24九年级上·广东广州荔湾区·期末)你在英国交流学习期间曾到玫瑰餐厅用餐。请你根据以下要点,用英语在餐厅官网写一篇点评。
点评内容
地理位置
位于市中心,交通便利
食物
(请补充)
(请补充)
(请补充)
改进建议
(请补充)
Recently I ate at Rose Restaurant. Now I want to share my ideas on it with you. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Recently I ate at Rose Restaurant. Now I want to share my ideas on it with you. It is located in the city center. Its transportation is so convenient that I can get here easily. The food here is very delicious and cheap. I ate a lot of food here, but I didn’t spend much money. What’s more, The waiters here are very friendly. They won’t keep you waiting. Although it is good, I still have a suggestion. The opening hours are at 8 a.m. I hope they can open early.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:一般现在时与一般过去时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,并适当添加细节,突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点评餐厅地理位置、食物及服务员;
第二步,给出改进建议。
[亮点词汇]
①is located in位于
②convenient便利的
③What’s more而且
[高分句型]
①I hope they can open early.(省略that的宾语从句)
②Its transportation is so convenient that I can get here easily.(so…that句型)
5.
(23-24九年级上·广东广州花都区·期末)假如你是李华,作为本班参赛选手之一参加了学校举办的主题为“A taste of literature”的读者剧场展评活动。请写一则英文日记,记录这特别的一刻。
日记需包含以下要点:
开始时间: 2 p.m.
展评地点:School Hall
参加人员:七至九年级学生;每班1个节目
活动主题:A Taste of Literature
过程与感受: 展示前,……
展示中,……
展示后, ……
结果与收获: …… (请你补充)
注意:
1. 词数: 不少于80 词 (文章的开头已给出,不计入词数);
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息, 否则不予评分。
December 29, 2023
Dear Diary,
Today, I took part in the Readers Theater activity.
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Good luck with everything!
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
December 29, 2023
Dear Diary,
Today, I took part in the Readers Theater activity. This activity started at 2 p.m. in the School Hall. The theme of this event is A taste of literature. Students from seventh to ninth grade have prepared a program for each class. Before the presentation, everyone was carefully preparing for this event. In the activity, all the performing classes completed their tasks well, and everyone was very happy to watch. After the activity, the teacher summarized it. Through this activity, we have learned a lot of knowledge.
Good luck with everything!
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为日记;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:根据所给要点完成写作,部分内容需要自己发挥,注意避免语法错误和单词拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接上文,先介绍活动的时间、地点和主题;
第二步,详细介绍活动的过程以及自己的感受;
第三步,书写结语(已给出)。
[亮点词汇]
①from...to...从……到……
②prepare for为……做准备
③a lot of 很多
[高分句型]
①In the activity, all the performing classes completed their tasks well, and everyone was very happy to watch.(and连接的并列句;不定式作原因状语)
6.
(23-24九年级上·广东广州白云区·期末)你们学校英语社团正在组织题为“My family life is ________”的征文活动。假如你是李明,请根据以下内容提示用英语写一篇短文参加活动。
内容要点如下:
1. 五口之家,家庭幸福,邻里和睦:
2. 分担家务,周末户外活动:
3. 相互支持,经常交流,良好家规助我成长;
4. 请补充说明一至两点与家庭相关的情况。
注意:
1. 先用一个形较词补充题目;
2. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数:80字左右;
4. 内容连贯,不要逐条翻译。
My family life is ________
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【答案】例文
My family life is happy
My family is a small but happy one. There are five people in my family. Our neighbors are friendly.
In our family, everyone shares the housework. We help each other. At weekends, we often go out for outdoor activities. It’s a great way to relax and enjoy nature together. We also have some good family rules that help me grow healthily.
My family loves pets. We have a cute cat named Mimi who brings us lots of joy. In conclusion, I am grateful to have such a happy family. They give me love, support and guidance, which make me feel safe and confident. I love my family.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”。
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏要点,包括:注意行文连贯、逻辑清晰、无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步:阐述家庭基本情况;
第二步:阐述家人们分担家务,周末户外活动以及相互支持,经常交流,良好家规助我成长;
第三步:阐述你的感想,呼应标题。
[亮点词汇]
①healthily健康地
②be grateful to 对……心存感激
③guidance指引
[高分句型]
①We also have some good family rules that help me grow healthily. (that引导的定语从句)
②They give me love, support and guidance, which make me feel safe and confident.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
7.
