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Unit 3 Using language
Write about a healthy diet
Healthy Eating
Learning objectives
1. Analyze and construct the content, the structure and language features of the text.
2. Write a letter of advice to Panda using the techniques of the text.
3. Raise the awareness of healthy eating and develop healthy eating habits.
Do you prefer junk food or healthy food?
Which food makes you enjoy life more?
Which one do you like most?
Lead-in
cake
milk tea
potato chips
barbecue
cereal milk
hotpot
Macaron
spicy strip
fresh vegetables
instant noodles
4
How about results?
What is the passage mainly about?
Where is this text most likely from?
A. A novel. B. A guidebook. C. A diary. D. A magazine.
What is the main purpose of the passage ?
A. To introduce a new diet to people.
B. To analyse the composition of food.
C. To explain the effect of sweet on health.
D. To tell readers what is a healthy diet.
Read each paragraph and underline the topic sentences.
1
2
3
4
5
A. Slow Eating is Good
B. Reducing Sweets is Key
C. The Real Killer is Sugar
D. The Way you look at Food is Most Important
E. Keep it Fresh and Balanced
1
2
3
4
5
Match the subheadings with the paragraphs.
Summarize the main idea
真正的杀手是糖
减少甜食是关键
保持食物 新鲜和平衡
慢食有益。
对待食物的方式是最重要的
Conclusion (Para 5)
Advice on healthy eating
(Para 2-4)
Introduce a topic or a phenomenon
(Para 1)
Read for the structure
How to make your advice convincing and persuasive
data
quotation
examples
make a comparison
research results
Supporting details
learn how to organize a paragraph
topic sentence /key point
supporting details
A paragraph
para1. find out the key point, the supporting details.
1.How does the writer support his topic sentence?
key point/topic sentence
supporting details
example
explanation
conclusion
quotation
using linking words
2. What writing technique does the writer use?
Para1. learn the writing technique.
Para4
explanation
examples
How does the writer support his key point?
Task 1: What are the key details that support each point?
A. The real driver of poor health is not so much fatty food, as it is sugar.
Detail(s):
And in America, people who receive 25% of their daily calories or more through sugar are twice as likely to die from heart disease than people who receive less than 10% a day.
Read for details
Para 1:The Real Killer is Sugar
By contrasting and listing data
How does the writer support his point?
B: Much of this extra sugar comes from sweets and sweet drinks.
Detail(s):
The average American gets 1/3 of his or her sugar through sweet drinks alone.
Para 2 Reducing Sweets is Key
Give data;
Quote recommendations from authorities
How does the writer support his point?
C: You can keep healthy by consuming different categories of fresh foods... rather than processed foods.
Detail(s) :_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Fruit and vegetables are full of vitamins and fibre.
Processed foods often contain less nutrition, and have higher quantities of sugar, salt, and fat than fresh ingredients.
Para 3
Make a comparison
List examples
How does the writer support his point?
D: A fundamental key to healthy eating is to eat slowly.
Detail(s):
Detail 1: People who chew too quickly end up eating too much food because they still feel hungry.
Detail 2: Eating slowly also allows your body to digest your food better and will allow you to enjoy your food more.
Para 4 Slow Eating is Good
Make a comparison
How does the writer support his point?
Find out the linking words in the passage that introduce another way of saying what was already mentioned in the previous sentence.
Circle the linking words in the passage which show that contrasting ideas are being introduced.
Underline the linking words in the passage that introduce another way of saying what was already mentioned in the previous sentence.
Para 1
Para 2
Para 4
Put more simply
In other words
What this means is that
Activity 3
Circle the linking words in the passage which show that contrasting ideas are being introduced.
Para. 3
Para. 5
however
rather than
rather(相反)
Activity 4
Para .1
Circle the linking words in the passage.
function linking words
introduce another way of saying what is already mentioned
show
contrasting ideas are being introduced
however (然而)
put more simply (简而言之)
in other words (换句话说)
what this means (这意味着)
regardless of (不管, 不顾)
rather than (而不是)
rather (恰恰相反; 而是)
What can we use to make the text coherent?
