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Of Friendship
Francis Bacon
Unit 3
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What’s the real friend ?
The real friend is someone __________________
_______; someone________________________, even when times are tough.
Lead-in
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What’s the real friend ?
The real friend is someone ___________________; someone____________________, even when times are tough.
who brings out the best in you
who is always there for you
Lead-in
video
Francis Bacon
(1561 ~ 1626)
a great English writer,
scientist, philosopher
Can you predict what the essay would cover?
II. Prediction
to talk about
The definition of friendship
The development of friendship
The qualities of good friends
The significance of friendship
…
find topic sentences of each paragraph
III. While reading
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Para 1
Para 2
Para 3
Para 4
Para 5
Para 6
Reading for structure
Para 1
Para 2
Para 3
Para 4
Para 5
Para 6
Introduction to the topic
Detailed explanation of the fruits
Conclusion
Genre:
A. An argumentation B. A poem
C. A novel D. A news report
Organize the structure
The importance of friendship
Advice on making friends
The three “fruits” of friendship
Paragraph 2 to 5
Paragraph 6
Paragraph 1
Read the paragraph one and choose the best answer.
Why might we hope to be alone sometimes?
A. We want to escape into our own world.
B. Being alone can lead to reflection and personal improvement.
C. Social groups do not allow our own thoughts.
D. Close friendship can smooth out the rocky road.
Para. 1
III. While-reading
How many benefits does close friendship have in general?
A. Two. B. Three. C. Four. D. Five.
Read the paragraph two and choose the best answer.
Para. 2
comfort the heart, advise the head and help us achieve the goals
III. While-reading
________ the head
Our friends often offer us _________
on our important decisions.
Talking with wise friends makes our thoughts ________and our understandings more _______.
_______us achieve the goals
Many things in life can only ______
_________ with the help of friends, because they have different _______ and _______.
Friends can help us during life and
even after .
Help
achieved
ideas
skills
death
be
________ the heart
We are free to ______ our joy and sadness _____ true friends, ______ makes happiness _____ ___ a greater meaning and _________ becomes halved.
Comfort
share
with
which
take on
trouble
Advise
advice
clearer
thorough
Para. 3-5
III. While-reading
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How can we better walk the "path of life"?
A. By giving support to our friends.
B. By offering advice in many different ways.
C. By achieving what we want to achieve.
D. By carefully choosing friends and developing friendship.
Read the paragraph six and choose the best answer.
Para. 6
III. While-reading
“More often than not, close friendships will help ___________ the sometimes ___________ that we are all meant to travel.”
smooth out
rocky road
Para. 1
IV. Appreciation
What kind of rhetorical device (修辞手法) is employed here?
Metaphor
比喻分为明喻和暗喻。暗喻指把某个东西比作另一个东西但是句子里没有”as”,”like”,”as if” 等词,明喻则有。
The writer compares _______________to “a rocky road”, which mean in our life there can be some ________ and difficulties ahead. If we have close friends whom we can turn to, they can help us ________ these problems and support us to go forward bravely.
“the life journey”
challenges
solve
“Generally speaking, ......they may comfort the heart, advise the head and help us achieve the goals we set for ourselves.”
Which kind of rhetorical device(修辞手法) is used here ?
Parallelism
Give one more example using this rhetorical device.
The first fruit of friendship is the peace that comes from sharing with friends our joy, sadness, success and failure.
The second fruit of friendship is the better understanding and judgment that may be achieved through conversations with well-meaning and wise friends.
The third fruit of friendship is the help that a friend may offer in many different ways.
Para. 2
Use similar words, phrases or sentences to show the ideas have the same level of importance
It can persuade, motivate and evoke emotional response from readers.
IV. Appreciation
Friendship is __________ to us. (para1)
______ “fruits” of friendship.
(paras 2-5)
We should carefully ________ our friends and ________the relationships.
(para6)
important
three
choose
develop
the first…
the second…
the third…
_________ the rocky road
______ the path of life better
smooth out
walk
Part1
Part2
Part3
theme
explanation
suggestion
V. Summary
writing techniques
写作技巧
其他要点:
总结构:引言+总述分论点+分论点扩写+总结
分论点阐述:总-分-总结构
总述分论点、分论点、总结阐述一致,
可使用近义词或同一词汇的不同形式达到多样化目的:
每段说理可采用不同手段:正反面分析,举例说明等
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enjoying the company of a crowd
staying with true friends
Q: What kind of friends should we choose?
...true, well-meaning, wise, trustworthy...
VS
Critical thinking
VI. Discussion
The difference between staying with a crowd and being with true friends?
what you can do/feel/get staying with a crowd staying with true friends
have fun together
share your true feelings (secrets)
talk things over in-depth or frankly
feel emotionally connected and satisfied
What kind of friendship can leave you a deep impression?
Please give an example.
The genuine friendship
Walking with a friend in the dark is better than walking alone in the light.
---Helen Keller
在黑暗中与朋友并肩同行胜于在光亮中独自行走。
My best friend is the one who brings out the best in me.
---Henry Ford
最好的朋友促使我变成最好的自己。
A real friend is one who walks in when the rest of the world walks out.
---Walter Winchell
真正的朋友会在整个世界都离你远去的时候,仍然与你并肩。
VII. Conclusion
I truly hope all of you will enjoy the greatest
pleasure with your dear friends and keep the
sacred lamp of friendship burning all through
your life.
post-reading
When we walk the “path of life”, social life is really important. More often than not, sometimes friendship can help us 1.________ (smooth) out the rocky road that we are 2. __________(mean) to travel. Generally speaking, close friendships have three main 3. (benefit). The first fruit is that it can comfort the heart, because the peace comes from having someone 4.___________ we share with our joy, sadness, success and 5.__________(fail). The second one is that it can advise the head because we may have better 6.________________ (understand) and judgement that are achieved through conversations with well-meaning 7.________ wise friends.
(to) smooth
meant
benefits
whom/that
failure
understanding
and
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post-reading
The third one is that it can help us achieve the goals we set for ourselves because friends may offer help 8.______ many different ways. Finally, if we want to 9.__________ (well) walk the “path of life” with the comfort, advice and help from our 10.__________ (trust) friends, we should choose friends and develop relationships carefully.
in
better
trusted
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