(23-24九年级上·广东广州天河区·期末)《校园树洞》栏目Aunt Linda收到一封求助信,以下是她在信上做的标注。请根据以下要点提示,帮助Aunt Linda写一封回信。
Dear Aunt Linda,
I am worried about my best friend Ben. He plays online games until midnight. He feels tired in class and learns little. He always asks me to lend him the homework to copy it. If I don’t, he gets angry with me. What should I do?
Yours,
Mike
回信内容:
1. 对Mike的烦恼表示理解;
2. 结合信上的问题提出至少3条建议。
注意:要求词数80—120词左右,己给出的部分不算入总词数。
Dear Mike,
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Yours,
Aunt Linda
【答案】例文
Dear Mike,
Most of the students will meet this kind of problem, so you are not alone. Here are some suggestions.
First, it’s harmful to Ben’s health if he stays up late to play online games. To help him develop a healthy hobby and lessen his interest in online games, you can start with doing some sports with him. In this way, your friend can be more focused in the class. Besides, you had better help Ben with his homework instead of just letting him copy yours. You can suggest him listening carefully to the teachers during classes so that he can finish homework on his own. If you have already done these but your friend is still angry with you, you can ask adults for help, such as teachers and parents.
In a word, it is necessary for you to try some effective ways that won’t hurt both of you.
Yours,
Aunt Linda
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封书信;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:本文主要是根据来信中的问题给对方一些建议,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题,对Mike的烦恼表示理解;
第二步,结合信上的问题提出至少3条建议;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be harmful to对……有害
②had better do sth.最好做某事
③be angry with生某人的气
[高分句型]
①To help him develop a healthy hobby and lessen his interest in online games, you can start with doing some sports with him. (动词不定式作目的状语)
②You can suggest him listening carefully to the teachers during classes so that he can finish homework on his own. (so that引导的目的状语从句)
③If you have already done these but your friend is still angry with you, you can ask adults for help, such as teachers and parents. (if引导的条件状语从句)
8.
(23-24九年级上·广东广州南武中学·期末)许多人喜欢在闲暇时观看有趣的电视节目来放松自己。假设你是李华,请根据以下提示,介绍自己喜欢的一个电视节目。
节目名称
《动物世界》
喜欢该节目的原因
1. 释放压力;
2. 开阔视野(broaden one’s horizons),可以了解更多关于动物的知识;
3.……(请补充至少1个原因)
注意:1. 词数:80词左右(文章的开头已给出,不计入词数);
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
A lot of people like watching interesting TV programmes to relax when they have spare time.
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【答案】 A lot of people like watching interesting TV programmes to relax when they have spare time. There are many different kinds of TV programmes every day. Some of them are cooking shows, and some of them are soap operas. My favourite programme is called Animal World.
Firstly, it is a good way for me to relax myself, especially after long hours of studying. Secondly, with this amazing TV programme, I can see various living things from different places. Finally, it not only broadens our horizons, but also give us a lot of useful knowledge about animals and plants.
For these reasons, Animal World is an interesting and valuable TV programme. This show opens the door to a brand-new world that I don’t know. I really enjoy watching it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意不要遗漏要点,写作过程中要适当地进行补充,注意上下文的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己最喜欢的电视节目是什么;
第二步,具体阐述喜欢该节目的原因;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①favourite最喜欢的
②especially尤其,特别
③knowledge知识
④brand-new崭新的
[高分句型]
①Finally, it not only broadens our horizons, but also give us a lot of useful knowledge about animals and plants.(not only…but also…)
②This show opens the door to a brand-new world that I don’t know.(that引导的定语从句)
1.