Summarize different connectors(连接词) and their functions.
put more simply
in other words
What this means is that
that is to say
to put it in another way
1.“换句话说”
重述前面的观点
however 然而
rather than 而不是
on the contrary 相反,而不是
rather 相反,反而
instead 而不是
unlike (用于对比)与…不同
2.“表对比”
引出,相反的观点或看法
besides
in addition
what is more
moreover
furthermore
additionally
3.“表递进”
增加更多的信息
for example
take ... as an example
for instance
such as
4.举例子
Healthy
Eating
2.consume different categories of fresh foods: fruit/vegetables
3.not processed food
Problem
(para.1)
4.eat slowly
solutions
(para.2-4)
conclusion
(para.5)
meat, beans, dairy products
sugar
5.form consistent eating habits
it takes time to feel full;digest better and enjoy food more
take 3 meals at the same time each day;
eat a modest amount of food
the driver of poor health;
the killer of health;
related to heart disease
contain less nutrition ;have high quantities of sugar…
be full of vitamins and fibre
protein--- strong bones and muscle growth
to use food for nutrition
Content
Key points
Supporting details
+
linking words
linking words
linking words
linking words
linking words
1.cut down on desserts and cut out sweet drinks
Healthy
Eating
consume different categories of fresh foods: fruit/vegetables
processed food
what
Para1-3
eating slowly
how
Para4
attitude
Para5
meat, beans, dairy products
fatty food
sugar
consistent eating habits
unhealthy
healthy
to have a healthy attitude
balanced
+ details
by making contrast
+ details
by providing data
+ details
by listing reasons
+ details
by making contrast
linking words
linking words
linking words
linking words
linking words
linking words
linking words
linking words
Para.2—Point of view
+
Supporting details
linking words
figures/data
examples
research results
quotation
make a comparison
Para.1—Introduction
Introduce a topic or a phenomenon
structure
Summary—How to organize a practical writing of a healthy diet
Para.3—Conclusion
Time to practice
假如你是班长,你所在班级中一些学生有不良的饮食习惯,请你在下午的班会上发表演讲,号召同学们养成健康的饮食习惯。内容包括:
1.简述健康饮食的意义;
2.不良饮食现象:不吃早餐、吃零食、挑食和暴饮暴食等;
3.提出关于如何养成健康饮食习惯的建议。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
教你审题
第一步:审题体裁:
第二步:中心人称
第三步:主体时态
第四步:要点:
结构:
应用文-演讲稿格式:问候语+结束语。
一/三人称
一般现在时
1.健康饮食的意义;2.不良饮食现象 3.健康建议。
结构:总一分一总
短语训练
1. 生病______________________
2. 健康饮食__________________
3. 甜食______________________
4. 垃圾食品__________________
5. 细嚼慢咽__________________
6. 规律饮食__________________
7. 摄入______________________
get ill/sick
healthy eating
sweet food
junk food
chew slowly
eat regularly
take in
短语训练
8.奶制品____________________
9. 加工食品__________________
10. 而不是___________________
11. 首先_____________________
12. 其次_____________________
13. 削减_____________________
dairy
processed food
rather than
first and foremost
besides, in addition, what’s more
cut down on
短语训练
14.不是...而是____________________
15. 简单点说__________________
16. 大量的___________________
17. 不同种类的_____________________
18. 即使,尽管______________________
not so much... as...
put more simply
large quantities of
different categories of/ a variety of/varieties of
regardless of
deliver a speech
form healthy eating habits;
skip breakfast;
eat snacks;
be particular about food;
eat and drink too much
do harm to;
be beneficial to / be of great benefit to
keep fit/healthy;
regularly;
build up one’s strength;
发表演讲
养成健康的饮食习惯
不吃早餐
吃零食
挑食
暴饮暴食
对......有害
对......有益
保持健康
定期,经常
增强体质
重点词汇:
与健康饮食相关的语块
the benefits of vegetables 蔬菜的好处
a nutritionally balanced diet 营养均衡的饮食
pay attention to the quality of food 注意食物的质量
help you digest better 有助于消化
get enough vitamin C and protein 摄入充足的维生素C和蛋白质
genetically modified food 转基因食品
green food 绿色食品
organic vegetables 有机蔬菜
Fresh fruits can provide lots of fibre and vitamins. 新鲜的水果可以提供大量纤维素和维生素。
Vegetables are low in fat and calories. 蔬菜的脂肪含量和热量都很低。
A good general diet should include plenty of fresh vegetables.
良好的日常饮食应该包括大量的新鲜蔬菜。
Vegetables contain minerals which can help keep bones and teeth healthy. 蔬菜含有矿物质, 有利于骨骼和牙齿的健康。
Don’t skip breakfast. 不要不吃早餐。
Eating carrots is of great benefit to your eyesight. 吃胡萝卜对视力有好处。
Thanks
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