(22-23九年级上·广东广州天河区广州中学·期末)假如你的学校正在举办“好书伴我成长”的活动。请根据以下内容提示,以“Growing up with good books”为题,用英语写一封倡议书, 向全校同学发出读书的倡议。
读书的益处
获取知识,增长见识,使人快乐
存在的现象
听音乐、看电视、上网,占用了大部分业务时间
发出倡议
多读书,读经典好书;弘扬中国传统文化让读书成为生活得一部分
注意:
1、词数不少于80词,开头不计入总词数。
2、可适当发挥,但需注意语言通顺、流畅、准确。
•请登录E 听说平台,点击“读写专项”作业,拍照上传答案。
•开头已给出,不需要抄写到答题卡上,续写即可。(以此处说明为准,忽略答卷说明)
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【答案】例文
Growing up with good books
My dear friends,
Reading is very important, we can get knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds but also make us cleverer and happier. Our study can be improved if we read more good books. The more we read, the more we will learn, and the brighter our future will become.
However, some students spend much time in listening to music, watching TV or going online to play games. It takes much of their spare time. I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books, especially read classics so that we can spread our Chinese traditional culture to the world.
Let’s start reading now. And let it become a part of our life!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍读书的益处;
第二步,介绍存在的现象;
第三步,发出倡议。
[亮点词汇]
①not only…but also…不但……而且……
②spend much time in doing sth.花很多时间做某事。
③would like to do sth.想做某事。
④start doing sth.开始做某事
[高分句型]
①The more we read, the more we will learn, and the brighter our future will become.(the+比较级,the+比较级:越……就越……)
②I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books, especially read classics so that we can spread our Chinese traditional culture to the world.(that引导的宾语从句;so that引导的目的状语从句)
2.
(22-23九年级上·广东广州天河区·期末)寒假即将到来,为帮助同学们愉快度过假期,丰富假期家庭生活,学校英文报以“Family activities during the winter holiday”为题,向同学们征稿。请根据以下内容图示写一篇短文,推荐自己喜爱的家庭活动,向校报投稿。
Family activities
an educational activity
a relaxing activity
1. What are the two activities?
2. What can family members do in each activity?
3. What can family members get from each activity?
注意:
1. 词数80-120个左右(文章开头已给出,不计入词数,请根据要点适当发挥)
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Family activities during the winter holiday
In order to spend a happy winter holiday, I
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【答案】例文
Family activities during the winter holiday
In order to spend a happy winter holiday, I plan two great activities for my family. It is quite educational and meaningful for the whole family to do some voluntary work during winter holiday. We are going to volunteer at Guangzhou Museum as museum guides. In this way, we can not only help visitors better understand Guangzhou but also improve our social skills. What’s more, I also plan to have some fun with my parents and mountain climbing is our top choice. We will take a trip to Baiyun Mountain and have a picnic. The whole family can do some exercise together and enjoy the fresh air. Wonderful, isn’t it?
I can’t wait for this coming holiday and I hope my parents will enjoy spending this meaningful and relaxing holiday with me!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是话题作文;
②时态:主要时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏表格中“提示信息”的几个要点均要一一阐述,适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步:表明写作意图。借用“我计划为我家做两项活动”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步:具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的几个要点——两项活动名称、家庭成员做的事、收获等均要一一阐述。
第三步:书写结语。表达“我希望我的父母将和我一起度过这个有意义又放松的假期”的美好。
[亮点词汇]
①In order to 为了
②have a picnic去野餐
③ do some exercise做一些锻炼
[高分句型]
① In this way, we can not only help visitors better understand Guangzhou but also improve our social skills. (not only...but also的用法)
② I hope my parents will enjoy spending this meaningful and relaxing holiday with me! (宾语从句)
3.
(22-23九年级上·广东广州番禺、执信中学·期末)请根据以下表格,以 Tu Youyou—A Great Scientist 为题写一篇短文,介绍屠呦呦。
个人信息
1930年12月30日出生于浙江;她从小就对医学很感兴趣。
经历
1.1955年,她毕业于北京大学。
2.毕业后,她把大部分时间都投入到古代医学研究中;尽管遇到困难,但她并没有放弃。
3.2015年,她获得诺贝尔奖。
突出贡献
1.她发现了治疗疟疾的方法,拯救了很多生命。
2.她一直努力推行中医。
评价
你的感想或评价? 请至少发挥两点。
注意:
(1)参考词汇:治疗 cure 推行 push for 诺贝尔奖 the Nobel Prize 疟疾 malaria
(2)词数 80 个左右(文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
(3)内容应包括所有要点。
(4)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Tu Youyou—A Great Scientist
Tu Youyou is a great scientist.
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【答案】例文
Tu Youyou—A Great Scientist
Tu Youyou is a great scientist. She was born on December 30, 1930 in Zhejiang. When she was very young, she showed interest in medicine. She is the first Chinese woman to win a Nobel Prize.
She graduated from Beijing University in 1955. She worked hard and was popular among the students and teachers. She always worked closely with her workmates. She devoted most of her time to studying ancient medicine. Though she met many difficulties, she never gave up. She has pushed for the use of Chinese medicine. She discovered the way to cure malaria. Her discovery has saved lots of lives.
She is the pride of our country. We should learn from her and work hard at school.
【详解】题干解读:阅读题干,这是一篇人物介绍类作文。该题要求介绍伟大的科学家——屠呦呦,写作内容应该包括个人信息、经历、突出贡献和评价等等。该作文涉及人物过去的事,那么要注意时态的运用,主语包括一般过去时和一般现在时,人称应以第三人称为主。
例文点评:例文采取三段式的写作手法,第一段主要介绍屠呦呦的基本情况;第二段主要介绍她的经历和成就;第三段写自己的感受及对屠呦呦的评价。例文使用一些亮点词句,增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。
高分亮点:
短语:on+具体的某一天;graduate from毕业于;give up放弃;lots of许多;be pride of为……感到自豪;learn from向……学习.
句型:(1)She is the first Chinese woman to win a Nobel Prize. 她是第一位获得诺贝尔奖的中国女性。to win a Nobel Prize动词不定式作为后置定语,修饰前面的woman。(2)Though she met many difficulties, she never gave up. 虽然她遇到了很多困难,但她从未放弃。though引导的让步状语从句,不能与but连用,give up放弃。
4.
(22-23九年级上·广东广州增城区·期末)为帮助七年级学生尽快适应初中生活,学校将举行“给七年级同学的一封信”的英语征文活动。假如你是李华,请根据以下内容提示写一篇短文投稿, 要求包含以下内容并适当发挥。
学习习惯
认真听课,做好笔记;
生活方式
健康饮食,请你补充;
人际关系
友好相处,请你补充;
你的寄语
(请补充至少2点)
注意:1. 词数80个左右(文章开头已给出, 不计入词数);
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息, 否则不予评分。
Dear fellow schoolmates,
Are you used to living in the junior high school? Here are some personal suggestions to share with you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】范文:
Dear fellow schoolmates,
Are you used to living in the junior high school? Here are some personal suggestions to share with you. First, I suggest you form a good habit of studying. Listen to teachers carefully in class and take notes in time. When you have difficulty, please ask your classmates or teachers for help. Second, good life style is important. You need to get up early and go to bed early to get enough sleep. Besides, you’d better have a balanced diet and avoid eating junk food. Third, as we all know, a good relationship can make us happy and comfortable. Be friendly to others and help those who are in trouble. We should share sorrow and happiness with others. I hope you can enjoy your school life and have a bright future.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山,引出文章的目的;
第二步,从学习习惯、生活方式、人际关系方面提出建议;
第三步,表达美好祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①take notes in time及时记笔记
②ask sb for help寻求帮助
③share sorrow and happiness同甘共苦
[高分句型]
①When you have difficulty, please ask your classmates or teachers for help. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②Be friendly to others and help those who are in trouble. (定语从句)
5.
(22-23九年级上·广东广州花都区·期末)你是英语校报编辑李华,校报收到初三学生Angela的来信,她提出了最近所面临的两个问题。请你根据以下提示写一封回信,说明Angela的问题,提出你的建议及理由。
Angela’s problems
Your advice and reasons
problems with parents
1. listen and communicate — know each other better
2. (请补充)
study stress
1. live a healthy life — take care of your body
2. (请补充)
注意:
1. 内容包括表格中的所有内容,可适当发挥;
2. 词数:80词左右(短文的开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Dear Angela,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble during the online course. In your letter you said that _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Good luck with everything!
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear Angela,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble during the online course. In your letter you said that you have problems with parents and much study stress. Here are some helpful advice for you.
As for the problems with your parents, you should try to listen to and communicate with them. In this way you can know each other better. You also can take a walk with them or help them with housework, which may give you more chances to talk with and understand each other.
What’s more, as for your study, don’t put too much stress on yourself. You should live a healthy life. Take care of your body, which is the most important thing to you. Have a healthy diet and exercise every day. In your free time, you can listen to some relaxing music.
Good luck with everything!
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:这是一篇书信作文,为应用文;
②时态:主要采用“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点表格中已经给出,包括两个方面,每个方面至少两点,需要补充;表格中已给出的英文是短语,注意要表达成句子。
[写作步骤]
第一步,简单描述对方的问题;
第二步,给出对于“与父母之间问题”的建议;
第三步,给出对于“学习压力大”的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①as for至于
②listen to some relaxing music听一些令人放松的音乐
③have a healthy diet有健康的饮食
④understand each other互相理解
[高分句型]
You also can take a walk with them or help them with housework, which may give you more chances to talk with and understand each other.(定语从句)
6.
(22-23九年级上·广东广州白云区·期末)假如你是知心栏目负责人Aunt Linda,你收到一名学生David的来信诉说他的烦恼,请你根据以下表格内容提示,给出建议。
David’s problems
Aunt Linda’s advice
stay up late to complete his homework
不要熬夜,熬夜对身体健康不好,安排好时间做作业;
feel tired during the daytime and fall asleep in class
晚上要有足够的睡眠时间;
doesn’t have his personal time to relax himself
周末适当放松,例如锻炼身体或听音乐等;
Feeling: feel stressed and unhappy
希望:……。
要求:
1.表达清楚,语句通顺;
2.要点必须包括表格信息并适当发挥;
3.词数80词左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear David,
What you said is common among some middle school students. Here are my suggestions for you.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Please let me know if you need more help.
Yours,
Aunt Linda
【答案】例文
Dear David,
What you said is common among some middle school students. Here are my suggestions for you.
I think you should change the ways of study. Don’t stay up late. Staying up late is bad for your health and will lead to memory loss. You should arrange your time reasonably and finish your homework at school as much as possible. To keep healthy, you should go to bed early. Too much pressure is not good for your health and schoolwork. You should do something to lower your pressure. For example, you can take more exercise. You can listen to music. You should have enough sleep at night.
Hope you can get out of your problems soon.
Please let me know if you need more help.
Yours,
Aunt Linda
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,根据表格提示有条理的给出对方建议;
第二步,希望对方能尽快解决自己的问题。
[亮点词汇]
①stay up late熬夜
②be bad for对……有害
③keep healthy保持健康
[高分句型]
①Staying up late is bad for your health and will lead to memory loss.(动名词作主语)
②To keep healthy, you should go to bed early. (动词不定式作目的状语)
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专题15 书面表达
1.
(23-24九年级上·广东广州黄浦区·期末)你在英语课上学习了许多中外故事,如Two geniues,Cao Chong weighs an elephant,The gifts。请从以上3个故事中挑选一个,并围绕以下要点写一份读书报告。
A report on a story
What is the story about?
——the name
——the plot
Which character do you like best?
——the person
——the reason
What can you learn from the story?
注意:
1. 可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2. 词数80词左右(开头已给出,不计入词数);
3. 参考人名词汇:Albert Einstein, Della, Jim;
4. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
This is my report on the story.
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2.
(23-24九年级上·广东广州番禺区·期末)假如你是李华,下周五下午你们学校将在礼堂举办 “英语读书节” 活动。你的外国朋友Simon对此很感兴趣,并希望能了解更多的信息。请你根据以下内容写一封电子邮件,向他介绍活动安排。
English Reading Festival
Time
Next Friday afternoon
Place
School Hall
Activities
Share a favorite book;
. . .
Purpose
. . .
注意:
1. 可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2. 词数80个左右(邮件的开头已给出,不计入词数);
3. 不能透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Dear Simon,
How is it going? I am writing to tell you about the English Reading Festival in our school.
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Would you like to join us? I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
3.
(23-24九年级上·广东广州海珠区·期末)假设你是学校读书俱乐部的成员,请你根据以下内容,写一篇介绍《小王子》的文章在读书分享会中推荐这本书。
书名
The Little Prince
作者
Antoine de Saint﹣Exupéry(法国)
主要角色(Main Character)
来自 B﹣612 小行星的小王子
主要内容(Brief Introduction)
(1)一个关于爱和友谊的故事。
(2)小王子对世界充满好奇心,在旅行中寻求答案。
(3)途中遇到各种各样的人,经历了许多冒险。
推荐理由
(1)插图精美。
(2)教会我们如何与他人相处,勇敢面对困难不放弃。
你的评价
……(自由发挥)
注意:
(1)参考词汇:B﹣612小行星(Asteroid B﹣612),对……感到好奇(be curious about),插图(illustration);
(2)词数:80词左右(开头已给出,不计入词数);
(3)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Hello, everyone. Today I’d like to recommend my favourite book The Little Prince written by Antoine de Saint﹣Exupéry to you.
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4.
(23-24九年级上·广东广州荔湾区·期末)你在英国交流学习期间曾到玫瑰餐厅用餐。请你根据以下要点,用英语在餐厅官网写一篇点评。
点评内容
地理位置
位于市中心,交通便利
食物
(请补充)
(请补充)
(请补充)
改进建议
(请补充)
Recently I ate at Rose Restaurant. Now I want to share my ideas on it with you. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5.
(23-24九年级上·广东广州花都区·期末)假如你是李华,作为本班参赛选手之一参加了学校举办的主题为“A taste of literature”的读者剧场展评活动。请写一则英文日记,记录这特别的一刻。
日记需包含以下要点:
开始时间: 2 p.m.
展评地点:School Hall
参加人员:七至九年级学生;每班1个节目
活动主题:A Taste of Literature
过程与感受: 展示前,……
展示中,……
展示后, ……
结果与收获: …… (请你补充)
注意:
1. 词数: 不少于80 词 (文章的开头已给出,不计入词数);
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息, 否则不予评分。
December 29, 2023
Dear Diary,
Today, I took part in the Readers Theater activity.
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Good luck with everything!
Li Hua
6.
(23-24九年级上·广东广州白云区·期末)你们学校英语社团正在组织题为“My family life is ________”的征文活动。假如你是李明,请根据以下内容提示用英语写一篇短文参加活动。
内容要点如下:
1. 五口之家,家庭幸福,邻里和睦:
2. 分担家务,周末户外活动:
3. 相互支持,经常交流,良好家规助我成长;
4. 请补充说明一至两点与家庭相关的情况。
注意:
1. 先用一个形较词补充题目;
2. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数:80字左右;
4. 内容连贯,不要逐条翻译。
My family life is ________
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7.
(23-24九年级上·广东广州天河区·期末)《校园树洞》栏目Aunt Linda收到一封求助信,以下是她在信上做的标注。请根据以下要点提示,帮助Aunt Linda写一封回信。
Dear Aunt Linda,
I am worried about my best friend Ben. He plays online games until midnight. He feels tired in class and learns little. He always asks me to lend him the homework to copy it. If I don’t, he gets angry with me. What should I do?
Yours,
Mike
回信内容:
1. 对Mike的烦恼表示理解;
2. 结合信上的问题提出至少3条建议。
注意:要求词数80—120词左右,己给出的部分不算入总词数。
Dear Mike,
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Yours,
Aunt Linda
8.
(23-24九年级上·广东广州南武中学·期末)许多人喜欢在闲暇时观看有趣的电视节目来放松自己。假设你是李华,请根据以下提示,介绍自己喜欢的一个电视节目。
节目名称
《动物世界》
喜欢该节目的原因
1. 释放压力;
2. 开阔视野(broaden one’s horizons),可以了解更多关于动物的知识;
3.……(请补充至少1个原因)
注意:1. 词数:80词左右(文章的开头已给出,不计入词数);
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
A lot of people like watching interesting TV programmes to relax when they have spare time.
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1.
(22-23九年级上·广东广州天河区广州中学·期末)假如你的学校正在举办“好书伴我成长”的活动。请根据以下内容提示,以“Growing up with good books”为题,用英语写一封倡议书, 向全校同学发出读书的倡议。
读书的益处
获取知识,增长见识,使人快乐
存在的现象
听音乐、看电视、上网,占用了大部分业务时间
发出倡议
多读书,读经典好书;弘扬中国传统文化让读书成为生活得一部分
注意:
1、词数不少于80词,开头不计入总词数。
2、可适当发挥,但需注意语言通顺、流畅、准确。
•请登录E 听说平台,点击“读写专项”作业,拍照上传答案。
•开头已给出,不需要抄写到答题卡上,续写即可。(以此处说明为准,忽略答卷说明)
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2.
(22-23九年级上·广东广州天河区·期末)寒假即将到来,为帮助同学们愉快度过假期,丰富假期家庭生活,学校英文报以“Family activities during the winter holiday”为题,向同学们征稿。请根据以下内容图示写一篇短文,推荐自己喜爱的家庭活动,向校报投稿。
Family activities
an educational activity
a relaxing activity
1. What are the two activities?
2. What can family members do in each activity?
3. What can family members get from each activity?
注意:
1. 词数80-120个左右(文章开头已给出,不计入词数,请根据要点适当发挥)
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Family activities during the winter holiday
In order to spend a happy winter holiday, I
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3.
(22-23九年级上·广东广州番禺、执信中学·期末)请根据以下表格,以 Tu Youyou—A Great Scientist 为题写一篇短文,介绍屠呦呦。
个人信息
1930年12月30日出生于浙江;她从小就对医学很感兴趣。
经历
1.1955年,她毕业于北京大学。
2.毕业后,她把大部分时间都投入到古代医学研究中;尽管遇到困难,但她并没有放弃。
3.2015年,她获得诺贝尔奖。
突出贡献
1.她发现了治疗疟疾的方法,拯救了很多生命。
2.她一直努力推行中医。
评价
你的感想或评价? 请至少发挥两点。
注意:
(1)参考词汇:治疗 cure 推行 push for 诺贝尔奖 the Nobel Prize 疟疾 malaria
(2)词数 80 个左右(文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
(3)内容应包括所有要点。
(4)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Tu Youyou—A Great Scientist
Tu Youyou is a great scientist.
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4.
(22-23九年级上·广东广州增城区·期末)为帮助七年级学生尽快适应初中生活,学校将举行“给七年级同学的一封信”的英语征文活动。假如你是李华,请根据以下内容提示写一篇短文投稿, 要求包含以下内容并适当发挥。
学习习惯
认真听课,做好笔记;
生活方式
健康饮食,请你补充;
人际关系
友好相处,请你补充;
你的寄语
(请补充至少2点)
注意:1. 词数80个左右(文章开头已给出, 不计入词数);
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息, 否则不予评分。
Dear fellow schoolmates,
Are you used to living in the junior high school? Here are some personal suggestions to share with you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
5.
(22-23九年级上·广东广州花都区·期末)你是英语校报编辑李华,校报收到初三学生Angela的来信,她提出了最近所面临的两个问题。请你根据以下提示写一封回信,说明Angela的问题,提出你的建议及理由。
Angela’s problems
Your advice and reasons
problems with parents
1. listen and communicate — know each other better
2. (请补充)
study stress
1. live a healthy life — take care of your body
2. (请补充)
注意:
1. 内容包括表格中的所有内容,可适当发挥;
2. 词数:80词左右(短文的开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Dear Angela,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble during the online course. In your letter you said that _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Good luck with everything!
Li Hua
6.
(22-23九年级上·广东广州白云区·期末)假如你是知心栏目负责人Aunt Linda,你收到一名学生David的来信诉说他的烦恼,请你根据以下表格内容提示,给出建议。
David’s problems
Aunt Linda’s advice
stay up late to complete his homework
不要熬夜,熬夜对身体健康不好,安排好时间做作业;
feel tired during the daytime and fall asleep in class
晚上要有足够的睡眠时间;
doesn’t have his personal time to relax himself
周末适当放松,例如锻炼身体或听音乐等;
Feeling: feel stressed and unhappy
希望:……。
要求:
1.表达清楚,语句通顺;
2.要点必须包括表格信息并适当发挥;
3.词数80词左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear David,
What you said is common among some middle school students. Here are my suggestions for you.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Please let me know if you need more help.
Yours,
Aunt Linda
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